Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.3682513]

Previous Thread >>3678325
What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.3682519]

>>3682513

[Anonymous No.3682521]

>>3682519

[Anonymous No.3682538]

[Anonymous No.3682539]

>>3682538

[Anonymous No.3682541]

gonna try to do more dynamic poses even if things dont always work

[Anonymous No.3682551]

>>3682541

[Anonymous No.3682553]

>>3682551

[Anonymous No.3682554]

>>3682553

[Anonymous No.3682570]

>>3682519
I can't quite understand the pose on the left. It looks like it's one of those broken boobs+butt pose that are technically possible but take effort to make. I think it would make more sense for his hips to be turned more towards the viewer.

[Anonymous No.3682574]

>>3682551
I like this one. The only thing I would say about it is that the color of the water is too strong. The colour of the sky gives a really relaxing feeling but the colour of the water feels kind of intense.

[Anonymous No.3682580]

>>3682541
qt!

[Anonymous No.3682584]

>>3682538
>>3682539
I think it might help if you pull the butt back a bit around the crotch.

[Anonymous No.3682594]

>>3682513
I'm shooting up the board if I'm not OP next time.

[Anonymous No.3682603]

>>3682584
now that's a great looking butt

[Anonymous No.3682627]

>>3682594
h-hey wana be friends |-O

[Anonymous No.3682634]

>>3682584
neat how such a small change can make it so much better

[Anonymous No.3682740]

[Anonymous No.3682951]

>>3681681
Reposting here since the last thread is dead. I understand where you're coming from, but I just want to draw something easy once in a while although I know this kind of work is pretty cliche at this point.

[Anonymous No.3683222]

>>3679973
most of my practice with anime was just redlining anons on /ic/ and admiring anons on tumblr

[Anonymous No.3683253]

>>3682551
I think a little bit more atmospheric perspective/fade to the far away building to break it up from the midground shadowed buildings and give more depth to it would be better.

[Anonymous No.3683308]

>>3683222
Oh this is hella cute, nice.
got more?

[Anonymous No.3683327]

>>3683222
i need to redline more so i can get on your level anon, thanks for the response

[Anonymous No.3683351]

Swol monk, would like some crit

[Anonymous No.3683371]

Daily waifu garbage

>>3683351
Really flat, and not in an appealingly designed sort of way. Not sure if the jaw being drawn detached from the skull seemingly is a stylistic choice but it's jarring. It's like he's wearing a mask of his own face

[Anonymous No.3683377]

which ones the correct thread baka, anyway reposing these here

>>>3682946
>>>3682947

[Anonymous No.3683386]

[Anonymous No.3683389]

>>3683371
Ah heck, I see it now, I tried to make a defined jawline but fucked it up a bit. What do you think I could do to make it less flat?

[Anonymous No.3683396]

>>3683389
study up on basic forms and turning them in space

[Anonymous No.3683440]

Redline pls

[Anonymous No.3683451]

>>3682513

[Anonymous No.3683472]

>>3682574
>>3683253

i agree with both of these, i'm gonna play around with it some more

[Anonymous No.3683481]

[Anonymous No.3683497]

>>3683440
Here's one correction I thought of. Really nice btw.

[Anonymous No.3683505]

>>3683440
Here ya go, i tried. i just sort of gave it more weight by making the axis of the shoudlers and hips opposite(also for the head but mb its a bit overkill?), I pushed the shoudlers more forward sort of, and the rest is self explanatory, i hope it helps in some way, anyone feel free to redline my redline though.

[Anonymous No.3683516]

work smart not hard but also hard

[Anonymous No.3683546]

>>3683481
YEEESSSS IKAAAAA CHAANNN I LOVE YOUUUUUU

[Anonymous No.3683553]

>>3683546
YAAASSSSSS

[Anonymous No.3683568]

>>3683553
i want her to dominate my shrimp

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3683576]

>>3681172
oops, didnt realize the last thread died.
Not perfect but messy paint over. I think what would help you most would be to do construction before drawing the final lineart. You have a lot of the ideas but his entire left shoulder is missing and you're just guessing with placing the facial features.

[Anonymous No.3683581]

>>3683568
You're a terrible person.

[Anonymous No.3683586]

>>3683576
l-lewd

[Anonymous No.3683591]

>>3683576
the original pic looks better overall

[Anonymous No.3683594]

Latest pages. I'm feeling some real highs and lows. At the very least, cityscapes are much less daunting, now.

[Anonymous No.3683595]

>>3683594

[Anonymous No.3683597]

>>3683591
Not him but the original is on the left and is objectively worse.

[Anonymous No.3683619]

>>3683597
wtf are you saying, left one is way better

[Anonymous No.3683640]

>>3683619
>>3683597
Shit, my bad, got my left and right mixed up.

In my defense I legitimately have dyscalculia and do this at least once a day.

[Anonymous No.3683658]

>>3682551

some fixes

[Anonymous No.3683736]

>>3683576
Time to post cute boys?

