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last thread before it fell off the board >>3562628


>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to study Anime?
Great news! We have an approved anime study general. Just ctrl + f anime study in the catalog and you'll find it. Other than that, check the resources below.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>> No.3571029

1st for 1st

>> No.3571030
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Just something I did.

>> No.3571059

3rd for 3rd

>> No.3571065
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I finally learned a reliable way of doing screentone with colors. I mean, it's borderline useless and not worth the effort but I wanted to learn how to do it.

>> No.3571067

>>3571059
prepare to die for

>> No.3571109
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Any advices?

>> No.3571114

>>3571109
Not enough room between the eyes, even retardedly big anime eyes have at least 1 eye's distance between them.

>> No.3571115

>>3571065
Now, can you learn a reliable way to not have a white outline between your lineart and colors?

>> No.3571129

>>3571115
What did you mean?

>> No.3571132

>>3571129
are you blind? there's a white line between your lineart and your colour because you just used the bucket tool

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>>3571109
Fucked up tits

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>>3571129
>>3571132
In order to prevent possible confusion, I'd like to add that the guy is talking about this.

>> No.3571148

>>3571139
Second reply wasn't even mine, but I'm glad there's at least 3 guys who care about crappy white lines on his drawing.

>> No.3571177
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>> No.3571194

>>3571177
wow the first good art yev has drawn

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>>3571065
>>3571177
Cute/10

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>me in charge of not fucking up the post

Anyways, I finished this after slacking off on it for way too long. The face could've turned out a lot better and I overdid it with the filters but overall I'm happy with the rest of the rendering.

>>3571065
>>3571177
Cute/10

>> No.3571249

>>3571139
>>3571132
Oh, this, yeah, I should try to solve, but this drawings are just quick sketches for requests, when I'm really serious I really do not use the bucket tool, it's just save time.

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Hands are fuucked

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>> No.3571706

>>3571265
I mean, they are, but why not fix them before posting if you can identify the problem?

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>> No.3571726

>>3571030
babby's first steps. keep going keep growing
>>3571065
yucky lines, cute girl
>>3571109
eyes are fine. keep doing more complex stuff so you grow. everything about this drawing is basic and nothing is interesting
>>3571177
i like your work, but i hate how often you post.
always easily readable
>>3571223
edges, values, and drawing need work. your rendering is above your drawing level and it looks wack
>>3571265
face is as well
>>3571584
really nice. not really alt, but im a fan of and trying to into painting
>>3571618
gross tangents and the like. work on your shapes and flow because it looks really forced/stiff as if youre obsessing over either perspective or anatomy.

and now begin the (You)s calling me a retard

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>> No.3571790

>>3571618
I think it looks great

>> No.3571792

>>3571726
Retard

>> No.3571795

>>3571726
I personally think it'd be more hilarious if no one replied to your comment.
Most of what you said is wrong, by the way.

>> No.3571804

>>3571795
>Most of what you said is wrong, by the way.
give one (1) example, pal

>> No.3571807

>>3571726
>but i hate how often you post
What the fuck?

>> No.3571866

>>3571804
I will give a proper explanation of my critique as soon as you give a proper explanation of yours.

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>> No.3571901
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Made this. Watcha guys think.

First time posting in /alt/ by the way.

>> No.3571912

>>3571901
pretty neat
is this the ref from /asg/?

>> No.3571914

>>3571901
I dig it

>> No.3571921

>>3571914
>>3571912
Thanks! And yes, this is from the previous /asg/. I saved a lot of refs from there.

>> No.3571930

>>3571866
>tell someone their crits are wrong
>won't give a single example as to why they are wrong unless he explains his perspective more
Grow some fucking balls you snake. Either that or stop being contrarian for its own sake.

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>> No.3571963

>>3571960
I despise those nipples.

>> No.3571986

>>3571726
explain the tangents thing

>> No.3572005

>>3571986
sure. tangent lines occur when the silhouette of two different objects match either to form a single line, and they have the negative effect of flattening an image.
the image has this massive single curve that runs from the breast down to the arm (along witht others), and it makes breaking up the image into readable pieces more difficult. thats why i said that it may feel like there is some constraint or stiffness in the work
its important to have repetition and curves that support each other, but its also important to have breaks or your stuff will look like those shitty gesture drawings that begs make

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>>3571896
The segment of tail between the legs makes it hard to "read" consider leaving that space unobstructed to aid the silhouette

How does one get into drawing chibis?

