/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

[pepipopo No.3644231]

hey guys, i got recommended to post my current paper stuff here, anything on advice is welcome, cause i wanna get better at drawing on paper.

i will also share some stuff of mine.

[pepipopo No.3644233]

This one was done on paper in a single sheet and used bicolor pencil.

[pepipopo No.3644234]

and this one was one of my best uses of Copic markers with some minor prismacolor combinations.

[pepipopo No.3644237]

this was also a commission done for some user from tumblr, but i actually run out the E00 Cotton Pearl marker on this one.

[Anonymous No.3644243]

hey anon, I would recommend you post your stuff in the draw thread or the alternative art/stylization general thread, people here usually react negatively if someone creates their own thread for their art instead of posting it in the appropriate general thread and will usually just bash you. Posting in those threads instead land you a better chance of getting some constructive feedback instead of a teardown. Try midday to afternoon tomorrow instead of middle of the night (US) as well.

[pepipopo No.3644246]

>>3644243
UGH!!!!!

[Anonymous No.3644248]

>>3644231
How did you get so good

[flatty No.3644249]

these are nice, i like em. def check proportions i feel the torsos are too short and the legs too short. shoulder blades are too detailed

[Anonymous No.3644251]

>>3644231
Don't listen to this faggot >>3644243
He just wants you to be lost within all the other plebs and not receive any feedback. You've just stumbled upon a bucket of crabs and everyone is stepping over each other and pull each other down. What this Anon is trying to do is mislead you into posting on other threads instead of dedicating one of your own thus minimizing your exposure and the odds of receiving genuine feedback drops tenfold.
>>3644248
This post is also sarcastic.

[flatty No.3644253]

>>3644249
err i meant legs too long

[Anonymous No.3644254]

>>3644246
Just trying to heads up, nice art btw.

[Anonymous No.3644256]

>>3644251
Dont be a dick

[pepipopo No.3644258]

>>3644251
ok..

>>3644254
thank you then.

i been trying many styles on paper, anime style sketch, copic illustration, and black soft shades, i have one but i cannot post it here.

[Anonymous No.3644271]

What did you do to practice? Love the aesthetics

[Anonymous No.3644278]

>>3644271
I been drawing since 2013 but I had no fucking idea of proportions, construction or perspective.

and my weakness is still the hands and how to position the arms sometimes, but everything I did before was on tablet an PaintSAI, then I moved on to Clip Studio Paint, I am posting on my phone atm so I cannot post more stuff, at least nothing that's allowed.

on paper I draw on 2-3 sheets to get the right tone, for copic sketching I first use the multiliners Sakura Pigma from 0.05 to 03, sometimes 08, used to do it on the same sheet I did the final pencil lineart, but I found that more often, the pencil pigments make the colors of the markets dirtier due to them being alcoholic.

Also if I am honest, to construct the body I used CSP 3D modeling feature as my manikin while looking at character references at the same time.

for tracing I bought a transparent checker surface and draw over heavy light sources like my lamp or my phone flashlight sometimes.

[Anonymous No.3644524]

>>3644243
Fuck those bashing people. They're ignorant of reality and worry about "good threads dying", which is completely retarded for a slow board like /ic/.

[Anonymous No.3644643]

>>3644278
>>3644231

Pretty nice, reminds me of old anime. Maybe I should try that csp 3d model thing.

[pepipopo No.3644870]

>>3644643
>>3644524
thanks fellas, i cant decided if i will do OP on black pencils or copic colors.

[Anonymous No.3644904]

Assuming these aren’t traced from some 80s anime, I think they’re pretty good with some minor proportions issues.
Also I’d lose the name.
/ic/ does not take kindly to namefags

[Anonymous No.3644907]

>>3644904
I thought the name was cute to be honest

[Anonymous No.3645092]

[Anonymous No.3645320]

>>3645092
working on another one

[flatty No.3645328]

why are you ignoring my comment peppiiii

[Anonymous No.3645332]

>>3644251
Stop being retarded, you projecting mongoloid.

Also OP, making your own thread is ok if you’re dumping your stuff, you don’t want to spam the draw thread, anyway.
It’s people making new threads for one (usually halfassed) drawing that people don’t like.

