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last thread>>3571027

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to study Anime?
Great news! We have an approved anime study general. Just ctrl + f anime study in the catalog and you'll find it. Other than that, check the resources below.
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)

Remember to not get in the car of strangers! Always say no!

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there's a bit of dissonance between the upper and lower halves but otherwise i think i'm finally starting to get somewhere

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>> No.3575411
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How can I improve (except the terrible leg anatomy)?

>> No.3575415

>this jawline
What a handsome, MAN.

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>> No.3575429

Fix the proportion of your legs because each of your characters look like they're 7 FT+

Other than that you can always attempt more dynamic poses. Got blog?

>> No.3575454

I got an instagram but I dont share these ones, I share my other style. It is shit, actually. search for drawingdudey

I can't come up with poses, I don't want generic photo shot poses (which I drew here), I want the characters to do some meaningful things but I can't imagine anything them to do.

And I am now, suck at legs. Will fix it I hope.

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>> No.3575485

For me it's ok, you can go for a "muh style"

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>> No.3575695

Gib blog? Want to smooch

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>> No.3575803

good match between the head and the body on this one, should their be more veins on the muscles? idk the fetish but people who like muscles like veins i thought

>> No.3575811

>good match
I disagree. While the image itself looks good, the head could be smaller. Although, if we're doing anime waifu anatomy, it might be fine. But since the body is going for a semi-realistic tone, I believe the head should be a bit smaller to match

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The top of the head look wrong, it too flat and low

>> No.3575850

I should probably just make my own thread for this, but I'm tired so I'll do it later.

But for the people that have a unique watermark/signature/logo, how did you go about making it? I want to make one, but damn am I struggling. It's hard to think of something simple, yet creative, but also not to condensed.

>> No.3575867

have a look at monograms, there should be tons of examples on the internet, and probably even guides, then just make one in a style that suits the kind of art you do

>> No.3575870

all these years and i still dont have your blog
do you have one?

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>> No.3575954

Only have deviantart, pixiv and twitter

>> No.3575962

Anon I love you.

>> No.3575975
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I think you should change the face a little instead of generic one like the last one.
Make her more expressive or something.

>> No.3575993

lol ok

>> No.3576056

Lol, my quick edit of that boat girl made it into the thumbnail. This is truly the best timeline.

>> No.3576061

Make her hands slightly bigger.

>> No.3576070

Are you sure? It's supposed to be a child

>> No.3576074

lol? just because shes a child doesnt mean she should have small hands, thats not how proportions work

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Is this better?

>> No.3576118

Yup it's better now.

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long time no see

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>> No.3576417

Do you realize that your artist name will make every Japanese think of "za bicchi"/the bitch?

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i needa post here consistently, the right ones head is def wonky.

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It's literally my an alteration of my real name anon, and it's been my nickname since forever can't do much about it

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usually i draw in a very cartoony and anime style, but for this i'm toning it way down and going for something a bit more realistic. how am i doing?

>> No.3576589 [DELETED] 

looks accurate to the ref and correctly proportioned

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>> No.3576613

0/10 perspective: the border of the door is clearly not at a right angle with respect to its back face. is basic eyeballing

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sketchy sketch

>> No.3576667

Draw hands you coward

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can I fucking go home now already holy shit

How much am I suppose to take? This got fucking retarded months ago.

>> No.3576688

Blog? Looking good.
Her big too looks like it's swollen though. And I think her teeth a a hair too big on the left side. Her eyelashes would also be going under the hair based on how her hair is positioned. I think I'd also add another skin/fat fold with the way her back is bending.

Other than those small things, it's looking great!

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Thanks anon. I agree with those things just as well. Except the eye lashes, I just wanted to show the eye lashes. See that a lot in manga styled things. I appreciate it.

Also this thing.

>> No.3576708

I don't get it, would you please explain a bit more? I did just eyeball it so it doesn't surprise me it's wrong

>> No.3576709

will work on learning those senpai
not going to half ass it, just taking it one thing at a time

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Noice. Try to accentuate a bit more the shadow on the neck and put some drop shadows Between the clavicle and the clothing to depict that form a bit better

That looks a bit uncomfortable, the neck and thorax seem to be at an almost right angle.

