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Previous thread: >>4089439

>What is /ALT/?
>If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>>Rules & Guidelines
>(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
>To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
>------
>>Community Resources
>Hitokaku Index
>>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>List of active livestreams
>>Use twitch #art
>>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
>FellowBro's Book Collection
>>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial & Reference Collection
>>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>>http://iradukai.com/
>References
>>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4095080
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I’m drawing fanart for this Instagram artist cause one of their pieces really inspired me.

>> No.4095094

Sup fags

>> No.4095097

>>4095094
Greetings faggot

>> No.4095098

>>4095094
Not much, what about you?

>> No.4095103

i can't believe im in the OP image

>> No.4095104

>>4095103
what is this meme i dont get it, its shit

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>>4095104
You're so new that you didn't even see the OP of the previous thread?

>> No.4095109

>>4095104
It's some retarded porn thread drama

>> No.4095122

>>4095104
>>4095109
I thought it was pretty funny...

>> No.4095161
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4095161

robomeido
>>4094061
@oshikoru, am movin
>>4094161
>Hey guise look it's my Shinobu Monogatari OC no stealing
wrong but also nihil sub sole novum
>>4093392
>>4094100
ah, the duality of man

>> No.4095171
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4095171

Might as well post again since last thread's over

>>4095161
Cute, I like the pose a lot. Something seems odd about the trapezius/shoulder/neck anatomy, the connections are rather odd looking to me, but take that with a grain of salt

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>> No.4095173

>>4095161
Oh you're the scissors guy. Wow, you've gotten so much better since I've last seen you. I guess all that drawing has really paid off for you, meanwhile I'm still the same level. I remember how often you would post comparisons and the leaps you made in a week, month, three months and such. What drives you?

>> No.4095178

>>4095080
Drawing in ballpoint pen is so much fun, I love it

>> No.4095179
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4095179

>>4095178
Forgot pic

>> No.4095181

>>4095179
Drawing in ballpoint is a good time. Your hatching came out pretty well.

>> No.4095184

>>4095181
Thanks anon :] do you have any ballpoint drawings to post?

>> No.4095191
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4095191

>>4095184
I do, actually. I do most of my doodles and a lot of my sketching in ballpoint, and then fix it and add colors digitally. Here's the unedited version of something from last thread, my proportions are very bad in traditional

>> No.4095196

>>4095191
Ohh you’re that anon! Your stuff is great, I love it

>> No.4095199

>>4095122
it was, probably one of the funniest thing since a while

>> No.4095208

>>4095171
yeah the acromion landmark's lost under frills and the clavicle's ass, perspective's pure bullshit anyway it just needs to look pretty when the colours go on
btw you're mixing overhead and side lighting from the same light source all over; the face and eyes are going full smash logo
>>4095173
>What drives you?
righteous, burning contempt for /ic/ baddies

>> No.4095209

>>4095171
Yeah, you're right about the lighting, I'll try and fix that up
>the face and eyes are going full smash logo
Could you please explain?

>>4095196
Thanks, anon. I like your stuff too

>> No.4095211

>>4095209
meant to quote >>4095208

>> No.4095214

i miss giant loli fag

>> No.4095217

>>4095214
He posted a while back actually, I remember when I was still lurking I’d see him and get inspired for some reason. Despite the fact I wasn’t into Lolis or Giantess’

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>>4095209
>Could you please explain?
the terminators are, like
nevermind

>> No.4095257
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>> No.4095262

>>4095257
Nice

>> No.4095264
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>>4095257
I love this so much

I drew a merchant towergirl, though I messed up her right arm.

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>>4095104
God i hate newfags

>> No.4095277

>>4095272
Not everyone frequents porn threads, cumbrain.

>> No.4095282

>>4095277
You don't need to browse the whole thread to get the joke, redditor fag
woof woof faget

>> No.4095287

Why do these threads always have to turn into "reeee porn."
I just want to look at other people's art and get feedback

>> No.4095293

>>4095277
Fucking retard newfag, getting into the OP have been THE tradition of /alt/
What the fuck are you talking about?
I miss Chico

>> No.4095298

>>4095287
It's just one reddit animator sperging. Just ignore him

>> No.4095314

>>4095298
Since your panties are already into a twist over this, I'm just gonna say it's amazing to witness you faggots so unremittingly asshurt over an animator.

>> No.4095315
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4095315

Character stuff

>> No.4095326

>>4095314
Man, if you want people to stop getting angry at you stop going out of your way to yell about porn at every opprotunity. I don't even like porn art either, and I just ignore posts like that. Is it really so hard?

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4095335

some stuff I did on garyc.me/sketch

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>>4095335

>> No.4095339
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>>4095338

>> No.4095342

>>4095220
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA.

>> No.4095349
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4095349

Revised the refs of this thing I posted in the last thread. Much better than last time, even if I took some weird artistic liberties with the arm muscles.

>> No.4095351

>>4095349
>>>/beg/

>> No.4095362

>>4095326
I was not the one complaining nor the one who called you cumbrains.

If you're that upset over the animator, or being called a cumbrain, start reflecting in where you at in life.

