Alternative Art/Stylization General

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Alternative Art/Stylization General Anonymous Sat May 26 06:33:23 2018 No.3445096 [Reply] [Original]

last thread: >>3435549

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to draw Anime?
ctrl+f artbook thread for books
>Can I get another source?
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
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References
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>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 06:41:24 2018 No.3445101 >>3445096 Why take the malnourished disabled woman with bloated stomach symptom as the thread pic? Did you even take a look at anything else in the thread when you made this?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 06:43:14 2018 No.3445104 >>3445101 This is your thread for the next 350 posts. I'm sorry.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 07:12:33 2018 No.3445124 File: 121 KB, 899x1200, 7E1EFEA0EE6A4C9E9D4A61EFECC62EBA.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] repostan from last thread

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 07:17:40 2018 No.3445131 >>3445124 even if you're drawing super large eyes I feel it looks hella weird if there's not one eye width distance between them

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 07:56:20 2018 No.3445175 File: 639 KB, 1056x1313, How do i hair.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fuck me please send help.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 07:56:49 2018 No.3445177 File: 1.47 MB, 1572x2082, Screen Shot 2018-05-26 at 4.55.27 AM.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] been a while since i posted a full page

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 07:58:07 2018 No.3445181 >>3445124 your heads crooked, flip the image

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:00:56 2018 No.3445186 >>3445175 seems solid, is there anything specific you want help with?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:05:55 2018 No.3445189 >>3445177 Thatfisher?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:06:40 2018 No.3445191 >>3445175 should've given the base color for the rest of her body first

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:07:32 2018 No.3445193 >>3445177 why the FUCK did you delete your blog you faggot

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:08:35 2018 No.3445196 >>3445101 I'm sure you can make it to the OP next time anon! Don't give up!

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:15:48 2018 No.3445206 Fuck you nosebro

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:17:02 2018 No.3445208 >>3445206 Don't insult him. Praise is more lethal than insult.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:41:55 2018 No.3445232 >>3445186 >>3445191 Some color palette would be nice, i can't for the life of me decide which color to use, everything seem too off for some reason.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 08:44:56 2018 No.3445234 >>3445206 Don't summon the demon by calling his name dummy.

Anonymous Sat May 26 08:52:13 2018 No.3445239

>>3445232
Since you're giving her blonde hair (yellow), matching it with a blue sub color would be nice. Then add a few more analogous color (orange/red/brown). One of the colors has to be neutral/desaturated (could be a greyish blue or muddy brown) so you wouldn't give the viewers some eye strain.
https://www.palmie.jp/lessons/137

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 09:03:41 2018 No.3445242 File: 516 KB, 1000x1000, ikkyu nakajima.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Crit my Ikkyu

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 09:26:03 2018 No.3445258 >>3445193 Thank god he did. Nobody needs pedophile art in their galleries. Smart move.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 09:47:10 2018 No.3445279 >>3445258 /this

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 12:13:29 2018 No.3445454 >>3445177 >>3445193 You deleted your blog TWICE? Nigga what the fuck >>3445258 >>3445279 >nobody needs to do art either

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 13:52:25 2018 No.3445572 File: 1.46 MB, 2100x1500, 123.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Its wild out here

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 13:57:24 2018 No.3445576 >>3445242 Looks like you shrunk her face.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 14:21:05 2018 No.3445593 File: 145 KB, 1521x917, design.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] This kind of silhouette drawing is really fun and easy. I think it could easily become an activity for a thread.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 14:22:15 2018 No.3445596 >>3445232 What's the character?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 14:27:25 2018 No.3445601 File: 94 KB, 600x989, VC4 - Riley Miller.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3445596 not him but im 99% sure its Riley Miller from Valkyria Chronicles 4.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 16:33:30 2018 No.3445747 File: 78 KB, 1185x885, Capture.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ...redline pls? perspective iz hard

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 16:51:23 2018 No.3445769 >>3445747 what you're doing is your legs are almost anatomically proportionate until you reach the hips, at which point you basically only shrink everything it's easier to start over by looking at some gigantification fetish site than fixing this up

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:04:33 2018 No.3445779 File: 249 KB, 1013x1034, berserkStatStrike3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any thoughts on this?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:07:35 2018 No.3445784 >>3445779 the face especially needs some work

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:32:23 2018 No.3445811 File: 208 KB, 976x579, testfin2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Which crappy shading colors look more appealing? Pink or blue?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:36:47 2018 No.3445815 >>3445811 Pink

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:37:03 2018 No.3445817 >>3445811 pink except for the purple on the legs

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:37:18 2018 No.3445818 >>3445811 if forced to choose, the pink one is done better than the blue one, but definitely experiment with the colors more.

Anonymous Sat May 26 17:37:55 2018 No.3445819
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>>3445779
this might be a bit extensive for a redraw, but the face did need some work.
I don't know if I explain things properly, but basically the hair did not match the tilt and size of the face. You can fix either one or the other, I fixed a bit of both.

Anonymous Sat May 26 17:42:14 2018 No.3445822
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>>3445747

I tried, anon. It might not be the most anatomically correct redline...

Usually it's good to draw the ground/ceiling as a perspective grid, but I had no idea how to approach that here though, sorry.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:47:53 2018 No.3445828 >>3445815 >>3445817 >>3445818 Thanks, I really despise coloring and thinking about it.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 17:50:39 2018 No.3445835 File: 475 KB, 1414x1220, random things.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 18:11:17 2018 No.3445865 >>3445835 Very cute. Do you got a blog?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 18:16:07 2018 No.3445870 >>3445865 No, sorry, I usually just lurk /ic/ and practice.

