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3557260 No.3557260 [Reply] [Original]

What's the difference between my shit and the guys' art on the left? i legitimately want to know. Please criticize me as harshly as you possibly can. I want to get better faster.

>> No.3557263

If you can't figure it out yourself you're never gonna make it

>> No.3557264

>>3557263
Please go away if you have nothing to offer me

>> No.3557266

>>3557260
they people on the left are in a different category between each other as well, although they are all shit. Yours is too beg, it looks like it is maybe your 2nd attempt at drawing something. That being said, go to /beg and /draw thread, stop making critique threads for something like this.

>> No.3557268

>>3557260
Line weight
Shading
Perspective
Form

Bottom line: fill more sketchbooks and stop being a digifag

>> No.3557271

>>3557268
>sketchbook meme
Nobody better fall for this

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>>3557266
>>3557268
>those guys are shit
>2nd attempt at drawing something
>stop being a digifag

>> No.3557281 [DELETED] 

>>3557271
Explain yourself

>> No.3557284

>>3557271
Lol you think you're gonna improve if you're not practicing? Ngmi.

>>3557276
I gave you your problems, go back to practicing or off yourself but ATM you're shit.

>> No.3557377

>>3557271
N
G
M
I

>> No.3557809

>>3557260
>lines are all the same weight
>anatomy is fucked
>pose and silhouette isn’t as dynamic as others
>hair looks like chopped up raviolis glued together
>very flat; no shadows, gradients, or creases to give the drawing some weight

worst contender though is that you’re being bitch who asks for harsh criticism and then gets defensive of a shit drawing. just practice and you’ll get better gradually.

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>>3557260
I can assure you i have not "made it", in fact i cant even afford to leave my parents basement.

Unless you define making it as how many likes you get, then woopdeedoo

>> No.3557816

who?

>> No.3557823

>>3557260
skin isnt blue

>> No.3557855

>>3557260
Your Edea is cute.
With shading and a proper background it could stand out

>> No.3557858

>>3557260
Edea needs small breasts
mrgmrgmrmgrg

>> No.3557870

>>3557260
DRAW MORE
that’s the best advice i have for you. i’m serious

>> No.3557926

>>3557260
anatomy
shape
line thickness
lil bit of color theory
cell shading
some perspective
the top right pic looks like shit

>> No.3557930

>>3557870
>hurr durr jus draw
thats shit advice
doing studies will majorly help you understand what your doing and why
the just draw idea works but it takes longer and you dont really know what your doing

>> No.3557931

>>3557260
Yours is so much better, anon

>> No.3557959

>>3557260
Is that thegoldensmurf in the bottom left?

>> No.3558220

>>3557959
>TGS

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>>3557271
Is this your excuse for not drawing in a sketchbook? Cause its a meme? Ok anon whatever gets you through the day.

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>>3557271

>> No.3558863

draw and practice on LIVE paper.
LOOK at what you draw and how your lines form not on a screen but on a paper anon.
I do not want to sound like a traditionfag but
to be able to run, first learn to walk.

>> No.3558870

>>3557260
>Mode7
>Still improving

>> No.3558954

>>3557260
>TGS
>made it
LMAO