[Anonymous No.3683790]

more doodle

[Anonymous No.3683796]

more doodle

[Anonymous No.3683869]

>>3683658
I like this, give blog?

[Anonymous No.3683871]

>>3683736
Stop making me gay.

[Anonymous No.3683885]

something i messed with last weekend been meaning to go at it women more but some critic would b swell

[Anonymous No.3683887]

>>3683885
oops

[Anonymous No.3683889]

something i messed with last weekend been meaning to go at it women more but some critic would b swell

[Anonymous No.3683895]

>>3683889
this one was for art class

[Anonymous No.3683897]

>>3683895
dude don't be a dummie and post your real ass name on this site

[Anonymous No.3683942]

I don't usually do animaymays but this is wip for a m8.

[Anonymous No.3683944]

>>3683736
got a blog?

[Anonymous No.3683945]

I don't usually do animaymays but this is a wip for a m8.

[Anonymous No.3683954]

>>3683945
kawaii desu

[Anonymous No.3683967]

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3683973]

>>3683736
yeah, im not great at guys so this was good practice

[Anonymous No.3683979]

>>3683945
blog?

[Anonymous No.3683980]

>>3683967
cute CUTE

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3683988]

>>3683945
i think her neck is a touch too long. And maybe making the left eye less wide and adding a lash to the right will make the angle more flattering

[Anonymous No.3683994]

apologies if this is too much for here

>>3683945
i really like the clothing wrinkles on their left shoulder and the way you colored the hair! left foot's toes are backwards tho, got the big toe on the outside

>>3683973
whoah! cute tho!
i really like the choker
one thing i'd suggest is working on dick head shapes an how they attach to the shaft, it can be super tricky but really sells the whole dick thing if you're into those (at least it does for me haha)

>>3683658
the sense of depth really has been improved but i'd say the foreground is still a bit too close to the midground and it could be improved. maybe go a bit harder on the swampy water lighting the tree and surroundings since it seems to be pretty glowy?

>>3683736
i don't wanna be /that/ person in the thread but if it is part of what you enjoy with these types of drawings i'd really suggest more dick studies hashdf, the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more. a good way to start is just with a cylinder with a baseball cap on the tip but it's slightly tilted back so that if you viewed it from the side it'd be leaning like /=== and then massaging the shapes from there to get a more organic feel

>>3683967
perspective is a bit off but this is adorable, i love it

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3684004]

>>3683994
oh! i'll practice that then, dicks are difficult but i like how you draw yours, good shapes.
also that little detail of the indication of the fur on her tummy is super cute, dont know why but i love it.

[Anonymous No.3684023]

>>3683994
Not fat enough

[Anonymous No.3684030]

>>3683994
>>3684023
d-damn...

[Anonymous No.3684046]

>>3683994
>the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more
So, I actually intended the character to be uncut with a tight foreskin, so I don't think the frenulum area would be that defined. You did make me realize that too much of the head is showing though (and I probably shoudl've defined the shapes there better to begin with)

[Anonymous No.3684054]

>>3683944
https://qmab.tumblr.com/
Don't have a ton of nsfw here yet

>>3683994
>the undershot would have the frenulum area extending further into the head to sell the shape at that angle more
So, I actually intended the character to be uncut with a tight foreskin, so I don't think the frenulum area would be that defined. You did make me realize that too much of the head is showing though (and I probably shoudl've defined the shapes better to begin with)

[Anonymous No.3684056]

[Anonymous No.3684097]

>>3683497
was that really needed. at least draw an appealing dick

[Anonymous No.3684138]

>>3683497
KEK

[Anonymous No.3684139]

>>3683973
HOT

[Anonymous No.3684140]

>>3683994
>>3684023
m-mommy
how do I draw like this

[Anonymous No.3684182]

>>3683440
I think your line sculpting workflow is holding you back

[Anonymous No.3684192]

trying to draw a loli

[Anonymous No.3684243]

>>3684056
I really like this

[Anonymous No.3684250]

>>3684243
i dont, literally 20 sec doodles anyone can do

[Anonymous No.3684287]

>>3684182
his what?

[Anonymous No.3684293]

[Anonymous No.3684295]

>>3684250
if u think this ur just a dumb

[Anonymous No.3684297]

>>3684250
Sure, sure, let's see what you can do

[Anonymous No.3684298]

>>3684192
Cute

[Anonymous No.3684346]

[Anonymous No.3684351]

Been messing around with different things lately.
>>3684346
I love the way you do architecture. Very simply done but they always read really well.

[Anonymous No.3684353]

>>3684056
sooooo cute!

[Anonymous No.3684355]

>>3684351
>>3684346
Yes this.
The big anime girls are not as well done or interesting as your cities

[Anonymous No.3684380]

>>3683994
>left foot's toes are backwards tho, got the big toe on the outside
Oh fucc you're right. Nice catch, thanks.

[Anonymous No.3684382]

Inking is hard

[Anonymous No.3684384]

>>3684382
Your strokes are too feathery and scratchy. Are you using a stabiliser?

