DRAW THREAD

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DRAW THREAD Anonymous Tue May 15 13:10:21 2018 No.3429837 [Reply] [Original]

Artists of all countries, unite!!(to critique each other's work and improve so one day we could all make it) EDITION.

Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others!

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Old thread: >>3413860

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 13:12:27 2018 No.3429840 File: 260 KB, 1100x549, composicio number 3 05.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I hope the composition read well. Do you think it's too messy? Do you understand what's going on?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 13:29:23 2018 No.3429859 File: 87 KB, 494x746, k.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] critique face

Anonymous Tue May 15 14:14:19 2018 No.3429903

>>3429840
I understand what's going on but personally I found that my eyes were drawn more to the zombie bottom left than the car or the one in front - I feel like the piece would be benefitted by making the car bigger and removing the zombie I mentioned but i'm not that read up on it

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 14:23:49 2018 No.3429919 File: 3.89 MB, 2074x1383, hjhjkhjkghjgjg.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] An advance of the previous one. And I will not upgrade on this thread anymore.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 14:58:18 2018 No.3429967 File: 513 KB, 1458x2091, aylm.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3422810 >>3425567 Finished.

Anonymous Tue May 15 15:22:14 2018 No.3430007
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>>3429859
they eyes kind of look like they're painted on, like barbies eyes. and her mouth looks a bit like that too. not sure why seeing they're modelled just fine but for me the illusion of relief just isn't there.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 15:25:24 2018 No.3430015 File: 1.12 MB, 400x204, 1515801574306.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429919 figure a bit too simple for me but everything else looks fucking awesome, gj anon!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 15:32:31 2018 No.3430022 File: 847 KB, 2560x1600, 20180515_121812.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What.can I do to improve this?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 15:54:49 2018 No.3430040 File: 254 KB, 1365x1932, 1526376008055.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430022

Anonymous Tue May 15 16:15:47 2018 No.3430053
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Kinda trying to practice chiaroscuro, anything I should watch out for?

>>3429840
Just my two cents but your composition is a little wide, although if it's more than just a standalone painting then I digress. As long as you add shadows and blurs surrounding the focus of the piece, you should have a pretty good composition that draws the eyes to the humans/car.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 17:23:01 2018 No.3430138 File: 1.77 MB, 2732x2174, IMG_1076.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Did a landscape. Had two people that passed by pose on the steps.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 18:19:51 2018 No.3430203 >>3429796 thank you. in understand everything but this >You also tend to light everything in the same value...but some area should get have a dimmer value structure. can you please explain for me?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 18:21:53 2018 No.3430207 File: 357 KB, 1000x795, may-15-2018.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430138 heres a less gigantic version

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 18:26:48 2018 No.3430214 >>3429919 Unf. The linework on those fish makes me wet. Good shit, my dude.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 19:37:03 2018 No.3430288 >>3430207 Stop smoking Brian

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 19:59:16 2018 No.3430316 >>3430288 Neveeeeeer!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 20:59:35 2018 No.3430389 File: 336 KB, 1024x768, ANIMU.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429837 very nice op trying to emulate that weeb shit

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 21:10:35 2018 No.3430406 File: 147 KB, 999x504, 54d7943f39.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430389 in my opinion your facial features are too stylized for such realistic head shapes, did it up in paint to show you what I mean

Anonymous Tue May 15 21:16:07 2018 No.3430411

>>3430203
well i don't have the time right now to overpaint. But here is a james gurney article talking about light fall off. http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.be/2010/06/fall-off.html

anyways just google ligth fall off and look up art to see how people translate that in their paintings

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 21:16:15 2018 No.3430412 >>3430389 You do realize we have at least 2 threads for this kind of stuff, right?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 21:26:01 2018 No.3430422 File: 128 KB, 634x900, mermay gggghhh 02.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this as ugly as I think?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 21:30:07 2018 No.3430426 File: 488 KB, 1367x745, b96b62e71e.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] clothes are weird but fun

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:14:54 2018 No.3430450 >>3430422 i think it'll be fine once you clean it up

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:18:15 2018 No.3430452 File: 3.70 MB, 2747x2863, 20180515_221412.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I've gotten into a bad habit of ripping any watercolor to shreds I deem awful. I wish I didn't because lookimg back some of them were alright.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:33:16 2018 No.3430464 File: 72 KB, 1080x1350, tumblr_p8ir563XFc1x07t8lo1_1280.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew my friend's OC. Crits? They would be really useful!

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:39:56 2018 No.3430471 File: 61 KB, 563x800, Untled-3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] whats wrong with these legs? redline?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:41:07 2018 No.3430474 >>3430422 I gotta say that I liked it a lot better as a sketch- your line art was super nice. Maybe work on a different way of colouring which doesn't sacrifice your lines? The rendering here just really doesn't do you any favours

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:46:43 2018 No.3430475 File: 449 KB, 1000x2102, OAH-Conscript_WEB2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430471 Right hip might be a bit pointy, not bad so far though.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 22:47:16 2018 No.3430477 >>3430452 Ouch dude.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 23:42:13 2018 No.3430545 File: 300 KB, 1000x1000, moai.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue May 15 23:48:13 2018 No.3430549 >>3430471 in what dimension has her left calf vanished into?

Anonymous Tue May 15 23:52:04 2018 No.3430553

>>3430464
it's very stylized and looks good, my issues are minor, like in the case of the hair that directly touches the eyebrow and the eye which I think is closed. The shapes mix together and it's less clear what's going on. The line for the abs is suggesting a shape that looks out of place, the right hand appears to be slightly larger than the left, and the line for the ear looks flipped, but that's about it. Good job.

>>3430471
you're starting the right thing too high, it'd be hidden behind the left thigh in this perspective, which seems a tad too long.

>>3430426
I'd try to use more reference at this point. The folds in some of the clothes are suggesting materials that don't fit with the shapes. As a note for 3, the shape of the shirt wouldn't require stiches in those positions, and their length also suggests that they're not necessary.

>>	NoseBro Tue May 15 23:57:38 2018 No.3430562 >>3430406 >>3430389 blog for both of you please and thank you.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:07:11 2018 No.3430572 File: 3.64 MB, 2087x1530, insectppl.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] what do you think of this composition and character design?

Anonymous Wed May 16 00:15:10 2018 No.3430579
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Just started out and still very amateur so pls no bully. Wanted to know what I could improve on with this piece. Have been dabbling with droids and this piece is actually influenced by an obscure boss who goes by Lucifer in the JRPG Wild Arms

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:18:31 2018 No.3430584 >>3430579 you should check out the beginner's thread >>3430572 a dutch angle should be used when appropriate, the image is too tilted. aliens on the right look neat, one on the left looks disproportionate in comparison

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:28:28 2018 No.3430593 File: 577 KB, 1680x1680, kaitou kid.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Working on this atm. Does the lighting look right enough? It's not exactly my forte.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:34:39 2018 No.3430601 >>3430579 Where's the light coming from?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:35:44 2018 No.3430604 File: 299 KB, 2195x2356, ellen study.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429859 I think you might need some harder edges >>3430475 Really cool but the feet look really tiny to me. I might just be dumb, though.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:43:28 2018 No.3430618 File: 43 KB, 641x432, kys u're self.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429837

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 00:46:36 2018 No.3430620 >>3430553 >you're starting the right thing too high, it'd be hidden behind the left thigh in this perspective, which seems a tad too long. redline pls?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 01:20:19 2018 No.3430654 File: 95 KB, 563x800, 4chan legs.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430620 I guess something like this? I'm tired but it looks a bit more correct.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 01:21:22 2018 No.3430657 >>3430654 just realized I messed up her right ankle and foot a bit but whatever, you get it, right?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 01:24:47 2018 No.3430660 File: 95 KB, 563x800, 4chan legs 2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430657

>>	NoseBro Wed May 16 01:31:25 2018 No.3430666 File: 718 KB, 1545x1264, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430389 >>3430406 give me your fucking blogs faggots

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 01:41:45 2018 No.3430677 >>3430666 I'll remember to let you know when I make one nice satanic trips

>>	NoseFeratu Wed May 16 01:58:27 2018 No.3430693 >>3430677 All according to gods plan, agent 77.