Cute face though

I’ve not fused the line work on this one yet but someone asked me if I was going to color it. I hope it doesn’t look too bad

>> No.3576734

stop posting anytime

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>> No.3576748

Goddamnit firez your rendering is ass, go back to chibi

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>Firez following the way of Kyle
God speed my friend. Please remember us when you make it.

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grandma sketch

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virgin firez vs the chad kyle

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Heh. Don't worry the more I draw the more it humbles me. Also kyle is way better than me

Granted what I wrote above, you are comparing a very early wip with a very polished final piece

Anyways, I finally finished this -_-

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is just a silly eyeball thing: it looks like the side of the door has a sharp angle, instead of being at 90º

anyway, i tried to recreate the correct vps for the door (using a diagonal fov=49.8º, and the cv at the green line) the red lines show the right angle

is not even a big difference, there are other discrepancies there, but for some reason this one becomes obvious for me

>> No.3576851

on second thoughts, if i choose a cv arbitrarily to the right, your lines could be actually correct, so i'm probably just overthinking it
uncropped photos and 3d renders have the cv at the middle of the picture, so maybe that's why it looks wrong to me

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>cute faces

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Heh. Don't worry the more I draw the more it humbles me. Also kyle is way better than me

Granted what I wrote above, you are comparing a very early wip with a very polished final piece

Anyways, I finally finished this -_-

>> No.3576878

oh, that's what you meant, it does look off, I will use your correction, thank you very much! Honestly I thought you meant the whole door was wrong, which it sort of is but I'll leave it like that anyway.

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and the nude version

>> No.3576886

>comparing a very early wip with a very polished final piece

i could replace the left pic in >>3576802 with your finished one and every single point would still stand.

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And the nude version

thanks anon <3

>> No.3576888

not him, but post your work.

>> No.3576900

i cant sully my good name anon

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Most recent pages on muh webcomic.

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>> No.3576904

You have no name, post your work faggot.

>> No.3576924

youll have my name as soon as i post, idiot

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>> No.3576929

There is no finished one, there will be one at some point in the future. Feel free to do the comparison by then but at the end of the day you're comparing my stuff with Kyle's.

He has none, last time he dropped the facade he said he doesn't draw and is only here to shitpost

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>> No.3576956

Firez’ isn’t even done yet you idiot. And even so I really prefer the different hues on his.

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finally done
...I think.

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>> No.3577167

>2 different feet for both of those
do either of them not know how to draw feet?

>> No.3577172

i like it
better than either of these cucks>>3576802

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fap fap fap

some anon helped alot

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Generic wacky inspectors

>> No.3577239

i want it as a pet.

>> No.3577247

A study?

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>> No.3577250
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yeah i forgot to upload outlined one

>> No.3577254

No I meant were you studying another artist?

>> No.3577260

i did, just grab some image from pinterest and
experiments shit on photoshop.

so i'm not gonna use it for commercial or shit
and it's not worth to it

>> No.3577299

Where night I read this? Very rarely do I enjoy web comics but this draws me in for some reason.

>> No.3577358

fuck that other guy, I love a nice jaw on a girl

>> No.3577368

I'm having n/osebro vibes from this but other than that she's v pretty

>> No.3577413

Coming to a website near you as soon as I am done polishing the last few pages. I just started working on it a week ago, and I do not want to post it until I have at least the full intro done.

As far as my admittedly limited research has told me, it is going to be unique in its tone and style. 17th century fantasy about when civilization and early modern industrialization bring an end to the age of adventuring and romanticism. Also going to be as PG as I can manage.

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Man, make appealing furrys is so fucking hard, Just whem i'm finally starting to understend this wacky anatomy with the feet and hands, trying to do more interesting colors is as hard, if not harder, nothing looks cohesive and just a fucking mess.

Maybe I should stick to more earth tones to trick the brain in looking more normal, but still is really fucking hard come up with something that is not uncanny until certain point.

