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Would like to know what you guys think?

>> No.3542138
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>> No.3542140

>>3542136
Wish I could do hair like that. The eyelashes are impressive as hell.

>> No.3542148

fuck off fag
just cause your art looks good doesnt mean its good

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>>3542136
very flat, unenthusiastic looking airbrush rendering, the colored pieces are all very muddy, poorly done copies. I like the arm shapes in optimus prime assuming it was an original piece, don't like the head and colors are muddy. The spartan piece reminds me of pic related. Keep at it.

>> No.3542259

Is it art?

>> No.3542277

his works better than 99.9 % of you jealous faggots. but he's a moron for coming here

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>>3542149

This is good.

You're getting pretty good at rendering. Some of these are better than others so I'm going to assume you're making progress.

The only thing is, these are pretty clearly copies from photos so it's hard to tell how strong your fundamentals are.

Do you have any life-drawing or sketches from imagination? If I saw that I could better tell how good your overall skillset is.

Thing is, copying directly from photos is fine for learning rendering and practicing your painting, but if you're only drawing the surface level, you're not really learning the structure of the underlying anatomy, or really understanding how light behaves in a real environment.

Do that too much, and you end up being the modern equivalent of the old-lady painter at the country art fair who's really good at copying photographs, but couldn't draw a figure from life or imagination to save her life.

Other than that, your shadows are too dark and black. Paint some reflected light into them.

>> No.3542679

>>3542136
>>3542138
>>3542155
>>3542161
>>3542177
These all look like they could benefit from more light values. Looks like most things are either a 50% value or near 100% which makes it look a little flat
>>3542136
>>3542138
These ones look over blended.
>>3542149
>>3542171
>>3542174
All these portraits look very unsymmetrical and very crooked. I really like the rendering on the painted ones and your choices in color but the faces not being even really ruins it which is unfortunate.
The body looks a little misaligned in >>3542161
as well. It looks a bit like you're just copying from a photograph and guessing from that instead of doing a proper sketch. Copying from photos is fine, just make sure everything is even and propotrionate before you start rendering.
>>3542153
>>3542155
>>3542177
I really like these though.

>> No.3542746

>copying /wg/ papes sightsize and calling it art
nice creativity brah