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post and rate your characters?

>> No.3939219

>>3939176
my characters are pretty normal and plain, i just draw whatever clothes i feel like that day.

>> No.3939253

I don't have characters.

>> No.3939258

>>3939253
Then just create some

>>3939219
Make them more interesting

>> No.3939362
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Went to a crappy restaurant where you could draw on the table. "Girl with a hard hat". She's a cute engineer traveling through space making friends and trouble.

>> No.3939365
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>>3939362
"DVD, aka DaViD" an obsolete machine floating through space alone until the girl with a hard hat rebuilt him. He's super shy but happy to have a friend and be wanted.
Freaking mobile posting and the sideways images. I don't even care anymore.

>> No.3939399

>>3939176
hnng what a qt girl

>> No.3939567

>>3939176
They look so anorexic they might as well be stick men

>> No.3939576

>>3939258
Wish i could, but my imagination just suck.

>> No.3939649

Anyone have tips on character design? I get a lot of inspiration from other oc's, but I don't want to directly copy another persons idea.

>> No.3939663
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I've been working on this cast, any crit on their designs?

>> No.3939679

>>3939663
Strange with the faces on some of them, but looks okay... though my biggest gripe with this are your black/poc OCs. Literally just white anime characters with brown skin. 4/10

>> No.3939680

>>3939663
Very colorful, is it fantasy?

>> No.3939760

>>3939663
what's that scandinavian looking redhead doing in a group of what appears to be dutch east indies natives and colonials?

>> No.3939764

>>3939663
This may sound racist to you, but there's something awkward about the racial ratio. At a glance and with no context other than the image it seems like it was a concern for you to have racial variety, and if that's the case then that's pretty shallow.

>> No.3939792
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>>3939362
these characters and this concept are really cute, their designs are very charming. whos the red guy just out of frame in the dvd pic if i may ask?
>>3939663
this art looks really good, and personally i see nothing wrong with the diversity, though i think you would benefit from a variety in nose shapes and hair textures. other than that, these designs are great, i already kinda get a feel for each characters personality

>> No.3939810

>>3939663
Think about silhouette. If you look purely at that and not the details or colors, all the men have the same frame and body type. Same with the women. Think about varying their proportions and exaggerating feature or looking for more interesting shapes/ varying them(with clothing and stuff). You don't have to go the full pixar/ animation route where everything is super exaggerated and obvious shapes, but think about these things. They do this anime and manga too, which what seems to inspire you. At least the good designs like dorohedoro.

>> No.3939820

>>3939764
Dunno about that, my first thought when I saw the pic was that the 3 brown characters seem like they're related cause of the skin/hair/eye colors

>> No.3939825

>>3939663
The clothing isn't bad but overall it's just one character design + switching up different wigs.

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>>3939663
protip: don't try to make 'a new style' or some sort of hybrid of animu and western cartoon style unless you've been professionally drawing for years. Try to emulate one or the other.
>>3939679
>using the word "poc" unironically
yikers
also using the word 'poc' implies that you would see an Indian and African as the same group, which is ironically more racist lmfao

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>have thousands of followers
>draw zero white people
>draw only comfy black and brown girl art that always gets at least 3k
>get followed by japanese artists
>no one raises an eyebrow
Imagine being a wh*te boi in this day in this day and age lmao

>> No.3939840

>>3939828
>yikers
it's a damn shame you are alive.
I think that was also what the dude was pointing out that they -weren't- in the same group.
I want /pol/ to go, and stay goed.

>> No.3939847

I would but i can only commission my OCs from other artists.

>> No.3939849
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>>3939679
>Draw generic anime-esque figures without a dark skin pigment
>muh diversity!
>paint over generic anime-esque figures with a darker skin pigment
>das waycis!

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>>3939792
Hello, thankyou very much. There my only wholesome characters. The guy in red is my husband's character from his fantasy horror story. The male counterpart of twin shape shifting monsters that are never satiated.

>> No.3939922

>>3939764
>too many Brown people is awkward

Get help

>> No.3939928

>>3939922
Not really what I said. Kind of feel like I explained my point properly so I'd be repeating myself at this point in trying to explain it to you. You could try reading the post again. Thank you.

>> No.3939954

>>3939922
not op but:
Its looking more pandering than it is being inclusive.
Its odd that they put the pattern as dark light dark light dark. Its weird. Like they put TOO much thought into it. They're also NOT doing a good job of being inclusive and having a wide variety of characters because theres literally only two skin tones and three hair colors. The white people are whitest white and the brown all have the same brown tone. I don't really have a problem with the facial features because its stylized but there's no point in making everyone have either brown skin or creme colored skin.

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>>3939840
>implying I'm /pol/
I can't be bothered to read wall of text about some e-celeb tier drama of tinfoil hat conspiracies. When I go to the index page of the board, I can't comprehend what the fuck is going on/what its about in 70% of the threads that pop up.

also nice generalization again. shows what kind of mindset you brainlets have.

>I think that was also what the dude was pointing out that they -weren't- in the same group.
wtf do you even mean. When he says >your black/poc characters ?
okay so blacks are in their own group. what about the rest? I guess muslims and indians are the same to him.
Either way the whole "POC" word is fucking retarded in every way because its pointless. If you want to talk about the past, then blacks weren't discriminated the same way a russian would in america. I'd say it was bad for both of them, but each dealt with discrimination in their own ways. Just call them the nationality they are instead of bundling them up into one group.

or if you mean that the anon said that blacks are drawn differently then white people, then that depends on what style he wants to go for. If its western, then he'll have to have different face aesthetics because it emphasizes realism. If he's going for animu, then there won't be much of a difference in facial proportions, or in extreme cases, sameface syndrome because that's what the anime style is in general. Most animu will add a small 'U' curve under the lips for their blacks and sharper eyes for their black characters- but the changes are still really subtle compared to the other japanese characters in anime.

>> No.3940026

>>3939258
>Make them more interesting
Why would I? I like characters that are normal, its the context that's supposed to be appealing not the amazing super unique OC donut steel character.

