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Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others! don't take anything personal!

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>> No.3750911
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Old Bread:

>>3733812

(Sorry I didn't edit the OP image but I'm on my phone)

>> No.3751247
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Trying to draw something cool

>> No.3751261

>>3751247
try improving that anatomy bro

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>>3750905

>> No.3751292

>>3751261
What anatomy may I ask? The ear you mean? I could understand that, I couldnt find a good stylization for that

>> No.3751297

>>3751271
Kewl

>> No.3751303
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Repostin from last tread

Any help with the fg? I'm not sure how to approach it, due to all the stuff going, it either doesn't read or the colors are bad (or both).

Will it be sufficient to clean up the bg, or does something more need to be done?

>> No.3751307

>>3751247
Like what you're doing stylistically.

The chin looks weird, like it's being pushed way the fuck up into his face. Eyes look a little close together. Nose looks detached from where the rest of the face is going. Just try playing around with those parts and see where that gets you.

>> No.3751309

>>3751303
Darken the crab. They look too close making the crab and scene lose it sense of scale, it's clear the crab is far away but he feels close.

>> No.3751310

>>3751303
go as basic as you can get away with on the foreground. Couple of kelp frond silhouettes maybe. Once you get rid of the sketch framework on the ships in the bg it'll look way less cluttered. Blur / desaturate them a bit.

Pose-wise it looks like the bear is aiming to the right of the picture instead of where the crab is. Maybe adjust the leading leg a little bit.

Cool pic tho bro

>> No.3751354

>>3751310
thanks, I'll try that.

>>3751309
To push it in the background, it's rather applying some greenish fog in front of it? Darkening it would only bring it closer I think

>> No.3751362

>>3751303
bear needs to be more turned towards the crab (so gis back is towards us). rn it looks like he's looking past the crab entirely

>> No.3751373
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Soo, I'm trying to get into drawing...
Here's some sketches. I know it's not good. Any critique or tips?

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>>3751373
Read pic related. Also >>3744900

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been about a month working on this

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Gonna start doin studies more.

>> No.3751504

>>3751247
I like it. The values are just right, and ill take the facial anatomy as artistic licence. The ear/neck/face ratio kinda bugs me but yeah. Nice.

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practicing eyes rn

>> No.3751547

>>3751526
Is she sick

>> No.3751568
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Something for the prompt thread.

>> No.3751602

>>3751526
this makes me mad in ways i dont even feel like typing out

>> No.3751606

>>3751303
That bear looks like a mouse

>> No.3751710
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3751710

Well? What
do you think ?
I'm very druんk

>> No.3751740

>>3751547
maybe

>>3751602
thanks for the constructive crit, ima grind loomis for another 10 hours

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reposting from last thread, you made this new one so quickly. >>3750802

>>3751247
If you try to make it cool why the sadness? I like the result overall so far!

>>3751271
Very striking. Could use some reflection distortions on the water side.

>>3751303
I'm disagreeing a bit with some of the layout of what I think the reflections are on the crab? OR rim light, which should come from Fresnel reflections? I dunno anymore to be honest.
Rad storytelling so far!

>>3751422
Did you learn more or less than with shorter paintings? The waves look really good on the foreground boat, there's the two at the side of the picture that look kind of peaking symmetrically a tad. You could probably change one more, twist the most to the right so it points to the background boat for instance for composition.
Looks really good, damn those waves really have a ton of energy below that boat.

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First time painting on photoshop. Is there an easier way to paint things into the background without making 100s of clipping masks?

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Yeah I'm still working on it

>> No.3752095

>>3751443

Neat edges on the shell! If it were me, I'd exaggerate and add a bit more values to the yolk, maybe flecks of reflected light. Yolks are pretty watery.

>> No.3752097

>>3751869

Nice job on the skin but unfortunately, her neck looks broken.
And what's up with her left hand?

>> No.3752161

>>3752097
Thanks man. The head/arm was kinda done after I did the body so the anatomy went became a bit wonky. The left hand I wasn't sure how to paint hard edges for the details so I left it as a clump.

Now I know how to actually paint stuff I'll try study some hands today.

>> No.3752174

>>3751271
Why are you posting my image?

>> No.3752189

>>3751869
>I'm afraid to draw hands and feet: the painting

>> No.3752196
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>>3750905
Oops missed the new thread.

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>>3752189
literally this. Only got a tablet for Christmas so still getting used to drawing without looking at the pen, my lines are shit.

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can i get some crit on the colors? im going for atmospheric perspective towards the top of the image but im worried about it just looking washed out.

>> No.3752237

>>3751740
Good answer

>> No.3752271
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This is an npc for a game so she's supposed to be a little plain looking but gosh dangodon I love her.

>> No.3752310 [DELETED] 

>>3752196
Yass

>> No.3752316

>>3752220
Those hands aren't bad anon.

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>>3751310
>>3751362
>>3751606
I changed the bear, you're all right.

>>3751864
It's hard to keep the lighting consistent in such a scene, so you must be right. Toned them down a bit.

