/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.4211606]

I don't know how to draw this correctly

[Anonymous No.4211610]

>>4211606
It's just a box

[Anonymous No.4211615]

>>4211610
Not OP But do you know how to construct a face using a box?

[Anonymous No.4211619]

I actually see a lot of master paintings that attempt this angle spectacularly fuck it up. Perfect otherwise.

How do you do it anons?

[Anonymous No.4211662]

[Anonymous No.4211674]

Hi, I'm not quite /beg/.

[Anonymous No.4211680]

>>4211615
Not the face, but I always use boxes for heads

[Anonymous No.4211682]

>>4211662
That's terrible

[Anonymous No.4211696]

lol he baleeted it
It wasn't a bad tutorial though even if he fucked up the end result

[Anonymous No.4211749]

Aaahhhhhhh

i really tried :(

[Anonymous No.4211774]

>>4211682
Did you shame someone into deleting his post ?

[Anonymous No.4211776]

>>4211749
This,
This is kyut

[Anonymous No.4211831]

did i capture her feminine look?

[Anonymous No.4211859]

>>4211774
sorry i chickened out heres the post i deleted

[Anonymous No.4211896]

>>4211859
Eh I think it's good and right.

[Anonymous No.4211899]

>>4211749
this isn't worth 600$ per month

[Anonymous No.4211919]

[Anonymous No.4211925]

>>4211899
ahhh how did you recognize me :(

[Anonymous No.4211928]

[Anonymous No.4211986]

>tfw you know you fucked up your drawing but you just keepdigging and digging.

[Anonymous No.4212005]

>>4211774
now i feel bad lmao

[Anonymous No.4212009]

[Anonymous No.4212120]

>>4212005
There's no crying in baseball, there's no feeling bad on /ic/

[Anonymous No.4212156]

>>4211674
This looks really good.

[Anonymous No.4212188]

crit me

[Anonymous No.4212190]

>>4212188
Nose way too big

[Anonymous No.4212193]

>>4212188
it isn't accurate but it looks good, only flaws are inaccuracies to the original which i personally think makes it better cause otherwise we have a r-word case

[Anonymous No.4212195]

>>4212188
>>4212188

[Anonymous No.4212198]

>>4212188
how’d you render like that?

[Anonymous No.4212199]

>>4211615
Bridgman taught me and I find it more practical than starting with a circle.

[Anonymous No.4212200]

>>4212188

did you planned for the nose to be the focal point?

[Anonymous No.4212202]

>>4212190
oof, now I see it. I think Im biased because of my own large nose.
>>4212193
thanks
>>4212195
kek
>>4212198
Im using corel painter with the twinky brush from the manga pack. Its basically hard square with opacity and a canvas texture.

[Anonymous No.4212203]

>>4212188
Looks a bit like abi shapiro

[Anonymous No.4212204]

>>4212195
Kek

[Anonymous No.4212208]

>>4212156
Hey thank you. I didn't dare to be satisfied with it.

[Anonymous No.4212217]

>>4211674
some little crits, but it is pretty good:

the mouth is facing in slighty different direction than the nose, and the space on the left of it is too big (you probably felt it too, because it seem you reworked the area.)

you are missing a concavity on your right eye, the one on the left under the eye (and you could push the one above too). I think adding it would help sell the structure of both the eye and nose.

in term of value, the eyes are way too dark and distract from the light from behind contrast of the original picture. also your hair look flat, sadly I have no real solution for that, because I usually suffer from the same issue ...

[Anonymous No.4212222]

>>4212202
>oof, now I see it. I think Im biased because of my own large nose.

for what it's worth, my anatomies teacher used to say that we tend to work our own feature into portrait, and that you have to work hard on auto-portrait to get rid of it.

[Anonymous No.4212236]

also realism is boring but needed to understanding stuff

[Anonymous No.4212237]

>>4212203
wow...

[Anonymous No.4212269]

>>4212217
Thanks for the criticism, it helps.

I just took a new look at it, before I read your post and noticed problems with the mouth and chin (should be slightly moved left) and the eye's shadow (extended under and to the left, darkened just above the top eyelash).

As for values, I agree, but I want to mention that they look better on paper.
And I suck at drawing hair.

[Anonymous No.4212314]

i tried

[Anonymous No.4212343]

it looked okay-is at the drawing phase, but trying to put some value really revealed how much of a turd I was polishing.