>> No.3572020

>>3572018
whoa a firez chibi
this post made me happy

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Any books on drawing 80's moe?

>> No.3572032

>>3572018
>Draw firez chibi
>Fixed his awful face
>No "realistic" render
>Cute
We have a winner.

>> No.3572033

>>3572020
Thanks anon. I’m glad (and relieved) you liked it. I don’t even remember the last time I attempted to do one.

>> No.3572039

>>3572018
can you just please deviate from doing amputee subjects

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>>3572032
Some people seem to like my awful faces and realistic rendering. Crazy I know

>>3572039
I do a considerable amount of other stuff. Also for what I’ve seen I’m not that deep in that scene. there are guys who do quadruple amputees or heads directly connected to pelvises. Really weird stuff. I’m more interested in prosthetics and similars

This one is actually more developed I just don’t think it would be valuable to see its early layers of colors

>> No.3572106

>>3571177
you're getting better but i think you should do some hands and feet studies because that's not how they look in real life

>> No.3572114 [DELETED] 

>>3572057
are you like what most people would consider a weird pervert? like the sort of guy who keeps bottles of piss?sort of trying to place you on a darger scale, to know if i should dismiss the creepy vibe i get from your stuff or lean into it or what

>> No.3572143

>>3572057
>>3572057
>Some people seem to like my awful faces and realistic rendering
And some people like badly draw inflation porn on deviantart too.
Stick with chibi firez.

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send help before I color it

>> No.3572165

>>3572150
>wee oooh weee oooh
>heló, I'm here to help
>ah... Fuck

>> No.3572168

>>3572150
Don't paint it, grind a few months more. There's no need to worry about paint at your level, proper drawing skills are more important

>> No.3572172

>>3571584
some men like to paint the world burn

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>> No.3572184

>>3572183
God damn it not you again.

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i drew an anime waifu for someone. i think this is the right thread.

>> No.3572226

>>3572177
BLOG

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>> No.3572263

>>3572177
I like the style a lot, particularly the colors you chose. I'd just say to work a little bit on your posing as it's coming across as pretty stiff to me (particularly with those arms sticking down perfectly straight) and to maybe try cleaning things up a little bit to make things sharper so the form is more defines. As it is things look just a little blobby. Also watch out for small anatomical errors. The boobs look like they're slightly different size/shapes and the neck is very long (I couldn't tell if this was a stylistic choice).
Like it a lot overall though. Keep em coming!

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>> No.3572310

>>3572177
the drawing makes her look like a retarded snake woman
not going to deny that your painting is good though

>> No.3572311

>>3572273
posts like these are to be expected nowadays huh?
i guess this is alt tumblr after all

>> No.3572328

>>3572177
Love the rendering but I agree with the other anon on how awkward the pose is. The face behind the girl also adds to the derpiness of the whole pic lol

>> No.3572332

>>3572273
whhhyyyy did you make rhys so ugly
why
what did he ever do to you.

>> No.3572334

>>3571109
this is so sad
youre only learning how to draw so you can draw wonky ass thirsty anime elf girls who you can jack off too

>> No.3572342

>>3571960
I can never figure out how people draw so well with binary lines like that. Impressive

>> No.3572347

>>3572177
autism face. pretty great aside though

>> No.3572358

>>3572273
I like it, anon! Would love to see something with the full body in the future though.

>> No.3572364

>>3572224
im going to rape her and youre not stopping me

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3572379

vent thing i just finished

>> No.3572388

>>3572379
you should work a bit more on face anatomy, the left eyes is too small, the face is attached too much on the right of the neck

>> No.3572412

>>3572332
devs gave him the chance to canonically kill off one of my favorite borderlands characters :^)

>>3572358
yeah, i planned to do some fullbody "paint" today
just still really struggling with basically everything so i probably need to be less lazy and get some more studies going

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>> No.3572460

>>3571265
Blog? This is a rough WIP but you seem to have experience

>> No.3572466

>>3572057
Are you going to color this?

