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Previous Thread >>3605636

Porn Thread
Thread for those who enjoy drawing pornographic images
Rules and Guidelines:
-Hide images you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
-Absolutely NO furry in these threads.
-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)
-Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.

Dedicated thread sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#

>> No.3613606
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Not used to rendering in this sort of lighting. Taking it easy by starting off with ambient occlusion first.

>> No.3613636

>>3613578
I'm really sick of seeing gen 1 pokemon porn.

>> No.3613651

>>3613636
Wow! Great input anon! Love seeing you contributing to this thread with such a quality discussion. I'd love to see your artwork!

>> No.3613658

>>3613651

?

>> No.3613665

>>3613636
which gens are preferred?

>> No.3613669

>>3613665
Red and Green beta versions.

>> No.3613671
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>>3613665

Oh I dunno, any other girl that isn't fucking kasumi. It doesn't even have to be a cannon character. It's like the people drawing >>3613578 don't even like pokemon to begin with and are just doing whatever norms know what associates pokemon with for maximum tumblr notes.

But do whatever you want. There is no "preferred" here, that's you trying to goal post. I'm just saying, as an opinion (to which I'm allowed) I'm sick of seeing gen 1 porn.

>> No.3613673

>>3613636
Are you serious? All I ever see is porn of May and Dawn and that one female character you play as with the brown hair.

>> No.3613675

>>3613673
Then you live in another reality from me.

>> No.3613686

>>3613606
Bed looks cool. Using a reference?

>> No.3613692

>>3613636
What specific characters would you like to see?

>> No.3613695

>>3613686
Yeah. I don't have it saved to my computer, but the commissioner wanted the same room and lighting from the ref image.

>> No.3613707

>>3613692
Is this a request offer?

>> No.3613710

>>3613707
Yes.

>> No.3613714
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>>3613710
Alright then, do something with kanon.

>> No.3613722

>>3613714
Do's and do not's?

>> No.3613727

>>3613722
Stay in the realm of lesbo; no men if you're going to add something like that. You have freedom with everything else.

>> No.3613733

>>3613727
And if it's good I'll give you a small tip for it. Nothing major, just tell me where to send it.

>> No.3613734

>>3613727
Will this be a self-cest piece or do you have a partner in mind?

>> No.3613739
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>>3613734
It's just the 2 in that pic. One will have a hat on.

>> No.3613756 [DELETED] 

>>3613739
I will get started on some rough sketches after dinner.

>> No.3613758

>>3613739
I will start some rough sketches after dinner tonight.

>> No.3613778

>>3613758
OK great, thanks.

>> No.3613868
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>>3613778

Which roughs do you like the most?

>> No.3613877

>>3613868
First one

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>>3613868
I like 2 and 3 but the 3rd one since it looks more interesting and less generic.

>> No.3613887

>>3613877
On second thought---yeah do first one.

>> No.3613894

>>3613877
>>3613887
nta, but I agree. The first one.

>> No.3613898

>>3613887
I can still adjust a couple of things if any other strikes your fancy.

>> No.3613912

>>3613898
Nah you're good. First is fine.

>> No.3613921
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>>3612473
>>3612479
So more like this?
Now I'm just worried about the ass not being raised far enough, but that can be fixed later on.

>> No.3613933

>>3613898
Actually, I saw in the last thread how your style looked a year ago. Could you draw it like that? The eyes were prettier and noses were simpler. That or just cell shade it.

>> No.3613935

>>3613933
nigger you're not me I clearly said let him have free reign >>3613727

>> No.3613947

>>3613935
What the fuck? I changed my mind. Stop pretending to be me. The girls would look way cuter in his earlier style. More anime.

>> No.3613955
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>>3613947
Prove that your me.

>> No.3613958

>>3613955
Anyone can take a screen shot and edit it then save it as a jpg. That proves nothing.

>> No.3613959

>>3613958

And anyone can pretend to just take over the request as the op requester. Like what happened >>3613877 although I agree with him. But now it's happening again.

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>> No.3614098

>>3613921
Could you post the reference picture you're using for this? Thanks.

>> No.3614116

>>3613578
imagine being marmalademum and regressing as bad as her

>> No.3614120

>>3614116
I don't want to

>> No.3614132
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>>3614116
>>3614120
I would appreciate any critique as well as for you to elaborate on how I've regressed. As well as for you to PYW.

>> No.3614133

>>3614132
Uh-oh marmalademum is a "post your work" crab

Ad hominem doesn't win you internet points, crabbymum

>> No.3614137

>>3614133
>shitting on one of the few quality artists that actually posts here
yikes, time to kill yourself

>> No.3614148

>>3614137
Doesn't matter how "quality" you are if you gonna act like a crab I don't care if you stay or leave.

>KYS
You crabs sure do gather together at feeding time, don't you?

>> No.3614149

>>3614148
says the faggot whose only comment is "imagine regressing this bad" with no further explanation or critique.
your shitpost was neither necessary nor constructive, and your art is also probably shittier than your contribution to the boards. lurk more

>> No.3614150

>>3614133
>>3614148
Crabs are the unsuccessful people on this board who drag each other down. Marmalade isn't that just because she says "pyw".
It's a completely valid response actually, since people who are better at art tend to give better advice than someone who can only draw a stick man.

>> No.3614152

>>3614149
Wow marmalade didn’t know you were such a toxic cunt. Is your blood sugar low?

>> No.3614154

>>3614152
i'm not even marmalade; just tired of no skill shitters making worthless comments. get lost nerd

>> No.3614155

>>3614154
Whatever you say marmalade. I suggest grabbing a granola bar and doing some anatomy studies

>> No.3614156

>>3614149
No I didn't post that, I was the guy who said I didn't want to imagine it lol

Did you just assume my post? I'm triggered, anon, truly. ;_; You've stumped me oh how will I go on

>> No.3614157

>>3614149
>>3614152
Eat a snickers, marmalade. You're not you when you're hungry.

>> No.3614158

>>3614155
>>3614156
>>3614157
worst samefag I've ever seen

>> No.3614159

>>3614156
The samefag, waiting for post timer to immediately post again, its cringey just stop posting

>> No.3614162
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>>3614152
>>3614155
boi that isn't me.

