Alternative Art/Stylization General

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Alternative Art/Stylization General Chicocalte !4Ltr1vH/Dk Tue Sep 18 17:52:01 2018 No.3607765 [Reply] [Original]

last thread >>3597834

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I'm a highlord weeb. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor approved). If you'd like, post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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How many times can you say "miruku" before running out of breath?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 17:57:12 2018 No.3607774 mikuru? what's a mikuru?

>>	Chicocalte !4Ltr1vH/Dk Tue Sep 18 17:59:41 2018 No.3607776 File: 193 KB, 399x935, Mikuru_Asahina.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3607774 First result on Google yields me this.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 18:05:37 2018 No.3607782 File: 125 KB, 600x600, Bold and Brash.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 18:07:47 2018 No.3607784 File: 301 KB, 626x767, 123456789.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hmmm

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 18:22:38 2018 No.3607801 >>3607774 >>3607776 it says miruku you fucking idiots

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 18:25:02 2018 No.3607802 File: 1006 KB, 1126x1080, 1525189211941.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3607801

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 18:26:10 2018 No.3607804 File: 417 KB, 1127x906, lewyn.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] feels strange seeing my own stuff in the catalog...

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:07:14 2018 No.3607898 File: 120 KB, 658x1021, 1523031253595.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] doodle >>3607498 gib redline get answer >>3607532 wrong answer

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:14:07 2018 No.3607906 >>3607802 why are you trying to be smug, youre not clever

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:16:35 2018 No.3607909 >>3607898 malnourished

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:16:55 2018 No.3607910 >>3607898 youre regressing by each post

Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:46:12 2018 No.3607931

>>3607784
your colors always look nice but you really have to work on your basics man. the shoulders, the arms, the irises, the hips, they all look like you dont really feel like working on them.i think you should really try and study the arms and make the best of the image to learn something.
also i personally find the pink tones a bit too bright, but that ight just be preference. i think your hair is a bit too big and chunky in the pigtails, i only recognized it was supposed to be natsuki because of the little hairpins in the front, maybe you could touch up the pigtails with a bit more delicate hair strands?
just my thoughts on this one, i do like how you approach color though, just wanted to say it again

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 20:55:47 2018 No.3607938 >>3607931 kys

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:21:41 2018 No.3607954 File: 328 KB, 2000x1333, aaaaaa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3607898 i think her neck is too long and her body is too small, i don't draw lolis though so i don't know their body structure

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:29:32 2018 No.3607959 >>3607954 there is a whole lot of yikes going on in there. dont even know where to begin tb h

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:31:08 2018 No.3607961 >>3607959 you can start now

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:39:04 2018 No.3607969 >>3607954 Don't fall into the trap of drawing school girls because you can't draw drapery worth a shit so you fall back on symboling uniforms (and failing at it, too).

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:51:02 2018 No.3607987 File: 259 KB, 849x1200, Untitled-70.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3607969 >Don't fall into the trap of drawing school girls this is my first time drawing school girls lmao, i mostly draw cyberpunk bullshit

Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:51:33 2018 No.3607988
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Here's something I finally decided to linework, fixed up some stuff from an /ic/ redline, gonna color too, but I have a few questions: I'm thinking of adding her whole sword, and I dunno if the composition looks better with the whole sword and her pushed into a corner, or more like the original drawing where the sword is cut off but she's centered and fills the page. If I did the first I might try like a bloody trail/splatter behind the sword as a background element.

Also, If I draw the whiole sword, how the fuck do I do the perspective? It's supposed to be like "Cloud's Buster Sword" without the holes according to the character's creator, but the angle on the tip of the blade is messing me up. Any tips? I tried to figure it out on the right to no avail.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 21:54:04 2018 No.3607989 >>3607987 >skintight excuse At least you admit to bullshitting.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 22:04:54 2018 No.3607997 >>3607989 sure anon

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 22:53:46 2018 No.3608036 File: 1012 KB, 1387x2000, knownforit1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Tue Sep 18 22:58:29 2018 No.3608042
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>>3607988
>I did a red line but did not save it
If it's supposed to have edge in both sides yo're not showing it, by the angle you should be able to see both sides do some boxes and rotate it a bit until you understand what i mean or get a 3d model...
you have the box of the handle, mark it in the middle and follow it up, the edge should converge to that line
>TL;DR, one side edges cut like shiet
>edge must be in the middle of the handle
>the sword is pointing nowhere so I prefere pic related

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 23:11:55 2018 No.3608050 >>3607931 >i think your hair is a bit too big and chunky in the pigtails i like how figurines look, but it's a style i haven't perfected. i don't like elegant fine hair idk. thanks for the comment tho

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 23:45:29 2018 No.3608077 >>3607898 looks good anon, don't listen to these no taste chubby chasers

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 23:54:10 2018 No.3608082 File: 320 KB, 1170x910, New uuCatnvas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] moth warrior i guess lol. ill go ahead and color this tomorrow its late, gnight

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 18 23:55:42 2018 No.3608084 >>3608082 Can this be my waifu?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:07:14 2018 No.3608095 File: 3.33 MB, 2048x2732, D2F0E556-8896-439C-B70D-CE9558415E6E.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] added a mech

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:13:46 2018 No.3608099 File: 184 KB, 800x1200, komi.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i hope it looks like Komi

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:22:09 2018 No.3608105 >>3608095 Blog? This is adorable

>>	NoseBro Wed Sep 19 00:22:51 2018 No.3608107 >>3608105 oh you innocent child

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:26:22 2018 No.3608111 >>3608099 It looks like komi. Please do not lewd komi

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:29:12 2018 No.3608115 >>3608099 learn how to draw boobs that don't look like granny tits

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:29:36 2018 No.3608116 >>3608084 go 4 it anon but b careful shes really strong

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:30:11 2018 No.3608117 File: 220 KB, 800x783, pirate.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I can do this

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:31:09 2018 No.3608119 >>3608116 She can't beat the cock though

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:33:34 2018 No.3608121 >>3608117 Pirate my ass. She looks like a succubus with a fanny pack full of poison

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:44:07 2018 No.3608127 >>3608121 I was thinking the seme

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:48:48 2018 No.3608131 >>3608107 What am I missing?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:52:17 2018 No.3608136 theres some chink animator streaming ask something https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6VmCVGyGCw

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:56:08 2018 No.3608140 >>3607784 Like it. I would work on moving the nose to the right slightly and making the left eye smaller as it looks off compared to the right evil is small.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 00:58:57 2018 No.3608141 >>3608082 What would be interesting is if you made it kind of like a human wearing this as a costume somewhat. Female moth would look sexy.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 01:01:27 2018 No.3608145 >>3608099 Have the hand cover the breasts area and move the breasts up on the phone. Females have ribcages below the breast area. You could also make it look like a dimly lit area except for the phone that has a little bit of light to cover it up.

