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last disaster >>3590636

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I'm a highlord weeb. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor approved). If you'd like, post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
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>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>> No.3597839
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3597839

>>3597834
I need help with coloring
also general critique

>> No.3597870

>>3597834
>our brightest /alt/ posters.
which one?

>> No.3597878

>>3597870
it was (not) referring to (you)

>> No.3597883

>>3597878
it's not nice to talk to your mother like that

>> No.3597887

>>3597883
I am (not) nice

>> No.3597894

>>3597870
>>3597878
>>3597883
>>3597887
>>3597887
This is retarded

>> No.3597903
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3597903

>>3597870
If you were bright you'd know who.

>> No.3598016
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3598016

Although it's still rough, I'm looking for advice on proportion and general appeal.

>> No.3598033

>>3598016
Work on the eyes and the shape of the cornea outside the iris. They kind of look uninspired.

>> No.3598037
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3598037

>>3598016
remove nose and find a better stylization. i got the same problem as you desu.

im trying diff noses but they all look shit to me.

>> No.3598112
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3598112

help with the legs

>> No.3598124

>>3598112
Thighs should be much longer. I think the calves/lower legs would probably fall past the bottom of the canvas if the thighs were the right size.

>> No.3598126

>>3598124

thanks ill give it a shot

>> No.3598327
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>> No.3598333
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3598333

Hi guys, I'm having a little trouble with digital right now.
Latest thing, it just looks off, I don't even know what's wrong with it, I tried following a general style I kinda liked, but I guess it's just not good enough. Halp plz

>> No.3598341

>>3598333
>a general style I kinda liked
Post some samples.

>> No.3598345
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3598345

>>3598341
Here you go

>> No.3598353
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3598353

>>3597345
Redid some things.

>> No.3598362
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>> No.3598392

>>3597718

Thanks for the crit, yeah still trying to get a grip on proportions :|

>> No.3598547
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3598547

doodle

>> No.3598594

>>3598362
>>3598547
Blog?

>> No.3598628
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3598628

critiaue plz

>> No.3598631

>>3598362
damn this is great. looking clean. got a blog?

>> No.3598660

>>3598628
Finish the rest anon

>> No.3598670

>>3598594
https://twitter.com/boopkak

>> No.3598694
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3598694

>>3597834

>> No.3598714
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3598714

switching to CSP; quick doodle

>>3597971
ye probably

>> No.3598791

>>3598714
ooh look... its the same head...

>> No.3598823

>>3598333
>>3598345
If you want to achieve the general aesthetic of this style you like, you should take into consideration these things for your artwork:

- Solid line work - notice that all the lines in the sample you posted are fully black. Additionally, the line sizes are consistent yet the general composition is detailed.

- Flat colouring - your artwork seems to be painted with a brush, however the samples you posted are all flat coloured. If you like using the brush, that's ok, but if you want to follow the aesthetic, make sure that you block colours in so that they look solid and avoid doing blending.

>> No.3598893
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3598893

i rushed the hell out of this, i was just testing the waters to try to figure out how to use SAI. now that its out the way i can start studying color and values :p

>> No.3598899

>>3598791
probably the same character

>> No.3598933

>>3598893
that right thigh is a bit short, the face needs to have its features distributed a bit more evenly. everything kinda scrunched up at the top. The body doesn't seem like it's in perspective with everything else and is too big for this room in general.

>> No.3598995
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3598995

more rendering. eyes nippon enough?

>> No.3599008

>>3598995
Personally, I'd make the iris smaller because she looks pretty bug eyed and spaced out. The eyes just look real blank

>> No.3599011

>>3599008
it's rei, so that's what i looking for. something robotic.

>> No.3599021

>>3599011
Ah, I see. Her expression goes in contrast with that design choice, which made me confused in the first place. The stare is pretty intense.

>> No.3599036

>>3598995
i feel like the rendering is nice but its painted over an ultimately broken base
i think you should really consider at least redoing the face, maybe look at references for the sort of style you wanna do

>> No.3599041

>>3599036
i'll look into refs. it does look a bit off but i cant place how

>> No.3599047
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3599047

wip

>> No.3599049
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3599049

How did I do?

>> No.3599055

>>3599047
did you drew this with yourphone?

>> No.3599093

>>3598933
yea i noticed her seeming like a giant but like i said didnt feel like fixing, but thanks for the other stuff! will take into mind :)

>> No.3599097
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3599097

>>3598893
testing some new brushes... cant decide which i like more lol

>> No.3599098
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3599098

>>3598893
i feel like theres something wrong with his left arm..

>> No.3599100
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3599100

So I have a question this thread might be able to help with.

