/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.4061366]

Well this is a new feeling I never felt. I posted my work here and with zero expectations since the last time you guys scared me off.
I've been practicing my ass off for 3 months to prove you guys wrong. I post something and it's ignored. Not a single criticism or praise, just ignored. My art is so boring that it can't even be called shit anymore.

Life is pain.

[Anonymous No.4061370]

>>4061366
pyw and i'll comment

[Anonymous No.4061372]

>>4061366
post it here and i'll say a thing

[Anonymous No.4061380]

>>4061366
Post it and i'll say nice things about it

[Anonymous No.4061384]

>>4061366
Yes. Boring like you.
If you want someone to jerk you off, roofie your hand, because no one else will.

[Anonymous No.4061386]

>>4061366
Post it and I'll at least let you know if I looked at it

[Anonymous No.4061387]

>>4061370
>>4061372
>>4061380

I like to draw nsfw stuff. So please don't disow me for my intrest.

[Anonymous No.4061389]

>>4061387
your anatomy sucks fucking ass but i like the strokes and brushwork so i guess it's a win win

[Anonymous No.4061391]

>>4061387
I haven't really been trying to color well all recently. And been more focused on anatomy, since thats what I got shit on for before.

[Anonymous No.4061392]

>>4061387
>>4061391
qt

[Anonymous No.4061396]

>>4061387
>>4061391

Your head is honestly sickening to look at. It's like I'm staring at a 1987 How To Draw Anime and Manga book.

Secondly if you're still studying anatomy you should study the anatomy of a fucking pussy before you start coloring one, or keep it covered.

[Anonymous No.4061400]

>>4061387
cute, but your body anatomy needs work. the lines look placed at random, study.
>>4061391
this looks better tho (mostly because the parts of the body you drew in the first are now covered) although the pussy looks off (again, study)

keep on improving my anon, you'll make it with enough effort.

[Anonymous No.4061418]

Thanks everyone for the feed back so far. My anatomy really needs a lot of work, probably because my construction is bad. Any thoughts on how to improve that?

[Anonymous No.4061423]

>>4061418
read hampton and anatomy for sculptors, study a couple of references, unlearn any simplifications you may have made, etc.

[Anonymous No.4061427]

>>4061391
>>4061387
>generic pinup fanart
and you still wonder why you don't get attention?

[Anonymous No.4061430]

>>4061400
I actually started drawing again from trying to replicate old anime from the 80s and 90s so maybe that's why. I try'd looking at doxy's pussy box note but honestly didn't make much sense to me.

[Anonymous No.4061434]

>>4061430
i don't know about other people here, but i like to avoid how-tos and tutorials. study it yourself instead of having it dryly explained to you.

[Anonymous No.4061441]

>>4061427

Says the faggot who is ngmi.

[Anonymous No.4061442]

>>4061427
Yeah it's pretty generic. I kinda just use them as stand-ins till I feel like making my own.(which will probably just be some brown hair waifu).

[Anonymous No.4061451]

>>4061434
What I try to is apply the methods i see in how tos and apply that to other's art, but It feels like everyone has their own style so gets confusing after a while.

[Anonymous No.4061453]

>>4061366
Literally shut the fuck up/ic/ is a board for shitposting and retards if you actually think you'll get anything of worth except entertainment out of here you're part of the retard contingent. Go draw

[Anonymous No.4061454]

>>4061453
pyw

[Anonymous No.4061456]

[Anonymous No.4061468]

>>4061454
I'm not enough of a moron to let my work be associated with a board of incels and 15 year old boys jerking it to poorly drawn hentai. Like bitch get drawing, stop giving a shit who's telling you to draw.

[Anonymous No.4061480]

>>4061468

Sounds you're a faggot who is ngmi.

