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Pr0n Thread
Thread for those who enjoy drawing pornographic images
Rules and Guidelines:
-Hide images you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
-Absolutely NO furry in these threads.
-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)
-Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.

Dedicated thread sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#

>> No.3484182

>>3484154
>-Absolutely NO furry in these threads.
>-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)
You seriously need to rethink your priorities.
Also, dat shitty thread image. FFS.

>> No.3484227

>>3484154
Absolutely NO furry in these threads.
-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)


No wonder why people go to /aco/ and not here to draw porn..

>> No.3484253

>>3484182
>>3484227
>t. Asshurt furries
Sorry but thats what the mods have laid out themselves.
Furries have their own designated drawthreads on /trash/ and loli&shota is bannable.

>> No.3484261

>>3484253
I'm not a furry. I just think the 'Absolutely NO' part should go for loli and shota as well. This way it seems like it's just frowned upon or something.

>> No.3484428

>>3484261
their both frowned upon though.
It doesn't really matter how its worded

>> No.3484486
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3484486

when posting heavily referenced drawings, do you all make it clear to your audience that you used ref? or is that sort of thing assumed/not a big deal?

>> No.3484524
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>> No.3484528

>>3484486
literally doesn't matter but its good etiquette if the person who provided to stock asks people to credit. but it really doesn't matter especially with porn art. the people looking at it don't even care if you traced theyre just trying to tug on their wiener

>> No.3484531

>>3484486
it's clear to anyone who draws but the rest will just be very impressed and zuck yo dick

>> No.3484566

what's the blog of that mike again?

>> No.3484586

>>3484524
Nice.

>> No.3484684

>>3484486
im drawing over this for a commission, thx bud

>> No.3484691

>>3484684

>>>/hr/3181243

>> No.3484737
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3484737

WIP. Critiques on proportions/anatomy/perspective?

>> No.3484792

>>3484182
>>3484227
This place has some weird standards.
Guro, BDSM and gape are ok, but not furry or non-human, even though they put emphasis in the human body.
Might be just tradition at this point.

>> No.3484906

>>3484737
Your perspective is shit.
Do some proper fucking studies using references.
It's atrocious to look at how little you've improved over the past year.

>> No.3484913

>>3484792
furry shota and loli is a globar rule

shota and loli makes sense as it is illegal content
furry is just tradition from back in the days when furry shitpost was rampant

>> No.3484998

>>3484906
what's shit about the perspective? i'm not seeing it.

>> No.3485002

>>3484998
the head is in a different perspective from the body and if shes sposed to be tilting her head back its just not reading

>> No.3485109
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3485109

Update

>> No.3485111
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3485111

Blocked in the shadows.

>> No.3485191

>>3485109
work on the head
her eyes are very uneven, maybe make the iris/pupil rounder on the left eye? it's wider and more ovalish than her right eye so it looks uneven

also yeah this may be your style, but work on simpifying the hair, drawing every strand especially for someone like you who does thick lineart looks very off putting. draw the general shape of the hair rather than each strand

the skirt is very bad, sorry to say. either learn how actual cloth ruffles or simplify it. you're not at the level to draw all those complex wrinkles yet

the right arm is farther in view but you drew it bigger than the left and that's a problem, shrink it a bit

the legs look good, the shape of them is pretty spot on. don't add much more detail

the hat looks good, and it's at the right angle

the dick and balls are also very well drawn and at the accurate angle. i suggest you keep it simple as well and don't add many more details to them

you don't have to take my crap into account but just some observations

>> No.3485760
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>> No.3485807

>>3485760
At this point im convinced you're just a dedicated troll

>> No.3485889
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3485889

these skintones look okay? not saturated enough?

>>3485760
the amount of detailing on the larger dick is distracting but i'm guessing that's deliberate. digging those expressions.

>> No.3485892

>>3485889
Post blog.

>> No.3485896

>>3485892
https://basnip.tumblr.com/

give crit

>> No.3486007 [DELETED] 
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3486007

Something is off but couldn't point it which..help?

>> No.3486071

>>3485111
Leran to draw feet, Sakimichan.

>> No.3486093

>>3485889
I think the colors look good but I’m not versed in color. My concern is her right boob isn’t moving with her arm it’s pasted to her torso like she’s wearing a bra of some kind

>> No.3486096

>>3486093
thanks anon. okay yeah, i see the issue with her breast. i'll try to fix it.

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3486667

>>3485111
Update.

>> No.3486991
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>> No.3486998

>>3486991
You reffed the feet but not anything else and it’s thrown into stark relief when you compare the feet to the tits. The lighting isn’t consistent because of this. Looks like shit

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3487005

>>3486998

>> No.3487010

>>3487005
>takes legitimate criticism as a crab comment
>good luck improving hun

>> No.3487011

>>3486991
Feet look alot better, nice work .
The cum shot blends to much with the background though. Looks like a lightning bolt

>> No.3487016

>>3487005
Just because I ended the critique with “it looks like shit” doesn’t make the critique invalid, faggot. Learn how light works and it won’t look so much like shit

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>> No.3487034

>>3487005
the absolute state of this board, just ignore that last part and take the constructive criticism

>> No.3487035

>>3487005
>>3487010
>>3487016
>>3487034
newfriend here can i get a quick rundown on crab

>> No.3487054
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>> No.3487087
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3487087

seems pretty boring and almost certain it is the pose and uninspired perspective. more dynamic lighting would be okay I guess

>> No.3487215

Anyone has any tips on how to draw thick sperm - and I mean really, really thick, don't think of anything realistic - in only black and white without lots of heavy shadows? I don't even know what references to look for, liquid metal and mercury are too shiny. Honey might be good but I'm having troubles to carry the texture over to black and white.

>> No.3487243

>>3486667
I find several issues here. Note that I'm not particularly good, so I might end up doing some involuntarily crabbing.