None of us want the porn thread drama. Its there to keep that shit for a good fucking reason.

>> No.4095371

>>4095362
>None of us want the porn thread drama
Then don't start one

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4095373

Repost since last thread is kill

>> No.4095377

>>4095371
Keep it there.

>> No.4095382

>>4095371
>>4095362
>>4095326
>>4095314
Shut the fuck up already, goddamn.

>> No.4095386

>>4095382
Neither of them, but mind showing us what you are working on right now?

>> No.4095389

woof woof ;-*

>> No.4095397
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4095397

>>4093784
this was supposed to just be a redraw but I ended up getting a bit carried away with your "Creed" character

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>> No.4095400

>>4095398
Kyle this is bad, what the fuck are you doing?

>> No.4095401

Eh just post whatever stylized shit you did without calling each other cumfart or something

>>4095373
looks nice so far, unless it's already done?

>> No.4095402

>>4095401
>Eh just post whatever stylized shit you did without calling each other cumfart or something
Oh no no you're not suppose to act rationally here

>> No.4095405

>>4095398
What a mess of a pose.

>> No.4095408

>>4095400
looks like firez
he was always shit idk why he gets so much praise

>> No.4095412

>>4095408
Because he makes porn

>> No.4095415
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4095415

>>4095408
How I can be as shit as firez? I wish most of /ic/ was as shit as firez, average would be much better

>> No.4095416
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4095416

Firez don't let these faggots push you around they're nobodies you're better than them m8 don't delete your work.

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>>4095397
>someone drawing art of my dude
wowie zowie this is neat, thanks anon!

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4095422

>>4095416
Do you consider this a good drawing?

>> No.4095424

>>4095416
Come on dude, Firez need to work on his skin and faces in general.
It does not look good.
But i said my piece, he won't improve anyway because i said it for years now and he still won't fix it

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4095427

>>4095339
Powerful

>> No.4095430

>>4095422
Why won't you provide some constructive feedback instead of flinging shit for once like a goddamn ape?
>>4095424
Can you at least be a little more specific for him?

>> No.4095431

>>4095422
pyw anon

>> No.4095432

>>4095424
Just visited their gallery. I like the faces, skin looks better than most of what is posted here

post your "piece" anon

>> No.4095436

>>4095430
>>4095431
Answer the question, retards.

>> No.4095437

>>4095436
Yes.

>> No.4095442

>>4095437
Confirmed retard. Good to know

>> No.4095446

>>4095442
desu if his drawing inflicts this much asspain he must be doing something right.

>> No.4095447

>>4095436
He paint the skin too muddy, the face stuck betweeb the uncanny because he doesn't decide which way to take, anime or realistic.
He could learn something from Sakimichan, even though she have wonky anatomy from time to time and crabs like to shit on her, she nailed down the semi-real style.

>> No.4095449

>>4095447
It all makes sense now, these insufferable faggots are afraid that Firez will eventually figure out that semi realistic anime esque style that gets normies flocking with the Patreonbucks so they shit at him at any given opportunity.

>> No.4095463

>>4095397
Now this is good.
Blog?

>> No.4095473
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4095473

>>4095171
More or less done, crit before I go over it again would be appreciated

>> No.4095495

>>4095264
not too shabby, I like it. But kinda manly chin no offense.

>>4095415
He has good understanding of anatomy and poses and such, but Gosh idk the faces are just mehh

>>4095473
The face.. Is literally the fucking same cept now his mouth looks off.

>>4095335
AHHH

>>4095422
Yeah his faces need work, or more rather a readjustment. They're just not appealing. He seriously needs to rediscover a newfound way of drawing his faces in such a way that they don't act as a bonerkiller.

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>> No.4095497

>>4095496
Lord have mercy.

>> No.4095498

>>4095495
Could you explain to me what is off about the face? If you're the same anon from earlier I have honestly no idea what >>4095220 was supposed to mean, and would greatly appreciate further elaboration

>> No.4095500

>>4095498
No I'm not that anon, quite frankly I prefer the previous version over this second version of yours.

>>4095496
And gosh that is fucking horrible.

>> No.4095501

>>4095415
firez you fukken virgin
breasts don't work like that

>> No.4095508

>>4095497
>>4095500

Care to explain? I'd like to learn while being shat on, not just be shat on.

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>>4095496
What I don't understand is how you go from drawing like pic related to that. I mean are you just really bad at drawing a face/body in front view? My best advice to you would be to just stop drawing things like that and draw things more like in pic related. Hell it seems this was drawn by a completely different person.

>> No.4095519
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4095519

hello my fellow cunnyseur

>> No.4095522

>>4095519
Pawoo?

>> No.4095528

>>4095512
How am I going to learn if I'm not drawing the stuff I'm bad at?

>> No.4095551
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4095551

>>4095528
Yeah don't listen to him, that is legit the worse advice conceivable. Lmao if someone doesn't know how to draw hands you don't tell them to never learn how to and just hid them like what.

