Porn Thread

[Anonymous No.3424288]

Porn thread for people who like drawing porn.
Hide degeneracy you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
NO furry, mods saids so.
Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.
Don't know where to start? Check the updated sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#

[Anonymous No.3424350]

splayt

[Anonymous No.3424466]

>>3424350
needs a cleanup/render desu

[Anonymous No.3424540]

[Anonymous No.3424562]

[Anonymous No.3424568]

[Anonymous No.3424574]

>>3424568
Hey thanks for the resize bubby

[Anonymous No.3424586]

>>3424568
Heres the nude version I guess, this is supposed to be porn afterall

[Anonymous No.3424593]

>>3424540
>>3424574
very nice, are these both done on some group drawing thing?

[Anonymous No.3424594]

>>3424593
Drawpile

[Anonymous No.3424704]

>>3424594
Really solid work, do you have a blog?

[Anonymous No.3425205]

>>3424288
Tried my hand at some animated degeneracy. Any opinions?

[Anonymous No.3425362]

>>3425205
It looks like gravity is turning off and on again instead of tits bouncing, because you made the tits float as she's rising, which is exactly the opposite of what should be happening.

[Anonymous No.3425403]

>>3425362
Yeah, I noticed, will fix that when I can be arsed.

[Anonymous No.3425478]

>>3425205
>>3425362
Gave it another try.

[Anonymous No.3425480]

>>3425478
what is supposed to be bouncing the tits up exactly?
Dude learn to draw first then animate, this whole thing is a disaster

[Anonymous No.3425595]

>>3425480
Mostly the fact that it she undulates her torso back and forth. But you seem to be intent on going full ad hominem over rough sketches, so I doubt you actually care.

[Dunning Krug No.3426124]

>>3425478
Hope this helps.

Porn ref: https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph576d75ae99a15

The first five minutes is what I used as ref.

If youre trying to go smooth at least pay close attention to consistency. Granted I didnt follow the consistency rule. Your Keys need to be distinct and you need to fix your timing+spacing. Right now it looks like one single mass of lines moving together. Create a rough animation on 4-8's then create multiple layers that focus on each body part: breasts, feet, face, and hair.

>timing and spacing
From the ref I used, the female seems to ease into the rise, then eases out when she collapses ontop of the penis. Her legs seems to be pushing the action, so it might be wise to figure out how the legs propel her. I had problems with the legs as you can tell. Her pelvic tilt when she rises seems to have even spacing, so make sure your timing+spacing is clear. You can get titty bounce and hair bounce when you practice the bouncing ball.

Im also a dunning krug so, grain of salt

[Anonymous No.3426189]

I keep working on this... sometimes

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3426233]

Anything look off with the rough sketch, or any suggestions to improve the sensuality?

[Anonymous No.3426237]

>>3424704
@Juste_VU

[Anonymous No.3426347]

Any of you guys work in the art industry and have people know what you actually do? I have people like classmates and even close friends/family that know I draw porn but I wouldn't know how companies would feel having a porn artist on their crew even if the artist was to separate themselves from their NSFW stuff. Just curious what other anons think since this is a pretty common issue.

[Anonymous No.3426462]

Hello crabs.
What happened to the animation thread? Nobody bothered to create a new one? I've never posted there before and now that I need it, it's gone.
I always get confused about the difference between a Keyframes and a Displaced Inbetween. How Are you supposed to tell the difference when you look at references? And what is good enough for porn loops?

[Anonymous No.3426573]

>>3425478
This has to be bait.

[Anonymous No.3426666]

Hopefully this won't get deleted LMAO

[Anonymous No.3426686]

>>3425595
>Mostly the fact that it she undulates her torso back and forth
doesnt look anything like it
>But you seem to be intent on going full ad hominem over rough sketches, so I doubt you actually care.
>It doesnt matter its completly utterly shit because its a rough sketch
>>3426573
Dont underestimate the power of shitters on this board

[Anonymous No.3426700]

>>3426189
Bottom panel is not how the labia wrap while pulling out of the vag brah. Next time you're ``doing the deed'' (lol) watch your cock as it's thrusting in and out. The labia will hug the shaft as you pull out and fold in as you thrust in.

[Anonymous No.3426710]

>>3426700
>he could watch any porn video that shows that, right about now
>he suggests him to think about art references while having sex
Genius.

[Anonymous No.3426839]

>>3426710
Life studies

[Anonymous No.3426849]

>>3426839
I see you like to fun post. Good for you.

[Anonymous No.3426868]

I'm guessing that scat is not allowed right, I have quite a bit of beg rough gesture/ figure drawing that I would like crit. on

[Anonymous No.3427258]

>>3426124
I'll try to work on it some more at some point. I'm working with Sketchbook Pro, which unfortunately only allows for a foreground, midground and background for each frame, so it's pretty limited. I very much appreciate the actual critique, especially compared to cunts like >>3425480 and >>3426573.

[B O X No.3428472]

[B O X No.3428479]

[B O X No.3428644]

[B O X No.3428645]

やるビューテびゃ

[B O X No.3428647]

[B O X No.3428649]

m e du sa

[B O X No.3428651]

[B O X No.3428655]

[B O X No.3428656]

[B O X No.3428657]

[B O X No.3428658]

im done :^ 3

[Anonymous No.3428673]

>>3428657
I'll bite, what's this?