Anonymous Wed May 16 02:06:05 2018 No.3430698

>>3430022
>>3430040
1. Learn basic anatomy even if you'd attach surreal bodyparts

2. If you get an idea you want to share do value composition thumbnails first so you can get your lighting scheme right. No one is going to be interested in 2D cutout soup can head, you need to portray him in environment of interest.

If it's going to be surreal "I got Andy Warhol fetish" piece for art school, go crazy with background colors and do some weird stuff structures and cages and shit check out Francis Bacon and Lucian Freud. If you want to portray him as a conceptual character in a drawing, go back to do some thumbnails to get idea where he belongs.

Anonymous Wed May 16 02:16:02 2018 No.3430709
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>>3430471
I tried fixing it on MS paint. I drew see through first (remnants of pink lines visible still) and noticed that the knee pit (where calf and thigh connect) in her left leg cannot fit the right leg underneath. It really helped to draw both the contour of the top and bottom leg, and then the tubular form of lower leg to see the mistake. I moved her bottom leg closer to her butt and erased the right hip that shows behind her top leg.

After I mirror flipped it didn't pop out as much. Feel free to correct as I might be lost, I'm not too anatomy guru. Line work provided by MS Paint and old HP ball mouse at work.

>>	NoseFeratu Wed May 16 02:21:48 2018 No.3430713 >>3430709 nigga didnt you reference the top? just reference the bottom part.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 03:36:05 2018 No.3430754 File: 106 KB, 444x527, nasty drawpile.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I'm tired and I haven't used Drawpile in years

Anonymous Wed May 16 03:41:27 2018 No.3430760

>>3430754
>Also do you think I'd be worth commissioning?
>I'm kind of slowly coming back to drawing again and I'm feeling more confident than I used to be
>But I've gotten only a small small handful of people say they were interested?
>I want honest opinions though, not sugar coated mutual/friend patting

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 04:14:45 2018 No.3430789 >>3430666 holy shit dude you made it 1000 times better i only have my instagram https://www.instagram.com/chavo89guerrero/

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 05:18:52 2018 No.3430818 >>3429859 The nostril looks abnormally small and the planes of the face are sort of ambigous which gives a really flat face.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 05:33:46 2018 No.3430828 >>3430545 lovley color and form <3

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 05:36:44 2018 No.3430830 >>3430593 You could make the forms pop in the shadow with some soft ambient light.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 11:09:18 2018 No.3431091 >>3430660 yeah that does look better, thanks

Anonymous Wed May 16 11:38:39 2018 No.3431133
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>>3429859
>>3430818
Here is a more indept crit. Some more occoluded shadows makes it less flat Also the planes in generall need to be indicated more and in the right way. I like the eyes tho you did a real good job on them.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 11:47:33 2018 No.3431148 File: 631 KB, 1680x1680, 123321.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430830 >>3430830 I also lmade it more light. To make the face a bit more readable.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 12:27:26 2018 No.3431195 File: 177 KB, 678x932, ss81056013_65308686_356_.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	NoseBro Wed May 16 12:46:30 2018 No.3431211 >>3430789 nigga make yourself an art blog where you dont have to dox yourself. come on.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 12:47:02 2018 No.3431214 >>3431148 I'll give it a try, thanks.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 12:51:22 2018 No.3431221 >>3429840 it would be cool if u made the gun flare a second lightsorce to emphasis the the zombie killer

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 13:24:54 2018 No.3431259 File: 344 KB, 1100x549, 1526404347386.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431221 >>3429840 Also maybe consider making the sky darker. Makes the character pop more.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 13:47:41 2018 No.3431308 File: 471 KB, 834x834, shitty bit.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i really hate this it's not meant to be anything so rip it to shreds

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 14:46:23 2018 No.3431377 >>3431308 look up actual skull musculature and put more effort into the hair next time. And the left side eye seems a bit wide set, maybe, I'm not sure. The rest is goochy.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 14:47:16 2018 No.3431378 File: 291 KB, 541x1000, Material study.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 15:23:48 2018 No.3431428 File: 142 KB, 756x980, carta ja-01.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Some designs I'm doing for a friend

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 15:24:28 2018 No.3431431 File: 206 KB, 1000x735, senyor alegre tallant abre.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431428

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 16:35:16 2018 No.3431513 File: 157 KB, 1447x2039, IMG_20180516_213140.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Finished this a couple hours back after playing some Shantae. Could use some critique.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 16:38:37 2018 No.3431515 File: 524 KB, 975x650, cutiepie fixed hand.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i've just been practicing digital art over the past couple days

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 16:39:13 2018 No.3431516 File: 39 KB, 480x720, _4mkP8P3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431515

Anonymous Wed May 16 17:02:47 2018 No.3431544
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>>3430584
Reduced the angle and it looks far much better now thanks! i wanted to give the impression that the viewer just walked in so i thought an angle might do that. and the guy on the left is meant to be a different type that is larger

Anonymous Wed May 16 17:17:44 2018 No.3431569

>>3431544
Love the character designs and colors, and the lighting/contrast. Only thing I think is there should be something filling the space above them, a chandelier or a waiter-drone or something, it feels rather empty. Maybe something in the top left, another sign on the wall... That or crop it a bit from the top down.

Other than that, lookin good, I can't to see it when it's finished.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 17:43:36 2018 No.3431600 File: 120 KB, 800x600, IMG_7552.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] First sketch in years, considering taking it up again as a hobby. I'd love to hear people's thoughts

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 17:59:13 2018 No.3431616 File: 507 KB, 1334x584, BF169557-755C-48B2-8063-F66E0EAB73AA.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 18:30:35 2018 No.3431644 File: 49 KB, 400x400, panel-1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Come draw with me my dudes - www.striptogether.co

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 18:45:57 2018 No.3431656 >>3431513 Go to the beginners thread

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 18:48:33 2018 No.3431660 File: 1.07 MB, 1680x1680, kaitou kid 8.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431148 I made it subtler but it's there

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 18:52:32 2018 No.3431668 >>3431656 Hardy har har.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:00:02 2018 No.3431680 >>3431656 Actually assuming you aren't being sarcastic I'll give it a shot. Still learning the fundamentals.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:00:52 2018 No.3431683 File: 334 KB, 800x797, nuestra oficina 02.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431431 Something something more

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:04:30 2018 No.3431688 >>3429840 Goro fujita fan? You could push the composition a bit more so it makes a bigger arc with the smoke and zombies from the bg maybe. But it's good.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:33:28 2018 No.3431726 >>3431133 that's a really good nose, anon, how many years have you been painting?

