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Last (the ride never ends) thread: >>3556071

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to study Anime?
Great news! We have an approved anime study general. Just ctrl + f anime study in the catalog and you'll find it. Other than that, check the resources below.
>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
Tutorial & Reference Collection
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)

there is no end, sadly.

>> No.3562646

Can... I-ermm- f-fuck you OP!

>> No.3562655
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someone guess what the anime she's from is

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>> No.3562681

is that some cute melfina

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>> No.3562760

So you made a new thread and posted your drawing as the OP image? What a joke. Chicocalte makes the thread. You fucked up.

>> No.3562772

sauce on the OP

>> No.3562782

Last thread's >>3559873

>> No.3562789

The miniature looks so promising

>> No.3562806
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Did i do it right?

>> No.3562821

>Subtle, soft creases in the pelvic area represented through changes in shading
>Hard black outline on the abs and obliques, making them look like saggy granny skin

>> No.3562826
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got bored of bridgman, did some studies of yamamoto soichirou's sketches instead

>> No.3562829

derpy looking, lot of things dont look properly connected

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>> No.3562834

yeah this.
Other than that you remind me of a worse version of ricegnat and your faces are completely different. Actually the eyes are probably the biggest clash in the whole picture, also the pure black used for the mouth

>> No.3562838

I really like your lines, but your shading has all sorts of random values that make for something really inconsistent. If I were you, I would lay in my areas of shadow and light with two flat values and start adding transitions afterwards *while* staying within those values.

Also, figure out a better way to shade than with scribbles of a hard round brush, the way you do it now just introduces meaningless noise without looking pleasing.

>> No.3562842

Does OP have an artstation/insta/twitter/ever?

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>> No.3562852

yeah, I'm not used to adding values to my sketches.
>figure out a better way to shade
I'm trying man, believe you me.

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>> No.3562880

Keep in mind there's two separate objectives you should work on. The first is getting technically accurate shading (properly separating your values in a non-confusing way, basically shadow-or-light). The second is getting aesthetically pleasing shading. You mustn't forget these two issues aren't interlinked, but two separate skills you can (and should) work on individually.

>> No.3562882

girl on the right has the collar bone too disconnected and far lower than it should be, making it look very vacant, also her limbs are too noodly.
same thing for the top one on the left, and for that angle theres 2 much neck showing. bottom 2 are ok, proportions are accurate. kinda feel like were seeing 2 much her face for that pose tho, for the girl on the left

>> No.3562886

not op but nigger what are you talking about? interlinked what??? speak in layman's terms boi and not everything has to have a shadow, atleast nothing prominent, and the only shadows you would need to worry about said poses is a cast shadow, otherwise the only other shadows you would worry about is very subtle for forms.

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>> No.3562900

All I'm saying is he can have technically correct shading that follows fundamentals while using simple, ugly round brushes with a hard outline. And conversely, he can have some very fancy transitions and blending but completely fucked forms and values.
It helps to treat both of these problems separately as they each require their own solution to fix.

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>> No.3562912

Very cool.

>> No.3562939

steven universe no densetsu

>> No.3562943

poor malnourished child

>> No.3562995
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C--could it be?! ThDark has finally come back to /ic/ now that he's no longer a normie with a cute gf? Either that or you were the same guy who did this.

>> No.3562998

I think he's always been posting.

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>> No.3563075
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nice. here is an aisha i drew. it came out way darker than i intended though.

>> No.3563081
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Any suggestions on drawing semi chibi characters?
Looking for feedback

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these aren't the same people.. i know that because I made the one you just posted..

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That's really really cool, love the hip area.
Though the green graphic sticks out like a sore thumb - try breaking it up like in pic, or maybe tweak the color.

You could simplify the torso shape to be more compact. Try omitting the ribcage completely when sketching chibis and see how that goes. Also less defined, stumpier arms and legs look more cute imo.

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pic here

>> No.3563116

Thank you, I'll give it a try

>> No.3563139

Who drew this? I like it

>> No.3563156

it's cute!

>> No.3563187
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hit me with some thoughts

>> No.3563234

That's a girl!

>> No.3563243

sumaru bebi no hedo fetishu to faggot yevu

>> No.3563248

this is hot garbage and you just wasted seconds of my life for making me look at it.

>> No.3563259

long hair on the right fits her best imo

>> No.3563268
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I like these two.
I also like the red eyes and green hair combo.

>> No.3563279

Is that for the virtual youtuber thing? If so her design looks a bit plain.

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Thank you all for the input! Yes it's for the contest. Im going to sketch up a few more costumes and choose a few to color and then do an expression sheet

>> No.3563300
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>There're people unironcally join that contest for "exposure"

>> No.3563304

I'm already well into my career so no need for that but it just seemed fun

>> No.3563351

can you negroids please at least mention what contest it is

>> No.3563363

Eh, whatever. I haven't been on /ic/ for a while so I just assumed that it had two be one of the two guys who post cartoon stuff here Thdark or that one guy who drew that mordecai and rigby art. (which is rare as most of the guys here post anime).

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It's the 4chan Virtual Youtuber design contest >>3561897.
A free pass and maybe "exposure".

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I'd say make the background even lighter or at least lessen the contrast but I didn't want to ruin the integrity of your original painting.