Anonymous Sat May 26 18:36:20 2018 No.3445890
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>>3445784
>>3445819
Thanks for the headsup! I'm not sure if I got it right this time. I temporarely turned off the shading for now and I'm going back to it later to fix it with fresh eyes.

btw, I love how you do faces

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 18:42:00 2018 No.3445904 >>3445890 I think it's looking a bit better already, imo if you want her to be looking at the viewer, shift her pupils a bit to the right and thanks for the compliment

Anonymous Sat May 26 19:45:05 2018 No.3445987
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>>3445601
Yeah that's her, i tried Raita color palatte but it seem off on my drawing so been trying too change the hue.
Also Raita design are hard to draw as fuck, so many details reeeee

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 20:54:28 2018 No.3446075 File: 63 KB, 1155x767, fighter.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3445822 >>3445769 tried my best.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 21:08:12 2018 No.3446098 File: 741 KB, 1000x1000, cherry jerrera.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3445576 Thanks, eye size maybe? Also did another photostudy

>>	NoseBro Sat May 26 21:21:03 2018 No.3446106 >>3445206 kek. op is a fag. Full agreement

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 21:24:02 2018 No.3446111 >>3446106 Takes one to know one.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 21:25:06 2018 No.3446115 File: 143 KB, 1280x720, awooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3446111 OH OH OH I got trips free loli yaaaay! wahooooo! in your face!

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 21:34:35 2018 No.3446127 >>3445242 blog? Awesome looking art, really like it

>>	Anonymous Sat May 26 21:48:31 2018 No.3446151 >>3445835 oh shit, keep at it anon, I love what you're doin here

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 00:33:57 2018 No.3446269 >>3446127 Thanks, I've got an instagram and an artstation. The instagram is far more frequently updated though. https://www.instagram.com/tanganhands/ https://www.artstation.com/lgoya

Anonymous Sun May 27 01:09:21 2018 No.3446298
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help

first time really coloring digitally and first month using sketchbook

the drawing is part of a "current events" thing I'm trying to do once a week and this is my first one

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 01:24:46 2018 No.3446311 >>3445779 Blog? Liking the forms.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 03:53:58 2018 No.3446396 File: 1.95 MB, 1748x2344, cutie.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 03:55:36 2018 No.3446398 File: 366 KB, 874x1172, resize.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3446396 srry, here's a resize

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 04:40:41 2018 No.3446437 File: 661 KB, 796x753, pONOBbJ[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3443756 I'm proud of the arm and that's really it. But thank you random anon for explaining the whole speculars stuff, gonna take the time and learn more about lighting.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 08:02:06 2018 No.3446600 File: 1.19 MB, 1000x667, DSC67867867.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this looking good? I don´t know if I´m over rendering the background or even if it´s well rendered, please help.

Anonymous Sun May 27 08:17:03 2018 No.3446616

>>3446600
Depends on how detailed you're going to make the foreground stuff but by the looks of things it definitely looks like you're overdoing the details of the background. Way too much time and effort for something that people are barely going to pay attention to.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 08:31:02 2018 No.3446635 >>3446600 you're fine with the level of detail you have just keep it consistent. It's probably because your focus element isn't done yet, but your upper left corner is drawing a lot of attention, darken it a bit.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 08:32:24 2018 No.3446638 >>3446635 >>3446600 or cover it with more atmosphere, however you do it doesn't matter

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 08:35:14 2018 No.3446642 >>3446600 The BG is good but like other anons said, take a little bit of attention out of the BG. Also i don't know what the fuck is going on in your picture.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 09:25:55 2018 No.3446687 >>3445454 >nobody needs to do art either There's nothing wrong with doing art. There's a WHOLE lot that can go wrong if you are doing pedo art. Stop trying to sound smart if you aren't.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 09:27:29 2018 No.3446689 >>3445593 Too organic for mecha design. Needs more symmetry and precise geometry.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 10:01:09 2018 No.3446719 >>3445747 from the thumbnail I thought you're going for a reverse-sattou style

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 10:15:55 2018 No.3446727 File: 438 KB, 1024x768, mcreee.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] some feedback ?

Anonymous Sun May 27 12:39:02 2018 No.3446859

>>3446727
I like the base colors.
Hat sits unnaturally high.
Desperately needs value changes. Add lighting, or at least highlights. I think it would look really cool if you lit this as the inside of a saloon with light coming from a window and creating a sharp light/shadow contrast on his face.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 14:16:32 2018 No.3446990 File: 332 KB, 1024x768, mcreee.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3446859 i moved the hat and used the multiply layer to give it some values here and there

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 15:09:28 2018 No.3447045 >>3446396 >>3446398 Very cute. Looks like the arms are a little on the long side though, either shorten them or bring the shoulders and elbows forward

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 15:42:24 2018 No.3447086 File: 1.09 MB, 1067x1066, sugimoto 7.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Opinions?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 15:50:11 2018 No.3447099 >>3447086 It's absolutely begging for harder, sharper edges. Quit using such a soft brush. The whole thing seems like you've put a slight Guassian Blur filter over it.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 15:54:41 2018 No.3447109 >>3447099 I did on the background I used a mixer brush on two layers, could be that, I'll keep it in mind, thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 16:56:28 2018 No.3447188 >>3445177 i miss you

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 16:58:49 2018 No.3447193 File: 236 KB, 869x1229, ce9391aa77fbbd4aa064dc807bac845b66707f51_241422_869_1229.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3447086 For a guy who's capable of punching a bear in the face he sure has a beautiful delicate jawline.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:23:46 2018 No.3447226 File: 188 KB, 941x701, b589650408.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Which hair do you feel helps accentuate her silhouette

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:25:35 2018 No.3447228 >>3447226 straight

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:27:30 2018 No.3447230 >>3447226 curly. it gives more of a silhouette

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:28:53 2018 No.3447234 >>3447226 also blog :)

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:31:24 2018 No.3447239 >>3447226 The right one because she's flat as a board.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:32:18 2018 No.3447242 File: 238 KB, 933x693, Screenshot_1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3447226 expanding on the first example, if this helps

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 17:42:04 2018 No.3447261 >>3447234 http://niiikooooo.tumblr.com/tagged/I_drew_this >>3447242 Mmm I do like these The left one to be more precise.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 18:28:49 2018 No.3447314 WHERE IS DRAWPARTY?!