I promise I do better next time.

>> No.3577418

It's hard because you don't understand the depths of your own psyche. Drawing and liking furries hints and something fundamentally broken in your psyche. Of course you will never be able to produce anything satisfying when the source of this perversion is so blurry and unexplored to yourself.

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>> No.3577423

don't draw them heh... loser

>> No.3577430
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Lol, stop being retarded, anon. The biggest problem with modern furry art is because in the western they start to messing around with realism what looks literally gross.I'm using the same as a nip theory to draw more appealing and cartoony furries so my drawings don't fall in the same gross uncanny valley that most modern western furry art can fall in to.

It's just really hard to pull that off, because it's naturally something weird for the human "psyche",Hating furries is justifiable when you know the reason why they are so hated, it's just fault of a couple of rotten apples who spoild all the barrel, but hating like you are doing, completely mindless just because you are impressionable and with no critical thinking is really dumb.

subject matter don't affect the quality of good art, if you are a competent artist you can make anything look good.

>> No.3577466

that is super cute, blog?

i totally agree, western furry is uncanny. the nips do it right because it's fully stylized and it comes off actually cute.

>> No.3577469

>I really prefer the different hues on his
these are the people critiquing your work, /ic/

>> No.3577485

man, i wish i could make shit like this

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>> No.3577850

Can I get uhhhhhh blog?

>> No.3577865

sure https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com

>> No.3577871

no, go back to drawing neked wamen.

>> No.3577872

THIS blind

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>> No.3577924

very nice

>> No.3577984

how did you learn to render in that really generic concept-art greyscale style, unironically asking

>> No.3578035

everytime I see your art it inspires me so much
I love you

>> No.3578043

Cool overall but the pose needs a few tweaks. The shield hand doesn't look relaxed at all, and the sword should rest on an arc that sweeps away from him, not towards him. Think of the lines of action for a relaxed pose like this as draping some cables onto the floor. They will splay outwards, not inwards

>> No.3578098

I personally liked the eyelashes actually. Just had to point em out just in case for realism purposes.
Is it cool of me to ask for your art sites?

>> No.3578100

it's better to just get it done man. I'm telling you. Even if they aren't good, just draw them. You'll thank me later.

>> No.3578140

really nice, except im unclear about what is hovering over her head.

>> No.3578153

To expand on what the other anon said, I think it would be cool if you tried poses from different angles as well, all your poses are three-quarter with all of your front/top planes visibles, drawing from crazy angles would help you practice perspective as well. (For example, character lying down, or character jumping in the air seen from bottom up view)

>> No.3578164

I've said this before, but I still think your feet are oversized. Biggest turnoff desu

>> No.3578170

What's with the soft shadow on her left breast? (SR)
Light diffuse enough to create a shadow this soft at such a close distance probably wouldn't leave a visible cast shadow at all, so it ends up looking like a form change rather than a cast shadow from the hair.

>> No.3578171

Feet are normal (compare to the length of the forearm, they're slightly shorter which is normal). My guess is the foot looks wrong in comparison to the thigh, because the thigh looks too short due to its foreshortening not matching the perspective it's drawn in.

>> No.3578193

And now you can read it here! I will be updating in bulk, month to month, chapter by chapter. Probably 30 pages average per chapter.

>> No.3578195

Son of a bitch.

>> No.3578217

Could be a Western Cartoon if not for the pozz of the Leftist media.

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Forgot how to draw eyes again, please send help.

That art style reminded me of Heracles for some reason.

>> No.3578223

I'm glad you keep posting here Anon, your stuff always makes me smile. Hope you keep your Twitter updated too. Eyes are looking fine btw, just focus on solidifying the forms of the arms and hands.

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>> No.3578228

Good shit, shoulders are wider than the pelvis by a large margin which is a little bit weird on a female (even on a male they'll usually be a similar width), that's my only criticism.