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 01:40:42 2018 No.3608181
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talbanian werewoof
always hate when draw is goin good but then i run outta paper cause lack of forethought an it crops awkwardly ;-;
also doomgal maybe

>>3608095
so cute, i love it nwn

>>3607988
i like this a whole heckin lot, i'll give you redline for sword in mornin when my brain isn't useless an about to passout hahsd;lfj

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 06:00:36 2018 No.3608437 File: 430 KB, 964x1364, 18.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Been painting for too long, lineart got rusty. But have some insect boobage.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 06:38:54 2018 No.3608477 >>3608145 solid advice anon, thanks

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 06:55:58 2018 No.3608484 File: 107 KB, 1115x1200, studying.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] some of my little shit, eddie been hoping to get a gag strip with him going at some point

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 07:44:28 2018 No.3608515

>>3608042
It's a tanto blade, so, edge on one side, with an angled tip.

>>3608181
Thanks anon

>>3608082
Great gesture, really dynamic. I just wish the lineart, especially on the bg/fg was more finished.

>>3608095
This is amazing, the rust, perspective, and designs are awesome. I'm also assuming you're gonna refine the linework, you should.

>>3608181
Good anatomy, spiky ass wolf

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 08:29:42 2018 No.3608534 >>3608515 i have a habit of rushing lineart haha. but thanks! it will probably look more finished when i color it in so that should help it!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 09:43:16 2018 No.3608574 >>3608437 Mommy!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 09:50:11 2018 No.3608579 >>3608140 thx for the help

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 10:22:11 2018 No.3608594 >>3608484 Need lewds of him

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 10:53:05 2018 No.3608613 File: 330 KB, 562x1000, IMG_20180919_154509.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] First rough draft of Martina from Dragon Quest XI

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 11:19:37 2018 No.3608624 >>3608082 lovely, blog?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 13:58:01 2018 No.3608761 >>3608624 im mothimoss on tumblr. and thanks :) not much on it b/c i just recently started uploading but ill keep doing so

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 14:00:09 2018 No.3608762 File: 101 KB, 1104x779, wip4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hi

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 14:59:34 2018 No.3608793 >>3608762

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:07:02 2018 No.3608797 File: 158 KB, 1140x1206, ses.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] first time drawing nippon, how am i doing?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:41:49 2018 No.3608834 >>3608797 the head is too small

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:46:25 2018 No.3608837 >>3608834 >implying that’s not how he likes his proportions

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:48:24 2018 No.3608838 >>3608837 >muh style!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:53:26 2018 No.3608840 >>3608838 >muh degeneracy Implying genetic engineering won't make actual people with those proportions within a few hundred years.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:54:46 2018 No.3608841 File: 183 KB, 1140x1206, mxi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3608834 >>3608837 No, no, I want to get things right. Learn the rules before I break them and all

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:58:09 2018 No.3608842 File: 131 KB, 848x1200, Dne0PZxU8AAF0hl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 15:59:34 2018 No.3608844 >>3608842 Uncensored and blog where

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:04:55 2018 No.3608850 >>3608844 https://twitter.com/ElakanMelon :^)

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:06:50 2018 No.3608851 >>3608850 >$5 a month Well, there goes my one cup of coffee. All in exchange for the greater good.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:47:36 2018 No.3608892 >>3608842 >>3608844 >>3608850 >>3608851 >post censored work >ask for sauce immediately as the post timer resets >wait five minutes like I'm fooling anyone >repeat step 2 Samefag harder

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:50:30 2018 No.3608896

>>3608841
That's better but it's still a tad small. Remember the head is about half the length of the rib cage (and the ribcage two times the length of the head). It's doubly off trying to be more anime, as the heads tend to be slightly large to make the proportions more neotic.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:51:40 2018 No.3608897 >>3608892 aw, looks like someone's jealous. Sorry nobody asks to see more of your shitty art

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:52:18 2018 No.3608899 >>3608484 looks like dont starve

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 16:57:30 2018 No.3608908

>>3608841
(I assume you're a beginner)
if you want to get things right you don't really want to start drawing anime right off the bat, especially if you want to learn the rules before breaking them.
study body proportions.
study from life or photography.
study from your favourite artists.

the issues i see, other than the head that you kind of corrected, are:
1) the pose is out of balance. she's leaning to the left. (you might want the axis of the shoulders not to be parallel to the hips)
2) the head is a bit wonky. the eyes aren't correctly placed. the ear is too low.

buuut your linework is okay. it's a bit chicken-scratchy, but overall it's pleasing.

i'm kinda a beginner too, so if anyone wants to correct me please do so. good luck anon.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 17:00:34 2018 No.3608915 File: 63 KB, 1199x491, Dm7mnHfWwAUBiPC.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3608899 i get that a lot, yeah lol. he's got some similarities to the style that i'm not inherently against, i love the art in DS

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 18:39:20 2018 No.3609022 >>3608082 >>3608915 >lol What is so fucking funny about what you wrote?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 18:46:21 2018 No.3609031 >>3609022 >REEE STOP TYPING LE OVERUSED MEMEEE WORRRD

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 18:50:58 2018 No.3609035 >>3609022 oh shit i quoted the wrong post fml i was replying to this >>3608899

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 18:53:22 2018 No.3609036 >>3609035 retard

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 18:57:34 2018 No.3609039 >>3609022 >>3609036 Shaddup >>3609031 based

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 19:16:53 2018 No.3609055 >>3609022 lol i just like to type lol when i typeall the time lol, cuz im always laughing out loud all day, lol, life is good when you are loling like me all day, lol.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 19:29:18 2018 No.3609070 >>3609022 Stay mad lmaoooo

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 19:35:40 2018 No.3609075 File: 59 KB, 657x527, 1535547187526.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609022 lol

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 19:45:47 2018 No.3609084 >>3609055 kek

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 19:47:32 2018 No.3609085 >>3609055 lol

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:01:30 2018 No.3609095 >>3607765 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBuJQBLOii0

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:08:34 2018 No.3609101 >>3608915 Oh joy, just what the world needs more of. More intelligent, nihilistic, wicked since of humor self inserts with smarmy brow syndrome. Obnoxious and generic in the same go, well done.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:08:52 2018 No.3609102 >>3609022 lol!

