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Posting my drawings, some are unfinished.

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>>4093285
Im new to oil pastels, did this one recently

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Impressionist tree drawing.

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Some still life

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>> No.4093320

>>4093284
what are you looking to accomplish here?

>> No.4093324

>>4093320
Get some critique, see what people think, what this board is for no?

>> No.4093334

>>4093324
not really. this board is a containment/ trash bin.

that said, the examples don't really have much to them. if you're just starting out you have decent perception. but the compositions are very flat and lack variety or strong values. they need more of everything except saturation.

>> No.4093337

>>4093334
> they need more of everything

right, care to be more specific?

>> No.4093347

>>4093303
You're doing this in basically just midtones. You need a lot more contrast. Practice your values.

Your other art with color looks pretty bad, though the water one looks really nice. This is mostly because you don't dare go into darker values at all in many places where you should. If you want to drastically improve your color you first need to get comfortable with using a bigger value range in your grayscale.

The >>4093305 is very, very obviously suffering from a lack of contrast.

>> No.4093348

>>4093337
less saturation, more values, more composition, more content, more edges. push contrast hard in every category cause these are almost flat single surface images of high saturated color. there's no pattern or thing of interest. they just show beginner exploration, which is fine.

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