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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
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>> No.4064541
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>> No.4064545
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>> No.4064548

this is cool af

>> No.4064550

looks a lot like katsuya terada. really nice stuff.

>> No.4064558
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I don't know how to shade this jacket at all. Is everything looking fine so far?

>> No.4064560
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Recent portrait.

>> No.4064561
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And a previous illustration.

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>> No.4064583
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Rude but cute
I love this but maybe have eye poking through
very cool and powerful
Why are lines in ear so wiggly? Everything is awesome.

Just finished up this one, the deign is for a t shirt.

>> No.4064606
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Attempting to use more interesting proportions

>> No.4064614

>Why are lines in ear so wiggly? Everything is awesome.
I'm not sure lol, but thank you very much.

I like the composition for your design. Although, imo I think more unified color palette and less detailing would read much better for a t-shirt. More consistent line weight as well. Alternatively, highly contrasted rim lighting from the moon could better compliment the mood for the theme. Her cat-like eyes could contrast nicely and drawn more attention to her.

You have multiple options really, but making the design look more "unified", I guess is my point haha.

>> No.4064619

Thank you for the critique. I will work on it!

>> No.4064628
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sketch of lewd Cat Princess for towergirls thread.

>> No.4064632
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How decent should I be at cartooning before I try to animate them? Or should I try to animate and just see where it goes?

>> No.4064633

This looks really good, anon

>> No.4064641

that lower lip really makes it look like a granny

>> No.4064642

she's very cute (do you have a blog?)

>> No.4064646
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Thanks, was pretty happy with this one after not being satisfied with my first attempt
It was suppose to be a lip bite. I'll see what I can do.

>> No.4064649

Thank you anon :D my blog’s @beholdnika on instagram

>> No.4064703

Sure thing :)

>> No.4064749

I was pretty disappointed to find out that mikufag is a pedo

>> No.4064755

Take this shit to the containment thread.


>> No.4064757


>> No.4064758

Fuck off pussy, that thread it's for degenerates

>> No.4064760

No one cares about porn in this thread but you

>> No.4064790
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Drew some fan art for my favorite movie

>> No.4064793
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I worked on it more, but now I don't know how to add this eye in and still have it look good. God I'm fucked.

>> No.4064803
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Intensify the light at the reflective areas and add more details to the folds. The metal parts should reflect more light towards the main source sane with the eye, I switched the direction of the eye highlight to the left side. You can also try darkening the shadowed areas like under the boobs and the lower arm. You could add a reflect light to them as well from the shirt for example.

Pretty sick picture by the way, I am loving it!

>> No.4064807

Not a fan of the flat face, but otherwise it looks nice.

>> No.4064839
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Finally finished something

>> No.4064840

Just start with it. Animation by nature requires a bunch of gesture and exaggeration via squash/stretch so just throwing down the keyframes is decent practice anyway.

>> No.4064851
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Dear lord this took forever to finish, here it is finally

>> No.4064853

I love this shit. blog?

>> No.4064856

i've got none, i started drawing again only recently but i will be making one for sure. I'm really glad you like it man

>> No.4064862

I hate to break it to you but usually when someone asks for blog they're being ironic.

>> No.4064863

Didn't know that, i'm still new here

>> No.4064874

I wasn't. I genuinely would like to see more.

>> No.4064879

Ooh, I remember your acc now, nice stuff.

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>> No.4064884

Means a lot, anon :]

>> No.4064911

Man this remined me of the 70's anime

>> No.4064917

Fuck off.

>> No.4064924

What a retard

>> No.4064927
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I'm practicing making backgrounds from scratch

>> No.4064930

I do like the way you distribute your line density in this quite a bit, but you should work on constructing your shapes more accurately in perspective.

>> No.4064943

i planned on doing some studying now after i'm done with that one, got any guides to recommend concerning that particular subject? i only started drawing digitally fairly recently so i'm still stumbling around when it comes to guides

>> No.4064953


Not sure if this is the right thread, but does anyone have examples of cartoons with aesthetically pleasing speech/thought bubbles?

