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3659329 No.3659329 [Reply] [Original]

There was an attempt >>3653658

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
Newfags, please wait until page 8 before deciding on making a new thread if I forget. Keeping the thread up fosters longer discussion. And don't forget the header. Sankyuu.

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>> No.3659408

kek. another anon is snitching on op, idk why but this made me laugh

>> No.3659411
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Does this stuff count? I never know where to post my work.

>> No.3659416

your work has a more children book illustration feel to it

>> No.3659682
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found an online version of macpaint

>> No.3659683

nice. where?

>> No.3659685

i wish there was a normal download, its pretty janky https://archive.org/details/mac_Paint_2

theres also another one called cloudpaint but its extremely laggy

>> No.3659718

You know there are new software for pixel art that do dithering, right?

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The fight over thread rights is very scary

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>> No.3660833

That look nice

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Thanks for the new thread chico! It was annyoing the old one didn't even say /alt or "cartoons general"

>> No.3661075

anyone know who the artist is?
reverse google didn't give anything and searching anything overwatch related on boorus is impossible

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Weird--I thought they were on Pixiv, but they may have deleted or my brain is just fucking with me.

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Just a tip but you'll get better search results when you crop just one portrait. I see you already got the answer but something to keep in mind

>> No.3661194

Check the catalog, there is already an alt thread, dont waste space fag

>> No.3661206

why so upset?

>> No.3661450

that thread was a disaster

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>> No.3661487

You should probably think about the designs a bit more, try to make them stand out bc right now they're just
>cool guy

think outside the box, try making something YOU find interesting and outstanding and more likely than not, someone else will

>> No.3661757
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Drew this a month ago

>> No.3661882

Arms do not work like that.
Also, post new drawings fagget

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Is still spooky in this thread

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>> No.3662531

Looks like a /co/ generic webcomic desu

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Reminds me a lot of the manhattan project comic

did you draw inspiration from it?

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Why is this thread so far down the catalog?

>> No.3664807

because people just want to complain instead

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these threads aren't as lively anymore? I keep dipping in and out of the loop.

>> No.3664946

it's because there are two alt threads

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Latest two pages. Trying to figure out a painless smoke look. I hope 4 panels on a page as opposed to 6 is acceptable.

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>> No.3665564

make sure you're layering right, the panels are bleeding into eachother and making the shots really confusing. The fire on the second is on the back of the first panels boot

>> No.3665645

I've never actually read the Manhattan project before. But I do see the resemblance

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How do I make my drawings less boring?

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the class is here, it's like 8 hours long though.

>> No.3666444

Thanks anon I was unaware that cgpeers was a site until now.

I'll give it a watch after I make an account next week I guess.

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Go around to trying my hand at animating some effects.

>> No.3666649

where did you learn pixel art?

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>> No.3666653

Why do the men wear bracelets and not the women?

>> No.3666657

Cause vampires are homos.

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Finished recently

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tell me how you learnt to make art this good

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Very quick character design

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By practicing a modest amount over the last year or so and looking for decent tutorials when I want to learn something new.
Really not sure what you want to hear my dude.

>> No.3666837

absolutely love it love it love it, would love to have your twitter or somesuch

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i wanted to hear what specific tutorials you used or where you look for tutorials. i want to be as good as you anon

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Well this was useful for drawing those flames, lol.

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thank you anon! now I just need to figure out how I can improve my overall pixel art skills

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> pixel art pastebin
thank you based anon!!!

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Regular size monster, un facebook, but I'm not posting

>> No.3668964

great taste

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repostan' from other thread

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Trying to get back from a long hiatus

>> No.3669197

fucking love the anime references in it
great job my guy!

>> No.3669220

I feel like I have seen this somewhere else before but I don't know where

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really trying to pin down this design for an elf rogue i rolled up recently

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>like style alright for two months before fucking hating it and having a mental fucking breakdown while experimenting
How the fuck do people stick to a style for years and not feel disgusted with themselves???

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posting again, what do I do?

>> No.3669357

gotta come in terms with your own art

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Dunno about the face

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>> No.3669392

What are you doing with it? If you aren't doing anything meaningful with it you won't have any attachment. Also plenty of professionals change up their styles.

>> No.3669397

only thing i'd say is the shoes are a lil undetailed but that's maybe just cause i love shoes and sneakers a lot but also i love this a lot do you have a twitter or something?