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:12:05 2018 No.3609105 >>3609101 >"reee youre not allowed to make things i dont personally like"

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:20:09 2018 No.3609110 File: 51 KB, 639x619, 1480834309668.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609101 imagine being this upset at a drawing

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:21:25 2018 No.3609111 File: 62 KB, 331x402, butthurt-faggot.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609101 slap

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:25:02 2018 No.3609114 >>3609055 But this is actually true

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:26:05 2018 No.3609116 >>3609101

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:46:10 2018 No.3609130
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>>3609101
lol hes not nihilistic at all, he's literally just a psychopath who does horrible things for fun. theres no social commentary, there's no snarky smug undertone. he's just a little shit you you're supposed to hate.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:49:37 2018 No.3609134 >>3609111 Pretty much, judging by all the (You)s coming off >>3609022 and >>3609101, there's a lot of butthurt in this thread :^)

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:52:26 2018 No.3609138 >>3609130 These colors are fantastic. Any sources you'd recommend?

Anonymous Wed Sep 19 20:56:32 2018 No.3609141

>>3609138
sources? you mean like processes? for these I just tried to pick a lighting theme (from left to right it was sunset, flashlight @ night, and and early morning) and worked with color layers until i found a palette that worked.
usually i just stick to multiply/overlay/glow for my lighting effects.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 21:02:50 2018 No.3609145 >>3609141 >usually i just stick to multiply/overlay/glow for my lighting effects. Interesting. The result you get is great imo. I'll have to mess around with layers some time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 21:13:05 2018 No.3609153 >>3609134 (You)

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>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 21:33:31 2018 No.3609169 >>3609101 suck me big

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 21:35:48 2018 No.3609170 >>3609101 I can smell your autism, faggot. Go outside and socialize

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 21:37:27 2018 No.3609173 Who let the retards out of /asg/?

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 19 22:18:44 2018 No.3609215 File: 2.46 MB, 1086x1086, who is this2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609164

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:05:23 2018 No.3609293 File: 376 KB, 700x1050, IMG_20180919_235952.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] still messing with face shapes :\|

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:19:59 2018 No.3609305 File: 115 KB, 1024x1117, snowy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bahablast

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:21:48 2018 No.3609308 >>3609305 oops uploaded bic head version

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:22:19 2018 No.3609312 File: 108 KB, 1024x1024, snowy2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609308 FAK

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:26:27 2018 No.3609315 >>3608892 ?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:57:23 2018 No.3609331 File: 137 KB, 426x1000, satchel.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] would like some help with anatomy, thank you

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 00:59:46 2018 No.3609334 File: 35 KB, 753x753, batter.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609215

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 01:40:36 2018 No.3609371 File: 441 KB, 1902x2429, 77E897F9-C17F-4ED5-B9D8-739450319DCA.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609130 I like it

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 01:45:08 2018 No.3609375 >>3609371 ah, im flattered!! also damn, nice sketch there... thank you so much, looks great!

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 01:55:12 2018 No.3609388

>>3607931 >>3607784

I'm gonna have to disagree with almost this whole critique. Drawing looks good, you have a sensible level of finish in most areas, and the shape language of the hair makes sense and feels congruous with the whole image. I DO agree that you should finish the arms and hands though. I could be wrong, but it looks like I can see the initial struggle you had in drawing them, and the point where you gave up on them.
Cool pic, anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 02:24:56 2018 No.3609405 >>3608850 its so fucking obvious you paint with sai, youre abusing the hell out of the water brush

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 02:29:21 2018 No.3609408 >>3609405 ok

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 03:23:18 2018 No.3609429 File: 72 KB, 585x857, ababa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609164 Nice fren. I love yume nikki

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 03:24:45 2018 No.3609430 >>3609429 Blog?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 04:27:01 2018 No.3609467 >>3609101 Mate... You can't say that in an ANIME THREAD

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 04:41:55 2018 No.3609473 you guys are pathetic

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 05:23:24 2018 No.3609490 >>3609473 Solid thread contribution, crab-kun. Keep up the good work

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 06:00:56 2018 No.3609508 >>3609473 I liike this

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 06:37:14 2018 No.3609527 >>3609473 see you tomorrow ;)

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 06:42:27 2018 No.3609528 >>3609473 Thanks, love you too mom

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 07:03:36 2018 No.3609549 >>3609473 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6OmF4wL3b4

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 07:12:30 2018 No.3609551 >>3609473 I feel so inspired and motivated, can't wait to see you in the other boards

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 10:20:44 2018 No.3609668
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>>3607988
>>3608515
gosh i'm so sorry i literally passed out in disco while talkin to some people right after makin this last night hasdh;lj apologiess. made some sleepy mistakes too but fixed em now that i awake nwn

music to set the mood: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I2rV8oKWSdM

apologies again, my handwriting is baaad

so first off, DRAW A BOX a;sldjf i'm sorry to meme on you but it's super useful for soooo many things! especially more mechanical/hard rectangulal things. for a tanto style buster sword like cloud's it's easiest to jus draw a full rectangular prism for the entire length up to the tip, then add lil bisecting outlines for any important cut placements, after that it's as simple as connecting the dots! also drawing an x on any flat rectangular surface can help you find the middle, tho keep in mind if you like to flex your perspective a lot like i do, you gotta have that x flex similarly, or else it'll be allll inaccurate an bad ;-;

i also made slight edit to sword angle jus based on my personal preference/how she's holdin it vs how you'd wanna angle it for the swing. i also made it a bit shorter cause program i used to draw this is butt about resizing ;-;; but you can make it as long as you want! jus keep extending the rectangular prism you use to draw it.