[Anonymous No.4061482]

>>4061387
Gonna be a yikes from me, but I'm sure someone else will like it

[Anonymous No.4061495]

>>4061468
Stop making excuses faggot. You don't pyw because you're a pussy

[Anonymous No.4061508]

>>4061480
>>4061495
If you retards got off 4chan you'd realize nobody wants to be associated with 4chan. Keep jacking off to Loomis and beksinski instead of joining the real world and studying from life retards

[Anonymous No.4061521]

>>4061366
welcome to my world

[Anonymous No.4061524]

>>4061453
so you are the guy that keeps shitposting with greentext all this time?

[Anonymous No.4061541]

>>4061508

Sounds like.... you’re never going to make it faggot.

[Anonymous No.4061545]

>>4061387
Your hand is weird and the leg looks short but it's still cute!
>>4061391
The vag looks weird

[Anonymous No.4061552]

>>4061387
>>4061391
These both look extremely low-effort. You need more mileage. Over time, you will receive feedback organically. Until then fuck off.

[Anonymous No.4061555]

>>4061387
I saw your work in the previous thread, usually when nobody replies to your post it either means you are doing something right or nobody is arsed enough to tell you anything about it because you did not apply yourself well enough.

[Anonymous No.4061567]

>>4061524
>>4061541
I've already made it, I only come here when I'm bored

[Anonymous No.4061569]

>>4061567
>I've already made it! I-I just come here to shitpost! Heh...

[Anonymous No.4061570]

>>4061396

It's not his head idiot

[Anonymous No.4061574]

>>4061508
>noo le 4chan boogeyman from cnn!
pyw

[Anonymous No.4061594]

>>4061387
I don't like the face, too anime, but everything else is great

[Anonymous No.4061598]

>>4061387
When cumbrains go to the land of make me belive

[Anonymous No.4061635]

>>4061570

Shut up nigger you're ngmi

[Anonymous No.4061643]

>>4061391
The pussy sticks out in front of the legs like a penis. It should just stay in between the legs and not hang out like that

[Anonymous No.4061687]

>>4061387
>>4061391

Go through Figure Drawing Design and Invention
by Michael Hampton and Human Anatomy for Artists by Eliot Goldfinger to work on your anatomy

[Anonymous No.4061708]

>>4061366
I spent days drawing a dozen of frames to make a fluid animation and it got ignored in the /beg/ thread. This is the worst

[Anonymous No.4061745]

>>4061708
Post it here I wanna see.

[Anonymous No.4061750]

>>4061745
Don't you dare notice the perspective

[Anonymous No.4061752]

>>4061750

Her hair is way too animated even if you're going for exaggeration. She's barely skipping off the ground but her nigger hair looks like as if she was falling from the empire stat building.

[Anonymous No.4061753]

>>4061366
If you're posting on /beg/ and being ignored that just means that you're doing okay. If you're past /beg/, you'll get told. If your art has glaring mistakes, you'll get told. But /beg/ is populated by 99% other begs and in the mid-to-upper tier of /beg/ before you leave forever you'll be above most people's paygrades there.

Any artist posting on /beg/ should be aware of how it goes there as they get better:

> many (you)s telling you to read the sticky
> some (you)s but with actual critique
> no (you)s what am I even doing with my life
> some (you)s from actual good artists with real critique
> some (you)s telling you to leave /beg/

Then you go to the niche threads and get torn to shreds all over. You're one of the big boys now.

[Anonymous No.4061758]

>>4061750
>>4061708
thats anything but fluid, my guy

[Anonymous No.4061761]

>>4061752
It's magical hair alright
>>4061758
You think it's an issue of drawing too few frames or just that I drew the wrong poses? This gif by some other anon lasts about the same time but it feels more solid

[Anonymous No.4061786]

>>4061761
the poses are awful, she isnt moving in a way any human has ever moved. The timing is completely awkward. its like you dont know what people look like when they walk or skip. Honestly just go back to studying anatomy and poses before you attempt something animated, itll be much easier for you, rather than dumping in a ton of time drawing inbetweens for an animation that doesnt accomplish anything

[Anonymous No.4061788]

Do people who tecommend stuff like Hampton Itt ever read the book?

Also Goldfinger is a good amatomy reference for a figure artist but overkill for heavily stylised work like op is going for.