>> No.4064967

I can only recommend the usual stuff, really. Look at Robertson for the super technical approach, or, if you don't have time for that kind of accuracy, settle for someone like Krenz or KJG. The most important thing isn't knowing "intellectually" how to follow a rigid set of rules though, it's learning to intuitively judge distances, angles and size relations from a given perspective, which is just a matter of constructing perspective grids and drawing within that context over and over again while comparing your work to that of other artists.
I'm sure you can tell that the ellipses of the bowels in your drawing don't follow the perspective of the groundplane. What you want to aim for is being able to see the angle those ellipses should be at intuitively.

>> No.4064973

This is so nice

>> No.4064974

Woof woof! ^w^

>> No.4064979

I really love the way this is rendered but I think the pelvis should be way lower than what you did

>> No.4064981

Im sorry no one asks for your blog :)

>> No.4064984
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It's not finished yet and I'm aware the face and hands need a do over, I just want to know if the way I render looks appealing or not, or if there's anything else I have to do to make it stand out a little more. I feel I'm weak at figuring out which colors to use

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something simple

>> No.4065004

this is pillowshaded.

>> No.4065019
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I felt like adding a couple of more, I'm hoping to start coming up with more interesting designs + concepts soon

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>> No.4065040

Love creepy-chan on the bottom right

>> No.4065043

No they're not you fucking shit stirring retard.

Dont believe him.

>> No.4065045

Ditto on wanting to see a blog. Dont believe that dumb fucking retard who said its people being "ironic"

>> No.4065061

I’m happy she came off as creepy! That was intentional hehe

>> No.4065064
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I think you have a cute style! but you should stop drawing the same dangling resting arm!!
You should use it to your advantage! I did some quick examples on your sketches hope it helps, I know its not that great but it might give you ideas how you can approach them next time!

>> No.4065073

Ahhh anon you’re so right about the arms, thanks for calling me out on it. I’m doing some sketching now so I’ll try to do interesting arm poses from now on

>> No.4065093

blog? love the colours

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>> No.4065131

Looks pretty good, might see marching girl's butt when she starts marching though, hehe. Maybe work more on the poses, and making them more dynamic?

>> No.4065137

Lolol you're right, the page I'm working on right now is supposed to be more dynamic. Thanks for the feedback, anon!

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>> No.4065167

You made her very cute, good job

>> No.4065168
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Any crit before I start painting this?

>> No.4065170

Cute! Cute!!! I like your simple style a lot, anon.

>> No.4065205

This is one of the most generic things I've seen in a while

>> No.4065245

>complains about it being for degenerates
>pic in question is literally fucking porn

So when did those neurons flare up and put two and two together? The fact this shit hasn't been banished to /b is to the mods' embarrassment.

Hasn't been true then, frustration with porn got a whole lot more widespread since.

>> No.4065257

Oh it's this faggot again. Want more doggy cummies?

>> No.4065278
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OH FUGG it's our autistic friend. Houndoom's been missing you

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>> No.4065285

Very nice. I feel a different color for the linear might suit it better, though? the desaturated brown-yellow looks a bit dirty against the sleek green and black combo

>> No.4065289


>feel a different color for the linear might suit it better

for sure, the color profile on my tablet is pretty different from my screen, it looks way too dark on any other device


>> No.4065294

Short story, everyone: porn thread was abolished after the blue/red 4chan split. Faggots spammed furry, bestiality, scat, and pedoshit across /ic. Specifically /alt.

Someone raised hell. The porn thread returned, and people started reporting GB3 rule violations again.

The mental deficients are still asshurt over the return of their containment thread.

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>> No.4065364
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Did the second sketch page! Are the poses more dynamic + do the hands look better? :)

>> No.4065374

Bottom middle is lewddd....

>> No.4065376

Onii-chan Hentai Baka!

>> No.4065385
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bro your proportions.....

>> No.4065389

Fugg I can't see the mistakes, what's wrong with them?

>> No.4065447
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im too sleepy to type shit but you have the quick rundown in the pic

>> No.4065458

lmao keep seething newfag. Have some doggie cummies while you're here

>> No.4065460

Practice more gestures or look yourself in the mirror doing poses. These poses look so stiff and unnatural, and no one holds a sandwich like that bruh.