[Anonymous No.3428702]

>>3428472
>>3428479
>>3428644
>>3428645
>>3428647
>>3428649
>>3428651
>>3428655
>>3428656
>>3428657
>>3428658
>autism

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3429073]

Did some much needed redlining and anatomical fixes.

[Anonymous No.3429097]

>>3428658
this is kinda cute desu

[Anonymous No.3429166]

>>3429073
clearly not, one ass cheek on the girl on the left is twice the size of the other one... and the rest is generally mediocre at best.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3429180]

>>3429166
The former is an easy fix. For the latter, specifics? Or just due to how rough it currently is? If its due to the proportions or a cross contour that don't look quite right, let me know.

[Anonymous No.3429215]

>>3426666
Not that it matters, since I'm not paying you money, but I'm a fan of yours.

[Anonymous No.3429255]

>>3429073
dude I know you wanna get that cameltoe in there but you basically put her labia where her asshole should be. that whole area is sitting way too far back for the angle of her hips

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3429261]

>>3429255
Will work the corrections in the morning. Thank you for your help.

[Anonymous No.3429335]

>>3428651
That is a really well drawn pine needle

[Anonymous No.3429557]

>>3429215
Money isn't everything. Good vibes are more important than that. Thanks a lot anon.

[Anonymous No.3430067]

Last thing I drew.

[Anonymous No.3430076]

>>3430067
The amazoness's legs are comically exagerated. The elf looks hot though and ofcourse as always appealing style

[Anonymous No.3430085]

>>3430076
Thanks man.
>The amazoness's legs are comically exagerated.
I get you, yeah. Not a big fan of that, though it's on purpose. See pic attached for official art.

[Anonymous No.3430088]

>>3424288
>NO furry, mods saids so.
lmao what mods? they're barely doing anything about the anime threads these days.

[Anonymous No.3430089]

>>3430088
Because anime is not against any rules

[Anonymous No.3430091]

>>3430089
The state of this board.

[Anonymous No.3430100]

>>3430088
In the last thread this "comic page" of mine was deleted because of the wolf.
https://78.media.tumblr.com/1ad68dbc3528db8f140124b4064fe17c/tumblr_p8a9vjli1f1spcpdgo1_1280.jpg

I guess the janitors are doing their work.

[Anonymous No.3430109]

>>3430100
AFAIK, posts get autodeleted after a certain number of reports.

[Anonymous No.3430123]

>>3430091
>newfag 2018

[Anonymous No.3430258]

[Anonymous No.3430282]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3430560]

Had some time to spruce it up a bit.

[Anonymous No.3430575]

>>3424288
Is there a better way to draw the vagina in this position?

[Anonymous No.3430926]

>>3430560
If you draw 1 character pinups, then having them look directly at the viewer can be a good thing. Here I think, you break characters interaction by doing so.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3431370]

>>3430926
Better?

[Anonymous No.3431632]

>>3431370
Definitely. In general I must say this is one of my favorite pics of yours.

[Anonymous No.3431697]

I like vermintide 2.

[Anonymous No.3431803]

>>3426666
>>3426666
>>3426666

such a goooood quads here

[Anonymous No.3432115]

>>3424350
>>3424540
>>3424574
>>3424594
>>3426189
you guys have tumblrs?

[Anonymous No.3432290]

>>3432115
https://twitter.com/Juste_VU
All my info is in my description.

[Anonymous No.3433346]

[Anonymous No.3433740]

Bump

[Anonymous No.3433792]

Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.3433855]

>>3433792
Pearl's feet look weird

[Anonymous No.3433856]

>>3433855
That's not Pearl.

[Anonymous No.3433860]

>>3433856
>jasper_and_Pearl_sm
???

[Anonymous No.3433973]

>>3424288
>Stay up all day, wanting to spend my day off doing nothing but art.
>Wake up at 8, can't make myself draw until 2 AM (night shift worker, have to un-fuck my sleep schedule by staying up all night
>Only make this.

JUST

FUCK MY SHIT UP Grove Street Family.

Anyway, how does it look? Are the boobs good looking? How is the MILFy thiccness?

[Anonymous No.3434128]

>>3433855
I knew this when I linned it ;'D Is that the only problem?
I feel like IDK how to draw dicks

[Anonymous No.3434135]

>>3434128
Main issue I see is that it lacks depth. Most of the elements of their bodies aren't following any kind of main perspective. Looks like a collage of solid parts glued on top of each other.

Also, a comic I'm working on.
1/2

[Anonymous No.3434137]

>>3434135
2/2

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3434526]

[Anonymous No.3434540]

>>3434135
>>3434137
Pretty fucking hot art. But the plot man. Its painfully unrealistic. Like even a pizza delivery service getting paid with sex seems more legit

[Anonymous No.3434576]

>>3434540
I'm aware cat girls and swamp people don't exist.

[Anonymous No.3434655]

>>3434576
No man my problem is that. Likey they notice each other and say. Lets do something together it could be fun and then do it. It'd seem more realistic if they first ignored each other but seeing each other gets them hot or something and then they involve each other. Not just. "Hey wanna join?"- ( Before they are even doing anything) " Yeah okay" and then they fuck. Dont know man they gotta give each other interested looks first at least check each other out.

[Anonymous No.3434688]

>>3426233
The face on the right is just completely broken

[Anonymous No.3434697]

>>3434526
not a fan of tentacles but i still like this one, the eyes feel weird tho

[Anonymous No.3434704]

>>3434655
thats a lot of extra panels to get to fucking man.