1) Redraw how the sperm dribbles down, it just doesn't agree with the shape of the cock formed by your shadows.
2) The perspective is fucked and I don't know which parts of this are intended and which aren't.
2a) The dick is gigantic, we're talking around three times bigger than normal.
2b) The vulva is too puffy and plastic
2c) The way you drew shadows on the legs suggest they aren't going backwards nearly enough for that grab to be possible.
2d) Her legs are way too thick. The guy's arms too, but it's not as visible because those legs are so huge.
2e) Feet are probably the right size, but look too small because other things are too big.
2f) The foot to leg connection on the left is off.
3) The guy's legs have those bumps on the outside, what's that supposed to be? If those are his hips, then they're way too wide.
4) The guy's thumbs won't be visible and hands won't go that far. If they would, he'd need to have elbows closer to the view than the girl's butt is, and that would require him to be almost leaning forward, which in turn completely disagrees with your composition.
5) Nipples probably won't be that close to each other if the tits aren't fake. Are they fake?
6) I think you overdid the shading on the torso foreshortening, but it might be just my own preference.

>> No.3487255

>>3487054
>Firez

>> No.3487264
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3487264

this is a revision of an older image

>> No.3487275
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3487275

>>3487264
this image makes me want to kill myself
you are so good and you make this
jesus fucking christ, its like fucking doc brown

>> No.3487280
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3487280

>>3487264
jesus anon

>> No.3487282

>>3487280
>>3487275
w-what is it? It's the porn thread, isn't it? And I posted porn... what's wrong?

>> No.3487300

>>3487264

You're last one had enough minimalism to maintain some appeal. This one is a little too detailed.

>> No.3487301

>>3487054
rent due?

>> No.3487303

>>3487087
>That face
Anon look in the mirror and look at your face as you turn your head.

>> No.3487315

>>3487300
link to last one

>> No.3487500
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3487500

>>3487264
a-anon... why?

>> No.3487518
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3487518

>>3487303
Ah I see. I think this is what you mean?

>> No.3487528

>>3487518
lmao

>> No.3487536
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3487536

>>3487518
Anon look in the fucking mirror the face is terribly uneven and ugly.

>> No.3487543

>>3487087
that's one big ass lip

>> No.3487552

>>3487264
>furry is banned but this is perfectly acceptable

really activates the almonds

>> No.3487554

>>3485896
How do I learn to render that well? ;_;
How did you learn to render that well?

>> No.3487626

>>3487554
make it a focus during your studies. i neglected pretty much every other aspect of my art for a good while and just rendered everyday. i still do, really.

pick an artist you want to emulate and study their work. if they stream, watch their process. copy their pics, paint over their pics, think about why and where your version went wrong.

>> No.3487631
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3487631

>>3487536

>> No.3487642

>>3487631
holy shit

>> No.3487654
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3487654

>>3487264
This is the first time someone in these threads has drawn something that has actually made me feel physically sick

>> No.3487665
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3487665

>>3487264
I will still hit that, just put a paper bag on her face and I am all good to go.

>> No.3487686

>>3487654
one man's trash is another man's treasure

>> No.3487702

>>3487264
better than most of the new mompov content.

>> No.3487710

>>3487264
Nice Rick and Morty homage, you dildo.

>> No.3487716

>>3486667
Toes still look like fucking toadstools, ABitofCrumpet.

>> No.3487720

>>3487035
>crabs in a bucket
>pull those down who want to escape
>analogy to ppl who pull u down because they suck themselves
>african americans

>> No.3487727
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3487727

>>3487552
I'd like to suck on YOUR "almonds"... if you know what I mean ;D hahahahaha

>> No.3487744
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>>3487536

>> No.3487769
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3487769

>>3487264
>tfw you notice her foot grabbing the nipple
>tfw you notice the filename
Absolute fucking kino.

>> No.3487770
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3487770

>>3487264
why the fuck my peepee so hard

>> No.3487777

>>3487744
nailed it imo

>> No.3487798

>>3486991
Feet and legs are real good the rest is kinda shit, especially the face and torso

>> No.3487805

>>3487770
do you want the actual answer? the real answer is your biological mother neglected you from ages 0-2.

>> No.3487982

>>3487264
I hate "mommyfags" that just post thicc anime girls with a passion but your fetish feels so real that I'll give you a pass

Although it does disgust me more.

>> No.3488045

>>3487798
That's because I only painted over the feet and legs. The rest of drawing isn't mine

>> No.3488048

>>3484737
>>3485109
>>3485760
pure garbage, I don't know why you bother posting this

>> No.3488054

>>3487264
jesus h christ.jpg

>> No.3488055
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3488055

>>3487264
>making gilf porn so detailed and uncanny people are getting uncomfortable

That's an accomplishment

>> No.3488217

is it a dumb idea to post pron along with sfw stuff on the same blog

>> No.3488237

>>3487243
>The dick is gigantic, we're talking around three times bigger than normal.
That's actually normal sized.

>> No.3488549
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3488549

thanks guys

>> No.3488641
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3488641

Do you see any red flags before I move on?

>> No.3488650

>>3487282
they mean you should take ur decent art skills and paint something less autistic

>> No.3488664
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3488664

>>3488641
I got a bit carried away, but the most important thing you should fix are the arms. They don't seem to be resting anywhere. Hope this helps

>> No.3488671

>>3488664
Thank you !

>> No.3488713
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3488713

I dunno about this style.

>> No.3488724

>>3488713
I like it a lot. Saved.

>> No.3488727

>>3488724
I really, really appreciate that. Trying to get to the point where people would actually commission me, but it's lonely, often feels like I'm drawing/posting in a void.

>> No.3488735

>>3487626
What artists were you looking up to and studying while you were doing this?

Do you paint in greyscale then color or go straight to color?

What resources do you recommend for learning anatomy?

How long have you been *seriously* drawing?

Sorry for the barrage of questions but I'm honestly amazed by your work.

