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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice. We should not have to make new threads or post in the Drawthread with our fundamental exercises.

Previous Thread >>3669924 → #

Feel free to post even the smallest exercise you have done to show you are still trying, do not give up, make someone proud.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS:
1)
>screenshot the image and post that instead
2)
>change camera capture settings to something smaller
3)
>send to computer and resize in MSPaint

READ THE STICKY if you need guidance when you haven't even started

Sticky: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

TRY TO GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK - many studies are left unreplied, which is a bit sad and can be quite demotivating for the people that try their best to improve, but are left directionless.

REMEMBER, if you've just started out you work will not be good, it doesn't need to be, just get in to the swing of actually drawing, and learning how to study. Most of all, enjoy it.

"Success is no accident. It is hard work, perseverance, learning, studying, sacrifice and most of all, love of what you are doing or learning to do."

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ESSENTIALS:

>>>/ic/thread/3023643
Links to many art books including as Keys to Drawing (Dodson), Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain (Edwards), Perspective Made Easy (Norling), Color and Light (Gurney), The Vilppu Drawing Manual (Vilppu) and How to Draw (Robertson).

>http://ctrlpaint.com
A website dedicated to understanding the basics and process of digital painting, based in Adobe Photoshop. Library of over 200 free videos.

>http://quickposes.com
Free pose library to practice drawing the human figure (as well as a portrait library). Draw at your own pace or set a timer for quick gesture drawings.

>http://youtube.com/user/ProkoTV
Instructional how-to videos covering mostly portrait and figure drawing from fine artist Stanislav Prokopenko.

>https://www.youtube.com/user/onairvideo
Croquis Cafe - Timed model poses.

>http://drawabox.com
Controversial yet helpful introductory course on the fundamentals of drawing with a focus on understanding the concept of form and thinking in a 3-dimensional mindset while you draw.

>Your local life drawing class
Life drawing is an indispensable tool in your art career. Do not be intimidated based on your skill level - there will always be someone worse than you and someone better than you. Use this opportunity to meet new artists for learning, critique, and growth.

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ok i tried to do it like ilya and took a photo and tried to use it

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>>3677291
second

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Hi. /Beg/inner here. Just did this from a book i have, is called Draw Step by step by Doug DuBosque however it has zero theory and just exercises without any explanation of technique nor theory. Is this a good way to start? Or should i move on and look for more resorceful material?

I basically just copied the drawings, he draw some cirles and write little inscructions but never explain why.

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>>3677296
Here are the originals (1/2)

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>>3677296
>>3677298
(2/2)

>> No.3677310
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Gib reference please

>> No.3677315

>>3677310
Are you left handed

>> No.3677319

>>3677291
>>3677292
Not bad you are improving anon keep going do those studies you are already on your way!

>> No.3677321

>>3677315
I'm ambidextrous

>> No.3677326

>>3677321
wow I am fucking jealous anon

>> No.3677328
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Same bad camera but hopefully better armor since last thread

>> No.3677329

>>3677321
Your drawing leans to the right a little, I thought you'd been drawing with your left hand and that maybe you should rotate the page slightly when you draw.

>> No.3677351

Needs some advice:

Last few weeks I've been stumbling across different books on trying to learn to draw (ultimate goal is character designing/pinups), till I decided on learning the fundamentals according to the /ic/ sticky with observation first.

That said, its starting to feel like a grind and its getting harder to do the usual 2 hours a day I spend on it (a separate hour is dedicated to line control ala Dynamic Sketching exercises) and I havent gotten to construction and perspective yet.

I know it falls under "rendering" but I love to play with pen and ink and really want to practice it with some books I got recently on the subject. Is it alright to jump into that for a while or continue the grind in order?

>> No.3677355

>>3677351
Anon, this is the army you know, feel free to go on the tempo you prefer. At the core art is indeed a huge grind so feel free to take short breaks from it here and there you are only human. As long as you are aware of what you need to do you are fine.

>> No.3677357

>>3677355
>Anon, this is the army you know,
meant to say this is NOT the army

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value studies

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2

>> No.3677364

>>3677351
You can do both at the same time, giving half your time to each. Why dont you do your fundie exercises and then render them in ink afterward for something to look forward to?

>> No.3677382

would i get good if i would just start drawing sketches and concepts mindlessly for hours or is it a stupid idea

>> No.3677384

>>3677355
>>3677364

Guess I can try just that. Thanks anons

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Tried some value practices, can someone please tell me where I'm going wrong?

>> No.3677389

>>3677382
it is not a stupid idea but it is not very smart in the long term. Sketching or just drawing something everyday helps if anything it builds your confidence and allows you to aspire for more and get serious about learning more like the fundies. Art is a grind at its core so anything to build mileage is good. However it has the danger of getting bored of it and feeling clueless, burning out or getting into a rut of not knowing what to do.

In all seriousness Anon if you feel that can get you into working and just drawing regularly every day then go for it but do not forget to hone your skills by learning the fundamentals. But I am sure if you keep at it soon you will automatically get the urge to learn the fundies. That is how it happened with me too.

>> No.3677390

>>3677382
You don't just get good by doing the same thing over and over again.

Do something thing, carefully and critically look at it to see what went wrong, compare against references, look up guides on how to effectively capture what you're going for, and repeat until you have nothing left to fix.

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How does getting over "Symbol Drawing" helps with drawing by imagination and not just to copy things?

>> No.3677394

>>3677389
>>3677390
i'll think about these, thanks

>> No.3677397

>>3677393
because instead of drawing what you see (if you could take a picture of exactly what you are seeing), you are drawing the same object but how it looks inside you mind. something that might be kinda shaped like a tube, becomes a perfect tube because its a better shape, and an eye might become bigger and more clear instead of drawing every little eyebrow hair.

>> No.3677420

>>3677328
Noice shield. Has a good weight to it.

>> No.3677434

>>3677388
strong Morrowind vibes

>> No.3677452
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gotta keep drawing

>> No.3677453

>>3677452
please do a group picture!

>> No.3677475

>>3677296
Eh, you know anon, those aren’t looking bad. Yeah, you should probably learn the theory and reasoning behind why he has broken down the drawing to those specific steps and those specific shapes. In the long run it will be more useful to you. You’ll be able to apply that type of knowledge to any drawing and any subject.

That being said there is some merit to just focusing on the pure act of drawing. It can be useful to just sit down and draw something with all of the real thinking done for you. It frees you up to focus entirely on things like hand-eye coordination, accuracy of line, shape and form, line quality and the other things that relate to the physical act of drawing.

Excercizes like these take care of the heavy lifting for you, they figure out the subject for you, the angle, the pose, they break the subject down to basic shapes and forms for you, figure out your light source and even the entire workflow. It’s definitely not the most efficient way to learn how to draw, but if you keep in mind that you should be learning theory and fundamentals I don’t see the harm, it can even be beneficial. On top of that, you get a decent drawing at the end that keeps you motivated to go further. Just don’t let it build bad habits.