>> No.4065463

This has been really helpful anon, thank you so much for taking the time to make this
Fair enough, no justification for the sandwich pose lmao. Thanks for the feedback!

>> No.4065469

i really dislike redlines like this that are more about seeming knowledgeable than helping the anon.

>> No.4065490
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Managed to fit one more page in before I pass out. I'm absolutely horrific at designing guns, I hope it's something that I'll improve on with experience

>> No.4065545

This is incredible, anon, I want it on a shirt

>> No.4065608
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how is the left knee casting shadow if its in shade?

>> No.4065625
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Probably could polish this up some more but my eyes need a break. Tried doing a very flat environment but not quite sure how well it worked with the figure

>> No.4065632

Ruh roh

>> No.4065677
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Haven't rendered in a while and I'm not feeling it.

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because i messed up on the shading and forgot to add it, fixed it later

>> No.4065730

you made it worse. just cheat the shadow on the ground instead.

>> No.4065776

What's up with the pudding

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>> No.4065800

I like this a lot. Very charming

>> No.4065804

thank you man

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>> No.4065809

asking ironically btw

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>> No.4065833
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How pathetic can you get?

>> No.4065838
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asking for blog unironically

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>> No.4065845

Don't bother. It's the same /beg/ shitposter from before :)

>> No.4065863
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okay im awake now, about the arms, you draw the elbow bone at the very back of her arm, that bone is below the humerus and the elbow joint, the pose is physically impossible for the hands you cannot bring your hands at that angle while your elbows ar that open try it yourself, also the foreshortening in the forearms is terrible it almost look like side view rather that going towards you not to mention the weird way of holding that uhh hamburger?.pic related he bones isn't in the center but not at the very back even if you are drawing an starving girl

the girl with the dress has the knee almost facing towards the viewer but her feet pointing at the right side thats impossible it should have been like her left feet also the angle and foreshortening in the left leg it makes it look like is not properly attached to her pelvis, if you use the lower leg to measure the height of the femur they should be the same which it makes seem like she lost part of her pelvis or has a really squished one and her waist is rather small but is not impossible for people to have it but i still think that is way to small.

the foreshortening in the guy is weird , the blacks spots shouldn't be visible for the viewer the neck especially you shouldn't be able to see it, and the way you drew his chest im not sure if that's just his chest or if is there also part of his ribcage if is this the case then he is sticking her butt out but her legs are still straight huh?

>> No.4065864
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>*you draw the elbow bone at the *

>> No.4065868

Oof this clears a lot up, thanks for taking the time to help me anon. I feel like a lot of the inconsistencies happen cause I draw really close up to help make my strokes smoother (my tablets tiny) then when I zoom out I forget to check if everything’s accurate. Again, this really helped, I’m very grateful

>> No.4065869
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I like your style, and I like this drawing.

That being said, the thumbnail looks like an angry super-deformed Beaver King - one with a gigantic over-sized head in proportion to his tiny body.

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lol i see it, nice

>> No.4065892
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i'll make one today or tomorrow. i wanted to draw some more so i have something to post, got any recommendations, i thought maybe instagram but if there's something else that's viable that'd be nice

>> No.4065903
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Can't see it senpai, i'm NGMI

>> No.4065916

it is a flan, flan is a meme in Japan.

>> No.4065918
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An attempt to use screentones

>> No.4065931

It’s cute anon, the booblies could use some work though

>> No.4065942

give her glasses and she'll be 10x cuter

>> No.4065943

heh that's pretty neat

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Meant to ask if someone knew how to fix his right leg

>> No.4065957

Cute, fuck this fag though >>4065942
Give her a fang

>> No.4065970
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Meant to ask if someone knew how i'd fix the right leg

>> No.4065979

>ugly-fying anime
And suddenly, for no reason at all people voted [..] into power

>> No.4065989
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thank you, I will go to study more anatomy then >>4065942
Sorry, those are difficult for me to draw

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>> No.4066011

Thanks i hate it

>> No.4066012

seriously. This looks like an evil bear face in the thumbnail. Do you see it?