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>> No.3563484

fuck off

>> No.3563494

dingdong really let himself go

>> No.3563558
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ty anon

im neither of those 2, i just have a really inconsistent style but I do post here regularly.

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>> No.3563591

your art reminds me of him

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>> No.3563610

generic and badly drawn. deviantart tier design language too

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>> No.3563621
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Ok, I just needed to do this drawing again, yesterday I was just being lazy. I was trying to give a minimalist cartoon look to everything, not worthless human garbage.

I don't know how people sell this board as being so mean when you guys let get away with this kind of behavior.
I tried, I have problems with interesting backgrounds sometimes, it get worst when i'm lazy.

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nope, and who's that? i tried googling it but nothing came up.


>> No.3563671

I'm not sure how just calling everything trash and insulting is good critique, but you know etc etc post work.

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hopefully it looks alright
I’ll have to change the hand so she’s actually holding the staff and her tits are really bugging me

>> No.3563734

why can't I draw thiis good? im so fucking jealous.

>> No.3563783

Gotta be honest with you mate, your first try is makes for a much stronger image. The pose is less dynamic and balanced, the foreshortening makes the silhouette a bit harder to read and the screentones don't integrate too well in the style - in manga they're used to simulate light and different materials, which you're already doing with color.

Don't get me wrong, I think the images are great and you should use them both, just be mindful about your decision making

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More of this girl

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Borrowing worthi’s style

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Sorry frend, just draw everyday (don't ignore fundies, i personally focus a lot on gesture and figure drawing) and you can do this too. Though desu I do agree with other anon this is garbage, i doodle on my phone but the stylus nib's cusion came off, the pen slides frictionless and everything is a scribbly mess

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>> No.3563843

i wanna be ur friend, fisher

>> No.3563869
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Gobbo design

>> No.3563870
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there is no reason to be ashamed

because he is not ashamed of you

>> No.3563883

I actually like both of them but your new attempt looks nicer, sexy ass pose (though both poses look sexy ass fug) and you did a great job with the shading and halftone.

>> No.3563907

>check your blog
>mfw that everything for someone that browses /ic/
legitimately how many years have you been practicing to get good, sometimes I see people that just seem to have no flaws in their fundies at all, even that post on this board, and I wonder just how long it took them
>tfw im probably just a brainlet and it took you way less than like 10 years or whatever estimate I could probably make

>> No.3563946
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hello /alt/, could you help me unfuck this before it's too late?

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>> No.3563965

Dude, where did your blog go? I wanted to squeeze some inspiration out of your tumblr the other day

>> No.3563976

Where did you learn to do mech stuff? Any artist/artbooks/media franchises/tutorials you would recommend?

>> No.3563981

unfuck what? looks good to me, stop fishing

>> No.3563989

You're going to want to make the boobs smaller.
Big breasts always ruin a composition.

>> No.3563997

you gay or something?

>> No.3564027

The first is Ok, but like I said it's just lazy. It's a normal pose that I aways do with nothing new, nothing daring. I should try to get out of my conffort zone if I want to improve, but sometimes I just get this lazy self that aways does the same things and call it a day because is easy.

Also, this first image proportions are all over the place, arms too long and head too big, her kind looks like a toddler, what it's not my intention for this image.

In the second one I tried new things, stuff I want to do for sometime but never get around to do it.

Actually I should be studyng something instead of drawing buttnaked lolis in armors, so at least I have to experiment a little so I don't just lose important drawing time fucking around.

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>> No.3564058

The proportion of the legs could be balanced a bit. The length from top of the leg bone to the knee should equal the length from the knee to the soles. But otherwise, real nice

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That's entirely dependent on how much time you're willing to put into it, your ability to problem solve, identify the problems in your drawings and having the right mindset, especially if you're self taught.

For me it's been about 6 years of taking drawing seriously with multiple breaks in between but i didn't start posting until about 2 years ago.

I still hang out here cause i like giving advice to people genuinely trying to get better and getting opinions but i know how to distinguish between bait and actual criticism.

If you're just starting out this is absolutely not the place to get better tho, cause you're just gonna get called shit with no real explanation. I don't know what to reccomend to get better in general but I answer everything in my page if you ever have a doubt on how to do something or get better at a topic in particular.

algo remember that most people only post their best works in their personal page, i still practice almost everyday and most of that looks like shit but you don't see that side when browsing it unless that person makes it a point to show every step of the way.

>> No.3564062

stop using stabilizer and your sketches/inks will be and look way better and i think the puffy cheek is a little bit too much, especially with the mouth open.

>> No.3564079

Here's your (you)

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It's failed work
Gonna spend some time to fixing major problem and habbits, so this will be last thing in this board

>> No.3564116

Probably for the best.
You're not feeling the forms at all.

>> No.3564125
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This guy's anatomy is so damn fucking good.

>> No.3564140


>stop using stabilizer and your sketches/inks will be and look way better
damn shame that I'm not using any stabilizers then, isn't it?

don't bait critique

>> No.3564141

Form, no idea to how to improve it i'm struggle when i rotating shit
Copying bunch of other's work didn't help
This thing has problem with references too i barely used it and result was crap

It just fucking mess, so frustrating i considered quit all of crap and playing game instead but that's bullshit

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I've seen better.

