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>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to draw Anime?
ctrl+f artbook thread for books
>Can I get another source?
Y̶o̶u̶ ̶n̶e̶e̶d̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶k̶n̶o̶w̶ ̶J̶a̶p̶a̶n̶e̶s̶e̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶u̶n̶l̶o̶c̶k̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶s̶e̶c̶r̶e̶t̶s̶ ̶f̶r̶o̶m̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶i̶n̶.̶
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fdt2GaZVIpY [Embed]
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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Remember have proper posture when art-ing or you'll end up having to go to the doctor for 2 shots and a liquid pad to your back.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1p1wiJZpWSc [Embed]

>> No.3424250
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3424250

Last drawing I did, of a friend's OC. Crits? They would be really helpful! I'm planning on coloring this.

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>> No.3424258

>>3424250
Learn straights and curved concept. ur character is too blocky and visually unappealing

>> No.3424260

I don't post in or visit this thread I just wanted to say NICE fucking taste whoever did the OP image, REDLINE is the best movie ever made

>> No.3424264

>>3424260
Not your personal blog, fuck off unless you have something useful to say nobody fucking cares about your input we have other cancerous sites like DA or Tumblr for you to suck dicks on and play ass grab to make you feel funny in the pants because "sempai noticed me!" kys.

>> No.3424267

>>3424258
But I'm not going for naturalistic soft curves and angles, I'm going for harder angles. Does this change your crit? I'm not really hamming for appealing, I want it to be more visually interesting than straight up appealing.

>> No.3424269

>>3424264
eat a dick, cunt

>> No.3424276
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>>3424260
Redline IS the best movie ever made. Good fucking taste nyugga

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>>3424276
>>3424264
My actual opinion is that the contrast and character design is actually the strongest suit of that movie, [visually] artistically, although the angle-to-softness ratio is also very appealing.

Love the story and writing though.

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>>3424279
Whoops, meant to respond to >>3424260

Here's some good art, some Moebius

>> No.3424292

>>3424284
this is bad

>> No.3424295
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>>3424292

>> No.3424305

>>3424292
Are you a fucking crazy person?

>> No.3424330

>>3424267
Not that anon, but he is right. Your drawing is really stiff and comes off a bit lifeless. Your style should work with the scene you want to portray, not against it. You can keep the blocky style, but you need to mind where you place your curved lines, it will help with the gesture. Maybe the problem lies in your inking process. Have you tried doing lose underlying sketches? Could be worth trying out.

If you just want to be visually interesting instead of being illustrative, I'd suggest to make the forms even more abstract and really push the style. At the moment it's too unpolished to be either really interesting, nor appealing.

I do, however, think you have something going with that style, regardless what others may think about it. So keep going, but try to figure out what you want to convey with your drawings. It feels like you just want to be original for the sake of it.

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>>3424330
> You can keep the blocky style, but you need to mind where you place your curved lines, it will help with the gesture. Maybe the problem lies in your inking process. Have you tried doing lose underlying sketches? Could be worth trying out.

Thanks, I'll try to consider more curves, or where I put them more carefully. I do do underlying, loose sketchwork, then draw in more confident lines over that.

>If you just want to be visually interesting instead of being illustrative, I'd suggest to make the forms even more abstract and really push the style. At the moment it's too unpolished to be either really interesting, nor appealing.

Hmm. What are the strong and weak points of this drawing, would you say?

>I do, however, think you have something going with that style, regardless what others may think about it. So keep going, but try to figure out what you want to convey with your drawings.

Thanks, preciate it. But maybe youre right, because usually when I draw I just make up a pose piece by piece, I usually don;t think of the pose I want to draw before I start drawing. Maybe that will help me.

>It feels like you just want to be original for the sake of it.

While I do value novelty for novelty's sake, I think making good art is more than that.

Here is another piece of mine for reference, less stylized, this is more like my "realism" style, less angular. yes, it;'s crowded, it;s meant to be, its at a far flung future "utopian crosswalk".

>> No.3424398

>>3424376
Huh. This is actually a lot more lively and appealing. Honestly, I like this a lot better than your other drawing. It's more dynamic, interesting and honest. But I know you want to go into another direction and I accept that - do what you want.

And regarding
>What are the strong and weak points of this drawing, would you say?

