/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[Anonymous No.3728282]

I'm fucking bored and I need to get warmed up! Send me your /beg/ sketch and I'll try to over paint it into something awesome in about 20 minutes. Other people can chime in too if you're brave enough. Let's have an overpainting thread motherfuckers!!!

[Anonymous No.3728290]

>>3728282
enjoy do whatever

[Anonymous No.3728292]

>>3728282
JUST STFU BRIAN.

[Anonymous No.3728297]

>>3728292

I'm not even brian... I think we might have a winner! >>3728290 I'm not sure what's going on with him/her though but that's okay. Makes this even more fun.

[Anonymous No.3728300]

>>3728297
its not human but do whatever have fun warming up

[Anonymous No.3728358]

>>3728300
>>3728290

So I had no idea what OP was going for here so I turned it into some kind of 90's super villain reject. Decided to just have tose tenticles on his fingers instead of the whole arms as I think it looks cooler. Sorry for taking so long. I had to take a huge dump and this was a difficult starting point.

[Anonymous No.3728366]

>>3728358
It's a pokemon senpai

[Anonymous No.3728372]

>>3728366

Which one? I haven't plaid Pokémon in ~20 years and I think there are like 1000000000 of them now.

[Anonymous No.3728381]

Is it "Deoxys"? I think I found him. I'm gonna paint him now. What a fucking weird design! Definitely prefer the ones we had when I was a kid in the 90's. I'm such a fucking old faggot...

[Anonymous No.3728382]

>>3728358
WOAH

[Anonymous No.3728417]

>>3728358
I actually really like this even though it’s not the original pokemon at all

[Anonymous No.3728420]

>>3728358
This is great

[Anonymous No.3728430]

>>3728417
>>3728420

Hey, thanks guys! I'm going to paint my version of the actual Pokémon now. I feel stupid for not getting that it was a pokémon. Ehh...

[Anonymous No.3728432]

>>3728430
I didn't know either. How long have you been practicing? Your level is my ideal.

[Anonymous No.3728443]

>>3728432

I've been trying to get better at digital painting for about 4-5 years but I've also been studying 3d modeling, sculpting and other shit so my level is definitely not crazy high. Aim higher bro.

[Anonymous No.3728454]

>>3728282
please paint fishman (the wrestler of your pic) fighting against a mummy with blue demon

[Anonymous No.3728465]

My fucking piece of shit 70€ computer crashed. Hope it saved mah pokemanz...

[Anonymous No.3728474]

>>3728465

Whee! It did. I'm such a fucking cunt!

[Anonymous No.3728477]

>>3728358
work on your edges

[Anonymous No.3728518]

>>3728477

Edges are a fucking hard thing to master. I don't think there's a single exercise that you can do that helps you with edges. Just gotta fuck around with different things I'mma try my best.

[Anonymous No.3728555]

Finally done with my Pokemon dude. I took a lot of artistic liberties because I like edgy bullshit and I like my pokemen organic like real, sexy animals!

[Anonymous No.3728556]

>>3728555
holy moly. this is awesome

[Anonymous No.3728558]

>>3728555
Nice. Apparently the paint over threads bring the decent artists out of the woodwork.

[Anonymous No.3728562]

>>3728556
>>3728558

Thanks guys. Maybe I'll render this guy out tomorrow so I can get that sweet-sweet internet pussy on facebook and Art Station... I love doing paint overs. I never have any good ideas and It's fun to do stuff that I wouldn't normally touch (like Pokémon).

[Anonymous No.3728614]

>>3728555
flat as fuck what is that highlight on his neck? not only does your edge need work, but your brush work too. plastering that shitty filter on top doesnt help this garbage painting either.

[Anonymous No.3728620]

>>3728555
The structure of the head makes no sense, see the eye sockets for examole. They would be on the side of his skull and are not formed like proper eye sockets. You can render all you want but shitty structure always show.

[Anonymous No.3728622]

>>3728614

Thanks for the crit. I'll think about that. I like the rimlight on the neck though, even if it's not really realistic. If I had more time I'd probably make it more pronounced so it'd spread further to the right side of his head and shoulder. I think it helps the readability and brings the focus to the face more. This isn't something I'd call finished or put into my portfolio. I'll spend a good 10h. on a portrait like this if I really want it to pop but I guess you're right on some of your points.

>>3728620

I'm not seeing it. He's not supposed to have average human proportions since he is a Pokémon. Maybe you can do a redline or something?

[Anonymous No.3728624]

>>3728282
here's a thor I was doing in pencil

[Anonymous No.3728679]

>>3728620
Deoxys has a weird ass rubbery body and skull. I think anon's is fine.

[Anonymous No.3728683]

>>3728620
Do better in 20 minutes or shoo, crab.

[Anonymous No.3728686]

>>3728683

To be fair, I didn't do that in 20 minutes.

