[ 3 / biz / cgl / ck / diy / fa / ic / jp / lit / sci / vr / vt ] [ index / top / reports ] [ become a patron ] [ status ]
2023-11: Warosu is now out of extended maintenance.

/ic/ - Artwork/Critique


View post   

File: 379 KB, 1035x1100, 1574637012568.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4227989 No.4227989 [Reply] [Original]

Previous >>4219868


What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
------
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4228027
File: 660 KB, 1575x1050, wash.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228027

>> No.4228252
File: 56 KB, 700x525, medi.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228252

TF2 had nice character designs

>> No.4228272

>>4227931
Neat.

>> No.4228282
File: 93 KB, 287x287, 11346431354.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228282

>>4228252
>had

>> No.4228292

>>4228282
Game's dead bud, and the stuff they add in today doesn't adhere to the old art style at all

>> No.4228300

>>4228292
>if there's no new hero every two months the game is dead
Okay, bud

>> No.4228355

>>4227989
>>4225398
Artist name/blog/whatever?

>> No.4228356

>>4228300
the games dead boomer

>> No.4228365

>>4228355
I think it's flintlock, could be wrong

>> No.4228431
File: 138 KB, 861x1000, ddl47h7-ee841cce-e534-4fb9-b2b7-5b6b8d6ca9be-861x1000.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228431

>>4227989
I have zero knowledge about color theory and I believe it shows. What do

>> No.4228470
File: 3.29 MB, 2535x1663, VA DRAVEN.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228470

>>4227989
Was doodling and came up with a Legendary Demacia Vice skin for Draven, with a whole
retro Big Trouble Little China/Last Action Hero asshole action star outrun thing going for it.

Was fun, shouldn't have spent much time on it though.

>> No.4228493
File: 2.64 MB, 3024x3780, E3C2AA4D-8E1A-4979-88F1-D9DC2D4D1F00.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228493

>> No.4228495
File: 2.64 MB, 3024x3780, 29B55521-836D-4ACB-8F29-62C8F9D0F60E.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228495

>>4228493

>> No.4228496 [DELETED] 
File: 3.24 MB, 4032x3024, 23B76D47-C26F-4C0D-8D75-4E3A22525F18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228496

>>4228495

>> No.4228500
File: 2.83 MB, 3024x3024, 482D192C-AA0E-48A9-BC41-47E5BEE7718C.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228500

>>4228495

>> No.4228522

>>4228355
>>4228365
Being mistaken for a better artist is my biggest accomplishment
Jokes aside, you can find me here
hayabusart on twitter
_hayabusar on instagram

>> No.4228548

>>4228493
>>4228495
>>4228500
STOP
I already fapped 3 times today

>> No.4228562
File: 55 KB, 640x480, 1553005886621.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228562

>>4228470
this is fantastic. i think its amazingly cool. but the one spot i see a problem if you were looking for critique is the car. maybe cars aren't your thing or maybe you just didn't want to spend a lot of time on it, but it looks like a box/triangle, which even for the 80s is not quite right. for reference on a boxy 80s car with pop ups, i suggest taking a look at a honda prelude, toyota mr2 aw11, or AE86. maybe combine parts from each to make something generic.

>> No.4228573

>>4228493
>>4228495
>>4228500
Resize man, please. Also chicken scratching is not a suitable substitute for shading.

>> No.4228608

>>4228027
shoo shoo

>> No.4228618

>>4228431
I know this is annoying but I made some small changes that I think are a big improvement.

>Flip your damn Canvas before you upload!

>> No.4228620
File: 146 KB, 861x1000, IMG_20191126_122555_702-861x1000.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228620

>>4228618
And wouldn't it be nice if I remembered to upload the damn picture.

>> No.4228682
File: 368 KB, 1024x1280, 38123A9F-C8F0-4B6B-A98F-985895A6064E.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228682

>> No.4228721
File: 425 KB, 1024x1280, 361764D3-B899-486F-801C-D689CB5B5F85.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228721

>> No.4228764

>>4228470
looks really cool
do you have a blog? this would def get trending on twitter, maybe even reblogged by a rioter

>> No.4228776

>>4228620
What type of paint is that?

>> No.4228781
File: 137 KB, 1000x750, EKURFFqWsAAVpJZ.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228781

>>4228431
Draw in black and white, bro

I made some stylised portraits today

>> No.4228838 [DELETED] 

>>4228573
You don’t know what that word means.