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 18:41:00 2018 No.3447336 File: 89 KB, 527x640, ss (2018-05-22 at 07.54.28).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] WHO KILLED DRAWPARTY?!

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 18:45:11 2018 No.3447340 >>3447336 a womanchild

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 18:45:50 2018 No.3447343 >>3447314 casper#8795

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 19:53:41 2018 No.3447435 >>3447336 draw party refugees welcome https://discord.gg/9WUdvXC

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 19:54:16 2018 No.3447436 >>3447261 You seriously need to work on your fundies m8

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 19:56:53 2018 No.3447442 >>3447343 Who is this?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 20:19:40 2018 No.3447482 >>3447336 What happened?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 20:20:26 2018 No.3447484 >>3447336 I thought only the admin can.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 20:21:41 2018 No.3447487 File: 1.07 MB, 1080x1080, tokoyami 3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Help me out here, how's the composition?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 20:29:02 2018 No.3447496 >>3447435 why would u faggots join back, there was literally no one good in there. asides from the russian guy and goldsmurf. that fat acne written faggot that i forgot his name to(thankfully) and some other kiss asses were the ones that ruined it.

Anonymous Sun May 27 20:57:16 2018 No.3447530
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>>3447482
not important anymore, but the majority of active users have moved to a new server

>>3447442
someone in the new server

>>3447435
this is not the new server we made by the way, just nosebro's server looking for new members

reminder to not participate in /ic/ or discord drama and clog up threads

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:01:24 2018 No.3447536 >>3447530 Just explain the situation so people get closure.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:04:40 2018 No.3447539 >>3447536 black retard gorilla nigger admin deleted the server so everyone migrated to a new one

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:06:23 2018 No.3447540 >>3447539 who the fuck was even the admin? I posted on the server a couple of times and I don't think I've ever even seen him around

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:08:34 2018 No.3447542 >>3447540 exactly, admin was AFK for months, came back and all of a sudden didnt like what the server looked like and it got deleted

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:09:37 2018 No.3447543 >>3447539 >>3447540 >>3447542 Literally what? The admin was there every day.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:11:10 2018 No.3447546 File: 185 KB, 446x361, 391.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:11:18 2018 No.3447548 >>3447543 really gets my noggin joggin

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:11:36 2018 No.3447549 >>3445096 roll

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:15:59 2018 No.3447554 >>3447543 was it ridalxsvn?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 27 21:27:03 2018 No.3447567 >>3447554 AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH no

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 10:56:09 2018 No.3448216 >>3447543 was it kuma ?

Anonymous Mon May 28 17:20:19 2018 No.3448598
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>>3445779
Got a bit further with this, planning to add background soon

>>3446311
If you really want to know, it's curiouscube.tumblr.com
I post occasionally and not everything is consistent in quality

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 17:39:29 2018 No.3448627 File: 1.85 MB, 1600x1300, Matsuri.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 17:42:12 2018 No.3448632 File: 1.54 MB, 1056x1056, Hey joe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3448627 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMGv4EewHdg

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:13:39 2018 No.3448728 File: 869 KB, 700x1260, blairdame.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:16:12 2018 No.3448732 File: 368 KB, 676x1078, hmm.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3445096 I want your honest opinion, /ic/. How does this....

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:16:54 2018 No.3448734 File: 1.41 MB, 800x1120, hmm2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3448732 Compare to this?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:27:58 2018 No.3448744 File: 22 KB, 480x480, help.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3448734 >>3448732 /ic/, please. That's 80 dollars on the line.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:35:43 2018 No.3448753 >>3448734 this one is a lot better

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 19:44:08 2018 No.3448763 >>3446437 no problem weird fat raccoon boy

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 20:16:28 2018 No.3448793 >>3448732 >>3448734 Second one is much better. Cleaner lines/edges, no chromatic memeberration, brushwork isn't as lazy.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 23:02:09 2018 No.3448965 File: 76 KB, 670x651, lJR6GYP[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Am I unbanned yet?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 23:26:43 2018 No.3448991 >>3448732 >>3448734 this >>3448734 one is better. The chromatic abberation in the first one looks like shit, fuck off with that retard gimmick.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 28 23:56:10 2018 No.3449014 >>3448732 >>3448734 >>3448744 I don't know which one of you bet $80 on the first one but they should get their eyes checked.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 00:11:53 2018 No.3449031 File: 395 KB, 1200x1500, sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hi

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 00:45:54 2018 No.3449058 File: 70 KB, 1018x924, mimilewd.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 00:51:22 2018 No.3449067 >>3448734 ay lmao

Anonymous Tue May 29 01:02:03 2018 No.3449075

>>3449058
Have you stopped and thought to yourself that you are regurgitating the same pose, same face, same composition, and even the same exact forms from before? You are not drawing from imagination, you are drawing purely from memory and the sooner you realize this the sooner you're going to stop plateauing.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 01:25:12 2018 No.3449088 >>3448744 >>3449014 anyone who bet 80 dollars on the first one being better deserves to lose it.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 01:59:46 2018 No.3449105 >>3449075 "Imagination" is memory

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 03:12:24 2018 No.3449129 >>3449105 It's actually the other way around. People don't remember things as they happen.