>> No.3614165
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>>3614158
Okay buddy sure whatever makes you feel like a big man on the internet

>> No.3614169

>>3614165
wow so you're actually retarded. okay

>> No.3614172

>>3614169
Takes one to know one, tardicus maximus

>> No.3614174

>>3614009
Person on the right looks very short.

>> No.3614175

>>3614174
they're 5'6''

>> No.3614176

>>3614174
they're supposed to be a midget

>> No.3614221

>>3613578
>Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters
>starts with misty porn
kek, im not complaining though, its just a drawing and i already came to this and other misty pics twice

>> No.3614236

>>3614221
Just because it's the character, doesn't mean that she's underage. Like, it's clearly an adult body.

>> No.3614244

>>3614236
Dude who cares about the age, we don't know how old she's supposes to be in the pic anyway, no need to "justify" the pic

Fbi isn't gonna kill you for that

>> No.3614327

Threadly reminder: Don't let that faggot Salty-Kun drag you into pointless arguments. He'll post single line shitposts like
>>3614116
to get you hooked. Then it'll escalate into walls of autistic text. Just ignore him.

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>> No.3614381

>>3614098
I'm not using a reference picture.

>> No.3614384 [DELETED] 

>>3614379
Is the a flat plane? Other than that it turned out really nicely.

>> No.3614402

>>3614379
Is the guy a flat plane? Other than that it turned out nicely.

>> No.3614405

>>3613578
>no underage NSFW
>posts misty nude

>> No.3614447

>>3614405
I hope this is bait, cause you can't be so dense.
There's a difference between characters having a certain lore and them being depicted underage.
Don't be stupid, stupid.

>> No.3614456

>>3614447
Look, just just accept misty is 12 in canon and that her titties aren't that big here.

You spring out trying to justify it is cringy, no need to have a guilty conscience

>> No.3614458

>>3614009
Eurgh it's hydrocephalus grin man.

>> No.3614465

>>3613578
>when youre a female yourself and dont know how to draw a vagina
>so you draw a literal stab wound
yikes

>> No.3614482

>>3614465
Oh don't go pissing of marmalade again she's gonna shit up the thread

>> No.3614485

Shut up and post Lewds.

>> No.3614636

>>3614465
looks ok for an inny to me. although marm being a fatty should alert her to the fact though that the pussy taco-esque fold continues further than the vaginal opening on a puffy pussy and may even seamlessly continue into butt cheeks

>> No.3614644

>>3614447
nice job outing yourself spreg

>> No.3614664

>>3614150
>SHE

>> No.3614666

>>3614009
I dont understand how your art goes from a decent sketch to god awful flat ugly lineart with the only trace of form in the balls.

>> No.3614667

>>3614636
thats not what an innie looks like

>> No.3614668

>>3614652
is that considered porn?
how am i doing?

>> No.3614681

>>3614668
To a normie. Any female anime charecter is porn.

>> No.3614684

>>3614636
Marm is fat? Is there pictures of marm somehwere?

>> No.3614690
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3614690

Mannequinization.

>> No.3614693

>>3614690
Good just don't make the tits too big, nopedo.

>> No.3614698

>>3614690
Too old.

>> No.3614701

>>3614684
she has a few self portraits shes posted on ic and her patreon/socials (meme thick/fat with a flat stomach) and I think she posted on ic that shes 180 lbs, so add like at least 20 lbs to that for her actual weight

>> No.3614702

>>3614456
She definitely doesn't look 12 in OPs pic lol.
Teen? Sure. Underage? Reaching.
>>3614644
You are the stupid I called stupid?
I told you to stop that.

>> No.3614721

>>3614701
I follow her on Tumblr. She says she's 5'10" at 180lbs. If anything that's just a little chubby

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>>3614721
thats literally overweight

>> No.3614748

>>3614731
>tall girl
>overweight
yikes, lost the lottery on that one

>> No.3614777

>>3614731
would still plow like an Amish planting corn

>> No.3614839

>>3613868
>>3613921
>>3614009
>>3614690

I like these constructions drawings.
Artists should post more of their construction.

I see soo much rendered shit that looks good but lacks substance, These sketches for whatever weird reason has more life.

>> No.3614846

>>3614690
Explain your head construction, Is it loomis or a mix with something else?

Did you do the inner circle first to find center then the outline or what?

>> No.3614861

>>3614721
No photo posted only idealized self portraits man get real stop orbiting

>> No.3614867

>>3614690
You might wanna watch the length of that neck.
Btw, weren't they the same girl with just as a hat as difference? If so, why did you construct their heads differently?

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Update

>> No.3615012

>>3613658
Can’t detect sarcasm, can you?

>> No.3615030

>>3615012
I can only detect faggotry.

>> No.3615033

don't respond to fucking trolls

>> No.3615040

>>3614327
Shut the fuck up, white knight. Go hug box somewhere else.

>> No.3615165

>>3615040
go away, psycho.

>> No.3615204

>>3614379
Sir, can i have some more?

>> No.3615372
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>>3614381
A lot of amateur artists make that crucial mistake of not using reference material on their drawings for fear of being outed by so called peers. Most professionals use reference material to make the process of creating a drawing much faster as opposed to drawing something entirely from imagination. It sounds like cardinal sin, but believe me, most critics would rather you take from a reference picture what you need, than you stomp around in the mud with absolutely no clue of what you're doing. Believe me, there's a huge difference between using reference material to your advantage, just refrain from saying you came up with the drawing from your imagination like some stupid Dunning Kruger retard, only to get found out later that you did in fact use a reference picture and you copied the reference picture almost line for line.

When I mentioned that you should refrain from using that dumb skeleton structure, I meant it. There is of no absolute significance why you should use that method to draw a body unless you want to spend an extra hour drawing your entire drawing in sections.

Watch Adam Hughes, a seasoned vet for over 30 years of experience in drawing (not to mention drawing some fine ass) in this video here and see how he only worries about the form of the body, and not particularly the sections of it"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UvaG1EZ9shM

Watch through the entire four part process. You'll get a better idea of how a pin up comes to life when you lay down form, erase, ink and finally add the finishing touches to a piece. And don't be afraid of looking up some reference pictures from the internet to help you better understand what your imagination is trying to draw. Copying is also the boogeyman's claw around here and you'll hear ARTISTS tell you not to, but that's only because they themselves found that first step in their journey to becoming better. Any good critic will tell you to use copying until you learn, then stop relying on it.

