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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4306995
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4306995

I wish I drew this much every weekend

>> No.4306998
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>> No.4307008

>>4306995
Someone's been watching KJG

>> No.4307021
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I wanted to do a lot more with this but I'm just tired of it now. Need a break from this character.

>>4306995
Loving that frog tank-mech.

>> No.4307106

>>4306042
Well i did made the hands bigger even if i couldnt fix them properly. I tried to make the building looking less flat, but i simply failed.

>> No.4307123
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>> No.4307147

>>4307123
Not bad honestly I like the perspective, proportions it also looks like a nice blend of realism and Cartoon style.

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Going through a model book

>>4306995
>>4307021
>>4307123
pretty cool

>> No.4307231
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>>4307021
Did a little more with this after all. Well, it's better than a flat background.

>>4307123
Man I love this.
>>4307152
Also nice.

>> No.4307316

>>4307152
Which book?

>> No.4307344

>>4307316
"Art Models | Life Nudes For Drawing and Sculpting". I always had difficulty drawing the figure until recently, now that it has become a bit easier I'm getting use out of it.
Deviantart also has many users who will post themselves posing in unlimited poses so that's a good resource too.

>> No.4307351

>>4306995
fisher I love your style so much please do more sfw drawings I love you man but I can’t deal with all the dicks

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any advice on how to achieve tkmiz's style?

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Gonna eventually go in and make this thinner lined and more detailed,
Redlines appreciated.

>> No.4307391

>>4307298
Good god this is beautiful, loving how much it just pops out!
>>4306995
A god among men, rad frogmachine

>> No.4307395

>>4307298
This screams Dreamcast

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>> No.4307418

>>4307359
Are you fucking serious? Are you so stupid you need to ask that and can't figure it out yourself?

>> No.4307430

>>4306995
Blog?

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>>4306938

>> No.4307460

>>4307398
i really dont like your art. You hide your /beg/ level drawings behind a bunch of poorly thought out contour lines and then post the same shit over and over

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>> No.4307483

>>4307398
I agree with the other anon, all you do is post the same shit over and over. There was one picture that was kinda neat, but then the rest pale in comparison. Get out of the comfort zone buddy.

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>>4307460
>>4307483

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>>4307351
>>4306995
If this is who I think it is, then I agree. Very lovely sfw stuff.

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>>4308182
>>4307351
I wish I drew more sfw too, throwing dicks on everything has become second nature at this point

>> No.4308203

>>4308198
Fuck you dude I want your shape language, that looks awesome. What/who did you study?

>> No.4308302
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Drawing in an old sketchbook, bottom left is from... early 2019 I think? It’s baby steps but I think I’ve improved slightly

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>> No.4308346

>>4307398
idk looks cool

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4308382

Not sure if this will fit here, it's my first time vising this thread. I usually only post on /beg/. Thoughts? Something to improve?

>> No.4308385

>>4308302
da da da da dadada da da dadadadadadada dad dadad dada dadaada dadad daada

That sombrero calls for a mexican theme song.

>> No.4308424

>>4308382
Pretty cool

>> No.4308428

>>4308198
Do you post or dump your works anywhere else? Your Twitter isn't up to date

>> No.4308430

>>4307452
>>4307434
I rike it

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>>4308311
Values are really inconsistent and all over the place on her skin when they really don't need to be. It looks mildly okay full sized, but the thumbnail speaks volumes. Nose is completely borked, and her right eye (our left) is placed very far away, compared to where the other eye is placed.

>> No.4308448

>>4307021
>>4306998
>>4306995
All fantastic.

>> No.4308463

>>4308198
What did you do to get to this level, mate?

>> No.4308496
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4308496

Its rough but does the general idea work? I'm new to dynamic, actiony stuff so any feedback is helpful

>> No.4308502

>>4308302
Kid, you were starting to do some interesting things with perspective but now you've gone completely into your comfort zone again.

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>>4306938

ratt scribbles... I found a really comfortable sketching brush. it feels almost similar to a pencil.

>> No.4308525

>>4308513
what program and what brush?

>> No.4308534

>>4308502
Ahh shit, I didn’t realise. I’ll try to challenge myself more, thank you for reminding me anon.
>>4308385
Hehe it really does look like a sombrero

>> No.4308541

>>4308496
Exaggerate! Looks stiff af

>> No.4308550
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4308550

trying simple bgs, baby steps

>> No.4308622

>>4308431
something about the nose...