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:52:09 2018 No.3431751 File: 3.34 MB, 2793x3214, os2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429837 hey thats my painting! im honored heres my new one

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:57:37 2018 No.3431764 File: 308 KB, 700x806, os2small.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429837 hey thats my painting! im honored heres one i just painted a few days ago.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 19:59:30 2018 No.3431769 >>3431764 BEADY (but that is a great painting)

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 20:00:24 2018 No.3431771 >>3431769 thanks

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 20:16:33 2018 No.3431792 File: 112 KB, 943x1334, 0851CC6B-1A9F-4C41-9CFF-3DC3D5019904.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to stylize the crap out of this

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 21:33:00 2018 No.3431925 File: 616 KB, 2000x1566, Human Anatomy Study 17-05-18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Morning studies

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 21:52:42 2018 No.3431949 File: 794 KB, 4960x2268, 0095.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] more clothes and Parsee

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 22:43:04 2018 No.3432006 File: 1.49 MB, 2448x3059, IMG_1088.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Drew someone

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 22:48:57 2018 No.3432016 File: 120 KB, 712x1017, bluut.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] should i go for more painterly strokes and hard edges or softer blending with hard edges on contours. im finding it difficult to decide and my work i think os suffering for it

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 22:59:03 2018 No.3432029 >>3431792 yikes

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 23:47:59 2018 No.3432095 File: 233 KB, 904x961, asherahesithioth.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pls give me some points on making her a little more interesting before I paint

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 23:53:07 2018 No.3432101 >>3432006 it looks like she has a very abnormally low and flat nose bridge.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 23:58:58 2018 No.3432118 >>3431195 I really really like the top left corner, if you did landscapes in that style with small bits of color (gouache,wc,markers) it would look phenomenal, my dude

>>	Anonymous Wed May 16 23:59:59 2018 No.3432120 >>3432101 she did. she had a very uniquely aesthetic nose that her large glasses complimented, and large eyes.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 00:43:20 2018 No.3432201 File: 343 KB, 1000x832, Sea Dog Creatures 17-05-18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Idk

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 01:23:15 2018 No.3432261 >>3431660 Nice! ^^

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 01:26:42 2018 No.3432268 >>3431726 Thank you : ) I've painted for about 3 to 4 years.

Anonymous Thu May 17 02:09:24 2018 No.3432313

>>3432095
Well the most important thing to create interest is to have a story and personality to your character.. Your obviously have some of that in you pose: like a comanding stern/determined woman. So depedning on what you are going for you could exaggerated those features. Pic related for example, more clearly stern, comanding and stuff.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 02:10:44 2018 No.3432315 File: 354 KB, 1756x961, 1526528879990.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432313 Forgot the pic.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 02:37:14 2018 No.3432333 >>3432268 thats pretty bad considering how long youve painted then

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 02:40:21 2018 No.3432336 >>3432333 Eyeroll

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 03:00:36 2018 No.3432346 File: 237 KB, 1000x1000, boyscout2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3431792 nice, really digging this

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 04:34:10 2018 No.3432426 >>3432333 Its just a quick overpaint i did lol

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 04:39:57 2018 No.3432433 >>3432426 cute excuse

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 04:51:30 2018 No.3432437 >>3432433 I know I suck :,C

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 06:18:42 2018 No.3432487 File: 785 KB, 1300x1300, diver1300..jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i still have to add bubbles and sea stuff.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 09:14:14 2018 No.3432627 >>3431600 It's shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 09:16:44 2018 No.3432630 File: 86 KB, 2526x1405, 2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >prrrrrrrr

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 09:36:05 2018 No.3432646 File: 262 KB, 737x900, mermay gggghhh 03.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3430474 You're right. I have to believe more in my linework

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 10:02:32 2018 No.3432679 >>3432118 What the fuck you gonna do in a situation?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 10:10:22 2018 No.3432686 File: 90 KB, 320x320, 1514569387586.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432630 furry spotted

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 10:11:39 2018 No.3432688 >>3432118 I am not your dude.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 10:13:26 2018 No.3432691 >>3432688 just be happy somebody gave you the time of day you fucking faggot

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 10:25:01 2018 No.3432708 File: 223 KB, 1024x791, 28468411880_780197f126_b.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432691

Anonymous Thu May 17 11:05:47 2018 No.3432760

>>3432118
Thank you for your complimemt. It's not a great sketch but it is as the tree was shaped. I have never used gouache and i couldn't really afford to change medium from ink or oils. Pointilism maybe but I'm trying to get a tree painted in the style of Raphael or along those lines and it is not easy for me.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 11:09:40 2018 No.3432764 >>3431600 >>3432627 Agreed, it's shit, anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 11:12:11 2018 No.3432765 >>3431616 I dig the aesthetics of the city.

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>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 14:01:31 2018 No.3432947 everything in this thread is beginner. jesus christ.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 14:05:07 2018 No.3432952 File: 19 KB, 339x479, 93.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] draw since childhood

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 14:05:51 2018 No.3432956 File: 718 KB, 2560x1438, e.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] r8

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 14:11:37 2018 No.3432967 >>3432947 pyw

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 14:51:22 2018 No.3433032 File: 361 KB, 1000x541, Translucent.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Trying to get better at portraying materials, anyone got any info on getting better at translucent materials?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 15:06:45 2018 No.3433057 >>3433032 You just gotta observe the value and hue shifts carefully man. There is no other secret. Nice work tho

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 15:07:53 2018 No.3433060 >>3433032 >furry no thanks

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 15:08:17 2018 No.3433062 File: 273 KB, 1024x768, hardy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] again with the weeb shit, now using a photo reference trying to stylize it

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 15:10:04 2018 No.3433066 >>3433062 >>3424243

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 15:11:07 2018 No.3433067 File: 113 KB, 625x773, 1524839169507.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3433066 excuse me sir ill be on my way

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Thu May 17 15:57:23 2018 No.3433140 File: 279 KB, 368x562, 20180517_155514.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Will start this up again when I get back from the gym. Critiques? Suggestions to help make Katt's expression cuter and sassier?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 16:00:53 2018 No.3433145 >>3433140 bruh the legs on the right girl are too short, theres too much of a gap between the end of the leg and the top of the pelvis

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 17:12:26 2018 No.3433272 >>3433066 Fuck off retard

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 17:58:02 2018 No.3433326 >>3433140 She needs a mole

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 18:17:16 2018 No.3433339 >>3433140 LOL are you 13?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 18:37:54 2018 No.3433366 >>3431259 I like your idea. I just implimented it. I will post it again once I make more progress

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Thu May 17 19:45:47 2018 No.3433442 File: 1.11 MB, 810x1230, BoF2 Comic Cover.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Update. >>3433339 To make the contrast between the two more appealing.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 19:52:27 2018 No.3433452 File: 164 KB, 1000x777, Golden 18-05-18.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Morning warmup

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 20:18:04 2018 No.3433477 File: 1.86 MB, 1500x1147, saturation.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3433442 just a thought but how about less saturation in your colours. It's personnal taste but it's to garish for me.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 20:53:01 2018 No.3433517 File: 49 KB, 242x341, hulk.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I've literally have nothing to do all week and i'm becoming very anxious.I drew this to cheer myself up/pass the time.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 21:07:42 2018 No.3433529 >>3433517 I see the thick and thin lines. Do you really understand how and why to use thick/thin lines? I should know more than I do.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 21:15:11 2018 No.3433534 File: 1.24 MB, 4961x3508, 0096.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 21:44:06 2018 No.3433562 >>3433452 your style is very charming.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 21:51:58 2018 No.3433571 File: 1.68 MB, 2480x3508, mermaid.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432346 thanks! :) >>3431792 An update for this one

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 22:21:44 2018 No.3433602 >>3433529 thick lines where shadows would appear(cast/occlusion). Thinner lines towards the lightsource. When something overlaps I try to make the line slightly darker too.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 22:25:45 2018 No.3433607 >>3432947 as annoying as he is, our very own shit jung gi is not that bad.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 23:11:07 2018 No.3433652 File: 194 KB, 1519x2000, hijab.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432487 >>3432201 Blogs?