>> No.3488771

>>3488735
>What artists were you looking up to and studying while you were doing this?
calm, dave rapoza, ross tran, serge birault, ryan lang, and probably a few more i'm forgetting. i still look at those artists, and others, to try to study them, but mostly i'm painting over photos nowadays, just as a way to learn about colors and natural lighting.

>Do you paint in greyscale then color or go straight to color?
i'm in the process of switching from greyscale to straight to color. so most of the stuff on my blog will have been greyscale first up until the last couple commission pics (the one of the tatted futa fucking the pale girl, and the mind control one), which were done in greyscale (as a backup in case i messed up so i don't leave my clients hanging), but then basically redone in color.

>What resources do you recommend for learning anatomy?
michael hampton's lectures made everything click for me when it comes to anatomy, but i've looked at pretty much every commonly recommended anatomy instructor's stuff. some of vilppu's stuff on feeling the form has been an eye-opener as well. find someone whose teachings make sense to you.

>How long have you been *seriously* drawing?
hard to say. it's been on and off for years. i think somewhere around the end of 2016 is where i decided to commit to improving. been doodling forever though.

>Sorry for the barrage of questions but I'm honestly amazed by your work.
no problem. happy to help.

>> No.3488782

>>3488771
>2016
Shit, that's when I started being """serious""" with my art as well but I'm /beg/ compared to you. Might I ask how old you are? Feel free to not answer if it's too personal.

Also, got a link for those Hampton lectures? Did you actually pay for the course or find the full series somewhere?

Thanks again for the detailed answers.

>> No.3488792

>>3488782
>>3488782
>Shit, that's when I started being """serious""" with my art as well but I'm /beg/ compared to you.
don't let that stuff trip you up. save every drawing you make and look back at them every so often. ultimately, that's who you have to compare yourself against. it's a long process.

sorry, i forget where i got hampton's lectures from. i wanna say someone posted them in an "anatomy general" thread some months back if you feel like digging through the archives.

>> No.3488795

>>3488735
>>3488782
Stop being a creep already. Also, find better inspirations than this guy.

>> No.3488796

>>3488795
PYW

>> No.3488802

>>3488796
You certainly showed me, anon.
I will never post here again.

fucking kek

>> No.3489091
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3489091

Finally found a method of shading I'm happy with.

Gonna keep going with this. took me a long fucking time and a lot of hair pulling before I started getting somewhere.

But I'm super happy now

>> No.3489097

>>3489091
So your method is not shading at all just adding some pillow shading. That can barely called shading. Sorry to rain on your parade, I mean this pillow shading isnt too uncommon in anime art, just saying that this isnt really shading. Also you fucked up the feet and legs bigtime. Her left one looks especially bad

>> No.3489105

>>3489097

Hey, no worries I'm always looking to improve.

Oh, just pillow shading? Alright, well I usually don't even go this far, so it's still new ground to me.

Thanks for the correction. I just mean that I've finally gotten a grasp on it, and actually feel good about one of my drawings for once.

I understand the feet (the reference had high heels on, but I wanted just feet), but how are the legs messed up?

I guess I didn't show enough depth via shading, in the ref the model's left knee is closest to the viewer, and the rest of the leg/thigh is receding.

the right leg is out straight like that though, not pulling back or anything.

>> No.3489106

>>3489091
Hey anon I’ve talked to you before about rendering when you asked about nanoless. This looks better than the previous work you posted! I suggest lightening up the background or darkening the body to make a more cohesive light environment. It’s hard to appreciate any details when the figure is so bright compared to the backdrop. Hope this makes sense

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3489108

>>3489097

This is the reference by the way.

>>3489106

Hey, didn't think I'd run into you again! Good to see you.

Ah, so either make her darker, or make the background lighter? Alright, thanks for the advice again!

It took me so goddamn long, I watched nanoless' vid piece by piece at slow speed. took me 6 hours to finally get a grasp.

>> No.3489109

>>3484154
Does anybody have good resources on comic panelling for porn/hentai or just comics in general? i want to start making lude comics but my panelling is literally beginner tier.

>> No.3489118

>>3489091
You are pretty much beg shit tier.
Good luck with that development. You really need it.

>> No.3489123

>>3489091
>>3489108
At least you didn't trace.

Good luck with your next drawings.

>> No.3489126

>>3489108
Darkening shadows adding more contrast. She’s just very bright compared to her surroundings it looks a bit like she’s pasted onto it instead of living in the space. May also be a product of the screen I’m using right now vs the screen you’re using. Like I said I do see improvement! Which is great. One thing that your figure lacks though is weight. Which is another thing that adds a not immediately noticeable *something* to nanos art, a sense of weight. It’s one of those things you don’t notice unless it’s not there. So it might be something you want to try to study, she looks like she’s floating because she lacks those compression points that your ref has (right elbow, right leg). Doesn’t help that your ref’s ass isn’t firmly planted on the floor so you’re already getting trolled there.

>> No.3489131

>>3487264
now do a dilf

>> No.3489134

>>3487264
my only complaint is the pussy. too young for her age.

>> No.3489139

>>3487264
I'm glad somebody made lunch lady/bus driver porn

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3489145

>>3489126

Darkening, alright! Thank you.

Thank you, that means a lot!!

Yeah! weight. Damn it, I'm still trying to figure out how to do that.

Not sure if this helps, but pic related maybe shows weight?

How do I practice putting weight on my drawing? Also, what are good examples of good compression points to take note of?

Yeah, fucking oddly posed now that I look at the ref more.