>> No.4308630
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a page from a comic i am doing as a crash-course in clip studio paint

>> No.4308702

>>4308550
>mercedes
good taste

>> No.4308713

>>4308550
what resources did you study/learn from to get to your level? I’ve seen your art before and I’ve always liked how you used color in your drawings

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setting up for some char bios or something, dunno

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>> No.4308868

>>4308311
the sternocleidomastoid looks nothing like that

how are you on this level and still symbol drawing like a beg?

>> No.4308871

>>4308311
nose is on a completely different plane lol

>> No.4308893

whatever happened to the yellow chinese head guy?

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>>4308541
Maybe more like this?

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>>4308311

>> No.4308928

>>4308863
this is hot, color it

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What’s a good resource for learning how to digitally color? Color has always been my biggest weakness among other things, and I really want to make my work pop more and not look half finished. What can I do?

>> No.4309071
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just redline it for me

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>>4308863
>>4308928

not him but i took a whack at colorin it weird

i like your stuff :3c original artist

>> No.4309079

>>4308904

i rike it

>> No.4309103
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Colors layout done, gonna details now. Hopefully this will turn out okay.
>>4308550
>>4308846
Love these

>> No.4309112
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Can't stop drawing animals as cute anime girls.

>> No.4309133 [DELETED] 

>>4307418
well, i'm asking, aren't i?

>> No.4309134

>>4307418
well, i'm asking, aren't i?

>> No.4309135

>>4308382
you're not /beg/ at all.

>> No.4309143

>>4308868
>sternocleidomastoid
jesus fucking christ look at this absolute retardad

>> No.4309147

>>4308936
first you have to stop oversexualizing women

>> No.4309148

>>4308463
Probably thousands of hours of sketching and lots of studies and the stroke came with time

>> No.4309153

>>4309071
You should continue practicing figure drawing before stylization anon, I won't lie it looks really bad but that's because you haven't practiced enough and don't have a sense of form. It will come out when you shade even with redline. Watch a few dozens of videos from Croquis Cafe (and draw) and redraw, it will look much better

>> No.4309160

How do you promote your blog?

>> No.4309320
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How shit is my sketch?

>> No.4309327

>>4309320
not very, pose seems a little off around the legs, maybe a weird angle, and the left arm seems a bit thick compared the right, but that might just be my perspective.

otherwise, pretty good, definitely feels like it has 'form' and I like your linework.

>> No.4309341

>>4309143
That was chad as fuck idiot

>> No.4309382

>>4309320
Hand is fucked
Foot is fucked (big toe is meant to be on the inside)
Face is fucked and is in desperate need of loomis

>> No.4309427

>>4306995
Disgusting faggot shit
You're good so why do you have to waste your skills drawing gay faggot shit

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>>4309427
Translation: Draw le anime girls with massive cow tits reeee

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progress, input always appreciated

>> No.4310015

>>4308846
holy shit that's great
blog?

>> No.4310039

>>4309964
Is Galo supposed to be on the same plane as Lio, or further behind him? If they're on the same plane, Galo's head and body should be larger

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>>4310039
oh no these are two totally separate images, i just pasted them as one, sorry

>>4310015
thanks, it's @magister_jp

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No bickering can un tie these two which isn't good news for either me or you.

>> No.4310081

>>4310070
they’d look fucking cool as the same pic though, great art anon

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I need criticism on my construction

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>>4310542
reference

>> No.4310565

>>4307123
Fucking rad

>> No.4310567

>>4308198
I mean you’re gay and overly sexual, guess your fans just need to accept that

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>> No.4310578

>>4310070
how’s you git so gud? any books/videos you looked into to get to your level

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>>4308203
if you want to improve your shapes there are a lot of artists you could study. KJG, joel jurion, kokimantarou, ovopack, victor kalvachev, carter goodrich, shaun tan, zedig, and a bunch im forgetting at the moment. I think ive learned more from looking at other artists and trying to break down what they do than i have through strict studies.
>>4308428
sorry I havent updated my twitter in a while but there's some new stuff i can dump
>>4308463
this >>4309148. ive been "serious" for about 6 years now, and started drawing a long time before that. The fundies aren't a meme, think about everything in terms of 3d volumes

>> No.4310760

>>4309842
right, because if you arent obsessed with cock the only alternative is giant breasts

>> No.4310767

>>4310578
I did the usual studies but while I read loomis I didn't apply it much, hampton helped me more. I also agree with >>4310584, at this point it's 90% studying other artists i like and breaking down what they do, 10% everything else.