>>3434135
>>3434137
im kinda on the fence with your chibi faces. i get that they're easy and do the job for a one panel gag, but your style of doing them is a little uncanny. I think you could accomplish the same thing with minimal effort by reusing panel 3 of page one, but with surprised expressions and lefty dropping right girls boob.

also any plans on continuing the chocolate milk comic?

[Anonymous No.3434707]

>>3434704
>thats a lot of extra panels to get to fucking man.
oh okay. Glad to hear
Love your stuff

[Anonymous No.3434786]

>>3434655
I get what you mean, but I don't have the luxury for that. It's a short comic commission, so I can't really spend a lot of time introducing the characters and the situation. Like P1 is for setting, P2, 3 and 4 for fucking.
Also, the script isn't mine, so I'm following another person's directions.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3434798]

Update.

[Anonymous No.3434799]

>>3434704
>also any plans on continuing the chocolate milk comic?
I'm resuming work on that tomorrow.

[Anonymous No.3434808]

>>3425478
It's amazing how many beginner animator problems would be reduced or at least easier for the person to solve if they just drew less freakin frames. Anon, try out the simple bouncing ball exercise and then apply what you've leanred to tits (as well as her torso lowering, for that matter.) Don't just look it up, actually do it, animate the ball and see what works and doesn't work as far as t iming. Then try this again (preferably starting with a few keyframes to work out the timing).

[Anonymous No.3434952]

>>3434798
i know you posted this alot, but im amazed on how you listened to all the crits regardless. keep it up and you will make it in no time

[Anonymous No.3435041]

>>3433973
Looks good so far

[Anonymous No.3435323]

>>3434798
Looks great. One of your more wholesome pics imo.
Just one thing. I'd get rid of the blonde's left hand. It just takes attention from the main subject and it makes somewhat of a tangent. Also it looks like she's ready to slap the cat girl. If that's the intention, then forget about my critique.

[Anonymous No.3435366]

>>3435041
Thanks, but what can I improve on, besides the placeholder head, obviously?

[Anonymous No.3435369]

>>3435366
Forgot I cropped out the head, lol.

[Anonymous No.3435379]

>>3435366
The torso is way too short compared to the other limbs.

[Anonymous No.3435381]

>>3435379
Shit, seriously? I thought that as long as the wrists were at the same level as or below the crotch, it was fine.

[Anonymous No.3435391]

>>3424288
Oh shit I didn't know there was a porn thread!

Can anyone give me tips on how exactly I can put my stuff out there and work for degenerates like me for money?
A few questions off the top of my head are:

How did you start off before being commissioned?

If I make a blog, on what site should I and what is the best way to gain exposure?


How exactly can I calculate how much money I should charge for simple porn animations?

Should I stick to or copy a certain style to attract others?

[Anonymous No.3435448]

>>3435391
If money is your end goal, you're never gonna make it.
You have to like what yo do to truly make it.
So instead of asking how to make money, ask yourself how to get really good at what you love.

[Anonymous No.3435457]

>>3435448
I already like it. That's why it's a goal of mine to make it a job. Been doing it for fun for years. In my entire time I hadn't ever thought about using it to make money.

As for being good enough at it, I'm kinda happy where I am but that doesn't mean I don't want to improve. Any critique for the animation? It was kind of a joke that I made in 15-20 minutes an hour or so ago but criticism won't hurt.

[Anonymous No.3435538]

>>3435457
I can make a joke critique about it to reflect the amount of joke effort you put in it.
Show some proper work, anon.

Also, pic attached might help you.

[Anonymous No.3435553]

Requestan redline/crit before I continue

[Anonymous No.3435862]

>>3435538
Thanks.
Is there any guideline on what to charge for each animation commission?

[Anonymous No.3435876]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3435933]

Something I worked up in Clip Studio Paint Pro. Working towards getting the EX version.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3435935]

>>3434798

I'll see if I can rework her arm so that her hand is on her arm or somewhere else.

Which title should I go with for the doujin: Beast Tamer, or Fire and Ice?

[Anonymous No.3435992]

critiques please

[Anonymous No.3436016]

>>3434137
As a woman, you draw your male characters pretty damn well.

[Anonymous No.3436017]

>>3435992
W-Why did you xray his balls.
Also your anatomy skills suck massive balls. Actually the bigger problem is your symbol drawing. Read the sticky and get rid of it. This is precisely the reason your art teacher didnt want you to draw anime before you could even draw at all.

[Anonymous No.3436163]

>>3436016
That's something I try to get good at. Male characters are too neglected in porn.

[Anonymous No.3436180]

>>3433792
>>3435553
>>3435876
People that add extreme amounts of detail to genitals that are a very small part of the composition should be shot on sight

[Anonymous No.3436186]

>>3436180
agreed

[Anonymous No.3436257]

[Anonymous No.3436400]

>>3424288

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3436465]

Update.

[Anonymous No.3436547]

Not quite porn but nsfw, so..
Critique is greatly welcomed <3

[Anonymous No.3436552]

>>3436465
Could just be me, but her left butt cheek seems a lot bigger than her right butt cheek.

[Anonymous No.3436556]

>>3436552
Aaaannnnndddd I misspelled moving. Wonderful...

[Anonymous No.3436566]

>>3424288
Just finished this one, currently getting into drawing r34

[Anonymous No.3436866]

>>3435862
I have absolutely 0 experience with animation. I'd just go by price/time.
Make an example animation of a quality you could sell and see how much time it takes you. Then do a simple $$ per hour calculation.