>> No.3489146

>>3489139
You didn’t read the file name did you

>> No.3489151

>>3489145
There are many ways to add weight and there’s no real “cheat sheet” one way I can see in the pic by nano is the hair laying across her boob. Gravity is effecting this chick. Even things that aren’t effected by gravity can imply weight, such as light. Sculpting your render adds form and mass, and weight. I wouldn’t say that picture perfectly exemplifies weight (her ass/thighs could be slightly warped against the surface she’s on for instance) but it’s mostly made up for by composition (which can also give the illusion of weight) and rendering. I don’t think nano has studied any of these things so it’s not necessary to study them in order to render like nano. You can also fake these fundamentals by consuming and emulating vast amounts of content

>> No.3489153

>>3489145
Learn fucking fundamentals. Perspective gesture and line thickness first of all.
And no, you won't learn this in a few weeks. If you want to really master drawing and give appeal to your art, this is a lifelong journey. I doubt you'll ever make it.

>> No.3489154

>>3489145
Why does she have fingers on her feet?

>> No.3489164

>>3489151

Hmm I think I understand what you mean.

Yeah, there was sadly no good example of nano's that shows weight (looked through her hentai foundry gallery).

>>3489153

I care not for your sneering down at me.
However, I will pay attention to your advice.

Practice more gesture, perspective? I'll work on it.

Line thickness? definitely. That's still something I'm trying to find a good handle on.

I'm not expecting to become nanoless in a week-or-less, I am aware that it takes time.

Doesn't make me less angry that there are people in their teens today, who already even surpass nanoless for example.

But it's just fate. I'm going to work myself to death to get better, with what time I still have now.

>>3489154

Good question haha.

>> No.3489297
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3489297

>>3488713
Did some more with this.

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3489367

>>3489091
Man, just try this pic related out for starters

>> No.3489374

>>3489367
not included: knowledge of underlying muscles responsible for said shading

>> No.3489381

>>3489374
That goes without saying, but I feel like he's having trouble with the technical execution of it more than anything. He's not using digital tools properly.

>> No.3489425
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3489425

Could someone redline this for me?

>> No.3489520
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3489520

>>3489425
sure. you're lacking knowledge in proportions, perspective, and anatomy. but don't worry, you'll learn it on the go, just don't stop learning and drawing.

i love the idea with the cat by the way

>> No.3489539

>>3489297
her hair is so highly detailed that it draws attention away from the rest of the figure.

nice squishy butt.

>> No.3489541

>>3489520
Thanks, buddy.

>> No.3489648
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3489648

Alright alright heres a wip so far

>> No.3489661

>>3488792
Turns out it's listed on CGPeers as "Analytical Figure Drawing". I had trouble finding it because Hampton's name wasn't part of the torrent name.

>> No.3489687
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3489687

>>3489091

>> No.3489695

>>3489687
thats a big ass forehead mr kyle clone

>> No.3489708

>>3489695
Thanks. I am kyle though not a clone

>> No.3489711

>>3489708
kyle's hand doesn't look like that, clone

>> No.3489726
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3489726

>>3485111
Update.

>> No.3489735

>>3489708
Hey Mr Kyle person. How does one become that skilled in drawing /painting anatomy from imagination? Never mind the fact that you rendered the skin so nicely. I'd want advice on how to improve those technical anatomy skills.

>> No.3489760
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3489760

>> No.3489792

>>3489735
he has a tutorial on his blog http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/ its pretty outdated now though

>> No.3489795
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3489795

>> No.3489861

>>3489520
first cat was better before it was weebed up.

>> No.3489862

>>3489520
This is a decent redline but you didnt have to change the pigtails

>> No.3489864

>>3489726
are those your pathetic attempts at speed lines, Crumpet? and that head on the redhead, christ. those hands...

trace your reference photo next time, dumbass. you'll get less shittier results that way

>> No.3489952

>>3489661
just remember that what works for one student doesn't necessarily work for the other. make sure to look at other sources from time to time.

>> No.3490056
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3490056

comin along

>> No.3490057
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3490057

>> No.3490060

>>3490056
back to tumblr with your making cute girls uglier

>> No.3490074

>>3487264
Not my proudest fap....

>> No.3490082

>>3490057
Blog

>> No.3490085

>>3489726
blog

>> No.3490094

>>3490082
https://qtseveryday.tumblr.com/
im new so theres nothing there

>> No.3490109

https://hardstonesmcflintcock.tumblr.com

>> No.3490136
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3490136

>> No.3490149

>>3489864
Elaborate beyond middle school insults. Your written diarrhea could transmute into legitimate criticism if you'd only invest a solid effort into it.

See >>3487243 as a fantastic person leading-by-example in helping others fix their pieces.

>> No.3490340

>>3489792
No he doesnt.

>> No.3490346

>>3490340
open wide anon http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/post/58911694864/people-have-asked-me-how-i-color-skin-so-i-made

>> No.3490350

>>3490346
Thanks im grateful. But I literally said I don't cate about the skin rendering. I wanted to know how he can get that level of convincing anatomy from imagination. Not even proko can do that. I feel like im looking at magic and everyone is just blind to it.

>> No.3490354

>>3490350
>from imagination
>kyle
you have a lot to learn anon, also you're a dick. best of luck on your learning journey tho

>> No.3490377

>>3490354
wat

>> No.3490419

>>3490149
I trimmed the fat and the safe space, politically correct bullshit to show you what you need to work on, Crumpet. If your middle school dumbass mind can't see past that, then no amount of sugar-coated, put on the refrigerator because mommy is proud of you diarrhea critique is going to help you.

You post your work here, someone's gonna call you out on your mistakes. You can polish the turd all you want, though.

>> No.3490554
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3490554

>>3490419
You took my words almost in verbatim, swung, and missed how a drunken teenager rebels against his patient father after being caught stuffing beer cans under the family porch. At least invest the time and energy to formulate a more pointed diss.

Now be a sport and change the channel for me. Go to your room, and write me a thousand page essay on the mistakes you've made, what you've learned from them, and how you are going to put your life back in order. Daddy's got work in the morning before his trip.

>for everyone else

Here is 30 second gestures for hands. 90 second gestures coming up.

>> No.3490555

>>3490554
not porn

>> No.3490574

>>3490554
That's what I thought, Crumpet. Panic set in after calling you out on your mistakes and you half-ass some 30 second hand gesture crap.

