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Dentist-kun a cute. A CUTE! Edition

Previous >>4064537


What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4069277
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4069277

>>4069273
Fuckin weebs

>> No.4069280

>>4069273
Feel bad for the OP artist, their art is gonna get torn to shit now lmao

>> No.4069282

>>4069261
>"MOM SAID IT'S MY TURN ON THE XBOX"

>> No.4069285

>>4069280
That may be averted. Post your work.

>> No.4069291
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4069291

>>4069273
Thanks

>> No.4069297
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4069297

Various exploration sketches of my own characters. I'm trying to get a stronger sense of who they are, or who they are to me... It's tricky, as I change as a person they do too, and I also draw things based on my mood.. if that makes sense.

Or whatever.

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>>4069297
I dig it. Go make a TLOZ blog.

>> No.4069320
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4069320

May turn this into an animation. Thoughts on her design?

>> No.4069322

>>4069320
This is very nice, though nothing really stands out to me about her design currently. Some color might help, though the design itself looks like a default outfit in a fantasy game.

>> No.4069346

>>4069320
nice anon, her being barefoot got me diamonds. Overall looks great

>> No.4069352
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4069352

Drew a chess match between a coping brainlet and a quiet genius

>> No.4069364
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4069364

>>4069352
This was my inspiration

>> No.4069384
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>> No.4069387
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4069387

Hei

>> No.4069395

>>4069384
absolutely cute pilled
do you have a blog (preferably dev art?)

>> No.4069399

>>4069384
nice

>> No.4069405

>>4069384
I like your coloring style

>> No.4069411

>>4069297
I like it

>> No.4069428

>>4069273
How do I get better at digital lineart? I keep missing putting the line in the right place.

>> No.4069429
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4069429

still trying

>> No.4069439

>>4069429
I think her neck is a bit too long, friend

>> No.4069494
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4069494

>Tfw i know i can't render this shit but i still want to

>> No.4069498
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>>4069439
thank you

>> No.4069513

>>4069494
jesus fuck

>> No.4069521

Fun can be had at the expense of others.

>> No.4069523
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4069523

>>4069521
whoops

>> No.4069525

>>4069498
not him, still looks long because the necks is visible from the bottom of the ears, and since you drew the ears so high but also drew the jawline until the ear now it looks even worse

>> No.4069528

>>4069523
how r u so good?
teach me your secrets

>> No.4069533

>>4069523
You're cool I hope you make it

>> No.4069535

>>4069523
I love your shit mang

>> No.4069537

>>4069523
nice to see you doing bigger pieces. This one has a ton of energy and character, my only criticism is I think you should consider value more in your composition next time around to help readability

>> No.4069545

>>4069352
Lol nice

>> No.4069551
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4069551

Something else in the works.

>>4069322
I've considered many options for the default design, to balance femininity and stylization with something that is plausible for adventuring and camping. Hence the detached sleeves (which I may have tucked into a pair of iron gaunlets).

I'd like to keep it functional, but if there is room to make her outfit more feminine and appealing, I'd appreciate some options.

>>4069346

Won't last long, I'm afraid.

For studies, I'm gathering designs for the boots to try to teach myself rendering.

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4069552

>>4069429
>>4069498
I made this for fun, forgive me Anon

>> No.4069556

>>4069551
Good shit Flintlock!

>> No.4069557

>>4069273
i'm unironically starting to like this style, this nigga finna be the next ilya

>> No.4069558

>>4069552
>what is love?

>> No.4069566

>>4069552
omg this is fucking hilarious

>> No.4069578

>>4069552
Based

>> No.4069587
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4069587

lol

>> No.4069589

>>4069558
fucking based

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>>4069525
Thanks
>>4069552
>forgive me
this is quality content, don't be sorry anon

>> No.4069613

>>4069551
the addition of the gauntlets could be interesting

>> No.4069637

>>4069528
no secrets just love
>>4069537
Thank you! Trust me my friend grilled me on this one. I only have 12 colored markers to work with and he keeps pressuring me to get a tablet and learn to paint/color for real.