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>>4095495
>manly chin
Yeah I’m really inspired by the way this artist does faces so I’m kind of trying to follow some of their stylistic choices, though I was unsuccessful lol. Thanks anyway

>> No.4095671 [DELETED] 

>>4095512
You're the most creabiest crab I seen in a while
>you aren't good at that don't practice that.
You fuckin, sneaky crab

>> No.4095678 [DELETED] 

>>4094009
>I'll take the bait and post work
Also, anything wrong with it, I'm shitting bricks shaped gundams, those fuckers are so complicated.

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>>4094009 #
>I'll take the bait and post work
Also, anything wrong with it, I'm shitting bricks shaped gundams, those fuckers are so complicated.

>> No.4095682

>>4095264
Is she a boy?

>> No.4095704

>>4095682
She’s not but I see why it looks that way lol

>> No.4095708

>>4095519
blog? I love the how this is colored

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>>4095473
>>4095498
also yeah the mouth is really low which gives him a long philtrum as if he had a receding chin which is unattractive but that's your choice

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4095841

Turned out better than I expected, though I ruined the perspective on the shoulder and I still don't think the overall foreshortening is right.

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Turned out better than I expected, though I ruined the perspective on the shoulder and I still don't think the overall foreshortening is right.

>> No.4095866

>>4095853
>Is this sexually arousing
I know it’s just a joke but not really, the detachment between the legs and hips kinda kill it.

>> No.4095879

>>4095866
>not wanting to stick your dick in her pneumatics
literally homosexual

>> No.4095893

>>4095879
No thank you, I have no interest in getting castrated.

>> No.4095915

>>4095853
>Turned out better than I expected
Then you need to put your expectations higher. Show us the vanishing points and horizon anon.

>> No.4095929

>>4095915
my expectation was that it would be a complete failure

And no, it's intentionally just on a white background.

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>>4095929
>my expectation was that it would be a complete failure
I said show, not plot; you're saying you tried to get away with eyeballing foreshortening in worm's eye perspective? Why are you posting art you aren't putting any effort into? "Is this sexually arousing", jesus christ.

>> No.4095951

>>4095945
>Cumbrain
Christ, it's just a featureless robot ass. Does drawing anything less than puritan make you a cumbrain now?

>> No.4095959

>>4095945
lol chill out

>> No.4095971

>>4095551
Dumbass, look at what happened to Sycra.

>> No.4095981
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4095981

>>4095496
>tfw

>> No.4095993

>>4095512
Did he just copy and paste her mouth as the nipples kek

>> No.4096009
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4096009

Update on the lad and mad lad. It's a little tricky to see as ref lines but I gave mad lad a massively ripped version of his shirt.

>> No.4096010

>>4096009
I love your enthusiasm, you may not be there yet in terms of skill or appeal, but you keep trying which is something I admire about you.

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>>4095945

>> No.4096040

>>4095349
it has soul

>> No.4096045

>>4095496
why the nipples got innies?

>> No.4096098
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4096098

Robot

>> No.4096130
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>>4096098
Batmobile

>> No.4096134

>>4096098
This is crazy cool, good job

>> No.4096204
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4096204

Something I doodled when I got high for the first time. Definitely loosened me up while drawing

>> No.4096220

>>4096204
DUDE

>> No.4096230

>>4096204
Imagine taking this many lines to draw fucking flat tables in perspective

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>>4096230
Cry me a table u big baby, it obviously wasn’t my focus since I was cross faded

>> No.4096298

>>4096289
the perspective on that one isn't right either. you proved nothing. the absolute state.

>> No.4096309

>>4096298
you are crabbing so hard, you probably couldn't lie straight on a bed. redline it, enlighten me, saying its durr huur wrong, doesn't validate your point unless you explain

>> No.4096320

>>4096289
>>4096309
i thought weed lmao mellowed people down

>> No.4096325
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4096325

Body done, I'll get through the background and call it done.
She's a bit skewed but I just want to draw monsters now

>>4092843
Thanks a ton anon, that was really helpful. Guess I lost the ribcage somewhere which threw off a bunch of stuff
>>4093233
monkeigh bro

>> No.4096327

>>4096325
Arms are out of proportion, you gave her Gorilla arms. The foreshortening of her right limb does not read well, I suggest using box forms to help better describe the foreshortening. Her breasts are not behaving as they should when the arms are raised, there are pectoral muscles connected to the humerus which pulls all major forms of the chest including the breasts and nipples and you need to redo it putting emphasis on the pull especially where the pecs originate from.

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4096329

>>4096289
here you go spaz

>> No.4096333

>>4096329
thanks, it looks like shit

>> No.4096335

>>4096333
It was shit to begin with

>> No.4096337

>>4096329
the cross and cloth look quite nice

>> No.4096342
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4096342

So much fussing in this thread~

>> No.4096345

>>4096342
We're all adults merely pretending to be retarded. Come back after you're an adult, in the mead time underage and b&

>> No.4096347

>>4096329
I get the size of hands and feet but why extend the cloth stupid long like that and beefing up the horns?

>> No.4096361

>>4096345
Will you wish me a happy birthday when I do

>> No.4096363

>>4096361
Fuck off.

>> No.4096366

>>4096363
Seethe

>> No.4096374

>>4096347
>why extend the cloth stupid long like that and beefing up the horns?
everything needs to follow the same perspective rules. Things need to come forward and recede in the same perspective, and that doesn't just apply to the background it applies to the characters too.