Anonymous Tue May 29 08:15:48 2018 No.3449381
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Thanks for the past feedback anons.
I decided to start marking the main edges of the figures. The problem now is that I´m not really sure if the colors are way too similar and if they don´t make the image enough readable and clear or even if there is a problem with the edges.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 10:11:13 2018 No.3449486 File: 64 KB, 266x717, monaa.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] opinions on this?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 10:18:40 2018 No.3449494 >>3449486 How much time do you spent on this? Is it OC? Did you draw from imagination?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 10:29:10 2018 No.3449509 >>3449486 feet looks weirdly placed. knees and calves looked off too Are you the same anon from the last thread?

Anonymous Tue May 29 11:06:22 2018 No.3449552

>>3449494
Uhhh, I don't know, a couple of hours maybe?
She's an OC, yeah. From imagination.

>>3449509
You're right, I still don't know how to draw hips/legs/feet because I've been drawing floating torsos my whole life.
What anon? I don't think I posted in the last thread.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:21:18 2018 No.3449570 >>3449486 fat cheeks lopsided, dunno you tell me anon

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:25:39 2018 No.3449574 >>3446398 perfect breasts

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:31:48 2018 No.3449582 File: 23 KB, 340x408, bitchface.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449570 better?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:33:43 2018 No.3449586 >>3447487 i like it anon, i feel like the solid background doesnt work. not sure if its the colour or just the fact that it's solid.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:36:18 2018 No.3449588 >>3449552 If you keep practicing and manage to cut down the time it took you to draw that down to like, 20 minutes at most, I think you'd be golden. anyway, I think your art's cute. Got a blog?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:37:44 2018 No.3449589 >>3449381 The entire left side of the tortoise is basically melded in with the background. Interested to see where this goes though.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:46:28 2018 No.3449595 File: 2.18 MB, 1080x1080, tokoyami 12.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449586

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:54:05 2018 No.3449603 >>3449588 Wow, thanks! My blog is http://atlas9x.tumblr.com/

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 11:57:39 2018 No.3449612 File: 156 KB, 985x620, GNIudVR[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3448965 fk

Anonymous Tue May 29 12:12:01 2018 No.3449628

>>3449058
that broken haaand oh my god
and why does she have a toddler face with the body of a 40 year old pornstar
why does her hair have no definition at all

god you are shit, you will always be shit and i find the idea of you drawing the same garbage over and over until you drool and go to a loonie bin very very hilarious

>also those figures in the background
do you draw with your laptop touchbad?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 12:28:17 2018 No.3449645 >>3449628 post your work.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 12:32:06 2018 No.3449649 File: 720 KB, 1000x750, Cucked_OP.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449645

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 12:39:55 2018 No.3449654 >>3449628 rude

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 12:46:21 2018 No.3449661 >>3449645 Nice to see ic hasn't changed. lol

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 13:49:38 2018 No.3449709 File: 6 KB, 270x270, icon4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449628 baka!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 18:11:31 2018 No.3450095 File: 1.63 MB, 2480x3508, 1527564967811.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some stuff for a competition at a local con

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 18:12:02 2018 No.3450098 File: 1.08 MB, 3080x2080, 1527631815974.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450095

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 18:33:37 2018 No.3450118 >>3449654 >>3449645 He's not wrong though

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 19:01:59 2018 No.3450140 >>3449058 this shit is good, keep at it, don't listen to the crab

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 19:02:47 2018 No.3450141 >>3449709 learn form

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 19:14:17 2018 No.3450154 File: 198 KB, 1280x1811, sketchh.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 19:52:56 2018 No.3450184 File: 84 KB, 528x783, collette.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] critiques?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:13:01 2018 No.3450209 >>3447487 i like it! althought i wish the chains would be hand painted, the brush here is too noticeable

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:14:43 2018 No.3450212 >>3450184 Are you tracing?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:23:04 2018 No.3450219 File: 121 KB, 436x660, cat7.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can anyone help me with colors and values (tutorials, advice, redlines, etc.)? How do you make it feel more harmonious like Tim Lochner?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:28:12 2018 No.3450223 >>3450219 Add more red (overlay a red layer, set the lineart to dark red, configure the whole pic using color balance etc)

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:30:51 2018 No.3450229 >>3445096 sticky youtube video got deleted, fix your post

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:32:26 2018 No.3450231 >>3450229 Finally someone else pointed it out. It's been months.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:34:13 2018 No.3450233 >>3450212 no

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:37:05 2018 No.3450239 >>3450223 thanks, I will try it out. By color balance do you mean like hue/sat/val adjustment layers?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:43:59 2018 No.3450248 File: 14 KB, 512x288, images (3).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450239 Nah fäm it's this one

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:46:23 2018 No.3450250 >>3450154 really like it

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:47:01 2018 No.3450252 >>3450248 Oh didn't know this exist, I'll play around with it

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 20:54:07 2018 No.3450256 File: 119 KB, 720x638, guess.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3448965 cute face but where's the rest of her?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 22:29:12 2018 No.3450322 >>3450256 you shouldn't be doing redlines, learn how to connect shoulders properly

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 23:00:12 2018 No.3450341 >>3449709 I want people to keep telling you that you're good, so you will stay terrible.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 23:31:18 2018 No.3450370 File: 431 KB, 1000x775, 1527644456.1funn_gemsona_emily.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just finished this commission

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 23:39:28 2018 No.3450373 File: 65 KB, 1402x836, 0rf3RTT[1].jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449612 me >>3450256 I like this.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 23:51:36 2018 No.3450378 >>3450341 post work

>>	Anonymous Tue May 29 23:54:41 2018 No.3450380 File: 90 KB, 500x571, 1506956781453.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450341 fucking kek

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 00:11:53 2018 No.3450394 File: 1.18 MB, 2480x2480, kakashi 3.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] any pointers before I keep going?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 00:21:03 2018 No.3450408 >>3450394 The feet aren't grounded very well imo.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 00:28:10 2018 No.3450413 >>3450408 you're right should be fine if I lower the back leg or raise the front one a bit, right? keep them on the same surface

