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4401383 No.4401383 [Reply] [Original]

post good linework

>> No.4401388

post a better fetish first

>> No.4401394

>>4401388
What is the fetish in this

>> No.4401406

>>4401394
It's multiple. Teenager/yuri/sadism/bullying/schoolgirl/dom-sub/human-furniture/etc.
It's pretty common and seeing it everywhere gets boring.

>> No.4401412
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>> No.4401416

>>4401406
It's just girl sitting on another lmao wtf

>> No.4401420

>>4401416
I've seen this artist's work before. He loves drawing this stuff, a bit too much if you ask me.

And you can't look at that artstyle and not get coomer vibes.

>> No.4401454

>>4401406
>I consume so much porn daily that normal stuff can't do it for me anymore

>> No.4401456
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>> No.4401458

>>4401420
I don't get coomer vibes from it, just looks like a cartoony style.

>> No.4401469
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>> No.4401501

>>4401383
Hot

>> No.4401520

>>4401456
Fucking delete this
I already have to cope irl

>> No.4401523

>>4401383
who's the artist?

>> No.4401524
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>> No.4401525

>>4401456
>you'll never have a cute hyperactive daughter that loves you

>> No.4401564

>>4401383
>5 layers to perfect line art
god i hate this part

>> No.4401574
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>> No.4401582

>>4401564
Then don't. I used to do that too, but I got a lot better after doing just two layers (rough sketch and final lineart).

>> No.4401609

>>4401525
it hurts

>> No.4401615
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>> No.4401625

>>4401615
no
>>4401574
no
>>4401524
no
>>4401469
no
>>4401456
okaish
>>4401412
yes.

>> No.4401639

>>4401615
Notice how Toppi doesn’t arbitrarily put thick lines all over the outline. When he does it has a function - either to emphasize overlap or light direction.

>/ic/ people think pushing down on their pen for no reason is stylish.

>> No.4401643

>>4401625
you're boring

>> No.4401926
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>>4401383
SAUCE PLS

>> No.4401936

>>4401454
>>4401416
What's even a point in denying obvious fetish nature of such art? Just to be a contrarian?

>> No.4401985
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>>4401936
Okay anon, check out this lewd fetish

>> No.4402041

>>4401383
Explain me how to decide this? this image straight out contradicts the tutorials I have seen, for example it shows thicker lines facing the light source, it shows some thick lines that are part of the interior and shows thick lines on soft materials, how do you decide the line's volume?

>> No.4402047

>>4402041
>tutorials
lmao
just make it look good

>> No.4402054

>>4402041
There are no rules. Line quality, texture, thickness, etc. is self expression. You learn how you how to make lines that you like through sheer practice.

>> No.4402086

>>4402041
it's a purely stylistic decision that emphasizes its cartoony aesthetic. it specifically avoids realism in certain areas while also using thin line variations in other areas that describe more detail. the tutorials you were using were probably more literal about how to use lines to describe a sense of reality or weight. if you want to learn more about cartoons like that you'll have to think more aesthetically and analyze how different styles feel.

>> No.4402117

>>4401985
h-hot

>> No.4402163

>>4402041
>contradicts tutorials I have seen
Oh man.
Just Draw, my guy.

>> No.4402261

>>4401458
Look at that bottom bitch's blush and expression. It's pure coom.

>>4401936
They're trying not to get caught.
>i-its just innocent art! I'm not a coomer!

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ddddumping

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>> No.4402385

>>4401456
Really good damn. Artist?

>> No.4402439

>>4402054
>>4402086
Wrong.
Line thickness was all they had to convey overlap and light in cartoons - until fairly recently (like the 90’s). They werent random about it. At all. It also had to be a convention because of all the people working on it.
Maybe a self expressy cartoonie aesthetic would fly in some (Indie) comics, but even then inkers had conventions and pencillers had to know what they were. Manga may have been different. But then a lot of it is shitty quality. The Manga pros (see Urusawa for example) still used conventions because they communicate certain things even even if the viewer isnt aware of it.

Im not trying to shit on you guys and you can do what you want. But if you aspire to work in an industry with teams etc you should make a pointnof learning any and all conventions and standards that are commonly in use.
Fwiw.