[Anonymous No.3684397]

>>3684384
It's traditional, not digital. All of my inking attempts turn out like this, and I'm not sure how to get longer, more confident lines with a medium that I can't really correct.

[Anonymous No.3684426]

not finished yet

[Anonymous No.3684451]

the left eye of the first girl looks a little of to the side. . .

[Anonymous No.3684469]

>>3684426
>>3684451
looking super cute can't wait to see them finished! do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.3684502]

>>3684192
Shoulder is misaligned with her arm.

[Anonymous No.3684586]

Sketches.

[Anonymous No.3684598]

>>3684586
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3684603]

>>3684586
>>3684598
jesus fucking christ, every time and I know you're samefagging now. Because this is pretty much the exact same image with the exact same lack of skill you posted 2 years ago.

[Anonymous No.3684604]

>>3684469
Thanks anon and not really, not yet at least. I want to gain more confidence first

[Anonymous No.3684605]

>>3684598
>>3684603
samefag.

[Anonymous No.3684609]

>>3684603
I'm not that guy, gas yourself you paranoid jew

[Anonymous No.3684662]

>>3684604
anon you are already really good *pats head* be proud of your art.

[Anonymous No.3684671]

>>3684586
goldensmurf? more like golden noob haha gottem, get good idiot

[Anonymous No.3684714]

>>3684346
CUTE

[Anonymous No.3684730]

I'm bad at drawing bodies/anatomy and I have a case of chicken scratch, how exactly can I get better at those? (Please add examples since i'm stupid)

Pic related i just doodled

[Anonymous No.3684731]

>>3684586
A cute!

[Anonymous No.3684732]

>>3684598
>>3684609
It's @thegoldensmurf .

[Anonymous No.3684735]

>>3684732
Your 2D stuffs are better than your 3D bro.

[Anonymous No.3684736]

>>3684735
it's not even comparable.

[Anonymous No.3684868]

>>3684730
Critique?

[Anonymous No.3684871]

>>3684868
She needs a penis to make me happy.

[Anonymous No.3684896]

>>3684603
>>3684732
>>3684671
i want draw party to leave, the most cancerous discord out there filled with a bunch of pedos and circle jerking losers

[Anonymous No.3684922]

>>3684730
>>3684868
I'm going to tell you what's worked for me, but it's up to you to decide what's best for yourself. I personally didn't like Loomis, so I learned the same concepts from other sources.

In my opinion you're not at a point where studying anatomy in depth would be the most productive route. I think what you should do instead is draw from imagination a lot, draw from reference/life especially when you're having problems visualizing/imagining, and just try to internalize the basic shapes and gesture of the body in key poses (particularly eye-level facing, as in that drawing). Have fun drawing for drawing's sake, for a couple months, for a few hours a day. Do ask questions (what causes that shadow on the form? etc.) and find answers, but don't make anatomy THE point...at this point.

You'll see gains if you do this enough. You'll get pretty good at drawing the figure in some basic poses. You'll memorize the shapes, the negative space between the legs when the feet are together, for example. Eventually you'll be dissatisfied. Any time you try to draw the figure in slightly more complex perspective, you choke.

When you get to this point--and it may not be in a couple months--when you're not gaining anymore and you're disgusted with your efforts, that's when you study seriously. This isn't a one-time thing probably, it'll happen over and over and each time you'll push to a more complete understanding. The end goal is to think three-dimensionally. When you find yourself doing that, that's when you start building a visual library, drawing more complex poses and perspective from reference. With each new pose drawn, you'll reinforce your understanding of the figure in general.

And use a pencil and paper. The chicken scratch will go away. Tablets suck for linework (don't know about the screen ones), it's like drawing with mittens. It can be done but it's just one more barrier while you're learning.

[Anonymous No.3684964]

>>3684922
I will try to follow your advice, thank you anon

[Anonymous No.3684981]

>>3683594
Are you the artist that made this????
Busted some pretty good nuts to it

[Anonymous No.3684992]

>>3684964
>black skin
>>3684871
C-can you add a penis for me? I'd love this image so much more if you did.

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3684995]

>>3684730
Doing exercises like gesture drawing is a good stepping stone to drawing with confidence. After you get a handle on that, life drawing or figure drawing is where you improve your anatomy. No matter what though, looking at reference will help you learn bodies.
Chicken scratch goes away when you stop building your drawings piece by piece and you focus on the larger, gestural strokes of the subject. Pic is some old work thats not perfect by any means but hopefully demonstrates the importance of minimizing the amount of lines you use to draw something, about half of these i was looking at reference of a person as well.

[Anonymous No.3685018]

>>3684896
>Everyone has to be part of the circlejerk if they hate an extremely annoying faggot who's been posting here for years
no i just find him extremely obnoxious because the same fagging is obvious as fuck. nobody wants his blog, yet "somebody" immediately asks for it the moment he posts just coincidentally, despite him posting here for years and never changing.

[Anonymous No.3685025]

>>3685018
That's some next level of salt.

[Anonymous No.3685027]

>>3685025
>writing a sentence is extreme salt
okay.