>> No.4228871

>>4228776
Gimp 2.8 bruv

>> No.4228989
File: 193 KB, 949x1000, 1559342449566.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228989

quantity over quality babey i'm straight shitting them out now

>>4227509
yeah you're the first

>> No.4228991

>>4228989
based very cute nice

>> No.4228996
File: 94 KB, 484x488, Sem Título-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4228996

>> No.4229025

>>4228682
Soul
>>4228721
Soulless

>> No.4229029

>>4228989
You’re obviously very skilled, but I’ve noticed just from what you post that all the girls you draw look exactly the same
Some artists have a style that flatters SFS, especially artists with more simplistic styles. I don’t think you do

>> No.4229034

>>4228996
What is this cow's name

>> No.4229044

>>4229034
Isabel

>> No.4229060 [DELETED] 
File: 240 KB, 1280x958, 5BE7B33E-389C-4257-8E57-E6D4395EB533.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229060

>> No.4229063
File: 487 KB, 1280x1033, 58F7444C-18BF-420C-9C2E-413EC094DAD2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229063

>> No.4229069

>>4229029
>You’re obviously very skilled
thanks sorry but not by any professional standard no haha
>Some artists have a style that flatters SFS, especially artists with more simplistic styles. I don’t think you do
SFS? Sameface? I don't care if my style suits shit better I set out to draw one fucking cute girl and I'll do it even if the attempts make me look like an Ass Clown, thanks for your concern

>> No.4229071

>>4229069

Not the original anon, but SFS is Same Face Syndrome.

>> No.4229072

>>4229069
They ain't even cute

>> No.4229073

>>4228573
Some days you have to make more marks than others to get where you’re going, unfortunately. If that qualifies as chicken scratch than color me a chicken, mang.

>> No.4229075

>>4229072
uh yeah that's the problem, Einstein

>> No.4229076

>>4229075
You make their muscles too defined. I don't want a loli that can beat me up

>> No.4229079

>>4228267
Kino and pasedbilled

>> No.4229090

>>4228996
Why did you change your name?

>> No.4229094
File: 31 KB, 679x451, bob.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229094

>>4228996
It looks like shes hugging her knees but they merged with her chest

>> No.4229095
File: 700 KB, 750x713, E6E28E05-5B4B-41B6-8370-81C94BF6C82B.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229095

The guy on the right makes absolutely no sense but I had fun

>> No.4229122

>>4229094
t.chestlet

>> No.4229146
File: 357 KB, 1265x2442, SCAN0402.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229146

>> No.4229150

>>4229076
Oh? You want them to be too weak to fight back? Fucking degenerate.

>> No.4229154
File: 171 KB, 480x745, paision 5.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229154

>tfw too stupid to notdraw/color on a white background
>poses too stiff
>construction's aesthetics looked neater than final product
help.

>> No.4229189

>>4228764
thanks, but the idea will likely die here
>>4228562
Much appreciated, you're right i didn't look at any cars at all I just wanted to quickly beat the idea out so I drew the most generic thing ever.
I'll be sure to do some homework next time.

>> No.4229192

>>4229154
shading was a mistake

>> No.4229207
File: 143 KB, 480x745, Panty_poison5.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229207

>>4229192
>shading
I colored on the construction layer like a retard thinking i could salvage it 40 mins afterwards.

>> No.4229211

>>4229090
My followers were not satisfied with me changing my direction into more Erotic art. Só its better to seperate me from my previous account and start again, without all that backlash.

>> No.4229217

>>4228522
good shit

>> No.4229231

>>4229211
based retard coomer

>> No.4229237
File: 48 KB, 529x895, tre2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229237

>> No.4229317
File: 1.32 MB, 1125x1400, A4B66805-C521-428C-9AE2-8204B94517A2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229317

>> No.4229336
File: 230 KB, 850x1201, __bb_and_bb_fate_and_2_more_drawn_by_ohara_tometa__sample-8dad7da4cf9123f6ffbb7fc13e57e555.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229336

I want to become a pixiv tier jap god. what do I do to draw like that here's what ive got so far.

>> No.4229344
File: 767 KB, 750x839, 69C25D6C-6FC6-4DAD-BB30-F00931A711C5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229344

>>4229095
This is littered with errors, kinda stiff and ugly but I found the concept cute

>> No.4229345

>>4229336
are you using refs? the face is okay but your rendering on her body shows how little you know about anatomy and there are some massive beg mistakes like the forearm and collarbone her left leg, skirt.

>> No.4229347
File: 109 KB, 1024x732, 1574716957719.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229347

>>4229344
yikes

>> No.4229349

>>4229347
Feel free to shit on it, I’m not too attached

>> No.4229394

>>4229349
Your rendering is phenomenal, but you should work on neck placement and posing more.

>> No.4229396
File: 647 KB, 750x717, 9710720D-ADE6-4E7C-AD08-F28A18533F4D.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229396

>>4229394
You're right anon, I felt like I had a good streak with posing lately so I got cocky and went in without planning anything out. Now his neck looks broken. I’ll be more careful next time, thank you for pointing this out

>> No.4229401

>>4229396
Well, left isnt that bad (maybe a bit 5 headish), but given your influences I'd leave it to stylistic decision. Dude on the right could benefit from shifting his torso so he's facing the girl. Or have him face away but have his head tilt towards her

>> No.4229419

>>4229401
I don’t know why I didn’t draw him facing her, I think I’m nervous about drawing characters overlapping while interacting. Thank you for the feedback! I’ll take everything into consideration :)

>> No.4229425

>>4229207
what are the lines going down her thighs supposed to represent? if theyre her muscles you're way off

>> No.4229429
File: 92 KB, 480x745, Panty_poison.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229429

>>4229425
muscle and I was way off.