>> No.3615401

>>3615372
The same goes for reference material. Watch how easy it comes for Adam to draw Supergirl in that video. Over the course of your fundamental learning, you will being to rely less and less on reference material because you'll begin to see the form of the body. Even still, professionals will still go back to using reference material. The important thing to remember is not to brag about your imagination reaching into the fucking ether around you and conjuring up something phenomenal, when everyone knows that ALL artists use reference whether they like it or not. Any artist who tells you otherwise is a fucking liar. Sometimes they just like to keep that secret in their back pocket, especially when they have build a following SELLING those over saturated reference pictures as their "line work".

Critics critique better than other artists critiquing your work because critics don't have their minds cluttered with individualistic, ego inflating nonsense. Crtitics like what they like, and should they offer you some harsh critique on yor work, learn from it. Don't pull a shit storm out of your ass like a bunch of these autists do and IMMEDIATELY go into "Muh Style, Post YER WRKZ" mentality.

>>3614116 Sometimes artists don't like to hear that they're getting worse and lash out at critics being harsh on their work, and you'll find them scrounging for any excuse to defend themselves. An artist should be able to look inward with a critique like this and say to themselves ,"Fuck, maybe they're right. I should probably grind some practice in for a few months and see what kind of results come out of it."

If you don't want to use reference material to learn from, that is your choice. But it's also your choice not to learn how to properly draw a good pair of tits, or an ass, or a succulent pussy because in your worlds of worlds, you pulleth from the universe what you needeth, and that's it. I'm not expecting you to answer like some epiphany meme, just consider it.

>> No.3615419

>>3615401
There are still mistakes in your work. >>3613921 It almost looks like she's trying to go to sleep rather than popping that ass up like the good little slut she is. I'll call it fucking retarded, just to make you feel like shit.

But do you see how after someone's called out shit work shit, you can either do one of several things? You can lash out like a spoiled little brat and yell out "PosT YeR WRKZ CrAB" in an effort to endorphin their way through the critique or you can answer like an artist with balls, "Dude, quit being a faggot and show me. If you can't draw yourself, go pull some reference pictures from your giant library of porn and help me out."

And you did. You see how the hands look like they're really grabbing that sheet with fuckable passion? That shows you want to learn, REALLY learn and not post your work in this thread like a refrigerator full of, "Look at me Mommy and Daddy, I drawz Teh Pornz!" at nauseating levels. You're still blocking in the body when you shouldn't need to, but I get that you're scared and you don't want to fuck up. Aside from the left arm looking like it went through a Play-Doh stencil while the left knee displays a poor substitute for a Transformers toy joint, at least the drawing looks like she's fucking horny. It's progress to say the least. You still have a lot to learn faggot, so suck it up, get your tablet ready and give that shit another go.

You're showing more initiative than the other shmucks; you've got guts to post that WIP again and ask again, "Hey douchebags, what else should I work on? Quit being faggots, help."

I'll agree with this: >>3614839 It's nice to see some of you swallow your fucking pride like a mouthful of come, except for these two fuckwads >>3614009 >>3614690 who refuse to learn a god damn thing after being told OVER and OVER and OVER again what to work on. They just don't like what was critiqued because we're not praising their shit as the second cumshot of Christ.

>> No.3615472

>>3615419
>told them over and over
i see no corrections here aside from one about a neck for >>3614690
so when is this meme going to die, show how you'd do it different or shut up

>> No.3615481

>>3615472
post your work :)

>> No.3615488
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>>3615472
Jameson, is that you? :)

>> No.3615493

>>3615488
Oh boy

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>>3615488
who? naw man, that's not me

>> No.3615501

>>3614175
Thats fine but the legs dont match the body. The perspective is fucked.

>> No.3615502

>>3615495
I'll do you one better gordo, I'll draw your abomination better. Watch. :)

>> No.3615503

>>3615501
like the legs should be longer? cause i can edit that

>>3615502 cool

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>>3615495
I could use some critique on my work.

>> No.3615615

>>3615605
interesting, it's a little late where i am right now and i open at the store tomorrow, but i'll give you the benifit of the doubt that this is in good faith and i'll try to do somethin for this tomorrow

>> No.3615697

>>3615419

So do use construction when you draw then? Or do you just lay it down like that dude in the video?

>> No.3615766

>>3615372
bro, stop lording yourself the king of spergs and post your shit. back this shit with skill

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>>3615495
Your faces and hair always get a good ol' belly laugh out of me. Also his right leg's foot is fucked, the leg is moving forward in space while the foot is drawn as if the leg where going back into space.

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>>3615495
Your faces and hair always get a good ol' belly laugh out of me. Also his right leg's foot is fucked, the leg is moving forward in space while the foot is drawn as if the leg were going back into space.

>> No.3615779

>>3615615
neither its empty bs

he sperged out at Bbc thinking he was going to ruin her with his shit

everyone called him out at being a massive faggot

He doesnt contribute shit look how he just quotes others

>> No.3615791

>>3615779
i figured that was the case,the dumb angsty 'deep shit' lines straigt out of some Burmese shadow puppet play were a bit of a giveaway, but was gonna take the opportunity to try and redline it so i could flex my critique muscles, since i don't often do full breakdowns of other peoples images
>>3615767
>>3615769
smooth bud, bet no one will notice

>> No.3615819

>>3615791
It's 5 am and I'm tired, so cut me some slack, ya bitch.

>> No.3615820

>>3615819
what, can't handle even the slightest bit of the bantz? man what a snowflake

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>>3615820
"bantz" alright Solz, I caught you, now get out off this board you supershitter.

>> No.3615831

>>3615697
dude hes never going to post his shit

the fact he admits he is copying is gold

flint and the guy doing the puazi bitch gets better while he flings shit

since he admits he should show he learned shit.

>> No.3615833

>>3615488
didnt he own up to this?

>>3615005
looks like he actually learned a thing or two. Damn...