>> No.3677477

for doing gesture, I shouldn't bother adding musculature until after I have a decent sense for proportions and knowledge about muscles right? If I'm trying to get a decent sense for gesture from reference + imagination, is some basic anatomy/proportions where I should focus next?

>> No.3677488
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Right is WIP after some days of Loomis. Is there any noticeable improvement? (impatient, I know)

I'm unsure how to apply Loomis to drawing from reference. What I did in right pic was start out doing initial measurements, then sort of try to tie things together using construction.
I tried starting out with a circle and establishing the browline etc. but it did not look good at all.

Looking at it I can see at least a few things that went wrong, so that's good.

>> No.3677537

can someone explain why draw a box is controversial?

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from a wooden mannequin

>> No.3677562

>>3677541
>beginner
you are no beginner anon

>> No.3677564

What's a good first book to ease a complete beginner into drawing? It's been a long time since I've studied anything and I am finding it hard to really get into the usual recommended books (Perspective made easy etc).

From what I have read there is a significant grind to improve, I would just like to slowly ramp up the grind and ease myself in.

>> No.3677565

>>3677537
iirc, the guy who made it took Peter Han's course in person as a beginner, then after working on art for a couple years, turned around and ripped off the lessons with his own version of them. Although the lessons are free, he is trying to profit off them via patreon where he'll critique for moneys. Some people say he has no business teaching at this point as he is an intermediate artist, and with essentially someone else's lessons (that he redrew).

Basically it's a discount bargain bin dollar store knockoff of Peter Han's Dynamic Sketching course.

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Working on gesture. I'm not quite fast enough.

>> No.3677573

>>3677564
Are you absolutely incapable of drawing, regard it as basically magic, drawing look like a 5 year old's stick figure family? Start with Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain by Betty Edwards.

Can you passably doodle, if you had to draw a simple sketch of a piece of fruit or a cat could someone tell what it was, and that an adult drew it, even if it was kind of shitty? Have you drawn something in the last half decade? Keys to Drawing by Bert Dodson.

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Goddamn I fucked this one up. I went oranger on the skin to compensate for my monitor on my touchscreen laptop, but I way overdid it...

>> No.3677588

>>3677584
It's alright. Now she's sunburned and hoping to go back outside again!

>> No.3677589

>>3677571
Yes! That's the stuff anon! Do not worry about not being fast enough or anything. It is a grind a long grind, just keep up with it daily and you will get better. Be careful not to overstrain your arm/wrist by trying to be too fast it happened to me several times.
You are good now is the time for patience and persistence you will feel better in a week or so if you stick to it, there will be days when your gestures will be shit and days when you will be good. Do not read into that and panic thinking that you suddenly stopped improving or some shit, it is just one day that didn't go well, one of many. Keep at it!

>> No.3677593

>>3677589
Thank you! I will!

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>>3677593

>> No.3677601

>>3677584
Try color replace or fuck with levels

>> No.3677609

>>3677565
so peter han is ss and dab is sl5x5?

>> No.3677619
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This is my art

>> No.3677623
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This is mine

>> No.3677630

Did the guy who drew the world of warcaft character with her tongue out come back and show his results?
Also, going through the Dynamic Sketching video from the sticky, fuck me this is some good exercises.

>> No.3677633

Any good tips/sources on improving my proportions? Trying to draw what i see and that's giving me the biggest headache at the moment.

>> No.3677637

>>3677609
>so peter han is ss and dab is sl5x5?
Fucking lmao.

>> No.3677648

I always wanted to learn to draw so I came here last night and read the sticky. I’ve been loomising for 24 hours straight and all tho I see some improvement I’m still having a lot of difficulty especially with the nose mouth chin area. How long did it take you to really get good at drawing character heads?

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It looks passable, as long as you don't know the image I was painting I was trying to study...

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>>3677659
but as soon as you see them side by side...
yikes.

>> No.3677665

What be your preferred method for drawing the head and eyes? Currently work with Loomis but would like to pick up other methods to try. Have seen a tutorial by Conoghi that used a triangle, not sure who that one is by, though.

>> No.3677668

>>3677633
Drawing from life and measuring parts of the subject again other parts.

Got a figure? Take a pencil hold it up and measure the torso with your thumb. Then do the same thing with the head and match it against the measurement you got with the torso.

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>>3677648
Forgot pic, this is where I am after one day of Loomis. I’m an absolute beginner. Also I’m using nootropics.

>> No.3677671

>>3677488
Definitely an improvement on right side just harder to tell because it's unfinished atm. Left side looks more flat and disproportionate.

>> No.3677673

>>3677609
DAB be significantly more accessible and friendly than Han. Might be using Han's lessons but it be much more enjoyable than drilling from a book. That in itself makes it okay for him to farm shekels w/ Patreon imo.

Current figure drawing teacher bases his entire curriculum off of a combination of Vilppu and Loomis, but it's significantly less tedious because he presents them well and gives good feedback.

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>> No.3677691

>>3677659
>>3677662
Hah

>> No.3677692

>>3677673
Well, everyone learns from someone, teaching a class using a textbook is no crime. I think the heart of the matter is whether he is qualified to teach period.

I haven't seen any of Han's lessons. Personally I got annoyed with with dab's tone and how he would say stuff like 'I dont expect you to be able to do this'. Why give people assignments you haven't given them the tools to complete? 'This is too hard for you, unlike myself but go ahead and fail at it anyway. Oh I didnt explain how to do it? Yeah I know.'

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im so fucking mad i restarted the fucking upside down picasso twice and i can't do it right everything is spaced out wrong i can't fucking match the proportions even though i'm literally just drawing the lines as i see them

>> No.3677698

>>3677694
Are you actually measuring in a rough way or no? Like 'this line is twice as long as that one over there, and the distance between them is half as long as the first line' or something? Nothing mathematically perfect just ballpark will help.

Beyond that dont agonize too much over it and quit starting over. You're a beginner and it's not expected to be a 1:1 copy. The point of the exercise is to get past seeing things as a 'leg' or 'nose' and just see shapes and lines. To make you understand how all things are made up stuff you can draw if you let go of your associations like 'I cant draw hands'.

Do your best and finish up tonight. Laugh if it looks stupid and get on with your next task.

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>>3677571
more practice, feeling pretty relaxed today

>> No.3677706

if I can in my opinion draw better on paper than on my shitty no-screen tablet, would it be wrong to just draw shit on paper and then trace it for a final work?

>> No.3677708

>>3677706
It's pretty much how I do things, dude. It's still drawing either way.

>> No.3677709

>>3677706
Whatever works for you. I don't see the problem with that.