>> No.4069645
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4069645

Practiced some Loomis from Proko's vids and decided to try doing my guy again with a head of my own. Admittedly I pretty much planned his head & hat only, but otherwise I think it's better than what I posted in the previous thread.

>> No.4069646

>>4069645
you're the hero ic needs.

>> No.4069650

>>4069645
this is a good improvement anon, I'm proud of you

>> No.4069655

>>4069645
/beg/ is waiting for you

>> No.4069657

>>4069655
There is no rule saying anyone has to post in any specific thread

>> No.4069659

>>4069657
you can post wherever you want, but there's more help for you there. nothing wrong with going to a beginner thread.

>> No.4069683
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4069683

Caw caw

>> No.4069717
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4069717

I drew girl

>> No.4069733
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>>4069533
>>4069535
we're all gonna make it

>> No.4069734

>>4069273
dentist faggot so starved of attention that he made a thread while the old one's still in page 5

>> No.4069736

>>4069320
woof woof :3

>> No.4069740

>>4069650
>>4069646
Thanks! I've had trouble nailing an exact design for my characters (especially him), but Loomis really helps me solidify my designs I feel

>> No.4069743
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4069743

>>4069273

>> No.4069746

>>4069387
Looks great. Next time draw a face with more expression

>> No.4069753

>>4069743
>>4069746

>> No.4069756

>>4069717
use some layout lines when constructing anon, it'll help you locate things better

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>>4069866

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>>4069867

>> No.4069890

>>4069774
>making art for /ic/
Anon...

>> No.4069892

>>4069523
Nice although some value seperation for the viewer to read more easily like this anon said >>4069537 is a good idea.
Hope you draw more background too instead of a simple white BG

>> No.4069900

>>4069774
>No Sakimichan
>No illya
0/10

>> No.4070013

>>4069774
The drawing isn't bad but this is really cringey man

>> No.4070017

>>4070013
I think that was supposed to be the point

>> No.4070020

>>4069384
Does that cutie have a big NUT on her head?

>> No.4070097

>>4069683
That's a really nice design anon
>>4069733
Thanks. You're gonna have a blast painting. Maybe try watercolor+white guache? It won't be expensive, look at James Gurney's minimalistic setup. In my opinion it'll give you feel for mixing colours, and your traditional lines are quite lively. You could try colouring your lines digitally or adjusting/painting over the markers with just a mouse, I tried cintiq and I seriously don't think playing around with a mouse is that much worse, both feel uncomfortable in different ways. But for me traditional is the king.

>> No.4070108

>That one post without a single reply
Heh

>> No.4070135
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4070135

Refinement is coming along. Decided to play around with the skin tone, before calling it day.

>>4069320
Really neat stuff. The ones on the left convey motion very well, with the bottom left being my favorite.

>>4069774
Those brush strokes are really something, though.

>>4069852
Cute, keep at it anon.

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>>4070108
Don't worry, you will get used to it.
In this board, it's:
Beg tier: get shit on
Mid tier: no one care
Top tier: have your own shitposter

>> No.4070318
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4070318

Do you guys have any tips for starting a youtube art channel? I'd like to go for a mix between educational and fun

>> No.4070323

>>4070318
>any tips for starting a youtube art channel
Yeah here's one: Don't

>> No.4070324

>>4070323
:(

>> No.4070328

>>4070324
Serious answer though.
You either need a marketable personality (DodgelightTran, Deadskin Jazza )
Or cater to a certain groups of people.

>> No.4070330

>>4070328
But that’s completely fine by me, I don’t have any ulterior motive of Making It or getting rich I just think it’d be fun to make interesting content for an audience.

>> No.4070331
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4070331

Can I get some!?