>> No.3615855

>>3615779
>he sperged out at Bbc thinking he was going to ruin her with his shit
>her
him

>> No.3615924

>>3615495
Legs physically cannot twist like that. Dial it back. You can have a dynamic pose without breaking the body.

Please for the love of God study skulls and head construction, read Loomis at least ONCE. You have clearly no idea how a head looks, the features are unnaturally proportioned and poorly placed.

>> No.3615926

>>3615605
Wrists are too thick and forearms don't have the correct shape. Also the viewer left foot is a tragedy, face it the other way.

Get rid of the text, it's 3edgy5me

>> No.3616246

>>3615697
I just lay it down like Adam Hughes does in the video, but I also have reference material near me to help me better visualise what I'm going to freehand down on paper. Without some form of visual reference for me to see, I make mistakes just like you do, sometimes even worse, which only furthers the point about using reference material as your guide when you begin to draw a picture. There's really no need to complicate the process man, unless you have a problem visualizing your work, which is common among amateur artists and it's, something rarely confessed. Which is why I mentioned you probably being scared about abandoning that technique altogether. If you're barely starting out how to draw, I imagine it's a necessary evil. But if you've been using that meat market cut out technique for years, hey, sometimes we need butchers butchering up the process. How long have you been drawing?

>> No.3616248

>>3615926
so the artist should have drawn the foot backwards? that doesn't make sense

>> No.3616252

>>3615766
post your work first :)

>> No.3616254

>>3615779
post your work :)

>> No.3616255

>>3615372
>>3615401
>>3615419
Alright, thanks a lot.

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Any glaring errors?

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>>3616261
I'm just assuming there's a waterfall in the back but I hope it helps?

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>> No.3616489

>>3616472
Like it, but breasts seem supported from below rather than pushed together.

>> No.3616498

>>3616472
blog?

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>>3616489
Any better?

>> No.3616508

>>3616504
Much better!

>> No.3616565

>>3614690
Any updates?

>> No.3616804

>>3616565
I had a long shift today, but thankfully tomorrow will be a short one and I will be able to get quite a bit done.

Hit me up at my Discord at Hardstones McFlintcock#1729 tomorrow after 1 PM. I will prepare some corrections and propose a couple ideas to help improve the scene.

>> No.3616805

>>3614702
teens are usually underage... just accept OP contradicted themself, stop worrying about morals, and just draw or fap faggot

>> No.3616821

>>3616805
it's not about morals, dumbass. any smut artist that wants to make a career must ditch underage pedo shit.

>> No.3617033

>>3613921
i would modify your model in design doll first before posing.

>> No.3617145

>>3616821
then explain shadman retard, that untalented fuck draws illegal shit all the time. if youre gonna have morals own up to your fucking hypocritical mistake faggot

>> No.3617201

>>3616472
Her belly is flat and doesn't follow the perspective. It looks more like you see it from the side and not from above like everything else. Her shoulders are a little bit off perspective too I think, but it is not really disturbing.
Otherwise that's some good stuff right here.

>> No.3617304

>>3617145
lol, you know the guy was almost put in prison and had to run from Swiss to the States for the same reason?
you picked a fantastic example, dumbass.
are YOU going to own to your retarded mistake now, pedo?

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>> No.3617626

>>3616821
>any smut artist that wants to make a career
Worrying about subject matter seems silly considering since all smut artists are on shaky ground simply for dealing in one of the things most payment processors either restrict or explicitly prohibit. You might as well be telling people not to draw porn at all.

>> No.3617653

>>3617626
The difference is that pedo art is illegal in most world countries, while vanilla porn isnt.
Don't be stupid, stupid.

>> No.3617662 [DELETED] 
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I dunno if this even counts as porn but it's not sfw. Gonna shade it & color it eventually. I think she's cute <3

>> No.3617824
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Progress update

>> No.3617894

>>3617304
pretty sure it was germany, not switzerland, and he wasn't at risk of going to prison, he got kicked out of art school because he drew a swastika on a girl so he moved to the states

>> No.3617940

>>3617894
yes, he moved to the states cause he drew a swastika on a girl, lmao.

>> No.3617949
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>>3617824
Your forms are rendered very harshly and faces are generally unappealing. Generally with porn, its more appealing to have a smaller range of values, especially with a style like yours. Otherwise it can be a bit jarring.

>> No.3617951

>>3617949
Pssst
It's because he t r a c e s and doesn't understand what he's coloring

>> No.3617992
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3617992

>>3617949
I set it to gray-scale via max Saturation layer. The value ranges look fine. Does your critique extend to color choices too? For my style, who would you recommend I follow and study?

>> No.3618044

>>3616248
jesus christ i fuckin lost it

>> No.3618056

>>3617949
Thank you for somewhat fixing the retarded abs.

>> No.3618067
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3618067

I'm new at digital painting
I made this with photoshop based on a picture of my GF.
The hair looks terrible and the tone is a bit dull, what can I do to improve?
My kik is Knightsauce if you wanna chat.

>> No.3618089

>>3618056
dude, anon just blurred that shit it looks much worse

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>> No.3618112

>>3618089
Nah. Looks much better than the ham-wrapped-in-twine look

>> No.3618213
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3618213

WIP

>> No.3618411
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3618411

Going to touch up a few things

>> No.3618415

>>3618107
dont you ever get tired of posting the same terrible drawing over and over? yikes yikes

>> No.3618416

>>3616469
Can you be my mentor please?

>> No.3618435

>>3618411
i think the fingers r a bit thin

>> No.3618528

>>3618112
blurs the colors to a mess anon uglied it up so much

>> No.3618550

>>3617992
Saturation layer? Fill a layer with black or white or gray and set the layer modes to Color
That will give you a much more accurate depiction of your values
No wonder you somehow think they look okay

>> No.3618551

>let's have a Hardstones Mcflintcock thread

>> No.3618757

>>3618551
>Thread made specifically for posting work and getting critique
>Guy is posting his work to get critique
Not really seeing the issue here.

>> No.3618771

>>3616246

I started the end of last year man so very early days haha

Well its always good to hear different points of view at least

>> No.3618772

>>3618411
Good stuff. Keep it up.