>> No.4066022

it can be seen when you open it too

>> No.4066026

holy fuck that robertson guy is amazing

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>> No.4066113
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Drew a man

>> No.4066134

not everyone is a degenerate. Not everyone looks at porn.

>> No.4066144
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a portrait commission

really nice colors & the mermaid has a lot of appeal, gj

only real sore spot is the branches imo, the shape design there clashes with the rest of the image. if ur using them to frame the figure maybe try overlapping the moon a little bit to add depth

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>> No.4066146

holy shit I forgot you could do that with the perspective eye thing aaaaaaaa

>> No.4066150
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Drew this girl at a coffee shop

>> No.4066160

really nice anon, good lines, love the hands

>> No.4066205
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tried drawing without reference for fun but it was more stressful than fun, back to studying haha
how much did you earn?

>> No.4066285
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$25; im prob undervaluing myself lmao. least i can rationalize it as giving a discount cus hes a close friend

love how organic ur forms and lineart are. the leg looks weird cus the rest of the image implies a wide angle lens type of perspective (the stairs and foreground arm in particular) and so the viewer expects it to be smaller

>> No.4066303
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I drew war

>> No.4066305

You're right, I like it better dethicch'd too, thanks for the critique!

>> No.4066306

Thanks, anon. I think I'll rework the branches to be a bit more rounded, I was unsure about how well their shapes fit the rest of the piece myself.

>> No.4066308
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core of faces is cute,u have good analyse or good tastes, thats your weapon

>> No.4066310
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>try difficult angle
>it's difficult

>> No.4066369

learn how to use boxes boy

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>> No.4066390

Cute colors anon, but please draw more than just the head.

>> No.4066391
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based and cutepilled

>> No.4066403

Ill try, but you guys will make fun of me. So many people I feel hate me here lol..

thanks xD

>> No.4066518

draw more fren cute anon

>> No.4066528

nice lines

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>> No.4066541

Stay mad. Stay jelly.

>> No.4066553

It's her favorite food based off of a meme on how her name is a homophone for pudding.

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>> No.4066593

garbage, ngmi

>> No.4066600

hnngg the lines are so nice

>> No.4066604

not him but nobody would be jealous of someone incapable of improving after 5 years lmao

>> No.4066614

fuck off tumbler trash.

>> No.4066630

keep seething /beg/ :)

>> No.4066635

Keep on crabbing, friend

>> No.4066639

I already got a copier if I needed to see countless copies of the same thing, why be jelly kek

>> No.4066645

what do you even come on here for anyways? to stroke your ego? To show the world your fucking ugly tumbler art? lul stay fucking trash ugly.

>> No.4066658

sauce if you please

>> No.4066659

Are you Dentist-kun?

>> No.4066684

lol are you dentistfag? I don't even post my work here. I just lurk most of the time unless there's someone samefagging this hard

>> No.4066690

your mom is dentistfag.

>> No.4066692

gottem *dabs*

>> No.4066694

tech me the way to good lines senpai

>> No.4066715

Where do you post your r18 work nowadays?

>> No.4066755

Just try to copy other artists. I'm not a fan of their subject matter but Minori Kenshirou has amazing linework. Other than that, play around with your brush settings and try to get more familiar with whatever brush you're using. I feel like a decent amount of it is just how well you can control your own brush. Also remember that you'll always get worse when you start trying to learn something new so bear with that.

My Baraag (https://baraag.net/@orenjipiiru/) and Pixiv (https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2564922) will always be safe. I'm trying to make a new twitter account but unless you give them your phone number, it takes several days. I don't even know if I want to bother at this point, but what can you do.

>> No.4066792
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Revisited a sketch posted in the previous thread. Tried planning/constructing the bust a little more this time round.

>> No.4066793

Go away subhuman.

>> No.4066813

Just felt like sharing my work and asking for critique but ok lol

>> No.4066821
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Just saw the Scary Stories movie, decided to make something inspired by the original drawings. I think the nose is off somehow, thoughts?