[Anonymous No.3685033]

>>3685018
lol yeah right you fucking faggot. i know who you are, everyone in that fucking discord sucks at drawing. not one single redeemable soul in there. goldensmurf was the only good few in there.

[Anonymous No.3685036]

>>3685018
I can smell the envy from here already, I don't understand why that guy is so hated here when he seems like every other anon so far. I immediately replied because I was in the 4chan vortex looking and refreshing for new posts

[Anonymous No.3685050]

DON'T START SHIT AGAIN YOU FUCKING PIECES OF SHIT. LAST THREAD WAS RUINED BECAUSE OF YOUR AUTISM. SHUT THE FUCK UP RIGHT NOW STOP RUINING THESE THREADS. FUCK

[Anonymous No.3685064]

>>3684397
https://youtu.be/wgDNDOKnArk?t=329

[Anonymous No.3685072]

>>3683994
Can you tell me your brush settings? Thanks

[Anonymous No.3685082]

>>3684995
HOW DO I MAKE MY DRAWINGS DYNAMIC LIKE YOOOOOURS
Do you possibly use references

[Anonymous No.3685100]

>>3683481
I don't understand this, but I want to do this

[Anonymous No.3685106]

>>3685082
You should read their comment, they say they did for some.
Try to learn what animators do for gesture drawing, force, direction, exaggeration and all that.

[Anonymous No.3685122]

I hate inking and coloring

[Anonymous No.3685123]

>>3685122
then you hate art

[Anonymous No.3685124]

>>3684995
imagine titling your .jpg "commission" just to try to impress a bunch of 17 year old autistic anime fans on the internet

[Anonymous No.3685126]

>>3685123
what did he mean by this

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3685133]

>>3685124
imagine renaming your old work so when you give an anon some advice some other random sad dude doesnt get triggered because people dont pay for his art.

[Anonymous No.3685138]

>>3685122
Inking is only annoying if you don't know how to sketch.
I know this from myself. I always put too much work into my "sketches" and basically just make them detailed drawings.

[Anonymous No.3685140]

>>3685133
trust me i get paid much more for my art than you do, tripfaggot.

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3685146]

>>3685140
probably. So why are you whining?

[Anonymous No.3685152]

>>3685146
why are you such a little limp wristed fag?

[Anonymous No.3685185]

>>3685126
yeah thats cute, but its boring. you need color. also comics are for fags and losers

[Anonymous No.3685189]

>>3685185
post your colored work fagboy, nobody cares about your shit taste and shit opinions

[Anonymous No.3685267]

>>3685152
Anon, they're literally a woman. If the attention whoring didn't make that obvious then the awful squat form should have.

[Anonymous No.3685282]

>>3685267
so what? you can still be a limp wristed little faggot if you're a chick

[Anonymous No.3685287]

>>3685282
She’s not a faggot, she craves dick 24/7

[Anonymous No.3685292]

>>3685287
i dont care if she's straight she's still a massive faggot

[Anonymous No.3685348]

>>3685126
Hulk's head looks like it is completely detached from his body. You can see that the artist used a ref for Spidey but not for Hulk.

[Anonymous No.3685351]

>>3685189
>brainlet cant into color
:)

[Anonymous No.3685385]

>>3684004
danke, i pretty much lift them wholesale from onta/doxy and turtle.fish.paint/bear hand hhasd, and yess, i jus threw the tum fuzz in as last minute detail and now i can't stop thinking about it and wanna draw it on every fuzzy character i can

>>3684023
i kno, please forgive me ;-;

>>3684030
fuzzmom best mom

>>3684054
phimosis can be pretty tricky to show correctly, especially with pure line when it's too far away to define with more line but when in doubt there's always refs!

>>3684056
your stuff is always so gosh damn cute

>>3684140
lotsa practice an cross referencing the parts you like from other people's work with real world equivalents in some vague attempt to understand what they're thinking when they draw, more practice. also don't be a lame-o like me and wait until now to learn to render/use color, it's really frustrating to be happy with what you can do in line but feel like an absolute beginner when it comes to taking things further

>>3684351
like the composition/thumbnail of this a lot, tho i'd maybe use a harder brush to define the hair in that way. i really like it overall tho!

>>3684380
np!

>>3684382
>>3684397
it really fucking is. cope with this fact like i did by developing a style where you just clean your sketches while drawing (don't do this). one thing i can suggest tho if you want more confident lines is focus more on the shape and form of what you're drawing/inking than what the actual line looks like. somehow this ironically made my lines a lot better, both traditional and digital (tho it can get REALLY messy with traditional work if you let it).