[Anonymous No.4212357]

>>4212236
>realism is boring
cope. getting realism and likeness in a portrait is difficult. It's easier to say its boring and never try than to actually apply yourself, struggle and learn.

[Anonymous No.4212427]

>>4212357
Nah, realism is boring dumbass. You see people everyday, unless you’re some neet fuck.

[Anonymous No.4212451]

>>4212427
>t. bad at drawing

[Anonymous No.4212460]

really struggled with this one. I tried using steve huston "sail boat shape" method.

[Anonymous No.4212461]

>>4212427
Lol

[Anonymous No.4212470]

>>4212460
The face isn't bad but you totally bombed the neck. She's tilting her head back not sticking it forward. Look at the distance from the edge of the chin to the edge of the neck in the ref.

[Anonymous No.4212471]

lost the likeness halfway through and decided to just roll with it

[Anonymous No.4212472]

>>4211986
Based. Work on your values.

[Anonymous No.4212473]

>>4212471
this looks better than the photo
blog??

[Anonymous No.4212474]

>>4212471
Great values, damn.

[Anonymous No.4212477]

>>4211749
Derpy, but she is cute in a way

[Anonymous No.4212481]

>>4212460
>>4212470

shit amazing how I didn't see something that obvious.

[Anonymous No.4212483]

>>4211859
this is good but I might add to measure for correct proportions that always helps.

[Anonymous No.4212484]

>>4211859
Fuck, thanks

[Anonymous No.4212490]

>>4212473
>>4212474
thanks!
https://www.instagram.com/iggytheautoreiv

[Anonymous No.4212494]

>>4211859
what brush bro

[Anonymous No.4212524]

>>4212471
you got the values right, nice

[Anonymous No.4212529]

>>4212494
it was either „rough inking” or „soft pencil” from kyle’s set (i only use these two and cant remember which one used here im sorry)

[Anonymous No.4212568]

My /beg/ attempt.

[Anonymous No.4212726]

>>4212471
Teach me how to value senpai

[Anonymous No.4212811]

gave it a try

[Anonymous No.4212820]

>>4212427
>realism boring
Jesus fucking christ

[Anonymous No.4212846]

>>4211606
Literally just draw what you see, anon. Read Dodson.

[Anonymous No.4212850]

>>4212427
Your scope of realism is waaaay too limited, If you can draw things realistically, you can utilize that skill however you like, it doesn't have to be portrait drawings ad nauseam.

[Anonymous No.4212857]

>>4212236
>>4212357
>>4212427
>>4212820
>>4212850

Samefriend? In my quality thread? It's more likely than you think

[Anonymous No.4212870]

I tried but fucked it up.

[Anonymous No.4212871]

>>4212811
v good. I don't know if I could get the anatomy constructive anatomy correct with this one. Any suggestions? I have been using the Loomis method for 2 years now.

[Anonymous No.4212872]

>>4212427
Cope levels up.

[Anonymous No.4212876]

>>4212870
looks better from afar

[Anonymous No.4212914]

I should probably have drawn bigger.

[Anonymous No.4212981]

>>4212876
no it doesn't

[Anonymous No.4212983]

>>4212981
yes, it does. are you blind?

[Anonymous No.4212986]

/beg/ here.

Any crits?

[Anonymous No.4212991]

>>4212876
That's because you can't see all the hideous mistakes and the way you've made her look like a strangled chicken, while you're 100 yards away??

[Anonymous No.4213008]

[Anonymous No.4213010]

>>4212811
it would look so much better without all that brush extravaganza

[Anonymous No.4213011]

>>4213008
amazing

[Anonymous No.4213038]

>>4212991
the linework blends together from afar and looks more believable

[Anonymous No.4213040]

>>4212471
I'm proud of you auto, you almost make me cry

[Anonymous No.4213050]

>>4211674
did you use construction or just copied the outlines?

[Anonymous No.4213052]

>>4211859
this is nice, fuck that guy that made you delete this post

[Anonymous No.4213058]

>>4212471
>Tfw will never be this good

[Anonymous No.4213064]

>>4212343
second try. feel it's heaps better, yet I think I could have pushed things more.

[Anonymous No.4213105]

>>4213064
It seems like she's protruding her neck upwards instead of tilting her head.

[Anonymous No.4213116]

>>4213050
Just copied the outlines, while trying to mind the positive and negative shapes and positions and distances.
I began with the forehead, then the lines of the face and hair, the bridge of the nose, then I placed the eye and started positioning and correcting the rest in relation to it.