Thanks all.
Call it done at that point, as I don't really have the skills to do much better.

>>3752196
Really like the desaturated colors, you probably concentrate on the underlying drawing at that point.

>>3752236
It doesn't seem washed out to me.

>> No.3752323

>>3752320
Looks great now anon!!

>> No.3752390

>>3752320
>It doesn't seem washed out to me.
thanks anon!

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I was trying to do the five value exercise but I feel like I’m not doing it right.

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>>3752450
In a direct comparison it's going to look weird no matter how well you do it because you're using a warmer color temperature than your source picture. Just desaturate the pic.

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Roughing out some poses for a Catwoman pinup. Which three do you guys believe hold the most potential?

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Drew this for an sponsored post for a influencer.

Gonna add the influencer kinda peaking over the speaker, anyone got any feedback on how it looks now?

>> No.3752584

>>3752560
Top two and bottom left

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something I've been doodling

>> No.3752702

>>3752236
BBBBBBBBBRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPsnnnnniiiiiiffffffffffff...oh yes my dear....sssnnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiffffffff....quite pungent indeed...is that....dare I say....sssssssnniff...eggs I smell?......sniff sniff....hmmm...yes...quite so my darling....sniff....quite pungent eggs yes very much so .....ssssssssssssssnnnnnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiffffff....ah yes...and also....a hint of....sniff....cheese.....quite wet my dear....sniff...but of yes...this will do nicely....sniff.....please my dear....another if you please....nice a big now....BBBBBBRRRRRRRAAAAAAAPPPPPPPFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPFFFFFF Oh yes...very good!....very sloppy and wet my dear....hmmmmm...is that a drop of nugget I see on the rim?...hmmmm.....let me.....let me just have a little taste before the sniff my darling.......hmmmmm....hmm..yes....that is a delicate bit of chocolate my dear....ah yes....let me guess...curry for dinner?....oh quite right I am....aren't I?....ok....time for sniff.....sssssnnnnnnniiiiiiiiffffffff.....hmmm...hhhmmmmm I see...yes....yes indeed as well curry......hmmm....that fragrance is quite noticeable....yes.....onion and garlic chutney I take it my dear?.....hmmmmm....yes quite.....BBBBBBRRRRRRRRPPPPPPFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTTTTTT Oh I was not expecting that…that little gust my dear….you caught me off guard…yes…so gentle it was though…hmmmm…let me taste this little one…just one small sniff…..sniff…ah….ssssssnnnnnniiiiiffffffffffff…and yet…so strong…yes…the odor….sniff sniff…hmmm….is that….sniff….hmmm….I can almost taste it my dear…..yes….just…sniff….a little whiff more if you please…..ssssssnnnnnniiiiiffffffffff…ah yes I have it now….yes quite….hhhhmmmm…delectable my dear…..quite exquisite yes…..I dare say…sniff….the most pungent one yet my dear….ssssnnnnniiiifffffffffffffffffffffff….yes….

>> No.3752716

>>3752196
Does Samus make you ahhhhhh, Mr. Lonely and Horny poster?

>> No.3752725

>>3752580
cute. isn't the logo a bit off-center though?

>> No.3752761

>>3752716
AAAHHHHH I WANT TO SMELL SAMUS’S SUIT AAAAHHHH AAAAHHHHHH I WANT MOMMY SAMUS TO SQUISH ME INTO A TINY MORPHBALL AND CALL ME A GOOD BOY AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

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>>3752560
>>3752584
First rough refined.

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>>3750905
hey draw this. look at those nose scrunches. look at them boobs. look at that drapery.

>> No.3753285

>>3752761
Thank you based lonely and horny poster.

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>>3752761
kek

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>>3751271
I want ur skillz :(
>>3751422
...And yours too
>>3752320
This is so cool! Great concept too
>>3753231
Very William-Turner-y. Can't wait to see it finished.

I'd like some critique on my pic. I might re-do the sky and the lights later but need to get some sleep now

>> No.3753770
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how should i tackle oily textures?

>> No.3753774

>>3753770
look into specular reflection

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Just wanna post a doodle I did in my phone. Wanna draw more but I’m scared of big projects. Disposable things are comfy

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Can I get some advice on how to improve this? Or where exactly did I go wrong?

>> No.3753919

>>3753822
The perspective between opening, water level, and base aren’t consistent. If you’re going for realism, consider that the highlights, specularity are more about the glass reflecting the environment.

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work in progress

>> No.3753932
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Relearning light sources again after spending a few months focusing on linework.

>> No.3753935

>>3753932
Firstly some perspective would help; even a little bit of foreshortening from the closer shoulder to the further one.

If you're talking about lighting, that shadow on her right arm (viewers left) doesn't make sense. The cast shadows everywhere don't make sense as well (under chin, under hair line), the should be in line with the direction of light.

Vary your line sizes, use less lines. It'll look a lot less boring.