I love it when drawfags get humbled like this. :)

>> No.3490578
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3490578

>>3490574
post work lol

>> No.3490579
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3490579

>> No.3490582

>>3490554
Because as we all know, it only takes 30 seconds to show what kind of a hack you really are. Keep polishing those turds.

>> No.3490585

>>3490578
Drink more onions, cuck.

>> No.3490597
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3490597

>>3490554
90 sec

>> No.3490599

>>3490597
perfect art. no need to ever give you crits again.

>> No.3490600

>>3490597
most of these hands look like shit I don't understand the point of this ?

>> No.3490629
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3490629

>>3490597
Going to clear something up with the site admins. A separate sheet will be dedicated to five minute mannequinizations.

>>3490599
>>3490600
What is "gesture"?

>> No.3490630

>>3490629
why are you posting this in the porn thread?!

>> No.3490633

>>3490629
gestures with construction? are you retarded? gesture also doesn't automatically mean "look bad and inaccurate"

gestures are all about the form and most of these hands are fucked in terms of form

>> No.3490716
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3490716

>>3490629
Each hand's bone structure took five minutes.

>>3490630
>>3490633
Mind putting up work in the meantime?

>> No.3490724
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3490724

Fixed Athya's hands. What exactly is wrong with her head?

>> No.3490727
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3490727

>>3490716
can I say your form looks like shit now?

>> No.3490756

>>3490727
How many seconds/minutes a piece?

>> No.3490762
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3490762

>>3490756
these aren't gestures these are personal studies my gestures look closer to pic related and take 1-3 minutes depending how distracted I get. I don't remotely see how that's relevant because im not saying "im faster than you" im saying "your baseline form is inaccurate you aren't grasping the actual gesture of whatever ref you are using" for those hands

>> No.3490777

>>3490762
Thank you for the reference and the time frame between each one.

Please answer, for the sake bringing dreams to fine ink: how long did the personal studies take?

And for the sake of bettering myself, what still needs to be fixed?

The reason I ask is this: after the lines are taken care of, and the gestures and studies are done, I will be doing some value studies.

Ask if anything needs clarification.

>> No.3490955
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3490955

>>3488795

Me >>3487554 and this guy >>3488735 are two different people. I'm grateful though for all the information he managed to get out of the artist though. It's very useful.

>> No.3491025
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3491025

>>3490762
No ref was used for the hands.

Here are the 1 min gestures.

>> No.3491027
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>>3491025
1 min and 3 min after the previous warm up.

>> No.3491039
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3491039

>>3491027
>>3491025

First 10 min I did in ages.

>> No.3491040
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3491040

Flintcock is losing it

>> No.3491124
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3491124

>>3491040
How? The last hour or so, I've been in a state of zen, and created a lot of good bases for future works.

>> No.3491129

>>3491040
tell me about it... jesus...

>> No.3491159
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3491159

How do I render porn related stuff traditionally like pic related? It might be a dumb question but I don't really know where to start

>> No.3491164

>>3491159
By understanding anatomy/form and using...copics? Looks like a watery, marker texture I think. Maybe water color. So get studying and buy some overpriced markers

>> No.3491194

>>3491159
Seconding the investment in copic markers. Unless you are very fast and precise, blending with watercolors is an exercise in tedium and tears. A couple of spare blending markers - along with your set of choice - will do more for less.

Look around DickBlick.com. They should have a skin tone set in stock.

Cheers!

>> No.3491216

>>3491159
also, this is a nice piece of art, have to say it.

>> No.3491217

>>3491216
specially the torso

>> No.3491344
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3491344

Not gonna touch this no more. I have an ass time coloring. Anyone know a good guide/tip regarding coloring and rendering? I legitimately know nothing about them. And my lines end up looking like crap. Is there a better way other than keep on sketching and erasing the same line until it's perfectly smooth?

>> No.3491395

>>3490136
>>3490094
Your blog get blammed already, or did you delete it?

Either way, shame, your stuff's really cute.

>> No.3491409

>>3490377
kyle uses references all the time. barely any of his work is done from imagination.

>> No.3491415

>>3491025
>>3491027
>>3491039
You just need 1-2 more years of grinding and then your stuff will probably be acceptable. Right now you are simply intermediate/beg tier.

>> No.3491418
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3491418

>Mfw >>3487264

>> No.3491423

>>3487264

This image literally made scream, and I don't mean in the funny laughing way. Just in sheer terror. It's like seeing those one of those gore videos when someone gets killed in a really nasty way and you just realize you will never be able to unsee what you just saw, and that your life is now worse off for it. Holy hell anon.

>> No.3491427
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3491427

>>3487264
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAaaaA

>> No.3491433

>>3491427
what kind of infinite tsukoyomi is this

>> No.3491437

>>3491409
got any proof to back that up?

>> No.3491505

>>3491437
No, but it's obvious from his artwork.

>> No.3491611
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3491611

These arms don't feel right

>> No.3491638

>>3491611
too short, gotta compare them to the midriff

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>> No.3491741

>>3491611
dude did you trace akkos face or something? Thats face looks amazingly accurate

>> No.3491751

>>3491741
the back of the head is fucked plus proportions are off, so i doubt its traced

>> No.3491760

>>3491611
limbs are too short
thighs should be the same lenght as torso

>> No.3491770

>>3491730
interesting

>> No.3491772

>>3491730
You sure love making these, huh? Looks good anon

>> No.3491802
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3491802

Tried to fix what was mentioned. Hands are kind of shitty, though.

>>3491741
I draw a lot of LWA and yoshinari stuff

>> No.3491811

>>3487264
Reminds me of a french cartoon.

>> No.3491813

>>3491730
god i wish that were me

>> No.3491858
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3491858

>>3491437
Not that anon, but some of his drawings are definitely heavily referenced. And before you tear me a new one, no I don't think it's bad to use references.