[Anonymous No.4213119]

>>4213116
I used the shadows as elements to be positioned at the same stage as the rest too.

[Anonymous No.4213204]

Gave it a go, but didn't get it right, I need to measure better, but what is new? Loved the reference image tho.

[Anonymous No.4213208]

>>4213204
thats fkn good, blog?

[Anonymous No.4213291]

Tried my best, but the lips were so hard...

[Anonymous No.4213348]

>>4213204

fuck. how do i render like this?

[Anonymous No.4213354]

>>4212871
There are many methods to construct the base of your drawing. While Loomis is great for breaking into art, as you go on i'd suggest experimenting and try making your own method.
Why do you think there are so many methods out there? People are different, what something works very well for someone maybe for others won't work the same way. Try finding your own thing, what makes it easier for you to see the form. Experiment, doodle over pictures see what works best for you and what not.

[Anonymous No.4213379]

>>4211606
neither do i

[Anonymous No.4213388]

>>4213291
Extremely cute, blog?

[Anonymous No.4213420]

>>4213379
That poor gal.

[Anonymous No.4213457]

>>4213008
Got a blog or something? Fucking amazing

[Anonymous No.4213463]

Help

[Anonymous No.4213485]

>>4213379
dont laught, this is the world thru OP eyes

[Anonymous No.4213520]

>>4213463
use blocks of color/shades and not just lines

[Anonymous No.4213546]

>>4211606

[Anonymous No.4213628]

>>4211606
Didn't expect it looking as good in the end considering I almost never draw

[Anonymous No.4213654]

>>4213105
ah fuck your right, guess I will have to do it a third time.

[Anonymous No.4213702]

>>4213008
this is beautiful, the only thing is, i think you should use more soft edges around the nose and lips

[Anonymous No.4213760]

>>4211859
>>4212471
>>4213008
>>4213204
>>4213291
blog?

[Anonymous No.4213817]

>>4211606
tried to use my oil painting sight sizing but ended up using lasso tool to fix her eye :/

[Anonymous No.4213823]

>>4212236
>that doodle
>that post
almost made me choke on a tortilla chip

[Anonymous No.4213835]

>>4213817
https://www.twitch.tv/videos/509750081

recorded most of it on twitch if anyone wants to watch me noodling around at it.

[Anonymous No.4213877]

Laaaazyyy sketch.

[Anonymous No.4213902]

>>4213008

>>4213457
>>4213760
vudex.tumblr
vudex.artstation

I don't post often, thou

[Anonymous No.4213904]

>>4213760
>>4212490

[Anonymous No.4213915]

1 month /beg/, can someone give me some criticism/tell me where I'm failing

[Anonymous No.4213919]

This one's a toughie

[Anonymous No.4213920]

>>4213915
when you draw a face the natural thing to do is to apply the sort of distances between features that would exist if you were looking at it straight on. However when the head tilts foreshortening comes into play and these distances can vary drastically. In summary lol nigga just look at the photo that mouths way too low.

[Anonymous No.4213928]

>>4213920
Lol didn't even notice, thanks for the feedback bro

[Anonymous No.4213932]

/beg/ here, I tried. Her lips were very difficult.

[Anonymous No.4213935]

I tried as Well. I made her look older unintentionally

[Anonymous No.4213939]

>>4213928
np anon. The best thing to is draw it again when you run into a tricky one like this. I'll probably give this another fresh shot once i finish my first study.

[Anonymous No.4214027]

>>4213379

Picasso pls.

[Anonymous No.4214151]

>>4212726
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTYGWfiZnMA

ad at 8:15-8:45 you can zoom through

[Anonymous No.4214186]

>>4213919

blog?

[Anonymous No.4214199]

im a dude and i tried dude

[Anonymous No.4214291]

thanks for the reference OP, I hated drawing it

[Anonymous No.4214325]

>>4211606
ms paint try

[Anonymous No.4214567]

>>4212471

[Anonymous No.4214568]

[Anonymous No.4214595]

>>4212471
>>4212490
Please stop doing value stuff. It's evident by your blog that you have very little grasp on color, and it's something very common with people who develop the bad habit of overusing value.

