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how's my anatomy /ic/?

>> No.3924039

>>3924037
Too much Loomis.

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>>3924042

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>> No.3924063

>>3924037
you’re off to a good start anon practice as much as you can. Try looking at resources for drawing figures. I found this on google https://line-of-action.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing

>> No.3924064

>>3924037
ignore the detail anatomy for now and focus on the major anatomy of the figure for now
draw a lot from ref figure
and work on the planes of the head

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>>3924063

>> No.3924107

Sigh

>> No.3924110

are you that guy?

>> No.3924113

>>3924110
Spider in hand guy?

>> No.3924143

>>3924113
yeah that guy

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>> No.3924151

why

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>>3924037
Are you even trying?

>> No.3924556

>>3924037
meme/10

>> No.3924557

>>3924037
MS SKELE

>> No.3924558

>>3924037
not gonna lie. this is kinda creepy it looks extremely uncanny, but you have potential. keep practicing.
and also make her fatter, she looks like she weighs 30 pounds, you are going overboard with defining the bones. also make the arms shorter, the wrists should line up with crotch when the arms are down.

>> No.3924560 [DELETED] 

>>3924037
Jeeping fuck. That’s bad.

>> No.3924563

>>3924558
it's so weird. Like he has some understanding of 3d space, but it's as if he's never seen a human before, only ever heard stories and descriptions of them.

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>>3924037
You r the same guy! kek

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>>3924037
>how's my anatomy
Accurate, but the color (lack of), the monotone shading, and those soulless looking eyes make it look like the animus tried designing a human character to integrate itself in /ic/ and intends on compiling more data, such as preferences, linework, coloring, etc. until it believes it has a complete compendium and starts sending quality invitations for unsuspecting artists and onlookers to come to its domain in the guise of buying/learning from it locks the door behind them and they are never to be seen again.
...
>Esdeath eyelashes
At least the simulator has taste.

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>this thread

>> No.3924643

Tbh I don't even care how bad you draw, I sincerely want to see more

>> No.3924655

>>3924563
XDDDDD fuckin lel

>> No.3924657

>>3924594
this shit is cult status, he could become big on twitter with this uncanny shit in no time lmao

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>>3924567
It's been a while since I actually, physically flinched at something posted here.

>> No.3924793

>>3924683
did you forgot to open OP pic?

>> No.3924815

Her face is too fat for her anorexia/whatever she has.
also, kys.

>> No.3924908

>>3924815
She's gettig her mallet.

>> No.3924960

Post more, this shit is outright fascinating.

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>>3924037

>> No.3925015

>>3924043
Not enough Loomis.

>> No.3925028

not my proudest fap XD

>> No.3925035

>>3925028
xd (unironically)

>> No.3925045

>>3924548
what is this retard

>> No.3925066

>>3924548
Are you?

>> No.3925087

>>3924037
It's good that you're learning anatomy, but your understanding of it is still clumsy and incomplete, so everything is very exaggerated.
You need to look at more references to see for instance that women don't have their ribcage showing like that. References are necessary to know the extent of anatomy, what needs to be articulated and what is more subtle or not showing, what the proportions will be and so on.

You're on your way there though and you have a working grasp of anatomy and perspective so far. You still need tons of work though. Particularly with the head, try to achieve a more realistic style with the features like the nose, lips, eyes, etc. Trust me, it will improve the look of your anime work.

Lastly everything looks flat. So do form studies, think in 3d, even though you are drawing 2d, and work on perspective.

>> No.3925111

>>3924037
>>3924567
i-it's him!! he's actually improved!!!

>> No.3925113

>>3924037
>>3924567
did you draw that grimes album cover?

>> No.3925445

>>3924037

What creepypasta is this?

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YO WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS AHAHAHAHAHAHA

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>>3924657
you mean this is the birth of an epic new meme?

>> No.3926120

>structure defines shape
>ok
>gesture simulates the flow, energy, and action
>ok
>try to put them together
>not ok

So it's like gesture first, then trying to shape them up to reasonable levels right?