>> No.4070332

>>4070135
Fuck man, those are some nice lines

>> No.4070333

>>4070331
Yooo good job on the perspective anon

>> No.4070335

>>4070331
>Still no color
Stop a bitch anon

>> No.4070354

>>4070330
I know this mind seem to be a stupid idea but check Youtube about this topic instead?

>> No.4070359

>>4070354
Just wanted to hear some opinions, didn't mean to be annoying sorry

>> No.4070361

>>4070354
If you REALLY are a girl you'll be fine

>> No.4070368

>>4070361
That's good to hear then :]

>> No.4070382

>>4070359
You weren't annoying but I seriously doubt you will find anything about that topic here.

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4070664

Update.

>> No.4070697
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4070697

Just playing around.

>>4070332
Thanks anon

>>4070664
Nice sketches.

>> No.4070778
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4070778

I drew some capeshit

>> No.4070900
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4070900

too thicc?

>> No.4070911

>>4070697
hahahaahaha wtf with that anatomy LMAO

that ass she has 4 cheeks
i hope you forgot to draw her forearm because if her forearm is hidden behind that giant dildo holy shit LOL
the fucking legs hahaha

tdlr;...dare i say, yes i will ..LOOMIS¡¡¡

>> No.4070972

>>4070900
Nah, but the proportional relations between legs, torso and arms are unappealing.

>> No.4071051
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4071051

did this today for a fb group called daily spitpaint where the objective is to paint or draw something based one of the day's topics within 30 minutes.
i'm not really happy how it turned out but i wanted to share it here anyways

>> No.4071053

>>4070900
kek nice, the only thing i dislike is the lenght of the neck

>> No.4071054

>>4071051
my mind instantly animated this into the pepo hammer gif

>> No.4071057

>>4070900
welcome to eb games

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>>4071054
lol this one?

>> No.4071062

>>4071051
oh anon your style is so fucking cool, your linework is great

>> No.4071065

>>4070900
I can tell you're going for a cartoonish style, but the shoulders are way too low, and the neck just too long.. Also, because I feel like I'm just repeating what this anon said>>4070972
the shoulders to body connection shouldn't be clearly detached if you know what I mean. The bold lines make it seem like her arms are not even part of her own body, and just kinda plopped on there like some lego piece.

>> No.4071076

>>4071062
thanks man, i'm grateful that you like it

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4071157

Update

>> No.4071354
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>>4070778
doing an acrylic painting

>> No.4071357

>>4070911
Nothing like a quick erase and a single brush stroke for the arm won't fix.

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>> No.4071371

>>4071361
He's crying cus he's stuck in an FX-Chip game.

>> No.4071428
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4071428

a face
i wanna draw like kento miura :(

>> No.4071440
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>> No.4071566
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Not sure if I'll bother finishing this

>>4071440
cute! CUTE!!!

>> No.4071661
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Request for /a/

>> No.4071662

>>4071661

I love you for putting more art of this girl in the world.

>> No.4071664

>>4071661
Your coloring is really nice, friend, but you need to draw faces and bodies in positions other than 3/4 view

>> No.4071683

>>4071664
I do, I mostly don't post it that's all.
Most of the compositions I end up liking are those perspectives but I suppose that's something I need to force myself to get out of.

>> No.4071720

>>4071157
woof woof

>> No.4071726
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>> No.4071730

>>4071661
is she spooked?

>> No.4071974
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4071974

Anyone have any advice on how to make this look less beg or what needs improvement.

>> No.4071993

>>4071974
Maybe a torso that isn't as long vertically and work on that skirt and her right hand.

It looks very decent though, better than I can do

>> No.4072039

>>4071974
Would love her to step me

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>> No.4072071

>>4072063
Chick is kinda bland but I really love those expressions, anon!

>> No.4072088
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4072088

>>4071974
You are well on your way to greatness as far as animu waifus are concerned Anon!

