[ 3 / biz / cgl / ck / diy / fa / ic / jp / lit / sci / vr / vt ] [ index / top / reports ] [ become a patron ] [ status ]
2023-11: Warosu is now out of extended maintenance.

/ic/ - Artwork/Critique


View post   

File: 692 KB, 784x744, 1034879837_3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3631317 No.3631317 [Reply] [Original]

Thread left a day ago. Post your own or other's before and afters.

>> No.3631329

>>3631317
I deleted all art I've made prior to 2018. Couldn't stand to look at it or for people to see it.

>> No.3631335
File: 540 KB, 1000x1000, improvement_thread_update.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3631335

>>3631329
I have this problem too. Makes it harder to see where I have/haven't improved though.

>> No.3631387
File: 245 KB, 800x600, Loomis.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3631387

>> No.3631396

>>3631317
My improvement is too minimal to even be posted here. It looks better, but that's mostly just stylistic choices, instead of actual improvement.

>> No.3631399

>>3631335
i see pp

>> No.3631415

>>3631396
same though I should improve extremely vastly by the end of the year

>> No.3631430

>>3631396
And a lot of "improvement" is also from people giving more of a shit and polishing, adding more details to their pieces.

>> No.3631970

>>3631387
Amazing progress. Try using a cast shadow under your vehicles so it's easy to tell where they're sitting in space.

>> No.3631983

>>3631329
Same, but I just saved it in a folder that I never open

>> No.3631991

>>3631329
>deleted
does this imply you actually don't do traditional art alongside digital? I didn't even know that exists.

>> No.3631998

>tfw majority of /ic/ doesn't improve

>> No.3632000
File: 81 KB, 832x868, 01ede67dfe2522aa32c38bea896dbcdf282b455d40a3680af55b9752b0682a70.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632000

>>3631998
>tfw this is true and that's why nobody posts comparisons

>> No.3632002

>>3631430
yea like >>3631387
it doesn't make sense comparing old sketches/thumbnails with a finished piece

>> No.3632004

>>3632002
?
You can clearly see that>>3631387
didn't have an understanding of complex form or perspective.

>> No.3632006

>>3632004
oh fug i see it now. you're right

>> No.3632029

>>3631329
This is a dumb way of thinking about your art. Looking at old art, even if it's a big cringe, is a great way of motivating yourself.

>> No.3632032

>>3632004
>>3632006
LMAO

>>3632002
This anon is right.

>> No.3632076
File: 495 KB, 1493x1963, 410F94E6-513B-4FE1-8F80-B18005A36AD6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632076

Instagram is a goldmine

>> No.3632079
File: 653 KB, 1485x2364, B649DB33-3B3B-46C4-A879-0E3DB5DFCFDF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632079

>>3632076

>> No.3632102

>>3632076
>From pretty cute to Tumblr abomination
What the fuck happened?

>> No.3632105

>>3632079
It's good that they are still motivated to go on (and maybe improve) but that's still really sad when you only look at the pictures.

>> No.3632162

>>3632079
Did you reverse the year numbers in this one?

>> No.3632172

>>3631317
Are you serious OP?! That's amazing!

>> No.3632178

>>3631998
Cause everyone keeps falling for the study meme.

>> No.3632180

>>3632162
2018 is on the left, 2017 on the right. I didn’t change anything

>> No.3632194

>>3631329
really? i love looking back at my old art. makes me feel good knowing how far ive come.

>> No.3632196
File: 78 KB, 1600x900, 1528474928056.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632196

>>3632180
The right one looks better to me, damn

>>3632194
>look at art from 4 years ago
>almost just as bad as today
No one to blame but myself, but still, not the best feeling.

>> No.3632198

>>3632194
I like doing this too until I see other people who have improved so much quicker because they aren't lazy fucks.

>> No.3632216

>>3632198
just stop looking at other peoples progress assuming you cant do the same. its not like you wont get there eventually, but that's something you have to work for. no point getting angry at something you will eventually surpass.

>> No.3632246

>>3632216
I know. If anything it's me getting angry at myself for not putting in the effort not getting mad that someone is better or improving faster than I am.

>> No.3632264

>>3632079
wow, i mean i guess i see the improvement with the details of the hair and the coloring..
However, your poses got stale and instead of doing a better pose from last year
you just hide the hands and didnt bother to do the
whole body.
Also, i think you over did it with the blush on her face.
I mean dont change your style just change the way you draw out poses.

>> No.3632352
File: 1.24 MB, 1000x1000, Iguess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632352

Going to make my thesis this year, so will practice more.
Must start learning backgrounds.

>> No.3632451

>>3632102
Hahaha, if you can't tell that the right is CLEARLY better than the left then you need some help salty crab anon-kun.

Also post your work.

>> No.3632465

>>3632102
Not the artist but i get that you dont like the new art style
but you have to admit that there is improvement in 2018 compared to last year

>> No.3632491

>>3632451
>>3632465
there literally isnt, the only thing that changes is they used black lines instead of keeping their sketch lines for the lineart

>> No.3632530

>>3632076
How do you get worse?