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 23:24:17 2018 No.3433664 >>3429967 I really like it. What ever you did to create the galaxy effect in the purple areas is really doing it for me.

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 23:26:38 2018 No.3433667 I can't decide on what to draw

>>	Anonymous Thu May 17 23:42:03 2018 No.3433688 >>3433652 https://naked-oats.tumblr.com/

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 01:41:39 2018 No.3433797 >>3430207 gj brian

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 01:49:14 2018 No.3433801 >>3433477 i second this. its headache inducing and unpleasant to look at after 30+ seconds

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 02:53:51 2018 No.3433835 File: 456 KB, 1197x555, 1C60D6EF-2833-4377-9712-41B1AC59F461.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3432765 Thank you

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 02:55:44 2018 No.3433837 File: 128 KB, 598x1024, 6841F3D0-F6D7-4B1D-A0A9-A837030B1ADE.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I can’t tell what tier i’m in, i’ve been drawing for 10 years now

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 03:28:13 2018 No.3433862 File: 97 KB, 723x960, 5gHt0haZt-k.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3433664 Thanks m8. >What ever you did Just spammed small hard round brush.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 04:04:55 2018 No.3433885 File: 552 KB, 1500x1541, library duo.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 04:13:43 2018 No.3433891 >>3433885 This knight is cool as hell. He needs a cooler weapon imo. Still real cool either way.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 05:25:34 2018 No.3433929 File: 705 KB, 1436x1436, IMG_20180508_003103_028.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I don't draw on paper much.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 08:11:23 2018 No.3434015 File: 131 KB, 2378x1481, 424.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Fri May 18 09:42:40 2018 No.3434088
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So, /ic/. I just finished this a while ago.

I've been using AI (yes) and K+M (yes). I would like some critique. Like, there's a layer for basic lineart, basic colors, shadow over color, and blur. Anything else I should work with?

This is the second digital drawing I've done in a while,

Anonymous Fri May 18 11:50:59 2018 No.3434201

>>3433837
you've got good rendering skills but poor flow and posture, same prob with the merc wip. Work on dynamism and figure drawings. Definitely anatomy too (clock that right hand doing the under grip). Linearts good tho. I'd say you fit in fine here, but it would help greatly to do a BUNCH of anatomy fundies.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 11:59:09 2018 No.3434213 >>3434088 is she leaking cum, anon? also you used AI? wha?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 12:41:30 2018 No.3434247 >>3434213 maybe yes it is the only software I know how to use atm

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 14:16:53 2018 No.3434413 >>3434088 Why are her tits blushing.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 14:27:37 2018 No.3434426 >>3434247 oh I thought you meant you had an artificial intelligence drawing for you, kek I havent heard of that software, still not sure what it is.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 15:22:55 2018 No.3434506 File: 229 KB, 2156x1547, poses.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] ravioli ravioli practiseioni

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 15:30:54 2018 No.3434514 the colors seem way too bright, looks weird

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Fri May 18 15:50:55 2018 No.3434531 File: 534 KB, 1230x810, Belmox.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Critiques?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 16:33:03 2018 No.3434581 >>3434413 Any part of your body can blush, you see? >>3434426 >artificial intelligence kek It's Adobe Illustrator, anon.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 16:37:05 2018 No.3434589 >>3434506 Nice. >>3434531 Something about this goblin makes me feel very intimidated. I guess it is just the happy face. It looks good. Nothing I can really add.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 21:02:46 2018 No.3434850 File: 1.21 MB, 1210x942, asdf1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] So drew some rocks, any tips on finishing this sort of stuff off? Like having it look 'done' or complete at a smaller resolution?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 21:06:32 2018 No.3434853 >>3434850 probably could use a bit more extremis in the values, colors are nice though

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 21:56:54 2018 No.3434902 File: 141 KB, 570x973, Untitled-3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] critiqueth

Anonymous Fri May 18 22:10:13 2018 No.3434916

>>3434902
very good. there's a few inaccuracies and you perhaps should have drawn more tendons, i think there's also like a conceptual error you're making, thinking about what muscles actually do. but it's sort of hard to explain, so i'll leave it out, would just be confusing.

one thing though, if you do another one, perhaps it'd be more useful to indicate the volumes than the striations. it's more important that you have a clear idea of the actual 3d mass of the muscles than just reminding yourself they have lines on 'em

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 22:15:04 2018 No.3434919 >>3434916 thanks, noted!.. how would i indicate volume though?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 22:24:16 2018 No.3434924 File: 237 KB, 800x800, Male_reproductive_organs_2[1].jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3434919 just a bit of shading, or or cross contours

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 22:48:32 2018 No.3434934 File: 207 KB, 1500x1099, beached.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any tips on where I can go with this? Feeling kind of stumped.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 22:51:23 2018 No.3434936 >>3434934 it's very grey, needs some verticality

Anonymous Fri May 18 22:52:31 2018 No.3434938

>>3434902
>>3434916
This isn't 'very good'. It's sub-par. Your muscles have no form and they're all mostly mis-shapen I noticed you didn't even bother to do some of them, like on the forearms. This doesn't even look like you tried hard. This looks like you put in an hour of work and then went online for validation.

Not trying to be mean anon but you should take your studies more seriously and set higher standards for yourself.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 22:53:38 2018 No.3434941 File: 63 KB, 720x960, bringmethanos.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how do I draw angry gnashing faces without looking too much like Don Bluth?

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 23:06:17 2018 No.3434950 File: 152 KB, 1000x733, beached.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3434936 Tried to bump up the colors and the contrast. What exactly do you mean by verticality?

Anonymous Fri May 18 23:26:36 2018 No.3434962 [DELETED]

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>>3434938
>This looks like you put in an hour of work and then went online for validation.
that's exactly what i did anon, dayum, read me like a book.

it's only my first try though and I'm bad at anatomy, so i'll get better the more i do these. i was just looking for critique because I wasn't sure about some muscles (especially around the pits, the side of her leg, and the obliques).

Here's the photo I used. she's very skinny so I had mostly no indications of muscles, had to recall what goes where from memory.

Anonymous Fri May 18 23:29:27 2018 No.3434965

>>3434950
looks a lot better.

verticality like a strong vertical element to give the picture more scope, but to be honest just brightening it up basically fixed it, there's more contrast between the foreground and the background now so you don't need anything extra to give it a sense of space.

Anonymous Fri May 18 23:33:57 2018 No.3434968
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>>3434938
>This looks like you put in an hour of work and then went online for validation.
that's exactly what i did anon, dayum, read me like a book.

it's only my first try though and I'm bad at anatomy, so i'll get better the more i do these. i was just looking for critique because I wasn't sure about some muscles, especially around the pits, the side of her leg, and the obliques.

Here's the photos I used. she's very skinny so I had almost no indications of muscles and had to recall what goes where.