>> No.3940031
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>> No.3940041

>>3939663
If it weren’t for the three with obligatory diversity colors this would be pretty forgettable.

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>>3940026
What's the context

>> No.3940062

>>3940055
hardcore lesbian bullying.

>> No.3940110

>>3939680
Yeah, I'm going for an Edwardian-inspired fantasy setting.

>>3939810
>>3939825
>Think about silhouette
Yeah, varying faces and bodies is really my weakness. I really do want to go for a cute/pretty animu-ish look for a lot of the characters, which makes it more difficult for me. Do you know any other good examples of anime/manga with good silhouette variety?

>>3939764
>>3939954
>Race
Oh dear.
I really don't care about racial variety with these designs. The dark skinned characters are supposed to all related, hence the same skin/hair/eye colors. I just had a story with characters from different parts of the world, there's really no agenda behind it.

>>3939760
The story's about the center dude accidentally leaving the fantasy Dutch East Indes to go to fantasy Europe, where the redhead lives.

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I had to do a quick sketch because I loss the polished version.

crits?
>>3939663
I really like the colors, though might I suggest trying to push the variety in face shapes a tab bit more.
>>3939792
Pretty good, I especially enjoy how smooth the lines are.

>> No.3940258
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Its supposed to be like a very retarded superhero story where the characters have weirdly specific powers

>> No.3940261

>>3939663
This artstyle screams 'western anime'/'tumblr'. Nothing can really save it. Like another anon said, it's pretty forgettable if not for the dark-skinned anime recolors.

>> No.3940263

>>3939663
Make the blonde vampire have a more attractive face and I'll read the story.

>> No.3940265

>>3940250
The biggest thing holding these designs back is your lack of fundies, everyone's faces and bodies are kinda wonky looking. Other than that they're all really generic looking, especially the two white guys. Those two in particular feel like stock characters I've seen in plenty of other works of media already. The only one who really stands out is the shortstack, and that's mainly just because she looks like a porn character compared to everyone else.
I really think you need to make these guys more distinctive.You're going for a cartoony style, so don't be afraid to exaggerate and play with shapes a little. Don't be afraid to make characters who look a little odd, because that often helps them look more distinct and memorable. You're just playing all way too safe, I feel.

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>>3940261
>This artstyle screams 'western anime'/'tumblr'. Nothing can really save it.
Would it really look better if I just went full animu? I've had readers tell me they like the style, but I've felt unsure about it. Is animu more appealing?

>> No.3940291

>>3940282
You don't need to go full animu. A few tips for you, since your style is bordering tumblrina but can be made a bit more unique/pleasing.

Don't put hair or freckles on your woman's arms. It's just not pleasing or necessary. Keep the freckles, they're very cute. Also make sure their hands are only the size of their face, anything beyond that will look strange. Maybe make the upper eyelashes more full instead of just simple thin lines, it helps to add depth. Also I'm not sure what it is, but some of their limbs look too long or too curvy.

Start with that and come back to the designs.

>> No.3940302

>>3940291
I'm genuinely curious, what elements make it look tumblr? Is it just the arm freckles and limbs and hands?

>> No.3940311

>>3940282
not that guy but the fact that you are prepared to change the style shows didnt have much inspiration for it in the first place. that could be why you went in such a formulaic direction as well. What artists do you like? What specifically inspires you? all artistic choices need intent for it to be memorable.

>>3940302
imo it doesnt look tumblr. its a common style with dark skinned characters SO THAT MakES T TUMBLR DRRR

>> No.3940322

>>3939365
10/10

Would read story.

>> No.3940325

>>3940302
It's the faces that make it tumblr. The mouth/eye shapes, eye placement, facial expressions, etc.

>> No.3940329
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>>3940311
>not that guy but the fact that you are prepared to change the style shows didnt have much inspiration for it in the first place.
I've just felt really insecure about it for a while. I have friends and other people tell me they really like it, but then I go on /ic/ and I hear that it looks like tumblrina trash and I have no idea what to believe anymore. I like drawing in my style, it's the style that I have the most drawing in and while it has a lot of issues I think it looks nice to me. But I know I'm unable to see a lot of my own flaws, and I worry that my art looks like shit and I'm just too Dunning-Kruger and hugboxed to recognize it.
My biggest inspiration is Kaneoya Sachiko, pic related. Some of my other ones are Juanmaodepp and Funamusea. I like cute faces that look not-quite anime, I just really like styles that have both animu and western influences.

>> No.3940330

>>3939792
Are those your characters in that pic you posted, anon? They look cool.

>> No.3940344

Threads like this are where it's especially easy to see just how much of /ic/ is crabs trying to tear shit down.

>> No.3940355

>>3940329
i really like those artists, Kaneoya Sachiko is a big inspiration to me as well. your art is not shit, and its not fundamentally flawed. I just dont see you taking the artistic risks that your influences have. by this i mean colour, structure, lines and shit. It looks good, but doesn't stand out. Youre on a good track right now, you grasp the fundies and everything, but you gotta experiment. I feel like youve only taken from the most entry-level aspects of anime and western. and if ur going for cute you gotta change those noses bro

>> No.3940368

>>3939663
looks like appabend, that youtuber guy

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sorry for the shitty lighting

>> No.3940388

>>3940329
Really anon it isn't bad. I did say it had tumblrina traits but they aren't blatant, and different skinned characters are not bad as much as people here might say otherwise. You just need to make attractive fitting designs for them.

I agree with >>3940355 though that you need to experiment a little. I think you have some great fundamentals down, you just need to try to play with lines and colors, styles of faces and eyes. I'm someone who also struggles with sticking to a singular style so I understand it's hard.

>>3940302
For me, it's mostly the additional wrinkles on the hands, or the eyes/head shape. But some of the features are also cute, so really it isn't that dramatic for me. I would not look at this and think 'tumblr', more I'd think 'cartoonish style with strange facial features'

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>>3940330
indeed they are! and thank you, im glad you think so
>>3940250
thank you, im trying to use my thin lineart brush more often. also im liking the variety in your cast, though i agree with another anon that playing more with shapes and stylization along with fundamentals would really make these designs pop more

>> No.3940518

>>3939663
Don't listen to the salty /beg/s, Anon. Your style is not the ugly Tumblr style. It reminds me of a more cartoony Voltron style. If you'd like to try something different, maybe experiment with coloring styles. But the aesthetics of your anatomy is great. Simple and cute and -not- tumblrina.