>> No.3753938

>>3753924
I''d say if you're going to use that thick line as an "outline" to the picture, also use it to create an illusion of depth (as you've done between the chest/non-gun arm).
The top of the pants, the folds at the bottom, all the outlines of the gun, they all don't "pop" out because the line weight is the same.

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I finally made it

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Anyone else find drawing on a tablet extremely hard because it's "slippery" compared to traditional pen/pencil?

I'm having that issue with pic related (it's just a sketch), something feels off compared to my pencil stuff. Anyone notice anything strange (particularily the anatomy)?

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>>3753932
>>3753935
couldn't do much about the lines or anatomy but I did mess with the shadows a tad, thanks for the feedback.

>> No.3753957

>>3753953
you have terrible line quality. and your color choices and placement are bad. pen is different from pencil is different from charcoal is different from oil is different from watercolor is different from digital. there's always a learning curve with mediums but a sturdy foundation will help bridge the gaps. alternatively, some people put paper on their screenless tablets to get rid of that squeaky feel.

>> No.3753975

>>3753940
you do realize he follows a lot /beg/s

>> No.3754012

>>3752560
>>3752905
In my opinion - you're tackling form too early in the process.

Form should come AFTER your SHAPE is defined. If you only worry about shapes first, you have more freedom and a higher chance of coming up with more visually unique thumbnails for further development. Form can always come later but a muddled silhouette (not talking about this drawing specifically) is beyond saving.

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Any ideas for the background, rendering, etc? I've been staring at this for too long.
I intended for her to hold one of the flowers audience is throwing at her

>>3752450
A for effort, but are you doing a five value exercise or are you just making a painting?
If it's the former, there's no way you could've squinted properly and still got this much detail in.
Squint, zoom out or both until all detail becomes unrecognizable and draw the big blobby shapes of value. Make it read just like the reference and you're on the right track.

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First commission in the new year, life is good

>> No.3754083

>>3754079
how long did that take you and what are your rates?

>> No.3754088
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All done

>> No.3754187

>>3754079
Took about 11 hours at a rate of 30€/h.

>> No.3754189

>>3754187
Meant to reply to >>3754083

>> No.3754193

>>3754187
>>3754189
nicely done.

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>> No.3754210

>>3754194
I really like the style but the anatomy on the legs is to distracting, it just feels off.

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>>3753431

>> No.3754237

>>3754033
I think it would be best if you did a couple of thumbnails working out the overall lighting and composition to decide on what background. Your idea for it is good but if you want to execute it cohesively starting from the semi-rendered figure you already have is going to be harder.
>>3753822
You've used cheap white tones instead of having the glass refract the beautiful blue of the glowing liquid in it, there is almost no interaction between the vessel and its contents. Glass is wonderful to paint because it picks up notes of color from its surrounding and contents, you'll notice that if you try a still-life of it.
>>3751422
Foreground waves look amazing but the strokes on the foreground boat don't carry enough precision making the wooden construction of look unnatural and warped.

>> No.3754238

>>3754210
yea i agree

>> No.3754277

>>3753764
really awkward tangents and unbalance on the right side of the image. the foliage seems like it drops out or reduces in size way too quickly only a few yards away. i wouldn't put the shooting star behind the tree. personally too your values seem too compressed or there's a lack of general ambient occlusion which makes everything too ungrounded and seem pasted on or just floating there. i'd maybe push out the left vanishing point further as it makes the far building look really distorted.

overall i have no idea what your composition is making me look at. the first thing my eye sees is the tower and flag, then down to the plants then up and around to the shooting star, or maybe before the plants my eye goes to that very low detail tree in the middle. you should check out jack hamm's landscape book. it is an incredible resource for composition.

>> No.3754297

>>3754194
His left (our right) leg needs to come up a bit, because it's creating an awkward tangent line with his other leg.

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Trying to be a bit faster with going into colour and digital. This was done in like two hours, not including the sketchbook drawing i based it on.

>> No.3754391

>>3754237
Thanks boss

>> No.3754412

>>3754365
really nice!
whats ur blog, dA instagram etc

>> No.3754424

>>3754412
i hope this isnt a troll but i am shameboxx everywhere.

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More roughs. Which ones stand out, and which should be redone?

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>>3754277
Thanks Anon. I toned down the values a bit in the final version. I'm still a little awkward at drawing things in perspective, but I hope I get a bit better with practice

>> No.3754456

>>3753822
>>3753919
Thank you for the advice, I’ve gotten a hold of a perfume bottle to go do a study now.

>> No.3754459

>>3754456
Meant
>>3754237

>> No.3754491

>>3754430
I think fourth in second row and the third in the last row could use tweaking. All the designs in the first column look well defined

>> No.3754587

>>3754491
Much obliged.

Let me know if any of the others catch your eye.