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 23:43:26 2018 No.3434975 >>3434968 if it makes you feel better i took all that into account when i said it was 'very good' lol big boobs for being so thin eh

>>	Anonymous Fri May 18 23:50:43 2018 No.3434980 >>3434924 Kek

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:16:22 2018 No.3434996 File: 326 KB, 1488x916, kkkkk.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:20:50 2018 No.3435000 File: 154 KB, 1488x916, kkkkk.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:37:44 2018 No.3435013 File: 2.40 MB, 1406x1080, 20180518_213654.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What did I do wrong?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:39:00 2018 No.3435015 >>3435013 What did you fix from the previous iteration? I don't even remember exactly what it looked like except that it was worse.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:44:36 2018 No.3435016 >>3434201 >poor flow and posture There's nothing "poor" in that drawing you dumb crab.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 00:49:43 2018 No.3435020 >>3435016 lol you know this is /ic/ right and this is a draw thread? and they guy posted it so people would tell him about any problems his drawing might have, right? you do know that? you know that your the crab? you do? oh

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 01:10:25 2018 No.3435034 >>3435013 the lighting makes no sense whatsoever. it's night, and the only light is from candles and a far off light house? she wouldn't be glowing all over with light like that.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 01:16:20 2018 No.3435040 >>3435034 So the lighting. I'm sorry. It's a hobby for me. Maybe I should hit the books. Any idea on how to fix it?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 01:18:23 2018 No.3435044 >>3435015 I tried to have the light come from the inside of the room. Kinda well lit but with candles. Many candles. Any idea how to fix it?

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Sat May 19 01:18:38 2018 No.3435045 File: 1.18 MB, 810x1230, 1526688452808.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3433477 As so?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 04:25:29 2018 No.3435175 >>3434950 So since the water surface on the left and right side have so different coulours, I guess the right half is completely in shadow and the sun is really low on the left. This isnt reflected on the characters and the sloped debris though.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 07:07:02 2018 No.3435272 >>3434506 head size seems to vary

>>	JW Sat May 19 08:23:06 2018 No.3435322 >>3435272 oh yeah, didnt notice that before.thx.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 08:28:07 2018 No.3435329 >>3435045 it's still a bit to saturated for my taste. But it's much better then before. If you like it then that's good enough for me

JW Sat May 19 11:02:05 2018 No.3435491
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>>3435045
the red is too eye catching and putting it on something like belt isnt a good choice. desaturating the bg allows you to have satured characters.

you could aslo paint over all the inside black lines like you did on faces and add more hue shifts here and there.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 11:08:12 2018 No.3435502 File: 79 KB, 596x966, comish.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] commission I'm almost done with. Don't really know how i'm going to color the face to match the armor though.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 11:10:57 2018 No.3435510 File: 1.10 MB, 1536x864, Babel_Broken_Moon.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fairly rough, any ideas how to make this more interesting?

Anonymous Sat May 19 11:40:07 2018 No.3435535
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>>3435175
Thank you, I tried to better define the light source and I think it helped. Hard to tell though, I've been staring at this for so long. Anything glaringly wrong before I got to polish it up?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 11:46:48 2018 No.3435541 >>3435510 Use an actual circle tool to draw the moon next time.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 12:01:37 2018 No.3435555 File: 147 KB, 870x558, darkness reading 50 shades of grey request.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 17:17:12 2018 No.3435918 >>3435013 Pose too stiff, boobs too small.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 18:09:42 2018 No.3435981 File: 786 KB, 2208x1712, bnh midnight y.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] learning to color

Anonymous Sat May 19 18:18:22 2018 No.3435987

>>3435535
Your values need serious help. What's the focal point of the drawing? Your values don't lead the eye anywhere, the whole thing is flat, except the lower righthand corner, which leads the eye out of the composition, and the foremost figure has the same values as the background, which flattens the whole piece and competes for the focal point with the foreground figure. You've created a vertical line through the composition, too, with the drawing, and it's on a grid, which isn't very visually exciting or interesting, and leads the eye out of the drawing.

I get that you're trying for a Mobius type style, but he was a master, almost genius level at focal point and values, and his work was incredibly subtle and planned out - and he was a master at dynamic angles, not tacked-to-a-grid like this. Put a little more thought into focal point, angles, composition, and especially value. All of those combined work to make a good drawing. There are small inconsistencies with your lighting, such as the mask on the main figure, most of it should be in shadow per your lighting, but that's minor compared to the larger issues you have.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 18:27:35 2018 No.3435993 File: 243 KB, 1000x467, virtualpleinairsmall.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Made a virtual plein air thingy

Anonymous Sat May 19 18:29:37 2018 No.3435998

>>3430471
You're drawing legs with no regard for the actual form, contour, and aethetics, and most likley no knowledge of the structure and anatomy of them.

A figure is several things - form, volume, structure, lighting, texture, and contour. As an artist you choose which of these to incorporate into a drawing, to reproduce the figure.
Redlining is pretty pointless without your reference. The best advice is simply this - look at what you're drawing, and learn to translate that into a drawing that pleases the eye, not just copies it. Try to learn to see contours as s curves, that are interesting and fun to draw. Learn to see something interesting in the pose to show people, have a reason for the drawing to exist. Right now all you're doing is tracing (badly) porn, and there's no point to it, other than to indulge your hormones. Put as much attention to learning how legs work as you have breasts.

Anonymous Sat May 19 18:35:06 2018 No.3436007

>>3433032
Translucent materials reflect their environment, and there's a certain amount of refraction, too, so you'll have to either get that candle and see how it interacts with it's environment, or fake it as best you can. You'll have the reds and greys of the stuffed toy reflecting and refracting, and the light source, and since it's clear, and has no base color, it will be mostly refractions and reflected light, along with blacks, greys and white in the facets.

I'll be honest, this would be tough even for a seasoned pro.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 18:50:01 2018 No.3436026 File: 527 KB, 3000x3000, 001_funny_face_001.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Here is my work

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 18:54:40 2018 No.3436029 File: 156 KB, 800x994, IMG_20180519_195641.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Studies of the day. I think they turned out ok, thankfully.

>>	Aile Sat May 19 19:48:51 2018 No.3436100 File: 394 KB, 2048x1001, 37D70EF4-26AD-466C-952B-0DFF88A1996C.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Rate

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 20:05:35 2018 No.3436135 File: 122 KB, 640x935, IMG_20180519_210828.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3436029 >skipped leg day

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 20:17:22 2018 No.3436156 File: 169 KB, 1200x1600, adenat outfits.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] some sketches so far

Anonymous Sat May 19 20:31:30 2018 No.3436176
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>>3435987
Thanks so much for all the critique man, I really really appreciate it. I definitely need to do a ton more value studies. I tried to fix it up a little more and I attempted to draw the eye more to the figure in front. It looks a little better to me but idk, I've been staring at it so long again. I probably should call it done at this point, I think I'm just turd polishing, I need to be much more aware of the composition next time before I start rendering.

Would you mind explaining how I've created a vertical line through the composition and how it's on a grid? I'm not sure I get what you're saying there. Thanks!

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 20:33:20 2018 No.3436177 File: 538 KB, 1000x733, beached small.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3436176 Whoops forgot to size down the file, this one is better

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 21:09:10 2018 No.3436213 >>3435981 learn to draw too while you're at it

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 21:11:02 2018 No.3436214 File: 2.66 MB, 3508x2258, boxing upper 2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this too rough (or awful) for a gesture study? I set myself a 30-minute limit because I wanted to get more done in less time.