>> No.3578231

i'm proud of firez desu

>> No.3578244


It was a very entertaining thread. A surprising amount of offended normies too

>> No.3578263

Not bad. Very boyish frame though, not sure if that was intentional. Cute either way. Minor nitpick is that you drew the feet perpendicular to eachother with a straight front and side view.

>> No.3578292

it looks nothing like samus
it's just firez' generic same face girls

>> No.3578295

there are no design elements that indicate this is samus and its bugs the shit out of me that you call her samus when there is nothing in the painting that shows that

>> No.3578297

it was actually practice for rendering using hard round and smudge. combined that with added effects of hard round with opacity and flow on pen pressure. It's experimentation so I'm really in the process of learning myself. Most things I've learned from experimenting with techniques on photo studies though.

>> No.3578316

>normie in the reddit page mentions the same thing
>firez: hurr iz my style! You don't understand because you live in a 1st world country!!!

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>tfw you have to go full sjw to troll another d/ic/k

Also nice job on misrepresenting what he said

>> No.3578363

He literally said in the comments that he's in a 3rd world and 1st worlders will probably won't understand his style (and fetish)

>> No.3578367

Dude, just drop it. As you showed 2 thread ago you're stupid beyond words

>> No.3578368 [DELETED] 

I'm not the artist, but I'm always confused when people say stuff like this. I know lot's of girls in real life who have thinner hips than they do shoulders. As an artist don't you want to go for varied and interesting body shapes? Always drawing the ideal body is just boring desu.

Plus that character is pretty cute already

>> No.3578380

>As you showed 2 thread ago
What? This is my first time making a
firez comment lul. Here's your last (you)

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thanks, good call on the frame

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You have a nice, aesthetically pleasing style, but what you might be slightly lacking in is a sense of three dimensions. Also, I guess style-wise, slightly stronger/more meaningful line-thickness variance would benefit you greatly.

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>> No.3578542

I like how you posted this to reddit to get them upvotes

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>> No.3578716

fuckin neato. got a blog?

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>> No.3578843

Wrong foot.

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MI spoilers

>> No.3578849

those tiny tiny eyes lmao

>> No.3578852

I just discovered them and I want to draw everything with them now

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I think I'm done with this

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what's wrong with this sketch layer

>> No.3578939

lacks essence of loomis

>> No.3578942

Could you be more specific?

>> No.3578947

Good job anon I really like the feeling this one gives.

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Thanks anon, I think I should do that more, but the example picture was kinda a character sheet.
Wow, the line advice got me! I need thicker lines indeed. But I don't get the meaningful part, is there any tutorial about how you control your lines better? About the dimensions, that's right, I can't even draw side portrait of the characters right now hehe.
Here is another one.

>> No.3578995

Are you serious?

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another musician drawing

really comfy colors, love it.

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>> No.3579019

Oh shit they're getting bigger

>> No.3579050
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does it look ok so far?

>> No.3579073

oh . thanks for noticing

>> No.3579080

Not gonna lie he looks just like the previous one

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>> No.3579094

I like it but I wonder about Shadows in front of her. Maybe it could be a tiny bit darker.

>> No.3579097

Not bad.

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>> No.3579105

She's got massive beast hands, but I figure this is what you're going for.

Watch out, the cross contour lines on her upper arm are drawn like we were seeing the bottom plane of it (bottoms up) while the rest of the pose (feet, shoulders, top of the head) is clearly top-down.

>> No.3579121
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Thank you frends

Yeah, i did thought about putting some values there but decided not to since it's supposed to be a void

This is was the final revision, a bit brighter and less contrast and also a bit of blue

>> No.3579126
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What do you think about the composition for this? I would really appreciate some feedback before I dive head first into colouring it. Thanks!

>> No.3579130

Composition itself is a bit basic but the idea could be improved. Why not try using Maka or her scythe as the vertical border between Evans and the rest of the cast, seeing as she's the focus of the piece being in the forefront.

>> No.3579151

If you change her... Oh wait... "Their" skin tone, it will be okay.