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>> No.3564180

>This get 222 followers on pixiv
Told you guys pixiv is just a deviantart for nips
Nigga learn how to paint first, everything look like mud.

>> No.3564182

Its not actually all that bad.
Its not amazing, but it gets most things close enough and it attempts something a bit more dynamic and with foreshortening.

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>> muddy colors
Ah, I still remember the times when people actually used this term to refer to shading with black rather than amplified contrast.
But if you want brighter shadows, sure.

>> No.3564203

The longer i look at it the more disgust i feel, how long have you been drawing again?
Your anatomy need work alot, especially the face, which every beginners should had learn to be decent first. The hair is just a mess.
Please be decent at small things first before try to go all out.

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>> No.3564227

Did this man rape your waifu or something?

>> No.3564230

Very simplistic, reminds me of Rodney Greenblats art style.

>> No.3564231

You can talk to me in your mother tongue, you know. No need to pretend.

>> No.3564234

w i d e r

>> No.3564240

If you think my crit is unhelpful than suit yourself, i just write what i think.
Cute tiny feets, would wife.

>> No.3564252

Hnnngh I love your linework so much
Please share your old outdated blog

>> No.3564265
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anime draw by me

>> No.3564275

Wait, 200 hundred followers on pixiv is a lot? I got 100 in my first week and my art is absolute garbage. What is the average of followers of someone somewhat big on pixiv?

>> No.3564284

Why does she have cleavage when there's no visible support? Is she wearing the Emperor's New Bra?

>> No.3564286

Not really, you can get over 1k easily if you post often and it's not beg tier.
Pixiv is more about how fast you draw rather than quality, not saying there's no gods there.
It's just that their standard is almost as low as deviantart.

>> No.3564322

>my art is absolute garbage
>got 100 in my first week
mind if you post your work? kinda curious

>> No.3564328

Pretty good. Shading and coloring could use some work but the foundation is nice.

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>> No.3564375
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time to undoodle

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why make her head smaller?

>> No.3564386
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music for weebs

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>> No.3564433

>no flat chest
one job.

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>> No.3564451

What are you? Gay?

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>> No.3564532

cool stuff my dude

>> No.3564535

even if youre not, the damn shame is that it still looks like it. the lines are all smooth bends regardless of what youre drawing with the line getting increasingly smaller at the end, even the smallest unimportant lines. theyre also weirdly spaced. or maybe youre drawing on some 5000x5000 canvas with the worlds worst brush for sketching.
im not saying using stabilizer is bad but your sketches truly look like youve cranked it up to the high end and it just looks weird. other than that i think theyre cute

>> No.3564550

Writing what you think is not a good idea, as your thoughts may be too close to bullshit.
Writing out mistakes you see can actually be considered a crit.

>> I got 100 in my first week and my art is absolute garbage
Either your art wasn't garbage back then, or you colored a famous artist's piece, or you already had a following and shared the link to your newly created pixiv back then. Or maybe you managed to surf on some Hatarku-tier hype. I have a senpai who has been drawing traditionally since 2 years before I started and has a gallery with watchers on deviantart + participates in a small conference + was posted on danbooru several times (one of coloring works I did was posted too, desu). He gained followers at a 1.5–2 times slower pace than me, getting to 100 in 1.5 years, though he usually draws in monochrome, posts rarely, and barely knows how to market himself despite his job.

>> No.3564636

i made the thread.
chose a nice pic from previous thread. and no, not one anon has the right or the responsibility to make the thread, the last thread hit bump limit and was at last page for a whole 10 hours, i had enough and made a new thread.
deal with it.

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>> No.3564651

I like your style, you got a blog?

>> No.3564659

I think the mouth and clothing could use some work but I'm a /beg/ so I can't really give any more crits


>> No.3564661

I've been posting on my DA for over 2 years, plus some months of inactivity, I only gather about 160 folowers in this time and got stuck at this number for some weeks for whatever reason.

I've been posting on my Pixiv for about two months and already got 130 followers and about 100 in the first week when I was doing more fan art, and posting more porn. I was thinking this was a pretty normal number for the platform, but seems like i was wrong.

>> No.3564664

It's only normal if you actually draw like this or better.

Or if you had been posting art related to Cells at Work.

>> No.3564705

this is p good dude, much better than most of the things posted in this thread

>> No.3564710

>doesn't quote anyone
Good one

>> No.3564716

be honest with me. Do you need to learn to paint digitally to be able to do the manga style inking/linework thing? Ive been doing still lifes a for a month to try to become a better artist but all i really want to do is make comics

>> No.3564733

If you're going to stay trad, go buy those japanese calligraphy sets with a pen nib and a manga ink. Otherwise, go digital and install CSP

>> No.3564747

thanks man

>> No.3564831

Really like this style.

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>> No.3564894

Nope, unless painter-ly look is the style you're after. Even Feng Zhu recommends drawing a lot before trying to dab in digital painting

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>> No.3565142
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>not gonna make my own thread so

anime girl who uses who an anatomically correct man for a weapon.

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pay us to do your stupid OC

>> No.3565152


*thwacks you with anatomically correct man*

baka I can do it myself

This will forever answer the question: "Do you need to know Loomis to draw anime?"

>> No.3565154


is that wendy? i rike it

>> No.3565156


at first i was off put but then I d'awwd

>> No.3565162
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>> No.3565177

then do the first one yourself, instead of a shitty cg.