>>3728624

I have to do other shit now. Maybe somebody else can do it? That's a really cool/difficult pose! Did you come up with it your self?

[Anonymous No.3728688]

>>3728282

[Anonymous No.3728708]

>>3728282

[Anonymous No.3728713]

>>3728683
okay

[Anonymous No.3728718]

>>3728282

[Anonymous No.3728749]

>>3728358
Ez

[Anonymous No.3729254]

help me with this senpai, im retarded and i cannot color it. Thanks.

(she's supposed to be redhead btw, but do whatever you want really)

[Anonymous No.3729729]

I did this yesterday and its still bothering me. Please help.

[Anonymous No.3729730]

>>3729729
Goddammit

[Anonymous No.3729734]

>>3728358
MORE

[Anonymous No.3729737]

>>3729730
From the thumbnail I thought it was a grumpy goblin

[Anonymous No.3729817]

>>3729729
Here's what I saw from the thumbnail.

[Anonymous No.3729935]

>>3729817
I like it

[Anonymous No.3730597]

OP is dead, RIP

[Anonymous No.3731266]

>>3728555
Don't mind the shit comments, they are just jealous since they have nothing better to do than complain about people who are leagues better than them. You did a really great job.

[Anonymous No.3731725]

>>3728282

yeah sure, hope it helps OP

[Anonymous No.3731856]

I don't have time to do proper overpaintings today but I'll give you guys a little feedback:

>>3728708
The face proportions are OK but try going over everything with sharp, straight lines. They don't have to be straight but it usually tightens things up nicely. The hand is all messed up and too small. Maybe post your reference if possible?

>>3728718

Really like your expressive style. Reminds me of French comics! Try to do a construction drawing before you do your final character. I get that he/she's supposed to be cartoony but you can still build that shit up from 3D primitives. Try to figure out where the center line of the face is (neon green line) and start working from that the next time. My center line is defnitely off but you get the idea. You don't need to shade your final image but it helps to do it so you can be sure that you understand the forms you're drawing!

>>3729254

I love your lines and I bet you can figure this out. Just look at some tutorials from guys like Sinix. If you want a more procedural approach do the flats with local color. Major shadow areas. Ambient occlusion etc. I'm willing to bet that you can do it yourself!

>>3729730

Really nice strokes and fun idea! Like the other anon said, your image doesn't read really well from afar. Coloring it might help but you might also want to think about the proportions. Make sure that you understand the 3D geometry of the mouse. The to our right was positioned way off. You can do this 3d grid thingy over your image if you're having a hard time! You could also use some ambient occlusion. Think about the areas in shadow where you wouldn't be getting any light. I did a really crappy job here but I hope you get the point. Also draw the whole body of the mouse even if we're not going to see it just so you can be sure that you got the anatomy right. Oh and get reference of actual mice (or don't if you want it to be super stylized).

>>3731725

Next post.

[Anonymous No.3731860]

>>3731856

Forgot my Image...

>>3731725

I like that you've drawn through the legs so you've really thought about where you want place them but you need to figure out your proportions in a big way. Start measuring things. Like think how long/large her other arm would be if it was straight. Her head is huge. I don't know if you wanted it to be huge but I think she'd benefit from having a smaller head. She looks like she's gonna fall to the left so think about where her weight is. I hope you can understand my scribbly markings. I really don't have time to do a lot of work on these things today.

[Anonymous No.3733052]

>>3731860
thanks for the feedback! Ive seen in my work lately that proportions are way out of wack.

the feet size is something that's been bothering me extra much lately, they are always too small but i feel if i give them any bigger feet it turns into clowns-feet

[Anonymous No.3734687]

>>3728282
Here, hold this

[Anonymous No.3734689]

>>3728282
Here, hold this

[Anonymous No.3735033]

>>3731860
thanks for the direction. Is this any better? Im pretty retarded with this painting stuff so please have patience with me.

[Anonymous No.3735077]

>>3728282
Not really a sketch but it's /beg/ go crazy

[Anonymous No.3735170]

>>3735033
Alright nvm, I looked at this again on my phone and it looks worse than my first attempt. Feels bad man

[Anonymous No.3735219]

>>3728558
The good artists are in the generals, faggot. Not the free for all idiot pit threads the catalog has become.

[Anonymous No.3735220]

>>3729254
I get what you were trying to accomplish with her breasts, but you ended up giving her an 80 year old grandma's dusty old fake tits.

[Anonymous No.3735521]

>>3731860
>>3731856
thnx anon for the tips
and yes you are very close with french style comparison. for i am western european

[Anonymous No.3736242]

>>3735521

N P my man! Northern Europe myself. Can't do overpaints when you have to get drunk with your relatives...

[Anonymous No.3736288]

>>3728555
looks fucking amazing