[Anonymous No.4061803]

>>4061387
Your anatomy needs work. For a start give this a look. It can give you a rudimentary feel for how the torso is laid out.

[Anonymous No.4061989]

>>4061366
Dont draw pussies, almost there with the hands and hair is ok.

[Anonymous No.4061990]

>>4061788
I did. I was pretty /beg/ tier with figure drawing before reading it, and Hampton gave me massive gains and let me finally understand basic construction and anatomy, and gave me a good basis to continue learning on.
I'd recommend it to anyone who needs to work on figure drawing/anatomy but has trouble learning the forms of muscles from something like Loomis.

[Anonymous No.4061995]

>>4061387
The face doesn’t suit the body at all.

[Anonymous No.4062022]

>>4061803
this is fucking awful, dont look at this

[Anonymous No.4062038]

>>4061366
>>4061387
>>4061391
>>4061418
>>4061451
Please look at pic related to find out why your face looks off. Taken from Andrew Loomis' "Fun with a pencil" book, that can be downloaded for free if you look it up.
In a nutshell, you are oversimplifying your head structure, without having the knowledge of what goes where, and the proportions. I'm not telling you to draw realism, I'm telling you to learn what a face looks like and then just stylize the proportions (anime).

Also, this:
>REEEE LEARN DA FUNDIES

[Anonymous No.4062062]

>>4061387
>>4061391
>>4061418
>>4061430
>>4061451
Why is everyone always wanting to learn to draw just to draw porn? It’s like every faggot these days on /ic/ is only doing it for the pornbux. What a waste of time.

[Anonymous No.4062069]

>>4062022

How is it awful you stupid ngmi no name nigger?

[Anonymous No.4062081]

>>4062062
Why do you fucking care so much?
If people want to make money, porn is the easiest way to do so. You don't need to be a genius to figure that out.

[Anonymous No.4062084]

>>4062038
This is the most condescending shit holy shit. Do you honestly think anyone on this board hasn't heard of fucking Loomis by now. If just reading Loomis was enough to make all your heads perfect then we wouldn't have so many people posting bad heads now would we?

[Anonymous No.4062085]

>>4062038
By the way there's literally nothing wrog with OP's Peach head, redline it if Loomis is so great you faggot.

[Anonymous No.4062087]

>>4061387
Dude don't listen to all these trolls, this one is really cute and there's nothing wrong with it. The Zelda could maybe use a little work.

[Anonymous No.4062092]

>>4061387
this is what happens when you don't study anatomy and only follow quick tips from social medias like manga materials

[Anonymous No.4062095]

>>4062092
Redline it.
pyw.
None of you know what you're actually talking about, you're just pretending to.

[Anonymous No.4062100]

>>4062087
>those hip forms that make no sense
>there's nothing wrong with it
haha

[Anonymous No.4062112]

>>4062100
Like I said. REDLINE IT YOU FUCKING FAGGOT. You'Re all talk and no substance fucker.

[Anonymous No.4062116]

>>4062087
You can stop replying to yourself OP.

[Anonymous No.4062123]

>>4062116
I'm not OP.

This guy decided to start pretending to be me though, idk why >>4062112

Anyway yeah there are parts in the Peach drawing that aren't accurate but who cares, it's simplified and cartoony on purpose. Even Master Anatomy Faggot Stan Prokopenko acknowledges there's lots of good art with inaccurate anatomy (i.e. basically every cartoon ever).

[Anonymous No.4062125]

>>4062095

Says the ngmi nigger that wont pyw. Nice try fagnon.

[Anonymous No.4062131]

>>4062123
First you said there are no problems with the anatomy and now you say little problems are fine. You're one schizophrenic fucker. I wouldn't be surprised if the other guy you quoted was you too.

[Anonymous No.4062136]

>>4062123
You can stop pretending. There are clear and evident problems with the face OP. Reason you can’t see them is cause it’s your own work.

For one, the chin is misaligned making the face look flat. It’s symbol drawn and it shows.