Anonymous Wed May 30 00:33:12 2018 No.3450416

>>3450413
I don't know if you want the front foot to be directly on the horizon line like it is right now. You might want to just angle the front foot down so that the ground becomes angled towards the back foot.
A shame because that's a nice looking foot.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 00:35:05 2018 No.3450417 >>3450416 thanks, that's a good idea, I'll do that instead

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 01:32:00 2018 No.3450444 File: 65 KB, 348x765, psreadballs.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3449628 >>3449075 Honestly can't tell if you're talking about the OP or yourself. Either way it looks fine and you're clearly very frustrated with your own art.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 02:47:52 2018 No.3450485 >>3449582 yes

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 03:07:07 2018 No.3450507 >>3449628 Jesus seething >>3450154 Nice

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 04:48:52 2018 No.3450562 File: 864 KB, 1000x1364, mrmd2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 04:50:03 2018 No.3450563 File: 121 KB, 900x600, ali.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] not sure if i like it enough to keep going

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 04:55:22 2018 No.3450567 File: 910 KB, 1000x1364, mrmd1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Suggestions on color?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 05:02:46 2018 No.3450573 File: 122 KB, 900x600, ali.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450563 still not sure, i should probably give it another go tomorrow

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 06:54:12 2018 No.3450615 File: 232 KB, 985x620, 1527609459339.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450373 keep it simple bruv

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 08:41:02 2018 No.3450649 >>3450507 >>3450250 Thanks guys! Glad you liked it I need to learn how to be less messy when sketching

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 10:03:45 2018 No.3450743 >>3450649 where can i follow you?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 10:47:25 2018 No.3450781 >>3445835 berri nice

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 11:38:04 2018 No.3450839 File: 152 KB, 543x724, goon.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this the proper spot to get some feedback for this badboy? I'd like feedback on his design in general and any other parts in general to improve

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 11:40:24 2018 No.3450841 >>3449595 that is fucking sick

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 11:43:57 2018 No.3450846 >>3450394 string* art = &kakashi3

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 11:57:38 2018 No.3450858 File: 190 KB, 894x843, Nr0V858[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] f >>3450839 Arms stand out in a weird way, have them be less cylindrical and probably beefier to match the general upper body. Or something, idk what do i know

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 12:21:34 2018 No.3450896 >>3450858 Thank you! I'll tinker around with it

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 13:06:40 2018 No.3450945 File: 368 KB, 1500x1606, cdchallenge2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tfw you spend way too much time on something and hate the final result.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 13:18:43 2018 No.3450961 File: 726 KB, 1000x1271, mrmd1000.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Water is gay >>3450945 Really like it

Anonymous Wed May 30 13:38:50 2018 No.3450992

>>3450945
Been there senpai, been there

I really like the texture though. and the design is really solid. my only qualm is how large is one hand is. If it is intentional, please Ignore me, but if it's not, its distracting. I think that, if you were going for a foreshortening trick you should have pushed the one leg behind the hand further back and made it smaller. there's a few other tweeks you could do to help push the foreshortening though, I'm just not sure if it was your goal or something else?

Anonymous Wed May 30 13:52:55 2018 No.3451006

>>3450961
ty anon,I don't have the slightest knowledge of water to help u tho.

>>3450992
I was going for a foreshortening, I noticed right after I was almost finished that the thumb is on the same line as the leg and that it's completely wrong so the hand just looks gigantic instead of closer to the camera, oh well, ty anyways.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 14:53:07 2018 No.3451094 File: 218 KB, 1024x768, 1527051630755.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450858

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 14:53:50 2018 No.3451095 >>3450945 Who cares, that's happened to me countless times but it's all practice anyways. I end up hating almost all art I've ever done, but it's all building upon what I know.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 15:08:30 2018 No.3451117 File: 1.88 MB, 1600x2488, Night pupper redraw.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcBQCi_kGpU

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 15:17:07 2018 No.3451130 >>3446687 >X art subject should never be depicted cause i say so fuck right off buddy

>>	JW Wed May 30 15:54:17 2018 No.3451176 File: 252 KB, 2584x1669, ex05-29-2018 (2).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ee

>>	JW Wed May 30 15:55:00 2018 No.3451178 File: 209 KB, 1838x1531, ex05-29-2018 (3).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bugman

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 17:08:37 2018 No.3451258 File: 1.35 MB, 1000x1000, kakashi small.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450394 think I finished this

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 17:45:52 2018 No.3451355 >>3451178 I enjoy this design. The little leg/feelers around the ribs are a nice touch.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 18:03:54 2018 No.3451381 >>3451178 Its not a bugman, its a human with a big head and fancy armor. Up the insect factors. Push it. Add some damn antenna

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 18:29:22 2018 No.3451406 >>3451176 Your legs are always like, 20% too long.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 18:30:50 2018 No.3451413 >>3451258 Chalky lightning looks weird, but I like the rest a lot!

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 18:40:02 2018 No.3451426 >>3450858 How do I get the mods to ignore it when I break the rules like this guy? I'm so jealous.