>> No.3565180

Thank you senpai!

>> No.3565182
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>*thwacks you with anatomically correct man*
holy fucking shit, kill yourself.

>> No.3565197

Your pic obviously not related.

>> No.3565199
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>don't bait critique
I'm not baiting anything. It's a fact.
ojipon is king.

>> No.3565215

This unironically could be a cartoon-intro to a movie.

I like it.

>> No.3565222
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>> No.3565223

>or maybe youre drawing on some 5000x5000 canvas with the worlds worst brush for sketching
close, 2700x2700 and kyle's inking brush
rec me something better/examples and I'll see what I can do

>> No.3565370
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image has been undoodled

>> No.3565378

Did you get into an argument in Discord and atttempted to collect counter-arguments here to prove yourself right or something?

>> No.3565497
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Working on this thing right now. Megaman zero aesthetics is a lot easier to draw than whats looks like. Let's see about the rendering.

>> No.3565521

Anon, try drawing from life. Slow down and actually try to relate what you see from a front view from other views (like a side view).
Is part of the body coming towards you? Is it going backwards? Does it bear resemblence to something else that is easy to remember (eg. necks can be remembered looking sort of like coar hangers). Asking yourself questions and observing might solve this problem.

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>> No.3565525

I really have to ask again: what...?
Who are you mistaking me for...?

>> No.3565558

I like it

>> No.3565564
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>> No.3565569

I demand your blog, anon!

>> No.3565578

Can I have your brush anon, they look neat

>> No.3565601
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I'm using a Kyle Webster brush I downloaded off the Adobe website called "Kyle flat bristle super fine".

I don't remember which pack it's from specifically, but u can make any brush a flat tip by dragging these circle things inward in the Photoshop brush editor desu

>> No.3565634
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pls rate this banner.

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>> No.3565719
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Thanks, But i will trash it and don't pass from this, it's really not worth it the work. The color design of this show is pretty hideous, there is no contrast to work with the colors and just don't look that good.I could mess around a little with some details to make it look better, but not now, its better for me do something else.

>> No.3565722

Got a blog anon?

>> No.3565766
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you want to be more subtle with the anatomy/muscular features on a character like megaman. (pic related)

yours is a bit- very- unnerving

>> No.3565770
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here's a better example

>> No.3565776
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Still doing this. Text is placeholder.

Last time I posted this wip some anon's critiqued her run-away thighs. I haven't gone back and changed them yet because I'm just going to be laz sack of shit and liquify them once I've flattened the canvas :^)

>> No.3565802
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>> No.3565827

yup! the muscles on the abdomen and arms are simplified or even non-existent in some places. helps to balance out the piece and not draw too much attention away from the main focal point

>> No.3565830
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Hey guys, what programs do you use?
It's probably a beg question, but I bought a bad tablet 2 years ago and the only program it's worked with has been medibang paint pro, but pretty soon I'm gonna have saved up enough to buy a pretty nice tablet so I wanted recommendations and stuff

>> No.3565838

photoshop is a good choise, there's also manga studio and SAI for those anime drawings.

corel painter is good for more traditional painting.

but if you don't want to pirate you can combine blender, GIMP 2.10, mypaint and Krita and Inkscape.

>> No.3565840

>Photoshop (difficult to learn but the most versatile)
>SAI (easy to learn but lacks ps's tools. better brush stablizer)

>Krita (not as intuitive as it could be. but its the best free program out there right now)
>Medibang Paint Pro

>> No.3565841

You know that the "simplified" part on the abdomen is because he has no bellybutton since robot and stuff, right? And the arms simplified? Please, anon.

>> No.3565846
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wow, inkscape is so much fun.

>> No.3565857
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I use Mischief. Pretty simple program designed to be used as a sketchbook with infinite scrolling.

>> No.3565873

>suddenly can't draw for shit
Uhh guys what's going on?

>> No.3565876
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Yeah, that's what I thought. I'm gonna be attending school so I'm not sure if I can afford photoshop lol. I'll check out krita.

nice, I'll check it out

>> No.3565881

You're probably tired. Whenever I feel tired or sleepy I decide it's time to stop drawing since I start to make dumb mistakes that wouldn't happen when I'm in top shape.

>> No.3565887
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Started a comic today. Backgrounds frighten me so I'm putting them off until the nightmare scene is over.

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>> No.3565889
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I "fixed" the colors But the change is kind drastic, so almost feels like a different character. I kinda knew this would happen, so it was all worthless in the end, at least I did a decent peace from megaman.

>> No.3565892

More of her?

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>> No.3565912
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>> No.3566026
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it's been a while since I've posted in one of these threads, I can only hope I've improved a bit since last time.

I use Clip Paint Studio and I love it, it's a great, easy to learn program.

>> No.3566038

Blog? Very cute.

>> No.3566069

It looks fairly cute, but it's somewhat hard to tell what's going on. Maybe it's cuz it's a sketch, or maybe not, hm...

>> No.3566093
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Next time I'll start with lineart rather than trying to paint from the beginning. Even though painting is fun and all. But yeah, going back to redo the shapes of the face and body over and over is a major pain.

>> No.3566184
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The bow and arrow came out pretty bland but I like how it turned out overall
Any feedback/tips to improve?