[Anonymous No.3436888]

>>3436552
>>3436556
>movig

[Anonymous No.3436984]

Whats a good place to put my porn comic on? I don't want to put it on my own website.

[Anonymous No.3437008]

[Anonymous No.3437096]

I stopped about halway when i realized i had fucked up the rendering on this

Any advice

[Anonymous No.3437101]

>>3437096
It's not like you fucked up only the rendering on this.
That underlying line art is awful to look at.

[Anonymous No.3437108]

>>3437101
Oof i guess youre right.

I generally used a 1px brush but i suppose i should use something with a bit more weight

[Anonymous No.3437132]

>>3436180
post your art, fgt

[Anonymous No.3437191]

>>3430067
pretty awesome.

[Anonymous No.3437207]

>>3437132
seething shitter

[Anonymous No.3437217]

>>3437108
I actually like the lineart, but it doesn’t mesh well with the airbrushy rendering. Thought you were going for a pixel art look.

[Anonymous No.3437235]

>>3437217
I did at first,but decided to go with an airbrush effect thinking it would look better but my rendering skills arent there atm.

[Anonymous No.3437320]

I need ref of girls scissoring.

[Anonymous No.3437324]

Made this the other day.

[Anonymous No.3437556]

>>3436888

[Anonymous No.3437766]

Rate my first attempt at making a comic.

[Anonymous No.3438404]

>>3437766
I'll pass. So should you on the whole arting thing.

[Anonymous No.3439066]

>>3437766
i'd jerk it to be honest but you gotta fix those panels my dude

[Anonymous No.3439117]

Can I get some feedback on this? I’m pretty trash at shading and colouring in general so I tried to be simple in both of those aspects but I still don’t feel very satisfied w/ the end product. Critiques about other parts of the drawing are welcome as well.

[Anonymous No.3439120]

i like drawing clowns having sex.

[Anonymous No.3439333]

I made a thing. Some parts probably need more in between frames, so that it doesn't cut too abruptly, but all in all I think it's a nice mix of comics and animation. Probably it would be better without text though.

[Anonymous No.3439372]

>>3439333
>Giant tiddies on thin frames
>Penisless "women"
Absolutely disgusting fetish. Who the hell can hold a full cup of anything on their hands anyway?

Though the calves for the brunette seem a bit strange to me. You might want to consider lip bite for insertion rather than ahegao . +1

[Anonymous No.3439373]

>>3439120
A mime is a terrible thing to waste.

>>3439333
>Giant tiddies on thin frames
>Penisless "women"
Absolutely disgusting fetish. Who the hell can hold a full cup of anything on their hands anyway?

Though the calves for the brunette seem a bit strange to me. You might want to consider lip bite for insertion rather than ahegao . +1

[Anonymous No.3439700]

>>3439333
Very nice my friend

[Anonymous No.3439766]

>>3435992
Go back to /beg/

[Anonymous No.3439775]

>>3439333
>>3439373
>girls with thicc calves

[Anonymous No.3439791]

>>3439373
Agreed, If the demon used """"her"""" massive demon cock to fuck the other character I'd be jacking off to this virotiously. I'm only jacking off to this at the regular speed right now

[Anonymous No.3439802]

>>3439373
Anon, I know your struggle, but this was a personal project and I'm not exactly into either futa nor thick ladies. I'm a disgrace to humanity, I know.
Also, the glasses on hands thing is an old party trick. You can definitely balance a glass on your hands. Hard part is to remove it without spilling it.

About the artwork. I agree about the calves. I messed up with the proportions there a bit. Her left calf should be shorter and the thigh longer.
Also, I like this kind of leg musculature, so that's more of a style choice I guess.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3439920]

Thoughts on the anatomy and perspective?

[Anonymous No.3439953]

proud of this comm. Please feel free to rip it to shreds :]

[Anonymous No.3440475]

Quickposes but for porn positions fucking WHEN

[Anonymous No.3440549]

>>3439802
different anon here, thin frames with massive tits is god tier and becoming harder to find these days as everyone moves towards thick. Personally i was really hoping for futa but you cant have it all

[Anonymous No.3440913]

>>3436016
seconded, both his males and females are very attractive but in porn general the males tend to be either uninteresting, gross or goofy

bbc's males are 10/10

[Anonymous No.3440964]

Honest question, is it better to whack a dick before drawing porn or avoid masturbation at all?

[Anonymous No.3441112]

>>3440913
I'm so glad this aspect of my stuff is appreciated. Thank you.

[Anonymous No.3441729]

>>3439953
>>3439953
did you crop it or is that the original composition? the only thing I don't like is how much weight and action is being thrown off-screen. otherwise really cute

[Anonymous No.3441831]

>>3436566
Do you mind if I put a real dick in her mouth?

[Anonymous No.3442065]

from imagination, critique?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3442505]

Critiques for this WIP?

[Anonymous No.3442519]

>>3442505
make the eyes lighter / and accents of brigher and lower blues

[Anonymous No.3442578]

I like robots

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3442606]

>>3442519

[Anonymous No.3442654]

>>3442505
Stiff and unnatural pose. You should keep your gesture much much much more loose, so that when you clean it up the inevitable stiffening won't affect it that much.

[Anonymous No.3442845]

>>3430575
good stuff

[Anonymous No.3442855]

>>3442578
the dick looks bad. Think of another way to stylize what the way it looks.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3442856]

[Anonymous No.3442857]

>>3442606

The ass fold in the fabric on the backview makes no sense.