>> No.3618773

>>3618757
>Porn threads spam the whole board
>Not really seeing the issue

>> No.3618792

>>3618773
>One thread is spam
???

>> No.3618800

>>3614702
the more you try to justify it the more suspect you look sperg.
>the stupid i called stupid
you have to go back

>> No.3618809

>>3618800
I just know the difference between anime stylization of adult characters, which basically translates to childlike exagerated facial features on an adult body, and loli or shota illustrations.

Seriously, stop reaching.

>> No.3618816

>>3618809
Seriously, stop posting.
>>3616805

>> No.3618849
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i started painting over a bowsette picture last night

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>>3618849

im not sure what to do with the mouth

>> No.3618965

>>3618849
>>3618850
Mouth's definitely wonky, try looking at other bowsettes and see how they did theirs.
Also: How do you get the skin color so nice, the transitions etc.? I can't for the life of me get it right.

>> No.3618989

>>3618816
I'll post as much as I want.

Now, say that you'll reach as much as you want. Do it, faggot.

>> No.3619049
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3619049

Will work on the cum alt after lunch.

>> No.3619057
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3619057

Personal work for a visual novel project. The red silhouette will undergo the most changes.

>> No.3619080

>>3619049
Bruh, if you're adding movement that quick like that to the breasts, you should add more thrust onto the pelvis of the one penetrating. Her gesture/posure doesn't add up on the lower part.

>> No.3619085

>>3619080
I was about to post the exact same thing it looks so weird.

Not to mention the dickgirl's breast not being compressed against anything and somehow jutting over the other girl's thigh? Like, what? It's like they're clipping through each other in a game or something

>> No.3619139

>>3614379
I wanna commission you. Blog?

>> No.3619156

>>3619080
>>3619085
Thanks. I will work the issues out after I finish a facial alt for a project piece.

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3619187

>>3617992
>The value ranges look fine.

>> No.3619191

>>3616469
This helped a ton! Unfortunately I think the poses I originally went with were just way too stiff to begin with, I'll have to do a better job of gesture next time.

Thanks again!

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>> No.3619260
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>>3619049
I'm probably going to get shit for my hands but its a struggle some of us have.
However, the fingers were still too thin.
I also made the blondie's arm curve our more at the top.I brought up her eyebrow just a little as well and erased some lines on her tongue.
I tried to get rid of some of the motion lines.

>> No.3619263

Why do you people respond to insults that offer no actual criticism? Don't respond to them, they'll lose interest if they are ignored.
Then two things either happen, they offer advice along with their insults which you can still make use of or they stop posting because they have nothing to offer and no one is giving them the attention.
Some of you are way too easily wound up and take the bait.

>> No.3619283

>>3618965

use the default soft round brush and set the flow to 10-20%, depending on how much you dont trust yourself.

use big brushes and then go smaller as you work. also look at a lot of AJ stuff, he's the god of skin surface in my world.

>> No.3619366

>>3619263
Says the faggot instigator who keeps up bringing up this point again and again. No one asked you to karma police this thread.

>> No.3619389

>>3619260
And you still didn't take the motion of the bodies critique into cosideration, Jameson. I swear you just post your work here to feed your ego and show off that you're better than anyone else here. I'm glad to see that despite your tries at trying to add fluid movement to your static images, you still manage to fail at basic fundamentals.

>> No.3619390

>>3619260
Anon, it looks a thousand times worse. Unless they are supposed to look like they were injected with deathclaw DNA, I don't see why McFlint would do this.

>> No.3619391

>>3619389
>And you still didn't take the motion of the bodies critique into cosideration
I'm disappointed in him too. I feel like he intentionally misunderstands things people say to him.

>There are motion lines on the breasts but nowhere else, you need to add them down near the hips or you need to take the ones on the breasts away
>"Guess I'll do neither!"

Just stop giving him critiques he never fucking listens anyways.

I feel bad for anyone who commissioned him. I wonder if he even listens to them :(

>> No.3619394

>>3619260
Good job on Leifeld-ing up the entire left hand side of that shemale's body, making it completely non-existent. With every subsequent drawing you create, you provide better evidence to how incredibly incompetent your skills are. You don't even know how to use, or trace for that matter, your reference pictures correctly.

>> No.3619397

>>3619391
Just stop giving him feedback on his work altogether and focus on other drawfags. The criitiques are spot on, don't stop giving out food advice like that.

>> No.3619398

>>3619397
Good, I mean.

>> No.3619401

>>3619397
Yeah that's what I'm gonna do I'm sick of his shit. Why ask if you're not going to change anything anyways and just keep tracing? I'd like to see him get 100% ignored one of these days asking for critiques and getting no attention.

Unfortunately I don't think that'll happen someone always falls for it

>> No.3619403

>>3619394
>>3619390
>>3619389

thanks for the critique on my redline but i am not McFlint
I just thought the hands and arm looked off was all.

>> No.3619416

>>3619403
Oh okay well sometimes he forgets to put his name on and does stuff in anon. Sorry bro.

Just stop trying he always says he'll listen and then comes back with "small revisions" that don't even take anything anyone said into account. It's a serious waste of time that could be spent on people who will actually appreciate and use the help. Don't let him fool you, he may whine and bitch and beg for help but he really just wants asspats.

>> No.3619461

>>3619416
I'm kind of new when it comes to the members that go here often.
I always thought that some people could be slow learners or dont have an idea of how to apply or understand a certain technique.
I have no idea how long this person has been posting their art for so i just saw this guy as some who doesnt know how to apply a technique to their style, i guess?
I struggle with this myself so i didnt want to seem like the type of person who is trying to be better than someone else.If i see a mistake i try to fix it in the best of my ability.

>> No.3619469

>>3619389
>spergs out
>not even him lol
>"j-j-just because he's better that us...commission us pls!"

never change, /ic

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>> No.3619493

>>3619461
It's not about being better than anyone or not it's just that you shouldn't waste your time critiquing him specifically. Some people ask for critique and are really looking for people to say "oh its amazing you don't need to change anything" and he's one of those. He doesn't want to work at getting better he just wants compliments and he will shitpost and argue until you give up.