I wanna try exploring a different style for flat colour pictures. I drew this inspired by medieval woodcuts and quite like the way it looks. It could be refined a lot though, and I don't really know what direction to take it in because I can't think of any artists that work with a similar style frequently.

Do any of you have advice on what art I could look at?

>> No.3599133

>>3598899
same neck too...

>> No.3599135

>>3599055
No, is it really that poorly crafted? Im going to make it clean at the end.

>> No.3599136

>>3598995
do another miku and ill draw u something

>> No.3599154

>>3598995
The nose is off.

>> No.3599177

>>3599136
im gonna draw matrioshka miku soon

>> No.3599179
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3599179

>>3599100
Reminds me of this.

>> No.3599186

>>3599179
look up hollow knight

>> No.3599190

>>3599179
bro, bone was my shit

>> No.3599218
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3599218

I don't know how to draw ice

>> No.3599233

>>3599218
https://youtu.be/ywEMXrxnOE0
Maybe this can help.

>> No.3599277
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3599277

>>3592413

>> No.3599280

>>3599277
post your stuff in /asg/ too. Please :c

>> No.3599288

>>3599277
Like the other anon said, dont let crabs drive you out of asg!!

>> No.3599557
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3599557

>>3593027

>>3599280
>>3599288
I actually intended to post only on Alt but there were no thread at the time I found ASG so I posted there.

>> No.3599584

>>3599233
Thank you

>> No.3599590

amazing!

>> No.3599596

>>3599557
great as always.

>> No.3599607
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3599607

>> No.3599650
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3599650

First illustration done with procreate, what do you think?
Digital color is hard mang

>> No.3599676
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3599676

This one feels a bit weak, should I retry or can it still be saved?

>> No.3599734
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3599734

Some random people from around the galaxy in my ttrpg project. These could be aliens, posthumans, or combos of both. Looking for critique

>> No.3599773
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3599773

still trying to figure out scale of features as related to age.., but here's another try...

>> No.3599867

>>3599676
.........Yeah, I think you need to redo it from scratch, sorry...

>> No.3599871

>>3599867
mind telling him why?

>> No.3599902

>>3599871
Because I agree that it does feel weak (boring) compared to his other works, and I don't see how to improve the pose without an overhaul. The legs also need shape fixing, but I know he knows how to do it.

Now, if he changes the perspective so that we look at the looming giant loli from the town below, it will definitely work, in my opinion.

>> No.3599908
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3599908

progress meme thing

>> No.3599923
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3599923

>>3598893
boredom sketch

>> No.3599924
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3599924

>>3599923
i cant believe i keep forgetting to resize

>> No.3599929

>>3599908
literally no change

>> No.3599930

>>3599923
>>3599924
top left characters look like Laios and Chilchuck

>> No.3599936

>>3599929
post work

>> No.3599938

>>3599929
nah homie, the eyes are cuter a bit

>> No.3599992
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3599992

s'more doodle

>> No.3599995

>>3599992
can someone fill me in on this meme?

>> No.3600005

>>3599992
oh the same head

>> No.3600008

>>3599936
>>3599938
thats just it, all he did was move shit around. the limbs are still ambiguous and lack form. colors are still the same style is still the same, the only thing that changed is he moved tiny bits

>> No.3600067

>>3599908
art equivalent of you changing your font...

>> No.3600068
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3600068

Feels like something is off but I struggle with profiles in general.

>> No.3600071

>>3600008
>>3600067
post your work desu

>> No.3600083

>>3600068
Looks good desu. But maybe changing the lips and the nose.

>> No.3600278
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>> No.3600367
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3600367

>>3600083
Is this better?

>> No.3600369

>>3600367
weird ass bow, cuh

>> No.3600371
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3600371

>> No.3600372

>>3599676
Don't listen to the other prick, this is going fine. Finish what you've started then move onto something new. You're doing very well.

>> No.3600376

>>3600372
ahh yes the white knight, wana offer him some eggs for breakfast while youre at it?

>> No.3600379

>>3599773
Neck is long and stiff

>> No.3600460

>>3600371
I thought she was performing a handjob there.

>> No.3600504

>>3600372
Its because of people like this that he's never really improved throughout all the years he's been on ic. Same shitty loli drawing. Poor anatomy. Same muddy rendering. 0 improvement. Not to mention a few other lost causes >>3599908
>>3600367

>> No.3600508

>>3599277
Your lines are so jarring, I wish you’d colour something

>> No.3600559
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3600559

Personal

>> No.3600568

>>3600508
That's the goal. I'm still practicing so I can draw lineart faster so I have more time coloring. Though I haven't practiced coloring or values yet.

>> No.3600581

>>3599908
literally nothing hahaha youre gonna be shit forever yev keep it up

>> No.3600594

>>3599908
The only weird thing about your stuff is everyone's sitting all the time, do their legs even function?

