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Porn Thread
Thread for those who enjoy drawing pornographic images

Rules and Guidelines:
-Hide images you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)
-Refrain from replying to trolls that give no valuable input.
-Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.

Dedicated thread sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#

>> No.3644113
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>> No.3644119

>>3644117
hi friend

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>>3644117

>> No.3644200

>>3644113
i saw this in a drawpile

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>> No.3644289

>>3644283
ugh this is gross.

>> No.3644299

>>3644104
>-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)

>posts shota in thread start

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>> No.3644317
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According to a lot of people, my drawings are creepy. I've been trying to tone it down.

Although my goal for now is to give people erections.

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>>3644317

>> No.3644337

>>3644289
you need to start ignoring this guy so he goes away

>> No.3644343
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>>3644332
I can't tell if it's just the thigh or a third leg that you've yet to flesh out.

>Project 41
How many Midna's you got there, anon?

>> No.3644345

>>3644317

It's creepy because it looks like something drawn by a patient in a closed psychiatric ward. But I assume this is some elaborate form of shitposting.

>> No.3644351

>>3644345
>But I assume this is some elaborate form of shitposting

To what end?

>> No.3644410

>>3644104
Nice penis inspection day drawing.

>> No.3644455

>>3644104
bra-fucking-vo, let's put a pic of a kid as the main image.
let's have the thread deleted.
you are a genius.

>> No.3644464
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3644464

Neat. For once I can post a wip I'm working on atm. Anything I don't see and should be fixed?

>> No.3644489

>>3644464
>should be fixed
the bitch in the back has really small tits
you should fix that

>> No.3644529

>>3644489
>dickbrain
>>/aco/

>> No.3644560

>>3644529
>pedophile
>>>/deathpenalty/

>> No.3644571

>>3644489
This is critique I can't really help myself with. The in game model has even smaller boobs. If you are here expecting to jerk off to huge boobs, then maybe /aco/ really is the place you want to visit instead of /ic/.

>> No.3644637

>>3644104
who made pic?

>> No.3644651

>>3644637
He keeps deleting his accounts like a coward. The last thing I remember calling him was Fisher or something.

>> No.3644710

>>3644464
great stuff as always
bit of a tangent with her tail and the dickvine though

>> No.3644730

>>3644283
holy fuck did you branch out to prolapse?

you need to teke a break from point, before you cross the pervert event horizon

>> No.3644731

>>3644489
the small tits are one of the strong points

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>>3644651
Looks like bbc
Are you just fucking with >>3644637

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>> No.3644739

>>3644736
noice

>> No.3644774

>>3644710
I see that, yes. Thanks.

>>3644732
Pic in OP isn't mine.

>> No.3644780

>>3644730
it was a request, not really something i'm into

>> No.3644782

Did anyone save that Pokemon request?

>> No.3644797

>>3644317
I remember you, I like your stuff. It sure is weird, but super interesting and unique.

>> No.3645049
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3645049

Recieved orders for three new commissions. Anything in this sketch phase that needs corrections before I clock in tonight?

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>>3644283

>> No.3645105

>>3644283
Ive been coming to this board for a while and look forward to seeing your work in literally all of these threads. Not because i like it but how tenacious you are for posting on 4chan every single day.

your a madman

>> No.3645115

>>3645105
You're* a madman; and I suppose hes better than the people who just bitch and dont draw everyday.

>> No.3645165

>>3645115
thats true compared to people who just bitch about art being bad also
>grammar corrections in the current year
kek

>> No.3645243
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>>3644464
Update. I'll wrap this up tomorrow.
I'm aware the lighting on the arm in the foreground is off, but for the rest I'd appreciate any comments.

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>>3645049
Update

>> No.3645363

>>3644317
Nah dude push it further. When I first saw your stuff I actually was looking you up to see if there was more. Your style is unique, keep it and refine it. It's one of your best points.

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>>3644302
iterated a bit

>> No.3645458

>>3645456
There's a lot wrong / completely unappealing about this, but at least count the number of toes or get rid of the ambiguity there.

>> No.3645461

>>3645458
you're talking about the right foot aren't you? thanks I missed that.

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>>3644104
1/2
anyone find my style good enough to earn a buck on patreon?

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>>3645526
2/2

>> No.3645533

>>3645479
Draw the hands, it'll be good for you

>> No.3645540

>>3645526
>>3645528
a buck is about all that you'll earn but people will give shadman buttloads of money.I know this is a trick question but how's your social media presence?

>> No.3645550

>>3645540
basically nonexistent social presence. But I'm fine with drawing popular stuff and using social platforms under a pseudonym. Which ones are best for this sort of thing?

>> No.3645553

>>3645550
Just wanted to know. You probably won't get much money out of patreon and will only contribute to the demographic of people who earn under 10$ a month.

>> No.3645557
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Do these boobs look weird?

>> No.3645561

>>3645553
this is a side job I'm considering. I have a regular job as well, so I'm not falling into such demographic. Are nsfw sites who employ artists any better?

>> No.3645575

>>3645557
yes they're awful and why are you drawing home stuck in 2018

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>>3645243
it's very nice, are you famous or something?

>> No.3645625

I'm trying to find some good tier or above art depicting cunnilingus but it's pretty much nowhere else to find than on lesbos Tumblr craps.

Why is it that you find more dick girls than pussies being eaten ffs.