Just trying to warn you and save you the trouble.

>> No.3619499

>>3618067
Stop tracing photos and learn how to draw, and no one gives a fuck about your gf or kik sorry anon.

>> No.3619503

>>3618528
Is the only reason you use a name to defend yourself on anon?

Maybe the colors got a little muddy but some anon isn’t going to painstakingly reblend your entire piece. They did enough to get the point across, and what they posted is 100% more fappable than the monstrosity you’re working on

>> No.3619519

>>3619403
My bad. I thought you were Jameson. Sometimes that faggot anon's it up just to keep his desuarchive shitpost down to a minimum.

>> No.3619545

>>3619403
>>3619391

>> No.3619570

>>3619519
>>3619493
i know that my redline wasn't the best but i felt the hands and arm needed work.
Now that you guys now i am different anon was it that terrible?
Even i noticed that my redline was off but i felt i could convey an idea of what could be fixed on.
I guess i'll stop responding to Mcflint on here if thats the case.I wish you all good luck on your art

>> No.3619599

>>3619057
The red one is the best imho why change that one

>> No.3619602

>>3616248
Yeah thats exactly what i meant, retard /s

>> No.3619605
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Purple sketch: getting a feel for the anatomy.
Red rhythm lines for pushing the next round further to create more dynamic gestures the next go around. Will add the perspective lines and go from there.

>> No.3619618

>>3619570
You went back and tried to fix a train wreck, so don't blame yourself for trying to salvage what you could by adding and subtracting what you did to the picture. I don't want to give out too much info on what needs to be changed because we're beating a dead horse with that faggot Flintstone. Focus more on the other drawfags who aren't looking for a pat on the head. Keep up the good critiques.

>>3619195
You're committing the same anatomical problems as this faggot >>3619049 . Study your reference picture more carefully on how the bodies are placed. If you're not using reference, start using it, just don't blatantly trace it. >>3615488

>>3618771
You're still in the beginning stages of your drawing, man. It's good to hear different points of view, and take what you need from them. Harsh critiques work as well. Watch more vids from VZA on youtube. Aside from VZA sucking Jim Lee cock over the last couple of months, you can go back on the channel and find some pretty good inspiration from all types of artists. Jim Lee himself was a part of the flunkies who created Image Comics, but at least his inking techniques are well worth a look at.

>> No.3619620

>>3619602
Gotta get better at drawing feet, check. Thanks for the heads up on the foot, the wrists and the forearms.

>> No.3619810

>>3619618
redmatzoo? is that u?

>> No.3619967

>>3619618
>>You're committing the same anatomical problems as this faggot >>3619049 . Study your reference picture more carefully on how the bodies are placed. If you're not using reference, start using it, just don't blatantly trace it.

could you be more specific? I do these as an exercises in imaginaive drawing so i try to refrain från referencing during the creation. although i do preliminary studies.

>> No.3620218

>>3619618
>If you're not using reference, start using it, just don't blatantly trace it. >>3615488
Do you even know what tracing is?
That pic may be heavily referenced, but it's nowhere near being traced lol.

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>>3616472
Here's how you can improve this picture anon. banter aside it looks really nice. you did a good job with the shading.

>> No.3620459

>>3614009
the person on the right torso leg ratio is fucked

>> No.3620518
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3620518

Where is a good place to start learning how to draw porn? I'm not an artist at all. and I'm not looking to create hyper detailed drawings. Just some generic lewds. Stuff like this I guess. But not, based off of ponies. Can I learn by drawing over stuff? and learning how to trace at first? I've got a surface pro and a pen.

>> No.3620585

>>3620518
>Where is a good place to start learning how to draw
>I'm not an artist at all.

>>1579290
>>3619680

>> No.3620698
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Progress update on the request.

>> No.3621056
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Update.

>> No.3621095

>>3621056
I think this is hawt, will tell you the reasons why.
1. Fingers are rounded, no semi outlined fingernails which most "japanese art" is outs out.
2.Everything looks cleaned up with no half assing that I can detect.

Just a LITTLE thing I found wrong with this drawing is that the woman lying on her back should have more expression in arousal, since she is getting fingered with how many fingers are in her snatch and how deep they are in her.

Just some constructive criticism which will help YOU, instead of trying to make you feel like shit by saying something along the lines of "WTF!! THIS SHOULD BE MOOOOOREE SEXY YOU FUCKING FAGGOT, why do you not go to drawing lessons by proko, you non-proko FAGGGG" because no one learns by having these sorts of things said to them.

Keep going with your drawing because I find it HOT.

>> No.3621102

>>3621095
I was drunk making these posts so that second line is way out of whack.
It's meant to say "which most "Japanese art" PUTS out"

>> No.3621182 [DELETED] 

>>3621095
>>3621102

When you are ready, please contact me with your most recent work. I extend an invitation to join me for a gesture drawing session, shoukd you choose to accept it, after we work something out.

Thank you for your time.

>> No.3621187

>>3621095
>>3621102
When you are ready, please contact me with your most recent work. I extend an invitation to join me for a gesture drawing session, if that is alright with you, and after we work something out.

Thank you for your time.

>> No.3621335
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3621335

first time drawing porn, any crits/redline?

>> No.3621356
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Can i get a critique of this?

>> No.3621377

>>3621335
physically impossible, totally broken anatomy. and not in a 'pushing the limit, but I'll suspend my disbelief' way, in an alien worm way. you just need to study anatomy.

>> No.3621419

>>3621356
your perspective is messed up with regards to size. you can view it as either the heads are too small or the asses are too big. just look at the thumbnail image and you'll see how wrong it is. I couldn't even tell what the picture was supposed to be before I expanded it. I thought maybe those were boobs and fat rolls.

>> No.3621501

>>3621377
Problem isn't as much anatomy as it is perspective.

>> No.3621524
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>>3617992
The main problem i see is that you're going too hard and fast on the contrast of values. Her body almost looks insect like. You're trying too hard to render every bulge/muscle/fold with hard punchy contrast. Your highlights are saturated while your shadows lack saturation, which is generally the opposite of what you should do. You're adding deep shadows to major areas that should really only be used for AO areas like under the hair or the crease under the breast. Have a light touch and be gentle when adding contrast. Try to keep the value range fairly flat until near the end where you can then add in low opacity layers to add more contrast. Here is a quick and incomplete paintover for you to get an idea of what i mean.