I'll keep my answer short; I think the underlying issue is not your lack in skill, but experience. Just try to draw in that new style of yours a lot, figuring out what works.

>> No.3424434

>OP pic isn't even from the last thread

>> No.3424629

>>3424376
>>3424250
I thought it looked great imo

>> No.3424646
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3424646

tfw no bf
tfw i still cant draw a proportionate chubby body

>> No.3424662

>>3424646
>tfw i still cant draw
ftfy

>> No.3424677

>>3424646
Yikes.

>> No.3424683

>>3424243
alternative compared to what?

>> No.3424711

>>3424683
>Eastern and Western stylization
stuff that's not that

>> No.3424738

>>3424711
That's pretty subjective. I would put anything in here into either beginner or one of those two categories.

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>>3424243
how do i draw more appealing bodies?

>> No.3424782

>>3424781
Make it curvier and thicker.

>> No.3424783

>>3424264
who hurt you faggot? gtfo here you fucking crab, failed to be aborted by their mom, basement dwelling, pathetic excuse for a human, dipshit.

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>>3419550
yet another one. after countless hair pulling.

>> No.3424808

>>3424796
your hands and feet are so bad

>> No.3424826

>>3424808
>>3424796
I like the feet stylization, but the fingers are like 30% too short.

>> No.3424838

>>3424796
beautiful

>> No.3424857

>>3424796
>tumblr nose

>> No.3424860

>>3424857
not really

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>> No.3424907

>>3424796
fingers are stub
and so are your toes!

>> No.3424908

>>3424860
your right, their not. They look more like pinched clown noses

>> No.3424929

>>3424646
>Those depressing twitter followers
I prefer your anime drawing but draw more furry porn

>> No.3424930

>>3424243
I just watched this movie last night, fucking amazing stuff

>> No.3424958

>>3424292
see >>3424292

>> No.3424981

>>3424930
its not a movie, it;s an anime

>> No.3424982

>>3424981
It is an animated movie, you dork. No one said it's not an anime.

>> No.3424985

>>3424982
animes dont count as movies

>> No.3424988

>>3424985
>animes dont count as movies
It's a damn good movie, I urge everyone to watch it

>> No.3424993

>>3424985
Are you retarded? Animated movies are still motion picture. And since Redline is not a serialized format and was shown on the big screen, it is, by definition, a movie. According to your logic stopmotion and 3D animated films wouldn't be movies either.

>> No.3424996

>>3424988
a damn good anime you mean

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>>3424250
I like this style a lot!

Some things I can suggest to you:

-You should focus on consistency: left arm and foot are different from the right ones, in terms of anatomy and sizes.

-The tangent between the hair and the eye makes the expression unclear. Avoid tangents.

-Even if your style is stylized, use reference for drapery.

-Keep always in mind perspective. The sword doesn't have structure.

>> No.3425007

>>3424996
are you being Retarded on purpose?
Or are you just this mentally ill

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>>3425007
on purpose ;P

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>>3425012

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slowly getting back into digital

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>> No.3425069

>>3424646
Dont listen to those bitches this actually looks better than your other works but less neck now.
Give him neck to deepthroat some cock

>> No.3425070

>>3425001
This is really cool! Muchos gracias dude. Yes, after I was done drawing and uploading, I did notice the hands and feet were different/sizes, and that the sword wasn't lined up right from handle to blade. And that eye tangent.

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>>3425092
>implying anyone could get that disgustingly pig-fat in communist russia

>> No.3425121

>>3424885
there's something weird about the boobs but I can't pinpoint it. Other than that, it looks pretty neato

>> No.3425134

>>3424284
where's waldo?

>> No.3425162

>>3425025
Unless they're floating, their fee t shouldn't be drawn like that, and they're a little small. Do the pose yourself in a full body mirror and redo those feet. You're getting better though, you were really garbage but it looks like there is still hope for you, Yev.

>> No.3425171

>>3425109
Party leaders can and will

>> No.3425174

>>3424929
>>3425069
Thanks, but porn is not my thing.