>> No.3645789
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>>3644317
It's not particularly creepy - I'd use word striking and gross.
Gross as not conventionally attractive or appealing to majority of people who are used to general futa art and it's distinctive features.

I find you work very nice, it has unique personality and falvor, and i believe that you actually can continue to do what you do without compromises with the only thing to work upon is execution.

More defined and clean linework, more features everywhere else not only on face and genitalia, more accurate render if you work with folds and skin and that's about it.

>> No.3645797

>>3644637
It looks like lambrey/fisher but it’s not on his tumblr

>> No.3645918

>>3645243
blog?

>> No.3645926
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yo not sure if it's the correct thread, but can anybody redline me how the muscles masses should be placed, with constructions? i know i'm asking a lot but i can't seem to get some stuff right even if i look through anatomy refs. i've been trying to draw knees for a long time but i still don't understand how it fucking looks like

>> No.3645946

>>3645926
You wouldnt see that much of the side plane of the thigh and certainly not the muscle you have indicated on the inner left thigh. Sit in that position and you will see that from this angle you'd mostly see the top plane of the thigh. Right now we are seeing the thigh from the side and the knee from the top.

>> No.3646012
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I just keep redrawing this, trying to come up with a decent pose... I might just scrap this one

>> No.3646017

>>3645557
Everything about this looks weird.

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>> No.3646035
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>>3645926
I'm still really new but I hope I can help a bit anon.

>> No.3646088

>>3646012
Blog? Really nice stuff there friend. Though the left eye looks weird. It looks more like something got in her eye. It doesn't read as a seductive wink to me. Also her midsection looks off to me as well. She clearly has pudge but it doesn't hang off the right places and her groin doesn't line up well. I think her right leg needs be redone because it is not in the proper perspective, you wouldn't see as much of her lower leg, it would be obstructed by her thigh but you have it opposite.

>> No.3646100

>>3646024
she is tilted strangely

>> No.3646102

>>3645456
monkey paw

>> No.3646122

>>3645557
I'm just going to list off things that strike me the most.

Breasts are incredibly saggy and don't properly hang off the ribcage. Her right breast would wrap around the ribcage, you have it entirely as a side plain. When constructing draw the breasts as a single mass, it will look like an upside-down heart that wraps around the ribcage. Deltoids wrap into the upper arm, they are not a mass on the side of the arm, it is a more subtle transition. Vagina doesn't line up with her naval. Draw a line through it all the way up and you will see what i mean. Legs actually look pretty good and great use of reference on her left foot. Though it seems you don't understand the anatomy of how legs connect to the hips, you are symbol drawing the contour lines everywhere but its especially noticeable there. Also she has stupid Sonic eyes, they look like they are connecting. Big cartoony eyes are okay, but they look awful here. Her forearms are drastically different lengths especially because the right arm is foreshortened. Also her right arm is jutting out in front of her, the perspective is wrong.

Stop using hard edges to denote changes in contour, practice more with a soft brush.

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Quick rough.

>> No.3646243

>>3646128
Stiff, loosen up the left leg. That is literally the position of someone sitting on a chair. Perhaps cock the hips a bit to one side.

>> No.3646250

>>3646128
why do you always copy kyle's subjects shortly after, beyond just fad characters, its pretty weird
fuckin skinwalkers

>> No.3646315

>>3646088
Yeah I kind of agree with you on all that. She's not supposed to be winking though, the character normally just has closed eyes.

I Shall start again

>> No.3646370

>>3646088
I see, what character is it?

>> No.3646377

>>3644104
Op makes me feel anger

>> No.3646425

>>3644104
Sauce? I'm currently sick in bed and this is the comfiest porn I've ever laid eyes on.

>> No.3646433

>>3644299
That's a twink, not a shota.

>> No.3646435

>>3644317
>>3644343
Unironically great, but I wouldn't fap to it.

>> No.3646472
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>>3645363
>Nah dude push it further

I'm glad you like it. Refining and anatomical understanding is what I strive for.

>I actually was looking you up to see if there was more

https://bolt-s.tumblr.com/
I recently made it, i've just been doing requests on /d/ for the past month. But I'm sure that i'll end up posting my more disgusting drawings at some point.

>>3645789
I do see the improvements. The genitalia definitely has a more inviting appeal to it now. At least to me. The pronunciation from the thicker lines is also easier on the eyes. I appreciate you taking the time to do this.

>>3646435
>Unironically great, but I wouldn't fap to it

:( Thank you though

>> No.3646478

>>3645557
everything from the face to the shoulders to the breasts to the hips to the knees to the feet is awful

>> No.3646485

>>3646433

Who just so happens to look like a 10 year old boy except the porn sized dick.

>> No.3646552
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>>3646472
Please dont change your art style reminds me of fristdynamo
Its creepy and unsettling which is what i like.
Though, its not fap material for me but i'm sure someone will see it as that.
I might even draw you some fanart. Keep it up

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>>3646552
>fristdynamo

I feel like i'm looking at a serial killer's deviantart.

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>>3646600
lol
thats the point

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>>3645243
Finished.

>> No.3647667

>>3647523
Very nice, i may be autistic and i definitely don't have the skill required to give any decent critique in comparison to you, but the lamp is bothering me, its on its own and it doesn't really lead me back into the picture but because its so bright it leads me to it

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>>3645926

>> No.3647680

>>3647523
>>3647667
Now that you mention it. I am confused as to where the lighting is coming from.
The shading is possibly compromised anon...