Color is made of three elements: Value, Chroma, and Hue. Even a small change in any of these and it creates different edges and contrasts. Doing value-only is a lot easier because you only have to deal with the one dimension of variance, instead of the original three which are exponentially more complex. Problem is, people get into the habit of doing value-only stuff, which then makes them believe they are better than what they actually are. This delusion is broken when they attempt using color and realize their skill level is significantly lower than they thought, which then causes them to go back to doing value-only stuff in order to protect their internal ego resulting in a vicious cycle of ngmi.

You've done enough value. 90% of your blog is value. Now stop and never do value-only again unless you wanna suck at color forever.
(By the way, starting with value also counts in the value-only bad habit, so don't even think about it. Start straight with color.)

[Anonymous No.4214604]

>>4214595
>snibbity snab pyw crab

[Anonymous No.4214609]

>>4211606
I AM SO LONELY AND HORNY GODDAMMIT WHY CANT I GET A QT GF TO SIT FOR ME AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GODDAMMIT

[Anonymous No.4214620]

>>4214595
unironically life saving advice

[Anonymous No.4214624]

>>4214604
>offers solid advice with the logical reasoning behind it
>pyw crab
I didn't even say his stuff is bad. I recognized an area he's weak at and gave him a potential solution. But I guess if you want to brush it off, fell free to I guess... not my loss.

[Anonymous No.4214625]

>>4212529
Can you link me to kyle’s set?

[Anonymous No.4214631]

>>4214624
pyw tho

[Anonymous No.4214668]

>>4214631
Well no harm in it, I guess.
Here's a little study I did a couple months ago.

[Anonymous No.4214677]

>>4211859
Good post. Saved!

[Anonymous No.4214686]

>>4214595
Cringe

[Anonymous No.4214715]

>>4214595
Why, thank you! You can rest assured I'm on top of my weak points, anon. I appreciate your concern and you taking the time though! It's very kind of you.

[Anonymous No.4214720]

>>4214595
>to protect their internal ego resulting in a vicious cycle of ngmi.

I mean sure he may staying within his comfort zone of just doing value or b/w drawings but what does that have to do with making it. There are plenty of artist with careers that don't rely on color.

[Anonymous No.4214727]

Absolute /beg/ here. I made her look terminally ill.

Doing drawabox atm. Is proko next for drawing figures/heads?

[Anonymous No.4214729]

>>4214720
Just a hyperbolic way of saying they never actually get around to developing their color skills. Not literal ngmi desu.
>There are plenty of artist with careers that don't rely on color.
There most certainly are. I've seen many professional artists who suffer from this actually, where their colors are really subpar in comparison with the rest of their work. I just think it's a shame because you can really tell how much better it is when someone masters color. I don't even mean colorful paintings, but the mastery is apparent even with more muted tones like pic related.

[Anonymous No.4214730]

>>4214727

Marco Buccis portrait course helped me alot.

[Anonymous No.4214731]

>>4214730
'Understanding and Painting the Head' on his Skill Share page?

[Anonymous No.4214732]

>>4214731

Yep. That and learning the asaro head will make ur faces look less terminally ill

[Anonymous No.4214734]

>>4214732
Thanks a lot anon!

[Anonymous No.4214741]

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[Anonymous No.4214814]

I was gonna add values but said fuck it

[Anonymous No.4214819]

>>4214677
thank u
>>4213760
instagram.com/zuzannapx i post mainly doodles
>>4214625
sorry i cant post the link bc i get the spam error. google „kylebrush vk”, i saw someone uploaded a zip to vk. its called kylebrush ultimate pack by kyle webster. also i think its free for original photoshop now or something?..

[Anonymous No.4214835]

>>4211674
Nice, but don't be afraid to go darker with your values. Especially with her hair, jacket and inside her ears.

[Anonymous No.4214912]

cool photo, i really enjoy this angle with how the nose and chin look

[Anonymous No.4214919]

>>4212188
are you the anon who drew her own pussy?

[Anonymous No.4215037]

>>4214609
it's all right.
Just calm down, take a deep breath, step out of the circle.

[Anonymous No.4215056]

>>4214919
Nah. I have a dick.

[Anonymous No.4215169]

>>4214595
I was told that I shouldn't touch colors until I master values, because it's a lot easier to learn colors that way in general. In fact it was said that colors are all about value and the part about what color to choose is more of a stylistic choice rather than anything else.

[Anonymous No.4215170]

>>4214186
>>4189376

[Anonymous No.4215171]

>>4215056
ngmi

[Anonymous No.4215203]

>>4214819
Thanks! I was able to find it now.