>> No.3669399

I don't know if you want general art and style advice or advice on the design. I think in both cases, its extremely masculine. The character looks like a tranny. That face is way too angular.

In terms of general art advice, if your style involves the shoulders connecting at the center of the ribcage, you gotta adjust your style. And the torso and lower body dont look connected, they are on different planes.

>> No.3669403

Take his finger out from under the trigger guard while he racks the slide

>> No.3669405

Cool but the gun is too low. If you have to reach for it it might as well be concealed in a boot or something. It should ride her hip or upper thigh.

>> No.3669409

Lovely stuff mate

>> No.3669428

My twitter is @juste_VU

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Which one is better: This one...

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...Or this one?

>> No.3669621

First one

>> No.3669633

Second one

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Third one

>> No.3669676

Fourth one

>> No.3669696

Thanks /k/, i'm more upset he had to cock it at all, who the fuck doesn't have a bullet in the chamber ready to go with the only think needed is the safety release? fucking dumb.

>> No.3669732

Character art, fan art, and commissions

I guess so

>> No.3669865

I honestly cannot tell what they're supposed to be doing because of how messy the lines are. At first I thought she was grabbing him, but I assume they're supposed to be dancing?
I'd go with the lighter one because it makes your sloppy line-work stand out less.

>> No.3669868

post this without that blurry-ass rain so I can see just how awful the hands look

>> No.3669910

>>3669865 >>3669593
I think it has nothing to do with the line quality, the thumbnail makes not much sense either. Not sure what the gesture of both is, she feels as lower limbs are pulling but arms are pushing. And I don't get the guy twisting, and why is he falling? Also his far away hand? Is like pushing invisible glasses or something.

I like the clear background more.

>> No.3669925

thanks mane

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>> No.3669945

blog? i love the feeling of these.

>> No.3669951

please make a twitter or Instagram and post regularly, you will get a big following in no time.
a-also i just wanna see more of your stuff, please make some kind of social media, facebook isn't that good for getting audiences and stuff btw.

>> No.3669964

really nice

>> No.3669978

yeah dude what's your insta? ill add you

>> No.3670057

Blog? It's bizzarre how the pussy is just visible there in a seemingly "serious" design but it's cool

>> No.3670058

Disregard me I suck dicks and don't read replies

>> No.3670088

do you have a blog?

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someone can recommend me brushes to make clear lines in PTS?

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Trying some new color stuff

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i wanna fuck this so much

>> No.3670241

i dont

>> No.3670247

why not?

>> No.3670266

small critique i have on the far hand is the coloring makes it read a bit unclearly? maybe could use slight contour showing the smaller pad on the lower part of the palm that often extends from the pinky finger in angles like this, or defining it with the lighting. i love how you simplified that hand shape/silhouette overall tho, it's really good. whope piece is great tho imo, i really like this a lot, you got a twitter or somethin similar?

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how does painterly shading work? I'm trying to get off my rut of drawing cell shaded cartoons and try to do some more atmospheric style work but every time i try to do anything with a background or lighting i fuck myself over.

i guess i should study more, but even when i do i feel it looks like a high schooler's art final.

>> No.3670299

oooo watch out everyone hes slaying pumpkins ahhhhhhhh

>> No.3670322

Painterly shading ain't gon' save yer shitty linework.
Go back to traditional for a few months till you can draw a line in fewer than 20 attempts. Also what was event he point of linework if your shading doesn't obey it? What is going on with that ear?

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Tbh the linework looked fine until i put the color over it.
ive always been way more interested in cartooning in general, and lines have never been an issue for me, even when i draw traditionally. idk man i came here for advice on lighting and color, not to be accused of having shitty linework.

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I would just start painting over the lines or paint with no lines at all, if just for practice. It brings attention to edge control and value.


>> No.3670343

Just because you came here for something else does not absolve you of your sins. If you don't know how to draw the lines of teeth, just draw two lines at the edges. The lines on the edges of the hands and shoes, yeesh. You realize that with digital, you can have a layer between your sketch and your painting called a linework layer?

>> No.3670350

dude it was a 90 minute thing i did bc i was bored in class, not some magnum opus i'm presenting to you as an offering. I'm personally not happy with how it looks in general, hence i'm here for critique. you pointing out mistakes and acting like i fucked up and should be chastised isn't constructive, its just trying to sound like you know what you're talking about.

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Did you know you don't need lines to practice painting with color.