Here you go, I adjusted the eye level because one eye was to low (changed the pupil to be dark but that is just my personal preference). Otherwise just added more detail and stronger values to the different parts overall to try and enhance the form I have to say that if you are going with a rim light for each side then stick to it on the entire surface of the body not just the skirt and the suit and some other places.The gem on her ribbon is very reflective so make it reflect the color of the ribbon instead of a generic blue.

Keep up the great work!

>> No.4072096

>>4071974
The shading looks a little flat, looks solid otherwise. Also those ruffles on the skirt could use work, or is it lace?
Hmm, and maybe the line work... Depends who you ask, I think it's a little too evenly thin.

>> No.4072142

>>4072063
cute, blog?

>> No.4072190

>>4071428
That left nostril its coming out of nowhere

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>> No.4072193

>>4072088
Big yikes that redraw

>> No.4072214

>>4072192
Wait the minute, i know this style

>> No.4072224

>>4072192
Nice but she has a lazy eye

>> No.4072267
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4072267

wtb colouring lessons ;DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

>> No.4072270

>>4071720
Not him but shut the fuck up already with this woof woof shit.

>> No.4072285

>>4072192
Kyleposter please go.

>> No.4072288

>>4072192
*sniff*

>> No.4072291

>>4072270
wan wan

>> No.4072303

>>4071974
learn to draw clothes you retard

>> No.4072306

>>4072267
>THAT TINNY ARM!

>> No.4072368

>>4072192
k-kyle?

>> No.4072486

>>4072270
woof woof

>> No.4072598

>>4072063
like everything except the nose

>> No.4072604

>>4071720
>>4072486
what's up with this woof woof meme

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>>4072267

>> No.4072625
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4072625

No bug can ignore the call to cull.

>> No.4072685

>>4069552
kek

>> No.4072689

>>4070135
oh god this is gonna look sexy as hell

>> No.4072709

>>4072625
absolutely based

>> No.4072711
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4072711

>>4071974
what this >>4072088 guy said and don't make everything too saturated

>> No.4072720

>>4072711
Thank you for both of your inputs. I love both of your changes.

>> No.4072725

>>4072720
Hi >>4072088 here now that I look at it again I think I did mess up on the ye level and yours was actually the correct version. Sorry about that.

>> No.4072735

>>4072725
No worries I noticed it as well.

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>>4072267
I know that smile.

>> No.4072754
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4072754

Back to drawing animals

>> No.4072783

>>4072754
Gets bonus to stealth, would adventure with.

>> No.4072935

>>4071428
Looks like a Western adaptation of a slice of life romance comedy manga somehow. I like it.

But yeah like the other anon said, the left nostril's coming out of nowhere. Actually maybe it'd look better without the nostrils, or at the very least, make the nose look more like it's "pointing" at us.

>> No.4072971
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4072971

Drew a guy

>> No.4072980

>>4072754
I love your characters so much

>> No.4072985
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4072985

Posted this in another thread, but o well.

Recently saw the Scary Stories movie, and felt inspired to draw something based on the original books' illustrations. My brush got a little fucked halfway through shading, but I think it looks alright so far.

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4073009

The keyframes are coming along.

>> No.4073018

>>4073009
Now that I can see her outfit clearer I'm really liking it, good job

>> No.4073029

>>4069774
based

>> No.4073056 [DELETED] 
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junki wonki

>> No.4073064
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junki wonki

>> No.4073241
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4073241

Did an akira study

>> No.4073245
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This was only meant to be a rough coloured sketch but I'd gone and over-polished it, also I'm posting from a friend's really old, bad laptop with a cheap screen so I hope the colour's look ok

>> No.4073248
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4073248

>>4073245
I adjusted it slightly on my phone

>> No.4073249 [DELETED] 

>>4072270
:OOO
Ayup. I ref'd that

>> No.4073253

>>4073241
Seems more like a nice doodle, rather than a "study"

>> No.4073256

>>4073245
I think you might want to study edges more, I feel like a lot of your edge-work here doesn't really make sense, nor does it describe the form very well, especially in the sleeves area. I think you're trying to go for a stylized, cel-shading-esque way of painting, but you aren't pushing it far enough and you end up in this awkward unconfident middle.