[Anonymous No.4215219]

2hard2lazy

[Anonymous No.4215243]

>>4215169
this is absolutely correct, that guy has no idea what he's on about

[Anonymous No.4215363]

>>4215219
Give this a real try again or ngmi

[Anonymous No.4215420]

>>4215219
Initially this disgusted me but I think it looks pretty good upon a second look. The lines are confident the way you did the lower face is really interesting

[Anonymous No.4215436]

>>4215363
I dont plan on making it, I'm not aiming for anything but amusing myself
>>4215420
Thanks bruv, But I don't have "lines"; I draw at 600x600 in paint using the ink pen tool just clicking.

[Anonymous No.4215465]

>>4215436
>I'm not aiming for anything but amusing myself
Why don't you play a video game ?

[Anonymous No.4215476]

>>4215465
HAHAHHA what the fuck is this post trying to accomplish? Did you think at all before pressing submit?

[Anonymous No.4215496]

>>4215476
Yeah I thought a bit about your posts and you don't seem very amused.

[Anonymous No.4215509]

>>4215496
I'm really amused.
I was genuinely curious as to what your drive was to (seemingly) attempt to dissuade someone from having fun with art, its a very interesting angle.

Its our imperfections that make us beautiful anon..

[Anonymous No.4215532]

>>4215169
Yeah I know you were told that, doesn't make it true though.

> In fact it was said that colors are all about value and the part about what color to choose is more of a stylistic choice rather than anything else.
This is absolutely demonstratively wrong. Value is just one element of three that make up color. You can significantly alter an image by just changing Hue and Chroma without even touching value, like in pic related. If what you said was true, that wouldn't be possible. There's a reason we evolved to see color, and that is because variance in hue and chroma make different contrasts just like variance in value does. Learning to manipulate the relationships between the three elements is what we want, not ignore 2 of those primary elements and pretend the knowledge of them will just magically and naturally come once value is mastered.

Value is simply the lowest common denominator of an image. You can have something that's readable just by value alone, unlike hue and chroma. Am I saying you should never study value? No. Am I saying value isn't important? No. What I am saying is that relying on value as a crutch will never let you properly learn how to do color, which is it's own separate beast. It's also a funny coincidence that most of the best artists when it comes to color always just jump straight into it.

[Anonymous No.4215538]

>>4215509
I wasn't talking or thinking about your imperfections.

[Anonymous No.4215545]

>>4215532
I don't know man, all ateliers teach managing values first, color comes quite late. It is important and valuable but values are more important.

[Anonymous No.4215548]

>>4215532
i'm not even sure if you are trolling, or actually that ignorant, well done!

[Anonymous No.4215564]

>>4215545
There's nothing wrong with learning value separately. Whether it's better or not to start learning with value or straight with color is unclear and honestly irrelevant because it's not what I'm talking about in the first place. Since my first post, my gripe has always been with overusing value and relying on it as a crutch, like what I feel the anon I replied to was doing.

[Anonymous No.4215566]

>>4215532
So let me get this straight. The wisdom you're trying to pass dawn is
>babby's first color theory. Color has properties and they're all important
and
>avoid crutches people!

that about right?

[Anonymous No.4215578]

[Anonymous No.4215579]

>>4215532
pls wise anon link me to good tutorials/books/resources/shit about using color theory for digital painting i agree with you and i need to learn this (ive already been whining about it in a separate thread yesterday and im still looking). i understand what marco bucci is saying, i took notes and shit but when i actually try to paint everything looks muddy. id love to find something like an exercise where you have to paint objects and their shadows under various hues of lights and have the correct answer so i can check myself, i cannot find anything like that. i think someone posted an exercise like this a while ago but didnt respond with his prof's crit. half the board didnt know how to complete that exercise but still everyone keeps claiming color doesnt matter. help me anon

[Anonymous No.4215591]

>>4215578
>>4214814
>>4214727
>>4214199
>>4213915
>>4213064
>>4212914
>>4212870
>>4212343
>>4212314
>>4212009
>>4211928
>>4211919
>>4211749
>>4214291
https://darrigovalentin.github.io/

[Anonymous No.4215608]

>>4215579
The best exercise I've found to learning color is to look up an image or painting you like the colors of and do a study of it straight in color. After you're done, close the image and the study, and try to create an original piece of work with the same palette and color relations as from the image you studied. When you're doing the study, you can loosely color pick the image you're studying to check what the colors in the image are and how they relate to each other, but you can't color pick and then apply what you picked to your study, you have to select the colors manually from the wheel/slider/whatever you use.