>> No.4096379

>>4096374
The horns still aren't in perspective though, you just made them bigger

>> No.4096397

>>4096379
Goddamn you're a brainlet. He just finished telling you the basic mechanics of perspective and you still don't get it.

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4096400

does this look okay so far?

>> No.4096402

>>4096400
Not my taste but it’s pretty neat. Hand looks way off though

>> No.4096404

>>4096397
I know how perspective works, anon. And those scribbles aren't it.. >>4096329 is not a good redline, and does not show OP his perspective mistakes no matter how you cut it

>> No.4096405

>>4096397
but there's a difference between size and portion you dull earlobe. perspective isnt the only factor here.

>> No.4096412

>>4096400
I feel you may want to use some rounder shapes for the hand, to match the shape style you have for the rest of the character. I think you could also simplify the shapes of the hair down a little more considering how hyper-simple the rest of the body is

>> No.4096445

>>4096397
this is why I don't redline

>> No.4096450

>>4096397
>redliner explains mistake
>"I like my version better"
>redliner kills themselves

every time

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Sab Ling is especially long lived for a goblin. They say forest has him under a spell or perhaps simply defending the trees gives him a reason to live.

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>>4096402
Thank you, i did not see how ugly her hand was until you told me, I tried to make it less ugly.
>>4096412
I understand and will try with the hair but the hand is supposed to be a robo hand so I am still not sure how i will do that.

>> No.4096498

>>4096495
>the hand is supposed to be a robo hand
I see. I feel like the difference in shape language would work in that case

>> No.4096499

>>4096495
Looks much better anon :) let’s hope the porn crusaders don’t come for you

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>>4095416
Don’t worry I will not, not in general.... maybe I will just quit /ic/. I try to give advice outside my wips to avoid the crabs but even so there is still shitposting especially in these specific threads. sometimes I wonder if making a discord of my own would work, something minimal just focused on wips, critiques and self promotion but then I remember that discord sucks a lot of time.

I truly feel lost in that regards. I wish I didn’t have to do my work in a vacuum :/

>> No.4096617

>>4095519
honk :)

>> No.4096627

>>4096592
That's not how breast works you turbo virgin

>> No.4096640
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4096640

dumb comic for an art contest thing.

>> No.4096655

>>4096627
redline a fix then you turbo ngmi

>> No.4096664

>>4096655
This. it seems ok, the body is doing a spin and it has appeal even if it's not 100% loomis approved

>> No.4096666

>>4096329
lmfao

>> No.4096672

>>4096342
Better shut your mouth or you're gonna get a little break from this board, if you know what I mean.

>> No.4096693

>>4096592
You've come a long way from where you first started fren, it would be depressing seeing you leave /ic/ for good but there's a perfectly good reason why we see others who are capable of making it out there come and go. You have a good work ethic and the talent to continue your pursed interests, don't let these dorks demotivate you. I just hope you'll come back once in a while and post something just to watch the salt flow.

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Are the arms too short?

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Are the arms too short?

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Using what little hair they have as a wick, fire goblins aggressively hurl explosives at friend and foe alike.

>> No.4096801

>>4095349
learn to draw before trying to design, let alone animate

>> No.4096805

>>4096801
I keep being told that it's /beg/ whenever I post a wip of it but, at the risk of sounding egotistical, I don't see what's particularly wrong with it. Not to say it's perfect, far from it, but I honestly can't see what I'm doing wrong. I'm assuming the anatomy of the mad version of the kid is off somehow? If so fair enough, I just want to know what I'm doing wrong and improve.

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>>4096805
Well, you didn't even get past chicken scratching. Read the sticky and maybe then ask for guidance in /beg/.

>> No.4096828

>>4096822
But they're reference lines? The final lines I do are never that scratchy. Should I try to have a more "solid" idea of how the lines should look specifically when reffing (e.g. make rough lines convey something close to what the final line weight will look like)? I tend to be scratchy with my roughs in general.

>> No.4096830

>>4095257
What you do use to animate?

>> No.4096886

What defines alternative art from what anyone else is drawing?

>> No.4096887

>>4096886
>What is /ALT/?
>If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.

>> No.4096888

>>4096886
Not this shit again. Fuck off.

>> No.4096889

>>4096886
Here it basically just means cartoons and weebshit

>> No.4096890

>>4096886
muh style

>> No.4096906

>>4096828
Stop trying to justify your chicken scratching and learn to do lines properly. Think about the line you're gonna do. No good artist chicken scratches.

>> No.4096908
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>>4096906
Why does it matter if they're reference lines I'm going to draw over for the final art? That makes no sense. At any rate, here's what the actual final lines will look like (still doing shading here and there among some extra stuff), Like I said, the scratching's just for the roughs/reference.

>> No.4096918

>>4096400
hot

>> No.4096920

>>4096499
>porn crusaders
wats that?

>> No.4096944

>>4096830
I use Clip Studio Paint EX.

>> No.4096953
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>>4096908
Got some shading down, really proud of this so far.

>> No.4096970

>>4096953
You're hopeless.