>> No.3566282

Well I'm >>3565776 and I use Sai. I thin Sai is definitely the go-to for more cartoon styles because the ease of accessibility is unreal, but I've heard CSP is as equally as good if not better.

This is only drawing I've done of her. Tbh I drew it as an initial design for Red Bubble after seeing that Red Bubble thread. No idea if anybody would like something like this though.

>> No.3566285

As someone who has draw in both SAI and CSP.
CSP is definitely better than SAI in term of drawing and brush customizing.
It only down side is resize kind suck.

>> No.3566289

Get Affinity Photo to liquify multiple layers at once

>> No.3566307

They both suck on resize desu but csp has tons of shortcuts so it makes everything easier to do

>> No.3566315

YOU CAN DO THAT? Holy shit my world might have just changed forever. Thank you Anon.

>> No.3566370
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Guys please send help, for some reason i can't draw the same character the second time.
Every time i try it look different.

>> No.3566389

Less words, more pictures son!

>> No.3566391
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some rework on this thing

>> No.3566393

Niggers, Sai 2 literally has everything you'd ever use in Clip Studio paint except for the complex custom brush engine (it has perspective rulers, concentric ellipses) and almost all parts of the program can be assigned to LITERALLY any hotkey you want.

>> No.3566405

paranoia agent <3

>> No.3566413

thanks that's good to hear from someone with experience
looking at that study you seem to be quite good at raealism too, may I ask how you went about studying heads? is quantity better than quality for studies? i feel like i just want to grind and copy as many refs as i can.

>> No.3566440

fucked up legs and feet. ewww

>> No.3566452

snib snab

>> No.3566455

is that the sound her fucked legs make

>> No.3566458
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still a few things to clean up an fix on the helmet like the ear disks/head strip thing/brain crystal whatever, gotta clean up the flats on the shoulder pads, maybe add a bit to the legs/feet cause they feel p barren compared to everything else at the moment, fix parts of the chest piece maybe (unless doing so fucks up the flow cause flow > perfect perspective) an of course that thumb still needs to be corrected, gotta add the lil groove to the underwear too. also wanna either add some kinda background or maybe just someone like zero behind x doin some other cool thing. oooh, also wanna maybe have x shooting a charged shot or somethin maybe, decisions decisions

cute stuff, i like, but the silhouettes don't read as clearly as one would hope for each hunter. even tho i know monster hunter armor designs are noisy as shiz, that just means you need to go the extra mile with the posing to make sure everything still reads clearly

face feels weird but that's almost certainly cause it hasn't been rendered yet, sure it'll look fine then, you know what you're doin. love the lil multi stroke dither-ish manual blending you got goin on like on the abdomen an such, really helps give the skin a pleasant (maybe the wrong term but the only one i can think of at the moment) "lifelike" texture


fuckin goddamn cool as shit


do you animate? i feel like you'd be amazing at it if you also have the knack for timing. an even if not, like anything, it can be learned, you should give it a shot!

i personally would change the wrinkles/forms on the arm and leg cloths so that they more closely echo their anatomical forms. it's 100% a style thing and you don't have to listen to me at all, but i love when baggy (read: not skin tight) clothing echoes the form/rhythm of the body beneath

noice noice

photoshop cc is $10usd a month
tho it can be "free" if you want

>> No.3566464

You have zero clue what you are talking about. Post work

>> No.3566465

fucked legs, mate. accept it.

>> No.3566489
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Mr person who did drawing here, yeah lower legs are on the short side and I always exaggerate the curvature for some reason. Will keeo that in mind from now on, thanks mr crab

>> No.3566639
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Redline my shit up please, I'm having trouble with the lower back and how close it should be to the upper body

>> No.3566681

oh yeah, i'm the crab, mr. cant take criticism and becomes a little bitch.

>> No.3566763
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>> No.3566769

Look at where her shoulders are comparative with her back. You'd need to move the entire lower body further behind her head.

>> No.3566782
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The saturated colors in the background, middle ground and foreground make it look super flat, and the invariance of line weight make it hard to determine scale. It's hard to tell if the sword and mushrooms are giant, or just extremely close to the camera. The same problem happens with the pyramids in the back.
Try thickening the line weight on the foreground elements, thinning in the background elements and desaturating the distant back.
Cool subject matter. It reminds me of an Adventure Time episode. It feels like you have a narrative here. Can you tell us about it?
>pic is postyourwork.jpg

>> No.3566789

those weren't me you dumbass

>> No.3566838
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Thoughts? Was mainly trying to focus on creating soft value for the breast.

>> No.3566844
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>> No.3566846

>just mirrored one half
>still looks deformed as fuck

>> No.3566865
File: 71 KB, 720x960, Yuujiro.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] [report]

Do I post this here or /beg/ or not at all?

>> No.3566871

usually id say /beg/ but that looks like bakis dad which isnt far off.

>> No.3566873

Don't tell that guy to kill himself!
Fuck's the matter with you?!

>> No.3566874


bretty gud

>> No.3566875

I know its fucked up with the neck and head and shit, but I just said fuck it cause the goal was to draw soft value on the breast.

>> No.3566891

is that good or bad? Do my values and shading look terrible or show a severe lack of understanding? I can immediately notice now that I've posted it that I could have done a better job cleaning up my lines especially on the arm.