The reason I like this exercise is because you have a frame of reference you can compare your final result to, that being the image you originally studied.

[Anonymous No.4215613]

>>4215608
thank you i have many pieces in my inspo folder i saved solely because of the amazing color/light relation so im gonna try this

[Anonymous No.4215645]

>>4215545
Value is learned first for a couple reasons, every color can be broken down into value so color becomes much easier to work with when you know how to place value properly. charcoal is much cheaper than paints for learning and you can do more within the same amount of time. Removing an extra fundamental, one that doesn’t matter until foundation is strong anyways, makes learning easier.

[Anonymous No.4216340]

She cute.

[Anonymous No.4216355]

>>4215591
Eh, close enough

[Darren No.4216375]

>>4213919
Saved

[Anonymous No.4216490]

>>4211859
>>4211606
Yet another /beg/ here, thanks for the tutorial. I'm going to take a real pass at the same image tomorrow. I think I might have actually learned something from doing this, it may be the first thing I've drawn that looks remotely human.

[Anonymous No.4216751]

>>4212236
lol

[Anonymous No.4216856]

>>4212199
Which specific book,and is bridge man good for beginners?

[Anonymous No.4217093]

too lazy to try this properly

[Anonymous No.4217231]

>>4214727
>>4214730
>>4215591
Started looking at Hustons vids while following along earlier today. Tried once more with some of that stuff in mind. Slight improvement?

[Anonymous No.4217340]

looks a bit wrong but here's my go at it

[Anonymous No.4217361]

>>4214631
>>4214668
well?
kek

[Anonymous No.4217364]

>>4217231
maybe this can help you anon

[Anonymous No.4217445]

>>4211610
lame

>>4212199
you can draw a box around anything - pretty lame

[Anonymous No.4217457]

>>4216856
its Bridgman's drawing from life. old, and pretty standard in a lot of art classes. you can definitely google a pdf of it easily. its mostly images, so if the pictures dont make that much sense to you you might benefit from finding a teacher type person to help

[kim sedol No.4217602]

>>4211606
is a good pracice ^^

remember to measure

[Anonymous No.4217607]

>>4217602
the absolute state of /ic/

[Anonymous No.4217729]

>>4217340
Saw from front page.

[Anonymous No.4217735]

>>4217602

fuck off to instagram

[Anonymous No.4217749]

my rendition

[Anonymous No.4217764]

>>4215591
how are you overlaying the two ? Are you just shopping it or is there an actual function on the site where you can overlay the cube over an image?

[Anonymous No.4217767]

>>4217602
retard faggot nigger

[Anonymous No.4217811]

am i /beg/?

[Anonymous No.4217869]

>>4217602
didnt know irakli nadar posted here

[Anonymous No.4217883]

>>4217364
not him but, how do you know which approach to take with a curve?

[Anonymous No.4217924]

>>4217883
Not the guy who made the redline but follow the contour of the form

[Anonymous No.4217949]

>>4217364
Good guide. Thanks for the help!

[Anonymous No.4217981]

i don't completely hate it, but i can see where i fucked up.

[Anonymous No.4218109]

>>4217749
Miss Parker !

[Anonymous No.4218131]

[Anonymous No.4218358]

>>4217764
oh no i just rotated the cube and zoomed in/out until it matched the perspective and then pasted it onto the photo and set some blending mode.

[Anonymous No.4218365]

>>4215591
That’s not even remotely accurate, just look at the brow ridge

[Anonymous No.4218368]

>>4211610
based

[Anonymous No.4218473]

>>4213915
Symbol drawing. The eyes don't look realistic. The proportions of the face don't match up much with the reference. Try to observe carefully and measure everything.

[Anonymous No.4218487]

>>4218365
rotate the box correctly then and give us the right version so we can learn

[Anonymous No.4218605]

>>4218487
It’s not a matter of “rotating the box”, the actual perspective is completely wrong. It’s like using a 5p cube and trying to overlay it over a 2p cube, it’s retarded.