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>>4310573
My guess was that she was going for a sorrowful, gentle smile, if that's the case you gotta push the corners of the mouth more, the corners aren't really round like that if someone's smiling.

>> No.4310836

>>4310834
don't even bother trying to help this fag he's only here to self shill

>> No.4310970

>>4310834
This is a nice fix

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>> No.4310990

>>4308713
thanks. I didn't really have a method, i just studied artists with colors I liked like purplekecleon, rei17, awanqi, and more. A little bit of gurneys also helped.

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>> No.4311045

>>4310990
>purplekecleon
Tried to seach for it but almost all accounts got wiped out because internet drama and other things. Damn. Her color work was pretty neat, if her accounts were still alive I'd try digging out brushes and workflows

>> No.4311056

terrible person but her tuts helped, here's some old things i found: https://photoshopfornoobs.tumblr.com/post/50769604128/how-i-see-color-a-tutorial-part-3-by
one of her brushes was very similar to this one iirc https://www.deviantart.com/zuqling/art/SAI-paint-tool-my-brush-244024632

>> No.4311057

>>4311045
>>4311056

>> No.4311074

>>4311056
>>4311057
Thank you so much, that's super helpful
I really appreciate all the artists helping others in these threads. It's rare but when it happens it makes my day

>> No.4311292
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2nd sketch of same cartoon character. Good enough to color? And if not, how can I improve it? Edit this one or draw again?

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>>4307231
Colouring now. Any advice on how to make it look stronger? Feels like values still need a bit of work

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Anything to fix before I begin the hair and the rest of the hatchwork?

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>>4311351
I really like it so far :^D

>> No.4311390

>>4307351
Yeah, I agree with that. He'd be my favourite artist on ic if it weren't for the mainly gay shit

>> No.4311392

>>4310544
>>4310542
Bro just look at it. It's not even remotely similar to the ref. Try again.

>> No.4311399

>>4311372
I like how this asshole asked advice for this in the /las/ discord and took none of it.

>> No.4311400

>>4308846
fine art. Fantastic

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>>4311399
Do you mean this redline?

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Here are some Asaro heads a guy from a private Discord server provided me. I had some trouble tracking them down, but I found them and just applied the fixes. I hope they help you guys out as much as they did for me.

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>> No.4311533

>>4311466
>>4311467
>>4311471
Damn that shit costs $115 I'm surprised chinks didn't make any bootlegs

>> No.4311600

>>4309147
no

>> No.4311601
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uwu

>>4311383
rly like your stuff as always

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>>4311074
Not that anon but here's something I dug out of my folders, gigideegee is general is really good with color

tracked down the full guide:
https://help-me-draw.tumblr.com/post/148585253420/gigidigi-a-collection-of-things-i-wrote-about

>> No.4311870

>>4309964
Their heads are a bit oversized, unless that was your intention

>> No.4311873

>>4311841
lol of course you dont have to use black and the just put multiple in a layer or other layer option, how people can be that retarded? is took you like two seconds to see that looks ugly.

>> No.4311920

>>4311841
thanks blessed anon

>> No.4312052

>>4311399
>>4310836

>> No.4312395
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Would appreciate some feedback.

Constantly having trouble getting engagement and I can't see the reasons why. So tear me to shreds, I guess.

No idea what gets people to look at shit

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only ended up getting the hair done today

>> No.4312407

>>4312395
You have trouble getting engagement because it looks like shit lmao

>> No.4312440

>>4312407
In what way?

>> No.4312455

>>4312440
Not >>4312407 but, you need to seriously consider not obsessing over style or using it as an excuse to avoid improving. The fuzzy spray shading looks bad, the line art is unpleasant, you can see laziness all over, from the spies to random lines where they shouldn't me. This is all without getting into the awful face.

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>>4312455
What's wrong with the face. I also spent more time on the lines than anything. Haven't been avoiding improving that's why I'm here. First time trying to do stay relatively on model for a show.