>> No.3754678

>>3752725
honestly dont see it, which way do you reccomend i move it?

trying 2 learn how to paint n stuff, anyone got any tips (using procreate)

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>>3754678
woops

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Hi i wanted to know what can i improve from seeing this drawing that i did yesterday, its watercolor

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>>3754687
Shit, fixed

>> No.3754706

>>3754690
The drawing itself is off, her right arm is way too skinny, her mouth is off center, her ear is weird, but these are all drafting critiques that you’ll improve as you draw more and more. For the actual water coloring, you only actually appear to be taking advantage of the medium in the background. You’re being way too concsious in painting the subject, you could get that result with colored pencils or markers. Generally, using true black is poor form in watercolors (or actually in most media especially digital, in oils it’s typical to just mix a dark warm and cool like ultramarine blue and burnt sienna). Be bolder and experiment. I recommend starting a new piece, if you really like this subject, then redo this piece. We have thousands of bad/mediocre paintings in us that we have to get out of the way until we are where we at. Often you’ll spend hours on a piece and maybe a day later try the same subject and get a better result in a fraction of the time.

>> No.3754712

>>3754690
>yesterday
>30 12 2018

anyway, there's so much it'd be nitpicking. major anatomy issues would be the left hand, the left shoulder, her ear, the nose pointing straight at us instead of being in perspective.

color wise it reads horribly. turn it greyscale and you'll see some things. hell, even look at just the thumbnail. you have a very saturated and dark red next a saturated blue which just makes my eyes buzz. then you have the pale hand next to the pink which also looks bad. you need contrast in the value and saturation of these parts. the sand looks horrible, the bushes and beach do nothing to improve this color or composition wise. the sky doesn't make much sense color wise, maybe try working with lighter washes and wet into wet. the figure and hair is mostly colored fine although i'd probably add some shadow tones to the hair because it's not just one color.

>> No.3754787

>>3750905
I KNOW I KNOW the only thing I "drew" is the ship, but it's from scratch, no ref, I bashed the seat and the windshield interior thing, not sure if I'll keep them because im new to bashing and its easier to just paint the shit anyways. I need suggestions on what to do with the ship details and lighting. help, /ic/! this is a commission album cover

>> No.3754794

>>3754446
SUGAR
SPICE

>> No.3754796
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>>3754787
lmao 4got the image

>> No.3754845

>>3754706
>>3754712
So my biggest problem is that i don't know about composition and color (i'm currently practicing anatomy) And it still doesn't feel like i use watercolors how they are to supposed to shine

>> No.3754853

>>3754845
nah your biggest problem is you're posting here instead of drawing.

>> No.3754854
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I had a slow day today.

>> No.3754868

>>3754680
Go home sinix, you're drunk

>> No.3754945
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>>3753924
I loved that series when I was a wee lad

>> No.3754949
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>> No.3755024
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decided to paint out a doodle i liked, trying to get more comfortable with moving "paint"

>> No.3755062
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Coochie...

>> No.3755119
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No porn thread so posting here
WIP
Do i have talent?

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>> No.3755263
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>>3750905

>> No.3755393
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>>3754678
>>3754680
>>3754868
forgot 2 mention, butt this is a sinix study.

>> No.3755415

>>3753975
>he only follows 340 people.

>> No.3755426

>>3755024
nice flying head dude

>> No.3755444

>>3755415
look at some of the pages he follows, they're pretty /beg/, he just follows randoms that likebomb and comment.

>> No.3755467
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3755467

I don't leave the beg or alt generals often, but damn. There are some pretty good artists here.
Mega mawile vs azumarill
Are there any guides on terrain destruction? Simplifying to cubes works, but I can't do it forever.

>> No.3755629
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This my OC. is she cute

>> No.3755658
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Working on this, trying out a different process of rendering inside of cells

>> No.3755677

>>3755658
where is the light source coming from?

>> No.3755683
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3755683

Commission sketch fresh out of the press

>> No.3755688

>>3755677
Originally just supposed to be more of an all around ambient light type deal and layers will be added after the base characters are rendered to unify the environment and lighting

>> No.3755706
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>> No.3755710

>>3755119
No

>> No.3755720

>>3754365
The nose ridge, chin and the ears are inconsistent. Good otherwise.

>> No.3755725

>>3755119
It looks traced

>> No.3755732
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thoughts ?

Anything helps at this point. I feel like there's something wrong with the eyes especially

>> No.3755734

>>3755732
If I had to nitpick about the eyes I'd say they could use some darker values around the lids but honestly I think it's super lovely as is.

>> No.3755741

>>3755119
if you need to trace, at least do it better. what is that mutant dick?

>> No.3755772
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>> No.3755775
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Currently working on colouring this with copics, coloured fine liners, and gel pens.

>> No.3755792
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is there anything off/distracting about the composition?

>>3754277
not that anon, but thanks for the book recommendation.

>>3754949
my eyes want to go to the right edge of the pic thanks to the high contrast between the wing and environment. it steals focus from the main body of the character.

>> No.3755808

>>3755119
Read the sticky.

>> No.3755821 [DELETED] 
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>>3750905
Literally mfw trying to figure this out

>> No.3755845

>>3755725
>>3755119
Why do you say it's traced?