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>>3939176
Sure.
Some sketches of a playable character for a small project I'm fucking around in. Luckily it's 3D, unluckily animating in 3D is a pain in the ass.

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Concept art of a cyberpunk esc girl

>> No.3940550

>>3940541
noice

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>>3940550
Thanks bb.

>>3940547
Looking like Pink from VTM:R.
Might be hard to replicate for a full project.

>> No.3940615

>>3940031
Best post in this thread.

>> No.3940654

>>3940031
I dig this

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>>3940664

>> No.3940679

>>3940258
Bit too blobby and dark here, making everything look generic. I like muscle Lincoln tho

>> No.3940708

>>3939663
The girls look like the dudes in wigs. Similar body type and gesture. Hands, feet, and noses are too large, shoulders just as broad, no curves. Might want to give them nicer eyelashes and some blush to spice them up and make them stand out from the boys. Nice consistency in your style throughout.

>> No.3940709

>>3939792
looks like a serialized cartoon series. very nice man

>> No.3940729

>>3940709
shit dude thats honestly a huge compliment, thank you. im hoping it will be, one day

>> No.3940742

>>3939792
Really nice stuff, (middle guy is my favorite) if I were to make one critique, it's that too many of the characters have super long limbs. Having one or two of them with these sorts of proportions would be fine, and it would help them stand out. Otherwise, keep doing your stuff, I'd love to see the situations these characters get in to.

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>>3940742
thanks man, ill definitely try to tweak proportions in future art of these guys and in my art in general - everyones legs have kinda been bugging me since i finished this lineup

>> No.3940800

>>3940110
I'm a sucker for these less-covered parts of history, and the fantasy europe bits can probably turn interesting. What is this going to be? a comic? what's it called and where can I read it/check on your progress updates?

>> No.3940923

>>3940787
Not him, but do you have a blog? I'd love to see more of your stuff.

>> No.3941000

>>3939663
I feel like you’ve got a good base, but you could push some of their designs more with richer colors and less rounded shapes.

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This is from my sketchbook

>> No.3941065

>>3941040
Cute puppo. Is it a children's storybook?

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>> No.3941236

>>3941214
I like this one a lot. I actually kind of want to draw her. Got a blog?

>> No.3941305

>>3939828
This is cringe as fuck

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>>3941305
okay

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I haven't drawn all of them standing side by side, so I picked these out from different sources. I make indie games so my plan is to incorporate them into that, but I'd also really like to make a comic at some point.

>> No.3942916

Are there any good resources for making a good character design? I'm still /beg/, but I know that my ideas are not going to work, and that's definitely something I need to improve on
Or am I just sentenced to be creatively bankrupt because that's one of those things you just have or don't?

>> No.3942938 [DELETED] 

>>3941337
Don't be a nigger, anon.

>> No.3943085

>>3942916
There's a lot of analyzers on Youtube you could watch for insight on the thought process professionals may use. Abitorial's a pretty good one, though he doesn't dedicate his channel to it. His video on Erron Black from Mortal Kombat gives a lot of insight into the act of posing and designing silhouette.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h6VCy1uKpyI&list=PLzGB99bDYjTQP2-niEqifK-dsWAtC3v6q&index=28

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im a /beg/ so i have no characters worth writing home about but i'll post them.

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>>3943153

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>>3943153
my endgame is becoming good at drawing and making a sci fi webcomic starring a large space crew with the main character being the big shark head guy

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I have a idea of what I want my characters to be, my biggest problem is to start a history with them, like I have a plot, but I never start it because it's too difficult for me :'v

>> No.3943169

>>3941040
:)

>> No.3943170

>>3943168
very tumblr so just do some slice of life shit

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...

>> No.3944114

Bumping so I'll post mine soon.

>> No.3944120

>>3943168
>:'v
Get out.

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I don't post that much on /ic/, but I silently reads threads here. Since last time I posted (2+ years ago I think), I wrote a story about dragons, here are the character designs

>> No.3944214

>>3944209
Those designs are furry as fuck dude I can't put my finger on it but it just feels like it's made to be fursona porn

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>>3939176

>> No.3944246

>>3944209
Really love your rendering I kinda agree with other anon it seems more your inspired by Disney type proportions as most furries are. They look fine to me though.

>> No.3944251

>>3944246
I like the rendering too. But it's not even Disney style exactly, you know? There's something else about it. This is going to haunt me in my dreams until I figure it out.

>> No.3944271

>>3944246
>>3944251
Haha, I see what you mean. I do mlp art for almost 7 years now so maybe that doesn't help

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>>3939176
yup, I do.

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W.I.P. drawing for my friend. I had to draw his character based on descriptions. Kind of half-assed though.

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Eh why not I'll post a few. Here's the halfassed first reference sheet I made for myself. Was mostly just phoning it in to get a feel for what I'll actually be drawing in the comic when I feel ready to make it.

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>>3945053

Here's the char Im working on design and reference for atm

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>>3945056

Here's an old one I drew when I was just starting drawing. Will have to redo her for the project.

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This is just a uniform because I can’t think of any good casual clothes for her.

>> No.3945448

>>3941214
More?

>> No.3945647

>>3940923
sorry for the late response - its kinda empty right now but im trying to start posting stuff to my twitter @radsaturdays

>> No.3945746

>>3942844
without knowing anything about these guys I can say I only like bottom right for sex appeal and top right for the edge.
Others seem boring to me and the clothing on the big guy kinda ruins his silhouette, maybe need to work on your fabric skills since that cape looks like I would draw one

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>>3941236
>>3945448
Thanks for your interest anons! I go under @elektro.lurch on insta, but i dont have posted any characters like pic related there yet

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>>3939792
I really like the flowing loose lines, but something about the faces seems off to me, they're very crowded and the mouths bisect the head in half. Most of your characters also have that Dreamworks face going on.