>> No.3677712

The worst thing about using a drawing tablet is that without seeing my stylus in relation to my strokes, it's hard to create lines exactly as I want.

>> No.3677715

>>3677712
yeah exactly, that's why I'm considering>>3677706

cause I've just tried 20 times to draw a 90 degree vertical line and failed

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after what seemed like a good streak, I now seem to be in a bit of a rut and I feel like this is turning out poorly. Can anyone redline this to help out with the fabric folds? I feel like they're to coming out right

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i've been drawing a shit-ton lately. here's something i'm proud of

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>>3677698
i dont even know what my next task is, i started betty edwards but idk if it's a meme book or not

>> No.3677739

>>3677727
Personally, I find the reading is so off-putting that it's not enough to tell people to ignore it. You're better off going through Keys to Drawing.

>> No.3677760

>>3677739
guess i'll (start over) with keys since i'm not far into edwards anyway

>> No.3677765

>>3677669
What nootropics are you on my dude
Also think about the underlying idea of loomis, construction based on 3D geometric shapes and the manipulation and combination of them while applying perspective
Drawing well takes fucking forever, but keep at it

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I've just started practicing with lights and shadows because I used not to even colour my drawings. Please tell me if the lightning makes sense (the thingy at the upper right corner is supposed to indicate where the light is coming from). Thank you a lot.

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How do i make my lineart clean and 3d, and how to make coloring looks good /beg/ ?
In short, what did i do wrong pls ?

>> No.3677771

>>3677769
OP here. Sorry, I meant 'upper left corner'.

>> No.3677787

>>3677765
100mg modalert daily. I’m oldfag now but on mod alert I have the unlimited focus and drive that I had in my 20s. I’m still grinding on these. Still having a lot of issues with the noses but I feel like I’ve made progress in a day and a half.

>> No.3677799

>>3677659
head's too big

>> No.3677808

How do you personally draw the head?

>> No.3677809

>>3677770
I suggest you explore cel shading it's simple and effective if done right

>> No.3677811

>>3677808

I draw 2 horizontal lines for eyes
1 vertical line for nose & mouth

and then just apply the 3d shapes onto this frame
very easy
also my faces improved drastically after I stopped doing they loomis carved ball shit

>> No.3677817

https://youtu.be/QkAu-s4guC8

>> No.3677846

>>3677811
>also my faces improved drastically after I stopped doing they loomis carved ball shit

well that's how loomis work anon it's there to teach you the fundamentals the rest is up to you

>> No.3677847

>>3677811
Pls give example

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>>3677847
not him but I think he meant pic related

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did this really fast in procreate on my ipad. still getting used to the tools and the fucking color wheel. did i goof buying this thing?

>> No.3677910

>>3677855
Ah ok, thanks

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Page 1 of Drawabox Lesson 5

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Why does my line art look several times worse then my sketches?

>> No.3677971

>>3677964
Soul vs souless

>> No.3677974

>>3677971
kek

>> No.3677978

>>3677964
no difference in line weights

>> No.3677992

>>3677978
Thanks!

>> No.3678037
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How's this for gesture/figure practice?

Is this the sort of work I should be doing?

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>>3677659
Any particular reason why you're using a large brush even in detailed areas? Do you start with an under drawing?

>> No.3678134

>>3677619
Want to see more of it

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Started drawing exactly a momth ago going by the sticky I'm shocked at the improvement... I don't want to draw portraits but god it feels good to draw something recognizable
My first portrait suffered from a hard symbole drawing syndrome... Also how to improve more..???

>> No.3678156

>>3677964
Bowl, BOWLESS.

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drew ol kurisu

>> No.3678163

>>3678159
Stop drawing.

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>>3678134
Stuff from today

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>>3678159

>> No.3678175

>>3678171
i don't understand

>> No.3678182

>>3678175
Your art is SHIT and it deserves to be ridiculed to shit.

>> No.3678190

>>3678165
I like it very much thank you

>> No.3678203

I see people recommending 1 minute gesture drawings but when I go on the site I see they also have a category for faces. Should I be doing quick drawings of faces as well? Would that actually teach you anything from drawing faces so quickly?

>> No.3678205

>>3677397
I'm not OP, but do you have a reference for Symbol drawing. That has the Original/reference image on the side and the symbol drawing on one side. Or can you post your works if you still have em? I'm struggling a lot with symbol drawing.

>> No.3678206

>>3678205
Read drawing from the right side of your brain by Betty Edward's

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Something seems off but I can't tell what

>> No.3678212

>>3678205
It's literally the second picture in the thread
>>3677287

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>> No.3678219
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>>3678206
>>3678212
I'm not a really bright person am I. Forgive me. Anyways, I'm attaching my drawing. Been trying to do shading with hatching, what does secondary light source means? And how do people interpret in their drawing.

>> No.3678220

>>3678209
is that your drawing? well, for starters, his dick is coming out of where his nipple should be, otherwise fine.

>> No.3678221

>>3678209
I don't know why but this is the funniest shit I've seen in a long time, thank you

>> No.3678222

>>3678209
thanks for the inspiring post fellow /beg/gar

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>>3677770

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>>3678159
Quick! You can pretend to be someone else if you put on a clever disguise.

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>>3678209
Perspective is off between the bed and the floor I tried to correct it a bit here. Shading is still lacking, you did a lot of work on the boobs but lower body needs to have shading too. I tilted the legs and the pussy to the right a bit.

As>>3678220 mentioned the dick looks like it is coming out of the poor guy's nipple (I mean, if that is your fetish go for it I guess), I get that you want to show off the porn area but it is better if you make him have a chest at least.

Otherwise well done keep improving.

>> No.3678300

>>3678218
what is this called again?

>> No.3678302

>>3678300
Values?

>> No.3678305

>>3677584
dont draw thots for the love of god

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Where do I go/what do I read to learn how to put shadows?

When I look at images like pic related and see the shadows all of it look so random to me.

I could probably find a better example but I'm hoping this is enough to get my point across.

Also, what do you call this kind of style of doing shadows and highlights as opposed to a softer blend like you see in paintings?

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I did the sketch on paper first and then traced it
hows this

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>>3677769
In reality a small hole like that would barely produce enough light to illuminate a person but since this is an art study let us say we point a light to her.

When dealing with that look for light reflective surface on the face, the hair is quite reflective in general the eyeball is very reflective. Also round surfaces like the eyeballs the nose lips eyelids can serve. Make sure the eyeball's highlight spot faces towards the light source as if it was a round mirror. You also can use the geography of the face to great effect to show lights and shadows like the lips for example.

I saw you start a purplish reflected light on the shirt from the right side, good use that to help the visual detail of the ,form I added it to the hair as well.

Keep up the good work anon!