>> No.3647686
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>>3647680
Theres potentially more houses and lamps to the other side, and the pumpkins are giving off a glow for sure, I just felt that the lamp should either be removed, repeated or its shape changed(sort of like image related, less detail just a pointy shape down) to lead back into the picture better, the pointy hat and the au'ra leg sort of lead towards that light, without it the roof slant would lead back in better, i dont think the one vine?washingline? next to the lamp on the left leads back in enough from the bright light.

Honestly, I'm probably wrong and I'm just nitpicking

>> No.3647688

>>3647523
I agree with everyone with the lamp, you need to push it into the background a bit, right now it grabs too much attention

>> No.3647696

why are uk and commonwealth so prude?

>> No.3647710

>>3647696
getting off feels way better when you feel bad about doing it

>> No.3647717
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Thoughts on the anti-grav/VSTOL jet bike design, as well as the overall piece?

>> No.3647741

>>3647667
>>3647680
>>3647686
>>3647688
Good point. I'll try to fix it.
Thanks for bringing this up.

>> No.3647743
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>>3647717
While not necessarily critique on the piece I'd say if you were concerned about the bike to perhaps, silhouette or thumbnail a bunch of bike designs out first, pick one you like and explore that to make sure you had it the way you wanted and built correctly before bringing in the girl on top and inking her out to a degree first.

The handlebars seem quite close to the dip in her body which is where I'm assuming the seat is and in that case the bike would be a very upright sitting position and be rather uncomfortable, even a cruiser or touring style motorbike has higher handle bars, plus there is no where for a drivers feet to rest from what I can tell which is important in both riding styles. if its a more sports bike style the seat would need to be further back to accommodate the body length.

something about the perspective feels off but i'm not qualified to point that out so I'm gonna stick to just the overall design and let someone else handle that

>> No.3647792

>>3644317
Unironically closer to high art then porn

>> No.3647795

I have a question on commissions, if a client sends money from an unverified account, is there a risk from that?

>> No.3647894
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3647894

can I get a redline?

>> No.3647901

>>3647894
give me a bit, ill whip something up. make your images smaller next time for everyone sake thanks

>> No.3647924

>>3645797
URL?

>> No.3647927

>>3647894
pls dont lewd the elf

>> No.3647984

>>3647894
Your style reminds me of the show American Dad.

>> No.3647985

>>3647984
I wouldn't call it a style.

>> No.3647997

>>3647894
Ohh god i tryed to redline but i realized the entire thing needed to be redone.
The blond girls torso is a nighmare for example. The legs are impossible to pose that way. Pls study loomis unironically.
No h8 m8. Its a cute attempt. I would give you a passing grade for the effort.

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>>3647894
one can only do so much like >>3647997 said.
now its your turn to hit the books and get to studying.

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>>3648022
>>3647894
iterated a bit but yeah, stop being lazy.

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>>3646425
>>3647924
lambrey.tumblr.com

>> No.3648161

>>3646024
Do you have a blog or any other work? I love the look!

>> No.3648170

>>3646012
Seconding blog request

>> No.3648930
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3648930

Suggestions to tighten the line-work commission's composition up?

>> No.3649004

>>3648930
Part of me wants to say this is really nice things like the hair and face. But i cant help but notice how out of perspective the lower torso becomes, especially around the feet. Youre too late in the piece really to fix it so id say be careful with foreshortening in your next work.

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>> No.3649221

>>3646472
Her testicles look like a gloppy, gluey shit falling out of her ass.

>> No.3649444

>>3646472
I wouldn't tell you to change your style, but if I can make a crit to your work in general
I'd try to use less lines, if that makes sense. Let me explain
Looking at that picture I see a whole lot lines being used for the texture of the penis and the hair that are unnecessary, that plus the fact you use a rough pen gives a very gritty and dirty look to things and I think that contributes to making your work seem a bit uh, "gross", as some anons would say
I'd say, try to use a clean pen without texture, and just draw your usual stuff, maybe try to use softer brushes to shade things instead of lines. I think that would solve a lot of what some people find creepy in your work which i think is otherwise pretty interesting and not that bad at all from a technical point of view either. I mean it would still be creepy and pretty unique, just easier on the eyes is all.

>> No.3649578
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3649578

Just a WIP. I want to know if I have improved since I last visited.

>> No.3649581

I've been drawing as a hobby for a while, but now I'm thinking of trying hard and drawing for real. I'm trying to figure out a way to be able to associate my dedication to drawing real with drawing porn, to try to have some quick financial return. Is it worth it?

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>>3644104
>gonna start a non-porn comic pretty soon
>want to make porn comic to practice making comics
>lose motivation as soon as i fap
>cant think of anything else to make a practice comic of other than porn since the subject matter would make use of a lot of dynamic poses and camera angles
What do?

>> No.3649650

>>3649581
the most important thing is having a network, your skill doesnt matter, look at some of the most popular artists, a large portion never climbed above /beg/ level

>> No.3649656

>>3649641
Draw doujins, non-hentai ones.

>> No.3650247

>>3648930
I have no idea whats going on. Is she sitting on something or pulling herself up? What the fuck is her left leg doing, is it in the air or resting on something? Why is that dumbbell rack nearly the same height as whatever she's doing a pull-up on?

>> No.3650747

Any good discord servers for people that do commissions and are serious about improving?

