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4237975 No.4237975 [Reply] [Original]

Heya /ic/, this drawing is done by a friend of mine. Do you see any errors/mistakes? What could make it look better?

>> No.4237978

Stop making threads cunt

>> No.4237981

>done by a friend of mine
Here's the error, you should have typed "done by me"

>> No.4237983

Figure is out of balance, right forearm is out of proportion, humerus is broken into two, face caved in, eyes too close to each other, neck dislodged from the torso, pectoral muscles are misplaced, the sideplane for her head is practically non existant and worse of all this is weebshit. Tell your "friend" its shit.

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>> No.4237990

many thanks anon

>> No.4237991

I asked him to post it for me

>> No.4237995

Can you and your little buttbuddy fuck off

>> No.4237996

Dear cro and derac, if you're reading this, suck a big penus

>> No.4237998

aight thanks, but wdym by sideplane?

>> No.4238000

Cro is that you? Fuck off from this thread you fucking assfuck. Youre supposed to work on your shitty comic

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deric when are you going to reply i showed you my dick please respond

>> No.4238238

LMFAO nice cope attempt OP, no one's buying your bullshit

>> No.4238246

This is the quality thread /ic/ needs.

>> No.4238249

I think it's well done, especially the design: there are some anatomy issues (and I won't lie, I hate that fucking face), but they don't really affect the drawing unless they're specifically looking for errors. In general, it is very cute to look at. I can't stress it enough, the design is top tier

>> No.4238277

I asked him to post it for me since I was banned for a bit, hadn't noticed it expired forever ago

>> No.4238279

thanks m8, highly agree with the face bit lmao
since I dont have much xp I'm mostly looking for anatomical errors

>> No.4238283

Is she falling? Where is her center of balance?

>> No.4238288
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I have absolutely no idea
heres ref

>> No.4238302

How the fuck did they fuck up their right arm so badly given they were using reference; theres literally no forearm visible in this picture

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>> No.4238306

idk but if youd be willing to tell me how to fix this shit thatd be great lmao

>> No.4238523

Anon, I...

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I tried to fix anatomy but this isn't a fix of the whole piece, it's more of a thing i've done for myself since im learning anatomy and proportions now. I didn't know what to do with pelvis and legs area

>> No.4238676

Never red line ever again.

>> No.4238685

in what universe is her right elbow not broken?

this is why i don't even bother looking at the critique on this board. it's straight retardation

>> No.4238693

Kill yourselves

>> No.4238697


>> No.4238701

The point is that it's not a red line to fix this shit, I just wanted to see if i can place landmarks and draw through clothes. If it's broken, let me know what is broken, I just recently started learning that stuff. Preferably make a red line version that is completely correct

>> No.4238702

Noodle arms

>> No.4238706

my man just look and think. look at her left forearm. can you bend your arm like that? if so, see a doctor

>> No.4238710

Based coomer, I hope this is real.

>> No.4238715

Alright, anything else?

>> No.4238862

okey tank

>> No.4238866

thanks, nex time ill draw the body first

>> No.4238868

thighs too thick i c

>> No.4239008

btw he titties r sposed to be a bit smaller than that

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