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I don't know if this is the right thread or not, but I don't think it's worth to make a whole new thread for this. I'm looking for some artist with a style like pic related, somewhat realistic but still animesque

>> No.3425229

>>3425228
that's not animesque at all you fat faggot, go back to facebook you chumdupster

>> No.3425232

>>3425229
Wow, well you're needlessly angry holy fuck

>> No.3425234

>>3425232
you're needlessly fat you hamburger repository, you extra thick thick shake swallower.

here's a riddle, what goes as it comes?

you because you shit yourself when you cum.

>> No.3425243

>>3424264
>anon comments on art
>hurr not your personal blog
summer is coming boys

>> No.3425245

>>3425228
I can't name any off the top of my head, but god damn those lines are gorgeous. artist?

>> No.3425257

>>3425245
I don't know myself, I saved it a while ago

>> No.3425296

>>3425228
source is zakk_ccc@twitter

>> No.3425298

>>3425228
Not anime in the slightest. It's called semi realism

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woah fuckin wizards wrangling shit around

>> No.3425411

>>3425092
I like it, nice work anon

>> No.3425415

>>3425298
>semi realism

>facial features all stylized especially the nose
>even the hair
How is that semi realism? I get it looks like western work but yeah

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check out these idiots

>> No.3425420
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making some charms for upcoming events

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>>3425420
also working on a print but i'm not really sure what i'm even trying do with the ice and bg so any tips are appreciated

>> No.3425445

>>3425415
Well, semi-realism is a broad term. Everything that is stylized, but is not exaggerated, could be defined as semi-realistic. Classic disney and some capes' comics stuff, for example.

Anyway, that is literally a panel from a manga.

>> No.3425487

>>3424796
love these man

>> No.3425511

>>3425420
>>3425424
Sorry to be that guy but blog? I love it

>> No.3425513
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>>3425445
manga isn't anime though, as always i will refer you to even a monkey can draw manga

>> No.3425532 [DELETED] 

>>3425298
That's.. Exactly what it means.. Semi realistic artwork is still very much grounded in reality even though certain aspects of it are exaggerated. Anime just takes it way over the top so you can barely tell if the thing you're looking at is human. So yeah that drawing looks like a dude in his 30's-40's but his features are exaggerated to look more cartoony-esque hence the term "SEMI realism" because it looks realistic, but not really

>> No.3425536

>>3425415
That's.. Exactly what it means.. Semi realistic artwork is still very much grounded in reality even though certain aspects of it are exaggerated. Anime just takes it way over the top so you can barely tell if the thing you're looking at is human. So yeah that drawing looks like a dude in his 30's-40's but his features are exaggerated to look more cartoony-esque hence the term "SEMI realism" because it looks realistic, but not really

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>>3425532
>>3425536

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What should I fix before calling it a day?

>> No.3425859

>>3425420
everyone except uraraka looks pretty spot on. Her hair looks really wrong somehow but i mean you can still clearly recognise her. Real fucking good shit

>> No.3425864

>>3425420
What site do you use for creating charms?

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>>3425789
Looks like my attempts nto post are absolute garbage, good thing i saved the pre-post layers.

Anyhow how do I finish her without feeling I abandoned it?

>> No.3425884

>>3425865
Fix your neck https://youtu.be/b69fyAZGl50?t=894

There's a lot of other problems but it's time to just do a new piece. The calf, ankle, and foot are bad, so you might want to focus on those. forearm and hand come next although they're more difficult to learn. I don't know what you're doing at the shoulder, you wouldn't see such a prominent clavicle ever

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>>3425865
Here's a shitty redline that I couldn't post on a computer. Note the stretches and shifted things using the select tool on Paint.

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[sample text]

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what is wrong with this?

>> No.3425952

>>3425947
its a complete side profile so both eyes shouldnt be visible. oh and stop copying ruan jia

>> No.3425955

>>3425947
I actually really like this one.

>> No.3426001

>>3424250
It looks pretty cool, don't pay attention to these autistic crabs. Remember what actual pros says; finished, not perfect.

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>>3425418
DAMN BOI
THAT'S A THICC ASS BOI

>> No.3426005

>>3424250

the face/mouth kind of conflicts with the rest, which is quite good.

>> No.3426091

>>3426005
Are you saying the whole thing is quite good because of the contrast, or that the face/mouth detracts from the rest of it?

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18 year old woman

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>>3426175
she does look like she has juvenile arthritis

>> No.3426182

>>3426175
I do know animu head is way bigger than reality, but that kind of proportion is too much in my opinion... just imagine what she would look like when stands up.