>> No.3600608

>>3599676
Your anatomy turns into a mess pelvis down. The image is visually boring but I think if you paint it, colour and lighting can add interest.

>> No.3600660

>>3600559
You not feeling the form and your anatomy is completely wrong. Learn perspective and construction first, after that go with anatomy.

>> No.3600693
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3600693

>>3600660
Heared same thing before
I thought i can learn drawing and mistaking shit ton of crap but i can clearly notice arm is wrong

It's take too much time to fix, since too hard to find malfunction.
I'm clearly talentless because i couldn't got a decent result compared to years
Honestly i'm worrying

But i will practice personal sketch everyday there's no way to avoid it's my job

>> No.3600704
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3600704

How cute is she?

>>3600594
Ive drawn a lot of standing poses

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>> No.3600735

>>3600704
please just stop dude. Take the time to actually learn. Feels like your just shitting out crap at this point.

>> No.3600770

>>3600704
Hey frend don't get me wrong I love you're stuff and wished i was half as good. I've seen your other stuff, I really liked the minecraft thing, sad you never finished it. I was just telling you my only complaint which is that lack of variety, not that it's wrong, I still love you're stuff, but I would love to see more ellaborate stuff like that minecraft thingy!

>> No.3600826

>>3600770
maybe one day I'll do another minecraft thing like that. I want to make a comic with those 3 characters inside minecraft eventually.

>> No.3600839
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3600839

>>3599049
just messing around but I feel like some of them look okay

something about >>3599607 is really appealing to me but Maybe I'm just a sucker for pixel brush

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>> No.3600872
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>>3600735
its cute!

>> No.3600874
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3600874

i accidentally posted this in the wrong place like two times (sorry) but thankfully people redirected me to here. basically was just looking for some general critique and also some suggestions on how i should go about coloring this. first time i've drawn digitally in awhile and i'd just like other peoples input!

>> No.3600875
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3600875

>>3600874
here's the version i tried to color a bit. not really happy with it though

>> No.3600877

>>3600875
also sorry for not resizing i didn't realize how freaken large these drawings were

>> No.3600943

>>3600875
>>3600874
It's adorable

>> No.3600995
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3600995

ozzy doodle

>> No.3601057 [DELETED] 
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3601057

>>3598112
I'm bad, especially with legs, but I gave it a shot.

>> No.3601062
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3601062

>>3598112
I'm bad, especially with legs, but I gave it a shot.
(had to resize)

>> No.3601093

why the posters in here can't give a proper critic?

they just saying X is wrong Y is wrong learn X
and can't point what part is specifically wrong (X doesn't position like that so because bla bla....)
Ambiguous critic is doesn't help

>> No.3601100

>>3601093
thats wrong

>> No.3601105

>>3601093
because anybody with a brain and common sense doesn't need that much hand holding?? go to /beg/ if you need more insight on why your drawing is objectively bad.

>> No.3601106

>>3600995
based ozen. looks nice but id change the nose. having the line and both nostrils that way looks odd, you could simplify it to look nicer with just the nostrils or something

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3601128

>>3600367
Last one.
>>3600369
Yeah, in hindsight I should've just made it ribbons instead of a bowtie kinda thing.
>>3600504
Here's your (You).

>> No.3601129

>>3601128
Forgot to say, how do I make the face not look flat? I don't have any refs of rendered anime heads in profile.

>> No.3601150

>>3601128
Much better desu. Post more anon.

>> No.3601154

>>3601105
This is bad critiquing

>>3601093
This is what you are supposed to do

>> No.3601162

>>3601128
hahaha stay shit furfag. You always will be.

>> No.3601167

>>3601093

everyone in alt is shit bro, learn how to self correct your own shit or perish

>> No.3601214

>>3601128
Looks nicer than 80% of /alt/ t bh

>> No.3601254

>>3601150
>>3601162
>>3601167
>>3601214
the absolute state..

>> No.3601338
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3601338

this is real now

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>> No.3601381

>>3601128
wtf, where are my raccoons?

>> No.3601605

>>3600693
hang in there friend, keep your daily sketch going and best of luck with your progress

>> No.3601612
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3601612

Started drawing again after i took some months off. Never posted here before so here it goes

>> No.3601619

>>3599218
is it me or is her nose on her right cheek?

>> No.3601627
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3601627

I know it's going to just be a whole lot more of fucking nothing but holy christ if someone happens it better be fucking good.

>> No.3601763

>>3598327
>>3599218
>>3600278
>>3601370
Blog?