>> No.3632533

>>3632352
The legs are still weirdly placed

>> No.3632540

>>3632352
Construct the whole body, it looks like you just placed some legs in front of the torso it makes it look like they don't connect to each other.
But you improved the face and coloring a bit.

>> No.3632554

>>3632465
Actually I think that 2017 looks much better in this case. The form on the left feels more solid and proportional. On the right the head is way too big, and the short torso/long thin leg feminine body plan feels ridiculous with such a masculine, big face.

If anything it makes me question if the artist just lucked into making a cute drawing on the left, and 2018 is actually representative of their artistic ability.

>> No.3632576
File: 166 KB, 1073x750, EE76769E-041D-4077-B1A2-B350F81EDA34.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632576

Inktober 2016 vs. 2018
I still want to get better at hatching.

>> No.3632646

>>3632576
nice anon

>> No.3632684
File: 1.93 MB, 3686x4096, C338783E-73C2-4FA8-803A-D05BB14D4782.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632684

>>3632451
I’m a copyfag but come on there’s no appeal to the new one

>> No.3632689
File: 261 KB, 675x611, 16-18.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3632689

>>3631335
>>3631329
keep your old work- even if it's just on your computer for your eyes only

>> No.3632760

>>3631991
People have told me they can only do digital and can't /couldn't go back to traditional.
Probably got too used to ctrl z and being to easily change things in digital whereas traditional you really have to plan before making the lines

>> No.3632801

>>3632689
Your forms improved a bit but you need to work on your construction and perspective, senpai.

>> No.3633265
File: 897 KB, 1630x1034, 04-1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3633265

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.3633273

>>3632076
the next on looks worst

>> No.3633298
File: 721 KB, 446x251, 1533323376250.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3633298

>>3632451
>>3632465

>> No.3633303

>>3632451
>>3632465
Are you guys trolling or am I too bad to see it? The right one only looks more finished, but worse in all respects to me. I don't consider finish to be improvement unless the artist never did finished work before.

>> No.3633306

>>3633265
Right one looks way better

>> No.3633307

>>3633303
>you guys
it's just the one guy, i think

>> No.3633348

>>3633306
I thought bloody well hope so since that's the new one :'D

>> No.3633382 [DELETED] 
File: 1.24 MB, 1140x1392, Reisen avatar history.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3633382

I don't have any character art to compare directly. But I think this is still a good representative.

>> No.3633388
File: 1.59 MB, 1920x1080, Cirno Progress.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3633388

>> No.3633390

>>3633388
looks like a tough 2015

>> No.3636068
File: 772 KB, 1634x1152, June-Sept 18.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636068

haven't been drawing long enough to do a years comparison

>> No.3636072
File: 304 KB, 675x1200, untitled.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636072

#mid_2018

>untitled.png

nothing that remarkable imo

>> No.3636075
File: 167 KB, 655x800, Boruju to burashu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636075

>>3636072

#now_2018

now we're getting somewhere; heh!
I call this one ボルジュとブラシュ

>> No.3636081

>>3631415
>i should improve extremely this year
who's gonna tell him?

>> No.3636089

>>3636072
>>3636075
Ok, now this is cringeposting

>> No.3636090
File: 271 KB, 1920x1080, me.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636090

>>3636072
>>3636075

>all jokes aside

I really do believe personal expression of what you consider beautiful and an example of timelessness and something worthy of an investment of your time and effort infinitely more valuable than some temporal fad like drawing Bowsette.

Unless, you consider drawing Bowsette a gleaming expression of what you consider beautiful and an undoubtedly example of timeless beauty and something worthy of your own investment of time and effort.

In the end, I think back to this when I'm debating whether to draw something lewd or something I could show an elementary schooler without going to jail:

>“There is no such thing as a moral or an immoral book.
Books are well written, or badly written. That is all.”

― Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray

>> No.3636094

>>3632801
will do, im takin those baby steps

>> No.3636099

>>3636090
Best post ITT

>> No.3636105
File: 1.10 MB, 1805x1052, gangnir.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636105

I'm pretty sure I used a reference in the first one, so yeah...

>> No.3636166
File: 47 KB, 960x960, ishygdd.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636166

>>3636089

>2018
>implying posting in itself is some kind of art form and not simply the technological vehicle by which we transport the actual subject, i.e. our art
>not posting your art
>not posting your art
>hot opinions.jpg
>still not posting your art

I seriously hope you guys don't do this.

>> No.3636172

>>3636166
How old are you?

>> No.3636177

>>3632172
I'm not totally surprised... 95% of people practice the wrong things and improve incredibly slowly. OP practiced the right things and was disciplined about it and can do solid anatomy and great rendering after 2 years. It's totally possible.

>> No.3636181
File: 1.90 MB, 1080x1440, imahugefag.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636181

>>3636172

26 and yes i have autism / borderline personality disorder so i'm not clued into social conventions sorry not sorry

>> No.3636184

>>3632689
Left: tumblrina shit
Right: animu

Well done

>> No.3636190

>>3636166
>posting his hot opinions instead of his art
Congratulations, you played yourself.

>> No.3636214

>>3636181
Tell me where you live.