>> No.3621530

>>3621524
Also, don't use black lines, or at least don't leave them black. Adjust them so they are a bit darker than the area they are near. Instead of trying to render each ab bulge you just "indicate" the structure with subtle values.

>> No.3621547

>>3621187
I started to try and draw skulls as my first step in trying to draw figures like yours, I am only a beginner that can't draw much of anything so I find myself get some inspiration, trying to draw skulls, draw a bad looking skull and then sort of.....trail off?
I won't be able to draw stuff like yours without knowing the anatomy.

>> No.3621890

>>3621524
woah besides the no nips this shading is really good.

>> No.3621893

>>3621056
OP requester here. They don't look loli (not pedo) enough and too uncanny from anime style. A damn shame. Then again I don't browse these crabby threads often so I'm not familiar with its regulars and their styles. However I was assuming you drew in an anime style since you offered to do it.

I guess this is why I should just learn to draw my own porn.

>> No.3621913

>>3621893
he cant trace a photo for loli porn

>> No.3621934

>>3621893
just GTFO and never come back to these threads with your retarded requests, pathetic piece of shit.

you make a request, you get some stuff for free, and then you don't even have the courtesy of saying thanks.
literal human garbage.

>> No.3621935

>>3621913
learn what tracing is, dumbass.

>> No.3621938
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>>3621547
The best advice I can give is to first construct basic three dimensional shapes in perspective. Keep at it until it is as easy as getting up and stretching.

Over time and practice, you will develop the construction to convince the viewer of your illusion of the skull, sculpted unto two dimensions. Those basic spheres, cyllinders, and boxes will help understand the form, lighting, perspective, etc. of what you want to draw and how to give those illusions life.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FzHV2h29zE

Watch this video and take note of the construction technique used. Combining perspective and Loomis' method, the artist is able to construct a turnaround of his character with relative ease.

Once you can draw those boxes comfortably, apply the Loomis method with some proportions studies, while leaving enough time to draw something for the hell of it.

Come on by and share it with us, and we'll be happy to provide you with constructive criticism.

Lastly, let me know if you have any questions. I will answer to the best of my ability.

>> No.3621946

>>3621524
This was enormously helpful. Thank you for taking the time to do this.

>> No.3621954

>>3621934
I actually did write a thank you in my original writing of the post but I wrote so much and forgot to login to my pass so it got deleted, along with a bunch of other things related to the piece. So that post is a condensed version.

But your post is the reason why I don't come in these threads. So hostile.

>> No.3621959

>>3621913
He did construction so it's not a trace.

>> No.3621975

>>3621938
Thanks for this advice.

I have hypothyroid and this effects my energy levels, I just want to point this out because it's related to hormones.

I have a hard time when I go to draw lines for sketching, I can't get the bloody settings in ArtRage right so that the pencil doesn't have a lot of dots trying to simulate a real pencil.
This sort of thing really holds me back because I am using up my energy trying to sort it out which means losing motivation for practising drawing.

I am always unhappy with the way my strokes appear on the canvas, even with the damn ink pen.
350 DPI I thought was high enough and canvas size is 1200x850

>> No.3621981

>>3621913
>he cant trace a photo for loli porn
why do people say he traces when he gives us a wip and a sketch construction?

>> No.3621989

>>3621935
>>3621959
>>3621981
>samefagging this hard
We know it's you.

>> No.3621998

>>3621959
>>3621981
I know this is the "artist" in question but i'll let you in on a secret, its quite easy to sketch over a picture and create faux construction, and many people are aware you can do this.
it is ridiculously funny now that I realize you only post WIPs not for critique but to "prove" you don't trace
lmfao fuck off tracer

>> No.3622002

>>3621998
im not the artist, fagmo, I'm the requester. Just look at my time stamp. literally seconds apart.

>> No.3622003

>>3622002
now look at it again. my post again.

>> No.3622111

>>3619967
Look closely at the mistakes your making with your anatomy when trying these exercises in "imaginitive drawing", which doesn't exist by the way and you'd best learn to stay away from it if you're barely learning how to draw. The angle of the shoulders is off even from that angle, the tits are lifeless and plastic, the facial features—although still comic book in variation— still have to look somewhat realistic. And by the by, pussy lips don't baby bottle nipple like that unless, well, never really. Even if she was cherry there would still be some give to that cock she's devouring. You're also hiding your hands and feet, which as a beginner I highly encourage you practice on along with the rest of the body.

I like the theme you're going for in the drawing; a Young Justice Wonder Girl getting her first taste of cock, the Lasso of Truth around her neck showing us the truth of who she really is.

But because we're thrown off by the mistakes, you can see how an awesome theme like that can get lost by the wayside real quick.

You are however, using your light source correctly. I like how the right arm is cast in the shadow of the body like its supposed to with just a hint of reflective lighting coming off the green background. A few of the shadows are a bit to hard, like on the breasts, but that can be easily changed.

Get rid of those Kim K lips, though. Yikes, you want to draw Wonder Girl, not Wednesday from the Addams Family.

So if you're still around, much like this cat >>3613921 keep at it and you guys will see progress in your work.

>>3620218
I'm gonna give you one more shot at looking at that Jameson Trace job to see if you can really tell where the tracing is, kid.

>> No.3622126

>>3621954
GTFO already, ungrateful piece of crap.

>> No.3622127
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>>3621989
Sure you do, crab.

>> No.3622129

>>3622111
>I'm gonna give you one more shot at looking at that Jameson Trace job to see if you can really tell where the tracing is, kid.
>kid
LMAO
GTFO

>> No.3622136
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>>3621989
heres mine
Usually i assume some people are samefagging sometimes if the anon is being repetitive
but this makes me rethink those ideas now.

>> No.3622145
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Playing around with a rough sketch, free hand.

Will apply the perspective grid and start the linear lay-in. Will need to fix Baiken's legs (spread in the next version) and her left breast .

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*whistles* That was quite a schnozz in the previous version.