>>3572143
What's wrong with his faces or realism? It's normal western stylized work

>>3572177
Blog please

>> No.3572533

>>3572466
>It's normal western stylized work
Not really, it's kinda like a pseudo western anime look but doesn't look appealing.
It's better If he just went full anime like the chibi one imo

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>> No.3572721

>>3572708
This is pretty dope man.
Not that I think this piece is really suffering a whole lot from anything, but just something that might be good for you to develop in the future is your use of lighting and color. The lighting and coloring here makes perfect sense and all but it could definitely be pushed to be more dramatic and captivating. As it is, while it works, it seems very plain, which is a shame given how dynamic everything else about the pose and the design is.
Whether that's something you wanna improve or not though is up to you, mate. Looks great either way.

>> No.3572778

>>3572364
im flattered, thank you

>> No.3572799

would animation be allowed itt? what do you guys think of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jssQv-FEFDM&t=0s&list=LLKU9BxvRAreyjAfhjs_oHWA&index=13

>> No.3572804

>>3571378
fuckin hell , is that moat?

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Rough WIP. How do I make this look more interesting? Any suggestions for a better pose/angle?

>>3572708
This is really cool. Might I suggest adding a backlight with a strong contrasting color? Just to separate his legs from the ground a bit more.

>> No.3572945

>>3572912
God those eyes

>> No.3572975

>>3572912
The thing that sticks out the most for me is the position of the legs, like they should overlap. Searching for images of legs crossed should help you.

>> No.3573006

>>3572912
Those legs need rework like those anon said, also give her back her eyebrow and draw the eyes instead of 2 dots you fucking coward.

>> No.3573008

>>3572912
Where's her eyebrows

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/draw/ thread is dead again so i'm here again.

>> No.3573019

>>3573017
Go back

>> No.3573021

>>3573019
make me

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trying out different brushes

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>Ignore giraffe neck please ty
How does the bruising look on this? I want it to look a bit realistic if I can help it. I was thinking maybe I should add more greens and yellows to it? What do you think?

>> No.3573215

>>3573202
why

>> No.3573219

>>3572912
Her thigh is way too long. And given the perspective you gave to the legs, even with her head tilted down, the perspective shouldn't be as appealing.
Low angles are unappealing and it's one of the first things you learn in photography. I get what you were going for, and with art you can make it appealing yeah, but the perspective just isn't right.
Her right arm is also stiff and not natural. It doesn't look like it's bending in a way it should.
Her breasts are also a tad too high and feel a little TOO contained. Although, how tight the suit is, is debatable.
Her left arm doesn't look like it's properly connecting to her shoulder.

and like >>3572975 said, the way the legs are positioned isn't right.

I'd also work on where you place your highlights. You have them all over the place and I have no idea where your light source is. You also didn't shade in several places, also making it difficult to pinpoint your light source.
I'd also try rendering the breasts differently, because they don't really look like breasts. I think it may be do to how you rendered the under breast? They look more like swollen sideways lips.

>also the suit folds are her hip would be upwards too
>not just around her upper thigh

>> No.3573222

>>3573215
Why what? Not really giving me much to go off here anon.

>> No.3573227

>>3573219
*around her hip

>> No.3573239

>>3573202
Is this the girl from the meme

>> No.3573241

>>3573239
?? No? I don't know what meme you're talking about, so double no. It's just a little vent doodle.

>> No.3573250

>>3573202
why

>> No.3573254

>>3573250
Well, just gonna ignore you if you don't give me more to work with anon. Figure you're just dicking around anyway

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I feel weird today. I've always struggled with trying to build up colors and form when I work. I always just go straight into like overrendering and I don't like the way it looks. I like the aesthetic of things being rough, unfinished, soft, and minimalistic when it comes to color. Yet when I try my brain can't flip that switch. Even with drawing too, something that looks effortlessly simple to practice ends up looking like garbage Ex: the two line simplified anime nose, I end up adding too much structure to it and it looks weird like anime faces with realistic noses haha. just venting cuz I'm a bit bummed out, not even sure how to practice anymore.

>> No.3573266

>>3573261
Go back to basics and study some proportion and anatomy work. Your face is flat, the head shape is off, her eyes are too big..
The actual render and coloring you've done looks good (only her mouth, nose, and eyes). The eyes could be much smaller and the rendering on them could be lessened a little, yeah, but it's not too big of a deal.

You really just have to do more practice of the basics. That's where I'd suggest you turn to for the time being, while still doing occasional render practice here and there.

>> No.3573274

>>3573266
thanks anon. I have been kinda stuck in this loop of trying to draw and paint from pictures, and then when I try to paint from imagination I don't have all of that information to go off of anymore, so going back to the books is a good suggestion.