>>	JW Wed May 30 18:47:42 2018 No.3451442 >>3451381 yeah, youre right. monsters/beasts/nonhumans are new to me. >>3451355 thx. >>3451406 i love long legs.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 18:51:37 2018 No.3451447 File: 461 KB, 959x821, eh.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] might as well go for it i guess

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 19:51:02 2018 No.3451538 >>3450562 >>3450567 neat

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 19:59:40 2018 No.3451562 >>3450858 Anyone is dumb enough to take an advice from some idiot who believes a finished artwork can be done in 2 minutes just like in speedpaints

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 20:00:42 2018 No.3451566 >>3451447 line size too small

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:00:28 2018 No.3451647 File: 69 KB, 1112x1406, fubukitatsu.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:00:48 2018 No.3451648 >>3451566 actually its not small, its just not consistent. varying lines like that make everything look out of balance.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:02:53 2018 No.3451653 File: 53 KB, 773x512, 1524427818029.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3451647 unf

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:33:59 2018 No.3451687 >>3451413 thanks! I liked the texture so I tried doing the whole drawing using the same brush

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:34:27 2018 No.3451689 File: 384 KB, 2048x2048, 32F7B15E-E705-41A6-BBB6-616335663B9B.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thoughts, opinions and critiques if you may?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:36:48 2018 No.3451692 >>3451648 The overall linework is still too thin when zoomed out.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:37:17 2018 No.3451694 >>3451689 increase saturation on the shadows over the skin, especially on the face

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:39:42 2018 No.3451699 >>3451689 You really like this pose.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 21:41:50 2018 No.3451703 >>3451694 Gotcha >>3451699 What do you mean friend? First time posting a probably drawing this pose

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 22:43:47 2018 No.3451759 >>3450615 Forgot to respond to this but I like it, will take notes.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 22:46:23 2018 No.3451765 >>3451692 its not...

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 22:56:59 2018 No.3451772 >>3451689 might just be me but i really dislike that her face is almost a perfect oval just her face in general is really unappealing to me but otherwise i think it looks fine

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:12:44 2018 No.3451785 >>3451765 it is stop resisting and accept my crit

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:15:00 2018 No.3451787 >>3451785 it's actually not though it'd be more obvious if it were colored

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:15:10 2018 No.3451788 DAB people are finally free from ISIS

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:16:15 2018 No.3451790 >>3451788 wrong thread lol

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:20:36 2018 No.3451796 >>3451787 it's already thin in the pic especially her jaw. People look at your art as a whole (image). Those lines are barely visible when you further zoom it out imo

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:22:50 2018 No.3451798 File: 151 KB, 800x600, 1499620979316.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3451796 anime lineart is very thin.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:24:13 2018 No.3451800 File: 939 KB, 2894x4093, Xian.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hey guys

Anonymous Wed May 30 23:24:50 2018 No.3451801
File: 731 KB, 864x987, 23_1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Haven't decided whether to go for more realistic features or keep it stylized. I also have no idea what the foreground element is, might turn it into a plotted plant. The idea was that I wanted something to "block in" the character. Can I get any feedback before I move forward?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:25:17 2018 No.3451802 >>3451800 fuck i forgot to resize, sorry

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:25:32 2018 No.3451803 File: 62 KB, 566x805, drawin1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i droo this

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:34:23 2018 No.3451806 File: 288 KB, 1000x1221, Untitled-5.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3450154 a cartoonier thing

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:51:45 2018 No.3451822 >>3451176 Digging the tummies this time around. Also, I love the construction on the foot on the far right.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 30 23:58:06 2018 No.3451827 >>3451800 The items he's holding kind of look like a dick and balls from far away. For better or for worse

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 00:51:41 2018 No.3451866 File: 2.55 MB, 1800x1536, Cucked_OP2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3445096 Here is my anime drawing

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:17:19 2018 No.3451936 File: 2.19 MB, 1500x2100, rinafinal.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] thoughts pls

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:20:26 2018 No.3451937 File: 699 KB, 1536x2048, 898582AC-6C19-41B9-A74F-87BED499BCCD.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] what do people think of the composition? also i’m starting to think the head’s a bit too big

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:23:51 2018 No.3451939 >>3451937 the whole upper body looks a bit too big, just shrink it a little and you should be fine

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:36:38 2018 No.3451944 File: 1.26 MB, 844x1122, ooby.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ive been trying a funkier more wonky style lately idk

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:38:55 2018 No.3451946 File: 243 KB, 1046x756, sloppy seconds.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3451866 Obligatory.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:40:20 2018 No.3451947 >>3451936 i'm a scrub who can't critique it but i think it looks rad

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:42:15 2018 No.3451948 >>3451947 thanks anon, i've been working on it while bored at work

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:49:01 2018 No.3451951 >>3451426 Be good at drawing.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 02:53:18 2018 No.3451953 >>3451937 small legs

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 03:10:38 2018 No.3451955 File: 261 KB, 528x396, 01-29-18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pls give critiques. Forgive me if the image is too small, had to do it cuz internet is slow as crap. Will try uploading the full resolution if i can.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 04:18:42 2018 No.3452005 File: 1.47 MB, 2550x2964, naruto bullshit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] here's a lil 5 min sketch I did. What's wrong with it. ty in advance

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 04:31:29 2018 No.3452014 >>3452005 >What's wrong with it It's a 5 min sketch

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 06:03:13 2018 No.3452059 File: 160 KB, 1057x837, Untitled.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I think i fucked up the face, really want to scrap this right now. Should i power this one through.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 06:21:31 2018 No.3452081 >>3452059 Whatever you think the problem is this is more than salvageable.