>> No.4096982

>>4096970
What's wrong with it now? The lines aren't scratchy like the roughs were, unless I'm missing something here. I genuinely would like to know.

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>>4096953
dude!! this is totally epic!! whens ur show coming out and on what streaming service! your gnna be the next buch heartman!

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>> No.4096997

>>4096984
Does it really look *that* hartman-like? Or too "modern" looking?

(at least no one's awkwardly smiling with their teeth like in every single one of his shows lol)

>> No.4097014

>>4096709
Anatomy overall is slightly wonky. Head is too big and tall, shoulders are a little thin, torso is very small, arms a bit short, feet are lumpy (though I'm not sure if you were going for that). It's not bad, just a lot of small things not adding up.

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>>4096953
I did a little redline and wrote some notes because I fee like your work has a lot of issues that other anons are getting at but not really explicitly explaining. Take these all with a grain of salt, but I hope this helps illuminate some of the issues with the piece. Also sorry that my redraw looks like a discount Timmy Turner.
I think the biggest thing that would help you is to actively study cartoon artists and the way they construct and design their characters. Doing some figure studies and especially gesture studies would also be beneficial, as all cartoons are based in life.

>> No.4097031

>>4097024
Thanks anon! Most of this seems way too obvious for me to not have seen earlier, but it's great to get some actual advice on how to improve my work.

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>>4095473
you have to be very careful with how you light/portray the nose in cute styles like this. simple styles are all about being very selective with details and how you implicate them. in some ways it's better to think of them more like graphic design than classical realism. when it comes to casting shadows, it's not enough to be accurate; you have to make deliberate choices on what's most appealing even if it means sacrificing accuracy. this is the same reason why anime tends to look so fucked up in 3d unless there's a whole bunch of under the surface trickery b/c anime faces break most of the rules of raycasting & perspective as they'd apply to a tangible object. this is why style is harder than realism imo. it's not enough to know the rules, you also have to know the right ways to break them.
i know you're not going for an anime style but these are a good point of reference imo for seeing how other people dealt with these kinds of problems
>https://yiff.party/patreon_data/5214273/16190997/Nose_EN.jpg
>https://yiff.party/patreon_data/5214273/19205685/Practice_20180602_Lighting.png


sorry is this is too rambly or doesn't make sense. i've spent a lot of time thinking about this kind of stuff but idk if it's worded well.

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>>4096985
bom demais essa ai comparada com as tuas outras pinturas

>> No.4097048

>>4095519
Reminds me of Marco Bucci

>> No.4097050

>>4097036
Thanks for sharing that anon. Yeah, I realized sometime earlier that the facial lighting was looking rather weird because of the shape of the shadows and decided to try simplifying it down some more. I kinda don't want to completely cheat 3D forms, but I'm realizing finding a way to paint highly abstracted facial features is very difficult and I feel it might be worth it to learn harder into the graphic aspects.
Thanks a lot for that second ref, I was actually looking for it last night but couldn't find it.

>> No.4097053

>>4096664
>>4096655
I'd be happy to redline but I don't like assisting firez so no.

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>>4096592
extremely subtle paint over. im still beg tier, and im not sure if these types of things are intentional or not, but the way you make bottom lips look fat as fuck is kinda irritating. i may have changed the expression and the feel to biting her lip, but please just consider it. if you dont want to, that's fine too

>> No.4097077

>>4097053
You don’t even draw faggit

>> No.4097078

>>4097077
Okay firez

>> No.4097084

>>4097078
“Everyone who calls me a troll is firez”

Ok troll

>> No.4097088

>>4097084
Okay then anon

>> No.4097098

>>4097084
>>4097088
Why don't both of you just post work or end this silly argument

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>>4095076
some render practice on a boo doodle.
Stopped short, felt like i was polishing a turd.

>> No.4097124

>>4097121
Cute!

>> No.4097127

>>4096592
This is a place for growth, not a place to post shit and get compliment. You can literally go anywhere else for that.
People give you shit because when they give you crits and advices you're too stubborn to fix it.
Overrall staying here won't do you any good because even if crits being given you won't use it.
Just stop posting here and go to other social media to grow your fanbase.

>> No.4097138
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My cousin posed for me

>> No.4097141

>>4097138
nice foot

>> No.4097211

>>4096640
Got a blog?

>> No.4097241

>>4097138
you must have a pretty open relationship with your cousin
or does she just like being naked?

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>>4096672

>> No.4097285

>>4096672
kek thanks for spilling my drink on my cintiq asshole

>> No.4097318

I was watching an artist to understand how they do their wild color and I realized that the answer seems to be that they are actually drawing with randomness in the color of every brush stroke. After researching it, firealpaca has this in color/hue jitter, but the randomness happens throughout the brush stroke, which is absolutely not what I want. I want every stroke to stay the same color until I let go. I thought about looking into clip studio paint, but it seems like it doesn't even have what firealpaca has. Is it possible to achieve this in these programs with a script somehow, or what?

>> No.4097529

>>4097138
Hot. Did you fuck her afterwards?