>> No.3650775

>>3649641
not fap

>> No.3650795

>>3649641
>brainlet's cannot into art, the post
grats

>> No.3650835

>>3645344
Blog?

>> No.3650925
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3650925

>>3645557
honestly look up some refs dude, your proportions and lack of understanding anatomy are killing you

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>>3645557
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH

>> No.3650950

>>3650795
I'm willing to draw, I just don't have the motivation to draw porn specifically.

>> No.3650952

>>3649578
I remember you. Its better sure..

>> No.3650960

>>3650952

Thanks. I am very sure I still need more practice. Especially if I want to make a comic of this.

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>> No.3650972

>>3650967
brother anon, how did you blend those shadows?

>> No.3650979

>>3650972
I forgot witch tool it was, but its just one of
mspaint's more painterly brushes.

>> No.3650992

>>3650967
if you are going to use that blue/ purplish shading do it everywhere or not at all, the way it is right now makes them look dirty

>> No.3650995

>>3650992
maybe they are dirty ;)

>> No.3650997

trips

>> No.3651008

>>3646035
>salami legs

>> No.3651042

>>3650997
off by 2
>trying to get dubs on slow boards
>failing

>> No.3651104

>>3650967
Maybe use proper perspective and proper foreshortening. Just an idea.

>> No.3651116

>>3650995
Maybe you should learn how to take a critique, faggot

>> No.3651137

>>3651104
Genuine question, what's wrong with his foreshortening? His figures are fucked in some places (I'm looking at the red-head's shoulder/collar area in particular) but the foreshortening seems okay, all things considered.

>> No.3651157

>>3650967
Hey bro your stuff usually looks good but can you practice drawing feet a bit?

>> No.3651158

>>3651157
people who constantly bring up feet are the worst

>> No.3651159

>>3651158
The feet look off in every one of his pictures, faggot.

>> No.3651167

>>3651158
if its the main focus of the perspective (the left girl) then you should focus on it looking good
also, if people constantly bring up feet on an art crit board. It's probably because you aren't very good at them and they want to help you improve them

>> No.3651176
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3651176

New to porn. These both look terrible. I'm going to keep trying, but I'd like some impressions on whether to lean realistic (left) or simplistic (right)

>> No.3651182

>>3651176
both looks like a medical anatomy illustration, instead of erotica

>> No.3651185

>>3651008
what do you mean by this?

>> No.3651193

>>3651176
simplistic doesn't look right at all, you would be hard pressed to find a vagina that actually looks like that
on the other hand, left doesn't look quite right either but it looks more like a actual vagina (albiet, a roastie, but a vagina nonetheless)

>> No.3651209

I've always assumed most artists are gay or bi (going by popular artists on instagram and Tumblr)

But coming into this thread all I see is straight porn. Bizzare.

And for a porn thread I expect to see a mix or gay and straight. Can't believe how lopsided this is.

>> No.3651228
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3651228

>>3651209

>> No.3651242

>>3651209
>I've always assumed most artists are gay or bi
>(going by popular artists on instagram and Tumblr)
pretty much answered your own question, when you follow gay artists on that site, you usually are only recommended gay artists on there and tumblr/insta seems to not have many straight men in comparison to gays or women
(it doesnt help that if you read what alot of people say here on how people portray themselves on social media, alot of porn artists LARP as lesbian women when they are straight men or traps to boost popularity and/or they get a kick out of it)
i personally know two male artists who pretend to be lesbian and one female artist who pretends to be a "trap"

>> No.3651245
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3651245

Playing around with the expression. Thoughts on the progress so far? I have a free day tomorrow with this piece scheduled between 12:30-2:30 PM. I want to hit the ground running.

>> No.3651251

>>3651209
bi people draw the best "straight" porn because they make both their boys and girls and whatever elses attractive

>>3651242
urine idiot

>> No.3651252

>>3651245
the expression matches the onesie greatly

>> No.3651259

>>3651182
>>3651193
I'm gonna switch from /r/gonewild references to hentai references and see if that gets me anywhere. Thanks

>> No.3651286

>>3651251
>urine idiot
i don't get what you mean by this autistic term

>> No.3651294

>>3651286
dipshit

>> No.3651310

>>3651245
Wow, you didn't learn anything. You regressed right back to pillow shading.

>> No.3651424

>>3651310
Not that guy, what is pillow shading?

>> No.3651425
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3651425

>>3651209
I've been wondering if I am slightly gay since I am a grill and only really like drawing sexy girls. When applied to myself, I find females and relationships with them repulsive. However my standards for irl male beauty are pretty low (compared to other women)
Maybe drawing all this porn if fucking up my brain

>> No.3651426

>>3650925
Redline is just as shitty, namefag. What's your excuse.

>> No.3651429

>>3649641
Draw lewd/ecchi and just get a chub without the payoff.

>> No.3651434

>>3645105
>>3645165
>>3645115
>When you talk to yourself
Yikes.

>> No.3651435

>>3651425
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/egoraptor/guardbreak-girl-2

>> No.3651450

>>3651434
This one >>3645115 was actually me and I forgot that I corrected that guy.

>> No.3651452

>>3644780
Stop taking requests. If you need a prompt to draw I suggest drawpile. Its shitty brushes will ensure that you have no crutches in your artistic development.

>> No.3651468
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3651468

I feel like my brushes are holding me back. What are your mix brush settings?