>> No.3491869

>>3491858
thats not really what "drawing from imagination" is about. Its not about making up a new pose and fany setting and all that. But being able to draw the human body without copying something. Just because its the same pose, doesnt mean he cant draw from imagination.

>> No.3491873

>>3491869
Well yeah, as long as you're not doing a 1:1 trace and applying what you know to make even the slightest difference, you are drawing from imagination. Again though, I'm not that other anon, I just wanted to show an example. Kyle tracing all the time is a meme.

>> No.3491926

>>3491869
He heavily references his drawings.

And it was in response to this
>>3490350
>I wanted to know how he can get that level of convincing anatomy from imagination.
He doesn't get that level of convincing anatomy from imagination. That's all.

>> No.3491929
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3491929

>>3484154

>> No.3491931

>>3491858
Please, I don't think I stand another argument with people who claim that your pic related is "tracing". (I know that's not what you're saying.)

>> No.3491937

>>3491926
>He doesn't get that level of convincing anatomy from imagination. That's all.
So you mean he copied the upper body of >>3491858 pic somewhere else?

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3491936

>>3484154

>> No.3491947
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>>3484154

>> No.3491954

>>3487264
I approve of this skilled debauchery.
Rock on gilf anon.

>> No.3491955

>>3491929
>>3491936
>>3491947
wow! this is really good! do you have a blog?

>> No.3491958

what most people on /ic/ think of reference is absolutely retarded and why they will never make it

>> No.3491965

>>3490727
This image doesn't change the fact that your critique is shit. You type like a fucking teenager.

>> No.3491966

>>3487264
wow! this is really good! do you have a blog?

>> No.3491969

>>3491958
No one's said using references is bad yet you comment dumb shit like this
Also post work if you think you're gonna make it

>> No.3491978
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3491978

>>3491965
tell me how you really feel

>> No.3491982

>>3491969
I post my work every day, and Im also not trying to make it. even though Im not trying to make it I still somehow manage to understand more about the industry than the dunning krugers here

>> No.3491984
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3491984

>>3491978
Just learn how to critique and you'll be fine, bud.

>> No.3491988

>>3489297
I feel like you should give the whole body the feeling of the hair, like try doing the coloring with that brush might make it look like a old pixelart vn, which this reminds me of

>> No.3491989
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3491989

>>3491984
i want to be better than fine

>> No.3491990

>>3491982
So you're some /DAD/ kid with an inflated ego, gotcha.
>dunning krugers
Because they stated a specific artist doesn't draw entirely from imagination? Yikes.

>> No.3491991
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3491991

>>3491989
I don't think that's possible for you, bud. Don't worry about it.

>> No.3492000

>>3491990
negative, i dont think that guy draws entirely from imagination either. but people have this weird misinformed opinion that professional artists draw solely from imagination, and drawing that way is the ultimate goal. when drawing from imagination isn't about knowing every single form in existence and how every material reacts to light environments. its about having an expansive visual library so you have a strong foundation that can be supplemented with reference when needed. any successful artist that draws more than the same thing every single day is utilizing reference like that. if knowing that information somehow means i have an inflated ego okay you fuckin weirdo

>> No.3492002

>>3491802
looks better, the other one was fine too, it was just the hands orientation that was weird.

I-I like your style to be quite honest [spoiler]would fap to

>> No.3492009

>>3492000
Nah I said you got a big ego because you randomly started calling people NGMIs and dunning krugers. Aside from that I do see your point.
>you fuckin weirdo
Calm down.

>> No.3492028

>>3491966
thank you and yes:

ngmi.deviantart.com
ngmi-art.tumblr.com

formerly "exodusisnear" but now its ngmi for shits and giggles

>> No.3492056
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3492056

Been trying to make this pic work out.

I may need to practice on gestures myself.

>> No.3492066

>>3492028
>ngmi
a bit self-deprecating but I like it

>> No.3492070

>>3491988
Hm, two people have now pointed out the hair.
The lines and hair are based off a scanned pencil drawing, and I shade the hair and then digitally do some color replacement. I kind of like the effect, but yeah, it does really stick out.
Might look odd if I do the same for the body, but I'm certainly willing to try and it see. Thanks.

>> No.3492082

>>3484154
how often do you guys jerk off? serious question. how do you control yourself

>> No.3492115
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3492115

i cant decide if i like the way her ass looks or not. does it at least look like it's being squished correctly?

>>3491730
this is really good. blog?

>> No.3492120

>>3491955
https://www.deviantart.com/mragrodolce

>> No.3492127
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3492127

>>3492115
imo theres too much texture in some areas that looks like ....worm skin or something
in some areas its really successful cus it looks like cellulite. if youre going for that play with it a little more so its less stripey and ..predictable? (whats the word im looking for here) something thats more representative of the "lattice" form of the fat. if youre not going for cellulite then i would soften and blow it out even more

>> No.3492128

>>3492115
looks like a prune

>> No.3492129
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3492129

>>3492120
remember me? THE SWEET STECH OF GARBAGE... HEH... ;^)

>> No.3492133

>>3492082
Like twice a month, my libido isn't that high

>> No.3492134

>>3492127
thanks for the paintover! i was going for a mix of cellulite and stretching. i kept thinking i overdid it, but when i pulled back it just didn't look like a fat ass to me. i'll play around with the texture a bit.

>>3492128
worm skin, prune... yeah that's what i was afraid of.

>> No.3492148

>>3492133
Woman detected

>> No.3492149
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3492149

>>3492134
as someone who has a fat cellulitey ass, most of the concentration of it is going to be where the fat is compressing against itself (usually where the highest mass is, the points most effected by gravity, but not always). so the hands wont create that kind of compression, and are actually relieving some of that compression.

>> No.3492161

>>3492148
I hope this is bait

>> No.3492171
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3492171

>>3492082
At least twice a day.