>> No.3678380

>>3678362
it is called "cell shading"

>> No.3678386

>>3678375
Okay anon next thing you should do is set up a light source and start to experiment with cell shading.

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I know perspective is all over the place, but apart from it I can't isolate what else is going wrong here

Any help appreciated, was trying to do something similiar to how watercolor artists paint this type of scenes

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>>3678386

okay meanwhile also did this

>> No.3678476

>>3677609
I've been giggling like a moron all day every time I remember this post. Seriously anon. Thank you.

>> No.3678477

>>3677698
>The point of the exercise is to get past seeing things as a 'leg' or 'nose' and just see shapes and lines.
Now I actually understand what y'all say when you talk about "symbol drawing". Don't draw a leg, draw two lines?

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I feel like blowing my brains out. Trying to learn drawing has been such a fucking waste of my time.

>> No.3678481

How the traditional painting/drawing affects your cg skills and vice versa? I've definitely noticed some huge improvements after traditional classes.

>> No.3678504

>>3678480
How is that come then?

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>just draw lol

>> No.3678516

>>3678509
Keep making excuses for yourself.

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>>3678432

>> No.3678555

>>3678054
Normally I use linedrawings to get a better feel for size and composition, but had problems with that approach, as I never managed to get rid of the lineart afterwards without everything falling apart. For this I basically just started eyeballing stuff and laying down color as soon as possible, and then refining.
So, the answer to your question is: I didn't get around to spending enough time on rendering yet.
But if you have a better approach/workflow I'm definitely willing to try.
(out of curiousity: are you the anon from the 'try to draw this ridiculously detailed jewel-encrusted skeleton'-thread?)

>> No.3678563

>>3678136
You don't have to just do portraits, you can do still lifes, animals, nature in general, enviroments, industrial design things. Copying is usually the fastest way when starting out, but if you aim is to do imagination work or more creative work you might want to also do some sketching and fun drawing alongside to keep track of what you learn.

>>3678218
This reminds me I need to do more of these, and focus on shapes and simplifying. Keep it up!

>>3678402
It feels a bit blurry, not sure if you want to imply motion, also the values make it feel as if it was dawn? Or very early in the morning and foggy. The thumbnail looks good overall. So probably you just need to polish, and a bit more structure with brushstrokes.

>> No.3678639

isnt construction just symbol drawing

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>> No.3678645

>>3678639
Prove it.
Also define symbol.

>> No.3678649

>>3678645
symbol as something you have a definition of from memory

>> No.3678671

>>3678639
No not really. Symbol means more 2D like. Symbol drawing is obvious because you can tell there's no consideration of the actual 3D form.

>> No.3678686

>>3678639>>3678645>>3678649
I'm reading this since someone recommended it and that made me think. Not original anon asking. https://www.handprint.com/HP/WCL/perspect1.html#distortion

Renaissance and Baroque artists who experimented with these effects understood that perspective paintings are effective even when they are not viewed from the center of projection. This is sometimes called Zeeman's paradox, but the paradox is purely conceptual: it assumes we view a perspective representation as a retinal simulation, when in fact we view it as a two dimensional painting. In other words, perspective constructions create visual symbols, not visual illusions. The key is that paintings lack the depth of field cues created by binocular vision; we are always aware a painting is flat rather than deep. And that is how our mind interprets it, adjusting our understanding of the painting to compensate for our position.

>> No.3678717

>>3678686
If you think MacEvoy's use of the word symbol in in that paragraph is the same use of symbol in "symbol drawing" then you've thoroughly misunderstood his explanation of Zeeman's paradox

>> No.3678741

>>3678717
I can hear the blood boiling from you from here lol. It made me think that ultimately everything is a symbol for us to transfer information, some symbols are just fancier are more elegant than others, but you will never recreate anything truly real, just make belief it is. Which is refreshing actually.

>> No.3678742

>>3678741
deep, dude

>> No.3678746

>>3678741
Wrong board anon, this is for artists not philosophers.

>> No.3678749

>>3678741
It's not unreasonable dumb things down and stretch the term symbol to encompass the entirety of visual art (or even further, like you have done), but the term "symbol drawing" loses all meaning in that paradigm

>> No.3678755

>>3678741
>>3678742
>>3678746
you guys ever think about how like everything we see is just like photons man... like it's not even real but people pretend like it's real.... it's like you can really let go of it all once you realize that it's all just like lights rays man...

>> No.3678758

>>3678639
It can be. Symbol drawing basically means you're trying to draw something, say, an apple, but you're too uninformed to actually draw it, so you try to use your mind's idea of the apple to fill in the blanks. In short, it simply means you are ignorant of the subject matter you are trying to draw. This can happen with or without construction; just because you know how to put together spheres and boxes, doesn't mean you're suddenly not symbol drawing anymore. Furthermore, just because something is "cartoony", doesn't mean it's symbol drawing by default. Toddlers symbol draw with their doodles because they don't know any better, professional cartoonists use applied knowledge to create cartoons that are grounded in reality.

>> No.3678763

>>3678758
So what you're saying is that art is all symbols.
Don't know what the big deal is about that if that's the way you want to think about art that way if you want to, it's up to you.

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>>3678555
>Normally I use linedrawings to get a better feel for size and composition, but had problems with that approach

Not starting with a line drawing is a mistake. Not only is it the blueprint of the painting, it is also clear that the original artist used the canvas itself during the composition process, intentionally aligning important body contours with corners, midpoints, and quarterpoints. It made things easier for him, and it makes things easier for you. This painting is easier to study than most because of this logical design foundation.

Studying shouldn't just be direct copying. You should be reverse-engineering the entire creation process in your mind, from drawing to design to painting. If you don't draw, you're losing out on a big chunk of studying.

>> No.3678767

>>3678763
>So what you're saying is that art is all symbols.
Sure, if you just ignore the entire point of my post and argue semantics like a disingenuous retard

>> No.3678773

>>3678639
>isnt construction just symbol drawing
>>3678758
>It can be.

So no, it isn't _just_ symbol drawing.

>> No.3678779

>>3678767
What I'm saying is, is that, I don't see what the big deal is about looking at art as symbols is all about.
What's wrong with it?

>> No.3678799

>>3678779
It's not wrong I just think personally that thinking past symbols makes the subject feel more there. Its how you're thinking about it in your head. Are you figuring out how something looks through construction or are you using pre-determined symbols?

>> No.3678802

>>3678779
What's the point you are trying to make? That symbol drawing is a myth and everything is symbol drawing? Or that art isnt symbols?

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ok

I think I did a good job with the hair
fucked up the face cause I didn't make the sketch precise enough
lessons:
make the sketch as precise as possible

>> No.3678804

>>3678799
>pre-determined symbols
but anon, given what we know of cause and effect, isn't everything predetermined?