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>> No.3670367

Thicc thighs save lives. Keep at it, anon. Hands could maybe use a bit of work but they have a good cartoony blockiness. Expression is not good though, try to make the eye area looser and more natural, that expression is done a lot so you should be able to find some good examples.

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Serious design >.> all my designs are 'jokes' until i think up some canon to place them in. Im thinking she became a cop to shoot black people.
Maybe the 'deep lore' is that she is a mixed kid and a rape baby. Due to these circumstances she now lashes out using her position of authority. I have a few other characters in this sorta cop/thug setting.

>> No.3670396

Appreciate the crit. And yeah I post my stuff here https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>> No.3670447


>do you have a blog?

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>> No.3670803

i really like this

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Latest page, sans the greyscale. I'm fairly happy with this one.

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>> No.3670857
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Another lineart wip before I take a break.

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That dead line weight really flattens the piece compared to >>3670116

>> No.3671038

Thats a fun concept for a weapon. Swinging around a swarm on angry hands at the end of a stick.
I like your color choice, but she feels a little stuff. If I was you I would think about pushing your poses to more exaggerated/expressive.
Spend more time drawing and less time polishing
Appealing proportions anon. Your shapes are also sold pretty well. I like this.
Gotta agree with the other anon, the lack of line weight really kills this.

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You have to draw other subjects if you don't want to stagnate though

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Where is your art-style in the art spectrum?

>> No.3671105

Absolutely based

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>> No.3671311

struggling with loomis and definitely flat

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There we go.

>> No.3671629

I want to draw and render like Yoshitoshi ABe one day.
Only 20 more years to go.
Well, that and a Master's in Fine Arts.

>> No.3671632

h-hey me too...

>> No.3671643

We're gonna get there one day ABebro, don't stop drawing

>> No.3671852
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Redesigned a bunch of old characters from a frozen sf project recently.
I'm not sure i know what i want. I like cartoonish proportions and expressions, but i'm not sure I'm ready to make the jump and go more cartoonish, so for now i'm in this weird zone, semi-realistic place with cartoon faces.

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this is neat

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>> No.3671925


i disagree they have plenty of personality

>> No.3671928

fuck you have so much confidence in those lines i'm jelly

>> No.3672016

good black guy i love it

>> No.3672061

I needed to see the last picture to understand how the lips for the black guy worked and how i was supposed to interpret them.

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forgot to post this here

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kawaii as always, draw more MIKU

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i will but dont expect soon frend

>> No.3672160

you owe me a miku too ;)

>> No.3672264
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here's an wip, drew the motorcycle from memory really fun desu

>> No.3672332

You got a blog?

>> No.3672341
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yeah dude what's your insta? I'll add you.

>> No.3672397

is miku a form of currency now?

>> No.3672418

This is really comfy

>> No.3672429

Cool, those colors are lovely.

>> No.3672431

>she became a cop to shoot black people.
Based and redpilled.

>> No.3672488

it should be

>> No.3672613

thanks :)

>> No.3672702

c-cute miku uwu

>> No.3672948

Thanks dood, I'll finish it one of these days

>> No.3673285
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ffffffffackin doodle

>> No.3673328
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Lazy rendering

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lol dude you really suck ahaha what is that

>> No.3673435


i will ; )

kawaii as fuckkkk

>> No.3673452

Yo this is cool as fuck. Good job.

>> No.3673585
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Finally free for continuation.

>Gotta agree with the other anon, the lack of line weight really kills this.
>That dead line weight really flattens the piece compared to
Thanks for pointing out!

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>> No.3673609

I think it's a pity that you have a character with a flaming head and you give it some sort of pistol as weapon, design wise. Why not make use of that design choice? Give it some flame oriented weapons like molotovs, dynamite, something that needs an igniter. Best if you can come up with something that works alongside it's characteristic design but it's still surprising.

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Didn't your mom tell you to say "please" when asking for something?

>> No.3673861
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I like ayami kojima

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>> No.3673931

is this a Jojo reference?

>> No.3673937

stop drawing penis all the time

>> No.3673943

no. I like ayami kojima and the face is inspired in part by Danny Elfman.

>> No.3674085
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And the other page.

>> No.3674101

why come nobody gets on my case when i draw the exact same things he does

>> No.3674132

Which one is yours anon? I'll try and take a look at it. Sometimes if the piece is alright but doesn't push any of the bias buttons people who check this threads have they just skip over them ha ha. Which is fine I guess, something either catches your eye or it doesn't and if there's nothing too annoying people just jump over it, I feel.