[Anonymous No.3443035]

>>3431697
I'm unsure about the angle of the hips and length of the spine.

Any input?

[Anonymous No.3443283]

p-pls no bully

just kidding, I'd like some critiques please

trap version of a qt Yu-Gi-Oh card

[Anonymous No.3443291]

>>3443283
this is the original card

yes, I know I ruined the hair

[Anonymous No.3443399]

bump

[Anonymous No.3443409]

>>3442845
ty!

[Anonymous No.3443744]

>>3433973
Wow, this thread is still alive?

Got some free time today to make some tiny updates. Am thinking of moving the left boob over a bit more to the side.

>>3442505
Consider changing the color of the shoes to match the hijab for the sake of character design.

[Anonymous No.3443745]

Milf getting fucked by young bbc

[Anonymous No.3443746]

I fucked up on the angles

[Anonymous No.3443749]

>>3443745
>>3443746
>I fucked up on the angles
you fucked up, period.
just because you have access to pen, paper and a phone, it doesn't mean you need to share your absolute trash with the rest of the world.

[Anonymous No.3443814]

>>3443744
Last minute improvement(?) before daytime-bedtime.

Goodnight/morning, my friends.

[Anonymous No.3443848]

>>3443746
>>3443745
Literally at the same level as I was in elementary

[Anonymous No.3443866]

>>3443746
>the dick coming out of his stomach
OOF

[Anonymous No.3444164]

>>3443745
Ok, hot. Got anymore of this?

[Anonymous No.3444167]

>>3442505
Why are her legs and face exposed infidel?
But the greater offense to Allah is that you didn't properly draw her hands or knees

[Anonymous No.3444364]

>>3444164
the absolute state of dickbrain porn consumers, ladies and gentlemen

[Anonymous No.3444375]

i need some advice

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3444593]

>>3444167
Thoughts on this?

[Anonymous No.3445421]

[Anonymous No.3445651]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3445737]

[Anonymous No.3445738]

>>3445737
Now, im no expert on anatomy so take my criticism with a grain of salt, but the back on the left girl looks wrong.

[Anonymous No.3445768]

>>3445738
redline pls

[Anonymous No.3445920]

>>3445738
There's nothing wrong with her back. The anatomy is good

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3445954]

>>3445738
Better?

Hoping for some critiques on the arms and hands.

[Anonymous No.3446041]

>>3445920
>>3445954
It still looks off to me
I think its moslty the perspective

[Anonymous No.3446042]

>>3435992
do something about the bumpiness in her vaginal walls. It makes his dick look all shriveled and chewed up

[Anonymous No.3446046]

>>3436017
Im genuinely curious as to what issue you have with his anatomy. I can see that it isnt correct, but it seems to work somehow with this pic. Isnt that what matters? I think the gesture and flow are pretty solid and thats why it works. That being said, i dont like the pic, I just dont get anime porn stuff.

[Anonymous No.3446053]

>>3445954
>On the arms and half a hand
I think you mean

[Anonymous No.3446055]

>>3444593
I dig it. I know youre intentionally using exaggerated perspective, but it almost seems a little too extreme, like the guys foot looks like its 10 feet away

[Anonymous No.3446077]

>>3446046
If his style is amateurish badly drawn anime porn then yeah the bad anatomy fits the style. Otherwhise, his anatomy sucks balls. Even for anime.

[Anonymous No.3446080]

slowly coming along

[Anonymous No.3446258]

>>3424288
What makes animated porn erotic?

[Anonymous No.3446260]

>>3446258
Bouncing titties and asses

[Anonymous No.3446582]

thicc woman dancing

[Anonymous No.3446655]

Drawing porn exclusively will help me get better in all areas, right? It's100% anatomy

[Anonymous No.3446877]

>>3446582
Quite nice animation wise. Has a nice flow

[Anonymous No.3447294]

thoughts?

[Anonymous No.3447296]

>>3447294
fucking el

[Anonymous No.3447298]

>>3446655
What about backgrounds? And depending what kind of porn, full nudity wont help you with drapery, for example.

[Anonymous No.3447300]

>>3447294
>>3447296
Not erotic or attractive in the slightest

[Anonymous No.3447301]

>>3447294
fucking el, thoughts?

[Anonymous No.3447306]

>>3447300
thanks for the heads up, any thoughts how to fix that in my future drawings?
>>3446582
thats very good except for the shifting feet
Points for nipples is very bad, its the center of attention so it shouldnt be drawn like that.

[Anonymous No.3447311]

>>3447306
give her a sexier face and lower the belly button

[Anonymous No.3447332]

>>3447311
>and lower the belly button
Isnt the belly button supposed to be in line with the hips/elbow?

[Anonymous No.3447359]

>>3447332
i guess but with your anatomy it looks kind of off being that high up

[Anonymous No.3447367]

>>3447359
idk about the face i might reference megamilk for it

[Anonymous No.3447566]

Haydee

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3447652]

[Anonymous No.3447660]

>>3446080
cute boi

>>3446582
is she bending her knees for the dip?

>>3447367
>reference megamilk
might as well just use the megamilk reference for the whole pose imo

>>3447566
the ass reminds me of kim's fake ass

>>3447652
Thats one large pinky

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3447692]

>>3447660

[Anonymous No.3447703]

>>3447692
that had is bad, when you draw hands put them in beautiful poses because even if a hand is technically correct it can still look weird unposed, and that hand isn't technically correct.