>> No.4312465

>>4312455
I'll admit the hair and the shadows are lazy though.

>> No.4312472

>>4312462
After looking up what these are based on, while your attempts aren't too bad, that artstyle is repulsive to me. Still avoid being lazy when finishing up a piece.

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>>4312395
>>4312462
I'd recommend going through Loomis's Drawing the Head. Even though you draw in a cartoony style much of the anatomical/form issues you face can be aided by using a model like the Loomis head as a base, which you can then construct more exaggerated features upon

>> No.4312558

>>4312472
Jesus Christ you're right. I feel bad for going in on the guy now, it's not his fault that show's art is disgusting.

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4312561

Yeah

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>> No.4312682

>>4312633
them edges lookin a mess. otherwise nice

>> No.4312799

>>4312462
Lines need to go together with the style of coloring, flat color and soft sketchy lines is incredibly difficult to pull off, I'd say follow the screencaps more

>> No.4313287
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>>4312397
finished

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>> No.4313344
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4313344

something

>> No.4313346
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>> No.4313349
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>> No.4313404
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4313404

I usually do traditional work, but I started doing digital painting as a way to spice it up. Lemme know what ya'll think.

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>>4313404

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>>4313406

>> No.4313465

>>4313346
>>4313344
>>4313287
>>4308936
>>4308863

my fav of recent submissions

>> No.4313473

>>4310573

ugly

>> No.4313481

>>4313473
there much more uglier /beg/ drawings ITT. Are you just saying that because whitebox made it?

>> No.4313490

>>4313481
t. Whitebox

>> No.4313573

>>4309147
Wan wan

>> No.4313599
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>>4313481

who the fuck is whitebox? it's ugly because it is.

>> No.4313615

>>4313346
The good shit>>4313346

>> No.4313696
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This was fun to draw.

>> No.4313702
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>> No.4313924

>>4313904
Nice drawing of the little mermaid but her hair is wrong

>> No.4313953

>>4311351
neato, you're using woof's palette

>> No.4314099
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Really trying to appeal to some hip tech companies with these... >_< Colors probably subject to change

>> No.4314103
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a little help pls

>> No.4314148

>>4314099
>appeal to some hip tech companies with these...
they're extremely soulless so I'd say you've accomplished your goal

>> No.4314215

>>4314103
Will be better if there is foreshortening and a background that compliment the X composition.

>> No.4314228

>>4314148
crabs in a bucket

>> No.4314230

>>4313904
I'm starting to wonder if you can even draw anything else besides this one character

>> No.4314243

>>4314099
Chart-chan looks like my boss. Would buy on a mug and gift to her/10 on boss's day/10.

>> No.4314260

>>4314099
neat, would say it fits the 'trendy' tech company advertisement look

>> No.4314269

>>4314148

blah

its obvious it's a girl

colors are soul roll on

graphic design is uniorincally girl soul they are actually that > _ < about their work

not everything has to be heisendruchtenscharvenkaiser fundamentalist constructivist

and here's where i dismount my white knight cuckery though

>> No.4314316

>>4314099
You forgot the black woman with very curly hair tech company ads love

>> No.4314402

>>4314099
It's got a nice laidback, open sort of look. Halfway between stickmen and comics. I'd prefer to see it illustrating one action or step-by-step idea but it doesn't offend the eye.

>> No.4314612

>>4314215
Thank you, i will try. Although I'm not so sure of what you mean about the background complimenting an X.

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>>4313702

>> No.4314641

>>4313344
this is surprisingly soulful

>> No.4314844
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4314844

I took a break from this for a couple of days but getting back into it

Anything standing out to people? I need to fix Blue Rose

>> No.4315011

>>4311601
Oh, thank you anon ^^ I like the drapery in yours

>> No.4315021

>>4313702
>>4314634

Twitter or other social media?

>> No.4315222
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Still struggle with arms but, gonna keep trying.

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Something I did on my phone.

>> No.4315307
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robot stuff

>> No.4315323

>>4315222
Good on you for experimenting with angles, but the face and chest perspective here needs some work. Also I would implore you to look into different “blush” techniques/solutions on your characters, it feels like you throw them on like autopilot. blush shouldn’t look inconsistent or cluttery, and because it’s supposed to show cuteness/delicacy/flusteredness you dont ALWAYS need it on a character


Other than that good stuff and keep going :)

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>> No.4315372

>>4315256
you drew this with your fingers?