[Anonymous No.4218676]

>>4218605
The only retarded thing here is you talking shit without posting any drawing, redline or anything that would back up your claim. As for now your opinion doesnt matter at all until you prove it with a picture
>inb4 i am right and youre a retarded faggot
cope

[Anonymous No.4218698]

>>4218676
Are you genuinely retarded? The brow ridge is a natural perspective landmark, if the angle doesn’t match the angle between two parallel points of the box at the same height, then the perspectives obviously don’t match. This is basic perspective.
I’m assuming you’re the retard who posted that in the first place, and you didn’t even bother drawing a box, you just found a random app with a box in a random perspective and overlayed it like a complete retard.

[Anonymous No.4218718]

>>4217602
17/10

blog?

[Anonymous No.4218726]

>>4218698
draw the box over the photo and post it or shut up

[Anonymous No.4218729]

>>4218726
>doesn’t draw a box himself
>d-d-draw the box o-or I’m right!
kys

[Anonymous No.4218735]

>>4218718
anon that's called photoshop, not drawing or painting

[Anonymous No.4218736]

>>4218735
I don’t know what it’s called, but I know talent when I see it

[Anonymous No.4218742]

>>4218736
Cant tell if trolling or brainlet

[Anonymous No.4218744]

>>4218742
pyw crab

[Anonymous No.4218748]

>>4218744
I’m >>4213817

[Anonymous No.4218753]

>>4218736
lol

[Anonymous No.4218756]

>>4218729
im literally the dude that posted the goddamned box in the first place you idiot
still waiting for you to draw it correctly but i guess you can only spew out theoretical shit with no drawings to prove it

[Anonymous No.4218775]

>>4218756
>I’m the guy that pasted a shitty app screenshot in a different perspective without actually drawing anything

[Anonymous No.4218782]

>>4218775
>im the guy that has been arguing about perspective for last 20 minutes but still hasnt posted anything to prove his point
btw the fact that you dont recognize the "app" tells me youre a newfag

[Anonymous No.4218791]

>>4218782
That app was made 2 weeks ago, faggot.

[Anonymous No.4218796]

>>4218782
Watch out, we have a 2019 oldfag over here >>4189192

[Anonymous No.4218808]

Ill give it a shot

[Anonymous No.4218826]

Try 1
Didn't like the shading so I redid it and....

[Anonymous No.4218828]

>>4218826
Try 2
I made it fucking worse, giraffe neck fuck

[Anonymous No.4218854]

>>4211606
Accidentally made her look up.

[Anonymous No.4218950]

[Anonymous No.4218993]

[Anonymous No.4219071]

[Anonymous No.4219076]

>>4218993
You gotta measure more carefully, the proportions are way off. Also, where are are her eyebrows?

[Anonymous No.4219160]

>>4218950
artsy !

[Anonymous No.4219185]

>>4218950
Based crazy brush anon. Absolutely great taste.

[Anonymous No.4219237]

>>4211928
Shamon! Yee hee!

[Anonymous No.4219240]

>>4219076
I didn’t measure at all desu, I just took the ref as a rough guideline. The far eye I knew was fucked, but I went with it. Eyebrows are gay btw

[Anonymous No.4219252]

>>4219240
Rereading this, it sounds like mad coping, I just meant I knew it was fucked, not the far eye is the only problem

[Anonymous No.4219334]

90 mins, gouache.

[Anonymous No.4219435]

can anyone give a crit?

[Anonymous No.4219581]

>>4219435
>vudex.tumblr
neck and jawline are a bit off. Also the depth of the eyes looks flat; the apex of the curvature of the top eyelid peaks too late moving left-to-right, making it seem like the iris is deformed; also the iris is slightly too large. The tracheal canal is cylindrical, not concave or bifurcated like your rendering makes it look. Where the upper lip meets the right nostril you have a line that is supposed to indicate the presence of a secondary light source, but instead looks like a scar or a pouch/fold where soft tissue is flowing over it down towards the upper lip. This should be lowered and made more subtle like in the photo. Also work on eye alignment by imagining the head rotating in 3d space and determining specifically where the right eye should be, first without using the reference, basic forms, and then cleaning it up with the reference. Work on proportion of head to neck.

[Anonymous No.4219583]

>>4218993
impressive rendering and tilt skills, but the proportions are really off.

[Anonymous No.4220613]

>>4217231
>>4217364
Started watching Bucci's head tutorials. They're great, but it'll take a lot of practice for this perspective to become easier. (and lines etc. are shit too ofc. Gonna stay like that for quite a while longer)

[Anonymous No.4221224]

>>4219435
>Values are great
>Anatomy took a hut but with right guidance you will do way better
desu I can't draw as good as you rn, you will do better with little practice

[Anonymous No.4221629]

>>4214668
looks like her face has slid down her head. I would reevaluate your proportions. The individual elements are nice though

[Anonymous No.4221700]

You guys are ridiculous. It's literally in the courses that people share here.