>> No.4229430

>>4229336
Already better than me desu

>> No.4229436

>>4229419
YOUR ART IS FUCKING GARBAGE

>> No.4229437

>>4229436
pyw

>> No.4229444

>>4229436
I’ll keep drawing until it isn't

>> No.4229447

>>4229317
I quite like the style you have going for your faces, but you need to practice your lower bodies more. It's clear that most of your drawing experience comes from portraits and that you have absolutely no clue how to leg. Also, hands - they're the most important part after the face, so don't ever half-ass them. I know they're complicated, but it's not hard to find refs for them either since most people have them.
Lastly, presentation. You're doing your art a disservice with the way you're posting it, most people won't click on a thumbnail like that. Clean up your drawing by erasing parts you're not going to keep and either take better pictures/find a scanner, or do some editing after the fact to brighten the background while keeping the lines nice and dark.

>> No.4229456

>>4229444
Ganbarre nika \o/

>> No.4229463

>>4229456
Thank you anon :’) I don’t know if I gave off the wrong impression at some point, but I’d want to say now that I’m immensely grateful for the constant effort that anons on here put in with me when they point out flaws, give tips, resources and critiques to my art. Had I not gotten the reality check that I did a while ago, I would’ve never gotten serious about improving. With all my heart, thank you. I’m sorry I never expressed my appreciation earlier

>> No.4229469

cringe

>> No.4229526

>>4228027
go back to the porn thread, gains goblin

>> No.4229528

>>4229526
He can post wherever he feels like, fuck off.

>> No.4229529
File: 133 KB, 1225x1225, marte.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229529

>>4229526
shan't, not everything i draw is porn

>> No.4229592

>>4229526
As long as Gains keeps the porn in the Porn Thread, it's all good.

>> No.4229593
File: 99 KB, 614x1304, 20191126_220257_0001.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229593

Are small/medium-tiddy onee-sans also appreciated on this site?

>> No.4229612

>>4229593
You'll be fine. All we ask is to help keep the porn in the Porn Thread and the underaged/furry/guro/nasty shit shoved up /b's backside.

>> No.4229614

>>4229526
GG draws more offten then 99% of /ic/, he's an example we all should follow, not shoo away.
And as long as he's not posting his abhorrent fetishes, he's welcomed here.

>> No.4229617

>>4229593
>Are small/medium-tiddy onee-sans also appreciated on this site?
They are. But niggers are not.

>> No.4229637
File: 1.23 MB, 2160x1685, 64(Phobos).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229637

Messing about

>> No.4229653

>>4229614
>And as long as he's not posting his abhorrent fetishes, he's welcomed here.
But that is the only thing he is posting.

>> No.4229657

>>4229653
It's just two bros having a fun time in the water, while nude. I'll take that over his quadruple amputee loli skull fucking pics anyday.

>> No.4229704

>>4229396
Do some drawings in your favorite way, and some with lots of preplanning so you start getting in the flow of getting something really polished out.

>> No.4229713
File: 1.93 MB, 2400x1820, Illustration30.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229713

>> No.4229740

>>4229704
I’m not used to planning out my sketches, but I’ll try to and see how it turns out. Thank you for the advice!

>> No.4229746
File: 164 KB, 525x700, boop.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229746

I've been in a real slump this week. I haven't drawn at all since college started and I felt like shit. But now I've got my groove back boy, something's changed and I feel like it's gonna be alright bros

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g0OgYQFAic8

>> No.4229751
File: 1.12 MB, 1015x1638, nitocris.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229751

i know it's not perfect and i'm going to study hands

>> No.4229754

>>4229751
away to the porn thread with you

>> No.4229770

>>4229754
WOOF WOOF ;P

>> No.4229777

>>4229751
You're afraid of contrast.
There's some rim lighting but the main shadows are really weak.

>> No.4229781
File: 404 KB, 1200x1600, boop.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229781

>>4229746
and now to colour... OOF

>> No.4229794

>>4229751
Souless

>> No.4229796 [DELETED] 

>>4229713
Out of /

>> No.4229802

>>4229713
2-3 more years of polish and you will be good

>> No.4229830
File: 416 KB, 1200x1600, boop bolour.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229830

>>4229781
I've never sat down to actually study how to colour before...

>> No.4229844

>>4229830
I bet my left lung that you haven't studied anything in your life. Go to /bet/ and actually practice

>> No.4229846
File: 95 KB, 700x465, Devils-Wheel.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229846

>>4229844
>/bet/
Red or black?

>> No.4229856

>>4229751
I like this actually
blog?

>> No.4229868

>>4229830
And that's why you have zero gradient, shading, no complimentary colors... Basically what you accomplished is staying inside the lines.

>> No.4229871

>>4229637
I... Fucking love these. Ig?

>> No.4229878
File: 457 KB, 1200x1500, qt.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229878

So what's good and what's shit?