[Anonymous No.3685391]

>>3684426
ver cute, one thing i suggest tho is be SUPER careful with hair and how it frames the face and can betray the overall face shape if you let tangents play too close to certain areas, like the strand on chara that's like tucking into the cuff of the turtleneck next to their cut appears to also be their jawline even tho based on the construction of frisk's head this shouldn't be the case but this causes their face shape to change an maybe cause features to feel off even if you had placed them correctly on the original sketch

>>3684586
noice, <3 scars, bandages an panty lines showing through tight pants. also how messy yet clean an legible most of it is
>>3684732
the sound of horny granpa moaning "biiiaaturiiisuuu" into the night still haunts my dreams. also her neck should be connecting further back on the head an flow more into the over all headshape

>>3684662
you're nice, i like you

>>3684995
cute, i love the sense of motion

>>3685064
i always feel like i should go back and do one of these courses and just entirely focus on the basics so i can expand what i'm able to draw more easily

>>3685072
yee, no problem, it's just kyle's drawing box animation pencil that he used to have up for free on gumroad before he got hired by adobe, you'll need photoshop cs... 6 i think? i don't remember, apologies, but that's what i use, lemme reup it for you tho: https://www.sendspace.com/file/yfqfv0

>>3685126
i love joe mad's pencils to death but you gotta admit his colored work is also really cool

>>3685348
been studying big boys in other people's works a lot and they tend to hunch their backs forward along while bending their knees a bit, but with their huuuge shoulders an back muscles that causes the head to appear to sink down more which may feel a bit off cause people with proportions like that don't exist in real life, but trust me, his neck would feel super long an look even sillier if the head was placed further up, i kno from experience with my own work hahasd

[Anonymous No.3685392]

>>3682513
What should i do to sell more?


https://www.redbubble.com/people/BasedLuigi

[Anonymous No.3685415]

>>3685392
Make a thread

[Anonymous No.3685446]

>>3683594
>>3684981

[Anonymous No.3685508]

did this the other day

[Anonymous No.3685510]

>>3683869

insta @living.void

[Anonymous No.3685511]

[Anonymous No.3685520]

>>3685511
You draw the same eyes on everyone

[Anonymous No.3685529]

>>3685520
Welcome to anime

[Anonymous No.3685543]

>>3685529
Harhar
No seriously those thick eyelashes don't go with the designs

[Anonymous No.3685656]

>>3684981
>>3685446
I am thrilled to say that that is not me.

[Anonymous No.3685683]

>>3685511
This is cute.

[Anonymous No.3685705]

>>3684995
who ever commissioned you to draw the itty bitty kitty titties is awesome. i'm greatful for these nepeta draws angel

[Anonymous No.3685714]

>>3684992
if you don't want black skin, and want a dick so badly pick up a pen and draw it yourself anon

[Anonymous No.3685717]

>>3684287
That thing where you draw thicker lines and erase away bits by bits until you get the line you want. Kienan Lafferty is one example of artists who do that.

[Anonymous No.3685718]

>>3685385
>like the composition/thumbnail of this a lot, tho i'd maybe use a harder brush to define the hair in that way. i really like it overall tho!
Thanks for the feedback, I see what you mean about the hair. I'll try using a harder brush next time.

[Anonymous No.3685719]

>>3684192
Cute boy

[Anonymous No.3685732]

>>3685719
*cute tomboy

[Anonymous No.3685734]

[Anonymous No.3685749]

Some shit from last month

[Anonymous No.3685752]

>>3685734
thought this was a 3d model from the thumb
nicely done

[Anonymous No.3685791]

help whats wrong with this pic it looks so bad to me, I know I might get banned because mlp. but whats wrong with it.
and pls dont say "everything"

[Anonymous No.3685801]

>>3685791
She isn’t sitting on his face, more like his chin/neck.

[Anonymous No.3685817]

>>3685801
maybe, but I feel like theres muuuch bigger issues than that. Im not sure what though, maybe something with the perspective, or form of the leg

[Anonymous No.3685822]

>>3683497
traps are bad (but a good way to get more followers)
>>3683505
Yep, looks more dynamic.
>>3684182
how so? I tried with different techniques and this one gave me the best results.

[Anonymous No.3685825]

>>3685791
From this perspective and with those proportions the waist would be giga-long. Look up a ref and compare.

[Anonymous No.3685826]

>>3685817
Well, yeah. You have consistent problems with anatomy and perspective that you don’t try to improve, so I figured I’d point out one thing that you might actually try to fix.

[Anonymous No.3685938]

working on some fanart for my sensei can I get a redline something about the hand doing the victory sign feels off

[Anonymous No.3685943]

>>3684502
thanks for the help anon

[Anonymous No.3685964]

could use some critique on this shit

[Anonymous No.3685973]

>>3685938
here's your redline.

On a side note, I actually really like your lines.

[Anonymous No.3685976]

>>3685822
Well, if it works the best for you then I guess it's fine. I just felt there were some awkward shapes here and there that wouldn't have happen if you weren't line sculpting but that's just my opinion.

[Anonymous No.3685978]

>>3685938
Who's your sensei?