>> No.3636234
File: 22 KB, 540x960, 15178246_554618431408458_5670284717169215934_n.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636234

For my first two years of drawing I was making a progress image every few months, because I was really pleased with how fast and noticeably I was improving. I wasn't great, but I was obviously getting better.

I haven't made one in a year, because I haven't been improving. You could take something from January and something from October and if I didn't label them nobody would be able to tell.

fight that plateau lads

>> No.3636251

>>3632076

Why does she have the 4chan meme triangles in her dress?.

>> No.3636253

>>3636251

I'm sorry, meant for this >>3632079

>> No.3636256

>>3636105
Give me your social media

>> No.3636840
File: 966 KB, 1600x2560, ad44d84e-32d1-43ee-829f-5e8e8a3ac57e.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3636840

i never improved... wtf

>> No.3636849

>>3636105
MOOOODS PEDO ALERT PEDO ALERT

>> No.3636902

>>3636840
...are you tracing or what? No way you get THAT much worse over time.

>> No.3636912

>>3636840
were you tracing or used red very heavily in 2013?
cause your lines were cleanish and more fleshed out.
I think you should mention if you used ref or tracing or at least post more work so people can observe what you have improved and what you need work on.
This just looks like you stopped drawing for a while and tried to come back

>> No.3637019
File: 197 KB, 880x1000, Sketch13622454.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3637019

>>3636902
>>3636912
fuck forget about pic on 2013 i think that was a coloring, i dont have a lot of drawings finished about those years since i used a android tabled to draw and lost a lot of them when i trashed the tablet and only saved some pics who weren't a cringefest

i found another drawing it supposed to be from 2014. i think i just got lazy over the years

>> No.3637023

>>3637019
it seems like you dont want to improve or feel like it.
2014...yeah it seems like you just draw out of boredom.Now i could be wrong because i am not you but how often do you practice/draw?

>> No.3637044

>>3637019
Are you on /a/'s waifu drawthread?
Your artstyle seemed familiar, but I've not drawn for the waifu drawthreads for a damn long time

>> No.3637058
File: 111 KB, 1000x770, portrait_progress_16_18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3637058

>> No.3637071

>>3632576
Both of them are really nice. As long as you keep hatching, you'll continue to improve.

>> No.3637078

>>3637058
would.

>> No.3637357

>>3637078
wtf kind of reply is this?

>> No.3637363

>>3637058
Took you two years to accurately photocopy

>> No.3637409
File: 2.07 MB, 1662x1024, Time.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3637409

Wish started practicing earlier instead of last year.

>> No.3637464

>>3637363
post your work

>> No.3637500

>>3632352
Nice cranberry.

>> No.3638029

>>3637058
What's the point of this? Just take a photo with your phone's camera lol

>> No.3638199

>>3637409
You can do everything you need to to be a really top anime artist but your work is also so damn stiff, anon. Please do some gesture drawing from time-to-time.

>> No.3638237

>>3638199
>so damn stiff
Thanks for pointing out.
I'll get to that once I fix my colouring choices, or maybe I should fix my stiffness first.

>> No.3638241

>>3638029
>What's the point of realism?
You know how I know you are a weeb?

>> No.3638248
File: 1.66 MB, 3543x2960, 1419889920361.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3638248

>>3638029
>just take a picture it's the same lol

>> No.3638700

>>3638241
My phone’s camera does a better job than you hahahahahaha. Your half-assed wannabe realism doesn’t offer anything new, which is proven by the fact that it’s not in demand, AT ALL.

No one cares about your trash drawings or opinions hahahahah

>> No.3638843

>>3632689
nice
you learned a lot about form and appealing shapes

>> No.3638861

>>3636072
How to paint like this plz

>> No.3638917
File: 959 KB, 1709x1500, 2015-2018.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3638917

This doesn't give a quite fair view of the different years, as outside the three images in '15 rest of the year was pretty abysmal, and the later years there were too many images to chose from, and I probably didn't pick the most interesting ones.

>> No.3638925

>>3638029
good luck take a photo from you imagination

>> No.3639160

>>3638248
Blue and orange meme. Didn't artists were cucked even back then.

>> No.3639181

>>3639160
>defining basic color theory as a meme
At this point you should hang yourself, anon, your brain already is rotten to point of no return.

>> No.3639201

>>3637409
How did you do the bg?

>> No.3639370

>>3639201
Create a custom brush.
The brush is basically a circle with a fill slightly more transparent than the stroke.
Modify the brush so it's displacement is randomised.

>> No.3639860

>>3636105
>go from realistic with promise to generic r34 pedoshit with no appeal
how does this happen?

>> No.3639872

>>3639160
Uh. That's orange, purple, and blue-green, young man.

>> No.3639886
File: 207 KB, 892x774, goatoriginal.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3639886

2011 and 2017

>> No.3639895
File: 1.25 MB, 2000x2000, Untitled-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3639895

>> No.3639903

>>3639895
your painting has gotten much better! i would focus a lot more on your draughtsmanship in the coming new year, once your drawing ability catches up you'll be unstoppable

>> No.3639914

>>3639860
ask most /ic
many train realistic and fundie then jump to practicing animu

>> No.3640011

>>3639895
nice edge control. i wanna make gains like yours

>> No.3640080

>>3636849
>>3639860
Are you samefagging for some dumb reason or there really are so many people around here who don't not even know what a loli is? And semi realistic porn? Jesus christ, are you living in 2012?

