/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.3898221]

Well it's that time again, it's been about 3 months so here is some new work I'd like you to tell me what you don't like about it so i can get better.
I've used to information and advice from my last comic to help improve these. So i would like you guys thoughts.

[Anonymous No.3898223]

[Anonymous No.3898224]

[Anonymous No.3898225]

well that's all my pages for now, so please tell me what ya think

[Anonymous No.3898254]

>>3898224
Really clever using the top panel again and just adding the x-ray. I like it overall. Any plan for color?

[Anonymous No.3898263]

>>3898254
none so far.
I using it for my portfolio to show that i can pencil and ink a page and story. plus my coloring is sub par at best.

but thank you for taking the time to look at the pages

[Anonymous No.3898269]

>>3898263
It also highlights your grasp on the human form and anatomy. Proud of you anon.

[Anonymous No.3899046]

>>3898269
THAnks, I think it’s why this scene was in that sample script to test artists on that

[Anonymous No.3899066]

Great! I love your sense of proportion and inking and the way you draw bodies. Everything seems sturdy, meaningfully placed, and well-practiced.

There’s something oddly off-putting about the faces - and that makes me thing ‘meh’ about an otherwise exceptional work of art. I don’t mean this to bring you down, and I can’t quite place it - I think it might be the proportions of the eyes and how you draw the nose that contribute to this. It may even just be my personal preference, but I think that experimenting with your style and the faces you draw would do you really well.

[jevin No.3899082]

c-could you make a hot bitchy teacher character with short hair?

[Anonymous No.3899530]

>>3899066
thank you, ill look into it and see what i can find

>>3899082
i don't like short hair, but here ya go anon