>> No.4066834

Would be charming if it's more polished I guess

>> No.4066841

How so? Polished as a sketch or polished as an actual drawing? I'd like to try making an actual drawing out of it, sounds like a neat challenge

>> No.4066872

Based Kenshi

>> No.4066918

well... the lines are messy, but in a way that suggests hesitation or laziness rather than liveliness, action or grittiness. stop chicken scratching.

the face looks really flat because the underlying structure of the face is absent-- especially with the philtrum, nose, and mouth. the facial features are all symbol drawn.

overall u should work on ur knowledge of how stuff works in 3d and developing line confidence

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>> No.4066945
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use boxes

>> No.4067022
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What does one have to draw to get noticed, damn it

>> No.4067023

I notice your art, anon. You have some of the most interesting and unique stuff here :(

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>> No.4067035
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Could I get critique on this please?

>> No.4067044

I'm not too good with pixels but it looks pretty nice.
You might want to rethink that facial shading, I thought she had a 5 o' clock shadow initially. I feel some more shading and colored lineart could help improve this, it feels a bit unfinished right now.

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>> No.4067090

Dude i appreciate your effort but you killed the purpose of the picture.
The idea is not just a downshot but peeking under her blouse while she's looking back at you.

The pose is not impossible but fucking hard.

>> No.4067115

Yeh, but not like that

>> No.4067116

Is she bald?

>> No.4067118

hair is tied up under the hood

>> No.4067150
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I was suppose to start another refinement sketch for the other drawing, but I took a break from it, and started a new concept.

Great line quality on this. Good job, anon.

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>> No.4067189

consider having the hood fall in such a way that you can still indicate the hair. a small visual cue does the trick, generally.

>> No.4067235

1000% increase it cuteness

>> No.4067343

wow this awesome, but i wish she didn't seem bald, it would make her 100 times cuter

>> No.4067400

Soul (top)
Soulless (bottom)

>> No.4067488
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Drew this thing

>> No.4067503
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>> No.4067542

sick stuff anon

>> No.4067564
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The hunting of the Draag beast is heavily discouraged to all but the most insane hunters.

>> No.4067577

Love the monster.
Try more complex stuffs and refined your lines anon.
Got a twitter? I wanna see you improve over time

>> No.4067599

You need some polish. Your stuff is pretty good but I can see that you cut corners a lot. Spend a little more effort, add some background and values and it can work.

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You have some good points but im not sure that theres no pelvis

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i cant believe you posted that and think it was right

>> No.4067610

No its not right, i just think its wrong in a different way.

>> No.4067611

i don't know but she has a pancake for pelvis in your pic

>> No.4067613

Interesting. Although some of my inspirations are from 90's era, but I'll take it.
Thank you!
Hmm that's an interesting take. Although you turned her white lol.

I'm not going for kawaii or big anime eyes. I wanted to highlight more naturalistic features, and in that case I wanted to really make her look very apparently Japanese. The features in your edit would look much better on a leaner, tall white female. I'm sort of reminded a bit of Yoshiaki Kawajiri, with the thin nose, pointy chin and thick eyelahses. I appreciate your take though.

>> No.4067623
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Interest lost

>> No.4067639

Fair points anon. If possible I'd like to see a redline of it to get a better idea of how flat it is.

>> No.4067644

very cool

>> No.4067657

I loved i robot as a kid
Thanks for the throwback

>> No.4067665
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A redline wont help, it seems as though you have a poor understanding of construction and anatomy, some studies of real people would help with that. You should be doing more of these before going into hard stylization. However, you can still have fun experimenting with it alongside your studies. In that case, you could find other things to use as reference to help you, like pic related.

>> No.4067666

I was glad changing the shade did such a number on her cuz it looked weird to me too, but then i noticed thats not all you changed...

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>> No.4067675
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No problemo
Here’s a walrus man and some angels

>> No.4067676

All these redlines are giving me a way better understanding of form, thank you anons!