also don't be afraid to exagerate! if she's in the middle of swinging it you might want to add a bit of flex to the blade, having it slightly bend/trail behind the swing, flexing more an more as you reach the tip because that's the part moving the fastest. you'd also wanna dirty the lines a bit to imply motion, look up some mangas you like that do cool sword stuff to see more of what i'm talkin about, i'm almost certain they'd be doin somethin similar

sorry to make long disjointed ramble, hope this helps in some ways, i'd be glad to clarify anything if my drawings were too messy or my communication was too as;dlkjf

>>3609371
wwell shit, now i wanna draw fanart of them too ;-;

>>3609429
CUTE

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 10:29:44 2018 No.3609676

>>3609668
OH! also thing i should add an can make a visual to explain better if you want is that with BIIIG ASSS buster swords you want a loonng super long handle cause one hand'll wanna be up at the hilt an then the other as far down on the handle as possible to help hold the weight of the sword cause levers or some other simple machines bullpoop. it's not super important, especially if you jus wanna be super cartoony but is good if you want the sword to feel heavy an carry a lotta weight. aalso longer handle helps balance out t-the sheer girth an length of the... b-blade ;w;;

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:08:32 2018 No.3609710 >>3609668 >>3609676 >so first off, DRAW A BOX a;sldjf i'm sorry to meme on you >cause levers or some other simple machines bullpoop actually following up on his promise to critique AND a comedian

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>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:28:05 2018 No.3609726 >>3609722 Absolutely cute! Got a blog?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:34:18 2018 No.3609729 >>3609726 I have a twitter I post my stuff on: https://twitter.com/bisoneet

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:38:21 2018 No.3609732 File: 267 KB, 1580x1548, 62FB3DEE-68FC-4D39-A686-FED227D9499B.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Another dose of Eddie

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:47:12 2018 No.3609736 File: 144 KB, 1080x1080, exclamation mark grill.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Happy with this desu. Hope I can keep doing daily stuff. Time is a bitch

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:57:00 2018 No.3609743 >>3609732 It's like a better looking Jazza with a sharper chin. Wait, is this guy 8 or 38?

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 11:59:56 2018 No.3609746 File: 529 KB, 2048x1536, FF7A13DE-AC89-4397-8C7A-2FE81A20492D.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609743 He’s a 12 year old from the 1950s and is supposed to be just the more horrible little bastard

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 12:06:11 2018 No.3609753 >>3609746 You really need to give him rounder features (i.e. nose, chin) because the way his facial features are right now plus the way he dresses just looks like some weird midget.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 12:15:53 2018 No.3609767 >>3609753 Hm, I never really thought about that but now that you mention it you’re right. I’m still in the earlier stages of conceptual design for him so I’ll see if I can make him a little more childlike

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 12:33:38 2018 No.3609790 >>3609736 >Time is a bitch this desu. i can barely manage one finished piece a week anymore. being a wagecuck sucks.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:08:29 2018 No.3609909 File: 2.10 MB, 4500x3500, New Cauyobnhinvas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] still gonna color >>3608082 later but im really not feelin it today just kinda out of it. did a different moth warrior this time. lol :)

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:10:20 2018 No.3609913 File: 195 KB, 990x770, New Cauyobnhinvas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609909 dammnit every time keep forgetting to resize

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:19:20 2018 No.3609927
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How do I master the american comics style?
Some of these guys are pure substance and no style
I know these guys had a serious foundations on figure drawing and drawing from life but I feel there must be something else.
Pic is Russ Manning

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:20:50 2018 No.3609929 >>3608762 Cute!

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:25:02 2018 No.3609937 >>3609790 Yeah. It takes me so much time to finish even a simple one too. Been focusing more on managing my time lately and I'm finding there's always extra hours/minutes in your everyday waiting to be used though. Godspeed anon

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:43:26 2018 No.3609958

>>3609927
How do you master it? Easy. Get really good at anatomy, but never learn anything like perspective, composition, color theory, or panel layout. Just learn to draw humans and ugly, too-realistic cartoon faces and you're a classic comic artist. The needs have barely changed for modern stuff anyway except there's better perspective

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:48:14 2018 No.3609966 File: 831 KB, 1000x1421, allshedoesisbliss1000.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:48:33 2018 No.3609967

>>3609937
Time is your most valuable resource.
Ways time escapes from Normies and other retards:
Waiting for things, eg a bus, an appointment, the class to start etc. replace this time with doodling.
Playing vidya. Unless it's with friends it's just a way corporations have got you to waste your time even when you get frustrated with their product.
Watching Tv series. Their creative value is usually negligible and really, what series couldn't stand to lose a few dozen episodes?
Browsing 4chan. Oh how I wish I could get away.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:50:11 2018 No.3609972 >>3609967 >Browsing 4chan. Oh how I wish I could get away. turn off your wifi :^)

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 15:51:52 2018 No.3609975 >>3609972 Need it for references and music. I'll probs block the site soon, it worked for gaming and other sites I used to browse

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 16:08:06 2018 No.3609992

>>3609967
Agreed
Getting into doodling on every free little span of time is deffo something i need to do. Drawing many things in a couple of minutes is so much more beneficial than just a couple of things in many minutes.
I wouldn't worry that much about 4chan though. I mean, as shit as /ic/ is, at least you're seeing lots of people trying to improve and critiquing each other's work. That's better than a huge percentage of what you can do to take your mind off for a bit ("for a bit" is key though)

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 17:17:12 2018 No.3610057 >>3609967 Just getting rid of vidya and tv frees up so much time it's not even funny. books, music and art is all i need.

Anonymous Thu Sep 20 17:57:52 2018 No.3610090

>>3610057
Not watching tv is easy, I think the biggest time eater is vidya. But it's not something you can help, if you enjoy playing vidya more than drawing then there's no use forcing it. I personally go through cycles of art, vidya, anime/manga, reading, etc.