>> No.4073258
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>>4072985
Finished.

Remember kids, never not do a base color for your drawing if you're gonna have a background of some kind

>> No.4073259

>>4073241
The lineart is neat, it would be cool to see an original piece with the same style of lines as this.

>> No.4073260
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>>4072783
>>4072980
Thanks, anons.

>> No.4073261

>>4073256
Oof I hadn't even thought about that, I'll do some studying thank you

>> No.4073264

>>4072743
Yes you do
:O

>> No.4073281
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4073281

hi /ic

trying to post more stuff

>> No.4073337 [DELETED] 

>>4073281
This looks neat

>> No.4073338 [DELETED] 

>>4073337
Why did it post with thatttttt :(

>> No.4073399
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4073399

First actual weebshit since I started drawing. How did I do?

>> No.4073431

>>4073281
the good shit

>> No.4073439

>>4073399
I feel with the coloring style you're going for, cleaner lineart would complement it better. I feel the rough scratchy lineart does not complement the simple coloring and smooth shapes very well. Other than that though, I think it's pretty nice

>> No.4073465

>>4073439
I really suck at clean lines, I can never get them right...

Aahh...

Back to practice I go.

>> No.4073541
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4073541

>>4073399
ROOOOOMIS!!!!11

>> No.4073546

>>4073064
looks like you are trying to be some qs75834 poser

>> No.4073562
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4073562

a drawing for a sick friend

>> No.4073574

>>4073541
the state of redlines

>> No.4073575

>>4073562
those arms are too big

>> No.4073586

>>4073574
That's totally fine. Redline it crab.

>> No.4073594

>>4073541
The only thing really worth changing is the position of the eyes, the rest of the redline is just you inserting your style into it.

>> No.4073601

>>4073594
>he cant see all the changes

try thinking in 3D

>> No.4073637

>>4073586
all you did was make it a different flavor of /beg/ anime than it was before

>> No.4073643

These threads really have been crabbier and have had worse crit than usual lately

>> No.4073646

>>4073575
I always get this crit for /ic/, if anything I think the heads too small

>> No.4073648

>>4073646
Its a mix of both, really.

>> No.4073668

>>4073541
HAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHAA HAHHAHAHAAH AND HE'S PROUD OF THIS TRASH TOO HHAHAHAHAHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

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>>4072971
The design is very sloppy, it's like you just wiggled your pen randomly to make shaky contours. Make your line directions intentional!

>> No.4073770
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>>4073668
>>4073594

SEETHING /beg/'s

>> No.4073773
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>>4073679

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>>4073594
>>4073668
>Being mad someone gave criticism and did a better job
Get good faggot.

>> No.4073787

>>4073770
>>4073781
Nice samefagging.

>> No.4073789
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4073789

fuck, the /asg/CHADS are here

>> No.4073793
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>>4073787
T. Psychological projectionis adefence mechanismin which the human ego defends itself against unconscious impulses or qualities (both positive and negative) bydenyingtheir existence in themselves whileattributingthem to others. For example, a person who is habitually rude may constantly accuse other people of being rude. It incorporatesblameshifting.

>> No.4073796
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>>4073793
fucking gook

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>>4073796
>Implying

>> No.4073818

Weeaboo crabs pls go, I'd say pyw but we all know you won't

>> No.4073888
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>> No.4073896

>>4073541

Lol, no.

>> No.4073897

>>4073258
Just make a base FOR the background

>> No.4073905

>>4073541
Ah, thank for the critique you man. Didn't notice about the eyes looking in different directions. Though you did also make the chin weird for some reason.