>> No.3678805

>>3678804
The fuck are you on

>> No.3678806

>>3678779
The goal of talking about symbol drawing is about getting an artist into a mindset that's geared towards studying reality and learning as much as you can from it to make your art better. I have no idea why you're so stuck on the semantics of the word "symbol", it accomplishes absolutely nothing of value. if you want to reduce literally all art to "symbols" as some kind of justification for not improving, then be my guest

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>>3678799
arent geometric shapes symbols too? you're just trying to imagine them from different angles in your mind's eye

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>>3678807
symbols everywhere... all i see are symbols... it's refreshing actually

>> No.3678809

Just realized it's been almost a year since I bought a tablet and started drawing.
I have made very little progress...
I obviously didn't spend enough time drawing, but at this rate I will stay a /beg/ until the day I retire.
I obviously enjoy drawing, but it can be very frustrating to be dissatisfied with everything I draw. How do you guys deal with these feelings? Do you have to start drawing when you're 5 so you won't have these kinds of inhibitions?

>> No.3678811

>>3678809
>How do you guys deal with these feelings?

Get out of here while you still can... lest you be sucked into a debate about something as banal as symbol drawing

>> No.3678815

>>3678809
Same dude, I bought a tablet in december of last year and after a few days the initial confidence wore off and I realized I sucked at everything so I just couldn't find the mental fortitude to continue trying anymore. I've picked it up time and again since then but I always end up getting angry and stopping. I've made no progress.

>> No.3678816

>>3678742>>3678746>>3678749>>3678755
Ha ha. I wasn't trying to go that deep but. Alright, when you refer to symbol drawing on this board I feel you mean someone isn't putting enough effort on their craft, the message they are conceiving is not convincing enough, lacks details, is plain, or has errors with encapsulation.
But, while reading that section I just, is all about a big con, about seeing how much smoke and mirrors can you pull to make as many people believe for an instant that what you are doing is something concrete, specific. But it just works under the right conditions, and that means, even if you try really hard or do really good, there will always be issues you can't control like people seeing the painting or picture from the wrong angle or position. So you try to aim to be your best possible self at the craft, but ultimately there's no right way to do it. Sometimes like with some of those paintings you fake your way through because is a necessity, because you need to reach as meany people as you can to convince them, so you make sacrifices or deform pictures in ways that wouldn't make sense otherwise.
Sometimes people talk around here like there's THE way and nothing else, but is just devouring information, then making the best decisions possible.
So when someone asked if it was symbol drawing and someone jumped to explaining 2D and 3D, I though about that paragraph.
(1/2)

>> No.3678817

>>3678764
thank you very much for the indepth answer. I guess I did approach it more from a "copy stuff and you'll learn something along the way" perspective, but now that you say it, constructing kind of makes more sense.

Appreciate your answers :)

>> No.3678821

>>3678809
What do you want out of drawing? How often do you study and/or work outside your comfort zone? When you say you're dissatisfied, do you mean in general, or the results of your practice?

>> No.3678822

>>3678816
The point being, we are always aware that a drawing is 2D, no matter how good we make it, it will always be seen as a symbol, it's just a very convincing one when we do it from the optimal conditions and it's brilliantly done, but it's still just someone being really good at their craft, knowledge and ideas. So shouldn't you really say they are performing poorly at convincing you with their skill rather than talk about symbol drawing?
I'm probably rambling now. But for people who are starting out, it's gonna become confusing I feel along the line because the actual meaning of "symbol drawing" is starting to become twisted or becoming some sort of dogma to follow for success. Do or die. I just felt it was funny.
(2/2)

>> No.3678827

>>3678822
The point of someone saying you are "symbol" drawing is to point out the fact that you aren't actually drawing what's there but what your brain classifies what that thing looks like.

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>>3678822
So something like this.

>> No.3678831

>>3678809
How many hours a day have you been putting into it?

>> No.3678834

>>3678822
No one uses symbol drawing as a critic on you being bad. They use symbol drawing to tell you that you are drawing with the symbols your brain deems is accurate and not what the thing actually looks like.

>> No.3678838

>>3678827>>3678829
But that's the thing though, both all of those objects in that picture, bottom and top are symbols, and drawings.
The bottoms ones just have a ton more information, accuracy and resemblance to their real counterparts as we experience them. But they are still symbols, what you just mean is someone is either being "lazy" at adding those extra bits of info that make you believe you are seeing something specific or putting the effort to trick the watcher into recognizing the subject.
It's just differences in the contained information the problem is it creates confusing when someone ask if something is symbol drawing or not and their meanings. You basically are using a concept to refer to a multitude or different issues.

>> No.3678842

Sorry for blogging, ignore this post.

>>3678821
>What do you want out of drawing?
Ideally I would be able to draw well enough to create small games with the level of visual quality of say, something like HuniePop. Not an impossible goal one would think, but it's just a pipe dream for now. I'd also like to try drawing some simple comics, like the newest Shadman one. I don't want to become the next Gi or anything, I just want to be able to draw the things that I find visually appealing, and I have a taste for relatively simplistic art.

> How often do you study and/or work outside your comfort zone?
I always feel uncomfortable so I guess all the time. I've tried studying from various sources, like right side and drawabox. I understand the concepts and noticed some slight improvement from doing the exercises but it feels like it plateaus quickly. It's the same with various "how to draw X" construction tutorials. It feels like memorizing tricks instead of improving my overall understanding/skill/intuition for the most part. To draw an analogy, it's like a complete beginner memorizing openings in chess - pointless because he'll make a mistake as soon as he runs out of memorized moves anyway.

>When you say you're dissatisfied, do you mean in general, or the results of your practice?
A little bit of both. I guess I was hoping for some sort of "beginner gains" as gymbros say. That I would improve quickly for a while before I stagnated and actually had to work for it. I know that the remedy is simply "draw more", but it's hard when I have limited free time in the first place, to spend it on an activity where I just end up beating myself up over not being good enough. It doesn't help that I have a history of that as well, depression etc.

>> No.3678845

Hello everyone, just wanna say thanks for all the advice, recommendations and link to useful website and content. I wanna start drawing and this board will be a great place to seek advice and feedback it seems.

>> No.3678849
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>>3678845
no it wont

>> No.3678852

>>3678838
Any drawing can be considered a "symbol" but when people say you are symbol drawing they are referring to the symbols in you brain not what you actually put on paper. Your brain simplifies things into basic symbols and when people first begin to draw they are drawing those not what's real

>> No.3678873

>>3678842
Chess beginners memorize openings so they can progress through the game instead of just straight up losing immediately. It helps them get to the point of running out of memorized moves so that they can continue to learn from that point onward. Once he's a master, he'll gain insight on the moves that were just products of mere memorization and turn it into understandable theory. But it's the vehicle of memorization that carried him there.