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 20:28:17 2018 No.3610228 File: 218 KB, 1000x999, niea ed.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3609334

>>	Anonymous Thu Sep 20 23:57:44 2018 No.3610372 File: 279 KB, 700x838, IMG_20180920_234909.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] should shading be kept of just not bother?, it needs to be cleaner for sure

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 00:39:10 2018 No.3610388 File: 44 KB, 1230x1231, raka thing.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3610228

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 01:22:24 2018 No.3610412 File: 44 KB, 1230x1231, raka-thing.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3610388

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 04:49:11 2018 No.3610589 >>3610412 I know it's prob intensional but the pattern on the tower makes the tower look a bit unpleasantly flat. only there though, it works very nicely on all the other things. interesting style anon, keep at it

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 09:10:32 2018 No.3610835 File: 284 KB, 990x1400, gropicore.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3608842 didnt really like doing the censored model

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 09:29:01 2018 No.3610849 File: 1.32 MB, 717x1000, shootinstar..png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 09:32:52 2018 No.3610851 >>3610589 Yeah you're right, and no it wasn't intentional to make it look flat. I found out you could add textures to brushes while doing this and started playing around with it, too lazy to fix it desu

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 11:09:19 2018 No.3610916 File: 1.39 MB, 1536x2048, 2018-09-21 08.36.40 1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 12:19:09 2018 No.3610968 >>3610835 Wew. Way better than I imagined. I look forward to seeing more.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 12:46:18 2018 No.3610995 File: 654 KB, 761x1000, sleepy sheepy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Not sure if it would be worth it to clean this up

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 14:14:34 2018 No.3611085 >>3610995 >it's cute an- >sees goat legs It's still cute anon!

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 17:35:13 2018 No.3611223 File: 38 KB, 1230x1231, raka-thing2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3610412 Tried to do a little fix to what anon pointed out

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 18:43:00 2018 No.3611288 >>3610995 work on the face then clean it. the eyes dont even align

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 18:58:26 2018 No.3611309 >>3610995 real nice colors

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 19:16:50 2018 No.3611326 File: 870 KB, 1536x2048, Untitled_Artwork 13.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This is the first time Ive tried to do any kind of fancy lighting. It's hard.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 19:28:28 2018 No.3611345 >>3611326 Stay away from the soft brushes if your lighting is that harsh

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 19:46:53 2018 No.3611353 >>3608095 b-blog?

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 20:21:56 2018 No.3611374 File: 1.23 MB, 1498x2750, shantsketch.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 20:31:07 2018 No.3611382 File: 3.65 MB, 2048x2048, PicsArt_09-21-08.28.52.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some drawings I have done both digitally and on paper in a few different styles. I tend to lean towards the abstract.

>>	Anonymous Fri Sep 21 20:38:22 2018 No.3611390 File: 688 KB, 974x1788, Shantae.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 00:00:10 2018 No.3611565 >>3609958 Its the same with Manga artists.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 03:45:40 2018 No.3611720 File: 235 KB, 1000x1000, 2018-09-22_tsuyu.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Which pose do you prefer?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 03:46:53 2018 No.3611722 >>3611720 Top right or top middle.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 07:05:55 2018 No.3611860 >>3610995 >>3611085 The goat legs make it better you paesant

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 09:15:58 2018 No.3611932 >>3611326 Nice anon. Keep going.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 11:39:56 2018 No.3612052 >>3611720 I love the three on top right! they're all lovely though

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 13:43:01 2018 No.3612176 File: 162 KB, 326x326, something.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3611223

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 14:42:44 2018 No.3612260 File: 539 KB, 1260x1108, Kenomion2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Boop.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 14:46:07 2018 No.3612270 File: 147 KB, 814x901, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] destroy me ic. also how to draw ink stains

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 16:21:52 2018 No.3612410 File: 172 KB, 1203x881, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3612270 back and fixed some shit is this thread just dying or no issues?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 16:22:47 2018 No.3612413 >>3612410 cute

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 17:55:30 2018 No.3612536 File: 316 KB, 761x961, knight.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 18:00:36 2018 No.3612546 File: 740 KB, 761x1000, sleepy sheepy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3610995 Finished, I think. Tried to fix the face. >>3611085 >>3611309 >>3611860 Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 19:09:35 2018 No.3612669 How do I bait that 5 digits followers on twitter like the nip artists? Just drawing FGO shits doesn't really make it. Is there some other kind of interraction I should do? Some retweet mine retweet yours rule?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 19:12:11 2018 No.3612671 >>3612669 Step 1: Git gud Step 2: Draw popular things well

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 20:09:45 2018 No.3612726 File: 127 KB, 1186x1631, DnoLnCWX4AExmPb.jpg large.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 20:09:56 2018 No.3612727 File: 293 KB, 1131x1600, dm.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 20:23:39 2018 No.3612743 >>3608437 I like your lines

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 20:27:49 2018 No.3612746 >>3609746 Lmao I love this guy

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 21:09:57 2018 No.3612799 File: 1.38 MB, 1408x846, WIP-28.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] WIP.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 21:23:53 2018 No.3612821 >>3612410 Nice Jimmy Neutron fanart

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:12:45 2018 No.3612878 >>3612546 Her eyes look off and not in perspective

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:16:03 2018 No.3612883 >>3612669 Draw the hot shit right now (anything nintendo, popular cartoons etc )

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:21:29 2018 No.3612895 >>3612727 Wait a minute. Is this mikufag?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:34:19 2018 No.3612912 >>3612878 Could you explain? I was trying to have his head slightly tilted upwards.

Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:45:54 2018 No.3612923
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hushkyyyy

>>3612410
Massive forehead, first joint (dunno what it's actually called) of each finger should be shorter, slightly bigger than the second joint length but not by that much, arms look disproportionally huge compared to the torso, looks like his elbows are coming from the same height as his hips based on the perspective of the hands/wrists, and kinda subjective but ink stain looks like blood stains, not sure what kind of style you're going for though but it should be less splattered and more opaque.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:49:18 2018 No.3612926 File: 192 KB, 594x900, vaatii.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] trying to be a bit faster

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 22:59:45 2018 No.3612937 File: 2.54 MB, 1702x2160, rathianarmor_sm.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 23:49:53 2018 No.3612970 >>3612923 sO CUTE PLEASE GIVE ME PLACE TO FOLLOW YOU

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 22 23:54:42 2018 No.3612974 >>3612970 I know him! https://twitter.com/derbikerks

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 00:07:39 2018 No.3612991
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>>3612912

the eyes should be part of the curvature on the face, as opposed to yours where the right side of the face looks misaligned (even if their face is pressed up against the ground it shouldnt look that squished)

also imo the mouth is too and theres not enough chin but thats up to you. the neck is also set back too far

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 00:22:59 2018 No.3612997

>>3612991
Hm, I see what you're saying. I was trying to make the eyes moreso wrap around the the curvature of the eyeballs, I feel putting the eyelashes right on the curvature of the face makes it look like the eyeballs are 2D. However, duly noted and thank you for the critique.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 01:07:41 2018 No.3613022 >>3612536 QT

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 01:08:52 2018 No.3613025 >>3612923 draw some shibe next

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 01:09:30 2018 No.3613027 >>3612799 Gorgeous colors anon. Might I suggest you figure out some some of way to draw leaves other than using those stamp brushes? They look a bit tacky in comparison to the rest of the image.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 08:02:35 2018 No.3613267 File: 65 KB, 1000x707, Chuuni Alter.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Just trying to bait some followers for now, but I also want it to be worth something. Crits/redline?

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 08:03:20 2018 No.3613268 File: 198 KB, 1280x720, tumblr_nn7ssnU6gA1qjec28o2_1280.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3613267 The pose reference.

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 08:04:50 2018 No.3613270
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So I posted this on draw thread but didn't get any feedback yet and I thought maybe it was the wrong thread. I would love to hear anything you find annoying or not pleasing about it. Thank you!

>>3612991
The palette is really nice. The roots of the tree feel like floating a bit, maybe try to paint grass over them. The horns don't feel like they align properly, at least the back one feels like being at a different spot compared to the nearest one. Maybe it's a proportion or perspective issue. It's cute overall.

>>3612799
As a thumbnail looks really good, up close needs work. Also, maybe have some more people hints? Kind of an empty street.

>>3612923
Cute indeed.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 08:13:58 2018 No.3613275 >>3613267 if you referenced that pose shouldnt her head tilt to the same axis? atm looks weird neck definitely looks fucked up, the top end should be intersecting with the jaw.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 08:54:15 2018 No.3613293 >>3608095 jezus you're good with lines, nice to see this here

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 09:58:52 2018 No.3613328
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>>3613270
Pretty cool anon but it reads horribly. I had to spend way too much time figuring out what was going on, especially in the bottom half of the piece. You could try separating forms with lineweight to make it more readable.

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:17:27 2018 No.3613339

>>3613328
I thought at first I would end up adding tones to separate stuff so it read better, but got lazy, so making lines thicker for the front stuff I guess? taking note. I'm a bit cautious with line weight still, I feel too green when inking. Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:21:41 2018 No.3613345 File: 332 KB, 1028x1200, 2018-09-23_2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3610439 How do you find this process?

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:25:01 2018 No.3613348
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>>3613270
This >>3613328
It take effort on my side to figuring out the picture, that's not a good thing.
You have to make sure a drawing can be easy on the eyes to follow.
I turned off my cintiq to play games so you will have to deal with shitty red line.
The main flow as you can see goes from top to bottom right, the horse interrupted it with it head, i suggest moving the horse's head to the stair.
As for the girl, let her body go along with the main flow too, don't stop it, her head can turn back to look at the knight but make her body turn to the left.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:27:20 2018 No.3613350 >>3613345 Why did you use greyscale meme and turn her into a dead person? Living person have blush you know.

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:28:34 2018 No.3613352

>>3613345
The lines are gorgeous, but multiplying grey tones with flat colors is a bad idea. You muddy your palette. Try color burn but then play with the opacity or separate the values because it will over-saturate everything. I would though try and painting directly with color, pick your value ranges in color beforehand and build your palette. It will be more lifelike and allow you to also consider cool/warm areas and reflective colors from nearby elements.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:28:55 2018 No.3613354 >>3612926 Adorable creature

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:35:22 2018 No.3613357

>>3613348
Taking note, I did try to create a flow around the main figures, creating a sort of curved triangle, that's why the horse head points down towards the girl at the back and the stairs curve towards the horse head. The front girl has some elements at the bottom that do flow out but the drape and head I hoped would balance it back up towards the knight and the boy in the middle, since they are bigger. It is interesting to think the horse's head maybe pointing to the stairs and then having stronger elements there to flow back into the knight, making like a figure eight diagonally. Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:39:56 2018 No.3613360 >>3613345 try using another colour for the shadows other than grey

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:39:57 2018 No.3613361
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>>3613350
>>3613352
Thanks for the feedback.
I'm trying out this coloring process since I still don't know how to color.
I'll try to continue this process or try the way anon suggested
>painting directly with color, pick your value ranges in color beforehand and build your palette

Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:48:23 2018 No.3613364

>>3613361
I'm glad it helped, and hey that's a perfect example of why I'm saying that you greentexted. See up to stage 4, is what you did, but then it goes into overlay and screen to fix the dead look from the multiplying of grayscale by adding warmth and saturation into many shadow places, like bounce light in the hair, legs, chest hands and clothing. That to me is like extra work, if you pick your palette you skip from 3 to 7 straight away, just by planning ahead. This methods are nice to use when you don't know what color scheme something is going to have, like concept art, but for illustration, I don't see it. Meaning if you know how your character looks beforehand, there's no need to use this methods. It's nice for practicing, but it requires still knowledge of painting to push the right values and colors out.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 10:53:39 2018 No.3613367 >>3613361 That guide is good but only only seemingly went as far as Step 4.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 11:03:10 2018 No.3613377 >>3613367 My attempt already took 2.5 hours(.5 just for the lineart) so I just need an excuse to rest. I actually appreciate artists who daily pumps out colored works more because of this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 11:22:30 2018 No.3613398 >>3612727 You draw the greatest nips.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 11:29:18 2018 No.3613404 >>3613267 stiff as fuck and your anatomy is begtier

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 12:10:56 2018 No.3613443 File: 986 KB, 562x999, lain something.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3612176

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 12:28:08 2018 No.3613463 File: 145 KB, 480x679, bowsette.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] before painting

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 12:50:16 2018 No.3613491 >>3613463 That’s pretty cute and cool.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 13:57:23 2018 No.3613542 File: 534 KB, 590x786, niea_mayu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3613443

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 13:59:58 2018 No.3613544 >>3613542 kawaii

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 18:17:11 2018 No.3613773 File: 248 KB, 580x820, bowser.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thats it for today >>3613491 thx

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 18:48:21 2018 No.3613794 What the first thing to work on when you're new to stylizing?