>> No.4402473

>>4401406
>seeing it everywhere gets boring
boredanon is always bored by everything

>> No.4402479

>>4402439
>But if you aspire to work in an industry with teams etc
I don't. And I stand by my statement that there are no rules. Because, literally, there aren't, I've never seen any kind of linework and thought "those line weights are wrong." I've thought lines have looked shitty but it always comes down to plain bad drawing, fundamentally flawed structure. What's with this board and all its made-up rules.

>> No.4402480

>>4401985
>not wrapping your entire lips around the bottle oriface
my wife puts the whole gatorade bottle top in her mouth when she drinks it - ngl it's kinda hot

>> No.4402510

>>4402331
>>4402328
>>4402327
>>4402324
no.

>> No.4402519

>>4402479
>>4402439
Just to clarify, since I might come across as dismissive: no, you should never do things randomly. But obsessing over details like line thickness is one of those things /ic/ does that's always irked me. Like worrying about what order to learn fundamentals in. This stuff is not going to matter that much if you conscientiously focus on the larger picture of getting better. Of course if you're on a team and there's a house style or rulebook, stick to it. That goes without saying. But don't stress over the minutiae of drawing while learning.

>> No.4402527

How long do these linework take time wise on average?

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I'll usually just zoom out and if my piece reads nicely from a distance without all the lines being the same thickness i know the lineart's decent enough, and if it doesnt I'll tweak it until it does.

>> No.4402589

>>4402527
Pretty sure these artists are so fast they do it within 20-30 hours.

>> No.4402627

>>4402385
it's @siiteiebahiro

>> No.4402691

>>4401625
>>4402510
THE GATEKEEPER HAS SPOKEN
AND THUS THE GATEKEEPER SHALL HEREIN POST THEIR OWN WORK
AND YE OF LITTLE TASTE SHALL SAVOR IT WHILE ACCEPTING JUDGEMENT

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>>4401985
I'm feeling all confused right now

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>>4402439
>it's a purely stylistic decision that emphasizes its cartoony aesthetic
>Wrong

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>>4402439
Pic related.
Because you sure like to talk out your ass.

>> No.4402882

>>4402747
False.

>> No.4403014

>>4402510
>>4401625

I've seen some shit taste here but you take the cake.

>> No.4403019

>>4401574
Is there a context for these little muppets?

>> No.4403039

>>4403019
They look like villagers from Animal Crossing.

>> No.4403040

>>4402261
>this expression makes me coom
disgusting.

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>> No.4403061

>>4403055
This is pretty good, it's full of information but it doesn't feel overcrowded like simlar drawings usually are.

>> No.4403071

>>4401639
Because thick outlines don't work well for "realism" with a lot of shadows.

>> No.4403089

>>4403040
Nigga. That expression is really common among sadistic artists. I'm just stating facts, not that it makes me coom personally.

I'm just pointing out that the OP pic is blatant fetish porn for sadists who like schoolgirl yuri.

>> No.4403128

>>4403061
it's kind of unreasonable how much ching can do with a couple scribbles.
the true power of teaching drafting fundies for 50 years.

>> No.4403155

>>4403089
>this is your mind on COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

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>>4401383

>> No.4403254

>>4403155
You're just denying it because you want this type of art to slip past the radar.
I'm onto to you negro.

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>> No.4406435

>>4401383
>>4403227
ramchop where? I google ramchop, ramchop art, I get nothing.

>> No.4406438

>>4403267
>tfw will never understand how to do this clean yet detailed

>> No.4406598

>>4406435
Ok, it’s ラムチョップ on pixiv. Ramuchoppu. You could’ve said so! I wanted to see how coomer their art was, and it’s not really.

>> No.4406613
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It's not a fetish. I repeat: not fetish. It's just you are coomers.

>> No.4406670

>>4406613
It might be a fetish, but they’re super subtle about it if so. I see kids movies doing this kind of thing all the time, like Sharpay in High School Musical. If they’re sexually aroused by this then they’re doing a good job of hiding it.

>> No.4406697

>>4401926
More importantly, what the fuck is happening in that gif?

>> No.4406784
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Basically anything fishine does is pretty nice.

