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>> No.3889133

>>3889123
I like the part where it already sucks

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>> No.3889149

>>3889146
Really hope youre in middle school

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>> No.3889227

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>> No.3889232

>>3889133
My favorite part

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>> No.3889263

OP: "FUCK anatomy"

>> No.3889273

>>3889123
What is the meaning of doing that?

There is some theory/composition, there is something really deep in what you do besides wasting money on markers

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>> No.3889285

>>3889133
Which part is that?

>>3889149
I am in art school.

Hope you are not an immature elementary school microbe.

>>3889227
Thank you

>>3889232
Your favorite part is space empty like your understanding of art?

>>3889263
It's called figurative abstraction.

>>3889273
Figurative abstraction. Experimental art.

>> No.3889510
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3889510

007

Law of Jungle
24 x 18 inches

>> No.3889520

I like how you wasted 2 canvases in one picture very clever

>> No.3889522
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3889522

>>3889285
>It's called figurative abstraction.

>> No.3889527

>>3889510
another piece of crap

well done chunbum oppa

>> No.3889547

>>3889285
Damn, I was going to give you the benefit of the doubt at first "it's not great, but at least they're trying"
...But your attitude sucks.

Learn the forms before you try abstracting them

>> No.3889567

Can you draw hands?

>> No.3889578

>>3889285
I've seen your garbage before and thought you were actually joking when you were boasting about how ''good'' you were in a different thread, but now I see you are even more delusional than illastrat

>> No.3890008

>>3889547
My professor told me I did a great job of reducing form to its essence via abstraction and there is movement expressed in the figure. You know nothing.

>> No.3890017

boring and generic

>> No.3890032

>>3890008
Your professor is clearly a Jewish faggot who teaches degenerate art

>> No.3890034

>>3890032

This but in a unironic, non pol kind of way. They are doing you a massive disservice by encouraging this horseshit. Get the fuck out of your fraudulent art school if you want to git gud.

>> No.3890037
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3890037

>>3889285
>it's another pretentious art school snob episode

>> No.3890038

It's really bizarre that people can seriously "study" to do this shit.

>> No.3890040

>>3889285
Shouldn't have wasted that money and gone to Watts or the Angel Academy in Florence instead.

>> No.3890041

>>3890008
This is very good bait, you need a good reality check otherwise

>> No.3890052
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3890052

>>3889123
Forget everything you have learnt and start with Loomis :^)

>> No.3890057
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3890057

>>3890037
See the green alien frog? That's the absolute state of ic. It's ugly, degenerate, and failing.

My art is inspired and experimental and successful because I am not ignorant and blind like you. Open your eyes and open your closed system of thinking. Think outside the box.

Of course, all of this sermon will fall on deaf ears.

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3890062

>can't produce anything interesting
>hide behind "abstraction" and delude yourself that anyone who doesn't like it is plebeian "who doesn't understand it"

Seen this episode few times already. No matter how abstract your art is, it still can be judged and compared to actually good abstract pieces that don't feel like you are looking at empty piece of cardboard. Tell your professor to teach you about that.

>> No.3890065

>>3890057
how is >>3889041 10x more appealing than your painting?

>> No.3890067

Fuck off

>> No.3890069

>>3890062
You are simply blind. You are too ignorant to see the merits of my work. My work is like stealthy F-35 or F-22. Your standard is like legacy like F-14 or even F-4.

Of course you can't see the merits of my work. Cuz you are blind like crazy.

>> No.3890072

>>3890065

This. I'd literally rather hang framed antisemtic cartoons in my home than spend one more second looking at this garbage

>> No.3890075

>>3890072
Of course you would. You are an F14 Tomcat. I am F22 Raptor. You can't see how good this painting really is. You are stuck in the archaic fantasy of golden age, aka Renaissance and you insist everyone build a medieval wall rather than using modern technology. Ignorance prevails among you like wildfire or sick disease.

>> No.3890076

>>3889510

>> No.3890101

Learn gesture

>> No.3890104

>>3890101
Did many years ago. Stop preaching cuz you don't know more than I do

>> No.3890108

>>3890104
I'm guessing you're baiting, but it would be nicer with some gesture probably.

>> No.3890110

>>3889510
putting down my /ic/ goggles

i see an artist that is overstimulated by his life

i see a genuine desperation in a struggle with autism. torn between appreciation of the complexity and yet hoping to put it behind him by putting it into art.

being autistic yet desiring not to be must be hell.