>> No.4229889

>>4229878
Face is very appealing, I can see youre varying the hue slightly of your shadows and lights but you could push that a bit further. Try render different materials in more distinct manners as well, she has shiny highlights on her cheeks and tits but why not on her hair? I see you're warming up the shadows on the boobs but why not push the idea that its flesh with some stronger subsurface scattering and differentiate the clothing with different edges and interactions with light? Good stuff overall would nut/10

>> No.4229891

>>4229889
Thank you, your advice is appreciated I too wish to nut but this stupid self imposed challenge isn't over yet. -__-

>> No.4229895

>>4228470
This is absolutely amazing anon, you got a blog?

>> No.4229913
File: 560 KB, 1000x1000, Paige.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229913

>> No.4229915
File: 248 KB, 513x743, cyclopia.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4229915

>> No.4230168 [DELETED] 
File: 116 KB, 544x900, 879FF2FB-6E53-4911-9AF5-F7ADDB109D72.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230168

>> No.4230186

>>4227989
I need a blog for that cute squigly

>> No.4230193
File: 270 KB, 629x643, 1573572912992.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230193

>>4230168
her ribcage is misplaced(unless she has a large spine) along with the collarbone making her neck come way too far to her left arm and the boobs have different sizes and those ornaments are uhhnn not even?

>> No.4230195

>>4230193
why did they delete that drawing it was solid

>> No.4230197
File: 154 KB, 1280x720, 1568450535052.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230197

>>4230168

firezbro?? we are not gonna make it together, get your ass back here

>> No.4230214
File: 116 KB, 544x900, 1574877271625.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230214

>> No.4230223

>>4230214
based and coompilled

>> No.4230226

>>4230214
very muddy colors

>> No.4230227

>>4230214
Is this a study of a firez drawing?

>> No.4230228

>>4230226
See the background?
That is ambient color

Skin isn’t always overtly saturated peach tone you weeb

>> No.4230229

>>4230228
yikes

>> No.4230233

>>4230228
epic

>> No.4230236
File: 143 KB, 524x503, 1574356382992.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230236

>>4230228

>> No.4230238

>>4230228
There's a direct light in this image. The direct light overrides the ambient light. You can't really tell what color the light is because there's no harmony in the colors. They disagree with each other.

>> No.4230270

>>4230228
its so funny to think that people actually pay and eat up the garbage you put out, the massive bubble of ignorance you live in is going to burst one day and i hope its soon, for your own good

>> No.4230289

>>4230214
Her legs are fat and gross. Cute face though. Upper body isn't bad.

>> No.4230291

>>4230214
this nose doesn't work with the amount of detail that the eyes have

>> No.4230312

Will I be harrased if I post here?
I'm just about the same level of gains goblin
Maybe slightly worse

>> No.4230314

>>4230312
yes and no

>> No.4230322

>>4230312
Do it faggot.

>> No.4230324

>>4230312
this gen has become a complete dung heap, dont waste your time

>> No.4230326
File: 714 KB, 547x514, 1456829879876.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230326

>>4230312
you think your shit art is worth my time?

>> No.4230328
File: 27 KB, 550x226, color theory.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230328

>>4228431
do some rough studies of photos with lighting/color you like
reference pieces by other artists you enjoy

>> No.4230337

>>4228470
anon is about to get hired by riot
really though, this is supreme portfolio stuff (assuming you dont already work at a studio)

>>4228500
>>4228682
>>4228989
>>4229063
>>4229637
c o m f y

>>4229154
>construction's aesthetics looked neater than final product
when sketching, youre drawing alot looser. a lot of artists sacrifice this "looseness" when going into lineart/color
relax a little next time. easier said than done, but it'll come with practice- so long as youre aware of it

>>4229344
>>4229336
youre on the right track anons. keep drawing. draw LOTS

>>4229751
10/10 cute belly. the rim lighting looks slapped on as an afterthought though. it's really jarring

>>4230312
the only people i see harassed are the regulars who argue or ignore crit on a daily basis. worst-case scenario; you post and it gets ignored

>> No.4230378
File: 1.27 MB, 1310x846, recent comms.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230378

>>4227989
i loathe (almost fear) publicly advertising my commission prices

whenever i post up comm info on social media, the thought that no one will bite doesn't bother me too much. a little bit, but not alot.

i harbor an intense fear that some anon will take notice and relentlessly bully me for being unable to sell:
>cheap commissions: my art is so unappealing that it's not even worth pocket change
or
>expensive commissions: how could i have thought my art was worth even half this number, now everyone thinks im a pompous asshole

just kill me

>> No.4230383
File: 2.66 MB, 2400x1820, slash.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230383

>>4229713
Anon give your eyes more form and structure they are not just flat things they are round objects.

>> No.4230385

>>4230378
Is that your art? It's pretty cute.Blog?

>> No.4230396

>>4230385
name is literally in the picture

>> No.4230399

>>4230396
Look, we're not about to invest more time than needed looking at your fucking picture either post your goddamn blog and stop being a snide little bitch for not simply posting your blog or don't bother because you're a prick.

