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3864432 No.3864432 [Reply] [Original]

rate this, this is better than anything been drawn in this shithole so far, not even your discord circlejerk of queers can compete

>> No.3864438

>>3864432
I really hope you were the artist in the /a/ drawthread because the hands are still small

>> No.3864439
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3864439

>>3864432
>those hands

>> No.3864441

>>3864438
that's stylization for you mr crab

>> No.3864448

>>3864432
>Generic moe blob front pose that is stiff as a board
>Hiding hands
Look at her right forearm, it is half the size and no it's not because it is foreshortened otherwise the cuffs wouldn't be in profile view. It's shit.

>> No.3864453

>>3864432
It’s cobbled together anime symbols on a glorified stick figure. You cant even get the proportions right and its not even an action shot. This is very very poor.

>> No.3864455

>>3864432
Does anyone have any tutorial on the steps to paint/color in this cel-but-soft shading style? I'm very interested in that. I guess I could basic cel shade and then airbrush using opacity lock.

>> No.3864456

>>3864455
>basic cel shade and then airbrush using opacity lock
That's really all there is to it.

>> No.3864458

>>3864448
>>3864453
>bo ho ho ho it's not a fruit basket rendered ten thousand times

keep crabbing

>> No.3864461

>>3864458
Not an argument.

>> No.3864464

USE LOOMIS, RETARD

>> No.3864466

what exactly is that dress's texture? Because cotton or even silk don't shine like that.

>> No.3864490

it looks like generic deviantart anime.

>> No.3864495

>>3864461
>>3864464
>>3864490
post your work

>> No.3864500
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3864500

>>3864495
Not him but I hate this forearm and hands but I don't know how to change the length and size to convey a 9-year-old physique.

>> No.3864507

>>3864432
the hands and the folds on the dress are really weird. But it isn't bad at all.

>> No.3865019
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3865019

>>3864432
Stop being salty by critique anon. You asked for a review and everyone has told you that the hands are too small. Even by a stylizations standards they are still too small that they take away from the image. The composition and colors are fine and you are in no way a "Bad" artist, but it might do you some good to work on doing some hand studies. It looks cute, so don't worry, but don't stop working to improve your work.
(And maybe a couple of dynamic poses as well just just look at the camera head on standing straight is a rather boring pose)

>> No.3865037
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3865037

>>3864432
ohai /cgl/ first time I have seen you come here!

Let's improve that goth loli a bit proportions.

>> No.3865072

>>3864432
> when you're too hand retarded to draw the other eye so you throw on an eyepatch

Haaaaaa

>> No.3865120

>>3864441
>that's BAD stylization for you mr crab
fixed that for you

>> No.3865152
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3865152

>>3865037
Let's improve that loli further!

>> No.3867105

>>3865152
An unironically better and more interesting face than the generic "add dot nose and dot/bean mouth" uguu kawaii face that's been done over 1000 times.

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3867108

>>3864441
Sure is convenient any time something is egregiously WRONG. It's because it was a a choice of "Stylization". Sounds like the case of trying to hard to not step out of their comfort zone.

Enjoy your smug (you)

>> No.3867118
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3867118

>>3864432
You should study clothing folds more. It looks like you just drew a bunch of small random folds at the edge of the arms which is what a lot of beginners (including me) does.

Also look like you might have used pillow shading. You have a appealing rendering style but still need improvement in the foundational drawing side of it (as can be seen from the hands). Maybe you should start practicing figure drawing from just regular paper and pencil for a while too.

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3867134

>>3864432
I know this is an obvious troll, but
>It's just my style!
If you gave her a regular t-shirt her arms and hands would look absolutely retarded. Good job drawing a 2D character in the most basic, flat position you ever possibly could

>> No.3867135
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3867135

tonight's sketch

>> No.3867145

>>3864432 (OP)
you should study more clothing and try varying your line weight. the hand is a bit distracting.

>> No.3867172

Not even Op's drawing, he is merely shitposting

>> No.3867414
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3867414

>>3867105
just can't handle the power of a smug loli

>> No.3867415

>>3864432
5/10. Good concept of how to color but zero concept of lighting. Very minimal proportion understanding. Clean lines but not a very attractive piece. Still obvious it was done by a westerner/low tier artist. The only saving grace is the detail put into it and the clean coloring. Everything else could use s lot of work.

>> No.3867423

>>3865152
Much better

>> No.3870065

>>3867135
Cuuute

>> No.3870073

>>3867414
yeah but thats not a loli

>> No.3873146

This crab meme is really getting old and meaningless if people are going to throw it around every time they get a crit on 4chan.

Stop it.

>> No.3874884

>>3873146
Crab

>> No.3877915

>>3864432
>style

fucking yikes dude your gonna end up worse than sakimichan