>> No.3573275

>>3573274
I completely understand anon. I have a mild case of aphantasia and I struggle to imagine things that are more than just blurry messes of color or partial, yet blurry, images. Can't even properly picture a leaf in my mind.

Do loose gesture and expression studies. Don't focus on small details, just enough that you can get the gist across.
Definitely get your muscle memory some practice time and work with the basics. Wishing you the best dude.

>> No.3573354

>>3572945
>>3572975
>>3573006
>>3573008
>>3573219
I'll keep it in mind. Thanks a lot anons.

In my defense, her eyes basically are just two dots though.

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>>3573354
Nah, it's just very small, you still have to render it, get to it anon.

>> No.3573364

>>3572708
Any other fags doing bug warriors this month? I'm doing one too

>> No.3573374

>>3573166
nice linework

>> No.3573434

>>3573364
What's this about bug warriors? I made a mantis one but its for tower girls (boy)

>> No.3573440

>>3573434
Its this month's character design challenge

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I hope it's passable despite its issues.

>> No.3573454

>>3571177
cute, CUTE !

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Alright, I shortened the leg, rotated the torso a bit, adjusted the position of the arms, cut off a lot of the hair and a bunch of other small changes.

Maybe I'll try some different poses and angles later but I still like where I'm at with this one.

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A WIP to get back into the rendering habit.

>> No.3573503

>>3573495
boobs look really wonky, like you tried jamming two styrofoam balls on her chest

>> No.3573504

>>3573495
my guy you shortened the leg by like half a centimeter

>> No.3573508

>>3573503
;_; How would I go about fixing that?

>>3573504
Shit, you're right. So I should shorten it enough to completely remove the triangular "hole" in between?

>> No.3573513

>>3573508
probably. i'd also fix the angle of her left leg. it kinda looks like its coming out of the middle of her body

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>>3573508
>How would I go about fixing that
By looking at references and draw you bakayaro

>> No.3573547

>>3573529
>posts Tumblr art

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>>3573496
idk what kinda hat or hair ties those are

>> No.3573590

>>3573583
Blog?

>> No.3573592

>>3573547
youre an idiot

>> No.3573618

>>3573508
>How would I go about fixing that
grinding boobs and whatnot

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What I'm working on currently, how does it look?

>> No.3573631

>>3573629
A cute! But the pose look bland and generic, it's fine if you're drawing character concept.

>> No.3573635

>>3573631
Thank you! Her design is pretty complicated, so I thought I'd start with a pretty basic pose first. Not my character btw.

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>>3573583
Anchor shaped hair ornaments. How they're drawn seems to depend on artist.

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>> No.3573686

>>3573680
Trying making that pose yourself and tell me why you're a dumbass.

>> No.3573697

>>3572721
>>3572912
i know what u mean but i don't really know how to do those things without just fucking up the entire thing lol, i fell for the construction and anatomy meme and know i dont know how to paint.

>> No.3573706

>>3573686
Unfortunately, it would require my being able to do a full split in first place and having something to hold on like this in the second. I have never been that agile, and I can't tell if you are.
However, if you can show me some pole dancing videos where the girls lock their leg on the pole while standing or swirling like this, I would appreciate it. I vaguely remember seeing this trick somewhere, but I don't remember if the instructor/stripper said to lock the pole between the heel and the sole of the shoe or with your ankle.

>> No.3573725

>>3572018
What the hell is happening with the foot on the left (her right, our left)? Also that leg connects weirdly into her pelvis, it makes me kinda uncomfortable looking at it.

>> No.3573728

>>3572177
the anatomy on this is fucking horrendous, why do people keep asking for blog?
samefag suspicion rising.

>> No.3573733
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3573733

>> No.3573741

>>3573733
Not a footfag, but I like how you drew her feet. For a rough sketch this is good enough to do a final linework layer on top of this, but as it stands, some details like the shapes of the fingers and how the left leg properly connects to the pelvis still need to be figured out here it seems like. Really interested to see how you finish this one (if you decide to that is)

>> No.3573762
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3573762

>>3573706
1 minute in google, internet have everything now.
Look at pic related and compare to your.