>> No.3674139
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made me think of fiona desu

>> No.3674168

Do Twiter, Insta or Tumblr, nobody uses Facebook

>> No.3674170

Movment iand attitude s weird but I like it, first one is better

>> No.3674173

a bit stiff an symmetrical but I like

>> No.3674194

Hi, I'm here to beg you to make a twitter as well.
I got more of a Boss vibe from VA-11 HALL-A

>> No.3674210
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Drawing a bear girl in the wind

>> No.3674224
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working on faster simpler sketching. i know the balance is a bit off, probs gonna just readjust feet and have the angle of the picture be a bit dutchy

oh nooononono, i don't mind it that much when i don't get a response (tho usually at least one anon is kind enough to comment) just don't get the meaner comments they receive


>> No.3674274

Just wanted to say I love the OP character. have a nice day

>> No.3674283
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sinix as a loli

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>> No.3674369
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I have a feeling that there's something wrong with the hips, but I don't know what - any ideas?

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>> No.3674400

This is pretty bad even for you

>> No.3674405


>> No.3674411

oh baby, look at those hands bahahahaha

>> No.3674427
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i dont know how to quite explain but she looks off balance, like she's leaning. and the hips are wrong in general. also her shoulders are way too scrunched in, I know you want to emphasize the thighs but her waist isnt going to be wider than the entire width of her shoulders.

>> No.3674429
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another one
this is great, i hope i can draw comfy art like this

>> No.3674434

so cute!

>> No.3674446

Thanks, I really appreciate your redline!

>> No.3674506

aw, thank you anon, but I think you could do better than me easily, both those drawings look cute

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>> No.3674529


>> No.3674578

do you take commissions?
also blog?

>> No.3674580

i really love that, blog?

>> No.3674583

good stuff, blog?

>> No.3674585
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t-thank you anon pantsu-ripper.tumblr.com
I've never done it before, but am open to; Be noted I do take requests, in fact most things I draw are requested

>> No.3674588

ahh thanks
mymoonjelli on tumblr and insta

>> No.3674592

If you could draw like this digitally instead of going with the depressed moe aesthetic on the lines...

>> No.3674602

thanks I sent you a request :)

>> No.3674628
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Someone please help. I don't know how to do this.

>> No.3674635

that's cute as hell

>> No.3674655
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>> No.3674660
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Some studies

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Love your palette on this one.

Really nice line weights.

>> No.3674693

How do you learn to hatch do well?

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off to bed

>> No.3674729

these are both cute drawings. I also love your cute demon/monster child angel, draw them eating a donut for me they deserve a treat.

>> No.3674736

It's so cute, i could die.

>> No.3674879


but it's p good, what's wrong with that?
start the actual thing now, you are betwen phase 2 and 3

>> No.3674883
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I feel like I fucked up the perspective on her right hand

>> No.3674934

could this possibly be groovy ocelot?

>> No.3674974
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>> No.3674977

that's... hot desu

>> No.3674987

Kind of looks like she's been impaled

>> No.3674990
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i will redo this later. i am aware of the belly / belly button placement being a bit off. ahaha.

>> No.3675020

yeah it does, what the heck why are u impaling my gf

>> No.3675021

I hecking love all your drawings frend (i close my eyes on the lewd ones)...

>> No.3675055

Was supppsed to be a skyscraper im sorry

>> No.3675069
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w.i.p once again, might make adjustments to the right(our pov) arm

>> No.3675070

Wow, love the slightly more realistic way you render skin and the fattiness of her thighs and stomache. Really nice.

>> No.3675126
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Looks rad, evangelion on the upper left? Or is it another mecha show I should be watching? lol.

So cute, you could have titled the glasses also, might have added an extra addition to the blowing direction.

Nice gestures!

Her right hand (holding gun) looks fine to me, the one far away (her left) does look odd.

The city and debris look really good, do you do them from scratch or photobash? I would say the hands are your weakest point.

Thumbs up.

I would ask if you find the girl legs bothersome or is it just me? I feel the are short, but maybe the arms are long so the legs feels short in comparison? Any other crit is appreciated. I already caught a mistake with the biceps thanks to someone else.