In the same sense, I would suggest you just do Keys to Drawing and learn to draw in proportion with the reference. Once you have some sort of proportion control down, it's much easier to do studies and learn perspective constructions without feeling frustrated at your own work (because it at least looks somewhat like what you're referencing). From there, you can search for more advanced understanding of the fundamentals without just giving up right at the start because you got the proportions wrong and it looks like a mess.

>> No.3678879

>>3678852
I get what you mean, personally, but people I feel they are not going to get it anymore and they start asking all sorts of weird questions related to symbol drawing because some people throw it around here like it's the answer to all problems.

Look at this for example. >>3678829 Check the bottom right one. Let's agree it resembles an apple, alright but it might also not be it and be a peach, depends on the viewer familiarity with it, but what kind of apple? Is it green, yellow, red? For all we know it could be blue. It could be a a fake, plastic. We just don't know, and that's a symbol, you just again, are having different degrees of information which you process into what you are familiar with, and drawing doesn't contain all the necessary amounts to convince everyone of something all the time, thus it's a symbol.
When you tell people they are symbol drawing you make it mean as if there's not symbol drawing but that's a fallacy, there's just better more complete symbols. If you reached the point where you can recreate all and any detail inside your head about something in the way we experience it (not just visually), then you can start doubting what is or not a symbol (and reality itself). But that won't happen in a drawing, it would probably be something else entirely. And you should stop telling people they should not symbol draw when that's the only thing we can do. Which again is funny! It's a paradox.

>> No.3678880

>>3678842
>It feels like memorizing tricks instead of improving my overall understanding/skill/intuition for the most part. To draw an analogy, it's like a complete beginner memorizing openings in chess - pointless because he'll make a mistake as soon as he runs out of memorized moves anyway.
This is what sticks out the most to me, it sounds like you aren't confident in your fundamentals as an artist. Without a strong foundation, yeah those lessons are gonna feel like "tricks". I haven't read right side so I don't know what it's like but I would recommend going through Keys to Drawing by Bert Dodson instead. Really digestible stuff, and for me it contextualizes a lot of the stuff I learned so that I could make those tools my own instead of just memorizing them. Another book I'd recommend is the Vilppu Drawing manual, because I just think it's awesome all around. From there, study from life, and try to enjoy the process, learning and improvement will eventually come to you

>> No.3678881

>>3678879
imagine having this much autism

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>>3678879
You are the only person ive ever seen who doesn't get what symbol drawing.

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>>3678873
How do I into sighting when my only references are on screen?

>> No.3678891

>>3678887
What difference does it make?

>> No.3678892

>>3678887
god forbid you go outside, Frogposter

>> No.3678896

>>3678881>>3678883
Well when people start insulting you around here and making it personal you usually can take it as agreement. Do you know people react that way when they feel threatened, anxious and doubt themselves right?
So I'll take it. It's not the point of this thread to discuss it any further anyway, but I felt voicing my concerns was the right thing to do for other people who might be confused.

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>> No.3678899

>>3678896
Sounds like a convenient way to dismiss criticism

>> No.3678902

>>3678892
are you seriously trying to chastize me for trying to learn how to draw in my own room
>>3678891
Nevermind I was just having trouble with the concept itself, I think I got it now.

>> No.3678904

>>3678899
If there was any criticism on those words I would consider them. But they are just personal attacks. They aren't guiding the discussion any further, so since I started it, I might as well shut it down.

>> No.3678905

>>3678896
People here itt have already explained why you're retarded, but you're either intentionally ignoring them or you really are just that stupid. Also, at this point it's exhausting reading your massive walls of stupid ESL trite, so we're just opting to make fun of you

>> No.3678907

>>3678873
>>3678880
Fair points.

Does anyone have a download link to Keys to Drawing that won't rape my computer?

>> No.3678913

>>3678904
What you have been saying is retarded, and how yelling at a deaf guy is pointless arguing with you is even more so.

>> No.3678914

>>3678907
here friend:
https://ptpb.pw/3_5o.pdf

God's speed anon

>> No.3678918

>>3678905
Have you ever seen a characterization where some teacher is imparting a lesson and some student tells them something, and they turn around and look at them with disdain, and they go back to the lesson, the student questions him and they just seething through their teeth tell them to mind their business and shut up? That's the read I'm getting from you. It's totally fine though, I'll take it as I say. Feels nice.
I agree I write too much, I apologize for that. I hope it was entertaining at least! It was for me.

>> No.3678927

>>3678918
Yeah cause in that scenario its a calculus teacher in the middle of the year and the question asked was "is 2+2=3?". Sometimes when you are retarded that's just how it is.

>> No.3678935

>>3678918
It's funny you put it that way, I was just imagining a characterization where a special needs child keeps interrupting the class with their autistic fits, and after several failed attempts to impart the lesson, the teacher just gives up and gives them more glue to eat

>> No.3678940

>>3678935
Yes it is indeed funny that you are self aware how retarded you are. If that's not a subconscious admission of agreement then i don't know what is.

>> No.3678945

>>3678940
>no u
good one, you sure showed me :^)

>> No.3678950

>>3678927
well i mean if 2 is just a number, and 3 is just a number, it's just all numbers man

>> No.3678965

>>3678950
How could i have been so blind

>> No.3678970

>>3678945
Maybe this is some next level trolling and im in fact the retard here.

>> No.3679032

>>3678809
Don't worry about the quality of your drawings. If you do one that you don't like then just rip it out of your sketchbook and throw it away. No one will know it happened. Don't get too attached to things. Enjoying the process is what it's all about and it's what makes the hours whiz by. I like to have netflix going on a different monitor when I draw and I just relax and enjoy trying to figure out the shapes and forms of things. It's like a puzzle and once you get into it then the hours just fly by. Don't be afraid to erase anything you don't like and take your time.

>> No.3679040

>>3678845
>this board will be a great place to seek advice and feedback

That's debatable.

>> No.3679047

Is it wrong to keep all my work to myself? I'm always hesitant to share my stuff because I don't think that highly of it.

>> No.3679050

>>3679047
No why would that be wrong? Are you afraid of criticism or just don't feel the need to seek validation from others?

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fuck everything

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>>3678549

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>>3678898

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>>3677909
youre working too dark so its impossible for you to create a crater where the branch goes. photoshop has an autocolor/tone/contrast feature whenever you fuck up to get a second shot

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all of the people i draw keep turning out like mongoloids and albino africans please help me

>> No.3679142

>>3679138
yo you working on that new gorillaz album cover?

>> No.3679147

>>3679138
Try drawing other people outside of your family tree.

>> No.3679161
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over a year ago I did some characters for character design task at school
Time was quite limited and I did have trouble trying to make over 10 different characters and kinda cheated with the "shadow" people

Any critique?

>> No.3679170

>>3679161
Your gestures are decent. If you're looking for critique on the designs, they're horribly generic.