>> No.3573767

>>3572334
>wanting to draw for pretentious hipster reasons

fuck off gay prick

>> No.3573770

>>3571109
look at her left fingers lmao

fix her fingers, right eye and tits and it'll be 100x better

>> No.3573774
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3573774

>>3573762
This, actually, but I do get it now, thanks for pointing it out.

>> No.3573794
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3573794

Alright I think I got everything this time.

>>3573697
Man if you're capable enough to draw that you're definitely capable enough to slap on a backlight on a new layer.

>> No.3573803

>>3573794
how many times are you going to repost this garbage

>> No.3573805
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3573805

>> No.3573806

>>3573733
right leg is too long and ankles are not that high up... also the head is not proportionate/going into uncanny valley

>> No.3573812 [DELETED] 
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3573812

>>3573774
Or do I...?

>> No.3573814

>>3573803
Shoo shoo

>> No.3573823

>>3573805
brush works look real nice. are you using a hard round or something else?

>> No.3573839

>>3573823
Not that Anon, but rectangle, hard with a mild texture. As far I can tell

>> No.3573842

>>3573794
I'm not really qualified to give any advice, but the legs' position sure do look more natural now.

>> No.3573850
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3573850

i drew it myself

>> No.3573918

>>3573850
stop drawing

>> No.3573919

>>3573850
Don't stop drawing

>> No.3573920
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3573920

I draw.

>> No.3573923

>>3573920
for who

>> No.3573926

>>3573923
FOR YOU

>> No.3573957

>>3573926
why

>> No.3573959

>>3573850
draw

>> No.3573964

>>3573850
But make sure not to over do it.

>> No.3573966

>>3573202
why

>> No.3573975
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3573975

Back to beg or nah?

>> No.3573976

>>3573966
where

>> No.3573980

>>3573975
I think

>> No.3573984

>>3573850
Never draw again

>> No.3573985

>>3573975
Is the dislocated jaw intentional or accidental?

>> No.3573986

>>3573975
Make it less messy. For example, those ugly scribbles at the hair and above the eyes make no sense.

>>3573850
Keep drawing.

>> No.3573988
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3573988

>>3573741
thanks anon

>> No.3573993

>>3573984
I'm never gonna draw again, guilty hands have got no rhythm. Though it's easy to pretend I know you're not a fool.

>> No.3574000

>>3573980
Okay :(

>>3573985
It's my style™. Can't unsee it now though, thanks for pointing it out.

>>3573986
Will do senpai.

>> No.3574001

>>3573993
I dun geddit

>> No.3574006

>>3574000
Wuts yur shtyle

>> No.3574013

>>3574006
I don't know.

>> No.3574015
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3574015

>>3573680
>>3573774

>> No.3574017

>>3573988
you went from worst to shit

>> No.3574019

>>3574015
>gets advice
>chooses to ignore it completely

>> No.3574021

>>3574017
It just gets worse and worse.

>> No.3574022

>>3574019
Better call saul

>> No.3574028

>>3574019
Well maybe because it's TOO DAMN HARD

>> No.3574029

>>3574019
And what was it exactly that I ignored...? Looks like neither of us is good at telepathy and I may not have been attentive enough, so I guess you'd have to actually show the fault to be able to say this rightfully.

>> No.3574030

>>3574028
Well that's too damn bad.

>> No.3574033

>>3574030
why

>> No.3574035

>>3574029
stop whining.

>> No.3574036

>>3574029
You're a reasonable guy.

>> No.3574038

why do 90% of you fags draw uncreative porn

is your imagination so fucking dry

>> No.3574044

>>3574038
Because I have no interest in creating "high art" or whatever the fuck you think I should be drawing

I draw what I want

>> No.3574052

>>3574044
you could draw some medieval knights, a laser gun fight, dragons, a comic, something that isn't another piece of wank material in an ocean of tits. Before you say 'those are generic', they're not nearly as generic as hentai on this board

>> No.3574058

>>3574052
Here's a thought: I could... but I don't want to

>> No.3574061

>>3574058
you're content being a fag with a chafed dick and no art you could show anyone but other fags online

>> No.3574062

>>3574058
Then you're a GAY FISH

>> No.3574065

>>3574036
For you

>> No.3574066

>>3574058
>I could
no, you couldn't, because youre not a very good artist.

>> No.3574068

>>3574033
There's no easy way

>> No.3574069

>>3574066
Got me there desu, but neither can that other faggot who's complaining about it

>> No.3574070

>>3574069
Fuck you.