Anonymous Sat May 19 21:13:17 2018 No.3436218
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>>3430471
Your perspective is off, and you're not showing weight properly.

if what she's sitting on is hiding the back of her right thigh, then it should hide anything below that line, but her left hip is in front.

Also, having one leg under the other doesn't mean you have to literally draw them one thigh appart and completely under. Skin, fat and muscle all compress on another. with perspective, the right leg is now in front of the other, not only under. Also, anatomy has to be consistent, just because it's hidden doesn't mean it's not there.

Hope this helped.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 21:49:42 2018 No.3436260 >>3436218 thank you very helpful!

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 21:52:37 2018 No.3436263 >>3436214 Where's the gesture study, exactly?

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 22:02:18 2018 No.3436279 >>3436263 is that not the right name? what would it be called? I wanted to study the image of someone throwing an uppercut realistically so I found something similar to what I was looking for

Anonymous Sat May 19 22:02:53 2018 No.3436280

>>3435998
>Redlining is pretty pointless without your reference. The best advice is simply this - look at what you're drawing, and learn to translate that into a drawing that pleases the eye, not just copies it.
>Right now all you're doing is tracing (badly) porn, and there's no point to it, other than to indulge your hormones.
lol you got many things wrong: i did not use a reference, i did not trace porn, and i'm not a male indulging my hormones.

>>3436218
thank you, very helpful!

Anonymous Sat May 19 22:23:50 2018 No.3436293

>>3435998
why are people even allowed to post stupid shit like this?

What do you mean no regard for the form or contour? Aesthetics only apply to a style and this is clearly a sketch. What do you mean "most likely" no knowledge of anatomy? Is it wrong or not? Why do you think redlining is pointless without a reference, esp if you're considering anatomy you shouldn't even need a ref.

tldr stop talking out of your ass and maybe less people would hate you both here and irl

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 22:31:57 2018 No.3436301 File: 134 KB, 700x700, digital.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3436135 Aaand a digital little study. I'm done for the day.

>>	Anonymous Sat May 19 23:12:35 2018 No.3436339 >>3434531 the drawing itself is boring.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 00:04:10 2018 No.3436393 >>3436301 i was wondering what was most off about this, and it's definitely the deltoids. they're tiny, while the hand is the size of his face.

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Sun May 20 00:55:17 2018 No.3436441 File: 1.32 MB, 810x1230, BoF2_Comic_Cover.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Update

Anonymous Sun May 20 02:01:52 2018 No.3436491
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>>3435016
>>3434201
>>3435020
All input is appreciated, thank you. I see the imperfections once I've had time to look at the finished drawing in detail, I do try to use references and practice as much as I can.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 08:25:46 2018 No.3436777 File: 73 KB, 231x243, mockup.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Wheee breakthroughs. throw me some crits

Anonymous Sun May 20 09:03:12 2018 No.3436805
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>>3436214
A professor once told me that if you're drawing someone jumping out of a window, you should have the gesture drawing done by the time they hit the ground. At 30min you have gone far beyond gesture. Not to say that you're study isn't excellent, but you left 'gesture' at the one minute mark.

Anonymous Sun May 20 09:13:41 2018 No.3436816
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>>3433885
>>3433891

If you're going to take design ques from smough, remember that the character himself is fucking nuts and the armor he wears is a reflection of his personality. In a world building sense, you've given armorer's the ability to create wonderful relief sculptures in the armor of a single armed man. As a suggestion, I think you should carry out the same level of personality into the weapons or other props that you're character is interacting with.

In other words, you've given a max level character a mid level weapon. Lets see how you can do putting the same sculptural elements into the axe he's holding. The axe itself looks more practical, but apparently you've crossed into assless-dress territory. If you're going hard, go hard all around.

Anonymous Sun May 20 09:50:31 2018 No.3436845
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>>3433032
Don't think about what you're drawing, just draw what you see. If you're truly doing that, nothing can go wrong.

>>3433534
Those necks look a little thin, but design wise you're visual "resting places" are in good taste.

>>3435013
You're painting is divided into a foreground and background. They don't feel like a single cohesive unit because you've painted them separately. They should feel as if they are in the same space. The contrast of warm colors in front and cool colors in back is nice, but when you mix colors with black to create darker values, you've taken any space you've created with atmospheric perspective and compressed it into the foreground. It's also making your painting look flat. Next time you paint, try using hard edges, no blending tool, and do not use black at all. Go to a %90 grey at most and do that sparingly. You might not see what i'm talking about as you read this, but it will make sense as you paint and you'll improve quickly. You've essentially polished a turd, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It shows that you're willing to carry out your entire idea to finish, which is important in painting, which is more of a 400m dash than a 100m sprint.

>>3433835
>>3431616
Break up that deco with more deco, google 'art deco frames' for some line art ideas, because your accents are great, but you need to push them a bit more.

And some general advice for most people in this thread: Stop watching anime. It's holding you back developmentally. It's nice to see people working on their contour drawing skills, but you need to expand your understanding of form and space. There's no rule that says that you have to make a painting by completing a drawing, then filling it in. Too many people here are creating paintings in such a stiff and formulaic way. I know it's because most of you learned your painting from concept artists in an attempt to emulate what you enjoy in art. I urge you instead, to learn painting from painters.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 10:00:20 2018 No.3436852 >>3436805 oh, that's interesting thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 10:16:43 2018 No.3436874 File: 62 KB, 645x729, 1525732453779.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3429837 >tfw can't tell if that's a pic of either colonel sanders, trotsky or kalinin

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 10:17:50 2018 No.3436876 >>3436805 >if you're drawing someone jumping out of a window, you should have the gesture drawing done by the time they hit the ground You sensei must have been through some shit.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 10:42:38 2018 No.3436907 File: 273 KB, 902x598, darkness reading 50 shades of grey request.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3435555

>>	Hardstones McFlintcock Sun May 20 14:44:38 2018 No.3437197 File: 1.41 MB, 810x1230, BoF2 Comic Cover.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Thank you all for helping this become a Feature on Hentai Foundry. Love you guys, no homo.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 15:52:06 2018 No.3437299 File: 670 KB, 766x1000, s9.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Something I started yesterday, looking for input design wise.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 16:01:38 2018 No.3437307 >>3437197 eh they feature anyone with low followers

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 18:24:10 2018 No.3437462 >>3435502 blog/twitter?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 18:50:49 2018 No.3437485 File: 820 KB, 2672x4000, JG3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] how do i get sharp edges

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 18:53:06 2018 No.3437488 >>3437485 Hard brush?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 18:57:12 2018 No.3437496 >>3437488 maybe i have shitty stroke technique but i almost always leave a jagged line regardless of how close or far away i zoom

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 19:09:45 2018 No.3437514 >>3437496 Because you need to edit the spacing in the brush settings to 0.

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 19:16:41 2018 No.3437518 >>3437514 thanks i had no idea that was a thing and ive been digital painting for a few years now

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 19:17:17 2018 No.3437519 File: 682 KB, 740x740, 1515816264259.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3437485 Is this fucking Smudge Tool?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 19:18:04 2018 No.3437521 >>3437519 no its just a combination of soft brushes and shit hard edges and soft eraser blending together

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 19:46:34 2018 No.3437551 >>3437514 holy fucking shit is there a difference now. thanks

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 20:01:05 2018 No.3437560 >>3436805 ... i-is your teacher ok?