>> No.3679199
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First time, 24 years old.

Poppy and Pink Lady Apple, I know they are shit.

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>>3679199

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>>3679199
>>3679201

>> No.3679207

>>3679199
>>3679201
You cant even take a picture without fucking it up. Id recommend you give up. Also, wtf is up with those imgur filenames? I dont want answer btw, i just want you to leave and not come back.

>> No.3679218

>>3679050
Both. But also I feel like a lot of my stuff would be found in an edgelord/stoner highschoolers sketchbook.

>> No.3679219
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how do i start a fucking portrait? I somehow drew this like a year ago and im trying to draw another since but it just looks like garbage

i have no idea how to organize what im doing or where to even start

i "draw the shapes" in the values theyre in but the proportions end up so fucked it looks horrible so im clearly not doing something right

should i be using line drawings first? doesnt that make it look cartoony? how do you even capture it correctly with lines without it looking even worse, i spent 3 hours just fucking with greys and erased it because it looked completely off when i made the source material greyscale

>> No.3679221

>>3679206
What lol
>>3679207
Best I could do, what would you of done differently? I do not have a scanner. Uploaded them to resize and then redownloaded them for file upload to 4chan, I'm on a shitty chromebook that I got off a mate for £10

>> No.3679244

>>3679206
>>3679207
Come on you pair of cunts critique my work then, it says in one of these tutorials that I should take a real life object and just draw without rubbing anything out, how did I do?

>> No.3679249

>>3679244
looks like you didn't even try
also a tip take photos with natural sunlight

>> No.3679250

>>3679244
you said you knew that they were shit, and yeah, they are really shitty, i actually thought you were just shitposting. how about looking at how others draw still life, and i mean REALLY look. youll notice that they dont just use lines like you do

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>>3678305
uh oh too late.
>>3679125
Well it's cuter, but I didn't want it to be a chibi either.

I think I got this one pretty good, although looking at it now I probably should have gone a bit darker on the brow shadows.

>> No.3679260

>>3679249
You do know what a poppy and a apple is right lad? It's 3am here you dipshit, I would of thought the £10 comment would of tipped you off that I am English, a bit daft aren't you?
>>3679250
Oh come on I said critique man, what makes it shit? What that they have basic shapes in them?

>> No.3679264

Dude, what if like, you held your pencil far away from the tip?
>no hand blocking your vision
>minimize wrist movements
DUDE

>> No.3679274

>>3679264
Why are you drawing on your one inch willy in the first place you cock? You can't draw your dick bigger mongrel

>> No.3679284

>>3679260
Why should we put effort into critiquing your drawing if you're not gonna put effort into drawing it? Gtfo and go read the sticky you entitled English cunt, before I smack you in the gob, I swear on me mum

>> No.3679287

>>3679260
You didn't even try
A toddler would draw better
Shut the fuck up and get to work, start drawing from references

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>>3677978
>>3677964
Redrew this shit, still not gonna say it looks the BEST but it looks much better.

>> No.3679303

>>3679284
Lad the tutorial from this sticky said to do this, instead of being a pissy little cunt how about you tell me where I can learn to draw.

>>3679287
The shitty arse sticky told me not to. Fuck me lad did you forget this is the beginner thread? Of course my drawing is going to be that of a toddler level you demented fuckwit.

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>>3679303
No, you're just literally trolling
you draw a circle with dots on it, that is not an attempt
you are wasting everyone's time here

Get some fucking reference and start doodling, fucking retard. here, draw this

>> No.3679316

>>3679303
>The shitty arse sticky told me not to
I wrote 80% of the sticky. Please read it again.

>> No.3679317

>>3679311
It's a fucking apple, what more is there? It didn't have a stalk, I was drawing it from the side and the only thing on it apart from the colours were the fucking dots, jesus christ lad. Draw your boyfriend? Fine, I will draw you being dicked by him as well.

>> No.3679318

>>3679303
You clearly didn't read the sticky, because not only is literally every claim you've made incorrect, but if you had read the sticky you'd know there are like a gorillion resources on learning "how to draw".
>inb4 but I did read it tho
Then read it harder, but this is as much as I'm willing to spoon feed to some low effort shitter

>> No.3679320

stop arguing with shitty bait and help people

>> No.3679326

>>3679320
this

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>>3679320
>>3679326
i did my part so im entitled to shitposting!

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>>3679311
There you go, here is your boyfriend and you dickhead.
>>3679316
Fine I will read it again.
>>3679318
Yeah fine I will read it again dickhead, go spoon your mother.

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>>3679357

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>>3679357
See, that's a lot better
now if only you took more time to draw the body

And that's not my boyfriend, it's me

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How do yall keep from overshooting the points on your lines, and can anyone recommend any videos that are like draw a box but there video of the person using their arm?

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>Trying to improve to be able to do emergency commissions
Will this level work?
I'm literally desperate, please help..

>> No.3679369

Proportion seems to be my biggest problem. Is there any simple exercise to improve it?

>> No.3679370

>>3679369
try blocking method and gesture drawing

>> No.3679374

>>3679368
if you need emergency money sell your body

>> No.3679375

>>3679361
>>3679374
How long does it take to get rid of this "symbol drawing?" I see a lot of that in that head I did.

>> No.3679376

>>3679375
see it not as lines on paper or lines being redrawn but as trying to represent an actual 3D object, study how perspective works. a good example is how eyes are literal spheres and the flesh of eyelids and the like wraps around them and the bone structure around them creates different depths where it fits into, and that's where value is used to define those depths.

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Rate, please.

>> No.3679386
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I rarely draw anything but I did this. Any thoughts?

>> No.3679406

>>3679386
youre making shadows and glare completely independent of a decided lightsource

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>>3679375
im working on the updated version of the thing at the top. even my lazy drawings are partially symbolized. Its not that important in the grand scheme of things, your symbols will get better. It doesnt matter if youre symbol drawing, but at least, try to make it so your symbols reflect a reality.

>> No.3679423

>>3679406
I'm more concerned with anatomy than shading

>> No.3679432

>>3679423
theres not much to work with, study deeper anatomy like skeleton structure and surface muscles

>> No.3679438

>>3679414
neat

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Just finished, thoughts /ic/?

>> No.3679492

>>3679147
Yikes!

>> No.3679497

>>3679138
Why do you keep drawing them like that?

>> No.3679519

>>3679138
get out of here memester

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>>3679207
>Id recommend you give up

take your own advice bitchboy

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How can I make this pose possible?

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Is there some solution for when you're getting to the end of your notebook and there's so many pages that it's "squishy"? Maybe i just have to many added pages.

