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3879711 No.3879711 [Reply] [Original]

Couldn't post for some reason and the last thread died. Bringing it back. Post your comics.

>> No.3879753

Careful with that OP, I certainly wouldn't try to post it on a patreon site, very sensitive topic these days! Stick to your furfaggotry safe space

>> No.3881217
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I was feeling out of it today. Here's one I didn't get to post.

>> No.3881532
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>>3879711
put me in jail cuz I am armed

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>> No.3883561
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these are nice OP, they're innocent and fun.
this is an old one from when i used to do comics. i want to know what /ic/ thinks of this, because i make a lot of absurd stuff.

>> No.3883566

>>3883561
this made me laugh, bravo.

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>> No.3885322

>>3883759
I love these

>> No.3885354

>>3879711
these comics are too good

>> No.3887050
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I'm kinda sick, so nothing new today.

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I started doing comics on my social media week. I'm probably no really funny, but I'll just keep throwing shit until it sticks.

>> No.3888645
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I don't know how to make these funny.

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>>3879711
this mine, made it yesterday
its one of the vanilla ones

>> No.3889484
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>>3888645
>read tons of webcomics thinking I could do better, especially comedy
>someone actually asks for crit, have no idea how to help
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

What is the joke in this one? And what is the context?
Do your characters have underlying personalities?
What mood does the comic have?
I'm going over the Twitter, I think [Finland?] being front and centre but with no facial expressions is a big part of the problem but I'm actually stumped by this. Is it possible to keep the =3 idea but have the eyes change? Or have the blue man react in the last panel. Or both are stone faced, but something/someone else in the last panel makes the situation look very dire- a beating,shanking or fight club would probably be better received than prison rape, though.

Also try to convey a personality. The more I think on this the less convinced I believe it but look at pic related-despite being dumb as hell and >>>wholesome it has a strange charm to it

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>> No.3891131

>>3888645
CUTE

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>> No.3892630

>>3879711
I dreamt I was coloring a 19 pages comic on Photoshop and it was very realistic, then I woke up and it's so sad sad

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>> No.3893720

>>3888645
made me chuckle a little

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>> No.3899222

>>3892621
These are so terrible... I love them

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>> No.3901461

>>3891445
This one is great.

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>> No.3902854

>>3888645
that's good

>> No.3902857

>>3889484
>>3888652
really bad

>> No.3904080

I'm too tired to draw today. Resuming tomorrow.

>> No.3904371

>>3882094
>>3881217
>>3879711
try to draw it less shitty and put some actual effort in this
I know normies like shitty drawings but this is painful to look at.

>> No.3904407

>>3889484
Montero is great because he is consistent with hos personal mood, not really funny but good.

>> No.3904409

>>3888645
This one is gud

>> No.3905296

>>3888645
Can someone explain this to me?

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>> No.3906504
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Since you're drawing the comics crappily anyway but churn them out often, you could use each one to practice one thing like draw a hand from reference or attempt some clothing folds, facial expression, mimic a cool thing from another comic anything. You got nothing to lose

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>> No.3910510
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I'm doing this page for a comission

>> No.3910715

>>3910510
Are you a girl?

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>>3910510
The layout's a bit confusing, I thought the top right panel came third at first.

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I'm trying to make something for a comic anthology, does anyone have any idea on how to combine fairytales and boxing?

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>>3912696
You have different fairytale creatures box each other.

>> No.3912862

>>3885131
i don´t know why but i laughed

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>> No.3915497

>>3912862
probably because it's a comic

>> No.3917217

Taking a break today

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>>3918304

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>>3918348

>> No.3918352

>>3918349
Currently working on the rest of it as a webnovel
https://www.wattpad.com/user/Neptuneplanet8 is my wattpad account.

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>>3912696
>can't glorify violence

It's a shit brief.

>> No.3918546
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Hey.

Anyone got good tips for improving Instagram followers?

>> No.3918580

>>3888652
lol

>> No.3918586

>>3918546
Don't you already have like 30,000 right now? I'd assume at that point you'd just continuously gain traction without even trying

>> No.3918611

>>3918546
Damn if this shit gets 30k followers it must be easy

>> No.3918715

>>3918301
>>3914112
>>3905313
>>3883759
cute

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>>3910510
Nice work bro

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>> No.3924410

>>3918303
>>3918304
>>3918308
>>3918343
>>3918344
>>3918345
>>3918347
>>3918348
>>3918349
>>3918352
as a pole i can say that i absolutely love tgis comic already

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>>3924410
>start with idea of polenbols + alt universes
>oh what if i make it the internet
>and add eva abominations too
>fuck, drawing a comic is too hard, write it instead
>what if i add digimon too
It only goes downhill from there

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>> No.3930041

>>3912696
little red riding hood as an underdog boxer, rising up the ranks during a tournament. her final opponent is the big bad wolf. she spares him and forfeits, despite him being responsible for the death of her grandmother because she then sees his own son tearfully watching the fight from the stands.