>> No.3945918

>>3942844
So thats what all might would look like if he was a snake and also a pirate

>> No.3945954
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3945954

murmay is still on, yes?

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3946005

>>3940800
Yeah, it's a comic I'm working on. No pages out yet, still haven't settled on a title either. I'm still in the scripting phase. I post the art I do for it @Nessiefynn on twit and Tumblr if you're interested.

>>3940518
Thanks, anon. Honestly Voltron is the kind of style I would like to be able to draw in, though I don't wanna try and rip it off wholesale.

>>3940355
>>3940388
Thanks for the reassurance and advice, anons. I guess I'm just feeling a little aimless, I thought I was happy-ish about my style but now feel more lost than ever. I just wanna draw cute and pretty boys to be quite honest. I tried just refining the style that came naturally to me for a long time and I guess that just has me in a boring rut now, and when I try drastically different stuff it either looks bad to me or is just a straight up rip off of artists I do like. Oh well. I guess I have to rethink a lot of stuff.
Sorry for the rant.

>> No.3946034

>>3945916
thanks anon, ill try to better construct my faces in future work. dreamworks face especially is a huge crutch of mine that i need to break

>> No.3946099

>>3945748
>insta

Thank god. It's the only social networking I use and so few people use it for art so it's nice to actually be able to follow someones work every now and then.

>> No.3946144

So as an aspiring /beg/ do you guys have any suggestions for getting the same characters to look consistent at different angles?

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3946335

>>3945746
Thanks for the feedback. The cape is actually a coat, that might explain why the folds look odd.
>>3945918
More of a hippo really. Pic related.

>> No.3946362

>>3946335
I think you might want to bring out the hippo influences more. It's really hard to get that impression from the current design. Something like a hippo-like muzzle/head shape or more prominent tusks could really make the character look more unique and convey the hippo aspect better, I feel.

>> No.3946370

>>3946335
go orcish with the tusk, so you can see them

>> No.3946375

>>3946335
>>3946370
I agree, make them orc tusks. Also, fill out his waist so that it's wider, can keep the V shape to his body but with such wide shoulders and broad head his waist would look better if it was more solid

>> No.3946391

>>3944214
it's because they look smug

>> No.3946399

this became quite a nice thread, we should do these more often

>> No.3946400

>>3944209
I like these a lot. They do look very Disney-furry esque, but I think in a good way. They feel nostalgic to me. If these were characters in a cartoon or game when I was 8 I would've been all over this.

>> No.3946403

>>3946005
>I just wanna draw cute and pretty boys to be quite honest
Don't we all anon? Well that and big gruff old manly men. For me anyway.

I hope your not too disheartened because I would like to see your comic come to fruition one day.

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3946426

>>3945748
Thanks dude. Also, here's some of muh shit

>> No.3946430
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3946430

>>3946005
Thank you fren anon for making such a cutie. My fav kind of style, gave me a good one

>> No.3946439
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3946439

Say something bad about my girl and I'll break your kneecaps

>> No.3946648
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3946648

Had an idea for a comic strip one time, nothing special.
I still like to draw the characters occasionally.

>> No.3946668
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3946668

this is the concept for a comic i was trying to start but never did something

>> No.3946678

>>3946426
this is nice! simplistic, but you get a clean sense of their characters.

>> No.3946682

>>3946426
really charming

>> No.3946965
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3946965

>>3946430
Thank you for this drawing, anon. It's really cute and brightened my day. I really love it and am flattered that you would draw it.

>> No.3946969

>>3946648
that bunny is hot

>> No.3947274
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3947274

Wanted to do a comic with this vibe before realizing the workload for that aesthetic in multiple panels on each page would be retard-hard.

>> No.3947297

>>3947274
Yeah, these designs are kind of interesting but it would help you a lot to simplify it a bit for the purposes of a comic. I think the biggest thing you could do is maybe simplify the mechanical arm into one larger form/shape. Not saying to get rid of all the tubes, but instead maybe you could combine them into one mass that you can easily draw details/textures on instead of having to think about the forms of each one. Maybe you could look at Demizu Posuka's art for some inspiration? She has a lot of complicated looking forms and textures and shapes in her comic, but draws them very loosely so that they're manageable for a weekly manga art schedule, that might give you some ideas on how to deal with your designs.

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3947650

hows this for an OC

>> No.3947669

>>3947650
I think he could function alright in a story if what you're going for is an "everyman" kind of feeling, or a sense of lack of identity with this character. He's kind of bland and forgettable, but I feel it's done in a way where that could be interesting if that's the point of the character.

>> No.3947672

>>3947650
10/10 for a /k/ slice of life comic.
Pretty worthless for anything else.

>> No.3947675

>>3947274
Weak

>> No.3947691

>>3943168
It’s so cute! I really love your style

>> No.3947706

>>3947650
Fucking squid

>> No.3947708
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3947708

Her name is Cum Starved Beast. She is a joke I grew to cherish.

I still can't do her justice because I suck, and would love if anybody would help me figure out her physique.

>> No.3947715

>>3947708
>cum starved beast
KEK

>> No.3947844

>>3946426
I want to know everything about the adventures and misadventures of this posse! Pls tell me there is more than this image.

>> No.3947865

>>3940250
Why is Scooby a human?

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3948121

How are these?

>> No.3948125

This is a deser sentinel i drawn fucking ages ago.
I got much better but i still love this one the most.

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3948127

>>3948125
Fug

>> No.3948140

>>3948121
I like the variety of faces and archetypes but I think you should work on the outfits.They all look kinda uninspired to me. The right 2 guys look like very generic fantasy anime characters, with nothing distinguishing them from every other fantasy character out there. And the left girl honestly feels like a generic goth girl oc. The 2nd to left guy is most interesting looking to me, but that's mainly by virtue of coming from an unusual background compared to the rest of the cast.
I think you should really work on making these characers look more unified if they all exist in the same work together. The girl seems to come from a different time period from the rest of them, as she's wearing very modern fashion compared to the rest. I feel the cast as a unit would function better if you either made them all wear clothes from a similar-feeling era, or even went dull-animu and gave them all unusual outfits.