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what went wrong

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>> No.4097573

>>4095076
Also is it poor form to post the same drawing in both /alt/ and beg?
>>4097530
Post the construction you did

>> No.4097586
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Feels like I'm maybe sorta starting to hone in on a style.

>>4097530

What's bothering you about it specifically?

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Is this what a chibi is supposed to look like?

>>4097586
Thanks for the neck stretch.
Might be a bit early for that, style shows mostly in your finished works. Cool stuff, draw a little larger.

>>4096709
Just a little. The elbow should be able to hide in your waist and the extended arm should reach halfway her thigh. The rest is okay.

Try to draw a plane (a simple rectangle in perspective) for her to stand on, then draw through her feet to plant them on the ground. Otherwise she's floating in the void.

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An update before I head off to lunch.

>> No.4097722

>>4097530
>what went wrong
go ask at >>>/beg/

>> No.4097761

>>4097707
nice rendering!

>> No.4097765
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how's this?

>> No.4097791

>>4097765
bad

>> No.4097805

>>4096592
You might want to add some more grip onto that hand, imo it looks like she's just half-assing putting her coat on - and don't forget the rope to clip the coat too.

And her shoulder to elbow needs to shuffle a bit to the left and squish the left boob in some more but like not too much.

Maybe rotate her body from the boobs up because she's looking like she broke her back putting on that coat.

Also her face is a little weird, what is she meant to be feeling, because she kind of looks a little awkward.

Where is her eyepatch goggle btw? :(

>> No.4097807

>>4097765
>>>/beg/

>> No.4097822
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I think these are uploading rotated because I've been shooting them in portrait mode. Let's test something.

>>4097681

Thanks, drawing larger is definitely something I'm trying to work on, along with being more decisive with lines. I was watching a video recently of an ex-disney animator who draws exclusively with unsharpened lead in a holder, which I might give a shot because seems like a good way to force myself to draw big.

>> No.4097833
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4097833

Went back and redid Zach, he looks much less stiff now. Kinda iffy about the design of the hair, tho. Thanks to the anon who gave me advice on him.

>> No.4097867

>>4097833
oh my fucking god

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>>4097833

>> No.4097888

>>4097867
>>4097877
What now? Does he look too "modern cartoon" somehow? Legitimately would like some further critique.

>> No.4097944

>>4097888
Most of /ic/ doesn’t like exaggerated western styles. I don’t see the massive issue in what you drew, though it’s not my taste

>> No.4097949

>>4097944
Very ironic thing to mention considering this is a stylization thread lol, but that makes sense and fair nuff, I just thought I was still doing something wrong in terms of structure, anatomy etc.

>> No.4097983
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Drew boobs

>> No.4097987

>>4097983
She needs to see a doctor

>> No.4097989

>>4097987
Jokes on you she is the doctor

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>>4097989
but do doctors have other doctors?

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>>4097983
Did she just fucking staple Shrek’s legs onto her stumps?

>> No.4098032
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>>4098009
XTRA THICC

>> No.4098034

>>4098032
I think you're a good artist who's drawing badly on purpose.

>> No.4098036

>>4098034
God I wish

>> No.4098037

>>4098036
Well, the face is on point. And the shading and linework is so beautiful. It's like you're breaking her bones on purpose.

>> No.4098039

>>4097833
You're a retard. Simply because you're aiming for a cartoon style doesn't mean it needs to be devoid of actual anatomy. The bulked up version looks entirely flat. Learn how to think in shapes.

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Fun doodle of crab ocs

>> No.4098059

>>4098039
This prolly seems way too obvious but how is he flat specifically?

>> No.4098066

>>4098032
THAT TORSO HAS A FUCKING FACE ON IT

>> No.4098067

>>4098059
If you were to rotate that green shit it would make no sense.

>> No.4098084

>>4098067
Green? You mean the shading?

>> No.4098113

>>4098084
fuck you

>> No.4098121

>>4098113
No I was seriously asking, cus I didn't use green for that, it was more of a deep yellow like his regular skin. I think I see what you're trying to get at but I'd appreciate some more indepth critique. Aside from that, I'm gonna revisit the hulk kid and make it less flat.

>> No.4098151

>>4097036
Based. Good post. Thanks for sharing those images.

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>>4097833
it really doesnt matter what direction you go in stylistically, you still need to learn how to draw

>> No.4098155

>>4097949
>anatomy
how about the fact that his deltoid looks like the teeth of a saw?

>> No.4098162
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4098162

I gave this monster design a vagina

>> No.4098164

>>4098162
Hot.

>> No.4098167

>>4098154
Aside from the different style of yours (which is really good I must say), I don't see what else is wrong with my drawing of the kid. Is it proportions? Anatomy? I would really like to know what's wrong here. I will say tho the way I did his resting hand seems too blobby.

>> No.4098176
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p. much done

>> No.4098184

>>4098167
Why do you come here if you're just going to be against any critique?