>> No.4230411

>>4230396
jsock?
usock?

i cant find it

>> No.4230425

>>4230270
Cryingwojakwithamask.jpg

>> No.4230427

>>4230385
https://twitter.com/professorSugoi

>>4230399
>>4230396
play nice children

>> No.4230439
File: 546 KB, 750x818, 9EDE7184-519C-4EB7-855A-89E6BB3F6BDF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230439

Am I subconsciously stealing this design from somewhere? It looks really familiar but I can’t put my finger on it

>> No.4230443

>>4230337
Just want to let you know I greatly appreciate posts like this, anon.

>> No.4230446

>>4230427
how was i supposed to work that out based on that signature
no hating but maybe you are losing potential clients this way
just slap a link to twitter onto the image, i don't care i just want to see your art

>> No.4230449
File: 452 KB, 828x1114, 1557857640147.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230449

>>4230439
siam and needler from SH homecoming maybe

>> No.4230459

>>4230449
Ohh that looks about right, I was thinking silent hill vibes too

>> No.4230487
File: 106 KB, 484x540, Sem Título-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230487

>> No.4230530
File: 28 KB, 568x641, goober.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230530

for you.

>> No.4230549

>>4230378
Why do you care about what some random faggot has to say?

>> No.4230567

>>4229871
ah sorry anon, don't use IG. I'm primarily here and twitter, for now

If you're interested: @art_mellon

>> No.4230572
File: 739 KB, 1200x900, Fialni Toradel Character Sheet Expressions.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230572

>> No.4230581

>>4230312
yes, now post it

>> No.4230621 [DELETED] 
File: 712 KB, 750x878, 8A2CB9A9-F0B5-40D5-ADD6-36D5B586C845.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230621

>>4230581
Ok

>> No.4230663

>>4230621
oh you

>> No.4230669

>>4229856
https://twitter.com/pokinha

>>4230337
yeah and i wasn't sure if the image even needed a rim light at all

>> No.4230682
File: 168 KB, 1000x707, hh 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230682

couldnt find the nsfw thread

>> No.4230685

>>4230682
holy based i love this

>> No.4230699

>>4230682
Thanks i don't like it

>> No.4230726

>>4230682
great taste

>> No.4230727

>>4230214
bro, wtf is this. fuckin long neck and fucked shoulders, man chest, fucked arm, and sausage legs.

>> No.4230800
File: 1.08 MB, 1024x1188, thiddude.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230800

>>4228431
i tried to do something different with the third one. i think it looks like shit :( maybe its too busy.

>> No.4230803

>>4230682

>>4230801

>> No.4230808

>>4230186
>>4228522

>> No.4230812

>>4230800
The earlier attempts look better with their cleaner shading, but that's fine - now that you've tried it, you've learned what not to do. That's important to figure out too.

>> No.4230867
File: 2.75 MB, 3024x4032, IMG_20191127_113623.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230867

>> No.4230873

>>4230867
>pencil in frame
GARBAGE

>> No.4230897
File: 242 KB, 1024x1188, thiddudeflat2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230897

>>4230800
take 2

>> No.4230898

>>4230530
Blog?

>> No.4230963

>>4230682
good feelz!

>> No.4230978
File: 63 KB, 500x569, goater.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230978

>> No.4230980

>>4230898
ketteii on IG

>> No.4230997
File: 333 KB, 1337x1964, AC449D3E-D333-42B7-A03A-5120394ABDE4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230997

>>4230978
>>4230530
Love these

>> No.4230998
File: 196 KB, 1235x1931, AC97B599-2B74-4EAB-AFCE-6B7C30D805BD.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4230998

>> No.4231013

>>4230487
>Titties can not be this big, scientifically
>Yet they are

>> No.4231054
File: 407 KB, 1000x1250, cute.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231054

Alright so the obvious what's good what's good what's bad but beyond that does anyone have any advice on implementing ambient light.
I see this on a lot of anime art with like this desaturated blue/purple lighting but on things like hair I try and implement this on my own but don't quite understand It. any help?

>> No.4231067

>>4231054
I use overlay + sneak in some colors on to the main color using soft blend brush.

>> No.4231110

>>4229528
>>4229529
>>4229614
kysves

>> No.4231132

>>4228996
are you one of those girls that draws characters that look like yourself AAAAAAAAAAAAAA I NEED A THICC SAD QT GF

>> No.4231136

>>4229529
Thats fucking nasty looking.

>> No.4231138

>>4230270
???

>> No.4231155

>>4229529
AY DIOS MIO LIBRANOS DE ESTE MAL

>> No.4231258
File: 578 KB, 1306x1085, baddies.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231258

Trying to come up with some villians, any ideas would be appreciated. They are all supposed to have some vague insect inspiration, I know worms aren't insects

>> No.4231283
File: 70 KB, 695x813, aaaaa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231283

ok how is this now

>> No.4231316
File: 133 KB, 480x385, 98EADD70-1B16-48C5-9C33-4257185B75CC.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231316

>>4231283
Nice tits.

>> No.4231404
File: 249 KB, 976x846, CLIPStudioPaint_8OKYFNkvd4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231404

>> No.4231435
File: 290 KB, 1280x1556, dad7.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231435

>> No.4231493
File: 660 KB, 942x1078, coomlering.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231493

>>4227989
trying to learn coomlering with the iradukai color practice images there's only 2 with tits where can I get more tits and ass to coomler

>> No.4231501

>>4231493
very cute but I would work on the nipple placement.