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3492175

>>3492149
thanks anon. i tried making the cellulite more pronounced where i think the brunt of the compression would show up while smoothing out the other parts. still not happy with it though. i think i'm gonna shelve it and move on. i appreciate the crits!

>> No.3492181

>>3492175
No hate intended but bro you have to stop neglecting your hands. Put some detail on them or it'll keep being difficult

>> No.3492184

>>3492181
i know, i know...

they're so fucking hard to draw.

>> No.3492187

Is it possible to become a successful lewd artist while refusing to draw males and dicks?

>> No.3492191

>>3492184
They are, I know it's tedious but it's worth it

>> No.3492220

>>3492191
i remember getting a crit some time last year about having an idea behind every gesture, which made me realize how important the hands are to a character's expression and how lacking my visual library is in that regard.

so while i am being negligent, i am also aware of how critical they are. i'm not being flippant about it. it's just that i feel there are higher priority stuff i need to focus on. lighting/mood, color, dynamic gesture -- without those a nice looking hand feels wasted.

>> No.3492222

>>3491730
BLOG
L
O
G

>> No.3492314

>>3492115
>>3492222
https://toxodron.tumblr.com/

>> No.3492349

>>3492175
her arm is also way too small

>> No.3492352

>>3492349
i mess that up constantly. thanks.

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3492436

Need feedback for a friend

>> No.3492449

>>3492161
Yeah youre definately a roastie

>> No.3492452

>>3492449
yikes

>> No.3492453

>>3492436
leg on the left looks broken from the knee, and is also thicker than the other leg, everything looks really flat as well because of the way its low value scale, the navel is way off position , a whole lot is off about it.

>> No.3492487

>>3492452
>>>tumblr

>> No.3492491

>>3492082
>be lonely, depressed wreck
>drawing porn and posting it in social media is one of the few forms of validation i can get with little effort
cant lose control of your libido if your circumstances keep it low amirite

>> No.3492496

>>3492487
you don't have to have a blog to consider "roastie" a retarded cringey term

>> No.3492499

>>3492496
No but you need a vagina which you certainly have my dear

>> No.3492501

>>3492499
I guess that's why I understand how they work

>> No.3492504

>>3492501
Not the point of my previous posts but ok.

>> No.3492511

>>3492148
>>3492449
>>3492487
>>3492504
*snap*

>> No.3492515

>>3492511
*its a hologram*

>> No.3492517

>>3491164
>>3491194
thanks, my dudes

>> No.3492565
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3492565

I'm new to this. Can you guys help me out?

>> No.3492800

>>3491937
Yes.
A year or so ago he posted a photobash of 2 different pics put together and his sketch that came out of that. It was really bad.
Kyle has some really great skills, but he definitely isn't very good at drawing from imagination.

>> No.3492833

>>3492028
Your DeviantArt gallery scares me. I don't even want to know what's in your Tumblr.

>> No.3492923

>>3490727
>>3490762
blog? if you dont want to post it, at least post more of these please.

>> No.3492963

>>3491760
>thighs should be the same lenght as torso
is this true for all ages and both sexes?

>> No.3492965
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>>3487264

>> No.3492993

>>3492028
you have the same problem as firez when rendering skin. it looks dead. it looks like all of your girls have been coated with formaldehyde and theyre just walking corpses

>> No.3493014

>>3487264
Holy fuck, I actually remember the older version. Nice job.

>> No.3493036

>>3492082
there's no moisture in my body it flies out my dick faster than I can sustain it

>> No.3493183
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3493183

Could I get some help with the anatomy and the perspective in this picture?

>> No.3493185

>>3493183
What would your mother think of you if she found that drawing

>> No.3493198

>>3493185

She would say that I draw like a retard.

>> No.3493278

>>3492993
Who here's good with skin?

>inb4 kyle

Kyle's a given.

>> No.3493289

>>3493278
by here do you mean ic?
because incase renders very beautiful skin, basnip also does lovely skin

has a lot to do with conveying the translucency of skin and the blood in and under it

>> No.3493320

>>3489118

I don't understand what 'beg shit tier' means. Care to elaborate?

Thanks for the praise and good wishes.

>>3489123

Thank you, honestly the only thing I've traced before were hands. I fucking hate hands, but I do try really hard to draw one on my own before breaking and tracing to see what I'm missing.

>>3489687

Holy fuck. You make me want to go back onto raynare and fix her up. Shit, I gotta learn lighting more.

your paint over is beautiful. Hope you don't mind, I want to tweet this.

>> No.3493376

>>3493014
link to older version?

>> No.3493385

>>3493320

You may think it looks good, but there is no photographic evidence that it would look like that, further more was his placement and distance of the light source the same one you intended' i didn't thought so!

>> No.3493387

>>3493385

I read that as "pornographic evidence"...

No, but still! I feel like he picked a much better lighting location than what I did haha

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3493395

>>3493183

it is supposed to be this character, does she looks like her? is her head to big in my picture? I think her torso is wrong also.

>> No.3493401

>>3493395
head size looks fine to me. you didn't make her waist thin enough.

>> No.3493416

>>3493401

Oh no, fuck you are right.

>> No.3493420

>>3493278
idk kyles girls are plastic

>> No.3493452

>>3488549
Fucking HeneHoes

>> No.3493460

>>3493420
The only kind of girls /ic/ knows

>> No.3493465

>>3493289
Is there a technique to it? Regarding color theory or what layers properly convey the most appealing effects?

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3493469

>>3493465
big key to it is subsurface scattering and understanding that. painting it on one layer is difficult and requires a higher understanding of color interactions and studying anatomy, and I think most of the people who have plastic/dead skin painting are painting on one layer. multiple layers does some of the work for you and makes it so you can avoid muddiness. skin is deceptively colorful so its easy to go muddy. there are tons and tons of tutorials with different ways to convey the life in skin, find one that works for what you want or play around with layer modes yourself.
doxy has a pretty good one where he uses several layers to get the effect he wants. (pic related)

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3494285

sup d/ic/ks

thoughts?