>> No.3640089

>>3640080
pedoshit tears are so sweet

>> No.3640094
File: 375 KB, 752x588, 111522302748.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3640094

>>3640089
>>3640089
What a fucking tryhard.

>> No.3640126

>>3640094
cry more shitter

>> No.3640756

>>3639895
what tools do you use for the B/W sketches?

>> No.3640889

>>3639886
DADDY

>> No.3641555

>>3631317
still like the same autistic show.
And wtf is going on in the background?

>> No.3641574

>>3639860
>how does this happen?
because realism is a fucking meme
i only learn that shit as a stepping stone to actually interesting stuff

>> No.3641591
File: 2.54 MB, 2707x900, comparison.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3641591

This is what I have. I'm happy with the progress I've made this year so far but I wanted some help going forward.

I was going to draw the exact same scene at first, but I ended up getting sidetracked.

>> No.3641628

>>3639895
nice improvement!

>> No.3641831
File: 65 KB, 1041x518, 4 years boxes.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3641831

>> No.3641833

>>3640756
Photoshop, almost square brush with opacity and flow on pressure. Nothing more than that.

>> No.3641910
File: 782 KB, 1452x550, oldnew.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3641910

2016 vs 2018. I wish I practiced/studied more instead of fucking around playing vidya all day. By now I could've drawn and paint my waifu better instead of feeling like shit everytime I look at her.

>> No.3641944

>>3633388
I unironically like 2014 the most

>> No.3641974

>>3631387
Did you just keep doing Robertson exercises and apply them to original drawings? I feel like a dumbass whenever I go through How to Draw and feel instantly demotivated by the technical knowledge needed

>> No.3642007

>>3637058
Nice improvement, Well done

>> No.3642157

>>3641974
Pretty much.
1. Skim book for useful tricks (duplication and division the most important imo).
2. Study from reference using tricks you read about.
3. Attempt original drawings without using ref.
Repeat daily. You'll notice gains in less than a month if you're consistent.

>> No.3642815

>>3641591
now they look like the belong with the bg. nice

>> No.3642829

>>3631991
I burn my old sketchbooks on a bi-yearly basis. In fact I've burnt my sketchbooks from last year just a week ago.

>> No.3643014

>>3638917
What the shit

This is too good for /ic/

>> No.3643227

>>3642815
Thanks, man!

>> No.3643284

>>3637363
>>3638029

Imagine being this jealous of someone

>> No.3643286

>>3638029
>>3637363
>anime cucks
>probably just draw waifus from their favourite animes

just download pics of them lmao

>> No.3643287

>there are people in the world who pay money for images
Lmaoooo all art is free

>> No.3643350

>>3638917
I love the 2016 goblin, the car, and splatoon underwear girl, that one made me giggle

>> No.3643356
File: 3.79 MB, 858x4000, 4B94165D-ED99-432B-BE66-764D64A4859D.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3643356

>> No.3643365

>>3643356
absolutely disgusting. blog?

>> No.3643446
File: 1.62 MB, 2894x2469, CoolIGuess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3643446

Here's mine

>> No.3643493
File: 1.71 MB, 1334x1440, progress1318.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3643493

Might as well.

I just draw to get people's rocks off really, don't see myself ever doing anything besides hobby work.

>> No.3643501

>>3643493
>that improvement
Wew. Have a twitter?

>> No.3643506

>>3643501
Thanks anon! And yes but I'm god awful at using it, just a heads up.

/BiscottiDraw

>> No.3643509

>>3643493
pretty nice 2018 but i feel like there couldve been more improvement yeah?

>> No.3643519

>>3639895
>girls in armor/armor in general
Patrician taste, it’s what makes me want to start drawing

>> No.3643520

>>3643509
Probably. I started school in 2015 and after that I only drew in sporadic bursts every few months. Part of me wishes I would have sat down and worked harder at it on a consistent schedule, but the other part of me knows that drawing lewds isn't gonna be my career and I don't regret the time I spent doing other things.

>> No.3643599

>>3631387
The January pieces look rugged and metallic while the October ones looks like they're made from plastic. I have to say that your art has declined.

>> No.3643602

l>>3632684
lol that anon got BTFO and left the thread

>> No.3643603
File: 129 KB, 998x672, improve1618.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3643603

I don't draw very consistently, some months I draw nothing at all and others I might manage three or so pieces. so even though 2 years is a good stretch of time I'm happy with the improvements I've managed to make.

lmk what you think, I don't get a lot of critique these days and it's been awhile since I've posted here

>> No.3643609
File: 49 KB, 800x596, 1476839494020.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3643609

>>3638029
Baiting or not, there are people out there who genuinely believe this.

>> No.3643611

>>3643603
both of these look really great anon

>> No.3643612

>>3636840
I honestly prefer 2018
it's still kinda generic but it's more interesting then the generic anime girl style most ppl have from the previous years

>> No.3643649

>>3643611
thanks very much anon-kun

>> No.3643655

>>3643603
Your drawings only got simple, don't make yourself out to be a two year prodigy, because you're not.