>> No.3755846

>>3755741
See >>3755845

>> No.3755866

>>3755845
Because it has all the traits of traced art.
Lines mysteriously falling perfectly into place with no sense of lineweight, form or construction. Terrible folds, crosshatching and when there's information missing suddenly they don't now how to draw, hence the misformed dick. If you can't see this you're either blind, trolling or a beginner.

>> No.3755883

>>3755792
The perspective looks a bit fucked, the whole of the background feels like it should be lower along with the horizon line. This way you could also lead the attention more to her head with it contrasting against the bright gate behind her.

>> No.3755884

>>3755866
>with no sense of lineweight
lol, did you even looked at the pic?
>>Outer line in a single weight
>>Inner lines have lineweight
>Terrible folds
now folds have to become the form you like instead of being random, just to please you.
>crosshatching
now croshatching is a crime, sure never a great artist like mucha used it on it's works. now you taught me.
> the misformed dick.
there are lots of kinds of dicks, not only the ones you like. you should now since you suck so much dick on a daily basis.
just because you don't know how to draw does not mean everybody that draws better traces.

>> No.3755887

>>3755883
thanks for the crit anon! i see what you're saying and yeah, i think i agree. i'll try messing with the bg.

>> No.3755895

>>3755884
Wow, being this salty.
Your traced art is bad, accept it and learn how to actually draw.

>> No.3755896

>>3755895
Yeah, sure faggot

>> No.3755906

>>3755896
Why are you so defensive?

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>>3750905
Literally mfw trying to figure out values

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>> No.3756095

>>3756065
It's trash. She's wearing clothing.

Remove the clothes, and you MAY talk to me again.

>> No.3756099

>>3755732
It's pretty good as it is. What you lack is routine. When you keep repeating the same rendering techniques, the overall pieces should clean up with them.

>> No.3756130
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3756130

I’ll stop.

>> No.3756148
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3756148

okay, how the fuck do I paint digitally? I don't understand it. I just can not wrap my head around it. Everything I do is always (black) lines, flats, hard shadows, highlights. How do I break this? I want to make actual "paintings" and not "bootleg anime screen shots." Everything looks so phenomenal and blows me away and I get so inspired, but then I try it myself and I'm instantly frustrated because I don't know how to render or add values or what the fuck ever. I just want to be able to paint in a style similar to pic related I found on twitter. Not just for anime shit, I mean overall. How do I get out of this mess?

>> No.3756156

>>3755467
go outside and pick up like 8 rocks. Come in and draw them from various angles as your terrain. Also add tiny stones and debris floating in the air but don't clutter the page with it

>> No.3756167

>>3756065
Still early but her right breast/pectoral/shoulder anatomy seems a bit off

>> No.3756291
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>>3755792
update. do the colors look natural?

>>3755936
think of the head in terms of planes to help you design your lighting and to help you make sense of what value goes where. loomis has a couple pages devoted to this idea in "drawing the head and hands"

>> No.3756295

>>3756148
Post your work

>> No.3756297
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3756297

How's this?

>> No.3756310

>>3756297
I feel like my eyes are vomiting.

>> No.3756314

>>3756295
at work, will post tonight. any general tips would be great for the time being though as I can just scribble them down real quick

>> No.3756322
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3756322

Trying to get back in to groove.

>> No.3756324

>>3756291
The cools in shadow are usually from the ambient reflected skylight so you might want to be more consistent about that. Some prism affect from the direct sunlight on the water might be cool and you might want to sell the refraction and ripples a bit more. There are ripples on the water surface but the stairs and pool bottom aren’t distorted in areas.

>> No.3756353

>>3756322
You are good m8
If this from reference?

>> No.3756356

>>3756314
Digital is all about lines or rendering, if you're good both. If you can't see in 3D inside your head, you need to get back to traditional and work on construction and perspective.

Digital is much more straightforward than traditional, I feel. You draw and what you draw is what you get. With a pencil you have to keep in mind the shape of the tip, the hardness of the pencil, how thin the paper is and how easy it is to blend textures or make lines thicker. None of this exists in digital, hence why sometimes strokes can feel "off".

>> No.3756358

>>3756297
Looks like a FF final boss 3rd form

>> No.3756380

>>3756324
thanks a lot, anon. painting water refraction/reflection is a mystery -- i'll have to find some references.

can you elaborate on the cools in shadow bit? is the inconsistency in my choice of hues or where i applied them?

>> No.3756449

>>3756358
Now that you mention it...

>> No.3756475

>>3756380
https://youtu.be/gwLQ0cDb4cE

>> No.3756477

>>3756475
thanks!

>> No.3756525

>>3756130
Lovely work. Keep it up

>> No.3756557
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>>3750905
post it in the archived thread
How's this one doing

>> No.3756635
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bookmark

>> No.3756648

>>3756525
tnx anon, that means a lot ;)

>> No.3756656
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Just relaxed and let my wander to get that spark back. Didn't care much for the structure, though if I end up liking the concept, I may paint over the sketch and tighten those foundations.

