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What's your opinion on this piece?

>> No.3776269

>>3776265
get the fuck out of here weeb faggot

>> No.3776272

>>3776265
The right knee is bent at an unnatural angle

>> No.3776279

>>3776265
Her right eye is too fucking far. The mouth is in the wrong place. Her right leg is broken. The drapery is on point and the flowers are cute.

>> No.3776282

>>3776265
Post your work! Not some random shit you just googled.

>> No.3776302

Here's what you need to do

>> No.3776306

>>3776302
>Here's what you need to do
And he was never heard of again

>> No.3776308

>>3776279
I can't unsee the left eye, that's way too fucking far

>> No.3776312

>>3776265
Cute, i love braids.

>> No.3776314

>>3776279
>>3776308
Oh, yeah. I actually meant her left eye.

>> No.3776328

>>3776312
only true connoisseur itt

>> No.3776354

Polio is no laughing matter.

>> No.3776361

>>3776265
It's cute and the folds on the trim of the skirt and pantaloons is well-executed.

>> No.3776362

>>3776265
It's probably from a hentai

>> No.3776369

>>3776361
This desu, those frills and folds on the edge of outfits like this always give me endless trouble and pain. I've grown an appreciation for artists who can do it so well after trying to draw them.

>> No.3776384

I can fap to this

>> No.3776399 [DELETED] 
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3776399

>>3776265
It's FockeWulf, one of my favorite loli artists. I don't want to say "muh style" here, but his style does tend to sacrifice anatomic accuracy for cuteness. Admittedly, the face is quite strange in OP's pic related.

>> No.3776465

>>3776265
Her torso is way too long and unnaturally twists in such a way that it looks disjointed from her legs and it's really hard to ignore.
Also her left eye is all kinds of fucked.
Which is a shame because I think the colors are nice and the design is cute.
I won't be saving that one to the archive.

>> No.3776469

>>3776399
MODS

>> No.3776474
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3776474

>>3776399
MOOOOOODS

>> No.3776478

>>3776469
>>3776474
pussies can't handle small tits, what're you gonna do when you grow up into the big tit world?

>> No.3776479

>>3776399
I don't think in this case is a style thing, is more like a mistake that him didn't noticed for some reason since any of his works show more of that.

>> No.3776482

>>3776399
WTF MODS BAN THIS DEGENERATE
MAY GOD HAVE MERCY ON YOUR SOUL

>> No.3776495

>>3776265
How the fuck do you draw so many ruffles without getting confused

>> No.3776496

>>3776495
Break the dress down into simplified forms first then go over in passes.

>> No.3776503
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3776503

>>3776265
i thought the pose was something like this and i got confused when i saw the legs

>> No.3776514

Lol fucking pussy mods. Can't even handle some child pussy.

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3776570

>tfw
but it was just a drawing

>> No.3776712

>>3776496
>>3776495
>ruffles made by lays

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3776818

>>3776265
>>3776503
I'm sorry, I can't let the face pass, I need to try to salvages it somehow, with the power of liquify.
Don't know what's going on with her body in the original, so I just redline som new random shit.

>> No.3776830

>>3776818
That liquify edit is absolutely awful. Now her head is completely flat and out of perspective.

>> No.3776833

>>3776818
Not really a fix, it just looks equally retarded but in a different way

>> No.3776838

>>3776265
I can't see her pelvis in any place to make the legs look right

>> No.3776840

>>3776830
>>3776833
Well, shit, I tried. never mind then.

>> No.3776847

>>3776840
Maybe try moving the eyes down a bit and warping the left (her right) eye to match follow the form of her head

>> No.3776849

>>3776830
>>3776833
At least he tried. (I'm assuming it's a he.) It would have been way better/funnier if instead of criticizing the guy for even trying something you guys tried something too. Even if it looked terrible, it'd be way more entertaining. Your comments are pretty much useless. Come on guys at least try to add something.

>> No.3776852

>>3776847
Sorry, I only do quick edits under 3 min and will not waste more time on them.
But I certainly see your point.

>> No.3778565

>>3776818
you guys never fail to make me laugh