>> No.4406923

>>4406670
>>4406613
>>4401383
it doesn't have to be a fetish. but it obviously has vaguely sexual energy. the artist was obviously a little horny drawing this

>> No.4407021
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I'll dump a few

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>>4407021

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>>4407023

>> No.4407028

>>4406670
>>4406923
Stop watching porn

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>>4407026

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>>4407033

>> No.4407038

>>4402041
I mean it's not very good, so such choices among others may be a clue to why it isn't.

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>>4407043

>> No.4407045

>>4403267
is the face correct?

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>>4407046

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>>4407051

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>>4407055

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>>4407057
final

>> No.4407106

>>4401458
You’re not paying attention

>> No.4407108

>>4407028
get more social intelligence

>> No.4407171

>>4406784
His linework is solid but I've always felt his panelling and page layouts are just awful. Too much shit on every page, I always find them (especially the more recent works) to be disorientating to read.

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>> No.4407330

>>4401383
>hero dominating alpha bitch
Boo! It's 100 hotter if it's the opposite. Especially if both eventually understand that they don't do it out of spite or being forced to, but out of enjoying the dynamic and love for each other.

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>> No.4407337

>>4407330
Now this sounds a lot more like coomshit than the OP pic.

>> No.4407341

>>4407337
>using reddit meme terminology
>calling a pure erotic BDSM lesbian romance lewd
Nigger, WTF?

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>> No.4407383

>>4401383
Artist?

>> No.4407390

>>4407330
I don't know about these characters but blond hair and ponytail are typically bitchy features. Also there is no love or anything good in dominating. It's just dirty sick coomer fetish.

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>>4407390
>Atomic Betty
>blond
You do know this is an 18+ website?

>domination of one partner by the other
>literally the most ancient and conservative form of relationship
>a dirty fetish
LOL

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>> No.4407418

>>4407407
Literally who? There are gorillion shitty toddler cartoons only a few autists care about.

>> No.4407487

>>4407418
>caring = knowing about
Look, underagefag, if you watched CN in the 00's, you know her enough to remember the hair color, it's that simple.

>> No.4407508

>>4407487
I didn't watch it and had no reasons to. Fucking hell, autists unironically can't comprehend people having different interests and experience.

>> No.4407525

>>4401383
Is this Cheeeeez?

>> No.4407547

>>4407508
>didn't watch watch cartoons as a kid
I knew you were underage, but didn't expect you to be so underage that you grew up exclusively on minecraft letsplays.

>> No.4407563

>>4402041
>this image straight out contradicts the tutorials I have seen
Don't rely only on tutorials, study artists.

There isn't a single way to ink correctly, especially for cartooning.

>> No.4407600

>>4407547
You degenerate coomers are truly scum on Earth.

>> No.4407619

>>4407600
Shut up zoomer

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>> No.4408429

>>4408427

/beg/

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>> No.4408491

>>4408459
God it fuckin pains me to think of how many great art ruined by shitty colors whenever I think about western comic arts

>> No.4408545

>>4408491
Why are western colourists so bad? I don't get it.

>> No.4408555

>>4408545
they don't have copic marker experience

>> No.4408565

>>4407547
america is not the only country in the world fucking retard

>> No.4408593

>>4401383
That looks appealing and cool OP, I want to fucking coom on them

>> No.4408601

>>4408565
>CN only exists in America
LOL, you fucking literal Sub-Saharan African peasant, this channel exists in every civilized country.

>> No.4408632

>>4408601
Stop shitting the thread with your autism. Everything you say is irrelevant and stupid as fuck.

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>>4407401
>blue abstract line man is better with women than me

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>>4406697
more important, where fuck is the artist blog!!!

>> No.4409556

>>4409514
>Pixiv ID:
14930

here you go bro

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>>4401383
i made this

>> No.4409604

>>4409588
This is such basic bitch instaroastie shit

>> No.4409753

>>4408459
>>4408491

is this Greg Land?

>> No.4409765

>>4409588
It's nice to look at, Normies would definitely eat this right up.
But, it shows very little understanding of both rendering and construction/form
You're drawing flat shapes and adding a bit of hatching to the edges. that's just not good.
But anyways, takeaway is just keep drawing. By producing finished pieces like this constantly you're already doing more than 99.9999% of /ic/

>> No.4409780

>>4409588
Knuckles?

>> No.4409799

>>4401625
The opposite of what that fag said lol

>> No.4410189

>>4409556
>>4409556
>>4409556
>>4409556
>>4409556
thank