>> No.3675141
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yeeHAW fackin nonsensical power armor designing

why was my precious fanmail deleted

>> No.3675150

Her legs might be a tad bit short, but it's difficult to tell. I'm trying to judge versus the hanging length of her arms but they don't read as a consistent length to me. Her arm grabbing the sword reads as much shorter, with the length disparity coming from the forearm. If you intended it to be foreshortened, the position of the elbow to the viewer doesn't support it.

>> No.3675157

this is so soft and nice

yeah, her left arm is wonked. the forearm is too long , if she put her arm down her fingers would reach to her knees. try sketching on smaller canvases first, fixing things then scaling up to do lineart if you want to make pictures that large.

her right arm looks good, but the bicep is too long, it looks twice the length of the forearm. maybe point her foot to the right so she feels more grounded. the wolf is a cutie

>> No.3675172

> if you want to make pictures that large
Oh shit, my mistake, I never intend to make it super large.

>> No.3675209

Yeah, I went to the mirror and the elbow should come towards the viewer from that angle, else to see the upper arm like so I would have to turn the torso towards the view, so the foreshortening is wrong at the elbow. Taking note of that. Maybe the arms are the issue and that's why the legs look weird in contrast.
Also taking note of turning the standing foot away? To the right do you mean away from the view? I guess that might make sense.

>> No.3675220
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i think you can make the way you drew the arm work, just make it shorter. and you're right, it will make the legs look proportionate in turn

>> No.3675225
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more wip

>> No.3675232

Alright, I'll do another sketch with the arm coming forward and if I don't like it I'll stick to shortening the upper arm as you say, just to have options. I will turn the foot away as you say, it does look better, I agree.

>> No.3675344
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how do I draw better?!!!!

>> No.3675347

Cute! So much better than normal.

>> No.3675352

wtf why does this happen always. I make something I find good and everyone else says it sucks. I make something I think sucks and people think the opposite...

>> No.3675362

Ask people why they like it and consider something you migh not see. If you're conforable with the ones you like the most and have enough followers (if that's what you're aiming for), then fuck it and do what you want.

But yeah. I also like it better than the usual.

>> No.3675388

do I really have to learn japanese

>> No.3675399

Im assuming its because people are tasteless and dont like binary lines.

>> No.3675406

don't worry, it still looks like utter shit like the rest.

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>> No.3675476
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i agree

>> No.3675479

>that tiny deform arm
At least try yev

>> No.3675480

>Shadows not shadowy enough
Shadows should be in oposite as dark

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yes I am it is 2am thank you goodnight

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>> No.3675528
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changed pose, still taking forever, still have no idea how wrinkles work ;-;;


love the mechanical stuff

good bearh

i wanna learn to simplify like you

it looks like she was impaled but that makes me like it more cause my brain is broken

like this a lot, is neat, but balance is a bit off, drop line from center of collar bone so that it's perpendicular to floor to find center of balance of stationary figure, hers is currently just slightly behind her foot, she's gonna fall backwards on her sword ;-;

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>i wanna learn to simplify like you
I've been putting a lot of effort into it lately. One thing that kind of helps is to use physical pen and paper without any erasing. You're kind of forced to make the most out of lines that way.

>> No.3675608

Maybe work on foreshortening, perspective and feet. Just saying.

>> No.3675672
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this made me happy! :D

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>> No.3675721

Blog. I like Nazis!

>> No.3675741

How do I get 1000 followers like you yev? Where do you advertise?

>> No.3675767
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AHH cute!

im glad! and thank you

heres some crappy sketches from class since you guys seem to like her so much

>> No.3675803

nice doodles she has a smile to die for. when you feel like doodling and sketching her make a comic page instead about the things that happen in her life until you have made enough comic pages that you have a small book. then sell it on the indie comic scene.

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>> No.3676099

To many unnecessary lines going to RFP, you're gonna get confused really fast when things get more complicated

>> No.3676103

i think they were just trying to get the side paneling in perspective, anon

>> No.3676178

Those buses look so squishy, I love them.

>> No.3676281
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>AHH cute!
never 'finishing' anything at 2am ever again, oh no not me

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yeah dude what >>3676103 said. all those lines are from the rivets going along the sides and were all needed.

>> No.3676386

thanks mane
yeah dude what >>3676103 said. all those lines are from the rivets going along the sides and were all needed.

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boyf pointed out that i'd made the middle of the torso waaaay too long so i reeled it back in and it looks way better but i'm still totally at a loss for what to do with most of the clothing wrinkles, like what would the coat even do at the legs in this position?