>> No.4315412
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sketch

me grabbing Asuka's hand

>> No.4315435
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4315435

Here's the design for my business card this year. Tried to go for an even more comic book style than last year.

>> No.4315440

>>4315412
>>4315370
>>4315307
Based and good

>> No.4315635

>>4307123
Blog?

>> No.4315777

>>4315435
If I saw this business card I would make an effort to not hire you

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>> No.4315824

>>4315021
isnt it orenji

>> No.4315835

>>4315222
Now we're talking

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>>4306938
Thoughts?

>> No.4315859

>>4315791
So taking a break from porn?

>> No.4315861
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au auu

>> No.4315865

>>4315861
That's a pretty hot Ultraman, not gonna lie

>> No.4315873

>>4315859
ye, wanted to get this out of the wip stage before i draw more porn

>> No.4315881

>>4315222
One eye looks bigger than the other, maybe use the transform tool to size the smaller one up, see how it looks.

>> No.4315902

>>4315845
cute!

but you may want to redraw the skirts, its style doesnt really match the rest of the drawings

>> No.4315962

>>4315323
Thank you so much for the critique! I think I see what you mean about the chest perspective, it's supposed to be lower on her body and angled more downwards, right? I'll keep that in mind for the future, thanks for pointing out ^^ You are right about me throwing on blush as autopilot, I think at some point I just started using it to indicate volume in the cheeks and it comes off looking weird on characters that don't suit it. I'll try to be more careful with everything you pointed out.
>>4315835
:D I'll try to keep going in this direction!
>>4315881
Ah, I thought I did that intentionally but I see now I pushed it too far :') I avoid going back to finished drawings, but I'll be more attentive next time, thanks

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>> No.4316007

>>4315845
the faces are shaded, not the rest of the drawing.
very weird

>> No.4316009

>>4315256
I love it

>> No.4316130
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>>4315412

big changes
i wanna finish this one please help

>> No.4316148

>>4307123
Blog?

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still flat, just lack of experience

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still flat, idk it just due to lack of experience and knowledge

>> No.4316226

>>4315845
God koreans are such ugly race

>> No.4316234
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When it's finally weekend and you're not feeling it :'(

>> No.4316276

>>4316130
Eyes bigger, brows smaller. Why you giving her chola brows?

>> No.4316289

>>4308897
The problem is it feels like Doomguy figure moves up, when you want it to be moving into the skeleton to face punch it.

>> No.4316295

>>4316002
Fur supposed to have direction unless the creature in question is horribly dirty and fucked up. The furry dragon statue looks like an image of some kind of mortally sick fucker.

>> No.4316302

>>4316130
why are you giving her earrings? she doesnt wear them because it makes no sense for her to do it

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>>4316302
>why are your clocks melting? Clocks dont just melt it makes no sense to depict them that way

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>>4306938
Trying something out but it went sorta bad. Ignore that it's furry.

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The jungle is home to many toxins, distilled and made potent for war.

>> No.4316484

>>4316295
it's the god of death

>> No.4316581

>>4309112
Did you use any reference? I love it

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>>4316289
Yeah the main problem I was having was finding a way to make it look like hes jumping up to punch the revenant, since they're like 8 feet tall

>> No.4316686

>>4316276
Cringe

>>4316302
Agree

>> No.4316750
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Big hands

>> No.4317080

>>4316350
Nice strawman. The style looks strange enough without needing to make it look even more jarring by putting in shit that should simply not be there. Why not give her glasses too? Or a hat? At what point does it stop looking like asuka? If you want to have earrings maybe don’t draw her in the plugsuit.

>> No.4317122

>>4317080
who cares faggot

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>>4317080
>>4317122
pls no argue

>> No.4317154

>>4317148
Her face looks a lot better cleaned up, keep going!

>> No.4317176

>>4316226

kek.

post your face.

>> No.4317180

>>4317148
Fantastic. Excited to see where this will go should you continue

>> No.4317200

>>4317148
Just make your own oC. This is nothing like Asuka

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>> No.4317215
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>> No.4317270

>>4317148
Anon I love seeing you post and improve, don’t let the seething crabs get to you.