Thoughts?

>> No.3756837
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Progress

>> No.3756876
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Sketchbook stuff

>>3756837
>>3756656
Oof, I thought it would have looked nice with some softer watercolor style painting, looking forward to seeing progress either way.

>> No.3756933
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3756933

Rendering this shite

>> No.3756950

>>3756933
wtf that composition
Make up your mind, she's inside, or outside? Because it's not raining/dripping inside

>> No.3756954

>>3756950
>>3756933
I kind of agree with this. Your painting skills are beautiful, undoubtedly, but there's just so much going on in this painting that nothing really comes to the forefront.

>> No.3756965
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>>3750905
Not done yet.

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>>3750905
>>3756965
Here's the second one I've been working on..

>> No.3756997
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>> No.3756998

>>3756950
Isnt it obvious it's raining inside?

>> No.3757187
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>> No.3757193
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>>3756356
finally back. Here's my most recent poster I did to sell at a small gig I got. Finished it in late November. Not much new since, due to Christmas time at work. I get what you're saying about lines or rendering. I feel like my lines are decent and I don't know how to render very well at all, but especially on digital. I've gotten even a few compliments here on /ic/ on my lines for what it's worth. (not on the pic I posted though)

>> No.3757247
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Her shoulders are broken but as far as color goes, am I on the right track? This is my first time paining without lineart

>> No.3757265

>>3757247
blog/site?

the leg being busted is the biggest thing i'm seeing that looks off. maybe the background lighting should be reflected onto her more.

>> No.3757266

>>3756950
very stupid criticism

>> No.3757279
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Zelda oil sketch, 4 color palette

>> No.3757280
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>> No.3757281
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Just finished a compilation for a roleplay im going to run

>> No.3757397

>>3757279
is zelda a boy?

>> No.3757490
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3757490

made this for my dad.

>> No.3757770

>>3755772
Sweet. The only constructive feedback I would like to give is that you should vary the details a little, as in, don't give every part of the image the same amount of detail. This will guide the viewers attention.

However you could also fix that by giving it a less detailed background so the foreground character is the detailed part.

>> No.3757789

>>3757187
Going to resume this after I refine a few roughs. Anything about the skin's values, color choices, edge control, and tonal variation that needs to be touched up before I merge the layers and go into the detail work?

>> No.3757792
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new

>> No.3757795

>>3757792
Someone likes Junji Ito.

>> No.3757803

>>3757792
The bumps on the neck are unnecessary, work on the hair, lines are scratchy there. I like the water alot, you put in a shit ton of time into that.

>> No.3757805
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3757805

>>3757792
Sup HeiYuBai?

>> No.3757817

>>3757397
I’ve always thought of Hylians as elfish and androgynous :)

>> No.3757822

>>3757795
well yea
>>3757803
tnx anon, will do
>>3757805
h-hi

>> No.3757838
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3757838

i watched a few videos on youtube and started doing figure drawing. Any advice?
i have a few more i might post btw..

>> No.3757888

>>3751373
Work on still lifes, then study anatomy. Draw things as they appear to your eyes, not how you think they should look.

>> No.3757892

>>3757838
It's a promising start for a beginner(it really is) but really pay attention to your proportions. Study anatomy!

>> No.3757899

>>3757792
>when you see calarts.jpg

>> No.3757904

>>3757899
You really start to puke and your eyes roll into the back of your head?

Grow up /ic/

>> No.3757905

>>3757904
t. Calarts student
You will never make it Tumblr.

>> No.3757907

>>3757904
L0L

Upvoted! xD

>> No.3757915
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>>3757904
Is this bait?

>> No.3757926
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>>3757892
thx. whats more efficient? learning anatomy from books, learning it from youtube videos (i watched a few from proko) or just drawing until i get it right?

>> No.3757953

>>3757926
not him, but draw from life.

>> No.3758038
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Done with it

>> No.3758040

>>3758038
Really cool, got an Instagram?

>> No.3758046
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Idk I think my anatomy is a little off

>> No.3758051

>>3758040
Yep
https://www.instagram.com/klinck_foster

>> No.3758057
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>>3757817
>sees Hyrulians as elfish


They're literally elves

>> No.3758064

>>3758051
Damn hell yeah I love robots and shit. Great stuff.

>> No.3758071

>>3758057
Not really, some of the dudes look like beards dwarves with elf ears

>> No.3758085

>>3758046
Legs too long

>> No.3758090

>>3758046
A fellow Yoji Shinkawa's fan, am I right? I like it, but the pose is kinda stiff. His drawings are all about motion.
I think practicing gesture drawing would help on this.
Keep it up, you're doing good.

>> No.3758107

>>3758085
Shit I knew it
>>3758090
Yeah, of course. You're right - I was struggling with it so I gave up and made a joke drawing kek. I think I'm gonna try this again (for real)

>> No.3758218
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3758218

Made a self portrait, gonna post it on my gram tommorrow.

Any feedback?