>> No.3574074

>>3574070
Not even the 'complainer' responding, that'd be me

>> No.3574085
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3574085

>> No.3574087

>>3574085
stop

>> No.3574089

>>3574085
sticky

>> No.3574090

>>3574089
Icky icky woo woo?

>> No.3574093

do the whistles really go woo woo?

>> No.3574094

>>3574093
SCUUUUM GAAAANGG

>> No.3574098

>>3571726
>hate how often you post
Imagine being this much of a loser

>> No.3574127

>>3574098
He's right.

>> No.3574144
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3574144

wip

>> No.3574153

>>3574144
Which

>> No.3574160

>>3574144
Binarybro, how is your process? Do you just lay binary lines with no construction layer under and Ctrl+Z until you get it right, or simplify to Binary pen what you already sketched?

I like your stuff a lot and would want to know.

>> No.3574194
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3574194

>>3574153
s-sorry

>>3574160
I start by sketching a pose because I usually have no idea what I want to do. Once I have an idea and a pose that I am happy with then I draw a second revision on top of it and add more detail; may repeat this process until I am satisfied with the drawing, after that it's just coloring/shading which I keep simple because it's tedious; last step is just to add filters until it looks cool. I don't use anything other than hard brush because I don't like blurry lines. I made this image to illustrate a bit how it goes

>> No.3574203
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3574203

>>3574194
oh, this man. he has surpassed the drawing skills

>> No.3574204

>>3574194
thanks senpai

>> No.3574208
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3574208

>>3574194
I like it.

>> No.3574221
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3574221

MANGA BG

>> No.3574245

>>3574221
Thats a lot of fish.

>> No.3574481
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3574481

gotta understand how to construct the head more

>> No.3574485

>>3574481
More like work on everything

>> No.3574487

>>3574481
No really it looks bad

>> No.3574489

>>3574481
back to beg

>> No.3574500

>>3574489
But I'm wearing sandals

>> No.3574535
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3574535

tryna emulate Robert Valley's style but cant into shadows please help

>> No.3574540

>>3574535
theyre not bad. just study fabric/drapery

>> No.3574541

>>3574068
>>3574033
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MwPb7g_BlXQ

>> No.3574542

>>3574481
you're that autist from the discord right?

>> No.3574550

>>3574542
YOU'RE THAT NINJA

>> No.3574551

>>3574542
Autist, huh?

>> No.3574552 [DELETED] 

https://discord.gg/fHCPehW

...

>> No.3574553

>>3574542
Sounds heavy.

>> No.3574556

>>3574552
I ain't joinin that shit

>> No.3574559

>>3574541
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yL3lJfpenAc
verse 2 is also relevant.

>> No.3574562
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3574562

>>3574542
i just draw

>> No.3574563

>>3574541
THERE'S NO SHORT CUT HOME

>> No.3574567

>>3574562
autist

>> No.3574569

>>3574563
that song and burning heart are such a good metaphor for the art struggle and the need for willpower.

>> No.3574570

This is the weirdest /alt/ has ever been.

>> No.3574572

>>3574542
He has a rabbit in a hat with a bat and a 64 Impala?

>> No.3574573

>>3574570
xD

>> No.3574575
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3574575

>>3574542
also yeah still trying to understand how to draw heads like deep sea prisoner and i switch from looking at loomis and other tutorials

>> No.3574576

>>3574573
What's so damn funny?

>> No.3574580

>>3574575
Look at this autist.

>> No.3574582

>>3574573
Well xd back at you.

>> No.3574586

>>3573850
is this the same autist

>> No.3574587

>>3574586
No, it's the particular individual.

>> No.3574588

What is going on?

>> No.3574591

>>3574588
this is what happens when discord fags bring their shit to the board

>> No.3574592

>>3574588
xD

>> No.3574593

>>3574575
Kek, it's actually you holy shit

>> No.3574596

>>3574591
What shit? Now where do we have reservations at? I mean I'm not really hungry but I would like to have reservations somewhere.

>> No.3574597

So damn confusing.

>> No.3574598

>>3574593
What's wrong with that?

>> No.3574600

>>3574598
whats wrong with what

>> No.3574602

>>3574593
>>3574542
Jesus McDermott what does THAT have to do with anything?

>> No.3574605

>>3574600
The autistic fellow.