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>> No.3934493

>>3905296
lost

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>> No.3938287

>>3918546
Would be better without the last panel

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>> No.3942097

>>3941908
I'm amazed that you can produce consistently funny stuff, but please, for the love of god, fix your arm anatomy. The thumb on his left hand is upside-down, unless he's holding his hands at a diagonal. . . whatever, use references or something. You have gotten better pretty quickly, so hopefully you'll make it.

>> No.3942266
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Anyone know good places to upload multi-page (like, 30+ pages) comic WiPs? I'd love to just link it and not spam the thread if possible

>> No.3942283

>>3934471
Guy with the mowhawk looks fucking rad.

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>> No.3943344

>>3942266
try imgur

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Posting the latest page from my webcomic. I hope you don't mind it being "furry"

http://www.taleofjaspergold.com/

>> No.3946198

On a bit of a vacation. I'll probably be back tomorrow.

>> No.3946596

>>3943464
bugs bunny is not furry

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https://imgur.com/a/hjA2QZQ

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pls rate

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>>3888652

>> No.3949249

What a fucking shit of a thread

>> No.3949254

>>3943464
damn anon that's really good, great expressions and clean pages
you're doing this digitally I guess?

>> No.3949305

>>3879711
I'm just too slow... I hate being so slow and not being able to upload something morte often. One part of a comic (three standard pages) take me between 60-80hrs.

I hate it so much... I don't know how actual comic artists do this.

>> No.3949766

>>3949254
>>3943464
shit never mind it's traditional, just checked out the comic
Really good stuff my man, had to stop after a chapter because I got pretty absorbed when I got work to do

>> No.3949802

Now where could my pipe be?

>> No.3949869

>>3888645
Nice
>>3889484
Adorable.

>> No.3950116

Didn't sleep eough last night, been feeling off all day. No comic.

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>> No.3951228

>>3951222
Nice ass

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>> No.3964267

>>3879753
Fuck off nigger

>> No.3964287

This fucker is churning out content fast. He's gonna make it, at this rate.

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Silly question but, do you guys think it's possible to be a decent cartoonist without going for the realistic phase in depth? Obviously having learnt fundamentals (form, composition, shade, perspective, etc.) first.

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does anyone know where I could find pencils from pros? I was thinking of training to ink with brush and in on photocopies of pencil comic pages.

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>> No.3969479

>>3969416
I love this one, super clever

>> No.3969565

stop spamming this unfunny shit please

>> No.3969816

>>3969565
pyw crab

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>> No.3972688

>>3971129
gave a small chuckle

>> No.3972805

>>3972688
stop encouraging him

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>> No.3974099

>>3888313
I like this, but whats with everything being neutral gray? At least leave the characters white so they stand out.

>> No.3974107

>>3918352
I love this

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>> No.3975609

>>3911605
what mangas this?

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>> No.3977097

>>3976985
kek

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Word play is SHIT, STOP PLEASE

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>> No.3978860

>>3910510
>Lider... Lider... Lider!
huh, had to remember a clan mate couldn't stop calling me like that, not like there's anything wrong with it.

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I made this shit
https://imgur.com/a/YgKfg1r

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>> No.3982678

>>3982675
At first I thought it said "water" in the bottom right, which somehow made it funnier.

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>> No.3985214

>>3969565
then spam your own unfunny shit instead

>> No.3985219

>>3954929
Okay, this one got me.

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How do I make this funny?
Context is, a badass guy sucks at maneuvering in zero gravity.
This is just the sketch page, I've already inked it, just don't know what dialogue to put in...

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>> No.3989691

>>3879711
So how do I turn my story into a storyboard and then into comic/manga pages? How does paneling work?

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>>3987998
>zero-G antics
>heavy gunner being gently thrust backwards from sustained fire over a few panels as comic focuses on other characters
>bad guys deploying a non-lethal gyrojet (rocket-propelled) gun intended for throwing boarders off the station or pinning them to the walls
>swordsman doing the 'any last words?' coolguy thing while standing over a defeated enemy, who launches him with both legs. 2 panels from swordsman's POV where he's surprised and then realizes why he isn't slowing down, conveyed through hand gestures
>sailing past a group of enemies and swinging all the while
>firing a gun throwing off his orientation because he didn't brace first

Also if you want vaguely human figures moving in 3 dimensions you could try big cat videos. Here, have a panther flailing at a plush toy in slo-mo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccXxiJgs7CA

>>3989691
Isn't winging it the point of a storyboard?

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