>> No.3890112

>>3890057
i can't BELIEVE that you're real

>> No.3890164

This whole thread seems like an elaborate ruse, I bet the painting isn't even OP's, he just found it somewhere

>> No.3890170

>>3890008
What were you hoping for in coming here.
While your professor might compliment you, that doesn’t negate the criticism given by others, even if the criticism is really shitty and not constructive.

>> No.3890180

>>3890057
I like what you’re trying to do with the piece, but posting on here is pointless if you want any decent constructive criticism or praise :P
I get what you’re trying to do with the piece and the abstraction of the figure and stuff, but I feel like if you made the stained-glassesque fractles on the figure or whatever more in line with the curves of their musculature and anatomy, that might work out better for you and make it more 3dish. If you were trying to make them appear more 2d, then the detailing you put into the face betrays that intent. Using bright colors to make the figure stand out from the foreground is good, but the pastels mixed in with the figure make the color scheme clash a bit, and the brightness of the background makes the work feel hard to focus on. When you started it felt like you were trying to do a clear study of a person, but as you went along you added lots of cool background stuff which was a lot less realistic which feels like you got bored with the idea of drawing a realistic person, which defeats the point of doing an anatomy study in the first place.
I think this is a good start, but it feels a bit nervous in its execution and taking more time to study more anatomy and not be afraid of the quality of any sketches you do is good.

>> No.3890188

>>3889123
Let me guess, OP. Are you a woman?

>> No.3890208

>>3890188
I am a man

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3890214

>>3889123
wazzup proko

>> No.3890394

>>3890208
Sound more like a woman, OP. Please reconsider your gender.

>> No.3890407

>>3889510
not very good

>> No.3890410

>>3890057
I made better in elementary art school projects

>> No.3890448

>>3890410
Because your mom helped you
And you actually didn't. Stop fantasizing

>> No.3890456

>>3890448
made a drawing in pre k that unironically looks 100x better than your piece of garbage. of course it was on accident but yours still looks pretty bad, get over yourself. you draw t=bodies like how i did in 7th grade youre awful

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3890708

>>3890008
I know nothing? If anyone here gave you a good critique, I bet you wouldn't even understand it.

"Oh yes, I'm an artist. You couldn't fully appreciate my work though" ...delusional

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>>3889123
>>3889285
>>3889510
>>3890008
>>3890057
Is this fake and he's just baiting for (You)s? If so well done OP.
If not then all I can say is OH NO NO NO NO AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA
holy F*CK I may be a crab but thank god I'm not this guy. That level of denial cannot be healthy and it's definitely not going to make him progress beyond beginner "i-it's absract/i-it's my style" crabbery. yikey yikey

>> No.3891024

>>3890180
I was trying to make something flat and 3D at same time using abstract colors.

I wasn't nervous. I did exactly what I intended to do which was yo experiment with color, form, and composition.

>> No.3891027

>>3890708
The only people who are delusional are you guys. I know my drawing is good. It's not my best but not my worst. Somewhere in the middle

>> No.3891108

>>3891027
Like I said, I applaud you for putting in the effort to make something, but you've got to lose the "it's good, you guys just dont get it" attitude. It'll only end up blinding you.

>> No.3891110

>>3891027
Keep practicing. Your unpolished right now but I can see the potential.

>> No.3891202

>>3891110
Where the fuck do you see any potential lmao

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3891222

Don't listen to them, OP. They'll never understand our talent.

>> No.3891267

>>3891222
This is not bad. Not super crazy great but not bad

>> No.3891275

>>3891202
I told you!

Me: stealth aircraft - "I have potential "
You: legacy aircraft - "where "

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3891323

>>3891267
I spent like 10 minutes making that as a joke, you can't just compliment it, man.

>> No.3891404

>>3891323
You are wasting your talent then. You should be more sincere about your creation and style

>> No.3891480

This is bait, r-right?

>> No.3891486

>>3891480
No mate dont hate
I am not late
It's fate

>> No.3891525

This thread feels like OP's rubbing an experiment to make up an art version of the navy seal copypasta. If it's not a troll, it takes some serious cock and ball torture to get to this level of being messed up.

I can see what you're trying to go for. But the "I'm better than thou" isn't gonna get you anywhere when you hide behind abstraction when there's people who grind a lot every day to make a figure sit well in 3D space.

>> No.3891694

>>3891525
Don't grind. Just do.

>> No.3891699

>>3889285
>I am in art school.
Lol what a waste of money

>> No.3891992

>>3891699
>lol what a waste of money
How ignorant

>> No.3892030

>>389199
Hey op you're saying your great and all, sure, how about you post with a more normal style?

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3892207

>>3892030
I did in the past.