>> No.3574606

>>3574605
He's NGMI

>> No.3574607

>>3574606
why

>> No.3574609

>>3574605
he's autistic
reminds me of that mvp kid from the art lounge discord.

>> No.3574612

>>3574609
>that mvp kid
who

>> No.3574614

DISMISSED
REJECTED
PUBLICILY HUMILIATED

>> No.3574616

I guess the world wasn't in his favor.

>> No.3574617

Stop samefagging you fucking aspie

>> No.3574619

>>3574616
None of it is.

>> No.3574621

>>3574617
Who?

>> No.3574623
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3574623

wow guys nobully

>> No.3574648

>>3573794
>>3573495
>I shortened the leg
Dude her thigh is fucking going for days. Shorten her thigh so it's about the same length of her upper arm.

>> No.3574670

>>3573823
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1027an1y9jfzu60/munsplitpack.abr?dl=0
Mostly I use only 4th.

>> No.3574671
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3574671

last drawing

>> No.3574672
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3574672

Why are discordfags here?

>> No.3574673

What the fuck is going on here

>>3574648
>what is perspective
The last version he posted looks fine

>> No.3574677
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3574677

Gotta polish this now

>> No.3574704

>>3572230
Blog?

>> No.3574705

>>3573261
Stop doing symmetrical faces.

>> No.3574776
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3574776

Just finished!

>> No.3574795

>>3574776
Good job anon, blog?
Tbh i don't like those thick lines, if i were you i would paint over those lines a little with a bit of color say like orange or dark brown instead of black.
Make thing more soft and less rigid.

>> No.3574796
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3574796

I wanna draw hardcore loli porn.

>> No.3574798

>>3574796
u are already there buddy

>> No.3574801
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3574801

I'm experimenting with different perspectives.

>> No.3574821

>>3574801
blog?

>> No.3574825

>>3574796
God bless your soul and guide your way.

>> No.3574827

>>3574801
how does one even get their panties like that, theres no way thats possible even when getting mounted

>> No.3574828

>>3572379
yo is that Madoka?
also it looks good, your style's cute but her jawline seems a little off, try moving it back or keeping her chin in line with her mouth.
thats all i can see wrong with it really, good work

>> No.3574830

>>3574827
>"oops i managed to slide my broom this far through my panties and didnt realise till now !!1"
desu i didnt realise that till you mentioned it now im kinda bugged but they still did a good job

>> No.3574832

>>3574827
>>3574830
brooms move on their own

>> No.3574836

>>3574827
She is a witch, it's just magic, there is no logic behind it.

>> No.3574843
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3574843

>>3574828
Is this better?

>> No.3574851
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3574851

So I made this. it did not turn out well. Im gonna try and re do this.

>> No.3574852
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3574852

>>3571177
Fuck me I knew yev would surpass me one day if I'm not cautious
Well done

>>3571960
Great drawing, terrible work with airbrush on those breasts. Skin looks nice when it's clean and soft, sloppy brushwork will kill the image.

See pic, layer your strokes, use lasso tool if you're gonna work in one area. Never shade a sphere with a brush smaller than its diameter.

>>3571901
This would've a very nice appeal if your lines weren't so sloppy and lacking in confidence. Work on that and you have something there

>> No.3574853
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3574853

Working on breaking away from realistic drawing.

Damn, there are some really great artists in this thread. What happened

>>3571065
If you want a graphic shape in the background, you have to keep it within the style of your drawing. The soft edges clash.

>>3574827
It's a safety latch

>> No.3574866

>>3574801
didn't know you posted here

>> No.3574867
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3574867

>>3574017
>>3574021
thanks for (you)

>> No.3574869
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3574869

>>3574843
it's better, but the mouth needs to be in line with the chin.
I tried fixing it if it helps, the lines got kinda smudged but you get the general idea.

>> No.3574875 [DELETED] 
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3574875

(me)

>> No.3574877
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3574877

(me)

>> No.3574900

>>3574801
No way poch posts here.

>> No.3574922

>>3574900
i thought i saw that drawing somewhere else before, nice exposing kek

>> No.3574931

>>3571065
Can i make colored screentone in PS?
Or it's just clipstudio?

>> No.3574949

>>3574029
Why are you here then? To get validation or to FUCKING LEARN HOW TO DRAW!?

>> No.3574960

>>3574931
Why aren't you using Clip Studio already?