>> No.3948151

>>3948140
Thanks, this is very solid advice. I'll work on it!

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3948324

>>3939176
Here are a bunch of characters I designed.
The first row are just three designs for a monster collecting game I'm gonna make. Only 3 of 100, since I dont have completed artwork of the rest.
Second row are designs for the two main protagonists of a webcomic Im working on. The first is an herbalist bird named Jejune who can somewhat read the future with tasseology, and the second is an invisible zombie whos forgotten her name and seeks to avenge her murder. Her invisible form is the colored one, and to the right of that her visible form.
Third row are character designs for the next webcomic I'll work on, which takes place in a world similar to ours, only humans are replaced with various anthropomorphized monsters from myth and legend. Unfortunately, I dont have much completed artwork of them to share.

>> No.3948366

MCs from my comic.

>> No.3948372
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3948372

>>3948366
REEEEEE

>> No.3948378

>>3948372
Cute but I think you could do with more facial variation. They all have essentially the same noses, eyes, and face shapes. I see you're going for a cartoony/anime inspired style, so different eye shapes are usually a nice way to get some variation without breaking that cute style.

>> No.3948387

>>3948378
Thank you! To be honest I didn't even notice this “sameface” problem until you mentioned it. I'll work on it with that eye suggestion in mind.

>> No.3948403

Is it just me or do the best designs in this thread have the least number of replies, if any at all?

>> No.3948438

>>3948403
So why dont you go ahead and maybe.. i dont know.... Actually reply to stuff you like?

>> No.3948477

>>3940031
Yo that's fucking rad bro
Tell us more!

>> No.3948562
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3948562

Working on some cute Kobold paper model designs for D&D. Still learning photoshop and getting use to my tablet. Trying to nail down the style I want to go for. Feel like I should go more simple. I will have more time later this week to get some proper concepts done.

Found this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4atFicBvhMM&t=152s Got to pratice line art and clean up a lot more.

>> No.3948589

>>3948403

Why not reply then

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>> No.3948686
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>> No.3948687
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last one

>> No.3948703

>>3943167
the black sword contrast very well with the blackish ambience of the character

>> No.3948716
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3948716

>>3947708
>>3947715
Jokes aside keep at it man. While it's not to my taste (not 100% anyway) the best way I've found to gitting gud is to find something you want to draw and keep it with you, forever improving it.

>> No.3948728

>>3939679
>Literally just white anime characters with brown skin.
That's how you draw anime characters with brown skin. You know all those realistic details the face has, how often does an anime character have that? Now how often is that character not evil?

>> No.3948740

>>3947708
holy shit

>> No.3948827

>>3940386
cute, design some nice outfits and you'll have a good thing going

>> No.3948834
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3948834

ill share some other characters since this threads still going, ive been really enjoying seeing everyones stuff this past week or so!

>> No.3948837
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>> No.3948840

>>3948121
The witch stands out too much, she doesnt seem to be from the same world as the others

>> No.3948891
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3948891

What do you guys think? He's supposed to be the leader of a Japanese Idol group. I haven't really done character design before

>> No.3948894

>>3948891
his legs seem short, but nice

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3948904

>>3948891
Agreed with >>3948894
I think he's serviceable, but if you want to do bishounen designs I think you should put more thought into stuff like the accessories and outfit and hair. A lot of the characters of this archetype are gonna have the same face/body, because that's the core appeal, and that's fine. But I think that means if you want this character to be recognizable you have to put more legwork into making him look unique outfit-wise.
I'm not a DMMD fan, but I think you could possibly look at that series for some inspiration. I've never played this series, but all the characters are recognizable to me just because they all have very distinct styles of dress, even though they're kinda samey looking handsome guys at the base. I feel that thinking about this character design from that angle might help you improve it and make it more interesting.

>> No.3948915

>>3947650
i really like this. points if you keep the hat and shadows at all times, even when he's lit from beneath. His face is so simple it has a character of its own, like saitama

>> No.3948922
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3948922

>>3948891
Did a quick edit. I brought the upper half of his head down because the face seemed too long, made the head smaller, and stretched the legs

>> No.3948928

>>3948894
>>3948904
Thank you for the feedback. I'll take note of this :). I'll experiment some more

>> No.3948932

>>3948928
Whoops, I meant to mention >>3948894 as well.

>>3948922 Thank you! I'll take this into account as well

>> No.3949202

>>3948834
solid. looks like a bunch of 80s dudebros. your sense of gesture is really strong. I'd love to see how this piece looks polished up and colored.

>> No.3949269

>>3948837
80's Anime anti-heroine, good stuff, mate.

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>>3939176
Lads, how do I tell my friend that all her OCs are trash? Ill post my own as proof this isnt my art

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>>3949291

>> No.3949293
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3949293

>>3949291
>>3949292
This is my trash as comparison

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3949331

>>3949291
>>3949292
>>3949293
Holy shit. Don't want to dogpile on cringy art too much but reminds me of this really annoying autistic happa chick I knew in middle school. She used to draw stuff exactly like this -- weird furry/demon/monster anime characters with overdesigned outfits and really really slender bodies. Pic related is what she drew after she started improving a little bit. There has to be a name for art like this.

Your robot looks great!

>> No.3949353

>>3949331
I guess: Deviantart-tier art? is deviant art even relevant anymore?

>> No.3949358

>>3939663
I have no idea what any of these people do other than the guy with the sword who's an adventurer or something?

>> No.3949361

>>3949291
>>3949292
Both of you are too young to use this website and are extremely gay

>> No.3949362

>>3949293
Fuck redact my last comment your stuff looks mostly okay but your friend needs to learn fundamentals.

>> No.3949364

>>3948904
They’re making idol characters, not fuccbois from porn games with art that already looks dated.

>> No.3949366

>>3949353
stop it anon you're making me feel old :(

>> No.3949368

>>3949361
This.
>my art is shit, but at least her art is shittier, r-right /ic/??