>> No.3601771

>>3601627
your face changed. I like it

>> No.3601818

>>3601627
>that neck to chin distance

She is not physically able to tilt her head upwards

>> No.3601872
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3601872

sketch from last night

>> No.3601875

So beside drawing from life what else can I do to master the "american comic style"

>> No.3601876

>>3601872
Good stuff

>> No.3601877
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3601877

>>3601875
Forgot pic

>> No.3601882

>>3601763
https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com

>> No.3601951
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3601951

tactical boy

>> No.3601975

>>3598547
>>3598670
your shit looks pretty nice, a little bit same angle/same face, but they look really cute, good job anon

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3601988

>>3598995
何いってんのかわからん

>> No.3602061
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3602061

Never posted here before so here we go.

>> No.3602066

>>3601988
Oh shit this is nice.

>> No.3602082

>>3601818
I don't think you know what the fuck you're talking about.

pussy that chin up close drip drip drip

>> No.3602091

>>3602066
you'll see its not in a year or two

>>3601988
look at your colors, breh

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3602096

>>3598995
For authentic nip style you need to enlarge the top of the head (starting around where the eyes are) and get narrower and smaller for the lower part of the head. Usually the area where the eyes are located is wide, so the eyes fit in there. Both sides of the face are "warping" around the head so one side is always turned away more than the other resulting in the eye farther away decreasing in width in comparison with the other one (perspective distortion), don't overdo it though.

>> No.3602109
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I wanted to try creating a few pages of an imaginary comic for some fun practice, and fuck if I don't have so much respect for the people that pump this kind of shit out weekly. I can't seem to get the perspective on this bloody chest right at all. This is what you get for avoiding backgrounds and landscapes your entire life.

>> No.3602124

>>3602109
I think the thing that's struck me the most is how difficult it is finding a balance between a reasonable work pace and consistent levels of quality. When does so much detail become too much detail and how do you effectively convey a scene and setting without going overkill on detail, and without limiting detail so much that things appear flat.

Competent comic artists are incredible.

>> No.3602144

>>3602096
holy shit

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Almost done, do the background colors look ok or should i change them?

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I drew a thing. How are many lines and shapes and whatnot?

>> No.3602155

>>3602145
Mouth and nose look a bit off

>> No.3602160

>>3602155
How so? any advice on how to fix it?

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>>3602145
Try to draw an appealing profile and use the middle line of that to draw other angles, it helps with the perspective and proportions in general.

>> No.3602180

>>3601872
blog?

>> No.3602190

>>3602177
this is why no one likes ic

>> No.3602192

>>3602145
how about can i put my weenie in that cirno

>> No.3602195

>>3602190
at least that anon is trying to help

>> No.3602196

>>3602190
actually hes right, you must be the op and just got btfo because someone pulled it off better

>> No.3602197

>>3602177
Hmm, looks a bit too different to my style imo, i'll keep it in mind though

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>>3602196
>>3602195
literally kill yourselves.

Fucking tranny faggots.

>> No.3602202

>>3602200
>that
>paintover
AHAHAHHAHAHA

>> No.3602205

>>3602096
kek

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>>3602197
tried fixing the face a bit, i think i'll post it like this

>> No.3602217

>>3602197
I was assuming you wanted to get it more Japanese looking, so it changed quite a bit. Well, maybe you can still get something out of the paintover.

>> No.3602228

>>3602145
>>3602200
This man just fixed your illustration from the waste up imo

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>>3602228
The hair didn't really conform to her skull.

>> No.3602243

>>3602145
>>3602240

>> No.3602253

>>3602212
>>3602145
>>3602155
The dimple at the corner of her mouth is making it look like she has a weird lip shape

>> No.3602273

>>3602240
why did you tear his paper?

>> No.3602277

>>3602273
Her neck was weirdly centered under her skull

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>> No.3602360

>>3602351
poops/10

>> No.3602391

>>3602348
>>3602351
5head/5

>> No.3602409

>>3600278
Why does her left shoulder have a butthole?

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Most recent pages of muh webcomic. Some panels came out ok, but some feel rather barren. Is using greyscale a good way of learning tone, or is it just stunting my growth?

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>>3602432

>> No.3602435

>>3602432
>>3602433
Shit, those are the big boy sizes...

>> No.3602436

>>3602145
I love your stuff miruku

>> No.3602458

>>3602348
>>3602351
First one you posted is better, 2nd is too tall and slim. Also the hips and the body seem to be moved a bit too much to the left.

>> No.3602467

>>3602432
It's the perfect way to learn tones.

>> No.3602471

>>3602348
pops can't self improve

>> No.3602502

> The amount of completed works in this thread with next to no replies.

what did /ic/ mean by this?

>> No.3602520

>>3602502
Welcome to /ic/, newfriend. Hope your anime girls are up to par!

>> No.3602522

>>3602502
yeah it has to be bad or interesting, or good, but in a way where it can still be pulled apart easily

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help

>> No.3602550

>>3602533
Is this idolm@ster?