>> No.3643671

>>3643655
care to elaborate? I don't claim to be a prodigy lmao I'm just saying I don't draw nearly as much as I used to

>> No.3643733

>>3641910
that looks like a small man's hand

>> No.3643767

>>3643603
i mean there is improvement in the crosshatching
but all i see is a slight art style change.
Maybe give us another 2016 vs 2018 drawing?

>> No.3643885

>>3641831
oh god this is going to be me.

>> No.3644059
File: 495 KB, 1845x1200, witchconfrenceredraw.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3644059

don't have time to color this properly but

>> No.3644068

>>3644059
is this a joke?

>> No.3644099
File: 181 KB, 500x639, lute-playing-stops-31147206[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3644099

>>3644059

>> No.3644106

>>3644059
I unironically love this. I would contrast the foreground characters with the background because they're kind of bleeding into each other. But I love this

>> No.3644130

>>3644059
llove the atmosphere

>> No.3644135
File: 565 KB, 2048x2048, 6A5DFE3F-DA9E-4551-817B-4C63AA65883F.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3644135

Left March 2018, Right Last Week.

>> No.3644217

>>3643767
It kinda sounds like you don't really know what you're talking about

>> No.3644225

>>3644217
a little
I'm not really good at explaining.
I wanted to see other improvements that person did.
I just felt that guy only improved on their cross hatching skills over the course of 2 years.

>> No.3644304

>>3643493
Heh I remember you
how 2 render like 2018?

>> No.3644315

>>3644135
Give up on anime and repent your sins.

>> No.3644552

>>3644315
He's not going for anime, he's going for the Iliya Kusninov type of thing

>> No.3644555

>>3644059
I love your style but wtf happened to your coloring
The color selection is so much better on the left

>> No.3644559

>>3636234
Are you stuck in your comfort zone? Maybe try playing around with different media, try ink, watercolor, digital, anything you haven't tried yet. Changing subjects might help as well. Try doing scenery if you've been doing mostly portraits or vice versa. Challenging yourself is key.

>> No.3644729
File: 355 KB, 735x540, just draw.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3644729

>>3644315
>>3644552
>>3644135
I like watching anime but not necessarily the style. I don't like Ilya tobh but am attracted to anime irl people. pic is a quick study of kinashen from sept.

>> No.3644936

>>3631329
I've deletd a lot of my older art too. It's not about how badly drawn it is, but the cringey subject matter...

>> No.3644938

>>3633265
Good job anon. I like the headpiece.

>> No.3644952

>not a single merc wip
Holy fucking shit, this board is dead.

>> No.3645724

>>3644059
I liked how the right improved the background but for God's sake the faces are really terrible.

>> No.3645766 [DELETED] 

>>3636105
You technique might've improved, but becoming a pedo is degradation in general.

>> No.3645767 [DELETED] 

>>3641591
Was better without nigger.

>> No.3645912
File: 3.24 MB, 1886x1460, Screen Shot 2018-10-18 at 7.57.41 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3645912

not quite done with this, obviously new one on the left

>> No.3646007

>>3645767
Don't say that about my precious angel!

>> No.3646040

>>3636105
Don't listen to the complainers. I like where your work is heading. Keep it up!

>> No.3646062

>>3645912
evyn? it's me your bf :)

>> No.3646066

>>3646062
hello dear how was your day

>> No.3646077

>>3644729
>anime irl people
You mean Asians?

>> No.3646081

>>3632576
Just use a hatching brush retard

>> No.3646084

>>3646081
If you're going to call that nice poster a faggot you better pyw, faggot.

>> No.3646092

>>3636253
Man are you serious? The legend of Zelda is the source material for that 'meme'

>> No.3646137

>>3646066
V good hope you are well bb ;)

>> No.3646141
File: 642 KB, 750x887, 6A29DA6B-DAD2-46DA-BBC5-67AFC1738742.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3646141

>>3646077
I mean uncanny valley people

>> No.3646142
File: 819 KB, 1584x1008, very nice 2017 v 2018.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3646142

>>3631317
here's my most recent meme that I've improved upon

any spicy tips on additional color runs I should do? What would you do to "finish" this one?

>> No.3646152
File: 1.12 MB, 2806x1075, kek.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3646152

NGMI speed of improvement

>> No.3647161
File: 541 KB, 833x1192, ahahaahah.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3647161

i have probably regressed!

>> No.3648000
File: 915 KB, 3700x1856, Picture 5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3648000

im so fuckin lazy

>> No.3648003

>>3647161
dont think so, i like the colours of the second one quite a bit

>> No.3648004

>>3648000
very good female wojack

>> No.3648006

>>3648004
fucking RIP

>> No.3648008

>>3646152
You should be able to get decent after 4 years. Capable of copying a photo with photo-realistic results and some pretty good results on still lives. Creative works will be alright but definitely amateur.

8 years is when you should be at a pro level. Easily copy photos, solid still lives and figure drawings, and your creative pieces should be recognizable to your style.