[Anonymous No.3645481]

>>3644231
>https://twitter.com/ShinPepi
your work is awful, not to mention that one drawing you can't post here is of your drawing little girl fetish, sicko

[Anonymous No.3645506]

literally worse than Yev, and that's saying something

[Anonymous No.3645520]

>>3645332
wow derailer shitposter much? ya triggered?

[Anonymous No.3645538]

>I been drawing since 2013 but I had no fucking idea of proportions, construction or perspective.
five years later,it still shows

[Anonymous No.3645547]

I kinda liked the cute retro-ness of this but then I saw that you're a lolicon. Desposit art in trash, pls.

[Anonymous No.3645612]

>>3645538
Just draw boxes goy, I swear its not hard

[Anonymous No.3646106]

>>3645547
>>3645481
Women and anti loli normals shouldn't be posting here.

[Anonymous No.3646178]

>>3644233
I really like this. I always like erotica where the girl is naked, but something is covering her naughty bits purely due to movement or coincidence.

[Anonymous No.3646441]

>>3646106
But pedophiles should, right? Freak.

[Anonymous No.3646871]

shitposters aside, i updated the atsuko fukune sketch by adding more shades, using a 0.7 mechanical pencil to emphasize the lineart more and more smoothing.

[Anonymous No.3646874]

>>3646441
>But pedophiles should, right?
Yes

[Anonymous No.3646878]

Reminder anti-loli posting is pedophiles themselves doing it as a meme.

[Anonymous No.3646994]

color i did myself.

[Anonymous No.3646998]

Your art is great, good lolis btw.
Also
>faggots pretending lolis on a thai cooking coven are a holocaust
Eat shit newfags.

[Anonymous No.3647000]

>>3646994

The jem on the far below right just looks weirdly placed. Like you're trying to hide something. Otherwise I like your style.

[Anonymous No.3647013]

>>3646871
it still looks like shit, pedophile.

[Anonymous No.3647015]

>>3647013
Pedophile is a compliment on this website.

[Anonymous No.3647031]

>>3646871
Update? Didn't you just post the same shit here >>3645092 ? God, every time I look at your drawing I can't help to see it hit with the Inspector Gadget look, amateur.

[Anonymous No.3647033]

>>3647031
what, I added more detail to the pic.

you guys came here just to slander and shitpost?

[Anonymous No.3647034]

>>3647033
I don't know what's worse, Pepsi. Your sad attempts at drawing "retro", or the fact that your fucking Japanese and you can't even draw retro to save your life. lol

[Anonymous No.3647036]

why is this fagmo phone posting to himself

[Anonymous No.3647037]

>>3647034
>using old 2014 picture

GET WITH THE TIMES!

[Anonymous No.3647039]

>>3647033
And you didn't draw in any more detail, you worthless hack. All you did was lighten the scan.

[Anonymous No.3647040]

Pedoshitter kill yourself

[Anonymous No.3647042]

>>3647037
Issu dah bettoru, Shamefurr disspray?

>>3645538

[Anonymous No.3647043]

>>3647033
Here's the blade, save yourself the stupid display and just end it already, just don't make a mess when you seppuku.

[Anonymous No.3647044]

>>3644233
This is your only half-decent drawing. Practice your anatomy by sketching real humans and blocking out body parts with basic shapes. Focus on gesture. I don’t know what’s with the pedo talk. I didn’t notice anything too questionable.

[Anonymous No.3647046]

En espanol: pedofilo de mierda

[Anonymous No.3647049]

>>3644233
August 24, 2018

>>3644231
>>3645092
>>3646871
October 17th, 2018

How did you get SHITTIER in two months?!

[Anonymous No.3647148]

I think if you focused on detail more and studied human anatomy all shit posting aside.

[Anonymous No.3647213]

pepofile, die

[Anonymous No.3647277]

>>3646441
>But pedophiles should, right?
Correct.

[Anonymous No.3647353]

>>3644251
This.

[Anonymous No.3647357]

>>3646441
Get the fuck out, tumblr.

[Tin No.3647577]

>>3647213
>>3647049
>>3647046
>>3647043
>>3647042
>>3647040
>>3647039
>>3647036
>>3647034
>>3647015
>>3647013

MOOOOOOOOOODS!

seriously, are these people who slander OP trying to do some fucked up shit or what?

[Anonymous No.3647582]

At last I truly see. Disgusting 3DPD are the real shitposters of this board.