[Anonymous No.4062144]

>>4062136
Op here. Currently failing at anatomy.
And I agree, there's clearly stuff wrong with it.

[Anonymous No.4062147]

>>4062144

The way you draw faces honestly gives me visual AIDS. Fuck anatomy, reprogram whatever the fuck time went into making faces.

[Anonymous No.4062152]

>>4062147

>haha you suuuck

Your comment is not helpful.

[Anonymous No.4062154]

>>4062152

I mean hes not wrong. It's tough to look at.

[Anonymous No.4062158]

>>4062038
>>4062147

Such a tsundere you are.

Yeah i've been oversimplifying everything too much recently. Thanks anyway for going out of your way to make that for me. I'll do a whole page of loomis heads just for you.

[Anonymous No.4062164]

>>4062154
It's not tough to look at.

[Anonymous No.4062170]

>>4062164

Whatever you say ngmi-chan.

[Anonymous No.4062197]

>>4061396
>>4062038
There's literally nothing wrong with the first face except maybe for the chin who's slightly off center
The second however

[Anonymous No.4062198]

>>4062197
The entire head is out of place.

[Anonymous No.4062199]

>>4062198
The head looks fine for anime proportion.

[Anonymous No.4062200]

>>4061366
Is it all anime porn? Is that all people here want to draw?

[Anonymous No.4062211]

Fucking cringy but ok

[Anonymous No.4062279]

>>4062147
Did i cure your aids?

[Anonymous No.4062283]

>>4062279
nayrt but this looks like its straight out of a how to draw anime book you would find at an elementary school book fair. the moe faces are a lot more appealing

[Anonymous No.4062292]

>>4062283
I don't try to draw in my style when I study. But how are the heads?

[Anonymous No.4062308]

>>4062087
are you blind?

[Anonymous No.4062309]

>>4062095
pyw, since you know so much about anatomy unlike us.

[Anonymous No.4062312]

>>4062123
Simplified anatomy only works if it's based on the correct.

[Anonymous No.4062315]

>>4062144
>>4062147
OP, don't listen to this ngmi. Your head shapes look fine. This actually looks improved over what you posted originally.

[Anonymous No.4062320]

>>4062309
I didn't claim to know shit, but other people are and I'm asking them to demonstrate what they know rather than just shouting "anatomy!" all the time.

>>4062312
Dumb pointless canned phrase that means nothing. Show how to improve OP's work.

[Anonymous No.4062322]

>>4062315
(although you seem to not really know where to place the neck, so that part looks a bit fucked.)

[Anonymous No.4062325]

>>4062200
yes

[Anonymous No.4062334]

>>4062320
It means quite a lot actually. how are you supposed to simplify something that you don't understand?
pyw. i want to see the work of someone who doesn't understand something so basic about art.

[Anonymous No.4062338]

>>4062334
I've never drawn anything before, I'm sure you're way better than me, since you have so much advice to give. Now show me how to improve OP's work.

[Anonymous No.4062345]

>>4062338
what i said. learn the anatomy through photo studies or read an anatomy book like Hampton. When you actually know what you're doing, simplify it down.

[Anonymous No.4062359]

>>4062199
No, it’s literally dislocated from the neck. You don’t know shit.

[Anonymous No.4062361]

>>4062325
Why?

[Anonymous No.4062366]

All OP needs to do is stop copying animu, knuckle down on fundies, learn how to recreate drawing from scratch without reference, and he will be able to draw whatever he wants. Worked for me.

[Anonymous No.4062372]

>>4062345
Show is how to do it, so we know you're not talking out your ass. You took your own advice right? You learned anatomy through Proko and Hampton right? If you know what's wrong with OP's work then fix it.

[Anonymous No.4062374]

The absolute state of /ic/ kek, mfw feedback thread is being derailed by a butthurt faggot who thinks you can draw proper anime without knowing anatomy

>>4062366
Unironically this. Just learn the fundies and go back to anime, it's literally this simple. By doing this my art improved, I draw faster and more accurately. Time well spent.