8 years. 8 years to get pro.

>> No.3648009

>>3646142
i like the direction you're going with your art

>> No.3648010

>>3631329
you should literally never do this.
If you were shitty then got better people can see your story to success, they see your hard work and struggles and its nothing but positive.
It makes for a top tier portfolio
its only bad if you were shit and stayed shit.

>> No.3648015

>>3646152
How did you do it? How do I get as good as you?

>> No.3648259

>>3648008

I've heard of this, 24 atm so i think im still on time for getting good, fucking shitty asian culture basically screams "oh ur almost mid 20s, you need to get your shit together by the time you hit 30 so u can start building a family reeeee"

>>3648015

I did some apprenticeship to help with getting my workflow right, having a good workflow helps you with not frontloading yourself with all the problems. Solve 1 thing at a time, and take your time. If you spend your last 1 hour before deadline painting something, it's going to look like it's done in 1 hour. Industry standard for an illustration take 1-3 weeks depends on the complexity. If you paint everyday you should spend at least 4-6 hours on a detailed study, and up to 30 hours ish for a nice illustration.

One thing for sure tho I can guarantee you is that the sticky for this board is very helpful if you wanna self study, but it takes incredible amount of effort to do so, so if you can muster some cash and time, applying yourself under a good mentor artist is THE way to go. I dont think i know jackshit until I reached out and learn from somebody else who know their shit. It's alot easier than trying to navigate through all these resources online. I can however say if you're beginner, reading Loomis isn't a meme, helps me out alot too.

Other than all of those, build a habit of drawing everyday, I feel like shit because I do a study maybe once a month inbetween all other art projects, so i'm pretty sure my growth could be alot faster had I actually spend time and not fuck around.

Good luck

>> No.3648508

>>3646081
I used a pigment liner on paper

>> No.3648511

>>3646142
Study the values and use more contrast in your colours, these look lifeless.

>> No.3649435

>>3632079
i guess its technically an improvement but how do you go from having a vague grasp on shading to lazy pillow shading?

>> No.3649437

>>3633265
really neat anon!

>> No.3649443

What happened with the face?

>> No.3649456

>>3639895
I love the taxi driver one

>> No.3649518

>>3646062
>>3646066
>>3646137
geez get a room

>> No.3649653

>>3633265
You’re getting there. Just keep going.

>> No.3649666

>>3647161
nah i can tell your gesture and anatomy has improved

also gib me your blog fagit

>> No.3649673

>2016
>Draw like shit
>2018
>Can now draw and produce music like shit

>> No.3649850

>>3647161
are u that rush guy? I remember you for drawing a bunch of those cutesy loli girl type things. I really hated your style back then including this 2017 thing you posted, but I can see from your 2018 that you did improve in terms of a more appealing face and just the way you go about the things compared to before. Good work.

>> No.3649907

[img]https://i.imgur.com/eal4omH.jpg[/img]
[img]https://i.imgur.com/OLsJ85T.jpg[/img]

First is from June 2011, Aquanort September 2018

>> No.3649908

>>3649907
idk how to use 4chan..please forgive me.

>> No.3649922
File: 451 KB, 1036x669, improvementmeme.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3649922

hoping this works. ahh sorry i really am a 4chan noob;;

>> No.3649936

>>3649922
you should try draw the same thing nextime
but I like the line art

>> No.3649958

>>3649850
Could you please tell me more about that?

>> No.3649961

>>3649908
Oh that's alright. Your work is really good!
How old are you?

>> No.3650007

>>3649961
How old are you?

I'm 27. No prodigy here, just self taught hobby drawing with hardly any use of references.

>> No.3650039
File: 322 KB, 2000x700, lillie.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3650039

Do you guys ever just feel like all of this is worthless?
I want to keep going but... i just feel like im too old.
I'm 23, i want too, but i have a full time job, and feel like i should just become a normal person.

You guys ever feel like this too?

>> No.3650095

>>3650039
im 24 and i literally just started drawing

>> No.3650102

>>3639895
your art is super underrated on social media. im in love with the way you paint/render.

>> No.3650103

>>3646152
idk if this classifies as NGMI. you made huge leaps between 2017 and 2018. keep going.

>> No.3650105

>>3650039
you should draw. and you will draw.

>> No.3650107
File: 66 KB, 540x537, easier.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3650107

>>3650039
i mean, to be completely fair, the people who are good here, either have never stopped drawing, or when they did start, autistically pursued it. You just gotta grind it out like the rest of us.

>> No.3650255
File: 2.74 MB, 1861x1023, 123.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3650255

did I improve guys

>> No.3650271

>>3650103
thanks anon im still a study fag but im gonna keep trying

>> No.3650283

>>3650255
Wtf is that 2017

>> No.3650296

>>3650283
Looks like Doki Doki literature club

>> No.3650315

>>3650039
in 20 years from now would you have wanted to continue pursuing art?

>> No.3650316

>>3650296
I mean, 2014 and 2018 look pretty good, with 2018 being the best there. But 2017 is a mess in comparison to the other two.

>> No.3650364

>>3640126
I'll draw your daughter getting gangbanged fucked inside out and there's nothing you can do about it

>> No.3650368

>>3650364
What did anon mean by this?