>> No.4067694

Thanks for the kind words anon :)
That's pretty bulls eye sadly, thing is i just can't figure out how to do simple linework to save my life, it looks a extremely tedious and dull process when I watch others do it.
here >>4065970

>> No.4067710

normally I just do it in several layers, getting cleaner each time
so far its worked for me, usually I redid my linework 3 or 4 times, now I only have to do it once or twice to get it as clean as I like it

>> No.4067716

I love it
I really want to get good at drawing cool weird shit like that but i stopped alltogether because things were never the way i wanted them to be
Even the simple shit

>> No.4067718

I wish my lines flowed like yours anon

>> No.4067734

>That's pretty bulls eye sadly, thing is i just can't figure out how to do simple linework to save my life, it looks a extremely tedious and dull process when I watch others do it.
Watch Jim Lee? He makes it look almost effortless.

Also I don't think you need some hardcore linework. I was more talking about keeping forms more consistent. You normal style should work pretty good with some colour.

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>> No.4067744

thanks man

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Thank you! Yeah I added a few more elements in that drawing and i'm happy with how it turned out. More complexity is the way to go.


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>> No.4067894
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Almost finished. I guess it's a onions demon. Who's in school.

>> No.4067896
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Is my style too anime or too cartoonish? Is it a style at all?
Any crits?

>> No.4067904

>Is my style too anime or too cartoonish?
That's not the question you should be asking, you should be wondering if your style is what YOU want it to be.
Other than style, you have some issues with figure drawing, namely stiffness and unbalanced posture (she seems to be floating, not sure if that's your intention). I feel like spendin more time studying real faces could help better inform your stylistic choices, and you could bear to exaggerate the figure more. You have this very graphic and exaggerated face, but the body is relatively much more realistic, which kind of indicates to me you aren't thinking about how you can apply the exaggeration to the body as well.

>> No.4067914

Thanks for the answer, im really trying to improve and i will work in more figure drawing and realism.
>You have this very graphic and exaggerated face, but the body is relatively much more realistic, which kind of indicates to me you aren't thinking about how you can apply the exaggeration to the body as well.
I recognize this but i don't know how to implement it, how do i stylize the body in the same way as the face?

>> No.4067926
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>how do i stylize the body in the same way as the face?
The exact answer is going to depend on your personal taste, but what I meant by that comment is that it would help to experiment. Think about ways you can emphasize and play with shape, proportion, and etc. Perhaps start compiling an inspiration folder or pintrest board of styles you like, so you can get a better feel of what you visually like, so you know what direction to go in.

>> No.4067931

i feel the foreshortening is messed up, if you look at the face most of the proportions are way too foreshortened , same with the legs/feet i feel the leg should be bigger as it gets close and the feet is floating or is the angle that contradicts the leg, look at the knee should you really be able to see that knee like that at that angle?... overall it feels odd

>> No.4067933
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tumblr as fuck

>> No.4067937

I think you're probably right. I could sense something was off but I've been staring at it so long that all the important details kind of got scrubbed out.

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>> No.4068085

Giving these kinds of critique is forbidden on this board, but...

This looks great and I love it a lot

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>> No.4068116

You’re over using those choppy lines. They should describe form and nothing else. Right now you’re just using them for texture and not actual shading

>> No.4068118

you're right, i'm somehow trying to use them for both desu, but i can see that it's not working out too well, i might try adding shadows on a separate layer in the next one

>> No.4068119
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char design based on a friend

this is lineart goals

>> No.4068122

Really lovely color choices, gives the rendering life.

>> No.4068138

I'm going to eclipse you, orange

>> No.4068165
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maybe this works better?

>> No.4068185
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Pic related is from Dynamic Bible, by Peter Han. I think giving it a read would benefit you a lot. Maybe watch some of his videos.

Keep it up.

>> No.4068188

that does look better

>> No.4068189
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"That's bullshit, but I believe it."

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trying out some new brushes

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>> No.4068403
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I'd like to put out three or more smaller concept pieces each week during the hiatus of my comic, and I'd like to have exercpts of letters and such accompanying them like so. Do people care about such things? Or is it just clogging the page/distracting/offputting?

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>> No.4068432

It’s sold out everywhere I looked. Is there a PDF floating around?