>> No.3602552

>>3602550
yes

but they will also be dressed like characters from dbz

>> No.3602588

>>3602145
Looks really solid but like the one person said I would move the nose to the right a bit because it is a bit awkward.

>> No.3602592

>>3602533
On the left I would move the breasts up just slightly. And on the right the shoulder she is using for the salute is off and stiff.

>> No.3602599

>>3602533
I don't really understand how the girl on the rights shoulder is intersecting with the girl on the lefts. At that perspective it would literally be slicing into her.

>> No.3602606

>>3602533
Left girl's shoulder is on the top of the right girl's shoulder, but right girl's head is on top of the left girl's.

>> No.3602635

>>3601876
thanks!
>>3602180
grachh.tumblr.com/tagged/art

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I can feel the degeneracy growing within me while making this

still need some polish here and there but it's almost done

>> No.3602723

>>3602720
wack ass proportion bruh

>> No.3602735

>>3602723
Fuck me didn't notice it until I look at it through my phone. Thanks for pointing it out

>> No.3602749

>>3602720
Blog?

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hope this isn't too nsfw for here
been trying to study the torso muscles more

>> No.3602872

>>3602720
Also the panties bleed into her leg a bit.

>> No.3602920

>>3602635
that desperate to give your blog lmao

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>>3602720
Your facial features have no depth. This has been consistent in your works and it just looks like you shade a flat face and draw the features over them. You have to use shading to bring in the facial features as well, the head is a 3D form after all.

Or if you just want to go more on the stylized path, then cut the shading and go for more pic related.

>> No.3602943

>>3602720
the same potato face you've been drawing

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>> No.3603075

I don't have an image example on hand but, how do you make those skin highlights where one end is sharp, and the highlight gradually gets fuzzier as it goes across the form? It looks done in one stroke so I'm curious what brush setting you would have to use.

>> No.3603089

>>3603075
Watercolour brush all produce that effect.

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Maybe I'll have time to actually art this weekend; I'm sick of these

>>3601106
ye

>> No.3603113

>>3603091
your name should be tumor chin because thats what those chins look like

>> No.3603115

>>3603075
Soft brush and lasso tool? Or acrylic dry brush in painter?

>> No.3603125

>>3603113
didn't ask

>> No.3603161

>>3602749
Thanks, it's
https://awan0918.tumblr.com/

>>3602872
Yeah I will edit it later because it's not finalized yet

>>3602942
Ah exactly what I've been thinking lately, I made the face almost 2D because I thought that's the way to stylize anime but apparently it doesn't work so well with the way I render? I will have to do some research and see how other people approach this.

>>3602943
I know the body proportion is wrong but what's wrong with the face this time? I guess the perspective is slightly off on the top of the head and maybe the cheek is tangent with the hair so it appears a bit off, but potato again? At this rate I'm turning into king of Latvia or something soon :/

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>>3599734
Some more drawings I did, these are of Tracer. First time ever drawing her, well this page was second, my first I'll post next. What do you guys think?

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>>3603168

>> No.3603219

>>3603125
??????????????????? bitch you dont have to ask anything you dumb nigger faggot tumor chin

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just testing skin tones and facial expressions :p ye ik right girls eyes are kinda wack

>> No.3603227

>>3603113
>>3603219
i dont think the rudeness is necessary but hes kinda right. the chins are odd looking, but not too bad

>> No.3603340

>>3603161
I think its mostly her mouth, it looks weird and makes the rest of her face and expression a bit awkward

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>>3603226
MEIDO

>> No.3603351

>>3603348
more like /beg/do
jk it cutish

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>>3603351

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>>3602533
Okay changed some stuff with the advice I got here, redrew right's face and now her pose actually makes a bit more sense.

probably gonna add color soon. god i'm the slowest drawer ever

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watched too many track cycling videos

>> No.3603577

>>3599098
The shoulder would be a bit foreshortened at this angle, bring it back a little bit and see how that feels out

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this one is based off a ref

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>>3592413
Pen pressure died and I'm too lazy to fix it, please tell me how to get better at drawing clothe wrinkles other than expanding my visual library (because I'm already on it)

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>>3592413
Pen pressure died and I'm too lazy to fix it, please tell me how to get better at drawing clothe wrinkles other than expanding my visual library (because I'm already on it)

>> No.3603612

>>3603572
nice feet faggot

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>>3603609
study from other artists or from life/photo of different clothing. Analyze how the folds and its shadows are formed.
Some artists block out the shapes first then blur it afterwards.

>> No.3603636

>>3603627
>Some artists block out the shapes first then blur it afterwards.
Yes I noticed that too.