>> No.3650374

>>3650368
I'll draw his daughter as loli yo

>> No.3650382

>>3650364
>pedo threats
lol

>> No.3650427

>>3650039
Its okay to have hobbies, anon. just draw when you need to relax because its a good constructive outlet

>> No.3650430

>>3650427
I wish there were more people like you in here instead of so many neurotics. Art is supposed to be fun, relaxing, etc.

>> No.3650603

>>3650102
>>3649456
>>3643519
>>3641628
>>3640011
>>3639903
thank you guys, it means a lot to me. It gives me hope that i will make it ^^

>> No.3651312

>>3650039
>23
>too old
Fuck you.

>> No.3651326

>>3643603
>>3645912
>>3647161
>>3650255
>>3643493
good improvement i am proud of you

>> No.3651337

>>3651312
it is if you wanna go pro, otherwise yeah not old at all

>> No.3651359
File: 517 KB, 1080x1078, 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3651359

>>3651337
>it is if you wanna go pro
All this talk about "going pro" and "breaking into the industry" is sprouted by people who don't see beyond video game concept art. Pic attached is by Yuko Shimizu, who started at 34 and is a professional illustrator

>> No.3651422

>>3651312
how old r u anon?

>> No.3651423

>>3632576
moar

>> No.3651427

>>3650039
I'm 27, have a full time job too and seen huge improvement after drawing 1-2 hours everyday for 6 months. It's def possible to see gains in 1 year of grinding.

>> No.3651441

>>3651359
>video game concept art
well yeah where the fuck do you think you are, literally every faggot here wants to work for videogames

>> No.3651442

>>3651441
>literally every faggot here wants to work for videogames
Maybe pre-2014 /ic/

>> No.3651446

>>3638917
Someone is going to make it.
I really like the plane and the monster from 2016

>> No.3651448

>>3644059
It is a bit /beg/ tier but I like it more than most high skill art.

>> No.3651489

>>3631317
I hate to say it, but even though your technical skills have improved, you've lost any semblance of style. It just looks like a generic pixiv artist, whereas the one on the left, while having some pretty fucked up anatomy and perspective, has a cool style. Not sure if it was intentional or not, but I really like that style and it's disappointing to see you choosing the most generic style possible. Maybe consider merging your new skills with your style?

>> No.3651490

>>3651489
god damn don't talk like the one on the left is what he should strive towards, fair enough if you prefer the style but he/she has come a long way. they'll find their style, or they'll keep with this one if the want to. it's good. it looks good.

>> No.3651493

>>3650255
DAmn boy
DAMN BOY
DAAAAAMN BOY SHE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCC

>> No.3651494

>>3651490
I guess it's a weird case of where it is technically much better on the right, but because it looks so generic it kind of feels like something was lost into the great sea of generic looking anime girls. Don't get me wrong, left has a horrible fucked up neck and pretty much the entire torso, but it's got a style that's pretty cute, and I guess I don't like seeing everyone go towards the most generic anime style possible.

>> No.3651495

>>3651427
Is it really possible to make good gains by only working 1-2 hours within that short of a time frame? Cause I'm a total /beg/ with a full time job and I can't get many hours of drawing, so I always feel like it's pointless to try and learn. Typical NGMI attitude, I know.

>> No.3651668

>>3650255
2017 texture and rendering look better
2018 looks too digital and generic

>> No.3651678

>>3641591
I don't know why nobody else said more, but you had some really good progression. Your style evolved a lot and it's very pleasant to look at (compared to the one on the left).

Your foliage and shadows could still use more work, but in comparison to the left, that's some very solid progress. Good work, anon.

>> No.3651687

>>3631329
>he can "delete" all his art
>doesn't have mountains of sketchbooks of pre-2018 art that he would have to burn instead
NGMI

>> No.3651688

>>3651489
There's nothing unique about the style on the left.
If anything it's less unique, as you can find an endless abundant supply of similar art in the dark corners of DeviantArt or even here. On the other hand, you'd be hard-pressed to meet so-called "generic pixiv artist" of that quality in places outside of the top charts of pixiv.

>> No.3651698

>>3651687
not him, but i burned all of my sketchbooks

>> No.3651780

>>3651489
>>3651494
I agree. Weird > generic.

>> No.3651789
File: 3.39 MB, 844x2750, kane_s_improvement_by_kanekiru-d7p7hbb.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3651789

>>3651489
That's not the OP's art. Here's a more complete art improvement chart from the artist.

>> No.3651790
File: 929 KB, 1200x777, 70737052_p0_master1200.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3651790

>>3651789
And this is what her current work looks like.

>> No.3651796

>>3651489
Fucking kill yourself

>> No.3651845

>>3651789
>this good at 13 already
Just fuck my shit up

>> No.3651855
File: 720 KB, 1680x1020, Draw_Thread_6.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3651855

>>3631317
Welp, it's something at least. 16 years old vs 21 years old.

>> No.3651857

>>3651796
No

>> No.3651899

>>3646152
that girl on the right looks exactly like someone i knew from hs

>> No.3651911

>>3651855
really classy, bro

>> No.3651997

>>3651911
I'm always classy for money, pal.