Steve Huston (?) Beginner Head Drawing - https://mega.nz/#F!glxFwLaa!cdBL0K-MOuZbtQYoRR4cBQ
Steve Huston Advanced Head Drawing - https://mega.nz/#F!WsVy1ChK!17B0OTg-UBnPB8mwXy1U8Q

[Anonymous No.4221722]

>>4221700
cute girl you posted

[Anonymous No.4221749]

>>4212870
>If Aeris lived to be 40

[Anonymous No.4223191]

[Anonymous No.4223948]

>>4221700
Hair is boring and pencil values get fucked up in photographs.

[Anonymous No.4223962]

>>4223948
haha giant adams apple haha

[Anonymous No.4224041]

>>4223191
pretty good. just fix that area.

[Anonymous No.4224626]

tried a few different ways.

[Anonymous No.4224630]

Tried a few different ways.

[Anonymous No.4224646]

[Anonymous No.4224677]

>>4215591
wromg fov and angle anon

[Anonymous No.4224679]

>>4224677
post the correct version the app is here https://darrigovalentin.github.io/

[Anonymous No.4224837]

Shouldn't even have tried, the /beg/ that I am.

[Anonymous No.4224871]

>>4211606
so easy

[Anonymous No.4224897]

>>4211606
half assing

[Anonymous No.4224962]

>>4224871
but you didn't even get a likeness?

[Anonymous No.4224994]

>>4224962
right on cue brutha

[Anonymous No.4225003]

>>4224962
I think their general symbol/image of what they see as an average faced got overlayed on top of it, anon probably looks at himself in the mirror a lot and he unconsciously "wrapped" the girl in his own facial characteristics. I do this a lot, I always draw the nose too long and big because I have a huge long fucking nose.

[Anonymous No.4225006]

>>4225003
yup, you got me..i wrapped my 300 pound inuit male face onto the model
upsie

[Anonymous No.4225337]

>>4211606

[Anonymous No.4225369]

>>4221700

[Anonymous No.4225397]

>>4214609
Based

[Anonymous No.4225470]

pls rate bros with crit

[Anonymous No.4226444]

>>4211606

[Anonymous No.4226505]

Trying to get back into drawing. Been away from the tablet for nearly a year.

Her facial proportions are off, her chin/jawline is too big, and her neck is too short. My linework has improved but there's still too much chicken scratch. Overall, not bad for my first drawing in a long time.

[Anonymous No.4227203]

>>4214727
>>4214730
>>4217231
>>4217364
>>4220613
Did one with values. It's still bad, but my previous ones look obviously worse.

Have been watching Bucci and Huston's head videos while practicing. They are pretty damn great.

[Anonymous No.4227252]

>>4227203
I think this is a great progress already anon keep it up

[Anonymous No.4227376]

Redid my previous attempt >>422463 ,
focusing more on measurements. Crit appreciated.

[Anonymous No.4227381]

Noticed my proportions were messed up in my first attempts, >>4224630
so i gave it another go, focusing more on measurements early on. Crit appreciated.

[Anonymous No.4227384]

Noticed my proportions were messed up in my first attempts, >>4224630 (You)
so i gave it another go, focusing more on measurements early on. Crit appreciated.

[Anonymous No.4227532]

>>4211606

But don't succeed.

[Anonymous No.4227535]

>>4211606

but don't succeed

[Anonymous No.4227553]

>>4219435
I'd recommend learning edge control and looking into tangent control.

Tangent control is just getting your perspective right, a tangent is just an edge. Your values aren't professional, but they're not beginner either you're intermediate. Recommend getting your perspective to intermediate level too.

Remember.
First comes perspective, then value, then colour. Work structurally, go back to line drawings and nail them, overlay your copy with the source material a couple times during your study to make sure you're on track.

I learned so much about tangents and perspective by overlaying my work and no its not cheating.

Keep going anon.
I believe in you.

[Anonymous No.4227702]

>>4211606
you do it like dis

[Anonymous No.4227705]

maybe ill import it in krita or something and finish it.

[Anonymous No.4228015]

>>4211606

[Anonymous No.4228149]

Always draw zoomed in so much that the end result is tiny and low quality
It’s a really bad habit