The last 2 pecs are not as well aligned as they should be

>> No.3566942
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I mean it looks horrible in style but thats subjective.
Im not that well versed in anatomy especially of the arm but it looks okay i think, ggreatly exagerated but okay. What bugs me is the area around his stomach, oblique rib cage area but thats how it looks like in Baki style. Also someone thise ripped should have his serratus magnus showing I guess. The throat neck area looks best imo.
Overall you should copy Bakis style too much, look into anatomy a little bit on your own so that you arent just a less experienced clone.

>> No.3566947

you shouldn't copy it too much

>> No.3566961

I drew it in celebration of the new 2018 series starting. Its been over 2 decades since we got a new adaptation.
I think Itagaki has a pretty strong understanding of anatomy, and its his stylistic choice to dramatize aspects of the body that way. However; this is not how I typically draw anatomy. I had to resist some natural inclinations when doing that sketch. Detailing the serratus muscle was one such thing. I also gave Yuujiro an additional 2 pecs than hes normally depicted as having.

>> No.3566982

lmao this muhammads ali's son arc was fucking weird
I still dont get it, was he actually that good and the injuries fucked him up? Or was he always hit and just got severely underestimated? Also he tried to cuck baki or something?

>> No.3566994
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>> No.3567103

I see much potential. Keep going

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>> No.3567197
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>> No.3567236
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Thanks. I don't blog just yet. I think after I get a little better at coloring I'll start.

>> No.3567263
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Thanks friend

>> No.3567285
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>> No.3567291

I like this a lot but I could never like anime girls with this style of head proportion. The proportions remind me of babies or porcelain dolls. But thats just a personal preference I guess. I like everything else a lot.

>> No.3567316

midget arm online

>> No.3567372
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Oof. Working on a one-color sketch commission for a friend.

>> No.3567409

Your lineart looks exactly like the Microcephaly guy, just that your heads look actuall actually great.

>> No.3567412

Dont be lazy anon draw both sides mirrored shit never looks good

>> No.3567416

yo what the fuck is the stomach hip area and why did you create a lighting like in a horror film?

>> No.3567483
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good program, thanks for recommending it

>> No.3567491
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Azula is the reason why I like crazy characters so much

>> No.3567508
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I started moving beyond black and white and into color not too long ago. Once I'm good enough, I'm hoping to start on a comic at some point.

>> No.3567540
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Thing for a friend from a couple weeks ago

>> No.3567545

comics dont need color...

>> No.3567547

that is definitely not how tits work

>> No.3567563

Yeah really throws off the picture since everything else in it is hyperrealistic

>> No.3567608
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>Yeah really throws off the picture since everything else in it is hyperrealistic

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>> No.3567669

Lol, nothing about that picture is hyper realistic. It's still very stylized and if you' can't see that you're an idiot.

>> No.3567713

he was making a joke and implying that since the entire picture is stylized it means tits can be shittily drawn, I guess.

>> No.3567715

Huh. I thought the only thing that was a joke was the drawing, but I guess I missed that one. Carry on.

>> No.3567758

You can also do this in Photoshop as well. But I agree Affinity is more of a good program to edit.

>> No.3567760


>> No.3567787

hahahahahah ok.

>> No.3567791

make the bow more interesting like some spikes or adding fire

>> No.3567792

yojiro hanma

>> No.3567818

when should someone come from /beg/ to here?

>> No.3567827

when they aren't /beg/ anymore

most people here don't actually follow this rule

>> No.3567833

/beg/ says they dont want me :'( im not deserving of graduating from beg yet;

>> No.3567965
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Starting to get a bit more daring with the perspective, I hope it's ok, butt if someone can help me in something would be appreciated.

I feel like doing more extreme poses and angles is a lot easier than subtle ones.

>> No.3567970
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Cool drawing, but her neck is really fucked up, it's a lit bit too long and tha gives a weird vibe.
The rest it's pretty nice to. just a small mistake.

>> No.3567979

Perspective looks accurate and she looks cute. Please keep me posted

>> No.3567981

>this is the average person giving critique on /ic/

>> No.3567986

Pretty decent anon, the highlights on the breasts need to follow the form as well though.

I hate shit like this, and I think you should be shot. Porn is degenerate but from what I have seen people selling this looks pretty sold providing you can finish it with solid execution this should be something a mentally ill pervert would want to buy.

>> No.3567990

The right boob is too round, feels like the nipple is misplaced and the breast has no weight to it.

Try to deform his shape a little, like when someone .holds a water balloon, since she is pinching then and holding then up.

>> No.3568018
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>> No.3568033

>where do you think you are .wav

>> No.3568045
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thoughts on this, i was surprised with the resaults

>> No.3568155
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Does this look bad or weird?
Would it be a weird thing to give to coworkers as a goodbye card (its them as cats)?

>> No.3568189

been away for a while, is nosebro and the other dude(forgot his name he's like 30 i think) still around.

>> No.3568211

oooh, i had messed around with a shorter neck earlier on but didn't like the results but here it does look wayyy better, also your edits to the leg an foot also crazy good, such a better line of action, thanks a ton!! i'll do my best to incorporate them into my piece nwn

>> No.3568212

>would it be weird
>Show of appreciation
>to pepole you interacted with everyday for some time
Your call frend, i would personally not because social retard

>> No.3568219

It's cute but is it like an inside joke or something?