>> No.3652053

>>3651899
depends if you're a viet fag or not.

>> No.3652352
File: 964 KB, 1280x1222, Draw This Again2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3652352

>>3631317

>> No.3652594

>>3631329
>>3651687
Didn't start drawing seriously until 2016. Approaching the 2 year mark...damn. I wish I did things differently. Trashed every early drawing I had in a binder because I just drew on printer paper. Once I became a shitty digifag, I started to save images seriously but cleaned out all my blogs twice. That removed somewhere around 100 images of my progression. Onky recently have I begun saving stuff in sketch books as I've become a traditionalfag once again. I fished for some of my art in Google images and found some of the worst and most memorable pieces. Will make a collage of it when I get home. All the other shit is still lost to time I guess. I also don't draw nearly enough and did so far much more when I was starting out but slowly got less productive. I don't upload a pic of every drawing now but I make little doodles and figure drawings constantly before I get home.

>> No.3652751

>>3648003
stfu "I like the colors" is one of the most bullshit/novice critiques someone can give. keep on trying crab, I bet your work is absolute trash.

>> No.3652755
File: 287 KB, 983x812, goku_dbs_by_saodvd-d8zz4jb.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3652755

>>3652352
Hey good improvement anon! Gotta start somewhere, Goku would be proud

>> No.3652797

>>3652755
Goku would stab himself in the eye so as not to see that two years in the chamber yields results like this>>3652352

>> No.3652815

>>3643356
This makes me want to kill myself.

>> No.3653102

>>3652815
Don't kill yourself. Just stop going on /ic/. It's what I plan to do.

>> No.3653269

>>3652797
Post your work asshole

>> No.3653275

>>3652797

So edgy! Guess that's why they call you random XD

>> No.3653567

>>3651789
There was a huge improvement between 2013-2015. I'm kind of stuck on this level. What kind of anatomy study did you do?

>> No.3654173
File: 430 KB, 2004x1292, cp456.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3654173

>>3631317
Am I doing good /ic/?

>> No.3654175

>>3654173
Powerwolf fan?

>> No.3654266
File: 54 KB, 461x523, hate.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3654266

>>3651789
>tfw this could be me now if I started early
>but you waste 10 years worth of your free time playing game
fuck you mount and blade hope banner lord will never come out

>> No.3654352

>>3651441
I want to draw furry porn for commissions

>> No.3654359
File: 303 KB, 864x720, progressmaybe.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3654359

3 year difference.
best i was able to do then was shitty linework, i couldn't even color anything..

>> No.3654436
File: 424 KB, 1000x800, compare.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3654436

yeet

>> No.3654452

>>3654359
>wooly african hair for beard and top of head
>straight brown hair for body
what did he mean by this?

>> No.3654521

>>3643356
blog?

>> No.3654923

>>3643446
looks like youve made good improvements from your previous work but i think you might benefit greatly from looking into some basic skeletal and muscle anatomy
your second image is missing large portions of her rib cage so it comes off as nothing but her spine with two breasts attached to it as the torso.
looking into skeletal and muscle anatomy will help you draw cute muscle girls so good luck

>> No.3654933
File: 37 KB, 500x475, 1416019044622.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3654933

>>3650039
>Do you guys ever just feel like all of this is worthless?
>I want to keep going but... i just feel like im too old.
>I'm 23, i want too, but i have a full time job

You're 23 ya self-depreciating cunt, I'm almost 30 and I work full-time and still manage to draw every day, enjoy your youth and go draw

>> No.3655040

>>3654436
Good progress

>> No.3655050
File: 59 KB, 769x341, doggopet.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3655050

>>3650039
im 25.
don't give up on me now anon. we can make it together

>> No.3655508
File: 566 KB, 1124x621, imrp.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3655508

1 year

>> No.3655899

>>3650364
God I love being a non-degenerate

>> No.3655926

>>3655508
I assume the new work is on the left, right?

>> No.3655929

>>3655508
>put new work on the left
why you do this

>> No.3655938
File: 646 KB, 720x720, 1540595188090.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3655938

>>3655926

>> No.3656101

>>3655508
I like the new work(left).

>> No.3656102

>>3654173
Not bad, left looks boring, right looks good.

>> No.3656110

>>3651789
My personal feelings find that the art is deviating from fun since 2015. It's similar to the feeling I get when looking at sakimichan's work.
Well at least I felt some fun looking at this compared to sakimichan though.
Don't ask me what I meant by fun, it's difficult to explain.

>> No.3656111

>>3655938
I warned you about over rendering anime bro
I warned you

>> No.3656389
File: 178 KB, 900x653, level_up_by_konni79-da4xgfh.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]
3656389

just got to wait 20 years.

not mine

>> No.3656391

>>3655508
Nice improvement on the left there. How do you manage to capture such a simpler style and still be aesthetic?

>> No.3656393

>>3655938
kek

>> No.3656897

Realistically how good can someone get going from /beg/ tier in 2 years if they draw and paint every day for 8 hours?

>> No.3658493

>>3637363
>it hurts my feelings that you've improved :(