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I only started drawing recently and this took me six attempts. Just wanted to log on to ask how i could improve my shading. Got any tips? I showed it to my friend who works as a concept artist and he said it was kinda corny...

>> No.4424256

shading should be the least of your worries

>> No.4424262

>>4424250
>corny
He wanted to be nice and not tell you it was shit.

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>> No.4424277

It's terrible anon, burn it and buried the ashes.

>> No.4424322

>>4424256
>>4424262
>>4424276
>>4424277
newfags dont know what logposting is

>> No.4424424

>>4424250
looks like pure shit, come back when you've got like 1000 hours of practice at least
not every bullshit practice trash you make is meant to be shown or critiziced

>> No.4426848

>>4424250
>log on
>Corny
Fuck you, OP. Go suck a log on another board.

>> No.4428470

>>4424250
Well, you suffer what basically all new artists suffer from: symbol drawing.

You have to get your mindset into the realm of construction. Where you draw things based on the forms that they are made up. All objects can be broken down into a few fundamental forms (e.g. boxes, cylinders, spheres, etc.).

Work on that and then some anatomy/proportions. Your proportions are wack as fuck.

>> No.4429702

>>4424250
>six attempts
you may as well kys now before it's too late because you're definitely ngmi