>> No.3574968

>>3574960
Photoshop is more comfy to me some reason, and i need it for homework (artwork)

>> No.3574995

>>3574535
You can do without the outlines on the light parts

>> No.3575006

>>3574949
I am here to get the most expert critical opinion on my drawings available to me. When I post my drawings anywhere, I'm looking forward to two things: that people will let me know if they like these drawings and that people will let me know if they find something to be wrong with them. Maybe you're forgetting that most artists can't see what's wrong with their works—the more the less experienced they are.

Perhaps you want to say that I draw shit. Go ahead—almost total freedom of speech is guaranteed on 4chan—but don't expect it to be taken as constructive or worthy of any attention and analysis. You can never know how objective people are when they say something like that unless many people say the same thing and no one opposes.
Now, if you, for instance, want to say that the colors in the picture are bad because they are too blue, which makes her look unhealthy, or the pose is wrong because (a) blah-blah-blah and (b) yada-yada, that might actually help the artist even if you don't try to prove it. I guarantee that I at least check every piece of critique offered to me even if it proves to be bullshit in the end. Here, for instance, I compared the pose against both photographs and haven't found anything that looks impossible or incorrect to me, so I asked the guy to explain his criticism in further detail. His response was "stop whining." I can't possibly call it reasonable.

And yes, I do remember that writing detailed answers and trying to support a reasonable discussion only marks you as an easy target at places like this one.

>> No.3575014
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3575014

>>3574796

>> No.3575017

>>3574821
>>3574827
>>3574866
>>3574900
stupido
It's reposter anon

>> No.3575034

>>3575017
For who?

>> No.3575036

>>3574877
Where have I seen this.

>> No.3575038

>>3575006
But have you seen her?

>> No.3575043

over already?

>> No.3575051

>>3575034
For you, autist

>> No.3575057

>>3575051
Which one

>> No.3575065

>>3575051
Takes one to know one.

>> No.3575069

Yeah well, the jerk store called. They're running out of you!

>> No.3575085

>>3575069
What's the difference, you're their all time best seller!

>> No.3575092
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3575092

doodle

>> No.3575123
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3575123

I'm new to everything and I guess I'm just kinda stuck because don't know how to generate interest off of my work unless I draw fanart. I really wanna be able to put my own thoughts and character designs out there and have them be relatively appreciated. Thanks in advance for advice or criticism

>> No.3575141

>>3574851
You try using a ref?

>> No.3575145

>>3575006
(you)

>> No.3575146

>>3575092
Drinking straw.

>> No.3575169

>>3575006
It's yours

>> No.3575203
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3575203

>>3574562

>> No.3575212
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3575212

Can I get some help on how to learn from styles? I thought I should study different cartoons/anime to add to my visual library, but it's overwhelming with how I find so many personal choices made during the process. Even with Masters works you'll see unique "signatures" when broken down into basic forms. How do I apply this to my own creativity?

>> No.3575231

>>3575038
I want to say that I strongly believe that I have, even though I don't really know whomst'd've you're talking about.

>>3575169
>>3575145
Ty, bros. I knew I could rely on you.

>> No.3575240
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3575240

How can I improve my art (except the terrible leg anatomy)

>> No.3575293

>>3574949
I'm seeking validation.

>> No.3575336

is it bad to seek validation?

>> No.3575346

new thread >>3575345

>> No.3575410

>>3574931
I'm using gradient mapping and some masks, anon. Really simple stuff, just a little bit tedious.

>> No.3575436

>>3575141
Yes I did

>> No.3575749

>>3574851
its awful anon, practice some figures man

>> No.3575796

>>3571901
this is great

>> No.3575875

>>3575240
learn appealing proportions, them tumblr heads are way too small for their gigalegs. compare to yr ref picture, she is around 5 heads tall which makes her cute.

>> No.3575877

>>3575123
honestly, this has appealing shapes , at least on the head. learn anatomy, especially shoulder anatomy, they're way too small.

>> No.3576404

>>3572183
Can you post some of your goals? Other artists' drawings you'd like to be capable of doing yourself, I mean.

>> No.3576426

>>3576404
dont even try with this guy, just dont talk to him and maybe hell go away one day. no matter what anyone says to him he just keeps posting this shit

>> No.3576648

>>3576426
Im convinces hes actually insanely talented and just uses this board to shitpost. Though he should just get banned for using IC as an art dump

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