>> No.3758224

>>3758218
Anon... I..

>> No.3758225

>>3758218
I hope you aren't that ugly in real life.
Just kidding, it's very impressive, what technique have you used? Acrylic? Oil?

>> No.3758230

>>3758218
It’s like you pasted seinfelds face on Jonah hills head.

>> No.3758235

>>3758224
>>3758225
>>3758230
Ouch, I’ll have u anon’s know that I would consider myself to be a very handsome manboy. ;)

I used procreate on the ipad to draw this.

>> No.3758237

>>3758235
Post your insta so I can laff at u

>> No.3758294

>>3758071
Nigger they are LITERALLY elves

>> No.3758297

>>3754012
post your work

>> No.3758310
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>> No.3758337

>>3758310
the low detail flower is the focal point.

>> No.3758363

>>3758337
>low detail flower
>low detail

For now, yes.

Everything is on it's own layer still. There's room for a lot of adjustments and softened edges once everything is taken care of

>> No.3758381
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3758381

Hope this doesn’t fall under the polishing a turd meme.

>>3758237
>@eisebrachtart
blz no bully

>> No.3758383

>>3758363
>For now
oh ok. i c.

>> No.3758490

>>3758381
>eisebrachtart
HAHAHAHAHAHA HOLY SHIT. I remember your portrait of your mom. You guys look identical.

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>> No.3758822

>>3758218
Jewish?

>> No.3758937

>>3758822
From what my parents tell me im mostly dutch with some Indonesian mixed in, but who knows.

>> No.3759034

>>3755444
i have never commented or liked his stuff, diddnt really know he was on insta.

suk my doodle.

>> No.3759065
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Some faces from imagination and painting practice.
Any crits are welcome!

>> No.3759095
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fundies are one thing, appeal is a whole nother skill

>> No.3759104

>>3758490
We both have witch chins and round glasses, so I get that a lot.

btw that portrait of my mom was based on a pic were she was like 6 years older than i am now.

>> No.3759163

>>3759095
how does one learn that skill?

>> No.3759194

>>3759163
Obviously I have no idea, was hoping someone could fill me in.

>> No.3759356
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3759356

>>3751422
i don't know why, but downloading pictures from /ic/ shows color better on my phone, than if i download it straight from my laptop

>> No.3759389

>>3759163
design.

>> No.3759425
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>>3759425

>> No.3759477
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>> No.3759527

>>3759425
STOP DRAWING BUTTS YOU ARE TRIGGERING MY LONELY AND HORNY SENSIBILITIES

>> No.3759535

>>3759389
i'd ask you to elaborate but i already know you wouldn't be able to.

>> No.3759646
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Sargent study

>> No.3759825

>>3759163
Once you realize that rhythm, contrast and harmony are not just dots and lines from stupid textbook exercises but rather principles underlying all natural design, you might be on the right track.

The simplest way to figure it out is to save pictures that are appealing to you or trigger certain emotions and after you have a bunch, you'll start noticing patterns among them.

>> No.3759828

>>3759163
>>3759825
And by patterns I mean just that, rhythm contrast and harmony, which are the most universal ones, but there are many more, see Gestalt principles.
It all comes down to biology, our brain evolved through millions of years of life in nature, so the principles nature uses to build plants and trees and fire and air are appealing to us.

>> No.3759871

>>3759356
Is it the color temperature adjustment in windows?

>> No.3759877
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not done yet

>> No.3759886

>>3759356

Damn, that looks nice! You've done an amazing job on the waves. You might want to have a little more atmospheric perspective to emphasize the distance between the ships. There's still something that's bugging me with the bow of the ship closest to us. The perspective just seems a little wonky. I tried to do an overpainting but I couldn't get it right either. If this was my own piece I'd probably go to 3D software and do a quick test to figure this shit out...

GJ either way my whigga/nigga!

>> No.3759898

>>3759877
Are you named after that battleship?

>> No.3759907

>>3759825
>>3759828
thanks mate but none of this makes sense to me :(

>> No.3759918

>>3759907
I think it’s graphic design shit. Read Alla Prima II, it’s better and more inspiring.

>> No.3759920

>>3759918
cheers. i've been meaning to pick that one up.

>> No.3759978
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zoomzoomzoom

>> No.3759982

>>3759978
Is she wearing a gasmask?

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>>3750905

>> No.3759989

>>3759982
sure

>> No.3759992

>>3759065
I like the kinda blocky rough texture they seem to have

>> No.3760008

>>3759978
i like everything about this
blog?

>> No.3760037
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>>3759877

Aye, I think you piece is fucking awesome and it has a lot of potential so here's my 5 cents:

Commit to your lighting choices. If there's a light that's making a highlight on her nose it's definitely also going to make a highlight on that mask on her head and other parts of her face. Also the eye patch and everything else. Looks like it's a reflective material like porcelain(?) so boost that shit up. If there's a green ambient light from the top/top right you commit to that too. It's going to hit the mask and you might also see it in the shadow areas and even her skin.