>> No.3679526

>>3679523
step 1, don't draw naked boys

>> No.3679529
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What can i do to improve? Any tips on practices or lessons? Thanks in advance

>> No.3679536

>>3679529
try drawing faces from more than one angle

>> No.3679539
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>>3678480

Your proportions are pretty good. Eyes are little too high tho - they always should fall middle of the head. You should learn to construct all features too. See the image attached, there are cues what to study. Obviously you don't need to buy plaster casts or asaro head (it's really expensive +$100 usd) - of course studying the real thing is always best, but you can find plenty of images and even 3D models online. Really check asaro head - it's that good.

When constructing head / facial features you need to define planes really good. Which planes are facing towards the light source, which ones are inclined away from it, and which ones are facing completely away from it (three value system). You will smooth the transitions out at the render stage.

I'll post image below step by step feature constructions (three quarters) but you can find plenty of videos about the subject online. Always do the lay in of features lightly, and accent corners and pinches (line weight) to get really solid 3D look before applying any value!

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>>3679539
This is the image promised.

>>3679529
See >>3679539

Do lay in practices. Try to get the 3D feel before applying any tone / shading. You used charcoal? Is that regular printer paper or some more toothed one? Looks like you jumped to dark values little too fast so the whole thing is smudy. Even charcoal is applied layer by layer (at least that's how I like to do it. Charcoal isn't my favorite media though).

Your values are decent but looks like you had bad references. Look for images with interesting value (shadow) patterns to achieve more impressing portraits. Map your value patterns first (lay in stage). Also seek out vignettes - composition is essential even in portrait.

>> No.3679556

>>3679545
ironically, that nose construction is wrong.

>> No.3679559

>>3679520
I just wanted a better platform to humiliate you. If you had half a brain youd realize this image probably makes me more endearing if anything.

>> No.3679564

>>3679559
lol dont even try to cover your ass you little limp wristed faggot ill still slam you any day

im still up for it if you dont try to stall out the challenge indefinitely and get on my good side like a worm

>> No.3679570

>>3679564
I just want to have you join chat so we can record it and make it an event. Why are you against that?

>> No.3679571

>>3679570
>blah blah blah

put up or shut up bitch im not interested in your little games period

>> No.3679576

>>3679545
Thanks for the advice anon. I will try to work more on the drawing and the 3d feel before applying any values.
I tend to skip to the shadowing part cause it feels like doing make up (which i do on a daily basis) therefore much easier for me.

>> No.3679577

>>3679571
I mean, id think itd be great gesture battling you in an open environment, why is it you dont feel the same? Dont you wish your victory to be broadcasted to the many?

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>>3679577
alright, catch you later and ill give you another chance

not that you'll take it pussy. bye

>> No.3679582

>>3678896
You are being dumb. You're taking the term symbol drawing too literally xwhen someone draws a symbol it means they drew something the way their mind has simplified it to look and now how it actually looks and works irl. You can call a realistic lookin drawing a more advanced symbol but that doesn't change the meaning of the term symbol drawing. There are different types of bombs, for example, from a bath bomb that makes your bath smell nice whatever the fuck that shit does, then there's a bomb, which blows things up. When I say bomb, you think of the thing that blows things up, same as if I say symbol you think of anything that can be a symbol but the second I add bath before bomb the whole meaning is changed. Same with when you add drawing after symbol, it has a different meaning. That's how the English language works.

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Please rate.

>> No.3679630

>>3679629
Hairy/10

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started doing gesture drawings, if they can be called that...

anyway, should I be trying to replicate a master and his process or just keep trying to do this on my own from paintings/photos?

>> No.3679662

>>3679630
LOL

>> No.3679665

>>3679629
What a lovely little hairy English fly.

>> No.3679690

>have favorite artist from like 30 years ago
>find out he's still alive
>check out his more recent work
>it's worse than the stuff he was making decades ago

>> No.3679698

>>3679523
foreshorten right leg, make foot go under left leg (or just take it out of vision completely with the foreshortened rest of the leg) maybe

>> No.3679705

>>3677434
You n'wah

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How do i get this good?

>> No.3679758

>>3679690
HOW do they get like that?

I bet he was unknown when he was doing his good stuff then once he got more successful he said to himself "I have no need to spend as much time doing this any more. This will be dead on the way it is".

Such a shame.

>> No.3679784

>>3677488
terrific improvement

>> No.3679860

>>3679756
abuse the ever living shit out of colour dodge and multiply layers

>> No.3679861

>>3679690
>>3679758
you know it could have been that his life just went to shit. Maybe he could not draw, maybe he suffered, an accident or illness that prevented him. Drawing is skill like any other you use it or loose it, if you completely stop drawing for an extended period like a year, you will see a significant fallback on your skills. That is perfectly normal.

That anon or you just grew up in 30 years realized that he was never that good as your starry eyes younger self made him out to be.

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>>3679131
whoops. my. screenbrightness was down, not. that i dont already issues with this.

anyways i did this about half and half starting in photoshop and finishing with procreate. im still having issues with tones but overall i think im getting used to procreate?

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Been watching this video from love life drawing, is there an easy way to emphasize tone change (like with a photoshop tool) a la this video? Drawing it by hand over every picture I draw from seems like it would get tedious

I'm still supernew and superbad, but this seems like it will help me stop trying to draw my "idea" of a person, if you will

>> No.3680059

>>3679861
I don't think so.

>> No.3680077

hey can someone help me?
I was looking at fun with a pencil by loomis and can see how wrong I was trying to draw without drawing things in perspective.
so I am thinking that it would be best to have some fun and learn at the same time by drawing heads connected to the top half of the body, basically the rib cage.
I am not sure what way to go about practising this when drawing it in perspective.
do I have to draw the head and ribcage as a squared boxes first, then draw lines to a vanishing point somewhere, then round the boxes off?
Is there something I can be directed to better explain this or something?

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Does this drawing of Stan Lee look OK?

>> No.3680080

>>3679861
>you know it could have been that his life just went to shit. Maybe he could not draw, maybe he suffered, an accident or illness that prevented him.

I remember reading this really depressing facebook post by an old Marvel artist who had had a stroke that left him unable to draw. He wrote about how he was constantly depressed because he wasn't able to draw and would even have dreams where he was drawing. Life is shit.

>> No.3680123

>>3679453
Anyone?

>> No.3680133
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ehhh

>> No.3680159

>>3680077
anyone?

>> No.3680388

>>3680133
What was the point of drawing from reference? I don't understand.

>> No.3680429

>>3680388
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>> No.3680431

>>3680429
What? are you mentally ill?

>> No.3680435

>>3680431
you cant handle living in a troll world!!
HAHAHA!!

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>>3680435
Sorry for your lose then, mate.

>> No.3680452

>>3680443
awww, boo-fucking-hoo, you took a screenshot of my post and put it in a doodle someone else made then posted it up.
how will I ever get over the pain...
waaaaaaaaaaaah.

>> No.3680644

New Thread:

>>3680125
>>3680125
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