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>> No.3896092

>>3892207
It looks nice but everything underneath is bad, you need to study the fundamentals a lot more.

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>> No.3896105

>>3896092
I already studied the fundamentals and am experimenting with abstraction. I don't want to draw like realist painters.

>> No.3896119

>>3896105
You don't have to, but from what you've been posting it's extremely easy to see that you have bad fundamentals, everything looks flat.

>> No.3896122

Good LARP itt

>> No.3896292

>>3896105
you really think this is good huh

>> No.3896438

Wow, hey guys we got a future art teacher here!

>> No.3896855

>>3890057
>my art is experimental

This has to be bait right? OP your art would have been experimental in the 17th century or if modernism had never happened. And it would have also been a bad experience.
There is nothing sucessful about what you did.

>> No.3896860

>>3890057
chemists first learn their shit before they "start experimenting". why are you a special snowflake and jump directly to the end game when you dont even know the key biddings?

>> No.3896862

>shift + left click thread before it got one respond
>today click Show 1 hidden thread
>see this thread
yep, good decision

>> No.3896907

>>3896094
madlad

>> No.3897263

>>3896855
I am doing experiment in my own style. Modern art is not dead. Modern painting is not dead.

>> No.3897277

>>3890214
Lol you can still see the ink lines!
Op is bad

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3897396

>>3889285
>I am in art school
I didn't know they made "art schools" for the special needs children

>> No.3897403

>>3897396
I am not though. Stop saying that.

>> No.3897410

>>3897403
What art school?

>> No.3897580 [DELETED] 

>>3897410
Sva

>> No.3897610 [DELETED] 

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>> No.3897789

>>3889510
This is exactly what comes to my mind when a tradfag gets hurt about digital shit and claim "only traditional art is real art"

>> No.3897802

>>3897410
Sva
>>3897789
Why does my work come to your mind? I don't care much for digital art cuz it's easily copy paste-able

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>> No.3897858

>>3889510
I feel sorry for the paper you wasted.

>> No.3897863

>>3897802
I go to SVA. If i ever see that drawing in public Ill make sure to deface this abomination

>> No.3897875

>>3897863
Wow you sound very belligerent and not like an SVA student at all. I don't believe you go to my school.

>> No.3897885

>>3897863
By the way please go ahead and deface my art. In my family there are 2 lawyers, both from top law schools. I will sue your ass hot like crazy and send you to prison and take away all your money and then with that money make 25 more drawings in the same style. Thanks.

>> No.3897912

>>3897885
This is the /ic/ crab equivalent of "my dad works at Nintendo, ur getting banned"

>> No.3897914

>>3897885
Ok you just blew your load just now


Official troll topic everyone. I was on the fence but this just proves it. Lol go shit guy you had us

>> No.3897920

>>3897885
oof yikes

>> No.3897945

>>3890057

Don't worry OP, I draw like shit and fell for the art school meme too.

>> No.3897990

This thread is art - I’ve never felt so many feelings of disgust, hatred, and pity. I may not like OP, but I give credit where it’s due.

Fuck you OP. Fuck. You.

>> No.3898032

>>3897912
Then don't threaten to sabotage my art. There will be price to pay.

>>3897914
You are the troll not me. I am just here to post my art.

>>3897945
My art is good.

>>3897990
You are being delusional

>> No.3898042

>>3892207
>IT'S JIMMY 2.0

>> No.3898102
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3898102

Rainbow
40 x 25.75 inches
Pen, colored pencil, and marker on paper

>> No.3898110 [DELETED] 

>>3898102
Dude stop fucking scribbling in the background because it looks like trash. Are you five? Pure laziness.

>> No.3898156

>>3898102
OP it looks like you're using dollar store markers, cut it out.
Study your fundamentals like gesure drawing and especially shapes if you want to do art like this.
Please realize that this isn't that good, but it doesn't have to continue to be shit.

>> No.3898164

>>3898156
You are blind. You can't see that it's a great drawing. I already studied gesture drawing and anatomical shapes.

>> No.3898166

>>3898164
Now we all know that this is bait, thanks for that. You guys can all leave now and let this thread die.

>> No.3898174

>>3898166
Your comment is the real bait. You throw around groundless accusations that I don't know anything and stomp down on my art. When I reject your false claims you say "bait". I could care less. I know my art is good. Truth will prevail.

In your isolated pocket you think you control the narrative by agreeing among yourselves who are like minded people. The real bait is your trolling comment. You desecrate with lies and falsehood emanating from your ignorance and stinking attitude that art is about leveling up. I already studied the fundamentals and now I am experimenting. Yeah get the hell out before you get overwhelmed by a tiger in this debate on your home turf.