>> No.4073906

>>4073281
My eyes are drawn by the folds of the blouse, too much lines, too much contrast, but! Extremely fuckin cute I wanna fuck your art so fuckin bad anon

>> No.4073911

>>4073575
She's big

>> No.4073912
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>>4073541

>> No.4073992

>>4073546
I can see what you mean and how you could reach that conclusion but really i just draw and mix things i love together is all which is why it prob comes off like that

>> No.4074060

>>4073541
soul, soulless

>> No.4074084

>>4073541
Great job man. Too bad the samefag is so mad he has to make 4 comments about it seething.

>> No.4074085

>>4074060
Soulless, Soul.

>> No.4074090

>>4073912
HAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHAA HAHHAHAHAAH AND HE'S PROUD OF THIS TRASH TOO BRUH I AM DYIN HHAHAHAHAHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

>> No.4074115

Can you all dial down the retardation a little, please.

>> No.4074121

>>4074115
Artists are inherently autistic, didn't you know?

>> No.4074391

>>4073668
>>4073770
>>4073781
>>4073793
>>4074084
>>4074115


Can you guys just calm down with the autism and faggotry? I made that piece and the only posts I've made in this thread are:
>>4073399
>>4073465
>>4073905

>> No.4074404
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4074404

>a shitposter draws better than you

talent is real huh

>> No.4074428

>>4074404
Your standards is kinda low dude.

>> No.4074549

>>4074404
You're the only one shitposting here, retard.

>> No.4074640

>>4073770
>>4073773
>>4073781
>>4073789
>>4073796
>>4073798
>>4073888
>>4073912
>>4074404
please stop derailing the thread. post YOUR art.

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>>4074640
>>4074391
>>4074115
Jesus Christ you three repeat the same shit like a bunch of robots. How about instead of telling everyone who derailed the thread they are autistic, retarded and asking them to not do it. You just move on and ignore them, ignore the shitposter and do not take the bait like a bunch of Normalfag retards. The more you speak to them the more control they have over you.

>> No.4074702
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4074702

why is everyone getting so railed up by a redline? because someone criticized a drawing? i thought this was /ic/

>> No.4074731

>>4074702
So sudden and fleeting too, did ic go autismo for half a second?
Did a bunch of begs accidentally trip into the thread and then collectively died from choking on their own spit?

>> No.4074742

>>4069552
Don’t hurt me
No more

>> No.4075045
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4075045

Do you ever feel like your stuff is too cartoony/exaggerated to be appealing? My idea for this was that I wanted to basically caricature Chun Li based on recent anatomy study of the quads and legs. In many ways it turned out how I imagined and I like the design. But I feel I can't trust my own taste these days. I can never tell if I just suck shit or I'm getting screwed by algorithms/bad cropping/whatever when I post my stuff. Is this something anybody would even like to see, is it appealing on some level? Or what.

>> No.4075056
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4075056

There is an order to this.

>> No.4075063

>>4075045
The only thing that bothers me personally Is just the neck its too long

>> No.4075065

>>4075056
blog please?

>> No.4075068

>>4073064
my favorite poster in these threads
keep it up anon !

>> No.4075071
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4075071

>>4075065
@malintfalch

>> No.4075075
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4075075

Latest commission that I did, critique is welcome.

>> No.4075076

>>4075075
It's bretty good, but the calves are too long I think.

>> No.4075082

>>4075075
how much would you charge for something like this?

>> No.4075088

>>4075075
feel like her eye on our left is misplaced. Also her toes. Maybe making them look more slender would look better. her fourth toe really stands out to me as a bit too large anon. Other than that, it looks nice.

>> No.4075091
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4075091

I shouldn’t have made a thread. I didn’t know the existence of this thread. Here we go.

>> No.4075092
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4075092

Another one for critique

>> No.4075100

>>4075091
It looks a little stiff desu, Doesn't look drawn with confidence.

>> No.4075106

>>4075076
Not the first time I heard this, hmm maybe because I drew the calves too thin?

>>4075088
Yes I don't have much experience with toes since most of the time I draw characters with boots. I probably will study them when I have time.