>> No.4317320

>>4317215
Awesome

>> No.4317361
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How can i make this more soul anons?

>> No.4317362

>>4317361
Clean up your linework, coloring, lazy mouth, and giver her a full body as well as a background.

>> No.4317393

>>4317361
Put canvas somewhere outside in the grass, put pencils around it and make a photo with filters

>> No.4317439
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workin with the lasso tool from clipstudio

>> No.4317444

>>4317361
well it looks like a child with parkinsons drew it so according to this fucking braindead board it has maximum soul

>> No.4317450

>>4314099
what's the optimal style for whoring yourself out to get faang cash?

>> No.4317453

>>4317215
love the gesure and energy
here, have a (you)

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>> No.4317489

>>4317476
>>4317486
kys

>> No.4317491

>>4317215
captains gone loco
loving his expression

>> No.4317493

>>4316130
remove left face tumor and make her less goblinlike

>> No.4317496

>>4316354
>>4317439
Blog?

>> No.4317535

>>4317439
extreme qt

>> No.4317536

>>4317215
>>4317214
so fuckin good

>> No.4317568
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Still workin.

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>>4317568

>> No.4317570
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>>4317569

>> No.4317573
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>>4317570
Big improvements on last year and last chapter. Still taking too long, though. I don't have my fundamentals down, so I still spend way too much time on actually making things look right rather than spending that time on making things look really good. If that makes sense.

I'm always looking for help.
https://tapas.io/series/The-Concord-Initiative

>> No.4317579
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>>4317496
https://twitter.com/LunyDoobles
only active on twt anon

>> No.4317600

>>4317573
This is dope

>> No.4317724
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>> No.4317755

>>4317724
maximum comf anon, i love youw ork

>> No.4317765
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Unfinished, eye is wonky.

>> No.4317781

>>4316484
Well your god of death looks like my old cat when she was dying of cancer.

>> No.4317784

>>4316632
Maybe try to rotate the revenant so that it is leaning to the right while Doomguy comes from below right to top left to punch him in the face. And you can even implement the right hand grab that you did in the first picture pulling revenants top half down for a better punch.

>> No.4317814

>>4317214
these are fuckin niiiiceee

>> No.4317882
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>> No.4317911

>>4317489
hoes mad.

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>> No.4318002

>>4317765
Neat Anon, don't forget to flip your canvas now and then. I'd use more shadows on the underside of the nose, use your brush strokes to articulate the angles/shape of the nose more. Also define the hair, no reason to be lazy with it, use your strokes to define the direction of the hairs.

>> No.4318096
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Just radically changed my style, did this in sai in like 2 hours

>> No.4318105
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trying to get used to digital

>> No.4318110

>>4317573
You're composition, panel layout, and lettering have much improved from when you first started posting anon.

>> No.4318215

>>4318096
Very pretty anon!

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>> No.4318310

>>4318288
the foreshortening on her arm is nonexistent. It looks like she has a really tiny arm with a big hand, or the dude holding it chopped it off

>> No.4318313

>>4318288
>>4318310
Forgot to say that other than that, not bad. Fix the arm tho

>> No.4318314

>>4314099

Humans of flat on twitter

>> No.4318321

>>4317148

This is so much better.

>> No.4318332

>>4316750
lov it

>> No.4318390

>>4318314
I had a look. I agree that some (not all) examples are horrible. But then the examples that the author posts as "good" are mostly overrendered stock images. What the person behind this account seems to not realize, is that most of what we design is heavily influenced by the clients' art direction. Sometimes we end up with things we absolutely hate and wouldn't put our name on, but such is the nature of this job... That said I like my characters, I stand by them even if they are "humans of flat".

>> No.4318530

>>4318105
Very cute. You have a lot of potential if you haven’t done digital before.

>> No.4318542

>>4317882
>>4317947
you're on a tear lately.

>> No.4318546

>>4318390
your character design style has always been really nice, this one almost has a bit of a 50's advertisement vibe in the faces that i really like.

>> No.4318577
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Two hours in.