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 20:57:35 2018 No.3437602 >>3437521 looks just as shitty as someone using smudge

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 21:00:15 2018 No.3437604 >>3437602 which is why i need to learn to do hard edges. thankfully an anon pointed out that i didnt have my spacing on 0 so everything looks like a cottonball cut in half

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 21:08:07 2018 No.3437611 >>3437604 Ahh, that's a classic. I really don't know why it's not defaulted at 0. It does make a huge difference

Anonymous Sun May 20 21:30:34 2018 No.3437632

>>3437462
Search for 4xis 0 on tumblr. No recent updates though because of work and my dumb laziness.

I'll create an Artstation soon though, which I'll take more seriously, just need a bit more finished content. Also it's 4xis 0 as in Axis zero not 460 damnit.

Anonymous Sun May 20 22:11:55 2018 No.3437666
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WIP here.
Smiles are very hard. Can't really tell what's giving her that smug expression. I've already lowered the eyebrows and worked her upper lip .Might giver her dimples.

I had an idea for the bg (some rocks and a swamp) but it sucks.If anyone comes up with something better let me know.Thanks

>>3437485
yeah you need to me more decisive with your strokes. Are your pencil lines good or jaggy?
try this: do a precise line drawing,then use the select tool too block in shapes.Lock the layer and render within it.
>>3437299
is this a crop? hope not. can't see much of the overall design but I'd say simplify the forehead piece and "horns"

>>3430545
this could be you stylist choice but i'd say the colors are muddy(unsaturated),edges are too soft in some areas (look at how the clouds edges are the same as the statues,which are closer and are made of a solid material). Values are also too in the middle,it would be nice to see a full range of tones.

>>3432691
this

>>3430471
perspective and structure

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 22:15:40 2018 No.3437668 >>3437666 Her eyes. They should be pushed up a bit because that's what smiling does and she shouldn't be looking so apathetic. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smile#Duchenne_smile

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 22:32:56 2018 No.3437677 >>3437666 fix the ayy lmao skull shape

>>	Anonymous Sun May 20 23:18:17 2018 No.3437722 File: 74 KB, 480x758, IMG_20180521_002115.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is she stiff?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 01:41:50 2018 No.3437811 File: 1.17 MB, 2000x2000, ass.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How's this looking? I was lazy and didn't look up any references, so it's probably a bit off anatomically. It's a WIP

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 01:45:26 2018 No.3437815 File: 654 KB, 1246x1362, ass.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How's this looking? I was lazy and didn't look up any references, so it's probably a bit off anatomically >sorry the first post was so big >resized the image

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 01:47:15 2018 No.3437820 File: 470 KB, 981x1085, ass.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] How's this looking? I was lazy and didn't look up any references, so it's probably a bit off anatomically >sorry the first post was so big >resized the image

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 04:13:17 2018 No.3437920 File: 407 KB, 500x668, gena headshot.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] idk how to feel about this. my art only looks decent with a fuck ton of gradients over top.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 05:13:24 2018 No.3437982 >>3437632 oh, actually, i already follow you lol.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 06:07:37 2018 No.3438019 >>3435993 I really like it

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 06:21:09 2018 No.3438034 File: 239 KB, 1000x1326, P_20180521_120929_vHDR_On_4_1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Watchu think

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 06:22:50 2018 No.3438035 >>3437820 More than a bit. But you're drawing cartoons, so chill on that. That being said, I'd look to making the shape/silhouette more interesting.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 06:35:17 2018 No.3438044 File: 372 KB, 1300x793, Untitled-1456456.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon May 21 06:38:13 2018 No.3438051

>>3438035
You're right.. It does seem a bit bland. I've really only sketched the face though, so here's hoping I can pump it up with the upper torso and hair

>more than a bit
>so chill on that
Thanks anon. I figure I'd do some proper anatomy practice later to make up for it... But I just went for it because I had an art itch to scratch
>been fun too

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 07:07:17 2018 No.3438086 >>3437982 heh, I can do color too man.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 08:30:53 2018 No.3438176 >>3437920 stop using gradients and effects until it looks good alone

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 09:04:00 2018 No.3438221 >>3432646 so much better

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 09:35:01 2018 No.3438259 >>3437820 I dig it. share blog

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 09:40:11 2018 No.3438265 >>3433452 Nice

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 11:00:28 2018 No.3438340 File: 1.34 MB, 1000x1000, May21-1.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] just a dirty sketch layer and some basic colors so far, but destroy me.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 13:12:09 2018 No.3438471 File: 1.67 MB, 1913x1077, unknown (64).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Background for animation i'm making.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 17:27:16 2018 No.3438723 File: 32 KB, 425x567, image.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] tried gridding, everything looks off, and she looks cross eyed, i dont know what to do

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 17:34:51 2018 No.3438733 >>3438340 the odyssey?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 17:36:00 2018 No.3438736 >>3438723 looks fine, i think you're beating yourself up over nothing. her eyes don't look crossed and although the rest of the image is a bit wobbly here and there it's not enough to try and correct.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 18:22:14 2018 No.3438786 >>3438733 eh, it's just something that popped into my mind, but i guess that works.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 18:30:00 2018 No.3438795 File: 196 KB, 998x1000, IMG_4265.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon May 21 19:32:27 2018 No.3438918
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fuck i hate this.

I'm doing this comission around the topic of "music around the world" and I need to illustrate that in an picture. The only thing I could come across aside from stereotipical bullshit was this, but the more I think about it the more I realise the little sense It has.
Please can I get some critical feedback on it?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 20:15:00 2018 No.3438990 File: 71 KB, 670x878, smug cunt part 2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3437668 >>3437677 big tanks to bout of you,this looks less retarded, I think.

Anonymous Mon May 21 20:22:54 2018 No.3439001
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>>3438723
I see a lot of "instagram painters" doing this.
yeah that's not how you render an image.I can tell you are not thinking about structure,just eyeballing shit.

you need to build everything progressively

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 21:17:21 2018 No.3439053 >>3438918 swap their instruments

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 22:59:49 2018 No.3439147 >>3439053 or flip the image

>>	Anonymous Mon May 21 23:11:26 2018 No.3439154 File: 524 KB, 1124x906, 21 a scav redo 4 for ic.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Man, I see big errors. At least I can see them.

Anonymous Mon May 21 23:17:28 2018 No.3439158

>>3439001
tons of artists don't actually do that, lots of them just do finished sections and do like a pass at the end to unify them. not the guy you're critting or anything i just think it's interesting. i think it's because people work from photos so often now you don't need to be as careful, because you already have the finished picture.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 00:24:36 2018 No.3439224 >>3438259 Hey anon, thanks! I'm on a hiatus right now, but I typically use Instagram and Twitter >Twitter: SGT_Babyhands >Instagram: SGT.Babyhands >tumblr eventually

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 00:26:46 2018 No.3439230 >>3438723 Her right pupil needs to be moved just a hair to the right. This is why you think she is crossed eyed. >but there are people out there that are crosseyed anon >its not a big deal

>>	NoseBro Tue May 22 12:17:00 2018 No.3439815 >>3439154 nice. Blog?