>> No.3568231
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>> No.3568234
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trying to rough out a composition. tfw no gothic queen to protect you ;_;

>> No.3568236


No, just thought it'd be a cute thing to do. Maybe it'd just weird and awkward then.

>> No.3568249
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Did I do alright?

>> No.3568250
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This has been fun so far, but I don't really know what to do with the bottom half of the background.

>> No.3568258
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>> No.3568265

Do they know you draw? Don't get me wrong, it's a cute idea. It might just seem random

>> No.3568266
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No matter how much you polish a turd it's still gonna be a turd. Lurn Hao 2 dra.

>> No.3568270

It's cute! Go for it, anon!

>> No.3568289


They know I draw, for sure. And I was (in part) hired for my artistic ability.

>> No.3568293

Cute! Normies would def love it

>> No.3568305
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firez is still around, dont know about nosebro.

>> No.3568319

You technically can by using Smart Objects, but you can't separate it back to normal again and it's a massive pain to use

>> No.3568325

I'd go for it. It's looking cute so far

>> No.3568391

style looks familiar.

>> No.3568440
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>> No.3568448

Forget to say:
I think the background would look better like this, like a hand made gradient going for something closer to a darker sky so it gives a best sense of depth.

>> No.3568476
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Another thing from a while ago.

>> No.3568477
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Does this look good?

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Heres a character I've been working on as part of my webcomic/manga project. Thoughts?

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It sort of actually hurts to look at, you should invest more time in learning how to draw real people. Also, the chairs in the background are warped because the backs of the chairs aren't drawn with depth correctly and the curves you used to draw the rounder parts of the chairs look faked because you didn't bother to place those curves in perspective.
Bruh, I was poking fun at you because I thought it was funny that you used the term "hyper realistic" for an anime tiddy drawing. The funny thing is, I actually still kinda like that drawing's aesthetic, it's just that there are some issues that need to be addressed...I mean just look at her fucking neck. The woman in the drawing seems to be facing us with around eye level and slightly turning away but yet for some reason you didn't draw any trapeziums muscles connecting her stick neck to the ends of her collar bones. Also, that arm on the left (her right) is extremely stiff and unnatural as the outer contour is drawn with an almost straight line.

>> No.3568694

Cool, but how about make her hair white? Looks pretty good with darker skins tones and since she is already a oni makes senses.

>> No.3568816

You're right, that does look better. Thanks for the advice!

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Ok, I just finished.

>> No.3568873

oh yeah good to know, so nosebro is gone? too bad

>> No.3568883

That receding hairline
Eye is bigger than the other
Neck is too large and long for her small shoulders

>> No.3568888

Shoulda kept the chair still cute

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>> No.3569036

d-damn... so... f-fat... and... b-big...

How long have you been drawing and what do you focus on? Just draw or actual studies? Pls post I've been wanting to see what you're studues look like

>> No.3569145

>another word for style

Thank god. The overuse of the word style nowadays make me angry. I don't know why but it does. I'm now happy there's another word for it. Jesus Christttt.

>> No.3569196

I dont really study ever. I mainly just draw the same stuff from imagination over and over again.

>> No.3569198

meant for >>3569036

>> No.3569228

There's your problem

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>> No.3569296

Wow great study

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Experimenting a bit. Any thoughts?

>> No.3569327

Never leave the skin a harsh white. Even if the person is albino, it wouldn't be like that. Given the angle of the sun, there would also be a harsh shadow that the body is casting. It looks like you avoided essentially all shading on the character.
Then, I'd go and get the general color palette off some color picking site for the base image. Pick a color or two and do some overlay layers to let the character blend in some more.
I'd also do a little bit of perspective blur on the characters right arm and leg. Considering it's the edge of the photo and the camera was more focused on the middle left on the rocks. Play around with it and see what works. I'd blur (not a general blur with a blur tool, do a focal blur) more than just those limbs, but eh. Test things out.

If that all makes sense? I'd also add more rippling to the water where the character is stepping.

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All duly noted, thank you! I'll mess around with things more.

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how are the clouds

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The right is so much bigger than the left...

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Her boobs are assymetrical but keep it up Yev. Proud of ya, you're gonna make it.

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nice 'tism

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Alright, changed it up a bit. How does this seem?

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I personally would have done the shading a bit differently, but I'm not one to pick at art styles.
The shading should be harder for the character's shadow in the water. Not a perfect, clean one, but enough that they have actual presence and affect on the world.
I'd adjust the shading on the head and I feel the colors you use on the character are a bit too bright in general. Since the rest of the image feels pale.
I'd also do some slight color to the line art so they blend in a bit more.
Definitely better than the last time at least.

>> No.3569399

rendering of the clouds vs rendering of the character doesnt match

>> No.3569402

Is it that you feel the way I did the shading doesn't work for the piece or is it just a stylistic thing?
And I'll try to blend things in a bit better. I wasn't too sure how much of a reflection he would have at that angle.

>> No.3569423

I think it's just that your shading looks blurred/airbrushed at the edges and you just didn't properly do it for that sort of shading. I would have stuck with hard cel shading. I also would have made sure to use a dark blue or green for the shading. I think you went a bit too dark though.
The shading also isn't done properly in certain spots based on where the lightsource is.