>> No.4068439
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feedback appriciated

>> No.4068452
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wtf man

left forearm
different legs size
the hat and the hair union it feels flat
can't tell if thats a cape or her hair
weird feets or boots

>> No.4068454

cant fix bad eyesight

>> No.4068460

Better than my first drawing

>> No.4068463
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gesture drawing + letting brain flow

>> No.4068467

I don't get it with you people
Every time I post respected artists sketches or even some of my art that did well you guys rip on it and take the bait

It's almost like this board is just a circlejerk and you don't know what you're talking about

>> No.4068469

Uhhh what?

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>> No.4068480

The quality of critique seems to be based on the artist posting it instead of the art
Meaning /ic/ is full of shit

>> No.4068482

awww bitter faggot is angry /ic/ didn't love his trash, so cute.

>> No.4068483

Nigger i don't even know who draw that

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>> No.4068492

if /ic/ can't recognize skill then what value does the feedback here have?
I think /ic/ can recognize what is good and bad but chooses to troll instead

I'm not angry, it's depressing. This is the 5th time and it's starting to look like there is nothing to be gained this way. The amount of what at best are trolls is too high

Last time I posted a famous work and it got shit all over before someone recognized the artist

I shouldn't be preaching, that's not going to change anything, but consider it the next time you look for feedback

>> No.4068497

Dude, the pic you posted look like beginner tier, take that however you see fit.
/ic/ is retardedly honest, a beg can call a good artist shit and vice versa.
Learn to be selective when it come to crits, it's a good skill to have and necessity here

>> No.4068499

Are you saying you posted someone's art here before pretending it's yours

>> No.4068504 [DELETED] 

no hes saying he fucked ur mom

>> No.4068515 [DELETED] 

wth did you mean by that? was that drawing yours or what, what bait?

>> No.4068520
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hi /ic

btw, is the line work too faint to read? asking for a friend...

>> No.4068521

you are a fucking newfag, people shit on pros all the time;proko,ruan jia, and a lot of self proclaimed pros sakimichichan ilya...etc, you are probably getting confused with the discord circlerking that will praise whatever their overlords post and defend them for any kind of criticism

>> No.4068524

What brush do you use, pencil?

>> No.4068554
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yes and it has to be a small size brush to give that effect too. the pen tool just doesn't have the same feel to it.

>> No.4068561

I always like background info my man

>> No.4068564
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nothing wrong with cartoony anime

>> No.4068573
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sheet ghosts

>> No.4068613

>her fucking hands

>> No.4068615

Soulless eyes

>> No.4068621

do it

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>> No.4068647

Could be a bit darker, the line work on the top left doodle feels a bit faint, and the blob fish too

>> No.4068680

copy the linework& paste ontop a few times to make it darker.

>> No.4068696

you are doing amazing things.
now draw a comic book so I can buy it

>> No.4068814

You can find it on cgpeers, as well as his dynamic sketching videos. If you don't have an account, try with some of the links in the artbook thread.

>> No.4069076

Cool reference bro, gonna use this for ideas, for my peanut brain.

>> No.4069087

Why are your backgrounds always more bright/saturated/detailed than your characters? I always need some time to concentrate on the action that goes on the page when you post your comic panels.

>> No.4069158

Its not intentional; it’s ignorance. I will correct it!

>> No.4069161

thanks anon!

that means a lot, anon! But I'm not that big of a name yet to do comics, lol

>> No.4069193

ah good, that means you plan to. I shall see you with my wallet soon.

>> No.4069201
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Did a little comic page, been Captcha-ing trying to post it for about five minutes

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finished my avatar

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>> No.4069235

Nice. Though if you want to simplify hands like that they should go on top of the forearm, not below it.

>> No.4069240

nice. you should hide your name somewhere in the rows of lines or something

>> No.4069242

lol that's actually a pretty cool idea

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bored as fuck

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Does he look like lenin?

>> No.4069270

inb4 this is the next op

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>> No.4069301

a little bit

>> No.4069483

just post your blog already

>> No.4069500

very nice

>> No.4070173

this is a clear case of somebody projecting

they are bitter and when they see a vague comment they stick their own emotions to it

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