>> No.3579155

never post something on /ic/ singling out a singular error like "composition", "anatomy" or that shit because it's your dunning-kruger showing and you look like a tool

>> No.3579166

This. Also it might be worth only colouring maka and just do b&w tones on the rest of the cast

>> No.3579177

I like it. Looks like a Ghost Trick character.

>> No.3579181
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very nice

>> No.3579183

one of your best, this one is actually readable and is not muddy looking.

>> No.3579191
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we have but one path

>> No.3579193

doing more sketches of this character tonight, will keep your words in mind, thanks anon.

>> No.3579194

man jace i was about to fuckin rib you for drawing so shit but then I realised you weren't tracing and I have nothing but support for you
godspeed mate, you'll improve in no time, unironically

>> No.3579212

drop the edge and you'll go far

>> No.3579215
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I have just so much more to do on it and I just don't have the ability to focus that well.

>> No.3579216

you realize this is a rough sketch right

>> No.3579217

don't take kindness for granted you fucking twit
you could do a 180 on your image but instead you're pulling this petty scihzo hubris shit; leave it and improve and we'll applaud you absolute stain

>> No.3579224

you might be literally retarded.

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>> No.3579230
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literally retarded

>> No.3579248
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>> No.3579319

This reminds me of that cthulhu picture where he is walking in the ocean.

>> No.3579324
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Your character's jaw to me seemed too vertically squished. Her left eye was too far out and larger than it needed to be. I also reduced the size of her cranium a little. Keep up the good work.

>> No.3579429

With regard to the line control, the purpose of controlling line thickness is to show where there is shade and where there is light. You want heavier lines in places of shade or perhaps even of high importance/impact. Conversely, you want lighter lines in areas of light. If you look at a real person standing in light, against a light background, there isn't going to be a thick outline where the light part of their arm kisses the background. In fact, there would probably be none. Line control can make or break lineart. I think there are tons of tutorials you can find for lineart on youtube.

>> No.3579435

I can't tell what's going on here. Are two legs of her chair being substituted by the side of a hill? If that is a table, the perspective is really off, unless it's a tilted table or something, in which case some objects on said table could help to show what's really going on here.

>> No.3579443

It's supposed to be a control panel will add more detail and post again

>> No.3579472

looks worse

>> No.3579525

not him but thats merely a fun and neat way to keep an (if you feel) undeserving anon from getting the satisfaction of a (you)! Like so. If you have anymore questions about this site feel free to ask me!

>> No.3579535

It's def looking better but the chin still feels to far out

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>> No.3579556
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I'm returning to drawing.
Still so many panels?

>> No.3579562

Why begs like saturated colors so much?

>> No.3579573
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The chin is fine, she just needs her jaw back

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>> No.3579618
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First thing I see as soon as I put all my stuff away is the couch. What the fuck.

Oh well, it was fun. I'll probably unfuck and continue this.

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Put some more work into this

The left one has some subtle green hue which is absent from the right one. I wonder if I should keep it

>> No.3579629

make sure to set a perspective grid friend, you can't just eyeball your way around

>> No.3579633

if you like dead girls yeah

>> No.3579637

The way you render skin is so awful.

>> No.3579649
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I put some more work into this, I wonder if I should keep the green hue on the left

Thanks for the input and sorry for the deletion can't believe people still discuss about my shitty work

And there is no way you can know what the client asked me (hint: he did not want a study, it is an elaborated alternate version, considerable separated from the original character)

At the end of the end of the day he was more than pleased with the execution of the idea

Indeed there was more of my argument than that single comment. I'm honestly surprised how offended some people got.

Just like last time I did not expect to reach the frontpage but this time I got better results in regards to new followers. I'm still replying about quotations requests

Thanks but In time I hope you can do better I'm honestly dissatisfied by my work

First time getting that impression from this piece, Thanks and noted


>> No.3579662

Thank for the advice, I was thinking the same

I have not a blog, but I'm working on it

>> No.3579663
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was this your reference

>> No.3579667

Sure you can. The couch is just a few boxes.

Just a bad case of me zooming in and tunnel visioning away from the background. I didn't even make a box for the prelim, just drew lines straight past the figure. But that's not very smart as you see.