[Anonymous No.3447706]

>>3447306
fixed the feet
could you be more specific about the nips?

[Anonymous No.3447734]

Redline pls?

[Anonymous No.3447769]

>>3447706
You literally used dots for nipples, thats extremely amateurish and ugly

[Anonymous No.3447782]

>>3447734
the anatomy looks fine for a sketch

[Anonymous No.3447806]

>>3424288
Am I going to make it?

[Anonymous No.3447856]

>>3447734
>>3447782
Anything before I commit to the lineart?

[Anonymous No.3447872]

>>3447782
>>3447734
anything before I commit to lineart?

[Anonymous No.3447876]

>>3447806
unironically, nope.

[Anonymous No.3448064]

>>3447806
>those calves

[Anonymous No.3448076]

>>3447806
Everyone who tries hard enough makes it. Ganbatte Anon-kun!

[Anonymous No.3448377]

>>3448064
elaborate

[Anonymous No.3448382]

>>3447806
Probably not

[Anonymous No.3448403]

>>3448064
Is this better?

[Anonymous No.3448411]

>>3448403
You draw like a fucking 10 year old.
Take your shit to the beginners thread.

[Anonymous No.3448416]

>>3448411
well what specifically is wrong with it?

[Anonymous No.3448421]

>>3448416
Anatomy, perspective, and proportions

[Anonymous No.3448424]

>>3448421
Could you be more specific?
What is wrong with the anatomy? (now that I fixed the calves).
What is wrong with the perspective?
What is wrong with the proportions?

[Anonymous No.3448443]

>>3448424
your legs aren't even, you're feet are tiny, knee and elbow joints arent correct. Calf muslces are connected oddly to supposed bone structure. Pelvis isnt properly connected with femur ball joints. Head is a weird peanut shape. The shoulders/collerbone/traps arent connected properly. Arms are too long relative to trunk and ribcage. The top half and bottom half have different perspectives. You lack experience with drawing from reality.

You didnt build up a construction drawing before working on colors or linework. If you dont know what something looks like, use reference.

Not trying to be mean but did you even read the sticky?

[Anonymous No.3448459]

>>3448443
First off thanks for the feedback but could you do a red line?
Because with the possible exception of the feet being small and leg/pelvis connection seeming off I'm not really seeing the other things.
>If you don't know what something looks like, use reference.
I was using a couple photos for reference.
>Not trying to be mean but did you even read the sticky?
Yes but knowing something doesn't necessarily equate to being able to execute it.

[Anonymous No.3448468]

>>3448459
>I was using a couple photos for reference
post them

[Anonymous No.3448498]

>>3448403

Hi, I'm the artist of this >>3447872
I'm gonna try to focus on a few issues here:

Why are her feet smaller than her vagina? Even though they are closer to the viewer. Things that are closer to our eyes are supposed to look bigger.

The most important thing you need to work on is line quality/control. This is literally drilling, you need to get smooth, smart lines, both on paper and on digital. Your drawing will never look good without proper line quality, no matter how much you improve your anatomy.

I guess you used a reference, but you really are not drawing WHAT YOU SEE. Look at the calves. Are calves supposed to look like that? Like a big banana? Of course not, you know that. Then why did they come out like that? Because you haven't developed a good sense for measuring and copying yet, even if the reference is right in front of you. Do exercises like drawing evenly spaced dots in a straight line without a ruler, several parallel straight lines next to each other without a ruler, stuff that will improve your eye proportions.

.

[Anonymous No.3448500]

>>3448403
oh wow
this drawing looks something you would see on rule34/hentai from 16 years ago, geez...
I'm not the same anon but i think that one dude that told you to read the sticky wanted you to read it and then put what you read into your drawings.
The sticky is more for references and telling you where you should start. After that you go off on your own looking for books, tutorials and other helpful tips on the internet or from books.

[Anonymous No.3448513]

>>3448468
These were two of them.
>>3448498
Thanks for your feedback
>Why are her feet smaller than her vagina?
Because I genuinely fucked up there.
>The most important thing you need to work on is line quality/control. This is literally drilling, you need to get smooth, smart lines, both on paper and on digital.
I only have a mouse at the moment, do have any idea how I can make my lines smoother with a mouse?
>but you really are not drawing WHAT YOU SEE
I wasn't trying to draw the reference exactly I was using it to get an idea of what some parts would look like I wasn't using the same pose precisely.
> Are calves supposed to look like that? Like a big banana?
They sort of do, to me at least.
Maybe my eyes are broken?

[Anonymous No.3448522]

>>3448513
>I only have a mouse at the moment, do have any idea how I can make my lines smoother with a mouse?

It's generally not a good idea to do digital art without a tablet, BUT, what you could do is: do the sketch on paper, trying to get a good feel for the flow of the whole things. Then, if you really want that digital finish and color, you scan/photograph it and use vectors to do the lineart. Here's a simple tutorial using free software: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zYQkJSpTpbs

>They sort of do, to me at least.
Calves are more like a combination of a straight(ish) part (the bone), which shows up more on the front, as the shin, and a bulbous part that cover the upper back part and comes to the upper sides, the muscle.

[Anonymous No.3448557]

>>3448522
So I straightened out the shins, increased the foot size, I also think I may have fixed the issue with the hip/leg connection.
Does this look any better?