>> No.4098185
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some paintings from this week 1/2

>> No.4098186
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>>4098185
2/2

>> No.4098219

>>4098184
I'm not against critique at all, but I'm barely getting any. 95% of responses to the wips I post are "this is bad, learn to draw," and sure there's stuff I still need to learn, absolutely. But as I said, almost EVERY SINGLE TIME I post my work I just get really vague responses like that. WHAT AM I DOING WRONG?? It's not enough to just say that something's poorly drawn, you have to emphasize what's wrong with it and I can't see what's wrong with it most of the time. >>4097024 gave me great advice on the kid and I couldn't thank him enough. Hell, even >>4098155 made a good point about buff kid's deltoid looking off, even if I was going for an exaggerated look with it. Aside from that, posts like >>4098154 >>4098039 >>4096801 are way too vague for me to take criticism from (to be fair, however, >>4098039 at least says how the buff kid is flat, even if he didn't go into detail about it which I would've preferred). None of them are enough for me to learn from. I want more critiques like what >>4097024 said cus he ACTUALLY SAID WHAT WAS WRONG WITH IT AND WENT INTO DETAIL ABOUT IT. Rather than just saying "it's flat/proportions are wrong/anatomy's wrong," which is not to say they're invalid points. They totally are! But it's not enough to simply say that because how is it flat? Where is the "flatness" coming from? How specifically can I improve my anatomy and proportions? THAT'S the critique I'm looking for, and I'm barely getting anything in that regard.

TL;DR, I want to be critiqued, but most of what critique I'm getting here is way too vague for me to take in or understand specifically what I'm doing wrong. It's like being told you answered a math equation wrong but no one explains what you did wrong.

>> No.4098225

>>4098219
I could be wrong but I think most of those people would like you to give some thought to using 3d shapes to construct your characters.

>> No.4098234

>>4098186
Not a style I'm usually fond of but you execute it really well. Nice colors, its very expressive

>> No.4098236

>>4098225
Oh it's definitely made me think about using 3d shapes for my characters, especially with the buff kid which I'm currently reworking with that in mind. It's just with the critiques that are too vague and just simply say "the X of the character is off," I have no idea how to fix it because I don't know specifically why that's the case. Again, that is perfectly good criticism and I definitely believe it weakens the piece, but if, say, someone told me that the anatomy of a drawing is bad, but they don't tell me WHY it's bad, I'll have no idea what to do with it. Ideally they should point out what I'm getting wrong so I can further study my errors and human anatomy to get it right. Simply saying that something is flat or that the anatomy is off etc without going into detail is not enough for me. That's what I'm trying to say.

>> No.4098237

>>4098219
k word yourself if this is not a pasta

>> No.4098239
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>>4098219
Mods

>> No.4098242

>>4098236
This place is for free help, no one owes you anything. Go pay for help if you want whatever deep, step by step critiques you want.

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>>4098219
>But it's not enough to simply say that because how is it flat? Where is the "flatness" coming from? How specifically can I improve my anatomy and proportions?
By reading the fucking sticky and posting in the fucking BEGINNER thread where you belong you ridiculous fucking goober
>It's like being told you answered a math equation wrong but no one explains what you did wrong.
You somehow missed the GIANT FUCKING STICKY on the way in is what you did you fucking CIRCUS TENT
FUCK OFF

>> No.4098255
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4098255

I need to buckle down tomorrow and get this done by the end of the week.

>> No.4098258

>>4098242
Alright fair enough, I suppose I've expected a little too much from /ic/ in terms of that. Maybe I'm also too paranoid about if my work's "good" enough. I certainly don't mean to push away any and all responses to my work, I just want to learn is all. Though I know now that I shouldn't rely too much on /ic/ for help.

>>4098248
For the record, I post my work here rather than /beg/ cus I thought cartoony stuff wasn't allowed there because of the existence of the /style/ threads. I was under the impressing /style/ was basically /beg/ but specifically for stylized/cartoony stuff. That's absolutely on me and I'm willing to admit it. Also the math equation analogy was for critique that's too vague. It wasn't meant to reference the sticky at all.

Unironically fair points from both of you!

>> No.4098259
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4098259

Here's Fialni Toradel, the oldest sister of the three (Miara here >>4097707
being the middle child and Aira (the girl with the horns) being the youngest.

Anything to fix before I begin line-sculpting?

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newest drawing

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>>4098290

>> No.4098303

>>4098293
>>4098290
woa ya i like it nice

>> No.4098313

>>4097073
not him but your edit doesn't read as well as the original. stop giving critique until you get better.

>> No.4098318
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4098318

I've hit the end of my rope with proper lineart for this cycle of my life. The more I try to do a good job the more it gets in the way of other things somehow, so for this one I did some kinda-sorta lineart, then after laying in the flats I dropped those lines' opacity, rendered around and over them a bit to define the forms, then at the end I went in and drew some more lines to reinforce things. A trend that I think will give way to more rendering and fewer lines in the future as I get better.

>> No.4098346

>>4098290
Legs look short but neat aesthetic

>> No.4098394

>>4098258
>I suppose I've expected a little too much from /ic/ in terms of that. Maybe I'm also too paranoid about if my work's "good" enough

Ok I'm going to give it to you straight. You arent getting in depth critiques because your art is 'not good enough'. You dont have even the basic fundamentals to even add knowledge to.
Seriously, I mean it when I say you need to learn how to draw (just basic stuff like spheres and cubes and whatever else) before you try to make stylistic choices. Everything you listed, anatomy, proportion, why is it flat, all of those come after learning how to just draw shapes.