>> No.3579805
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this is how i would change the arm

>> No.3579929

dont listen to this idiot >>3579155

>> No.3579959

can you please use a tripcode?

>> No.3579975

it was weird seeing your ass at evo. but i'm glad you still are around. this looks good so far. your eyes are still true to your style.

>> No.3579977
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>sure you can
okay then I was just giving you advice mr entitled faggot

>> No.3580018
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hows this for different colors

>> No.3580020

why would you want to filter him? hes a good boi

>> No.3580023

god that skin rendering looks like shit, is she cloaked in formaldehyde?

>> No.3580045

Can anyone recommend me some good anime artists with a diverse visual library that posts frequently? I want some inspiration because sometimes I really don't know what the fuck to do

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>> No.3580059

I've already followed attall, but I don't think he posts that frequently. By frequent I mean like every 1-3 days

>> No.3580074

Whew, I'm really liking the amount of colour you introduced into the piece! I was trying to work with a more muted palette though, but thanks for taking the time to show me this.

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>> No.3580091

oversaturated everywhere. makes it look cluttered. or like it was passed through a filter

>> No.3580092

>muted palette
thats not what a muted palette is this, i did't even change the saturation just the lightness

>> No.3580093

again, did't change saturation

>> No.3580094

cute! you post up work anywhere else on the net?

>> No.3580105
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i only changed the lightness more than anything els, i barely touched the colors and all i used were the lab curves. in fact i ran the image through a luminosity layer which basically breaks the image up to show only chroma(saturation) and remove lightness mine was more muted than the original.

>> No.3580108

just because you didn't press the saturate button doesn't mean you didn't saturate the colors the fuck lol?
also you don't seem to understand atmospheric perspective
stop posting anytime

>> No.3580111

atmosphere perspective is when only objects in the distance are washed out, not the entire image.
and i literally just proved you wrong on the saturation with the luminosity pass idiot

>> No.3580115

Right one looks better. I really like the changes on her face btw

>> No.3580121

what they should have said is you added more contrast to it which is not what the op was going for. also you don't understand atmospheric perspective because you killed the scale of the girl by boosting the contrast

>> No.3580130 [DELETED] 

it was a 10 sec edit with curves, that yielded better results than the original in therms of colors since literally everything is washed out. applying your shitty "atmosphere perspective" doesnt that along either. and yes it is contrast, but the aim was just better colors.

>> No.3580135

it was a 10 sec edit with curves, that yielded better results than the original in terms of colors since literally everything is washed out. applying your shitty "atmosphere perspective" doesnt take along either. and yes it is contrast, but the aim was just better colors.

>> No.3580159

I guess the term I was looking for was trying to work within a specific few colours? I think it might work better if the girl was still blended in with the BG a bit though, as much as I like the skin tone she stands out a bit too much with the adjustment.

>> No.3580160

did you know that things that are farther away have less contrast and are usually cooler toned due to the atmosphere? interesting huh

>> No.3580162

>did you know that things that are farther away have less contrast and are usually cooler toned due to the atmosphere? interesting huh
literally just said that
and not cooler just washed out retard

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>> No.3580223

Make a fucking IG already I don't want to use fucking DeviantArt

>> No.3580225

>it was weird seeing your ass at evo
You might be confusing him with Godshot. This is Reifag.

>> No.3580227

no, cooler, because of the atmosphere reflecting blue, that's why the sky is blue. retard.

>> No.3580246

Didn't notice the previous thread was already outdated, guessing you didn't see my post

Can you post some inspirations of yours? As in, artworks you'd like to be able to draw yourself.

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>> No.3580266

Hm, to be honest, I don't know if it's worth making IG. I made dA cus I was thinking it would be good place to get noticed, but didn't work so well.