>> No.4231502

>>4231501
I don't know how to place them

>> No.4231524
File: 316 KB, 900x761, boiiuni.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231524

unicorn boii

>> No.4231563
File: 157 KB, 760x897, jvmvm.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231563

>> No.4231576

>>4231563
Damn is he an actual giant

>> No.4231577

>>4231576
It's his hat retard

>> No.4231580

>>4231577
No way

>> No.4231587

>>4230997
Thanks lambrey

>> No.4231687
File: 254 KB, 980x569, doodles_191127.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231687

>> No.4231688

>>4231524
Something is very wrong with his ribs and chest. When your arms are over your head, your ribs and chest move. This looks so strange.

>> No.4231804

>>4231524
>>4231688
Oh I just realized the problem. The chest on your sketch is going under the arm and connecting to the back. It's supposed to stretch up over the front of the shoulder. Your characters chest is wrapping under his armpit.

>> No.4231817
File: 152 KB, 1200x848, 2019NOV27_uncle_benard.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231817

>> No.4231834

>>4231283
You're trying to recreate Norasuko's faces too hard, stop it, it's his weakest point

>> No.4231844

>>4231493
wow fuck I found reference and absolutely no nipple would show at all with that much cleavage that's not fair

>> No.4231861
File: 271 KB, 975x708, Trabalhos-em-progresso2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231861

>> No.4231866

>>4231861
be my qt thicc sad gf AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>> No.4231891
File: 36 KB, 350x362, come on boy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231891

>>4231861

>> No.4231933
File: 114 KB, 949x823, dgsgdsgs.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231933

>>4231834
i changed

>> No.4231938

>>4231933
cute face, but everything else is fucked to hell. Study more anatomy

>> No.4231942

>>4231938
ehh ok this is always such a punch in the gut

>> No.4231950

>>4231942
Anon you’re on the right track! Don’t give up <3

>> No.4231956
File: 401 KB, 1061x890, 1F1DB55F-9B1A-465A-B46C-8A7B3576E362.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4231956

>> No.4231968

>>4231493
dead eyes

>> No.4232037
File: 246 KB, 954x1200, jude.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232037

I wish clean art didn't take me so ungodly long

>> No.4232047
File: 797 KB, 4724x4724, chunlrsr.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232047

How can i make this look more appeling?
Also any tips for inking ?

>> No.4232052

>>4231956
beautiful. blog?

>> No.4232055

>>4232037
blog?

>> No.4232070

>>4232055
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>> No.4232154
File: 84 KB, 1280x720, maxresdefault.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232154

>> No.4232185
File: 30 KB, 580x609, idk.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232185

speaking of jaws.

>> No.4232192
File: 129 KB, 1080x920, IMG_20191114_122114_733.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232192

>>4232037
Nicely done tho. I gave up clean art ages ago

>> No.4232199

>>4232047
street fighter guy, this picture was supposed to be for you but i didn't link it correctly.
>>4232154

>> No.4232229

>>4232199
I kinda see it but i dont know how to correct it
a little help please

>> No.4232250
File: 5 KB, 276x183, images.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232250

>>4232229
draw a few mouths, genius.

>> No.4232265

>>4228027
Gays deserve the death penalty

>> No.4232267

>>4231956
Is there rape?

>> No.4232268

>>4232265
and yet you're the biggest faggot in the thread

>> No.4232272
File: 468 KB, 1000x1294, temp-smaller.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232272

the values didn't come out like I wanted

>> No.4232289
File: 245 KB, 1024x835, duane2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232289

>> No.4232350
File: 2.56 MB, 2591x2591, 157498998104222.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232350

>>4232229
Not that anon, but here. Moved the mouth to the right, re-drew the cheek/chin, moved the head forward.

>> No.4232358
File: 353 KB, 1080x1414, 43_ScyllaPrincess1_R.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4232358

>> No.4232653

>>4231861
Odd nipple size and placement, makes it look like she had plastic surgery.

>> No.4233184
File: 164 KB, 536x709, Miara Toradel Half Shot.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233184

>> No.4233222
File: 569 KB, 1000x989, sun.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233222

I have an idea for icons/emoji or something kinda like this. I rendered two in Procreate, maybe it would be more practical if I switched to some vector software

>> No.4233234 [DELETED] 
File: 290 KB, 1500x711, Stickers.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233234

Feedback would be appreciated.

>> No.4233239

>>4232272
I have a feeling this could look really well if you got rid of all the black lines.

>> No.4233242
File: 553 KB, 1600x1067, Stickers.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233242

>>4233234

Shit. That picture looks jaggy. This one's better. Fucking Captchas.

>> No.4233250

>>4233234
>>4233242
I think this thread is better suited for you. >>4229823

>> No.4233282

>>4233250

Your feedback is shit, dude. At least elaborate and convince me that you're not baiting.