>> No.3651478
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3651478

>>3651209
For example i'm straight but I draw almost exclusively stuff with male/futa characters using theirs /d/-large shlongs. It's just way too boring to draw anything else. (And i don't post here a lot because i'm not often do commissions). Bottom line is this thread cannot be properly used as indicator of prefferences because of small ammout of artists to generalize upon.

Maybe there's also working factor of separation of prefferences? Like drawn porn can invoke different feelings than the same thing irl and drawn stuff can depict appeal of some fetish more strongly and accurately. I guess everebody do this thing for their own reason. I don't know. But I do know that traps are nod gay.

>> No.3651499
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3651499

>>3651468
>I feel like my brushes are holding me back

>> No.3651551

>>3651499
Hey dumbass, start experimenting with your brushes and see how it affects the art you produce, you'll be surprised.

>> No.3651559

>>3651478
>im straight.
yea right buddy. if thats what helps you look your parents in their eyes.

>> No.3651561

>>3651559

OH, THE pWNAGE.

Guess that's why they call this forum random XD

>> No.3651571

>>3651561
first of all, can u not say pwnage. Havent heard that word since 2010 grandpa.

Secondly no, im just stating the obvious. Too many people think they're straight because they have to. Might as well get out of the closet.

>> No.3651575

>>3651468
if you want smooth transitions use a soft round brush also it's your anatomy holding you back

>> No.3651582

>>3651559
>>3651571
Hey! No bully zone.

Whatever. Nobody believes me anyway after seeing what I do.
>Too many people think they're straight because they have to.
And too many people playing psychiatrists on the internet.

>> No.3651624

>>3651559
>>3651571
Why would anybody go out of their way to lie about their sexual orientation here?
You should really tone down your random spurts of hate anon.

>> No.3651656

>>3651478
Do you have a blog or anything? I'd like to see more of your work.

>> No.3651673

>>3651656
Sure
v-sarg.tumblr.com
But i save mostly drawhoring and requests and nothing much else.

>> No.3651675

>>3650835
Tumblr: hardstonesmcflintcock.tumblr.com
Twitter: twitter.com/mrmcflintcock

>> No.3651695
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3651695

i know this is a rough WIP but i wanted to get some advice on this before working out the details so i don't polish a chunk of garbage.
i think the things that probably need fixing the most right now are breasts, ankles, and the dick/balls
also yes she's supposed to be sitting but i was gonna add some background later.

>>3651673
not that guy but i was also gonna ask for blog right before you posted it. you have some nice stuff on there, even if most of it isn't my cup of tea
the most obvious thing is your faces could use some work (as do mine, for that matter)
you have some nice stuff,

>> No.3651709

>>3651695
I think you need to improve your posing most of all. You are definitely a good draftsman already, but you aren't thinking about aesthetics and pose composition enough. Here you could move the camera a bit lower, to emphasize the towering penis and make the whole thing more dynamic, plus this kind of frontal foreshortening of limbs can make your poses even stiffer.
What I mean to say is to try planning your composition and posing a bit more before you jump into the drawing.
Keep it up man. You do good stuff.

>> No.3651720

>>3651709
you're totally right. it's just i am not used to planning at all. i just doodle stuff outta nowhere without even a sketch, let alone construction or composition. i'm trying to make an effort to change that.
this figure was also drawn starting from just that block for the torso then drawing randomly from there. i kinda want to redo it, maybe use ref this time for some pose like the one you mentioned from below.
>Keep it up man. You do good stuff.
uuuh sorry but i have a feeling you think me someone i'm not
this is the first time i posted work on this board since months ago, let alone porn art.

>> No.3651724

>>3651720
>this is the first time i posted work on this board since months ago, let alone porn art.
Ooooh, I'm sorry then. I confused you with >>3646472
Then again, I still think what you've shown here is really nice.

>> No.3651734
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3651734

>>3651695
Eh.
People saying that quality of my stuff fluctuates and I know that i have severe problems with gesture and faces. I'm just super lazy and i want to finish the thing as fast as possible and move on to something different. That's also the reason why I don't want to color anything.

Is there any known lifehack for that?

>> No.3651744

>>3651734
Literally "JUST DRAW".
I was the same as you. I only enjoyed sketches and lineart and wanted to be over with everything in under an hour or two. Then I got into commissions and suddenly I started enjoying coloring. Nowadays I feel my sketches feel incomplete without colors/shading.

If you are bad at something, you won't enjoy the process. The more you learn and the more you get better, the more you'll enjoy it.

>> No.3651756
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3651756

>>3651744
* exhale *
So there was no lifehacks. I guess i'll have to learn to like the process and slow the fuck down.

>> No.3651775
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3651775

>>3651245
First update for the day.

>> No.3651779

>>3651775
All your paintings have way too much contrast in the flesh tones. It’s probably the biggest mistake painters make. You really should think about choosing a dominant value key of a limited numbers of steps and sticking with it. I think you’ll really see an improvement.

>> No.3651792

>>3646012
please don't scrap this. she looks soft and i love the way her hair and face looks!

>> No.3651793

>>3651425
why are you posting arin's art tho

>> No.3651799

>>3646012
ANON
PLEASE POST BLOG DONT LEAVE ME LIKE THIS

>> No.3651821

>>3646012
I would also like to know your blog.