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boyf pointed out that i'd made the middle of the torso waaaay too long so i reeled it back in and it looks way better but i'm still totally at a loss for what to do with most of the clothing wrinkles, like what would the coat even do at the legs in this position?

i do do that often but i guess i gotta get back to it more, got same suggestion from bf to work on how slow i draw hahasdf

>> No.3676572
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Follow up. I decided to embrace the short legs lol, I actually tend to make characters with long legs so why not. Thanks for the tips. I would love to hear your thoughts on this revision also.
Well the idea is she is using the sword as a counterpoint to balance herself, but I think I get what you mean, I changed the sword to come more slanting forward.

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I managed to work on this a little. I might have it finished by next week at my rate.
Also, please help.

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>> No.3677107

i want to be an anime girl

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Another week, another Majima drawing. Could someone check the length of the legs for me? I really struggle eyeballing body proportions for males compared to females but I think it might be close to correct.

Definitely improved. Her pose certainly feels more believable and proportionate. The wolf is very cute too.

>> No.3677116

Legs are perfect. He's definitely learning on something behind him, right?

>> No.3677117

Great! Yeah, I imagined him leaning back into a wall.

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Tried to fix her left hand, not sure if I did.

>> No.3677701

wtf it's super cute but maybe the neck is a little long

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bless your kind soul you're ABSOLUTELY RIGHT the neck was fucked
final post because this is getting spammy

>> No.3677766

The thumbnail on this one reads very well - I've always struggled with drawing forested scenes, so I might use this as reference in the future. Danke!

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I'll also post a thingo I finished just now

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Leaving the updated version. Wolf could use better brushstrokes, but I need to move onto more studies before that.
Thanks. I think the head on your pose is small but not sure what kind of proportion you are going for, it's just a feeling. The left leg feels a bit forced with the apparent angling of the femur, try rising the knee a bit maybe?

I don't have one set up yet, but thanks.

The head and arms feel small for that body.

>> No.3677798

Pose makes absolutely no sense

>> No.3677816

I'm always open to hear advice, what would make sense for you?

>> No.3677822

Agreed. it's not natural, dunno. Why would she pose like that while petting the wolfboi? Looks weird.

>> No.3677828

the sword should be leaning backwards or at least vertical (prolly embedded in the ground) if she's resting her leg on it because right now the leg's in tension and it reads like she's poised to kick the poor pupper
always a good idea to act out your poses if you can, to catch stuff like this early

>> No.3677852

Can i get a redline on the legs before i really get into this?

ignore bg its a messy guidework

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im retarded

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Her shoulders are fucked, right?

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left arm is whats fucking it up. fix that (my correction is iffy) and i think itll help you see the rest.

bring her up into frame more so youre not squishing her to fit her and in

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>> No.3677887
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left leg looks longer than her right, ignore the boots if you want tho

>> No.3677890

thanks dude that helps

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especially charming, keep it up

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How am I doing ic? Also guess what his name is, go ahead, guess.

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>> No.3678195

No that's actually better though

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getting back to it after sinus infection bullshit

>> No.3678216

I tried a bit more vertical sword on the original but it felt it red poorly and worked against the main idea. You have this balance feel on what she is doing, is like a game, so the sword is a symbol for mastery and trust, you know how when you trust something you put your back into it? A vertical sword would balance on the tip which could work but would be very frail but you make like a tent, so the weight is better distributed, back against back.
The pose is not supposed to be natural but fun, you know like in comics when someone carries some object with ease yet they give it to someone else and it weights a fuckton and they go down baffled? That's the same idea, she fooling around. Also this allows to try more dynamic poses for stationary situations which I love. I don't mind it's unnatural if it's fun to watch at.

I don't get the same kicking feel that you do, when you kick something intentionally you bend your knee with your femur straight or pull it back for force. She's more in an in between, that foot is on the sword, maybe i'd have to push the occlusion so it reads better on that point. And lol, I practiced the pose myself, that's how I corrected the arm holding the shaft from the initial version, I do not have a massive slab or something tall and weighty I could put myself against to check the legs, so those are guesses.
I appreciate the feedback!

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>> No.3678298

How do you make your pencil produce broad strokes like that?

>> No.3678310
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I use one of these.

>> No.3678313

>clutch master race
my nigga my dog

>> No.3678323

just be yourself

>> No.3678326

new thread

>> No.3680490

Loong loooooong maaan

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