[Anonymous No.3448560]

>>3448557
The shins are better, but the calves mass stops a bit higher point than that, with just as subtle a curve as you currently have.

The abs are too big compared to the size of the torso, they should be smaller.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3448605]

Roughed this out this morning. Going to go over it after dinner to tonight. How's the gestures and proportions?

[Anonymous No.3448797]

>>3448557
sorry for the shitty redline. But honestly, your reference image would be the best thing to study instead of asking someone to redline. It would be easier try to make your drawing look closer to the ref model than making things up. For example, look at the direction of your feet compared to the model's feet. The way you have it, you'd have to foreshorten the feet from memory. If you drew closer to what it looks like in the ref, you don't have to worry about what a foot looks like foreshortened.

[Anonymous No.3448851]

>>3437008
Work on your line weight looney, it's all over the place

[Anonymous No.3448867]

>>3436547
why is there highlight on her left butt cheek

[Anonymous No.3448988]

>>3448605
Looks good

[ze archon No.3449071]

did this up a week or so ago, interested in critiques on it. i haven't done anything digital aside from some still-lives and portrait studies several years ago, so cartoon/stylized is kind of brand new to me. didn't use a reference, so that's partially why some of it's fucked up.

there's a lot of stuff i already see as needing a serious re-examination, but i'm curious for input that isn't my own eye.

[Anonymous No.3449721]

>>3439117
She has man shoulders

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3449817]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3449877]

[Anonymous No.3450146]

I dread making faces..

[Anonymous No.3450286]

>>3448557
your piece is too rigid and has practically no appeal other than the concept.

if drawing skill goes from 1(bad) to 10(good) youre at 2 currently.
do exercises and focus on getting core technical skill before attempting something like this again (if youre serious about art that is)

[Anonymous No.3450443]

>>3450286
>>3450286
>do exercises and focus on getting core technical skill before attempting something like this again (if youre serious about art that is)
You're never going to know whether or not you're good enough until somebody tells you that you are or not.
I posted that because to my amateur eyes it looked alright (if a bit rough) I came here to get other opinions. So I will study some more but I will also periodically post here again so that /ic/ can tear me a new one and point me in the right direction.

[Anonymous No.3450527]

>>3449877
pretty fucking impressed, especially with your line work.

blog?

also if it's not too late, I think the placement of the left hand is kinda weird. putting it on her right thigh as opposed to her hip would be better.

[Anonymous No.3450576]

>>3424288
Can someone critique this for me? I know the background sucks.

[Anonymous No.3450588]

>>3450576
The most obvious one for me is the penis. Looks way off

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3450607]

>>3450527
Thank you.

Hardstonesmcflintcock.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3450993]

Is there any artist extensive studies on how to draw cocks? It's more difficult to draw than hands and feet.

[Anonymous No.3451366]

[Anonymous No.3451376]

>>3447734
>>3447872
well I finished it anyway lol

would like some feedback maybe

[Anonymous No.3451789]

Does this look okay so far ?

[Anonymous No.3451816]

>>3445954
damn, thats pretty solid lineart

[Anonymous No.3451860]

>>3451366
smells like legoman

[Anonymous No.3451865]

>>3430258
Is there a place where I can find your work?

[Anonymous No.3452163]

>>3451860
ROFL.
Just because somebody uses construction, now they look like Legoman?
Get new eyes.

[Illastrat No.3452179]

>>3451789
would people really find this stick figure construction erotic and appealing?

[Anonymous No.3452208]

Pls critique this sketch

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3452242]

Simple shading commission finished.

[Anonymous No.3452450]

>>3452208

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3453092]

[Anonymous No.3453107]

Still working on color.

[Anonymous No.3453146]

>>3453107
she can smack the skin off a person with those hands

[Anonymous No.3453155]

>>3453146
I'm not sure what this means. Are you saying the hands are too big?

[Anonymous No.3453191]

>>3453155
Not that poster, but yes.

[Anonymous No.3453198]

>>3453191
Okay.

[Anonymous No.3453231]

>>3453155
Don't listen to these weebs. The size of those hands is perfectly fine.

[Anonymous No.3453238]

>>3453231
Oh, alright. I did want to move the lower hand up a little bit anyway though. The palm looks a little too long even to me. I really just wanted feedback on the color though.

[Anonymous No.3453288]

>>3453155
Yeah, they are.

[Anonymous No.3453297]

>>3453155
hold your hand to your foot. That should tell you what size they should be

[Anonymous No.3453329]

>>3453297
Yeah, I got it.

[Anonymous No.3453404]

[Anonymous No.3453420]

>>3452208
whose dick do I have to suck to get critiqued around here

[Anonymous No.3453454]

>>3453420

[Anonymous No.3453474]

>>3453420
you're better than 99% of /ic/, so you won't get much even if this weren't gay porn.

[Anonymous No.3453541]

>>3453420
You get your anatomy right for the most part. I would say the way you draw facial features are not much of my liking, but that's on me I guess. Still, for such an intense scene, the bottom guy seems to be fallen asleep rather than excited. He should be looking somewhere specific in my opinion (looking at one of the other guys to the eye or to his own ass, whatever) with a bit more of intensity in his eyes.

[Anonymous No.3453589]

>>3453420
I-is this some kind of cuckholding right here, I see that fucking wedding ring right there. Also, good art, I just find the artstyle not being my thing, but you do you! It's good.png. Keep it up fuckboy.