>> No.4233293
File: 429 KB, 1675x873, Trabalhos-em-progresso2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233293

>> No.4233299

>>4233293
these tits are completely asexual unless you have a hyperfake fetish

>> No.4233301

>>4233293
Is she dead or is it a doll, shit is creepy af

>> No.4233306

>>4233299
oh, pipi not hard then
>>4233301
she is contemplating

>> No.4233339

>>4233282
No, go there retard. Your art is shit, but slightly better than 50% of /ic/.

>> No.4233345

>>4233282
Get some self awareness, beginner.

>> No.4233359
File: 538 KB, 1015x860, smug.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233359

started this for shit and giggles, should i keep going?
i have no idea what the fuck im doing, never painted like this

>> No.4233388

>>4232037
I am preferring to paint a whole picture lineless and then draw the clean lines over it to sketch and ink and color the normal way.

It's taking me ages as well, 8 to 9 hours of work.

>> No.4233514
File: 944 KB, 2300x2300, tengu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233514

Thoughts?

>> No.4233515

>>4233282
Your art is trash. Elaboration enough for you, shitter?

>> No.4233525
File: 43 KB, 500x500, 1573342969466.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233525

>>4233345
>>4233515
>>4233250
based

>> No.4233630

>>4230530
>>4230997
who do you guys copy? what artists inspired you? i'm really interested in seeing more of this

>> No.4233636

>>4233359
How long did it take?

>> No.4233637

>>4233514
tengu like little boys so there's that

>> No.4233645

>>4233515
>>4233345

Fucking hell. Stay useless.

>> No.4233658

>>4233636
3 hours so far, why?

>> No.4233787
File: 75 KB, 500x672, d2585e65507a1e3500a152e1d74c5ba7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4233787

>>4232350
you fixed the immediate problem but its still a very unattractive style. frankly it looks like a bootleg dollar store version of anime. what is that ear and those eyebrows? i cant fap to this. why would anyone make eyes that shape. its like explaining aesthetics to an alien. do you not know a cute animu girl when you see one?

>> No.4233788

>>4233787
>It's bad because it's not moe anime
Never change, /alt/

>> No.4234134
File: 242 KB, 1122x432, Isabel Expressions WIP.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234134

Which expressions work so far? Which ones need to be redone?

>> No.4234141

>>4233293
i like it, keep it up!

>> No.4234183
File: 65 KB, 1002x1200, 2019-11-30.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234183

>>4227213

>> No.4234187

>>4234183
i like it but you should have made a fanart of an anime character from this and change the phone hand to do sth else and post it on social media with proper hastags
at least that's what I would do

>> No.4234191

>>4234183
It's nice and all but who the fuck holds their phone against their face like that lmao

>> No.4234193

>>4234187
I would do that next time.
>>4234191
Yeah lol I should have given that pose more thought.

>> No.4234292
File: 656 KB, 676x962, 72B2AAD6-C675-4857-AF53-2B88C0D8305A.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234292

Have to make an illustrated book for my assignment in college, crossed out the writing since I’m a bit embarrassed by it aha ;; but this is going to be the first page, I wish I had more time to make this good but :’) I don’t

>> No.4234308
File: 13 KB, 316x239, ad_boom (1).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234308

>>4233788
honestly i prefer retro style but if this dude is so aloof he draws like that, i thought i should have him aim low.

>> No.4234319
File: 26 KB, 745x678, self.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234319

portrait

>> No.4234320
File: 198 KB, 671x772, popp.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234320

I'm liking the fisher brush

>> No.4234323

>>4232272
What's the thing on his eyes?

>> No.4234328

>>4233345
>>4233339
>>4233250
>not a single constructive criticism.
The absolute state of /ic/
Ignore trolls, anon.

>> No.4234349

>>4234328
>Thinking /ic/ is a place for critiques in the first place.

>> No.4234361
File: 31 KB, 500x500, 1424303_1399187520320647_1678739744_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234361

So I drew this a few years ago in middle school and I was looking through old pics. *Cringe*

>> No.4234362
File: 517 KB, 787x787, flame princess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234362

Redrew it after 6 years and hecc

>> No.4234397
File: 38 KB, 840x630, be8.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234397

>>4234320
give me the fisher brush

>> No.4234400

>>4233293
>patreon watermark
If your not here for actual critiques then fuck off

>> No.4234406

>>4234349

>/ic/ Artwork/Coomers.

>> No.4234425

>>4234397
Better hurry up and get Clip Studio Paint while it's still on sale then

>> No.4234430

>>4234425
what's the brush called
also blog?

>> No.4234445

>>4234430
It's the rough india ink brush and i don't got a blog but thanks for asking.

>> No.4234451

>>4233293
Anon I really like this but as a piece of side information, big breasts don’t touch together at all unless they’re being pushed together by something.

>> No.4234467
File: 11 KB, 645x773, 1546380926346.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234467

>>4234362
>This is 6 years of progress

>> No.4234472

>>4234406
>>4234349
>Based

>> No.4234491
File: 2.70 MB, 2619x2058, somebodytolove_edited.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234491

Tired of running.
Portrait of a wholesome couple WIP.