>> No.4318702

>>4318542
thats a different guy

>> No.4318709
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>> No.4318796
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drew a rat

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>>4308863

>> No.4319251

>>4317600
>>4318110
Thanks fellas

>> No.4319269

>>4318709
sexy

>> No.4319329
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>>4318288
This is how I would do the hand

Easier to hide/deal with foreshortening this way

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Rider unit

>> No.4319395
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>> No.4319415

>>4319395
based

>> No.4319425

>>4310834
this is aethestic

>> No.4319427

>>4311023
comfy stockin

>> No.4319428

>>4313342
its janky but you have some appeal going here. nice tits

>> No.4319429

>>4313702
truly excellent work

>> No.4319430

>>4317450
what that person posted

>> No.4319433

>>4319329
nice critique, op do this

style wise i'd take some emphasis off the line weight on her nose and lips since it draws the viewers attention away from the eyes, which is key for this piece. but its "your style" bro, so keep at it however you want

>> No.4319500

>>4315021
https://twitter.com/wholesomeorenji

>>4319429
thanks!

>> No.4319525
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A little late to the party this time around, I see.

>> No.4319541
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>> No.4319544

>>4317450
>>4319430
No sadly... Otherwise I'd be drowning in work. See Oddfellows, Buck, Le Cube, Giant Ant, Nice Shit and Vidico on Behance, those studios are more or less the trendsetters in my industry.

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>> No.4319623

>>4317765
i dont think the eye is wonky. lets see the finished version

>> No.4319626

>>4314099
>>4314103
the juxtaposition of these two posts is pure kino

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>> No.4319690

>>4319541
Fix that nose, for starters, based over extending white box anon. I think you are a great example of someone who needs to drill their fundies to develop a real command of proportion, first of all, so you can measure things such that you can produce shapes that are easy to work with later on - when you're rendering/adding values. By using value you're supposed to be giving the object weight and position in space (or else why bother??) but it doesn't add up when you commit to wonky measurements then it really begins to look you struggled to make the thing appear 3D, it'll never be perfect, and that's ok, just get asymptotically close. Otherwise the result is a piece that doesn't believe in itself, aka a polished turd.

>> No.4319710

>>4319630
amazin'

>> No.4319721
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>> No.4319724

>>4319626
Rude

>> No.4319794
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Hive cities are constantly alive with shouts of rebellion from the malcontent. These mechs are routinely rolled out to keep the "peace"

>> No.4319806

>>4319690
see
>>4310836

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>>4319541
How can you possibly think this looks ok?

>> No.4319922
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>>4319630
>>4319710
thanks man

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>>4319721
You can't make this shit up

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need to remind myself to doodle for fun so i dont burn out again

>>4306995
>>4307123
>>4307152
>>4313702
i love comfy sketch pages like this. ive tried to do something similar but im a big baby about sketches overlapping so they always look shit

>>4319926
i hate this stupid fucking meme it makes me cackle EVERY time
anyway, be nice anon.

>>4310070
what are your commissions rates, roughly? for a fully rendered piece (w/ or w/o bg). asking out of curiosity. i struggle when pricing larger projects

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shitty soul of cinder concept for next thing to work on

>> No.4320382
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Just did this commission of a cute girl based off of this mushroom. Feel free to critique but most importantly-

How much should I be charging for stuff like this? I feel like I got a bit of a low amount for this, hence why some of it isn't very polished. Also I rarely ever draw nudes, so I wasn't confident in my ability to make a good ass.

>> No.4320418

>>4320382
Show her hands, pull back the 'camera' and make better use of your canvas.

>> No.4320452

>>4320418
This was the pose the client wanted, and they didn't pay for a background. Showing hands wouldn't have been a big deal for this picture, I think the main 'focus' was pretty obvious. But ty, I'm more just concerned about the shading and pricing.

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Can i get feedback on this sketch of mine? I never draw people so i suck at it

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>>4320611
Full pic for context

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>>4319794
>>4319922
>>4320065
i really like these

>>4320611
>>4320612
keep thinking about the 3d volumes
there are some spots where you've got it like the tail curving, but others like the girl and the monster head look flat
keep working at it, you'll get it

>> No.4321028

>>4319892
Seems like cellulite.

>> No.4321270

>>4320188
this looks really nice so far. the colors work well together

>> No.4321271

>>4320065
Blog?

>> No.4321438

>>4306938
gooooo >>4321436

>> No.4321583

>>4320382
I really like it, vlog?