[Anonymous No.3647587]

>hating on somebody who draws Roll butt
Truly the worst of criminals

[Anonymous No.3647707]

>>3647577
OP did this to himself. Being exposed was only a matter of time.

[flatty No.3647713]

>icee in a nutshell

I'm starting to remember why i stopped posting lol
don't get discouraged OPepipo po po, continue drawing your art is appealing.
also, like, try to get the best out of your thread by reading the valid critiques, like the one i gave you and you never replied to

bwaaaka

[Anonymous No.3647715]

>>3647713
Stop shitposting Cris, you stick out like a Sonichu.

[Anonymous No.3647719]

>>3647577
>>3647582
>>3647587
Samefagging this hard

[Anonymous No.3647721]

>>3647719
Try again retard

[Anonymous No.3647723]

>>3647721
>trying this hard to prove something on the internet
M...my...sides. lol

[Anonymous No.3647724]

>>3647721
Hand me another (You), troglodyte. lol

[Anonymous No.3647726]

>>3647721
3 idiots is the same thing as one idiot, really.

[Anonymous No.3647729]

>>3647726
>>3647724
>>3647723
Don't you have some penis to be taking or something. Surely women have better to do than shitpost here.

[Anonymous No.3647733]

>>3647049
Yeah, I was taking a look through its Twitter and I saw a decline in its work. Pats on the head aren't offered here, just class/ic/ truth, if OP doesn't like it, it can stop posting here, plain and simple.

[Anonymous No.3647734]

>>3647729
Hi Cris.

[Anonymous No.3647735]

>>3647729
What does women have to do with those posts, anon?

[Anonymous No.3647744]

>>3647735
Who do you think are the main percentage of shitposters on this board?

[Anonymous No.3647745]

>>3647744
Morons who can’t draw?

[Tin No.3647752]

>>3647707
>OP did this to himself.
>being exposed

you didnt exposed shit, you just got triggered by fucking cartoon drawings.

[Anonymous No.3647766]

>>3647713
which one was it?

[Anonymous No.3647780]

>>3647752
Fuck off Pepipopo. I knowed its you, lol.

[flatty No.3647788]

>>3647766
ctrl+f my name
le sigh

[Anonymous No.3647791]

>>3647752
Good to see you admit you draw shit cartoons, Pepsi. Retro you will never be.

[Anonymous No.3647835]

>>3647713
N-no don't leave us again lefty

[Anonymous No.3649440]

>>3647835
who the hell is lefty

[Anonymous No.3650246]

Let's have this thread hang around for a while as an example.

[Anonymous No.3650260]

>>3650246
example of what? that shitposters love to ruin people's good time by trowing around labels over cartoon drawings?

[Anonymous No.3651276]

>>3650260
No.

[Anonymous No.3652791]

Bumping for example of how NOT to draw the animus.

[flatty No.3652807]

>this thread is still around D :
>>3647835
not much point in staying since im not drawing ^^;
>>3649440
just a terrible namefag
sage

[Anonymous No.3653184]

>>3652807
Buuuump.

[Anonymous No.3653390]

>>3644231
Can you do a Nicole Watterson pinup, please?

[Anonymous No.3653422]

>>3644251
Well said, my good gentleman! *clicks champagne glass together with yours* You most certainly showed up these crabs. How they want beginners to post in beginner threads and not clog up the catalog. A toast to you, Anon, a toast!

[pepipopo No.3653990]

>>3653390
no. pay me first.

[Anonymous No.3656168]

Bumping to keep this shit alive as an example.

[Anonymous No.3658347]

Not yet...

[Anonymous No.3659341]

>>3658347
Not yet of what? explain yourself.

[Anonymous No.3660533]

The suffering continues. This thread will never die. lol

[Anonymous No.3661073]

>>3644234
Her pelvis twist doesnt work.

[Anonymous No.3662674]

There are a lot of things with this poser's work that doesn't twist the right way or, looks a certain way.

[Anonymous No.3663834]

The suffering continues, Pepsi. Let's put you right next that other pretender who thinks he can draw in the 'retro animu' style, shall we?

[Anonymous No.3663852]

>>3663834
Why is /ic/ having another one of those bouts of autism over this faggot again?

[Anonymous No.3663994]

I'm sorry for being a newfag, but why is everyone being such a douche? Couldn't you just, ignore it if you don't like it... This thread would die faster that way.

[Anonymous No.3664901]

>>3663994
Where do you think we are.png