>> No.4075108

>>4075082
$180 for fanarts, $250+ for OCs, $500+ for commercials

>> No.4075141

>>4075108
wew. say, how'd you establish yourself as an artist once you got the skill to pull off illustrations on this level? How'd you make your first connections in the industry and where did you find your first clients?

>> No.4075148

>>4075056
blog?

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4075159

>> No.4075173
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>> No.4075284
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4075284

A jetpack is not a light investment, but a successful hunt could easily cover the cost and then some.

>> No.4075316

>>4075045
I agree with >>4075063, I enjoy it a lot myself. I think your stuff has a lot of appeal, but it's a bit more niche than generic anime girls #124324, so you'll have more trouble finding people who enjoy it right away. I think you should keep doing what you want, I think your style is very interesting and recognizable.

>> No.4075350

>>4075284
you seem like a chill dude

>> No.4075361
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4075361

i need help with the torso

>> No.4075365

>>4075361
Didn't you already get a redline in another thread?

>> No.4075373

>>4075365
not really.

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4075395

>>4075350
first beer is on me

>> No.4075422

>>4075316
>>4075063
Appreciate it guys

>> No.4075480

>>4075361
I need help finding your blog...so...link to your social media site, please?

>> No.4075531

>>4075075
Sup, hack.

>> No.4075552

>>4075395
the cat guy should be looking at the other guy
right now this really hurts the story and composition

>> No.4075553

>>4075045
i wanna be suffocated to death by her thighs.

>> No.4075556

>>4075045
the question is, do you want to be mf doom, or ariana grande?

>> No.4075557

>>4069683
soul

>> No.4075559

>>4075075
Gib me your blog anon

>> No.4075588
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4075588

dont know about the face

>> No.4075609

>>4075588
I think the face is fine. She looks like a midget, though.

>> No.4075613
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4075613

Tried chibi

>> No.4075681

>>4075559
https://twitter.com/AztoDio

>>4075141
If you check my blogs, you could see I only started using social media one year and a few months ago. There's really nothing special in my case, I'm just drawing fanarts, short comics of famous IP and grow my fanbase based on those. If you're good enough, you will be recognized in no time. I was flooded with commission requests since then, I have 10k followers on Artstation and 13k on Twitter, my commisions are mainly come from them.

I also follow a lot of fellow artists of the same niche, I saw many of them struggle to gain exposure because their arts are not interesting/polish. But there're some of them that even grew x2, x3, x4... faster than me in the same time span. Solely because their arts are way better, way more interesting than mine, their quotes are a lot higher too ofc.

>> No.4075736
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4075736

Character design for a little animation loop

>> No.4075737

>>4075736
Really nice man

>> No.4075738

>>4074685
>all of that 4chan meme speak garbage. It's just a website, my guy. Not a way of life...

>> No.4075741

>>4075737
Thanks, anon!

>> No.4075767 [DELETED] 
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4075767

Couldn't think of anything to draw so decided to crack open one of these books I've been hoarding and never reading
Anatomy for sculptors

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>>4075767

>> No.4075773
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4075773

late-night sketch

>> No.4075775

>>4075056
soul

>> No.4075804

>>4075108
>>4075681

How much did you charge starting out? I'm really interested in starting commissions too but I'm really clueless about it.

>> No.4075808
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>>4075804

>> No.4075819

>>4075738
Bruh take your meds.

>> No.4075824 [DELETED] 

>>4075808
>Discount
Nigger

>> No.4075828

>>4075808
Interesting as hell. Tell me how long you been doing this for? 5 years or so?

>> No.4075843

>>4075828
That comm info is 8 months ago. If you meant my art experience then 4 years (technically it's 5 years but there's 1 year hiatus that I didn't draw at all).