I got rid of the rim light on her nose. If you want to have a rim light you also have to commit to that. the same light that's hitting her nose would also hit her cheek and eye etc. so it didn't make sense to me at all. I'm guessing that you're thinking that it was coming from that glowing ball thing but I think it looks better if it just hits her weird stringy arm... Also be consistent with the highlights on her weird stringy parts.

I don't know if she's supposed to be a child or what ever but you need to have some semblance of shape on her torso. I don't really have a ton of time to do these overpaints so did a terrible job and just kinda made her look like one of those Mortal Kombat bitches in their fighting pose. It definitely doesn't need to be what I did but you do need to do something about that. Now her body just kind of looks like a wooden plank with fabric pinched over it.

Some of this crap was probably stuff that you were going to do anyway since your piece wasn't done yet so I'm sorry if I'm pointing shit out that you already noticed. Also, I'm just some fucking hobo and I don't really know anything about anything so take everything I say with a grain of salt.

>> No.3760039

>>3760037

Fuck, I lost a paragraph:

If there's nothing to see at the bottom area of the image, you've already established that she's in some kind of smog so you just smog that shit up! You don't want us to look there so there's no shame in blurring that area out.

That's everything I had to say. Back to work!

>> No.3760042

>>3760037
>>3759877

Very nice crit and paint over my dude. Would also add that some edge variation would be nice. The edges used aren’t wrong but spell everything out for the viewer too much imo. This could be subjective on my part though, I enjoy pieces where I have to work a bit and there’s a good amount of abstraction. Also the shoulders look too high and wide but I’m not really sure what the anatomy of this character is supposed to be so that might be on purpose? Solid piece all around though.

>> No.3760082
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3760082

Just a wee update

>> No.3760128

>>3760082
Where you doing that knight in the woods with the symphony?

>> No.3760136

>>3760082
Based

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>>3760082

>> No.3760304

>>3760128
Ye. I havent touched in months though

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>> No.3760329

>>3760304
ah damn good shit all around tho boyo

>> No.3760354

>>3760082
that's really nice

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>>3750905
dang what now

>> No.3760475

>>3760428
burn up on reentry I guess

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>>3752236
not exactly like this but something similar,I'd say just study ref with similar positions to fix your mistakes. no neck, arms too beefy and tubular, legs too short.

>> No.3760527
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>>3752236
not exactly like this but something similar,I'd say just study ref with similar positions to fix your mistakes. no neck, arms too beefy and tubular, legs too short. Looks like it will be pretty nice when it's done though.

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>> No.3760545
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>>3760536
dang u gave her the yujiro treatment

>> No.3760547
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It's been a while since i've done anything close to finished
>>3759356
good shit

>> No.3760615

>>3752627
that looks dope as fuck

>> No.3760616
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First time working with digital colors, any advice would be great. Background comin soon

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>>3757279
realized I gave him a juicy booty after I uploaded it everywhere. oh wells.

>> No.3760675

>>3759907
>save a bunch of appealing porn pics
>flip through them a couple times
>realize they all have low contrast, high key pastel palette, unbelievably simple shapes and the parts of interest always take almost half the picture
>uh huh, so those are principles that make a porn pic appealing
>use same principles on different subject
>profit
Appeal isn't rocket science

>> No.3760741
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Draw my gf

>> No.3760753

>>3760741
drew*

>> No.3760758

>>3755467
blog?

>> No.3760761

>>3759898
arashi just means storm

>> No.3760791
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lousy unfinished manga drawing which i hope to continue tomorrow

i want to finish the green pullover then draw in red plaits & green bows

>> No.3760800
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Stuck on this one, I love the idea but have no clue what to do next with it. Any tips?

>> No.3760801
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I like demons

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starting to render

>> No.3760841

>>3760536
The musculature in her back doesn't make sense. Nice foreshortening though and I'm looking forward to seeing it finished with the added environment and scooter.

>> No.3760847

>>3760082
>those huge rain strokes

really shows you the unfiltered skill

>> No.3760854

>>3760527
thanks a lot for the redline and the references! i set the pic aside for now to work on other things, but this is very helpful. saving the pic for later.

>> No.3761266

>>3760761
Oh could be read as yamakaze which was a battle ship in ww2 and a kancolle girl

>> No.3761447

>>3760758
none

>> No.3761709

>>3759978
really great man, do you have a blog?

>> No.3761728

>>3759978
Mabel? Always pleasantly surprised when I see you still post here. Just out of curiousity, do you still frequent? or only come here once in a while?

>> No.3762072

>>3750905

I'm not a board regular. Do you guys do requests here?

>> No.3762362

>>3759978
Very energetic. I like it.

>> No.3762363

>>3760616

Is she underwater? I know with that character it's pretty likely. If not, you may want to go a bit lighter. She's very dark right now.

>> No.3762364
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I know this is very basic right now but I'm going to paint it and just needed to get the linework down.

>> No.3762525

NEW THREAD

>>3762524
>>3762524
>>3762524

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