>> No.3949369

>>3949362
Thanks for the whiplash

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3949371

>>3949368
I've been caught

>> No.3949499

>>3949369
Lmao. The lower works shit on the previous one but that's only when comparing. It doesnt really stand on it's own so my last statement still stands.

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3949606

>>3948121
I like this, its classic

>> No.3949616

>>3949606
Ed edd n eddy

>> No.3949630

>>3949606
i really like your linework, its really satisfying to look at

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3949666

>>3949630
Thamks!
>>3947844
Unfortunately, there's not much else about these lads for now

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3949732

>>3949358
Hm, thanks for the crit anon. I'll try to consider that angle more as I work on them, I think that'll give me more guidance.
>the guy with the sword who's an adventurer or something?
He's supposed to be serving in the military. I was trying to base his design off Yogyakarta Guards, but I guess that might be muddling things a little.

>> No.3949733

>>3949666
I really like your art and designs man, they're really unique and have a lot of personality to them.

>> No.3949834

>>3949606
It's amazing! You made my day. Thank you a lot anon!

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3949861

>>3948837
All wrapped up.
Call her sophelia seville. After the fishing town in spain.

>> No.3949865

>>3949861
hahaha

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3949871

>>3949865
No bulli

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3949930

lizard man sex pervert

>> No.3949947

>>3947669
Slight disagree on that. You have so many "wacky wild goofy" characters these days and yet none of them stand out, sometimes less is more and that character definitely pulls it off in my opinion. The plain features, pale skin and hat shadow are just some great, memorable touches, simple as that.

>> No.3949953

>>3949947
I was going for a plain look like saitama or the chiito from girls last tour.

>> No.3949975

>>3947650
This is really nice.

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Cardinal prince. Not the main character, but my favorite.

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>>3940265
>>3940411

Thanks, I tried going out of my comfort zone and pushing the faces a bit more. You mention how they look like stock characters, which is funny because they kinda were and I didn't really think about it til you said something, so now I going to make both their's designs and personalities more interesting. Also still grinding those fundies.

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3950178

>>3939663
Trying to incorporate some of the feedback I got as I work on these designs more. Any thoughts on this?

>> No.3950200

>>3950178
I really like it! He seems a little short but I'm also beg so take it with a grain of salt.

>> No.3950214

If you see clothes in a drawing and like them and use clothes heavily based of them for your character, is it stealing? Is it bad to not make up your own clothes from 100% scratch?

>> No.3950233

>>3950214
I don't see it as stealing. Unless you're directly copying, if it's from a work of media, it could be seen as more of an homage/reference. I'm not very good at designing clothes myself so I like to look at online stores to see realistically what the character would wear. Ex: for a teenage girl character I would choose clothes from Forever 21.

>> No.3950238
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3950238

>>3950214
It's kinda stealing, but it depends on the outfit. The more iconic/unique the outfit, the more like stealing it is. You can't just take Naruto's jumpsuit and slap it on your oc, but you could probably slide with taking a casual contemporary outfit from a character. It's still best to make adjustments to tailor it to your character and make it into something new, if only to avoid accusations of plagiarism like pic related

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3950241

>>3948891
He just looks like a regular anime high schooler.
Try taking some inspiration from something like Uta no Prince sama with how he dresses himself in comparison to the other members.
His expression and stance says "I'm a little bit of a troublemaker heartthrob" but his outfit (aside from the star) says "I'm a serious student and like to be comfortable but not too comfortable because there's a tie around my neck."
Specifically if he's flirty or showy he can have his shirt open, maybe unbutton two or three of the top buttons. Other ways to vary a dress on a male character are to tuck a tie into a front pocket (maybe he's busy all the time and his tie keeps getting in his coffee), do special tie knots for a guy who's extra, some guys can't properly tie a tie so it's either too loose or the skinny end is too long/ short. Maybe they wear cufflinks or tie clips. Maybe they keep their wallet on a chain in their back pocket, maybe their phone has stickers or charms on it or a really decorative case. Maybe they're a bit lazy and he doesn't press his paints and they've lost the front crease, or maybe they're bad at house work and there are multiple iron lines. Do their pants drag around their heels because the inseam is too long.
Is their hair long because they're lazy or they are really into hair metal, or are they girly, are they compensating for their thinning hair? Do they paint their nails? Wear rings or necklaces/chains? Is he bad at putting colors together or dressing himself on days off? Does he only wear sweatpants and basketball shorts even with a dress shirt? Does he wear gaudy hawaiian shirts or graphic tees with odd in jokes?
It's all non fiction, you don't have to have a dress code for your story.

A leader should be able to stand out from the rest of the group as he would be the main guy to go after in the harem.

>>3950178
you went from holly brown to something with a lot more life in it. Vibrant colors really helped.

>> No.3950258

>>3948684
>>3948685
>>3948686
Love your sense of design and your use of hatching and colour.

Not a fan of the simplified eyes in this one, >>3948687, but like the others I love the rest of the design, colours and lighting.

>>3950178
I think this looks much better. The vibrancy helps but so does the slight stylistic changes you've made.

How do you feel about it now though? It gives off a very different feel when compared with your original post, that you said you were very fond of.

>> No.3950342

>>3950241
Hey, thanks for the advice. I took some of it and Tried making a new variation of the original school uniform I made. What do you think?

I wanted to convey the idea that he likes cute things/ mascot characters so I tried using stars as a motif. I wanted to show hes a little bit disorganized so I untucked half of his shirt as well. (I also untucked one of his pant legs from his shoe but I didnt screenshot it.)I added some earings to be more playful too.

>> No.3950344
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3950344

>>3950342
I guess I forgot to attach image lmao

>> No.3950345
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3950345

/beg/ here, drew this lady randomly 2 months into learning. I like her, but am thinking about revising her design.
Anybody have any resources on character design?

>> No.3950365

>>3950200
>>3950241
Thanks anons, I'm glad I'm on a better track.

