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What should I work on? The face looks a little bit off and that I can’t draw hands that well.

>> No.4322015

>>4321999
work on anatomy. for instance try practicing drawing hands

>> No.4322021

You should work on proportions
Make the body an overal appealing size and shape

You already like dragonball so copy that, they have very appealing shape design in their characters

>> No.4322022

>>4321999
Go to the /beg/ thread and ask for advice, there’s not really a need to make a new thread.

Work on anatomy, make the movement of the limbs look less awkward, make your art less flat and improve your rendering. Just my .2

>> No.4322035

>>4321999
fucking literally everything
shits disproportionate and flat as fuck
dont give up though even if people like me shit on you

>> No.4322044

>>4322035
Nah it’s okay, it’s better when people are honest desu.

>> No.4322090

>>4321999
The arms are total nonsense. Study muscle anatomy to draw better muscles.
The bent leg is longer than the straight leg, you should keep your proportions in check.

>> No.4323103

>>4321999
>Shoulder muscle reaches pec
>Tricep is non-existent in right arm
>Front arm has a missing chunk. Muscle (tricep again) goes downwards like a bump, not inwards. Though it may get weird on the elbow
>Arms would go past his knees
>Stupid long forearms
>Posture is stupid to fight, he isn't facing his opponent nor is he a bit to the side. Take a look at fighting games (not mk) for good poses.
>Nose doesn't look right
>Eyes make him look like mischievous or faggy

>> No.4323224

being ok/good at colors, shading on stylin before basic is dumb
work on the basics
anatomy, framing, pose
if you have no idea what you're doing wrong then you're far from being good at drawing.

>> No.4323698

>>4321999
your taste in anime

>> No.4323728

Looks like trash, just work on the basics and use a fucking reference.

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>>4321999

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4323774

>>4321999
>What should I work on?
On everything nigga DAMN

>> No.4323804

>>4321999
Did your Yamcha inject synthol?

>> No.4323882

>>4321999
Study loomis book fun with a pencil

>> No.4323886

>>4323732
>>4323804
why are these faggots talking about synthol?
i mean, i figure that most people on a drawing board would be skinny twigs, but really? never seen a male body with a few muscles?

>> No.4323906

>>4323886
Not them, but it's because the muscles are misplaced. The deltoid, bicep, and tricep start and end in the wrong places giving the arm up to the elbow a pinched form, hence the synthol. Need those rich C and S curves to establish a good flow for the body and its parts.

>> No.4324101

>>4321999
wow anon this is amazing! blog?