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Jumping some bandwagons

>> No.3603772

>>3603636
the block and smudge is actually the secret no ones talking about, started doing this and my work got way more appealing. better imitates how light works

>> No.3603775

>>3603765
cute...CUTE

>> No.3604301

>>3602533
Did you just copy paste some eyes?

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>>3603168
>>3603169
>If Tracer was "villain-du-jour" vs. Ladybug and Chat Noir

Pretty cool, anon!

>> No.3604562

>>3599908
I like your work a lot Yev, and it's sad to see that most of /ic/ can't discern the difference in quality between these two: stronger sense of depth, weight, mass, overall refined style, etc.But you know better than most how unreasonable expectations are around here. 1 year to become a linework god, another year to become a master renderer, if you're taking your time that is, right? Still, always a thumbs up from me.

Please keep symmetry in mind more though. A lot of times I see your work one arm or leg is a lot longer than the others. The 2018's lower legs are not matching up like they should.

>> No.3604572

>>3604562
retard

>> No.3604582

>>3604562
Go to sleep, Yev.

>> No.3604593

>>3604562
Yev please

>> No.3604600

>>3598714
I like it
Link to your shit?

>> No.3604635 [DELETED] 

>>3597839
wtf is this. looks retarded. do you have down syndrome?

>>3597903
good. fake post hough.

>>3598016
shit

>>3598037
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

>>3598112
literally fucked

>>3598327
not my taste but pro

>>3598333
lmao manhand hippie shit

>>3598353
the actual fuck.....

>> No.3604638

>>3604635
>https://www.deviantart.com/lkz1
YIKES

>> No.3604641 [DELETED] 

>>3598628
rubbish
>>3598694
awful
>>3598714
potential but shit

>>3598893
terrible

>>3598995
autism

>>3599047
real potential but jaw is fucked. fix the jaw and youre 10/10

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>> No.3604643 [DELETED] 

>>3604638
post your art?

>> No.3604644 [DELETED] 

>>3604642

just useless shit desu... so boring

>> No.3604645

>>3604643
great a new jimmy/illastrat

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>>3604645
shitter confirmed

>> No.3604650

>>3604649
epic TROLL FACE XD

>> No.3604652 [DELETED] 

>>3604650
>his art is so bad he literally cannot post it

rekt tbqh

>> No.3604655

What the fuck happened to these threads?
They were never great but all these /b/ tier memeposts are cancer.
Why can't you guys just give honest critiques?

>> No.3604657

>>3604643
literally every person in here draws better than you

>> No.3604658 [DELETED] 

>>3604655
>wahh whahhh

fuck off to reddit

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>>3604657
>*still doesnt post work because its shit*

coolest story bro

>> No.3604662

This is why no one likes this fucking board

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>>3604662
t. cant draw

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>>3604638
>>https://www.deviantart.com/lkz1
TRIPLE YIKES

>> No.3604708

>>3604704
i doubt its actually him. its most likely some shitposter posing as someone whos shit to bait

>> No.3604726

>>3604641
skipped yet again...

>> No.3604728

>>3604726
Not gonna fucking make it

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>>3604643
Deviantart truly is magical

>> No.3604736

>>3604732
What the fuck is happening where her neck meets her chest?

>> No.3604753

>>3604732
Flabby neck

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>>3604659
>>3604708
thats what i figured too

>> No.3604762

>>3604759
What the fuck i love /ic/ now?

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heheheheheeehhehehehehehehe

>> No.3604765

>>3604759
I want to fuck /ic/

>> No.3604766
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>> No.3604826

>>3604666
>https://www.deviantart.com/lkz1
You guys do know this piece of shit is probably not the guy on the deviantart page?

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>>3604736
>>3604753

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>> No.3604874

>>3604826
Then why he's posting that link? Are you implying he's a personal hater of that DA user?

>> No.3604876

>>3604874
Probably, he's way too willing to share that link.

>> No.3604893

>>3604874
Usually yes, sometime you can see them create a thread with some artist's work, pretend to be them to get hate.
In this case he just use a link.

>> No.3604914

>>3604858
Cute woomy

>> No.3604915

>>3604642

This is real neat.

>> No.3605047

It this artist the inspiration of Firez?
https://twitter.com/ssakimetel/media

>> No.3605050

Hey Anon, any YouTube/Twitch Channels full of vids/streams by real magakas you would recommend watching?

>> No.3605059

>>3604759
post /ic/ lewds

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>>3605135

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>>3604764

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>>3603394

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>>3603091

>> No.3605174

>>3605141
>>3605145
>>3605147
>>3605152
Wish i knew what these meant at all

>> No.3605176

>>3605174
Vectors.

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>> No.3605223

>>3605145
Huh, that's actually pretty helpful, thanks.