>>	JW Thu May 31 06:32:45 2018 No.3452087 >>3451822 thx i kept in mind the tummies from before. >>3452059 it dosent look unapealing so you can continue with it. If you want you can redline it untill it appeals to you. Look at it as fixing exercise.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 06:54:05 2018 No.3452106 >>3452059 Remember friend: "Finished, not perfect" For what it's worth I think it looks fine. You seem to be stressing too much over every single detail.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 07:21:02 2018 No.3452124 >>3452081 >>3452087 Guess i will power through it >>3452106 Yeah i know friendo, i have too many discard WIP in my computer. I should try to take it easy for once.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 07:34:05 2018 No.3452128 >>3451953 yeah this. really cool though

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 10:21:11 2018 No.3452262 >>3445177 I love your work man you're an inspiration to me hope you keep posting from time to time I really look forward to your works

Anonymous Thu May 31 11:04:19 2018 No.3452301

>>3447487
The composition is nice. I would recommend redoing the chains on 100% opacity and shading them with a clipping mask because the transparency on them is really awkward. I would also recommend making the background a more violent red and painting it in with the same brush you used on the quirk shadow monster.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 11:04:29 2018 No.3452302 >>3451796 in fact ops lines are too big, go look at more line art silly faggot

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 11:57:19 2018 No.3452377 >>3452301 I finished this already but thanks for the recommendations, I appreciate them, and actually independently followed a couple. >>3449595

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 13:53:43 2018 No.3452537 File: 908 KB, 1153x1080, 20180531_134452.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Can someone help me out with my little scribble?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 14:00:16 2018 No.3452551 >>3452537 T-Tetsuo?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 14:09:25 2018 No.3452567 >>3452537 it's a scribble there's no helping it.do a new one. illogical pose.nothing about makes sense I doubt she's left handed. Spine doesn't behave like that if you jump

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 14:10:34 2018 No.3452569 File: 9 KB, 199x199, sycra.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3452537 get off my board sycra reeee

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 14:11:48 2018 No.3452573 File: 709 KB, 1350x1200, bodywip1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] /3/ is being slow can I get feedback on the anatomy/how do I fix?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 14:23:42 2018 No.3452589 >>3452059 Don't scrap it motherfucker. Leave the face for now, finish coloring the rest of the body, then return. We'll help you with the face.(it looks mostly fine tho)

Anonymous Thu May 31 15:14:12 2018 No.3452641

>>3445175
>>3445175
You're that guy who was trying out rei17's style right
Idk about colours exactly, but it looks like you're not really thinking of her head in 3d. The way you've colored where basically every part of her hair has same level of detail makes it look more like a flat pattern than hair.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 15:29:30 2018 No.3452666 >>3452537 really static, femur is shorter in closer leg than further leg, draw through the volumes - don't stop and pick up on the other side, neck and head don't appear grounded to the torso, expression is lacking

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 18:24:55 2018 No.3452867 File: 1.88 MB, 918x1632, WIN_20180531_23_00_57_Pro.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Sorry for the quality, anything I should fix?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 18:25:41 2018 No.3452869 File: 421 KB, 1641x1000, brbrib.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Not sure about hair

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 18:40:18 2018 No.3452885 >>3452867 Back of the head needs to go out way more. Neck's too big and head is too far away from the entire body. You should fix it in digital, cause you'd have to redraw everything. You could also just enlarge the entire body.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 19:33:36 2018 No.3452931 File: 1.97 MB, 2212x3072, 01 Rangrid.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] comm for a friend

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 19:50:35 2018 No.3452945 File: 196 KB, 860x792, pmpyRRm[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] sleep

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 19:52:58 2018 No.3452948 >>3452945 fuck these are shit

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 20:02:29 2018 No.3452960 >>3452945 you should change your "oc" have 0 appealing

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 20:09:57 2018 No.3452968 File: 192 KB, 562x780, lineless.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying lineless for the first time. How did i do. Should i do cell or soft shading for this?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 21:21:07 2018 No.3453030 >>3452968 >lineless you mean painting?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 21:33:04 2018 No.3453037 File: 2.67 MB, 2212x3072, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3452931 mind if i just

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 22:53:19 2018 No.3453081 >>3452537 sycra/10

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 22:53:59 2018 No.3453083 >>3452537 Blog? Really liking this.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 31 22:57:35 2018 No.3453086 >>3452945 kill yourself

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 01:07:00 2018 No.3453194 discord group?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 01:10:37 2018 No.3453196 >>3453037 Yes I do mind.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 03:36:30 2018 No.3453280 Been lurking for like a week you guys inspire me a lot I hope I can be as good as you one day.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 04:44:08 2018 No.3453324 >>3451426 back to your native board, newfriend

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 05:31:20 2018 No.3453361 File: 120 KB, 882x882, 8982978.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How can I improve this disaster?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 05:39:20 2018 No.3453368 File: 68 KB, 600x350, dududu oneyplays ehhh.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How can I improve my disaster?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 05:43:37 2018 No.3453372 >>3453361 give him lighter, less saturated skin color >>3453368 good boys dingdong not depressed enough

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 05:47:30 2018 No.3453378 >>3453372 lower eye lids and bags under the eyes maybe?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 06:00:48 2018 No.3453387 >>3453378 it's pretty ok overall I'm just joshing with you m8

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 06:04:01 2018 No.3453391 >>3453387 I know, but you are right he needs to look more suicidal

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 07:06:57 2018 No.3453416 File: 415 KB, 1641x1000, brbrib.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 07:29:19 2018 No.3453426 >>3453416 That looks sick anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 08:01:34 2018 No.3453436 >>3453416 You need to show the viewer what she's doing anon. Right now i can't understand what's she doing, is she posing? fighting? stand off? Cool pose is fine and all but it must have a meaning.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 10:39:32 2018 No.3453556 File: 114 KB, 500x478, 1520626634409.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3452945 Bruh, give up this furry shit and start making some hentai with your qt girls. That is the only way you will make it bro

Anonymous Fri Jun 1 10:55:39 2018 No.3453571
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>>3452059
I think shit looks good, but if you really want something, I guess the eyes are too far back and wide. Not sure how it's like in the style you are mimicking but generally the human face only covers about 25% of the head in side view.