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 16:26:50 2018 No.3440121 File: 295 KB, 1000x1000, bechakich painting sketch.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hoping to get some feedback on this thing before diving into painting it

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 16:37:30 2018 No.3440131 >>3440121 the arm which is pointing looks a bit short, and maybe like it isn't connected up to the shoulder correctly

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 16:40:48 2018 No.3440143 File: 206 KB, 1100x454, snowsmall.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3435993 made another one of these this is fun to do

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 18:55:39 2018 No.3440321 >>3438795 I know you meant to make green undertones but yours are too visible, kind of distracting

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 18:56:19 2018 No.3440323 File: 404 KB, 1318x1748, mermay hasta el cullon puta.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Fuking Mermay

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 19:00:18 2018 No.3440327 >>3440143 Those two pieces are too good for /ic/. You should leave this place as soon as posible before you get infected

Anonymous Tue May 22 19:59:42 2018 No.3440376
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I tried to get help in /beg/ but no replies. Could someone take a couple seconds out of their day and help me out? Just want to know if the nose is misplaced, and red lined if it's wrong.. I'm still new and this is proving to be a big roadblock. I don't want to have to make my own thread or spam /beg/ for my dumb problem. Thanks.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 20:08:17 2018 No.3440396 does anybody have the 1 year drawing routine png its gives you books or lessons to follow and you have 8 weeks it covers a range of topics from drawing to paint to digital to animation its is the same size as this tho and they're not all books

Anonymous Tue May 22 21:02:56 2018 No.3440433
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>>3438723
Just fill the canvas right now. Fix stuff later. It will be easier to see all the color and value relationships when you don't have any white. Also, don't feel bad for gridding. I work on large canvases, using my own photo reffs and I grid with a tape measure, no one cares about how you got to point b, and anyone that whines about how impure painting in a more restrained and formulaic way probably does plein air wit a brush in their sphincter. Just fill it, then do passes. It's more efficient to fix spots later and to work entire areas, just keep a note pad and make an identical sketch with notes on what to fox where.

>>3438918
Do some sketches for other compositions, you may be falling out of love with it and there is no shame in starting over if it doesn't feel right. tbqh i think you should make use of the word "around". It might get you to something more dynamic.

>>3438990
if you're going to go full algenpfleger pose dynamism, try to emulate the way he uses light.

>>3440121
>>3440131
I'd raise the pointed forearm. It looks like he isn't holding his arm out straight enough. Also, it should probably be longer if you compare it to the other arm. The posture of the guys in the back looks nice.

>>3440323
MerMAN! (shovel hands)

Anonymous Tue May 22 21:11:35 2018 No.3440443
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>>3440376
The centre line makes things confusing, you should have it follow the form.
When you do that you find out that there is in fact something wrong with the chin, unless you intended it to bulge out.

Anonymous Tue May 22 21:13:59 2018 No.3440449
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>>3440396
I don't have it, but start with Drawing On the Right Side of the Brain. It's full of psudo-science trash, but the exercises are good, if you take them seriously. Most first level college drawing classes use the exercises and it's just a step off from as close to a 'classical' drawing education that you will get.

The 'one year' thing is a bit of a meme, because it actually takes a while to train your eyes and your brain. You should focus on drawing traditionally before touching a tablet, but you can start animation whenever.

also: if animation is your end goal, you should check yourself before you wreck yourself.

Anonymous Tue May 22 21:41:50 2018 No.3440484

>>3440449
That book was not written for beginning art students, it as written for non-artists to learn the basic skills of drawing what they see. I went to school where she taught - art majors weren't allowed to take her course. It's not a book for serious art students. It's not a step off from "as close to a classical education", at all.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 22 22:03:00 2018 No.3440513 >>3440327 Aw thanks man! I’ve been here since I was just starting so I don’t think I’m getting infected anytime soon. Although nowadays I just post here on draw threads and like once a month. Glad you liked my paintings though :)

Anonymous Tue May 22 23:49:51 2018 No.3440592
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>>3440484
I never said that the book was written for art students, but if you would like to tangent into semantics, the book explores concepts like understanding the correlation between positive and negative space, drawing what you see without understanding what you're looking at (preconceptions) etc. and puts those concepts into understandable terms for (like you said) non artists. Everyone who is just starting art is a non-artist. I'm just going to take a wild guess and assume that you went to an accredited institution as I did, and that there were classes that were electives for your 'non-artists'. That class was likely an "art of sketching" class that could be differentiated from a "drawing 1" course in depth of content. Of course it's a watered down version, but so is our book in question. It still explores the 'fundies' in a way that is easily identifiable for a non-artist, maybe like someone on a Babylonian Sky Writing image board who is asking for a "1 year drawing routine png its gives you books or lessons to follow".

What if I gave the recommendation assuming that the person was starting from scratch and like most people in these draw threads, the person may lack an attention span or have commitment issues stemming from a string of poor lifestyle choices or a lapse in discipline. What if i chose the book because it is essentially a vague attempt to get a child to eat peas by putting them in macaroni and cheese. What if most people on this board aren't motivated enough to ever 'make it', but kind folks such as I drop in here to hold people's hands once in a while.

Additionally, I've attached an image of a "value scale" because you have trouble seeing between black and white.

Anonymous Wed May 23 00:23:54 2018 No.3440609
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I feel like the way lips always look when I draw them from the side... Well, it never feels right?? Can anyone give me some tips? It's been bugging me for ages
Image is just a little warm-up doodle, but I'm gonna ink it for the hell of it
>Been doing digital too much and I miss my transform and edit tools :')

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 09:45:11 2018 No.3441039 File: 232 KB, 1500x786, mech1.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 09:46:17 2018 No.3441040 File: 137 KB, 1030x812, plank study.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 15:55:39 2018 No.3441457 >>3441039 nice

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 20:08:34 2018 No.3441748 File: 229 KB, 1000x625, c.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] critique

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 20:12:01 2018 No.3441752 >>3440592 >Additionally, I've attached an image of a "value scale" because you have trouble seeing between black and white. This is probably one of the best posts I've ever seen.

Anonymous Wed May 23 20:57:48 2018 No.3441795
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I already know it's bad but just want to get some input about the pose, does it look natural?
She'll be looking out the window of an old stone building. That's all thank you and sorry I posted this garbage.

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 23:20:24 2018 No.3441923 File: 257 KB, 1000x863, paisaje-roca.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] hello

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 23:32:53 2018 No.3441934 File: 218 KB, 931x931, woman_face_study3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] old one I had abandoned. crit pls

>>	Anonymous Wed May 23 23:47:11 2018 No.3441951 File: 1.51 MB, 2000x2000, rocky-desert.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] oldie, I put 15 minutes extra into it today

>>	NoseBro Wed May 23 23:50:32 2018 No.3441952 File: 788 KB, 1318x1018, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3441934

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 00:14:53 2018 No.3441961 >>3441952 The mouth is the problem? I need some text

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 00:50:53 2018 No.3441981 >>3441923 crit pls

>>	NoseBro Thu May 24 01:25:05 2018 No.3442028 File: 675 KB, 1339x927, Capture.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3441961 look at the corners of every features and how they line up

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 02:10:14 2018 No.3442084 File: 137 KB, 540x960, Rakka Cute.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3441795 Rakka a cute

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 08:57:25 2018 No.3442360 File: 1.45 MB, 1500x938, pegmuscle.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3441748 think of the peg break down as such. It will be easer later on

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 11:40:53 2018 No.3442508 >>3431683 I love your style

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 11:53:33 2018 No.3442527 >>3438044 Really good

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 14:49:46 2018 No.3442699 File: 256 KB, 1000x900, denizens.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] cough making a furry game cough

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 17:23:42 2018 No.3442941 File: 289 KB, 1000x743, may-24-2018-2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Heres this

>>	Anonymous Thu May 24 23:59:56 2018 No.3443382 File: 34 KB, 611x501, memetas.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Today in venturing for the first time in silhouettes. The square brush makes it easy tho.

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