>> No.3605246

>>3605213
The face on this one is really nice, but I think her torso could be a bit smaller and her legs a bit bigger. Her forearms look a little scrawny too.

Also if she's wiping her mouth maybe you could have some building crumbs coming off. And it'd be nice if you could switch up the bikini style now and again, you tend to draw them a little plain when there's lots of room for prints, patterns, ribbons, frills, ties, clips, etc etc etc.

>> No.3605260

>>3605213
pose looks so stiff. practice more gesture drawing.

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>> No.3605370

>>3605059
dont lewd /ic/ plz

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boipucelle sketch

>>3604600
b-s-c-b.tumblr.com

>> No.3605417

>>3605213
What's your blog again?

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The sad thing is, I actually tried quite hard on this one. I personally think it just doesn't look appealing?

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Peace

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>> No.3605513

>>3605465
christianity is a cuck religion, islam is unstoppable

>> No.3605518

>>3605459
could be worse, otherwise gj

>> No.3605527

>>3605459
Probably cuz you used comic sans

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>>3605496
nile i kno u really like yoh
if you're doing a similar style you should put more effort to understand what makes his work look good,

>> No.3605541

>>3605537
>makes his work look good,
>posts garbage
yikes

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>>3605541

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>>3605459
A few thoughts
>very blank expression. She looks somewhat happy but that's only because of a slight smile and very large and wide open eyes. An opened mouth, some eyebrows, and her eyes looking more up instead of straight ahead would go a long way. Or have her wink or something, asymmetry is great in expressions. Expression is 2nd to nothing in importance, don't neglect it.
>arms are very stiff. both are completely straight/locked at the elbow and one is going directly towards and another going directly away. Give them a little more bend and twist, let them carry a gesture from shoulder to finger tip.
>legs could use a little more assymetry
>shadows need a bit more work. Some parts have varied edges and nods to reflected light, others don't.
>a consistent color scheme and limited palette is good, but the hair, clothes, and eyes are all the same base color and the sky is not far off. I'd make the clothes a lighter pink, closer to white, and desaturate the sky more. Also because of the gradients on her wings being the same as the sky it makes it look like the sky is cutting through her hair on her left.
>I think you phoned it in with the hair highlights. I know thin zig-zags are common in anime but maybe small white dots or thicker curved bands would have been better. Through in more of your own touch instead of using a generic shorthand
> Some red tones for blush and sss on the skin would go a long way. Anywhere you have a white highlight on the skin, have a little bit of reddish glow under it as well (pic related).
>a little more shading on the wings would go a long way, they're very flat as is

Gernally good work, but it does need more thought put into certain things, and some parts still need finishing

>> No.3605634

>>3605564
Not him but thank you for that critique. Helps.

>> No.3605805

Does anyone have tips for someone who just bought a tablet? I often do traditional drawing but the screen/tablet disconnect is weird. Because I can't directly see where my pencil/pen connects it feels weird. Are you supposed to sit close or far? I try to draw as often as I can so, I am just drawing.

>> No.3605822

>>3605805
Draw with the tablet directly in front of you, you can fuck up your shoulder badly if you try drawing with it to the side. You'll also need to force proportions for your tablet to match your screen (google it). Lastly, you might want a stabilizer for drawing, which smooths out your pen stroke to something closer to the line you want. Sai, CSP, Krita, Corel Painter and a few others come with them built in but older versions of photoshop need plugins like Lazy Nezumi to stabilize their lines (only the newest version has it).

Besides those few things it's just something you have to get used to by drawing on it a lot.

>> No.3605918

>>3605541
huh?

>> No.3606040

>>3605549
>>3605918
This anon >>3605541 is referring to the Yoh image and how out of all the good drawing the other anon could've posted, he posted a low tier piece of Yoh's works.
>Learn to green text or else your post lacks proper context

>> No.3606068

>>3605176
>>3605174
I still don't get it chief.

>> No.3606070

>>3606068
ngmi

>> No.3606080

>>3606070
Literally the 'yikes'/'cringe' of /ic/.

>> No.3606163

y i k e s

>> No.3606221

>>3605176
i think you need to go more in details than to be vague.
Maybe the guy has no idea what to do with vectors or even know what vectors is in this context.

>> No.3606389

>>3606163
K i k e s.

>> No.3606542

>>3602952
v cool

>> No.3606612
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>> No.3606657

>>3605213
It's like, oishii in my mouth. Excellent job on giving her thigh muscles form with those strokes, but her right leg looks kind of like it's leading into an early asscheek from too much curvature, instead of the hamstring you probably want. Nice job on the face too, she looks lewd and happy.