>> No.3898176

>>3898032
>My art is good.
>You are being delusional
the irony

>> No.3898199

>>3898166
I already called this move on people

>> No.3898203

The craziest part about this bait n troll topic is that anon is really going out of his way to make this stuff. As shit as it is it’s still using up this guys time and resources since it’s not digital. So basically he’s trolling himself lo

>> No.3898552

>>3898203
>still using up this guys time and resources since it’s not digital.
low key bait

>> No.3898659

>>3898203
No the crazy part is that you guys think my art sucks. I know and many people know that my art is good.

>> No.3898680

>>3898659
Nobody buying it anymore guy. You fucked up bu playing to many of your cards officially outing yourself as a troll. I wouldn’t be surprised if the thread started to die now as no one cares anymore. So ya. That’s my last post please out

>> No.3898696

>>3898680
No I didn't. I am going to school to learn art. Not to be a troll. That's all in your head.

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3898701

>>3897803
>>3898102

i like how u draw like triangles in everything. do more of that and also practice like anatomy and poses n staff

like, imagine pic related but with ur triangle art style, that would look so cool. right? respond plz

>> No.3898703

>>3898696
dude unless youre main audience is a proffessional art critic, all we want to see is something visually appealing or actual time and effort. not a display, or show of the various themes, or techniques, concepts or whatever the fuck it is youre trying to convey with this shitty preschool drawing

>> No.3898705

>>3898701
rhis guys onto something. your anatomy is terrible atleast fix that...

>> No.3898927

>>3898659
This is becoming stale at this point.

>> No.3898961
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3898961

OP I give a shit about what your professor says but do you really look at the figures you draw and think that they represent movement?. No they don't, they look like badly made mannequins, it kind of gives me the impression that a amateur in sculpting anatomy made these figures, you should really try to make the body lenguages express something. Also, your backgrounds are horrible like, how the fuck can you look at >>3898102 And think that the coloring looks good?, i really like how you decompose the bodies into triangles and color them but the expression and backgrounds kills that

>> No.3899114

I hope this is a troll thread because OP's going to go to debt at this trash "art school" without even learning how to draw a correct figure.

When its so obvious that you don't have basic drawing skills no one gives a fuck if you call it "experimental".

>> No.3901535

>>3898701
>>3898705
>>3898961
OP, listen to these guys. You don't have to change your style, but you still have a long way to go. Take what you have and improve it until you're content, and then improve it even further.

I don't really like your pretentious, stubborn attitude, but if you want real advice, here it is. Maybe once you realize how far behind you are you'll have a change of heart.

>> No.3901559

Ive been posting on /ic/ on and off since 2011. Quite a while.

Since then I know 4 notorious members of the community that are very similar. They are in order of seniority, illastrat, chunbum (this thread), brian comforti (trad thread), and jimmy. I noticed that despite all of them getting consistently negative reception here, they continue to post here. And i am not sure if they know that they only ever discuss their work with newfriends. Everyone else gets tired of beating the same dead horse. So they play the same game with new posters, for years. With the same quality of art.

Its pretty clear they all very much enjoy negative attention. Either that or they are not aware that they come to /ic/ to make people angry. Why they need that in their life, is up to anyones guess, but i am 100 percent sure no happy person needs to seek that out. I am guessing they hold deep resentment for something.

>> No.3901590

>>3898102
The green in the bottom left/bottom right and the light blue/brown in the top right ruin the composition. Also seeing so many of your marker strokes on the left side is distracting. It looked much better at step 5

>> No.3901668

>>3901559
maybe it's actual autism

>> No.3901672

>>3889123
Looks like some crap and isn’t life drawing anyway.

>> No.3901675
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I cant wait for reality to set in on OP and he starts to go on an even bigger autistic temper tantrum

>> No.3903333

>>3901675
theres no turning back for ppl like OP, once they are so far in, all they can do is double down or admit to themself that theyve been lied to

>> No.3903578

You guys are wrong. My art is good. I am right.

>> No.3903579

>>3903578
Nice try but you’re not even OP

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The abosolute state of OP

>> No.3905369

>>3898032
If you say your art is good and then 99% of the people you show it to disagree, they're not haters. They're not delusional. They're right.
Imagine being so autistic that you're 100% convinced that you're not

>> No.3905578

>>3899114
Welp he deserves it for his gigantic hubris

>> No.3905868

>>3905369
Or maybe the 99% is concentrated in a place like here that is 1% of people's general opinions. In other words, your negative opinion and hating don't matter.

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The Rejection