[Anonymous No.3685983]

[Anonymous No.3685988]

>>3685973
hehe this made me laugh going to save it. also I think you actually helped me I think the problem might be the hand is to big.


thanks i'm really trying hard to make sure my line quality improves to the level of pro mangaka

>>3685978
my sensei is yoshikadu I watch his streams to learn how to draw better and to get inspiration to keep drawing

[Anonymous No.3685994]

>>3685964
looks like that guy from Ib

as for critique, yes, it is bad (not a bad thing in itself) and the result of a lack of fundamentals; no forms (looks flat) and stiff pose (no gesture)

[Anonymous No.3686000]

>>3685994
Totally fair, thanks. My form is shit lol
Yeah it was drawn to be a reference to that ib guy
Any other suggestions im game

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3686015]

>>3686000
You'd end up with a more appealing result if you went for a 3/4 view I think. But if you just want to finish this and move on, his left arm is visibly shorter than his right and his facial features are all out of sync. Do those basic construction lines when drawing your faces, you still need them

[Anonymous No.3686092]

How would you guys go about drawing the shoujo/CLAMP style hair like in CCS?
I've been trying to capture it but the hair is so thin it stands out way too much unless I makes the lines in rest of the comic super thin which isn't the look I'm going for

>>3684586
Always thought you've got a very recognizable style, I like it a lot

[Anonymous No.3686116]

[Anonymous No.3686119]

>>3686092
A thin brush and a large canvas

[Anonymous No.3686139]

>>3686119
I should've mentioned I'm working in traditional

[Anonymous No.3686144]

[Anonymous No.3686146]

>>3686139
A g-pen or maru pen

[Anonymous No.3686147]

>>3686146
>>3686139

[Anonymous No.3686152]

>>3685391
That is not what I meant, allow me to demonstrate what I meant in >>3685348 It is a barely noticeable nitpick change but the head now feels like it is surrounded by those sinews. While on the original it had a white aura around it, the thick black outline of the head did not match with the thin faded ones around it causing a disconnect.

Granted I get why it is done, it is to give the inker and then the colorist a sharp and clear view of the head, this can be fixed later. So it is not like the picture is wrong.

[Anonymous No.3686156]

>>3686147
these all look identical

[Anonymous No.3686159]

>>3685683
>Baki fanart
My nigga

[Anonymous No.3686203]

>>3685983
I like this better than your porn

[Anonymous No.3686216]

[Anonymous No.3686229]

>>3686216
cute! I would wear this if it was on a white t-shirt

[Anonymous No.3686270]

Any crits?

[Anonymous No.3686284]

>>3685752
that's very flattering anon thank you, my goal is game cube graphics

[Anonymous No.3686293]

>>3686015
Thats true, shit i didnt even notice that. Thanks anon

[Anonymous No.3686311]

>>3686270
Make the neck feel like it’s there.

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3686324]

>>3686270
Her feet look too small

[Anonymous No.3686361]

[Anonymous No.3686398]

Trying to stylize a bit more

[Anonymous No.3686402]

[Anonymous No.3686412]

youre all bad and have no future.

[Anonymous No.3686416]

>>3686412
shoo shoo crab

[Anonymous No.3686419]

>>3684732
beato

[Anonymous No.3686422]

>>3686412
I'm surprised by how much good stuff is being posted in these threads desu.
I distinctly remember /ic/ being more shitty than this 3 years ago.

[Anonymous No.3686426]

Could you guys critique this? im planning on redoing the lines but I need help with the anatomy and stuff

[Anonymous No.3686430]

>>3684732
CUTE

great progress

[Anonymous No.3686462]

>>3686412
stop being jealous and pick up that pen and draw like the rest of us

[Anonymous No.3686498]

>>3686270
how she pull out that kunais?

is the sock thick enough to prevent the kunais to cut/pierce her leg?

are they just an ornament?

[Anonymous No.3686701]

>>3686426
woah, while the shapes are appealing, serious problems with her figure... take a look at her right arm, it's every very weird

[Anonymous No.3686706]

>>3686430
> progress

In case it's not clear, right drawing isn't from me, it's a sprite from the visual novel of Umineko. Tried making my version of it.

And another one but fully body this time, Takano from Higurashi.

[Anonymous No.3686707]

>>3686706
drawing process of the face.

[Anonymous No.3686720]

>>3686706
aw, I'm sorry, they are both cute anyway, but you do have space for growth, honestly though; in this one your drawing is better than ref; the problem with the other one is it look flat; this one too but less so, and the ref looks flat as heck.

[Anonymous No.3686721]

>>3686720
>but you do have space for growth

Who doesn't.

[Anonymous No.3686724]

>>3686720
>the problem with the other one is it look flat

It was a quick sketch that focused on the face.

[Anonymous No.3686725]

[Anonymous No.3686730]

>>3686402
I like it

>>3686412
Nice projection /beg/shit

[Anonymous No.3686739]

[Anonymous No.3686755]

>>3686739
Cool idea, but I'm not sure the blue on blue (dress on sky works)
This could also use a more dynamic angle

[Anonymous No.3686759]

>>3682513
Hey /ic/, I'm curious.
Which art style are you trying to emulate and why?

[Anonymous No.3686776]

>>3686755
Is this any better?
I also tried doing from below perspective initially but I couldn't get the hips to look right.

