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I am stil learning, but any body got some tips for my octopus?

>> No.3905726

Line weight 0/10

>> No.3905743

>>3905710
Can someone redline my pic?

>> No.3905746

>>3905743
just draw it again, its good for u OP

>> No.3905750

>>3905726
What do you mean exactly with Line weight?

>> No.3905822

I get it's a bait cartoon octopus but fix the lines, OP.

>> No.3905827

>>3905750
Line weight refers how a single line can become thicker or thinner depending on the amount of pressure you use. Can be very visually appealing if used correctly.

Looks like you just used 1000 short hairy lines to give a thick border to the octopus. Doesn't look good.

>> No.3905881

>>3905827
Thank you. Whats the best way to fix the line wieght=

>> No.3905884

>>3905881
First of all you don't want to use multiple lines when you could just use one.

Practice making longer lines and curves. Then practice making lines and curves that get fatter and thinner by changing the pressure you put down on the pencil.

>> No.3905897

>>3905884
>making
also do i need a thicker pencil?