>> No.4234494
File: 258 KB, 390x390, joker but smol.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234494

>>4234467
This was from maybe 2 weeks ago. Not a cartoon, but probably the progress you're disappointed to not see.

>> No.4234525

>>4234494
The nose bridge looks really flat.

>> No.4234561

>>4234292
While it's not impossible to hold a pencil like that, it doesn't strike me as very natural or secure when I try out the pose. If I hold a pencil loosly because I'm not using it/try to stretch out my hand while doing it I naturally hold it between my index and middle finger.
Then again, different people hold pencils differently, so if you actually based than on the way you would hold it, forget I said anything.

>> No.4234638

>>4234561
Everything you said is completely legitimate, anon, I placed it like that because I forgot she was supposed to be holding a pencil :’) the way it’s positioned also causes an awkward tangent because of the shading on her skirt, so it is a genuine flaw you pointed out. I really do have to start drawing natural poses whether or not they scare me away. Thanks for pointing it out

>> No.4234645 [DELETED] 
File: 77 KB, 1089x966, Untitled75678465785687.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234645

doodel

>> No.4234840
File: 508 KB, 598x831, apple tree wip.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234840

>>4234292
Back to working on this, I actually like it so far. Having fun designing the jewelry

>> No.4234885
File: 176 KB, 1117x1368, IMG_20191130_183505_086.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234885

>> No.4234892
File: 290 KB, 700x840, New Canvas 19.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234892

Just did some sketches. What a waste of time. I wish I wouldn't be such a shitty artist and actually could produce pictures frequently, instead of just doing such shit.

>> No.4234898

>>4234840
Woah that face is looking creepy as fuck. More shadows, and fix the shape of her cranium it looks like someone busted her skull in

>> No.4234904

>>4234885
Youre so uncreative

>> No.4234905

>>4234898
Will do, thanks for the feedback anon

>> No.4234911

>>4234885
You’re so skilled, I wish your pieces were even a little more visually interesting

>> No.4234913
File: 69 KB, 1080x1080, IMG_20191130_213550_381.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234913

>> No.4234946

>>4231404
I Love how you used all the pokemon's features in your design. Maybe work on the hands they don't fit the rest of the body.

>> No.4234957
File: 1.58 MB, 1131x1600, 1566636241733.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4234957

I did a Maka, thoughts?

>>4230378
>he can't put a price tag on his own commissions
HAHAHAHA FAGGOT RETARD HOW DO YOU EVEN TIE YOUR SHOES FUCKING BABY POOBRAIN

There, now go and price yourself so I (and EVERYONE on /ic/) can stop laughing our guts out about you 24/7 like we're doing at the moment.

>> No.4235040

>>4234957
eyes are missing that empty dull maka charm

>> No.4235057

>>4234957
These are the people shitposting at you in /alt/

>> No.4235064

>>4235057
Majority of the people shitposting you in alt are shit. Isn't that a given already? Amount of samefagging retards in here are cancerous. That's why I tend to stay away from this place now.

>> No.4235094

>>4229063
cool

>> No.4235102

>>4228493
hey this is wonderful

>> No.4235118
File: 488 KB, 637x574, Soul_Eater_Episode_9_-_Black_Star_Excalibur_Face.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4235118

>>4235094
>>4235102
At least make it less obvious

>> No.4235138

New thread
>>4235131

>> No.4235139

>>4235118
less obvious? huh?

>> No.4235205

>>4235118

god this board is cancer

>> No.4235377

>>4234134
All of them have the other eye fucked up except top right. Inconsistent lip volume. And your style is generic Disney/Anime aping bullshit. Observe life more, get better taste, reacquire your soul.

>> No.4235407

>>4232358
Great concept bro, now finish it.
>>4232289
Study cartoon proportions more, yours look very unappealing. Unironically recommend Teen Titans Go as good 3 heads designs
>>4232272
Very cool background, ruined by shit character art.
>>4231817
Soul
>>4231687
Orc bro should beat your head in
>>4231435
Fucking normies with their nike shit *sigh* that le qt mask shit hope your iq gets even lower with that oxygen deficiency.
>>4231258
I like the worm one.
>>4230998
Good colours, are you going for a flat look? use textures more especially in the gradients
>>4230897
P pretty sure you don't do bright oversaturated multicoloured iris in this style

I POST HERE TO CRIT, SO I CRIT, THATS WHAT I DO. you see a lonely post? CRIT IT YOU FUCK

>> No.4235452
File: 934 KB, 1700x1600, Reimu.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4235452

So how'd I fuck up.

>> No.4235861

>>4235452
i like it, especially the brush you used for clouds
the wrists and the hands look weird, wrists should be thinner and palm is too big and the rendering for reimu's tummy looks off

>> No.4235983
File: 2.93 MB, 3000x3000, New Canvas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4235983

--__--

>> No.4236056
File: 846 KB, 1117x618, 1566834337635.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
4236056

>>4235040
I never realized almost everyone on Soul Eater has no eye glint, woah.

>>4235057
>>4235064
Low IQ.

>> No.4236292

>>4235407
Are you polish by any chance?