As I said before I only tried social media more than a year ago. Before that I hunted job on Freelance, Upwork, 99design, Fiverr and spamming email, desu at least for me, I think that's a wrong approach. These days I usually turn companies down when they contact me, I only accept if their project is really interesting. Working with individuals is a lot more comfortable, as they are so nice, no stress, no strict deadline, no endless revisions, full payment upfront...

>> No.4075857

>>4075824
What are you trying to achieve here, chasing away someone with experience to share? This shithole has too many clueless crabs like you already, imagine just a few years ago when pros were still here.

>> No.4075875

>>4075857
What the fuck are you spouting on about you fucking thin skin faggot?
Are you seriously defending the guy for lowering his price to cater to gachafags that ultimately hurt him and other people?

>> No.4075885

>>4075875
>hat ultimately hurt him and other people?
D-did a gachafag kill your parents anonkun?

>> No.4075890

>>4075875
I think the discount is silly but why are you so upset about him giving discounts for a certain kind of fanart? It doesn't effect you at all

>> No.4075897

>>4075875
Im sorry you got touched by gacha on your special places

>> No.4075949
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4075949

Another cyborg design sketch, until I'm back on my computer.

>>4072689
Thanks for the compliment anon. Here's to hoping that I don't butcher the colors.

>>4075588
It's coming along nicely, but I agree with what the other anon said. Unless, it's suppose to be a young Chun-li, which if it is, good job.

>> No.4075957
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4075957

Did some quick painting on another pen doodle, I'm starting to feel like doing trad for sketches might be a nicer workflow.

>> No.4075993
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4075993

>>4075173
Nice comic sketch. You could more of the moments of the archery instead of having her in the same pose on all 3 pictures.

>> No.4076027

>>4075957
This is mostly really good but that misplaced line to the right of her skirt confuses the form a bit

>> No.4076029

>>4076027
Thanks anon, I see what you mean. I'll fix that tomorrow morning

>> No.4076037

>>4075957
design the shape of the treebranches. they should create interesting negative spaces and support the composition, keeping the focus on the character.

>> No.4076094

>>4075993
definetly takin this ty

>> No.4076122

>>4075993
this is a good example of how a lower-level artist is still able to provide useful feedback through a redline.
godspeed, anon

>> No.4076124

>>4075843
>full payment upfront
do you give them contracts as insurance, or do your clients just trust you that much?

>> No.4076127

>>4075819
you take 4chan too seriously

>> No.4076134

>>4076124
No, they just trust me, and other fan artists too, that's why I said they're nice.

>> No.4076139

>>4075875
You must be the guy who blew all his saving on a gacha game, yes?

>> No.4076156
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4076156

>>4075824
I don't think you understand what a discount is, nigger. It doesn't involve you actually lowering your prices at any point. You pick some IPs you like in terms of aesthetic and characterdesign and so on and price your commissions for those IPs at the level you would like to be paid. Then you add 20% on top of that price for everything else to make the regular pricing look like a bargain.

>> No.4076200
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4076200

>> No.4076221
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>> No.4076236

>>4075949
is a loli version

>> No.4076256

>>4076200
Wow

>> No.4076297

>>4075056
Love your stuff dude. You make me want to draw more.

>>4075736
Looks like a vector. Very nice

>>4076200
I envy you

>> No.4076309
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4076309

angery

>> No.4076314

>>4076200
That’s so cool man, good job

>> No.4076336

>>4076200
nice!!!

>> No.4076342

>>4075736
it's just me or the eyes aren't seeing the same thing?

>> No.4076357

>>4076297
Thanks
>>4076342
no, they might be ever so slightly off I'm honest. I'm actually animating them haha
>>4076200
Looking good, man!
>>4076221
This is pretty cool. I like your use those color in your illustrations.

>> No.4076398

>>4076396
>>4076396
>>4076396

>> No.4076533

>>4076357
thanks for the compliment man

>> No.4076580

Good thread

>>4076572
>>4076572
>>4076572

>> No.4076647

>>4072192
my only critique is she looks crosseyed overall this is amazing