With this many (you)'s you already almost made it anon

>> No.3651977

>>3646012
Blog? :^)

>> No.3652000
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3652000

Edited to show off more of her ass. Will be an upskirt shot.

Advice for when I rework the pose again?

>> No.3652003

>>3644104
that theres a big ol' peppin

>> No.3652005

>>3644560
>pedohurt
>>>/facebook/

>> No.3652011
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3652011

>>3650967
Looks off to me. Also obviously do your own thing, but I wish you'd make an actual piece and mot just floating women.

>> No.3652145
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3652145

Anything in need to be fixed or adjusted?

>> No.3652198
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3652198

Should I polish this turd or work on something else?

>> No.3652215

>>3652145
In the bottom panel, on the non-suckled tit, the boob is floating. The nipple should be pointed towards the floor. In general, I hate your coloring, not just on this piece but in general. The lights are too light in contrast with your darks. It makes it pretty hard to look at for me.

>> No.3652228
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3652228

Come join United Arts for the latest and greatest
https://discord.gg/U6sD4Rb

>> No.3652267

>>3652198
think for yourself anon, don't be a NPC

>> No.3652274

>>3652198
cute!

>> No.3652279
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3652279

>>3652198
>>3652274
>redmatsumoto samefagging again

>> No.3652281

>>3652198
Shine that shit up.

>> No.3652286
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3652286

https://www.slfb2.com/
underwears

>> No.3652291
File: 516 KB, 1148x685, Amethyst FTW (NSFW) WIP 3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3652291

New here. Posting something I've been working on for a bit.

>> No.3652294

>>3652279
I don't know who that is

>> No.3652310
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3652310

>>3644104
Help with vagine and forehortening

>> No.3652312

>>3652291
>trying to keep size consistency with a steven universe character

>> No.3652315

>>3651775
Face needs better construction. It looks like her mouth is diminishing on a different plane.

>> No.3652320

>>3652310
you need help with more then that anon,...
study some fundies pls.
come back in 3 months,

>> No.3652321

>>3652291
she has a broken spine

>> No.3652406 [DELETED] 
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3652406

>> No.3652427

>>3645526
those legs look incredibly broken

>> No.3652433

>>3651425
Transgirls aren't girls, anon.

>> No.3652462
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3652462

>> No.3652597

>>3652145
Out of curiosity how much do you draw every day? You seem to put out a lot of pics very fast

>> No.3652682

>>3652145
Weren't you already done with this like THREE months ago?! Why are you going back and polishing old turds, Jameson?

>> No.3652685

>>3652291
God damn, that's awful. Go get a job and stop wasting your time, junior.

>> No.3652688

>>3652310
Good to see paraplegics getting some /beg/ lol

>> No.3652695

>>3651478
>"Look dad, I drew something today!"
>Dad sees drawing
>Local man commits suicide, leave note behind wishing he had a better son

>> No.3652696

>>3652406
FUCK yes lol, winrar! Best fucking drawing in the entire thread, hands down. lol

>> No.3652702
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3652702

>>3652682
>>3652685
>>3652688
>>3652695
>>3652696
Same guy, by the way before anyone starts losing their shit over all the (You)s. Please cry your snowflake tears to this anchor post.

>> No.3652974
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3652974

It's not shaded, just something I wanted to draw

>> No.3653028

>>3652974
Great stuff.

>> No.3653186

>>3652974
Gross.

>> No.3653200
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3653200

>> No.3653210
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3653210

Making progress. Just need to include the chain links of the top and draw the rest of the venus flytraps. After some corrections, comes the flats.

>> No.3653211
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3653211

Then there's this.

>> No.3653249

>>3653200
>>3653210
>>3653211
Out of curiosity, how much do you personally charge for commissions? I'm getting the impression that people are not at all willing to pay a fair wage for this stuff unless you're extremely popular.

>> No.3653270

>>3653249
I mean really this question is for anybody who's working but not yet particularly popular in the porn world.

>> No.3653298
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3653298

>>3653249
Base? $20 for a sketch, $35 for a linework, $43 for flats, $47 for neutral grays (two tones), $70 for cellshaded, $90 for your choice of comic style shading or a grayscale render, and $140 for a render.

Why?

BTW, will spend my Personal Time to linework this tomorrow and Friday.

>> No.3653337
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3653337

>>3644104
Can someone redline this?

>> No.3653423
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3653423

>>3653337

>> No.3653425
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3653425

>>3653337
I just realized the torso length thing

>> No.3653437
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3653437

How do I fix this? is it possible to fix this?

>> No.3653526
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3653526

>>3644104
before i do further cleaning .

>> No.3653681

>>3653298
Why'd I ask or why do I think people aren't willing to pay a fair wage?

I'm just starting to put my stuff out there again is all, gauging how much other artists are charging.

>> No.3653724

>>3653681
The amount people are willing to pay depends solely on them.
How much you can charge for your work depends on how much demand your art has.
If you charge a certain price and you get flooded by requests, then you have to raise your prices.
Once you hit a point where your demand can be handled normally, you can set your prices.

tl;dr the more people know about you and the more famous you are, the more chances are people that are willing to pay a lot, will hire you.

You can't set your prices based on other people's experience. You can only do your own thing.

>> No.3653756

>>3653437
burn it

>> No.3654001

>>3653298
There are better artists than you charging less for better work. Your prices are outrageous.

>> No.3654005

>>3653423
that fucking redline...lol. rookie.

