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3851231 No.3851231 [Reply] [Original]

sup /ic/ first drawn NSFW piece, how trash am I? I guess Im asking if I have potential enough to possibly pursue this as a source of revenue if I practice? Or am I too western cartoony?

>> No.3851240

Perspective wrong, boobs position wrong, left leg is too short due to wrong perspective and she's emotionless

>> No.3851247

fair enough. I cant seem to ever get emotion in any faces I draw, suppose I need to get that and perspective down before I try for anything, ppreciate' it

>> No.3851252

Cum looks like yogurt, also, why she doesn't have feets?

>> No.3851266

Its Greek Honey yoguart
cant draw feets, I practiced too much hands and never the feets D:

>> No.3851374
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Tilted it because it was hard to look at.
>I guess Im asking if I have potential enough to possibly pursue this as a source of revenue
Yes, you could make money off of it right now.
>Or am I too western cartoony?
People are degenerates, it doesn't matter.
They would pay for worse as long as it's nsfw.

>> No.3851377

Can you post the reference you used for this?

>> No.3851378

It is pretty good though.

>> No.3851461

Her jaw is fuckin huge mate

>> No.3852156
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just pulled from a rando doujinshi and used Hitomi Tanaka as a ref
I appreciate it man! I dont draw often but I never post work anywhere and after a long dryspell thought Id try my hand at something a little more like this I guess
I pull my inspo from hulk hogan
noted! maybe Ill put a few more hours into the next one if I give it a go!

>> No.3852261

Name of the doujin,please?

>> No.3852268
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Hinako Becomes a Dairy Cow - Chirumakuro

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Thank you.

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