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 18:48:46 2018 No.3613795 >>3613794 Copying other artists you like.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 19:58:11 2018 No.3613871 >>3613795 I'll copy your art then.

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 19:58:18 2018 No.3613872 File: 533 KB, 1204x1204, madotsuki_mural final.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3613542 left this one unfinished for very long

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 20:21:30 2018 No.3613914 >>3609101 >Not liking the intellectual's expression

>>	Anonymous Sun Sep 23 22:08:01 2018 No.3614039 >>3613773 really like it you keeping a blog somewhere man?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:31:06 2018 No.3614180 >>3612546 Hands seem a bit large especially the base of the palm, but I guess I'll chalk that up to style. Very very qt otherwise though

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:35:23 2018 No.3614182 File: 26 KB, 365x365, madocat.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3613872 wip

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:36:43 2018 No.3614184 >>3614182 >these skirt physics

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:40:28 2018 No.3614190 >>3614184 No lewd frend

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:53:08 2018 No.3614200 File: 36 KB, 986x742, cmcswimsuits.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 00:58:49 2018 No.3614205 >>3614200 Aesthetic as fuck.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:07:37 2018 No.3614216 >>3614200 Get out of your comfort zone already.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:09:30 2018 No.3614218 >>3614200 Cant you draw anything else dude?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:17:55 2018 No.3614220 File: 79 KB, 1338x824, mechboi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614218 yes but anime girls is my passion and all i care for. I've drawn other things, like this mech but this was a while ago

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:24:58 2018 No.3614225 >>3614220 how do you think of things for the anime girls to be doing? did you upgrade fidget spinner chan?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:30:52 2018 No.3614230 File: 19 KB, 608x780, mimi.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614225 i dont know I just try doing a random pose. and shes no longer a humanized fidget spinner, but I like her design so kept it and just renamed her to mimi.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:31:54 2018 No.3614232 >>3614230 meme ---> mimi

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:34:26 2018 No.3614235 >>3614230 Mimi cosplaying Peachette when?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:40:01 2018 No.3614241 >>3614235 you mean bowsette?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:44:09 2018 No.3614246 >>3614241 Whichever is fine.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 01:48:35 2018 No.3614248 >>3613398 thanks! >>3612895 nah, havent seen him post in so long

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 02:12:08 2018 No.3614262 File: 184 KB, 944x845, bows.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hopping into this bandwagon

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 02:19:41 2018 No.3614266 >All this trend sucking faggots Oh well i guess i should join too

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 02:32:07 2018 No.3614272 File: 268 KB, 1050x1400, thane happy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 03:20:52 2018 No.3614300
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>>3612799
(Kinda) Finished.
>>3613027
I start using those brushes only yesterday, still learning how to use then so maybe that's the reason. Anyway, I like then, really makes the job of doing foliage easier.
>>3613270
The focus is on the street anyway, I just put a cute girl in the to force me to draw this kind of thing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 03:53:02 2018 No.3614319 >>3614230 feet yev, fix em

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 04:22:57 2018 No.3614343 File: 37 KB, 692x1080, bowsette.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I jumped on too. roast this pic because i dont like it. sketch looked way better T_T

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 04:34:22 2018 No.3614347 >>3613463 >>3613773 >>3614262 >>3614343 >>>/v/432793708

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 04:34:42 2018 No.3614348 >>3614343 Give her a death glare with black pupils and my dick will be diamonds

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 04:58:38 2018 No.3614361 File: 127 KB, 1080x1080, unamused.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] HMPH

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 05:06:04 2018 No.3614363 File: 125 KB, 417x661, school girl 2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] helllloo its been a really long time lol

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 05:25:59 2018 No.3614369 >>3614363 eyes too far apart

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 05:34:25 2018 No.3614375 >>3614361 >HMPH more like yikes

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 07:09:45 2018 No.3614450 File: 161 KB, 531x428, 1524253202276.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614363 >all these years >barely any improvement just leave it

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 07:40:04 2018 No.3614474 >>3614190 based

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 07:42:14 2018 No.3614476 >>3614363 Left eye trying to get away from her

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 07:44:08 2018 No.3614480 >>3614343 are there really people who just use paint here?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 10:07:47 2018 No.3614571 File: 887 KB, 3200x2400, イラスト54.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 12:44:43 2018 No.3614705 >>3614571 I really like your arm/leg forms. I do not like your backs or faces though. Keep going, i will be watching.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 12:49:13 2018 No.3614709 >>3614571 Holy fug, blog? This is nice stuff

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 13:06:57 2018 No.3614727 >>3614705 Thanks. Yeah, the face struggle continues. >>3614709 Thanks man. fuuka2rin on twitter

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 13:58:59 2018 No.3614804 File: 271 KB, 1131x1600, Bowsette c.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] idk

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 15:40:57 2018 No.3614943 File: 856 KB, 1292x861, bowsette2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614343 what suits me better ic, pixel brush, or this one?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:00:50 2018 No.3614963 >>3614943 Cute but the anatomy and proportions on the rightmost one is super fucked. She's got a snake torso.

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:04:17 2018 No.3614967
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Something's definitely wonky with the anatomy or perspective, but I'm having trouble identifying it. Help?

>>3613872
Awesome, I love this game. Nice job making the patterns look accurately repeated but not jarringly copypasted.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:11:18 2018 No.3614974 >>3614967 The head is too big

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:18:52 2018 No.3614985

what is the best way to study forms? I keep hearing things like "feel the form, brah" and whatnot. I do gesture drawings alot but when it comes to form study I don't really know the proper way to begin.

Is it just a matter of grinding boxes and cylinders?