>> No.3654012

>>3653437

Stop spamming the board and give up.

>> No.3654119
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3654119

I'm just trying to get to the point where people think "did a japanese guy draw this?"

>> No.3654162

>>3646315
post blog you dick wtf

>> No.3654373

>>3653724
This.

>>3654001
Related to above, the prices were raised due to a large influx of commissions that started pouring. I offer discounts on my Patreon as rewards, both monthly and towards community goals.

Half of all my commissions are renders, and my commissioners write to me all the time to tell how very grateful they are for my customer service.

>> No.3654383

>>3654373
post proof of what you're saying or you're just lying

>> No.3654389
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3654389

Am I doing this right? I know the spine is broken and I made the legs too open, I don't know how to fix those things.

>> No.3654393

>>3654119

Looks like Shad drew it so you're going thin the opposite direction.

>> No.3654399
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3654399

i should have let this sit for one more day before finishing it but i am impatient

>> No.3654512
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3654512

>>3654389
I think heavilly skewed one point perspective here doesn't work and you don't seem to know what you want to see.

>> No.3654584
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3654584

>> No.3654623

>>3652974
you didn't draw this

>> No.3654649

>>3652974
I feel like I've seen your work somewhere

>>3654623
Is that an artist you know? What's their blog?
Idc if that anon is lying I just wanna see the rest of their work

>> No.3654652

>>3644104
What is a good place to post my BDSM artwork? Deviant art censors stuff too much.

>> No.3654658
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3654658

I'm sorry if I'm spamming my art but I want to know if I did okay on this

>> No.3654661

>>3654383
Can you be any more salty than that? You sound like a freaking 5 year old whining baby.

>> No.3654865

>>3653437
That pose is anatomically impossible and the perspective makes no sense, go back to the basics until you learn them.

>> No.3654943

>>3654623
...Yes I did

>> No.3654986

>>3653437
Make the lines colored, make the shading more saturated and cooler. Take the background color, put it on a separate layer and use it as reflective lighting and put the opacity of that layer to 15%-20%. But don't put it around her entire body. Only where you think bouncing light would come from the strongest.

>> No.3655080
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3655080

>>3654986
>polishing a turd

big mistake pal

>> No.3655083

>>3654661
you mean a democrat? lol

>> No.3655231

>>3654584
stiff

>> No.3655506
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3655506

>>3654389

>>3654512
I didn't know what kind of perspective to use and had no idea where I shoulda put my vanishing point. I wanted to make a sort of "door girl" for a 31 day rpg challenge that I'm currently failing. Here's what I got before I tried to fix the perspective on one of 'em.

thx for the redraw btw.

>> No.3655854
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3655854

suggestions on how I can make lighting more dramatic?

>> No.3655857

>>3655854
Decide where it's coming from.

>> No.3655900
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3655900

>> No.3656129
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3656129

its kemono not furry pls dont ban

>> No.3656133

>>3656129
Kemono is furry you blind weeaboo

>> No.3656151
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3656151

>>3655900

>> No.3656162

>>3656129
CUTE

>> No.3656170

>>3656129
that's not kemono, that's plain furry.

>>3656133
dumbass spotted.

>> No.3656312

Nice to see the shit amateurs mixed in with the chomos and furries now. The Porn Thread is dead now.

>> No.3656314

>>3656312
and you contribute to these threads how?

>> No.3656315

>>3647523
Stealing this idea, drawfag. Thanks.

>> No.3656322

>>3656129
Based and kemonopilled. Nice work as always

>>3656312
>furry art isn't art because i don't like it
The absolute state of crabs

>> No.3656373

>>3656315
Enjoy.

>> No.3656467

>>3656129
Hyper ruins it, stay regular big and slightly veiny. Good work.

>> No.3656490

>>3644332
I thought she was a paraplegic, that’s funny hot nuts.

>> No.3656499

>>3656129
Nice. What are your studies?

>> No.3656560

>>3646472
>>3644317
>>3644343

Very Aubrey Beardsley

>> No.3656570

>>3656499
im really inspired by koki, dentyou and ovopack, but I havent got around to doing any formal studies of their work

>>3656467
yeah, i might tone it down in future iterations. There's a line between really big and hyper and i dont really like hyper stuff myself. I think what brings things on that line back into the realm of realism is taking a realistic approach to the anatomy, physics and functionality of it, as well as the characters interaction with it.

>> No.3656650

>>3656570
>but I havent got around to doing any formal studies of their work

Oh interesting. So do you simply copy someone like Ovopack and apply it to your work?

>> No.3656691 [DELETED] 
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3656691

Redline? Comments? I hate coloring and lineart so much, it still looks very messy and personality-less.

>> No.3656695
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Am I ready to develop my personal style yet or do I need another few months of grinding fundies?

>> No.3656706

>>3656695
It's just too obvious this was copied from a 3D model.
You have to learn how not to over-reference your art... Or learn to actually draw without copying.

>> No.3656726

>>3656691
I think this version with the slight purple shade is better, at least more interesting (although the purple is too tinted, reads like a light). It looks like you have a pretty good idea of line weight. I'd suggest taking advantage of that and using more light lines on the body to better define the form if you're going relatively simple with your coloring. Especially her hands, they're very lifeless due to the lack of detail.

>> No.3656728

>>3656650
no I draw from imagination, although my poses are pretty generic

>> No.3656734
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>>3656706
This is my reference, so I'm not sure what you mean. The hands, the chest size and position, the shoulders, the head; they're all changed from imagination.