>> No.4098399

>>4098394
Fair point, even when I do reference/rough art I feel like I'm jumping ahead too far.

>> No.4098402

>>4098399
Referencing is the foundation. Drawing from imagine is jumping too far. I'm not saying you can only grind fundies for now, draw whatever you want, but useful advice wont come until you have something to build off of.

>> No.4098408

>>4098402
I meant when Im doing rough art, I don't do enough foundation, and I'm basically just drawing something I'm gonna trace over, rather than building a foundation.

>> No.4098426
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4098426

started this painting tonight

>> No.4098469
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4098469

>>4098219

>> No.4098476

>>4098469
Yeah I'm willing to admit the egg on my face at this point lol

>> No.4098478

>>4097138
>>4098426
>>4098239
>>4098162
>>4098032
>>4097983

Really like your stuff anon. It's not perfect but definitely has charm to it.

>> No.4098501

>>4098476
yet you still spam the board and refuse to study.

>> No.4098510

>>4098501
That's another egg I'm willing to point out, currently taking my time with this more atm

>> No.4098577
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4098577

WIP

>> No.4098644

>>4098577
idk if it matters to you, but that's not how a hawk sits on an arm. Also, the hawk is looking a bit dinky, wish it were more menacing.

Overall, 6/10 keep drawing.

>> No.4098645

>>4098644
how does a hawk sit on an arm,is it more on the actual arm than the actual hand?

>> No.4098648

>>4098645
on the forearm, yeah

>> No.4098649
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4098649

>>4097833
fundamentally anon, you're trying to draw things without understanding them first. even the most exaggerated cartoon characters are still based in the principles of representational art.
you say the hair design feels iffy and it does, have you spent any time at all trying to observe how hair exists in the real world and what in a fundamentally graphic sense, makes it look like hair? the way you're approaching drawing right now is like trying to learn to read by copying all the letters that you think look cool and mashing them together to try and get them to look like other words you've seen.


>https://livlily.blogspot.com/2011/01/books.html
give preston blair's books a read and pair those with the perspective and anatomy resources in the sticky

>> No.4098653

>>4098645
not a bird expert here but even with my cockatiels, their claws really dig through shit; you see with larger birds that gloves are quite thick.
also the bird looks off balance; there's a kind of flow to a bird, where their bodies lead smoothly into their heads. they don't really stand up straight like a human would-- there's a counterbalance of the front and back.

i would just emphasise that there's a flow to the anatomy of a bird, an aerodynamic feel, where the wings are not on the outside, they're part of the structure.

>> No.4098959

>>4097983
>>4098162
This is your brain on tumblr

>> No.4098987

>>4098959
no it isn't

do you know anything about tumblr

>> No.4099018
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4099018

Gotta draw this in my sketchbook, any feedback before I go trad?

>> No.4099252
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4099252

Thoughts on making this feel less flat?

>> No.4099258

>>4099252
wew you're really going full sucking up to popular artists now, huh

>> No.4099263

>>4099252
blog?

>> No.4099272

>>4099252
Damn this is lovely. Although kind of disgusting once I realize it's an egg.

>> No.4099275

>>4099252
wheres the nude version?

>> No.4099319

>>4099252
-Shadow on the ground between the wall and the character legs - almost critical
-Rest of the shadow from left arm on the wall
-Shadows and colour on the left hand.

>> No.4099453

>>4099263
Here you go. https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio

>>4099319
I'll make those fixes for the Patreon version. Thank you for bringing those issues to my attention.

>> No.4099470

>>4096466
>>4096757
Nice gobbos, they give me a feel of old mtg cards. Do you plan using your designs in some project? Your works and world building look pretty complete so it'd be a logical step. Do you send your portfolio somewhere or treat art as just a hobby? If not your should try, I want you to succeed and see your designs in action, I'm sure there are other people who think alike

>> No.4099539
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4099539

>>4096325
>mfw he removed all the floof

>> No.4099548

>>4099018
Anon this looks fuggin great

>> No.4099631
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4099631

This is a study for a portrait

>> No.4099737
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4099737

>> No.4099754
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4099754

I guess while I have time to post here I'll post the other pose I did for this project while I finish the other one.

>> No.4099842
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4099842

>>4099754
I think you could use some more value variation. Everything is so dark that nothing stands out, adding in some lighter values would help increase the contrast between the elements, and help the figure read better.

>> No.4099872

>>4099842
Ah nice, I was struggling to find colors for a dark assassin like this but that helps. Initially I opted for a blueish purple light like you did but I lost it in the adjustment process it seems.
Thanks for the help!

>> No.4099913

New thread

>>4099911
>>4099911
>>4099911

>> No.4099969

>>4099470
I just do it as a hobby even if I wanted to do more I wouldn't even know where to start.

>> No.4099980

>>4098408
Dude, just go here

drawabox.com

You absolutely need it

>> No.4100866

>>4099737
This is really charming. Got any more? Blog?

>> No.4100969

>>4098649
I wonder why there is whiteout everywhere in that picture.