[Anonymous No.3686785]

>>3686706

[Anonymous No.3686796]

>>3686776
It looks better to me but I suck

I feel like your colors in general are still weak, look for inspiration, someone that has a simialr style and how the color.

Also for angles lookup the Hyper angle series

https://mega.nz/#F!XRF0iY7Z!VZREnIDndi-z0zphl9dCvg!qcMHEK5B

[Anonymous No.3686803]

>>3686721
of course everyone does frend... just said it cute but is flawed
>>3686724
that's fine, just giving you some feedback frend

[Anonymous No.3686810]

>>3686721
>Who doesn't

[Anonymous No.3686876]

doodle form a couple of days ago
I remember with manga studio having consistent lineart tools but with sai is just, I can't get the grip literally, dunno but I can't make it work.

[Anonymous No.3686982]

thoughts?

[Angel !!b54Js4RqEVd No.3686993]

>>3686361
theres little issues with flow and proportion but you have the right idea. Biggest problem is the position of the head, its too far off to the side without enough of her neck and shoulders following suit.

[Anonymous No.3687102]

>>3686361
Not really a fan of the Tumblr face but them titties are rockin.

[Anonymous No.3687121]

top hat frog

[Anonymous No.3687190]

>>3686706
The shading on the stretched fabric over the boobs make it look like they're lumpy in a way, kind of odd

[Anonymous No.3687193]

>>3686759
80s anime. dunno why but it feels sophisticated and cozy for some reason.
it also is surprisingly hard to emulate.

[Anonymous No.3687207]

Was bored and I made this for reddit (shut up)

[Anonymous No.3687221]

>>3682513
can I get some feedback on this? It's wip but I never go this far with values in shading; left is how I've been working it and right is with actual colors and blending settings

[Anonymous No.3687247]

>>3687221
bike shadow?

[Anonymous No.3687286]

[Anonymous No.3687466]

>>3687286
cuteeee

[Anonymous No.3687475]

[Anonymous No.3687506]

>>3687286
legs

[Anonymous No.3687548]

It’s been too long since I’ve done mechs

[Anonymous No.3687564]

>>3682513
How do you guys figure out which colours to use when you start a composition?
Do you block out all the colours in a thumbnail and then use that as reference, or do you just build things up as you go?

I'm having trouble painting this cozy Christmas scene - please critique me on colour choices regarding establishing a warm and relaxed tone.

[Anonymous No.3687568]

Working on more fanart for my sensei. Doing some traditional drawing this time. It's still in early wip

[Anonymous No.3687581]

>>3687564
your purples should learn more to the red side if you want the image to feel warm, right now it's dominated by the more blue leaning purple tones which makes the image feel colder

[Anonymous No.3687587]

>>3687568
Please construct

[Anonymous No.3687602]

>>3687587
ok will do, I'm still only in early wip phase so I'll start placing down my 3d construction forms now.

[Anonymous No.3687604]

>>3687548
Here are my personal opinions on it.

[Anonymous No.3687609]

>>3687602
>early wip
>half an ugly flat face and four uninterpretable chicken scratched lines
Why bother posting?

[Anonymous No.3687615]

>>3687604
> no bulge

Fag.

[Anonymous No.3687619]

>>3687548
I like it. Got any more?

[Anonymous No.3687622]

>>3687609
Pyw

[Anonymous No.3687625]

>>3687609
*shrugs shoulders* I'm kind of happy with how I started is all it's not perfect and needs a lot more work done so I'll post more progress once there is more to show but it's a good start which is rare for me is all. I'll work on making the face less flat for you anon.

[Anonymous No.3687662]

>>3687625
>*shrugs shoulders*
*grabs you by the throat*
BACK THE FUCK OFF?!?!?!?!?

[Anonymous No.3687672]

>>3687625
>*shrugs shoulders*

[Anonymous No.3687680]

>>3687247
I meant feedback regarding the figure's shading, It's unfinished so the background isn't shaded yet

[Anonymous No.3687707]

>>3687672
>>3687662
Hehe what?

[Anonymous No.3687716]

>>3687662
>>3687672
O Well can't win em all. meep meep

[Anonymous No.3687726]

>>3687662
kek

[Anonymous No.3687737]

sketch phase

[Anonymous No.3687738]

>>3687737
forgot pics

[Anonymous No.3687740]

>>3687738
Fuck you

[Anonymous No.3687742]

>>3687738
QT

[Anonymous No.3687743]

>>3687740
Not the anon who drew that but stop being a crab and post your work

[Anonymous No.3687744]

>>3687743
No fuck you you're all just going to make fun of me like always

[Anonymous No.3687746]

>>3687744
lmao what a loser

[Anonymous No.3687815]

>>3687744
Don't let crabs get to you I just laugh off anything that is just negative and even the stuff that is negative or meant as an insult I try to look for the critique in it thank the anon subverting what that anon who wrote the negative comments expectation of my reaction to be when I am genuinely able to find some use in their Insult post. Now stop being crabby and post your work like the rest of us

[Anonymous No.3687817]

>>3686706
>>3686785
And colored.