The way the eyes arch back and reveal a wider plane gives the impression of a 3/4 view but the nose and mouth are complete side view.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 11:11:47 2018 No.3453579 File: 126 KB, 676x689, AttemptToHelp.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3453571 >>3452059 Continuing, this was my "attempt" to help, sorry if it looks botched, you are better than me.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 12:09:53 2018 No.3453619 >>3453556 Isn't he literally gay?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 12:26:05 2018 No.3453641 File: 161 KB, 710x850, 1520457832908.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3453619 I was not aware of this, damnit! Just when ya think someone's got something going for them, they fuck it all up by being gay. What a piece of shit.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 12:36:12 2018 No.3453655 File: 80 KB, 476x625, shitanatomy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 12:38:04 2018 No.3453659 >>3453655 Please learn how to draw with your shoulder or elbow, it will make your lines so much nicer. Right now they look like chicken scratch.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 12:59:00 2018 No.3453676 >>3452945 i sincerely love everything you do here, keep it up

Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:07:07 2018 No.3453687

>>3453676
See the weird thing is that he has a lot of potential for drawing cute girls, I just wish he drew those more often instead of that chubby furry dude he seems to like so much, I don't have anything against furries but /ic/ hates furshit even more than anime.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:24:32 2018 No.3453713 >>3453655 It looks like someone that is mimicking Rush's sketches or something

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:33:33 2018 No.3453730 >>3453713 >Rush On a side note, Rush is also a really nice band. I listen to their stuff all the time.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:39:35 2018 No.3453735 >>3453713 who

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:49:03 2018 No.3453749 >>3453735 some artist from draw party

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:54:16 2018 No.3453768 >>3452945 Whats so appealing in this fat blob you keep trying to draw?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:54:31 2018 No.3453769 >>3453713 You telling me being messy and uncleaned is Rush's thing and only Rush's?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 13:55:53 2018 No.3453775 >>3453769 No not just the messiness, the particular way of scratchiness and the face shape really reminds me of him

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 14:15:07 2018 No.3453803 >>3453749 what

Anonymous Fri Jun 1 14:27:51 2018 No.3453824

>>3453713
Well, this >>3453655 was actually supposed to be a pretty bad mixmash of muh style and Oyari Ashito's since I was looking at some of his works while sketching
On another note, I'm not sure I've ever seen Rush's stuff around but now I'm kinda interested

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 15:04:24 2018 No.3453879 >>3453687 one day, chubby furries will be as unoffensive and ubiquitous as cute anime girls to your brain. have fun with sleeping at night.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 15:06:29 2018 No.3453881 >>3453879 Lol don't be mad. Again, I have nothing against furries it's just not my cup of tea, I'm just looking out for ya.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 15:59:03 2018 No.3454001 >>3453879 >one day, chubby furries will be as unoffensive and ubiquitous as cute anime girls to your brain. They can't and won't

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 17:05:21 2018 No.3454076 >>3449058 Your art and style is great. some salty crabs in ere

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 17:09:16 2018 No.3454080 >>3451258 Love it, keep it up mate

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 17:36:45 2018 No.3454107 File: 257 KB, 963x627, hte.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] a comm for someone, wanting to go lineless-ish style?

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 18:27:04 2018 No.3454158 File: 45 KB, 632x892, Screenshot_20.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 20:40:23 2018 No.3454329 >>3453879 They are if it's as obnoxious as yours kill yourself

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 20:55:39 2018 No.3454341 >>3453824 >Oyari Ashito Good taste my lad

Anonymous Fri Jun 1 20:59:07 2018 No.3454344

>>3453571
>>3453579
Yeah i think i see the problem, it's that goddamn habit of mine when drawing side view again.
>>3454107
Wow nice but ain't lineless just mean paint over? Instead of line with pen, you paint over and line with brush in 1 layer? Correct me if i'm wrong.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 21:42:59 2018 No.3454404 File: 111 KB, 727x960, ss+(2018-06-01+at+09.37.06).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] drawing a gift for a friend of mine, im v excited to colour when i get a day off work

>>	Anonymous Fri Jun 1 21:47:33 2018 No.3454411 >>3454404 Super cute! Got a blog?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 01:29:00 2018 No.3454613 >>3451178 >>3451381 its not great as a real bug monster, but it has a nice "super sentai monster-of-the-week-dude-in-a-rubber-costume" vibe to it.

Anonymous Sat Jun 2 01:41:37 2018 No.3454626

>>3452059
if your goal with the face was to make it look like Raita's, you've hit it.

I think you'll wanna revisit the hair later, though. Those zigzagging lines on the hair behind her neck don't really work to sell that it's 'hair'

When you come back to the face again, bring some more colour into the ear--a bit more saturated and red, especially around the thin parts that catch some subsurface scattering.

keep going!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 04:12:59 2018 No.3454734 >>3453037 Stiff pose, flat overal, but fuck you wiht that shadow ,that's fuckin lazy kys lazy fuck. You're not even trying, I won't even bother with giving you a critique

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 04:16:18 2018 No.3454737 File: 110 KB, 596x668, +5401149777777.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >It is not an excuse to not draw hands

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 05:15:51 2018 No.3454778 File: 1.07 MB, 1527x1080, Shinjuku Phantom Incident.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any critics?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 05:17:39 2018 No.3454780 >>3454778 I don't feel the eyes nor the necks. It almost look like an anime parody

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 08:11:36 2018 No.3454890 File: 125 KB, 599x615, xPNJCtC[1].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3453768 He's very cute!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 08:40:27 2018 No.3454907 >>3454890 it's really not reported

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 09:31:34 2018 No.3454939 >>3454890 God i hate furries so much

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 10:57:31 2018 No.3455031 >>3454734 I think you intended this for >>3452931

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 12:35:52 2018 No.3455129 >>3448734 This one's a lot better but those eyes are bad

>>	Anonymous Sat Jun 2 13:25:50 2018 No.3455181 new thread >>3455178 new thread >>3455178 new thread >>3455178

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