It's not really him having a reflection persay, but he just needs to cast more of a shadow in the water. Also keep in mind water is reflective and, closer to the water's surface, would actually be brighter shading, if not a highlight.

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Can someone red line me some hands? I've suddenly forgotten how they work and I'm dying.
>it's vent art though so please spare the crab
>was also thinking I'd have her choking herself with some rope but idk

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are these worth finishing? any flaws you can spot so far?

>> No.3569624

I would lower the neck length and look into fingers on the left side.

>> No.3569641

oh giraffe neck was intentional lol. I will probably tone it down a little though. And the left side fingers are a problem, but I also have issues with the right side one too. I mean, eventually I'll try and mash together a reference image probably, but doesn't hurt to ask.

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I hope you don't hate me too much, but I'm gonna stick with how I did the shading just because I think I prefer the way it looks. I tried to doing more clean lines with the shading but it just wasn't really doing it for me in the same way. I tried using more blue and green tones into the shading, though, and added more to the reflection and shadow.

>> No.3569901

The right side one looks more Normal to me the left looks unfinished and weird. I can see that hand gesture as normal for the right one even if it is slightly off.

>> No.3570007

The trapezius on his/her neck is WAY too large, so it makes it look like the shoulders are too low. That makes it look really weird.

>> No.3570020

Any critique?

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Which pantyhose look better?

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Haha, yeah, that was pretty damn big. Didn't even notice that, thank you. Tried fixing it up, does this seem better?

>> No.3570341

definitely thank you. A lot more pleasant to look at.

>> No.3570381

Thank you for the heads up on that! I'm glad it made such a difference!

>> No.3570396

This looks a LOT better than you originally did though. You softened things up and everything blends a lot more. I think the lighting makes the character look a bit off? But really, it's looking great. With more practice, you an get really good at pieces like this. I believe in you anon!
>Kind of glad someone else pointed out some anatomy problems
>Meant to call them out but I spaced it
I'd suggest making the head smaller. I get the whole anime = big head thing, but it's a little too big imo. Especially if you want the character to fit better into our reality.

Yeah, left side one was really a "I give up just put something there." I just woke up, but I'm gonna do a little work on it and post it again later. I'll give you a (you).

>> No.3570400

Add some more water droplets to his legs. Unless he is JUST NOW getting into the water, it would make it look more natural to have at least some water splashed onto his calf.

>> No.3570402

Does he have a mustache? His upper lip stands out and doesn't look too great. You could color the line work of his upper lip a little so it doesn't stand out as much? But I'd probably remove it entirely.

>> No.3570412

Gahh, thank you so much! I really super appreciate all that!!
Can I ask specifically which part about the lighting? The blue-is shading on the back or the more normal skin tone around the edges?
And yeah, looking at his head I kinda feel like all that really makes it big is just that his hair is absolutely gigantic. His face and head shape itself seem pretty tiny by comparison, so I might just try scaling down the hair a tad. Thank you so much for all your help so far!

The idea actually was that he was just walking into the water, so I think I'll probably keep his legs the way they are. Do you find it more distracting that the water isn't there than if it were?

>> No.3570413

Haha, the idea behind that was that it was just a lip line. I never looked at it like a mustache until now. I'll probably remove that because I'm pretty sure I can't unsee it now. Thanks for the heads up!

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Hm.. It's hard to really pinpoint? I think there are just some bits of lighting that could be softer or removed maybe? It just feels.. Off?
It's clearly a sunny day, but it's not too bright. I think maybe how strong the shadow is in comparison to the lighting (not the water highlights) makes it seem like the lighting is stronger than it is?
Like.. Between the legs. You have lighting at the right back of his left leg, but that would imply there's a gap. So his right leg should also have some lighting on the left? Not strong lighting, but enough to properly signify there's a gap there.
I just feel the lighting around the edges could use a little more thought maybe? I really just woke up, so take this with a grain of salt.

(actually, giving you a (you) now because why not, you don't have to respond)

Hey thread, does the bruising on her neck look okay? I want it to look relatively realistic. I think I should maybe add more yellows and greens, but I'm not sure

>> No.3570426

>water anon
It's probably just me being picky. Maybe just add some water build-up near the front of his left foot. Since he's moving forwards, the water would rise a little with his foot. The lack of droplets is fine.

>> No.3570440

Haha, you got it, sleepy anon. I'll try and give all the lighting a good once over though to see if there's any more hiccups that could use some tweaking.

Yeah, I might end up just keeping it as is, honestly, but I'll try messing around with some water sprinkles and seeing if any of that works well. I appreciate the feedback either way!

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>> No.3570547

need answer

>> No.3570938

You're drawings are extremely stiff. Before moving on I think you need to crack down on your base drawing habits and learn to loosen up a bit. Try doing more gesture drawings or times illustrations. I can see a lot of chicken scratching in your lines which is never good.
The posing also needs more work. While I see what you're going for with all of them, they aren't being conveyed as clearly as they could be, and they're all extremely stiff. This might be largely a result of your drawing ability, so I'd say to try and improve upon how you draw and as well as your anatomy skills before moving onto how to create poses and scenes.
Hope that helps a bit, and I hope I haven't sounded too negative or anything. Keep on trucking, nobody is ever done improving! Just gotta keep at it!

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