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3494311

>>3494285
small update

>> No.3494332

>>3494285
great bush

>> No.3494341

>>3494332
thx anon

>> No.3494616

>>3494285
>>3494311
Great bush indeed. Post blog.

>> No.3494643

>>3494616
thx.
unfortunately, no blog right now.
just postin here for the time being

>> No.3494645

>>3491027
>>3491025
These are really nice lines

>> No.3494655
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3494655

I know my lighting is trash, im working on it.

Any advice on form or whatever would be appreciated. 1/3

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3494656

>>3494655
2/3

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3494659

>>3494656
3/3

>> No.3494671

>>3490057
>copying diives' style

>> No.3494709

>>3494655
>>3494656
>>3494659
Are you trying to copy the Ganassafaggot? Please don't.
Your girls look plastic as fuck. Not sweaty or oily, just plastic. You shouldn't put a highlight on every single bump of a body. That's not how you render human skin. Go study some refs of naked people.
And don't use blacks and whites for rendering for fucks sake, it makes them look dead and dirty. Pick some actual colors for highlights and shadows.

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3494755

i'm so sorry about my anatomy i've never seen a woman in my life

>> No.3494761

>>3494709
Who's Ganassafaggot?

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3494873

does this perspective make sense?

>> No.3494995

>>3494873
yeah

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Any help?

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3495060

>>3494873
I see how you were trying to make the right shoulder slope down, but it looks odd to me. Pixel art can be that way because one misplaced pixel can produce drastic effects. It's one of those things that isn't going to break the piece though, so take it with a big grain of salt, just one guy's opinion.

>> No.3495112

>>3495060
yeah no that makes sense. Lines up a little better with where her hand is.

>> No.3495250

anyone feel like making a new thread?

>> No.3495268

>>3494285
saved. that feral bush really does it for me
good job

>> No.3495328
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3495328

I need to do more traditional work.

Something I did in my downtime vacationing with the family

Its the first time I have done traditional work in year, and somehow it turned out . When the next go around comes, I'll have the composition and forms better prepared and, if I draw Myria again, havr her design better thought out.

Adding a blue pencil (for that purpose), some brushes, and an inkwell to my kit (more consistency, as opposed to the brush pen I have currently).

>> No.3495525

>>3495328
>trying this hard to impress no one.
My fucking sides. Nice meltdown, Crumpet. I have enjoyed this panic thoroughly.

>> No.3495529

>>3495328
And it still shows your glaring mistakes.

>> No.3495531

>>3495328
Keep polishing your turds.

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3495562

>>3495531
>>3495525
>>3495529

>> No.3495604

>>3495525
>>3495529
>>3495531

Please point to this panic, princess.

Added five to my clientele and three are confirmed repeats. Another three are contemplating an animation, and another is in progress. Be clean for the next three months as business continues to boom and the collab gets set underway, won't you?

At least entertain with a critique before I refine the design tomorrow during downtime. Samefagging your delusions never got you very far, especially without any work to compare.

>> No.3495668

>>3495604

>>3490419

...and then you did this >>3490554
>>3490597
>>3490629
>>3490716
>>3491027
>>3491039

I wasn't the only one who noticed your meltdown... >>3491040

And now you're posting this...>>3495328

>Added five to my clientele and three are confirmed repeats. Another three are contemplating an animation, and another is in progress. Be clean for the next three months as business continues to boom and the collab gets set underway, won't you?

ABitOfCrumpet, your panic and subsequent meltdown were all the things I needed to see to make ma laugh at your pathetic attempts at trying to save face here on /ic/. I'm going to enjoy lurking around for the next few months here.

I'll see you in the next porn thread. Please, make it soon. I can't wait to see what polished turds you post next. :)

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3495677

>>3494709
I havent seen his art before but I see the similarities.

I am aware of the plasticy-ness, just testing out the style at the moment, here's a more matte version.

The rendering advice is good thanks.

>> No.3495749

>>3495668
Red, I continue to flourish and not only do I correct the mistakes in ongoing pieces, I apply new techniques, work out my anatomical kinks, and continue to improve and draw clientele in the process.

Red, projecting onto others is not going to help you when what you invested years into building gets overtaken in a matter of months. Greenlit on Tumblr, and will soon advertise future projects. Will keep you informed on the progress and post studies, which will resume on the 1st.

By the way, I am still waiting for the critique for the above. Reminder you got excortiated for your terrible perpspective not too long ago.

>> No.3495795

>>3495677
Send this to me @ hardstonesmcflintcock@protonmail.ch and I will redline it for you when I return.

While I understand what you are going for, try to work the forms in an undersketch before hashing out the countours. The pose feels stiff as a pole.

Lastly, her hands look like they were drawn with the intent to lie on the sides of her ribcage. Is she supposed to be removing an article of clothing? It does not entice us to her breasts, expression, or hips.

Once we know your intent and what you want to bring out of this character, the gestures will be a lot easier.

>> No.3495798

>>3495749
>greenlit on Tumblr
and you're proud of that??? anyone can get a tumblr account, dude

>> No.3495802

>>3495795
>this critique
my...fucking...SIDES

>> No.3495806

>>3495795
>Once we know your intent and what you want to bring out of this character...
fucking KEK

>> No.3495808

>>3495795
>The pose feels stiff as a pole

Like this one, right? >>3495328

>> No.3495837

>>3495802
>>3495808
>>3495802

*yawn*

To the artist, do some gestures (30 and 90 sec) and torso beans (30 sec). Once your warmed up, push her chest forward a bit more and tilt the hips to the side.

>>3495798
100 notes, 100 posts, and 200 favorites are a prerequisite to be greenlit by Tumblr and appear in the searches. Noticed a climb in notes since I passed the threshold, especially for the hijabi WIP.

>> No.3495974

>>3495268
thx anon