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:26:07 2018 No.3614994

>>3614985
>what is the best way to study forms? I keep hearing things like "feel the form, brah" and whatnot. I do gesture drawings alot but when it comes to form study I don't really know the proper way to begin.
>Is it just a matter of grinding boxes and cylinders?

wrong thread. sorry

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:27:41 2018 No.3614995

>>3614985
It does become largely a matter of intuition once you're experienced, but that's terrible advice for beginners. Try to apply those boxes and cylinders to the human body. Take some of the photos you do gestures of and think about how those forms relate to the body - identify the perspective and visualize the ribcage as a rounded cube, the neck as a cylinder, etc. Once you can break the human body into shapes, it's easier to reconstruct from imagination.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:40:17 2018 No.3615006 >>3614967 its the way her head and neck is attached to her body, its in a diff perspective from the body also its too big

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 16:55:50 2018 No.3615018

>>3614967
agree with other anon, head is too big, neck may be too long also, just select it with the laso tool, resize and then redo the linework on top of it, that should be enough. Try flipping the image when you can't see what's wrong, it helps a lot

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 18:20:13 2018 No.3615108 File: 810 KB, 2700x2400, イラスト55.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614571

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:09:42 2018 No.3615177 File: 230 KB, 365x365, madocat final.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3614182

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:12:49 2018 No.3615182 >>3614943 i love that all your characters look like they have autism. very creative

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:23:45 2018 No.3615202 >>3615177 i liked the stronger blacks from the wip desu

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:25:16 2018 No.3615207 File: 227 KB, 804x1000, p_bowsette.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3615108 nice, they really pop out of the page. i would be grateful if you could share how you practice.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:27:52 2018 No.3615212 >>3615207 why the censors? this is a red board

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:32:04 2018 No.3615218 >>3615202 I was trying to use something other than black for the lines since I always do it like that

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 19:36:33 2018 No.3615221 >>3615212 it would distract you from drawing

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 20:55:31 2018 No.3615308 File: 329 KB, 580x820, bowserweb.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not bad for something that hurried, but hands are still my major weakness >>3614039 thx https://www.deviantart.com/ran-ran-ruuu

Anonymous Mon Sep 24 22:16:09 2018 No.3615383
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This may be a really stupid question, but im enamored with the way this person shades and lines their work. Does anyone know how they could have achieved this watercolor-esque shading, with the faint dark outline around the regular shade? How he does the line work in general? How he shades the boobs so faintly?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 22:19:01 2018 No.3615388 >>3615383 Gonna need sauce first

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 24 22:23:02 2018 No.3615395 >>3615383 He does exactly what you think. He outlines the shadows to create the water color effect. Locks opacity and adds the white “rim light” thing. And really the boobs dude? Can be done with any water tool or brush with opacity/flow settings

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 01:43:29 2018 No.3615576 File: 239 KB, 844x528, HqfMZTU[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3613025 I tried.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 02:06:03 2018 No.3615606 >>3615576 uwu

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 02:09:26 2018 No.3615610 >>3615308 that right hand is fucked, where's the thumb?

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 02:11:24 2018 No.3615612 >>3615395 thats one way of doing it, its a lot more simpler than that tho.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 04:00:20 2018 No.3615694 File: 82 KB, 620x951, Bowsette.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] help me unfuck this up. I only know that the head and arm spike bracelet thing is fucked but other than that I don't know what else is making it look really off

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 07:30:47 2018 No.3615880 >>3615610 yep gonna fix it

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 08:28:58 2018 No.3615927 >>3615612 Please share

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 09:43:26 2018 No.3616026 >>3615694 boob perspective is off also there's no detail or anything so it cant not look off...

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 12:12:14 2018 No.3616178 File: 185 KB, 738x1000, 2018-09-23_3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think I'll study coloring and some artists first.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 12:27:45 2018 No.3616196 >>3616178 save a lot of artists works that you like There's a tool called PixivUtil2 and Twitter Media Downloader that lets you bulk download the album instead of manually saving them one by one

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 12:41:48 2018 No.3616214 >>3612923 Autistic furry guy that everyone hates?

Anonymous Tue Sep 25 13:22:33 2018 No.3616268 [DELETED]

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which of the two looks better, except that the light rays in the one with extra dont line up with the one in the background ignore that please for now. Besides that any other critique welcome too ofcourse

Anonymous Tue Sep 25 13:24:58 2018 No.3616274
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which of the two looks better, except that the light rays in the one with extra dont line up with the one in the background ignore that please for now. Besides that any other critique welcome too ofcourse

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 14:15:22 2018 No.3616351 >>3616274 replace the rays with actual shading on her skin and on the couch they look the same

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 14:44:36 2018 No.3616383 Will my drawing be used in the next OP??

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 14:55:08 2018 No.3616390 >>3616383 there's a chance in 108 that it will.

Anonymous Tue Sep 25 17:48:36 2018 No.3616589
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>>3615207
Thanks.
I mostly do doodles like the one you quoted, and quick color drawings sometimes. Mostly imagination anime girls. My favorite resource is Anatomy for Sculptors by Zarins. I also keep a folder with artists whose styles I like. Sometimes when I look at hentai or anime or something and see a good abstraction, I pause and try to figure out what the artist did (this becomes much easier with some knowledge of fat deposits and major muscle groups). What I've posted on my twitter is almost my entire body of work the last year+. Might be good for laffs.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 18:30:17 2018 No.3616639 >>3610916 this is absolutely fucking rad, love it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 20:36:49 2018 No.3616770 File: 81 KB, 638x831, color test.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3616351 I tried out some color, and all but i still dont really like it, I should probably just move on

>>	Anonymous Tue Sep 25 23:21:47 2018 No.3616960 >>3612536 looks nice

>>	Chicocalte !4Ltr1vH/Dk Tue Sep 25 23:35:07 2018 No.3616976 memeless thread >>3616974

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 26 00:01:21 2018 No.3617013 >>3616026 Ahh, I see now. Thank you

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 26 05:49:10 2018 No.3617336 >>3615927 Sent :)

>>	Anonymous Wed Sep 26 22:00:33 2018 No.3618410 >>3616639 Thanks anon, I can't believe someone actually replied lol

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