[Anonymous No.4062378]

>>4062374
Still waiting on that redline.
If OP is so obviously bad then someone just fucking redline it already.

[Anonymous No.4062381]

>>4062359
Not really. It's anime you can stylize it.

[Anonymous No.4062382]

>>4062366
>>4062374
What does your work from imagination look like, fundie anons?

[Anonymous No.4062387]

>>4062374
It's like trying to make someone eat their fucking vegetables and you have to sprinkle on something sweet for them to eat it, just stop copying anime and learn how to deviate away from life instead of copying from someone else who already knows how to. You'll just end up learning bad habits doing so.

[Anonymous No.4062392]

>>4062382
Not the frog poster, but he's in the right. Stop copying anime.

[Anonymous No.4062404]

>>4062381
Stylization is not an excuse for bad anatomy. Her head is literally dislocated from her neck. Look at her ears. Look at where the back of he or head is supposed to be.

>>4062378
I didn’t wanna do it cause OP is a shitty porn artist, and we don’t need any more of these primadonna faggots whoring themselves out for money, but I might just do it tomorrow morning to shut people up. I’m going to sleep for now tho.

[Anonymous No.4062807]

>>4062022
Unless you can say why you're not adding anything to the thread. Fucking faggot

[Anonymous No.4062865]

>>4061387
I fioudn your work cute anon. You were the only person in the porn thread who posted something decent (apart from myself). The other stuff there was just disgusting.

You are just at a level where you are good, but not extraordinary good.

[Anonymous No.4062877]

>>4061366
>My art is so boring that it can't even be called shit anymore.
That's an improvement, though. Now just stylize it enough to have your own style, without devolving it to be shit, and you are set.

[Anonymous No.4062879]

>>4062865
Also, the people here on this site are just retarded anyway. You shouldn't care what they think.

[Anonymous No.4063532]

>>4062865
>>4062879
Improve your eyes, anon. You might find it appealing but it's far from technically competent.

>inb4 who cares if it's technically competent if it's appealing
This is a fundies board that ranks and measures skill on the basis of fundies. Appeal is secondary and has always been secondary.

[Anonymous No.4064017]

>>4061366
It's Niggeritis, it's common on 4chan

[Anonymous No.4064026]

>>4062325
Why? OP is just drawing extremely popular characters in basic porn poses. Why would you want to draw something drawn a million times before

[Anonymous No.4065363]

>>4061366
>115 replies and 17 images omitted
You fucked up, /ic/.

[Anonymous No.4065599]

I'm never getting that redline, am I?

[Anonymous No.4065785]

>>4062062
I unironically love porn

[Anonymous No.4066291]

>>4061387
Make your lines meet, OP, it will make it look less like a sketch and more like a finished work.

Btw, fuck all the faggots in this thread, the only thing wrong with your drawing is prolly the hands and that's it. It looks pretty good with what you were going for here.

[Anonymous No.4066307]

>>4061430
Cringe

[Anonymous No.4066657]

>>4061598
/v/ is a shithole but atleast it filters /pol/s buzzwords. I wish /ic/ would do that, too.

[Anonymous No.4067834]

>>4062062
Because instead of anime/cartoons, manga and comics, most peoples exposure to art is fucking porn. Also I think there is just an incredible disproportionate amount of people trying to draw porn due to 4chan's nature on top of most of the really popular artist on the internet being NSFW. I agree this shit is really getting out of hand. Most people here are no better then the faggots over at /i/

[Anonymous No.4070573]

>>4061427
At least hes drawing unlike you faggot.

[Anonymous No.4070579]

>>4061366
As long as you draw NSFW, I will ignore you. Same for the others.

[Anonymous No.4070588]

>>4062081
Porn is the easiest way to make cheap bucks, but you’re certainly not gonna get rich doing it, especially with how saturated the market is getting with supply. Porn artists are the whores lf the industry.

A standard non-porn commissions will pay a lot higher on average if you’re skilled. Opting for porn instead for the money of improving further still and getting higher tier clients is essentially giving up and settling down at the start of the race.