[Anonymous No.3453593]

>>3453589
>middle finger
>wedding ring

[Anonymous No.3453732]

>>3453593
Okay I think I'm actually autistic.

[Anonymous No.3454133]

>>3452242
you might want to make the further-away-background in a smaller value range to make the characters stand out better and look up the anatomy youre unsure of instead of guessing, the lower back looks like she has a concealed charging port underneath a hatch, her leg has a weird squished part at the end of the bench, plus doesent leave enough space for her lower leg and her legs and arms are diffrent lenghts. the blue girls forearm is weird looking, the muscle youve drawn in is connected wrong and way too defined especially in contrast to the rest of her body

[Anonymous No.3454188]

I'd like to ask people in this thread a question, which of these three characters do you find more appealing looks-wise?
Over the past year I've been trying to play a bit with styles to find what I personally prefer but at the same time I've thought about starting commissions some time in the future so it would be useful to gauge what are people's preferences.

[Anonymous No.3454209]

>>3453541
Thank you!

Yeah, I understand what you mean about the expression. I thought it did look like he was looking the general direction of his ass, but I guess that didn't read well. I was going for a post-orgasm "blissful", dazed expression or something.

>>3453589
>>3453593
>>3453732
It's not but we can pretend it is if ya like.

[Anonymous No.3454479]

>>3451376
really nice! love the water too. only thing I would personally change is have their eyes meeting and give bandana dude a tad more lustful expression, maybe sweat or blush like the other dude. any advice on how you do your anatomy?

[Anonymous No.3454496]

>>3454188
the one in the right, i like that more

[Anonymous No.3454517]

>>3454188
Why dont you show 3 images of the same girl in different styles all in full color instead? This comparison is terrible senpai desu.

[Anonymous No.3454556]

Anyone got any favorite blogs or sites that have some great tutorials or nsfw references? like.. besides straight up porn sites?

[Anonymous No.3454856]

just finished some tsuyu fan art. trying to get better with using greys.

[Anonymous No.3454891]

>>3454856
Looks like that Escher sphere.

[Anonymous No.3454897]

>>3454856
why did you make her ass THIS asymmetrical. And why do her upper leggs have different length?

[Anonymous No.3454905]

>>3424288
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gcXq9fxCD_k

[Anonymous No.3454952]

>>3454897
>why did you make her ass THIS asymmetrical.
I can't tell if this is a problem or not.

[Anonymous No.3454959]

>>3454952
it is, why make an ass asymmetrical, why make a human asymmetrical. I mean not completely symmetric but the at least the proportions should be mostly symmetrical

[Anonymous No.3455364]

>>3451865
only here for now....
will establish tumbl, etc. later

also, heres a new sketch.
comment/crit welcome

[Anonymous No.3455415]

where do y'all find pose references, if you use any at all? i want to start drawing porn, but i cant think of any sort of interesting / hot poses or references for the life of me

[Anonymous No.3455484]

>>3455415
porn

[Anonymous No.3455486]

>>3455415
have you considered using actual pornography for reference anon?

[Anonymous No.3455490]

>>3455484
>>3455486
i...feel stupid
god, thanks anons i honestly have no idea why i didnt think of that...

[Anonymous No.3455498]

>>3455490
its all good anon
much luck

[Hardstones McFlintcock !!HyUHIeKB6fW No.3455686]

Critiques for the WIP?

[Anonymous No.3455986]

Tribute?

[Anonymous No.3456033]

>>3455686
colored lines would really make this pop

something like what >>3453420 did

[Anonymous No.3456034]

>>3455686
I think the tears are a bit too much? like, they're too cartoonishly exaggerated

make them a thinner subtle stream

[Anonymous No.3456519]

>>3436866
I dont get how thats an honest metric. From a customers perspective, whats stopping you from lying about the time it took, or taking longer than necessary?

[Anonymous No.3456823]

idk if im doing this lighting right

[Anonymous No.3456859]

>>3451860
what >>3452163 said. seriously, construction drawing is a fundamental tool that's been taught in art schools and books for decades. Just because you found one popular artist who uses it doesn't mean anybody else who uses it is copying them.

[Anonymous No.3457063]

>>3424288
Posting my WIP
feel free to shit on it as much as you want.
I will admit y traced the hands. because i suck at everything.

[Anonymous No.3457449]

>>3457063
well, it shows anon. The hands are completely different than the rest

Whjy are you fully rendering the body before you even have a face sketched out

you are approaching this art thing the wrong way

[Anonymous No.3457463]

>>3457063
Nobody has sex with their hands like that

Make him holding the ass or something

[Anonymous No.3457546]

>>3457449
I have the complete sketch on lines, but I hide it. Anyway the bad are not Soo bad, I think I can correct it at the end with levels and color adjustment.
>>3457463
She is using one hand to pump her hips, in the other one I'm gonna draw her bra as if she had recently removed it. But I would do that when I complete her figure

[Anonymous No.3457841]

>>3457463
>him...
anon....

[Anonymous No.3458346]

>>3453107
everything was great until i saw those HANDS

[Anonymous No.3458349]

>>3453107
I thought she had 3 boobs. Darken the value of the left arm or separate it more (preferably the latest)

[Anonymous No.3458437]

>Draw lewds
>Get too immersed in the concept of the drawing and have to stop to find something to fap too
>Afterwards lose all motivation to draw and stop until later

I'm never going to make it because I only want to draw when I'm horny and lose all interest in drawing afterwards

[Anonymous No.3458520]

Is this thread still alive?