>>3950258
>How do you feel about it now though? It gives off a very different feel when compared with your original post, that you said you were very fond of.
Eh, I feel like it looks weird, because I changed the style bring back habits I tried to break myself away from for that design in particular, like the big eyes. The character looks kinda young to me when I intended him to be in late teens, so I'm not sure about that either. But it's a fun way to draw, so I'll stick with it for a while and see how it goes.

>> No.3950374

>>3942844
Looks sick my man, very Skullgirls like.
>>3944209
Love the colour and contrast.

>> No.3950382

>>3940664
>>3940665
These are really cool!

>> No.3950385

>>3950178
Indo anon?

>> No.3950386

>>3939663
I hate them, and by extension I hate you for bringing them into the world. It's all the same half-assed no-style Tumblr shit every other kid who isn't copying anime is doing. It's too CalArts. What, a cast of skinny young people who are quirky and upbeat? Go fuck yourself. Study how 19th century clothes actually fit on people, stop being afraid of texture, and gain some conviction in your anatomy.

>> No.3950387
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These two represents the Finnish posters on /int/, one autistic, one gay, both weebs. They're lions because that's the Finnish coat of arm, and also that all Finns are furries.

>> No.3950392

>>3950385
Yeah, that's me. If you're the anon who made the Indo comment, thanks because SE Asian-inspired aesthetics were not my original intention, but you made me want to try incorporating more in and I think it's been helping me.

>>3950386
Sorry if I drew a bean mouth, anon. If you spy issues with my anatomy, I sincerely only request that you redline them so I can learn from them.

>> No.3950400
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>>3950387

>> No.3950401

>>3950400
Okay, this is epic.

>> No.3950444

>>3950344
I think you should make his chin less pointy to avoid the glass cutting look from Free

>> No.3950555

>>3950400
Significantly better

>> No.3950573

>>3947706
Pyw devildog

>> No.3950638
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>>3950400
Am Finn, lol'd.

>> No.3950645

>>3950382
Thank you!!

>> No.3950652

>>3950140
i like these a lot, but, if those are fucking tittays, i don't understand why she'd need them for anything but a bunga-bunga porno, like they're HUUUGE and distracting af like wtf. Otherwsie great job.

>> No.3950663

>>3950652
I like how distracting they are. Could probably tie it in to some generic female qualities like motherhood and empathy.

>> No.3950668

>>3950663
Hmm maybe you're right, i didn't look at it that way.

>> No.3950910

>>3950387
>one autistic, one gay, both weebs
Any of them (male) ?

>> No.3950919

>>3950652
>>3950663
I think the issue is that unless the character is for porn/lewds, the tits are just too big. You can have a girl with big tits but when they're bigger than her head when the rest of her body is reasonably-proportioned they just looks out of place. Maybe you could incorporate it more naturally if you exaggerated more of her curves so it would look more proportional.

>> No.3951110

>>3950444
Alright, i'll try that

>> No.3951122
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A demon that manifests itself whenever the person that its possensing manifests any strong emotion , this one is suppossed to represent anger, im this case if the person it is possesing doesnt know how to tanr their own anger its will become eben more violent and less anthtopomorphic

>> No.3951124

>>3951122
Damn I made a lot of stupid spelling mistakes

>> No.3951226
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>> No.3951231
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>> No.3951234
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>> No.3951238

>>3951234
a cute

>> No.3951239

>>3951234
The face is cute but I really can't make sense of the hair.

>> No.3951332

>>3950910
Yes, the one in blue hat, that's why he's gay.

>> No.3951341

>>3939792
holy shit this is really great but i could change some of the color palettes if i were you and work on them more otherwise i love it man really great stuff

>> No.3951342

>>3950386
>>3939663
this is harsh but true

>> No.3951347

>>3951332
>tfw no qt, micro-jean wearing, Finnish/shut-in, weeb bf

Why even live bros

>> No.3951648
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Sketch of an Owl Huntress I'm trying to make

>> No.3951651
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>>3951648
More of her.

>> No.3951659
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3951659

Quick idea sketch for an anime convention mascot design

>> No.3952319

>>3943165
draw the dick u coward. either go full ken crotch or make it a big fat cock. but seriously though, you should make the snout longer to make the figure more balanced. if you still want to keep the headshape short, then make it bigger and broader so its more proportionate. neck things are distractingly tiny and cute, instead of emphasising how threatening it is. i would consider varying teeth sizes, instead of making a generic zigzag shape. real life carnivores usually have different types and sizes for their teeth.

>> No.3952349
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>>3939663
Literally all 3 of your black characters have the same indigo-tinted brown skin tone. Even black people have varying shades of how dark or fair they are within their own family. That’s why their designs seem so forgettable to everyone here. They’re indistinguishable from one other other than in terms of gender and height.
A well-off person who can afford glasses, weapons (that implies time to train and money to pay for a blacksmith) and a full suit in the Edwardian period is probably going to have a different complexion than the servant girl or a factory worker/chimney sweeper/working class teenage boy who spends all day working outside.

>> No.3953139

>>3951341
thanks fren, im glad you like it! any suggestions on what i could do color palette-wise? most of their colors have been pretty set in stone for a few years now so id be curious to test some others out

>> No.3954351

>>3944209
Grrrrreat! i can't but feel very jealous about your skills and design abilities, Keep up the good work nevertheless.

>> No.3954892

Everyone is really talented. I loved going through the thread and seeing your characters.

>> No.3955033
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>>3945037
Her design is done.

>> No.3956366
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>>3939902
>>3947650

im in love with them, gj

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>> No.3956372
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I haven't draw her a in a long time tho, in fact I never posted her out side of /ic/

>> No.3956391
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Shitpost-chan and frens

>> No.3956430
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Forgive the poor anatomy bc this is old af

>> No.3956815

>>3956369
Drawing side view angles of dragons it's the equivalent of drawing 3/4 anime girls. I don't mind it, but kinda boring over all, there's so much you can do with the whole smug, drinking wine, dragon thing

>> No.3956847
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A concept sketch for a character in a 3d animation I working on.

>> No.3956884
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>>3956847
And the dragon she is suppose to fight.

Also the setting is on a mostly white snowy mountain.