>> No.3622161

>>3622129
So you're a dumbfuck who's older and still can't tell the difference. Glad we know that about you faggot

>> No.3622162

>>3622126
No worries, I always hide these threads.

>> No.3622178

>>3622161
>Glad we know that about you faggot
>we
>being this insecure
LMAO
GTFO

>> No.3622180

>>3622162
why are you still here, human garbage?

>> No.3622203

What in the ever loving fuck is going on in this thread?

>> No.3622347

>>3622178
LMAO
GTFO

>>3622203
Shut the fuck up Jameson, you're the one shitting up most of it with your traced, unpolished turds.

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>> No.3622385
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>> No.3622398

>>3622364
oddly mesmerizing?

>> No.3622402

>>3622385
b r a p

>> No.3622406

>>3622364
Why animate the worst part of the motion?

>> No.3622408

>>3622398
thanks

>> No.3622410

>>3622406
no part is the "worst" part, of this ;) lol
Why do you think its the worst part of the motion. just asking

>> No.3622417
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>>3622347
>gif very much applies

>>3622364
Love to see more of this study. Keep it up!

>> No.3622479
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Blocking in the colors

>> No.3622491

>Porn Thread
>none of the contributions are fappable worthy

what is this

>> No.3622615
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>> No.3622629

>>3615005
His tiny baby thumbs/hands are disturbing

>> No.3622637

>>3622111
Thank you for your time! I just have some question, What makes tits lifeless and plastic do you think? And what in the world do you mean that pussy lips dont baby bottle nipple? I dont disagree I just dont know what you are saying. Why do you say imaginative drawing doesnt exist? Also have you been drawing porn for a long time? or do you just like to watch drawn porn? Could you tell me some valuable lessons and show me you progress?
thanks again!

>> No.3622713

>>3622479
Too much black in the shadows again. Looks like soot. Use a reddish color for shadows, and a desaturated whitish yellow for highlight. Your oversaturating the local color of the skin and it makes the shadows look more like soot than it already does. Add in that pinkish color your have for the skin to areas that actually have it like the cheeks, nose, a bit of flushing on the chest, pussy, knees, elbows etc. A good thing to remember is "never use lines for what you can describe with just values."

Keeping the lines is fine, but practicing painting the area and slowly getting rid of the lines will help with your knowledge of values and transitions/edges...it's not easy though.

>> No.3622728
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I've likely fucked up the perspective, so I'm only asking if the render & colors are appealing and if I should make the hair stick less to her back and fall down more freely from a composition standpoint.

>> No.3622752
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>> No.3622771

>>3615495
>this massive faggot with poor taste will get better than all of /ic/ by the sheer power of dedication
holy kek

>> No.3622783

>>3622771
That's how it usually works. We all started somewhere. No one, except for some savants, is born with innate drawing skills.

>> No.3622785

Is there a good reference library out there for specific porn poses and positions? Like stuff that's good to work with and doesn't just crop our random shit? Cuz I'm usually looking for full body or at least 3/4ths of the entire (passive partner's) body for a pic and most porn has some shit cropping on otherwise perfect reference. I feel like that would be fucking useful.

>> No.3622788

Camasutra?

>> No.3622812

>>3622728
why the fuck would it stick to her back? in some parts it almost looks like its growing out of her back

>> No.3622839
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Update

>> No.3622902
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>> No.3622907
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>>3622812
What about this?

>> No.3622923

>>3622907
That's not how hands and wrists work.

>> No.3623008

>>3622923
OK, thanks for noticing.

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>>3622728
>cutefootjob
>cute
Anon, I...

>> No.3623421
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>>3623103
なんだよ、てめぇ?喧嘩を売ってるのぅ?さっさと出てこい、ボケ!

>> No.3623441

>>3623421
>tfw can't roll Rs
>will never be able to sound like a disgruntled ossan

>> No.3623521
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Something about her right elbow is really bothering me but I'm not sure what, is the forearm too thin?
Also was trying for a small/flat chest (but feminine), but it just look masculine like it came from a bad trap.
>>3622752
>>3622615
Blogs? Really liking these

>> No.3623589

>>3623521
blog?

>> No.3623620

>>3613671
misty was best pokemons grill.

>> No.3623646
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>>3623620
Incorrect.

>> No.3623673

>>3623589
Melkosan.tumblr.com

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Need a critique guys. This is a second part of a set in a commission. Thanks in advance

>> No.3623844
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>>3623521
Im going to go out on a limb and say that man is copying koki. Im >>3622752 and you can find me here https://twitter.com/Juste_VU

>> No.3623892

>>3622839
You should really use more references, abdominal muscles don’t look like that, the breasts are attached strangely, and there shouldn’t be an indent above her vulva. The pubic bone juts out even if a person has low body fat.

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day 2 getting a little better

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>> No.3624541

best pokemon grill was cynthia; any naysayers are liars and should cease to exist

>> No.3624545

>>3621975
>hypothyroid;
you poor soul :'( i know that feel. do you feel excessively drained no matter how much sleep u get?

>> No.3624554

>>3624545
Yes. I have went to a herbalist and has given me a supplement which just about allows me to have energy.

Upon further investigation into my situation I think I may actually have Hashimoto's, which is caused by having low bacteria in the gut.
I got a blood test done by letsgetchecked.com and the nurse that called me on the phone said that there was something in my blood being caused by an auto-immune response, so this to me says that it's actually Hashimotos....

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fell like im probably a bit too shit to post here but here i go.

>> No.3624694

>>3624682
then dont post it

>> No.3624696

>>3624694
bbut i still want some critique, is there any other thread that is better for that?

>> No.3624720

>>3624541
tone down the autism.

>> No.3624864

>>3624696
I guess that anon meant if you know its shit then dont post but thats not 100% true and yes you posted in the right place.

>> No.3625298

>>3617304
well im not the one hypocrtically posting underage drawins, then calling anyone who DOES make or post these things pedos now am I?

youre the one defending the misty drawing in the OP? I have done nothing

>> No.3625299

>>3617653
>Don't be stupid, stupid.
follow your own rules about content lol, the misty pic doesnt belong if youre gonna ban loli

>> No.3625334

>>3625299
there's a big difference between children looking characters and legal teens.