>> No.3656735

>>3656728
Thanks the responses. You actually provided a lot of inspiration for me.

>> No.3656737

>>3656726
Sorry I deleted that post because I didn't realize how strong that purple/blue light was until I saw 4chan thumbnail. Thanks for the advice about the lines in the hands, I wasn't certain why they looked flat and boring. I don't want my coloring to be this simple in the future but subtle lines will benefit me.

>> No.3656746

>>3656737
No problem. You're on the right track.

>> No.3656817

>>3656129
his underwear are wikihow colored

>> No.3656836

>>3656570
A little big and a bit of vein is great, I've just around from years of faps that it needs to be more implied than expressed. He looks like 4'6" so it comes off too huge at his knee. You want it big enough to be fucked by for the 3 faggots into that but regular big for the rest to go either way.

The rest has potential and I'd follow you on twatter.

>> No.3656840

>>3656734
Then you absolutely need to add some better variety to your lineart and shading. It totally looks like it was copied from a 3D model.

>> No.3656857

>>3656734
Your lines are weak and it does not tell the viewer a sense of volume.

>> No.3656862

>>3656840
>>3656857
I agree. I've been trying to work on that.

>> No.3656922
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3656922

well i learned not to try and make a study sexy, or start on solid color background. ok yeah, my values are fucked. oof

>> No.3656924

>>3656922
try to keep the bend in mind. alot of the pose got fucked up thanks to the spine issue.

>> No.3656955
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3656955

lol just end me

>> No.3656958

>>3656955
Why? It's looking good!

>> No.3656971
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>>3656129
cute! blog?

>>3656955
only if you end me first

>> No.3656972

>>3656955
hi kyle. can i be ur fren

>> No.3656973

>>3656971
i wanna know where you hide all your art

>> No.3657001

>>3656973
in hell where i belong, where do you hide yours?

>> No.3657019

>>3657001
on the internet duh

>> No.3657026

>>3657019
nah, see, that's a bad hiding spot, people might find it there. i got a blank twitter account if that'll make you happy tho.

>> No.3657034

>>3657026
I don't really hide my art. but hey if you were to post ur stuff id follow.

>> No.3657073

>>3657034
https://twitter.com/nellipher
no promises

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>>3656955
Hopefully this helps. She's too many heads tall and the face should be completely redone. Thighs are too short too. If there's anything I missed, sorry.
I drew this at 1000px tall. I'll upload it right after this one, since this one will be an easier comparison to the original.

>> No.3657082
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>>3657081
1000px tall for more detail.

>> No.3657083

>>3657081
>>3656955
I think she looked better with a taller frame. More mature/powerful.

>> No.3657090

>>3657083
It was a matter of the silly looking neck to head ratio that concerned me. But whatever floats your boat, I guess!

>> No.3657091

>>3657081
good job anon

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>>3656972
hi

>> No.3657109

>>3657106
>showing her hand
absolutely disgusting

>> No.3657152

>>3645533
>>3645479

draw the brain too

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>>3657106
This is so cute but her pumpkin basket it going to fall off her lap.

>> No.3657181

>>3657081
You made the head too big. Kyle drew a mature woman. You drew child-like proportions.

>> No.3657182

>>3657109
>>3657154
That's an old artwork of Kyle. This is somebody trying to RP as Kyle.

>> No.3657201

>>3657182
It is old but I redrew it as Koume. I am kyle. The person who drew the witch is someone else (I like it btw)

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3657365

>>3657081
made the head too big

>> No.3657492

>>3656570
>yeah, i might tone it down in future iterations.
pls no

>> No.3657519 [DELETED] 

>>365720
>I like it btw
Thanks Kyle

>> No.3657570

>>3657365
>6 heads tall
>head too big

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>>3657106
Plz don't lose all the energy from the sketch. PLZ DON'T LOSE ALL THE ENERGY FROM THE SKETCH!
The last time you drew Koume the sketch you posted had such a great expression and so much more life to it, please don't fuck this one up. Also, that ellipse looks wonky.

>> No.3657804

>>3657570
Are you blind or just retarded?

>> No.3658242

>>3646035
How is this position even physically possible?

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3658357

>>3656971
>only if you end me first
OwO...

>> No.3658387

>>3657804
You're retarded for not considering the foreshortened body parts.

>> No.3658432

>>3658357
i'm glad every artist on the porn thread that draws bois gives them a massive dong. way hotter than a small peepee

>> No.3658518

>>3658387
I mean, I don't have to consider anything. I just look at that body and that head and I see the head is too big. If you can't realize that on your own, I have NGMI news for you, anon.

>> No.3658817

>>3658518
>NGMI
Lol okay. How about you post your work now?

>> No.3658827

>>3658817
>>3647523

>> No.3658973

>>3658827
>BBC-chan
Assuming it is you, and not some random anon, you also draw heads in similar size. That picture is an example.

>> No.3658997

>>3658973
>Similar
LMAO
If you are the anon that is defending that Kyle edit heads chart, then you really need glasses.
The character torsos in that BBC artwork are like 2 to 2 and a half heads long. The torso in this >>3657365 is 1 and a half heads long.
Please now don't tell me the torso is foreshortened too.

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>>3658973
last shit from BBC. he doesn't draw that kind of proportions.

>> No.3659649

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