>> No.3956896
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>>3956372
Really cool design. Simple and interesting.
>>3956391
Nice coloring and designs. They look fun.
>>3956430
I think she's cute. Reminds me of a mix between Cinderella and Winry from fma.
>>3956847
>>3956884
These are neat, I really like app the details on the girl. The dragon looks a little plain in comparison and has the body type of a typical house pet.

>> No.3956941

>>3939679
Maybe they’re Indian

>> No.3956943

>>3939835
Post instagram

>> No.3956961
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3956961

>>3939176
Don't really do alot of these but this is the most recent I have (around a year and a half old)

>> No.3956997

>>3939362
>>3939365
>2 fucking weeks ago
i would seriously read this

>> No.3957261

>>3956961
not bad for porn, bad for sfw

>>3956847
work on the overall shape, push the saturation either on the clothes or the skin

>>3956391
diggin' the cleopatra like girl and the robo frog, others are forgettable

>>3956372
look for alternatives on the hairstyle/face, clothes are pretty good

>> No.3957302

>>3939792
you gotta make man-satuski a bit more distinct.

>> No.3957684
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Bunch of characters for a BL webcomic I intend to post Soon [TM] when I get my fundies down pat. Guess who the main couple is.

>> No.3957691

>>3957684
I think you might want to double check your proportions, everyone has long torsos and short legs.

>> No.3957692

>>3957691
>proportions
Ah, nuts. Oh well, this is just a WIP so I can easily adjust it. Thanks for the heads-up.

>> No.3957732
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3957732

I am forever trapped drawing shipgirls. I hate it.

>> No.3957737

>>3940250
>>3939663
>>3940261
>>3940282
Not that anon but it looks like Western Anime/Tumblr because you draw white people and paint them brown and you're clearly filling a quota because there's nothing different about those characters except the skin color. If you avoid drawing that super generic faux Disney sameface on every character and give black people actual black traits, it will look less amateurish. The rest is solid, it's just the faces. Also please draw female hands more delicately unless it's a point about the character to have rough hands.
See how this >>3939792 doesn't look as Tumblr-y even if it's Tumblr faux Disney because the artist did a design job on the faces and he put some thought behind the characters' race.

>> No.3957748

>>3956372
This is one of the few times I found something on /ic/ arousing. Good job anon, post more of this erotic catgirl

>> No.3957756 [DELETED] 
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this was for a class assignment and I was wondering how to make improvements for anything i do in the future

>> No.3957776
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For a class assignment, anything I can keep in mind for future assignments?

>> No.3957785

>>3957776
What directives did you have to follow?

>> No.3957806

>>3957785
we were asked to draw up a character line art and to make their silhouettes and shapes easily discernible and different from one another. apart from that not too much else was required.

>> No.3957808

>>3953139
If i were you i would change the colour of the blond guy's top tank shirt since it is too distracting.Black woman to the far left has a shirt that is nearly identical in colour with her jacket, there is not much contrast there and the guy to the far right has a weird mix of dark colours they arent exactly the same but they are very similar with different tones.I would either make them the same colour as if he is wearing a suit or increase the contrast by giving pants a much lighter colour.

>> No.3957811

>>3957737
What should I do if I'm drawing dark southern asians and not black people?

>> No.3957814

>>3939679
based retard

>> No.3957832

>>3957806
Technically yes, there is some sort of variety going on with the silhouettes but the two guys are too similar, so I'd change that.
As a design piece it's no good, the characters don't have any personality.
The villain has her face covered but she isn't really conveying an attitude with her gesture, what is she doing with her hands? The orc woman is ugly in a bad way, she's not a fun kind of ugly you know what I mean? She's not endearing or sympathetic and her hands and pose don't really say anything. The two guys convey very basic "gloomy" and "smug" and nothing else, the little girl is OK although still very basic. You should put more of yourself into the designs, don't be so timid.

>> No.3957836
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>>3957261
>not bad for porn, bad for sfw
what did he mean by this

>> No.3957841

>>3957836
It's good if you want to make musclegirl porn, but a little bland and forgettable otherwise.

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>>3957841
aw ok thanks

>> No.3957982

>>3939663
>Black people
>With Caucasian features like straight hair and amber eyes
Every fucking time lmao

>> No.3958011

>>3957684
BL?

Ohhhhhh, boilove?

Excellent. I was about to comment on how cute the guys were before it clicked.

You're literally at the point where you able to pull of my dream and goal with art. Good job anon!

>> No.3958038

>>3958011
Thank you for those kind words, Anon. I'm really flattered.

That said, I don't think I'm quite "there" yet. Hence why I'm on this board and working on my fundamentals.

>> No.3958047

>>3957732
Can't complain about the milkers, that's pretty good.

>> No.3958060

>>3957982
they could be indian.

>> No.3958198
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>>3957748
she was supposed to be very lewd, but she's too cute for that

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>>3947708
>Cum Starved Beast

>> No.3959003

>>3957832
Alrighty, I will keep in mind to push the designs further, add more personalities in the character's gestures/poses, and not play it so safe in the future

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how do these guys look?

>> No.3959117

>>3957684

it doesn't feel like the 39 and 44 year old matches their ages, add a bit of variation on the facial features if you're going with that sort of style, same with height, the shape is important too, make it so you can guess which character is who with only their silhouette, I understand it is a sketch but uniforms look too stretchy


>>3958198

cute wan

>>3959088

group in the middle is the most interesting

>>3959089

make the first two dinos from the left a little bit more distinctive from each other

>> No.3959153

>>3959088
I like the ones on the middle, mostly because they have more dynamism, and their outfits say more than just being clothes

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Wheres my post-human trans-modernist anarcho-cyber communists at? Ready to bash the fasc? On three... one...two...!

>> No.3959676

>>3959656
Auch! You're cutting me Anon!

>> No.3959824

>>3947650
Aww he’s clenching his little fists

>> No.3960325

>>3949930
so THIS is the reason why people immediately assume I'm a lewd person

>> No.3960451
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bumping this thread with my /v/ermin since that's the closest thing i have to consistent character designs.

>> No.3960513
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old character I'm currently reworking