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>> No.3580329

isnt this alternative art thread
why is everything shitty westerner attempts at anime

>> No.3580333

post work my friend

>> No.3580358

>piece of art thats not attempting to be anime fails to look like proper anime
who woulda thunked

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>> No.3580374

No but holy shit, thanks anon

Thanks, I completely forgot that that muscle must go higher


Try to be more conscious about line weight, interior details should generally have thinner lines

>> No.3580389
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trying some stuff out

>> No.3580407

Its way too bright to the point where you barely notice the subject and you only see the background.

>> No.3580410

those are nice, but you could go way farther with the emotions if you wanted to. It might look more interesting that way.

>> No.3580428
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Okayish,not quite there yet.

>> No.3580442

right because the sky is always blue right retard? it cant be orange or red, right? yeah stop posting buddy.

>> No.3580445

fix your monitor

>> No.3580451
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No you need to fix the lighting in this part. I get that you were showing more of her and to try to make it stand out. But it's too bright to a fault. Lowering it down would allow it to look more mysterious.

>> No.3580454

dude its a quick fix not for the lighting but colors since everything thing was washed out. why are you nitpicking the fuck out of this, just stop posting lol

>> No.3580468

Because I can and you can't take criticism to improve. If you don't like it get the fuck out of the thread you dumb child.

>> No.3580470

Love you jace

>> No.3580476

dude its not even my piece

>> No.3580483

reminds me of the guy that photobashed torsos into his paintings since he couldnt draw.

>> No.3580495
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studying rare d/ic/ks

>> No.3580498

feel bad for these chinlets

>> No.3580527

What is it that makes western made anime so identifiable? Is it that the heads are TOO 3d? This is so elusive.

>> No.3580533

serious case of same face

>> No.3580543

i think the first 3 are the same character

>> No.3580555

Serious case of dumbass

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>> No.3580562

I'm not sure what you are saying but that style also resembles some Korean artists.

>What is it that makes western made anime so identifiable?
It's probably the nose.

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>> No.3580571
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you can see her head in profile with this picture. otherwise p cute

>> No.3580572

What was wrong with the first one you posted?

>> No.3580577

Thanks, I was going off screenshots but couldn't find many good profile angles.

larger than 1000x1000

>> No.3580583

Don't lewd Yuuko you fucking degenerate

>> No.3580589

this without doubt

>> No.3580590

Too late, you were always too late.

>> No.3580595

There's nothing lewd about Yuuko's big, round, soft ass

>> No.3580599

how did u regress this fast? your ako was way better, this is just embarrassing

>> No.3580617
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posting before I ruin it with color

>> No.3580619

don't worry its already unappealing

>> No.3580625

I know it is. I'm in a rut where everything I do looks like shit anyways lol

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>> No.3580631
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What's worse about it? Lines, shading, anatomy? Here's a version with coloring closer to how I usually do it; is this better?

>> No.3580761
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for monsters, something like this

>> No.3580762
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for sci fi something like this

>> No.3580764

share your rare collection of d/ic/ks, i wanna study them too

>> No.3580765
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for action something like this, or the works of tradd moore or james harren

>> No.3580768
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and for porn something like this kinda

>> No.3580848

beware anon, i don't draw cute elf girls often

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>> No.3580914

Finally, firez has killed the girl to free her from all the torment of muddy rendering.

>> No.3580979

firez trying too hard to be funny

>> No.3580981

no hes just being cute!

>> No.3580985

Please use tripcode so i can purge you Firez

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>muddy rendering

Another sorry crab spewing bs

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>> No.3580996

anon i seriously hope you don't think pussies look like that and that's just some sort of weird stylization or whatever

>> No.3581011

i think those are bike spats

>> No.3581031

Is that picture suppose to prove me wrong?

>> No.3581032

It's spat nigger, some fags love them.

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Here is what I think u should do Jace.

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>> No.3581354

No because you are and will always be an idiot jelly crab

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>> No.3581386

I don't think it's unappealing, I like it.

>> No.3581448

can you draw something other then thots for once

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Trying out animu style. I really like Range Murata's stuff so I bit a couple from his artbook. Fisrt time really trying it; tell me what you think especially the bottom left girl, hold old does she look?

>> No.3581766

new thread?

>> No.3581833

here >>3581832
ctrl P

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