[Anonymous No.3688017]

rip trigger waifu meme girl
gone, but also forgotten

[Anonymous No.3688066]

[Anonymous No.3688072]

>>3688066
I hate this

[Anonymous No.3688153]

>>3688072
K

[Anonymous No.3688191]

>>3688066
I like this

[Anonymous No.3688198]

[Anonymous No.3688429]

[Anonymous No.3688441]

>>3688429
Your art sucks dick

[Anonymous No.3688467]

>>3688441 Shut up
>>3688429 keep drawing

[Anonymous No.3688504]

>>3687564
Try to look up the concept of Gamut Masks

[Anonymous No.3688950]

>>3688017
her head is way too big for that body

[Anonymous No.3689114]

>>3688017
i also miss 02, also really good job anon got a blog?

[Anonymous No.3689119]

>>3687221
sleim girle

[Anonymous No.3689141]

sketches

[Anonymous No.3689142]

>>3689119
turn this into an anime

[Anonymous No.3689148]

I need to work on this more..

[Anonymous No.3689248]

[Anonymous No.3689325]

>>3689141
mm blog?

[Anonymous No.3689338]

>>36891482

your anatomy needs some work but it looks good and interesting. i would read this as an indie comic or something

[Anonymous No.3689340]

>>3689148
your anatomy needs some work but it looks good and interesting. i would read this as an indie comic or something

[Anonymous No.3689362]

I kinda suck at drawing but I like to use the doodles people make and make lifeless/minimal art with it. Does that still belong here?

[Anonymous No.3689390]

>>3689362
If you have to ask then the answer is no

[Anonymous No.3689397]

Sry for bad photo

[Anonymous No.3689411]

Trying to focus on the colors this time so the character is a bit more simple.

[Anonymous No.3689413]

[Anonymous No.3689442]

>>3689411
nice job with the legs, but the arms seem a bit stiff, also the fabric doesn’t seem to wrap around her breasts right. otherwise, seems pretty good.
(i’m kind of a dumbass, so i apologize if this isnt helpful...)

[Anonymous No.3689452]

>>3689390
ok bye

[Anonymous No.3689464]

thoughts?

[Anonymous No.3689483]

>>3689464
Looks cute

[Anonymous No.3689484]

>>3689483
Very insightful critique.

[Anonymous No.3689487]

>>3689484
Apologies if it wasn't to your liking

[Anonymous No.3689488]

>>3689483
>>3689487
I appreciate the comment! (>>3689484 wasn't me)
Doesn't the anatomy look a it off, tho?

[Anonymous No.3689504]

>>3689464
>>3689488
It's a bit stiff imo, some of pic related is more of personal preference but in general
>Neck too short, head position is unnatural, face a bit too wide for it's angle
>Relax the shoulders, arms are a bit short
>Back looks unnatural and stiff
>Breasts are too high up her chest, even with a push-up bra they shouldn't be that far up

[Anonymous No.3689523]

>>3689504
woah thanks, very helpful!

[Anonymous No.3689525]

[Anonymous No.3689555]

>>3689525
All your drawings look like pochi kisekae traces

[Anonymous No.3689627]

>>3688950
ye, trial and error
>>3689114
b-s-c-b.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3689636]

>>3689119

[Anonymous No.3689699]

>>3689636
I literally never do side view because I know i can't pull it off; where did I do wrong?

[Anonymous No.3689757]

Backgrounds are hard

[Anonymous No.3689886]

>>3689699

Torso is turning away from the viewer, yet the head is in a perfect profile.

[Anonymous No.3690012]

[Anonymous No.3690242]

perspectives are hard

[Anonymous No.3690248]

>>3690242
My dick is hard.

[Anonymous No.3690270]

>>3689886
yeah, you are right, the head perspective is forced; thank you!

[Anonymous No.3690310]

>>3690012
i like it a lot, anywhere i can find more of your work?

[Anonymous No.3690337]

That makes 16 expressions.

[Anonymous No.3690371]

>>3690337
I love them, grest work, u missed ahegao

[Anonymous No.3690381]

>>3690371
So far I focused on redrawing the expressions of the original version. Could do more since you're like the 5th person asking me for an ahegao.

[Anonymous No.3690848]

it's a dood-le, get it???

[Anonymous No.3690988]

>>3690381
>>3690848
blog?

[Anonymous No.3691033]

>>3690337
cute, you chose the better green one

[Anonymous No.3691068]

[Anonymous No.3691116]

>>3690310
thanks!
@juicus

[Anonymous No.3691212]

>>3690848
I love you. I mean her. I mean it.

[Anonymous No.3691262]

how do I draw hands? I need help should I just restart

[Anonymous No.3691279]

>>3682513
new thread
>>3691278

[Anonymous No.3691285]

>>3691262
some hands for you anon

but really just draw a lot of hands, when I study hands I do like 20 a day for as many days as I can keep it up

[Anonymous No.3691747]