>> No.3606676

>>3606612
This is very, very nice. I have 3 nitpicks though
>Her eyes are not really pointing towards the orc. I get she could just be in mid glance but the problem is, looking into her eyes, they don't seem focused on anything.
>It wasn't until I finished writing the above nitpick and gave the image a couple more looks that I even noticed she has a fairy following her around. There's no contrast between it and the background and the eye passes right over it looking between the girl and the orc. Maybe move it to the upper right where it can stand out more against the forest canopy.
>And I'm wondering if you just have a fear of lower legs? You hid them for the girl and orc both either by tucking them back or cropping it out. It's great you didn't hide any hands but try not to hide anything else either, The orc's legs look very tiny because of this.

I'd also recommend using smaller dot screen tone and feathering it a bit where it's rimlit But that's just a personal preference more than anything.

Otherwise, very nice. Good use of silhouetting, 3 point, and cute proportions

>> No.3606726

>>3606676
Thanks for the solid advice, I don't have any problem drawing lower legs, actually i'm a pretty big foot perv, it's just I wanted to give this more "widescreen" composition to the drawing and the lower legs got cut off as a sacrifice, plus the pose of the ogre, so it's just pure coincidence.

The ogre proportions are more on the line of a happy accident, I've been studying Foreshortening lately but I still have my problems with it, when I tried to apply on the ogre the proportions looked really cartoony and somewhat cute, so I let it ride; I liked to mash up manga with cartoon so you can almost say is on purpose.

>> No.3606745
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what should i do for the background on this one? i thought of maybe using a snow pattern since it's her winter outfit but im not sure...

>> No.3606748

>>3606745
Dog paws.

>> No.3606754
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How the fuck do you draw anime eyes? I know there's a million ways to do it, but there must be some rules they follow in common, because no matter what I do, I fuck it up. And for something this crucial, there's a surprising lack of decent tutorials.

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>>3606754

>> No.3606774

>>3606765
>First step is a line, second step is the entire eye
>Eye placement isn't consistent with any other landmarks on the head, can be above or below midline depending on tilt
This is exactly the kind of tutorial I take issue with, people who can clearly draw, yet have no idea which rules they've internalized or how to explain them.

>> No.3606783

>>3606765
>how to draw anime eyes
>korean tutorial
wew lad

>> No.3606802

>>3606783
unironically ngmi

>> No.3606803

>>3606774
Just eyeball it bruh until something clicks

>> No.3606808

>>3606802
The funny thing is I've already made it and know this "tutorial", if we're generous and call it that, teaches fuck all. Meanwhile you're still learning, don't know how bad it is, and trying to tell me what's what? Lol

inb4
>post ur werk
Nah ;^)

>> No.3606817

>>3606808
yikes bro I can smell your autism a mile away

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>>3606808
>jokes on you I've already made it!
is this what /beg/s keep telling themselves at night

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>>3606808
>The funny thing is I've already made it
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>> No.3606869

>>3606817
>>3606824
>>3606856
Not him, but I assume since you're laughing at him, you can all defend and explain that excellent tutorial which you perfectly understand, then?

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>>3606869
>Not him.
>Talks about the tutorial
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>>3606880
Tell me what the blue line represents

>> No.3606946

>>3606869
It's simple at fuck construction, what's to defend?

>> No.3606967
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Can someone do me a red-line for the elbows? I have no idea how to make anime elbows... yeh I gues that's a thing now-desu

>> No.3606969

>>3606869
We're laughing at his obvious crab retort, aspie. Get a clue.

>> No.3606979

>>3606894
>not him
Not him, but it represent how consistent is the angle between the two lines that represent the cheek and the jaw are, no matter the actual perspective
>understanding a picture book
>the state

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>>3606754
Have some more moonrunes

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>>3606967
>wrong one

>> No.3607058

>>3607037
Cute! But her upper body/ribs are very bulky compared to her hips.

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>>3607058
I was just fiddling with that, better?

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thred ded af af

>> No.3607099

>>3607087
It feels traced/photobashed
>not a compliment

>> No.3607114

>>3607099

hey thanks for the compliment

jokes aside I did trace something but I scrapped it and redrew it later. I think it looks traced cause I have no idea how to do good looking linework really.

>> No.3607117

>>3607114
No problem, but tracing has nothing to do with linework, you're wasting your time like that. You might be able to excuse tracing in some (retarded) way, but it is surely not related to linework
Ah... Nvm Idk how to text comprehension, still tho

>> No.3607498

>>3599992
>>3598714
Is there a particular reason you're trying to copy my style? You're even adding the three lower eyelashes which I only included in my Franxx fanart.

>> No.3607532

>>3607498
It's called memetics, he liked your style and wants to see more of the same, don't be pissed, be happy.

>> No.3607759 [DELETED] 

new thread >>3607757

>> No.3607768

>>3607759
woops >>3607765