>> No.3426191

>>3426176
>>3426182
Fucking lol, I really botched things in hindsight.

>> No.3426257

>>3424796
I follow your blog, and am really glad to see your art improving so much. Keep at it <3

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>> No.3427048

>>3427043
weird shift in values from hair to forehead, muddy colors all around with inconsistent values near the head/shoulder region, whats up with her foliage crown thingy?

>> No.3427239

>>3426146
Can I get this with a solid background colour

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>>3427239
Its kuvshin pick, i pops her

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>>3425411
Thanks anon!

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Just glad I drew something

>>3427364
very nice anon

>> No.3427391

>>3427364
Wonky anatomy, especially the torso which is way too short.

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Critiques on the progress so far?

>> No.3427556

>>3427245
spank

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>tfw ignored in the last thread
Purple lines are unfinished. I'm liking how it's looking so far.

>>3424250
Style reminds me of Gorillaz for some reason. Neat.

>>3424796
Like I said in the last thread. I love your linework and colors. The fingers feel a bit too short and I'm not a fan of the noses, but other than that it's fantastic imo. Give me your blog dammit.

>>3424885
Way too many lines on the hair.

>>3425913
Is this Tanya Degurechaff or some Girls' Frontline character or something? The pose and angle look very dynamic and the expression is great.

>>3425092
I love your style bogudar. I'd maybe just remove the lines on the upper part of the nose.

>>3425424
Blog dammit.

>>3426175
>On that day, mankind received a grim reminder

>> No.3427669

>>3427614
>Style reminds me of Gorillaz for some reason. Neat.

Holy shit, you have no idea how awesome that is to hear.

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*flick*

>>3427614
Looks good so far, anon. Only complaint I have is that the bellybutton looks misaligned but the shading might tell a different story.

>> No.3427980

>>3427614
The pose make it look like she's pregnant...

>> No.3427989

>>3427980
Get a gf

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>>3427989
Get a loomis book and read it *nip*

>> No.3428068

>>3427614
>Is this Tanya Degurechaff or some Girls' Frontline character or something?
>Girls' Frontline character
>my art looks convincingly like trashy mobage art
/making it/

>> No.3428071

>>3427245
If I take off that hair, how far does her forehead stick out?

>> No.3428077

>>3428068
Not him but my first thought was Tanya too desu

>> No.3428094

>>3428068
>trashy mobage art
Dude, that game have a shit ton of good artists.

>> No.3428099

>>3428094
Maybe he meant
>(trashy mobage) art
and not
>(trashy) mobage (art)

>> No.3428101

>>3428099
yes, that
mobage are by nature trashy

>> No.3428102

>>3426257
thank you. I'm sorry my blog is almost as good as dead right now. will upload more in the future.

>>3427614
for fingers, well I guess I failed miserably at foreshortening. and/or it was already short in the first place. damn... and tragically, I can't give up that putrid noses for some reason. here's my blog : https://legochalk.tumblr.com/

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>>3427245
>>3428071

>> No.3428123

>>3427864
>>3427980
Yeah, now that you guys mention it, there's definitely something off (or at least, unappealing) about the waist area.

>> No.3428153

>>3426135
>>3427364
Blog? Please

>> No.3428174 [DELETED] 
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I don't know how to draw arms, please send help.
>>3428123
Let's reduce it to basic shapes, the body is a rectangle with triangle end at the bottom. (You can make it look menly by widen the top or feminine by widen the bottom)
Instead of drawing a round line, draw a V shape down below.

>> No.3428182
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3428182

I don't know how to draw arms, please send help.
>>3428123
Let's reduce it to basic shapes, the body is a rectangle with triangle end at the bottom. (You can make it look menly by widen the top or feminine by widen the bottom)
Instead of drawing a round line, draw a V shape down below.

>> No.3428246
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>>3427391
Oh, you're right. I thought something was wrong.

>>3427614
Glad to read that! And I use these lines on nose in case, if I decide to color my drawings, but thanks for opinion.

>>3428153
https://paintberri.com/artist/Stellar
https://bogudar.deviantart.com/

>> No.3428639
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3428639

got kicked out of /beg/ :(

>> No.3428832
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This was a really quick lineart test i did in flash, but i added some bad colours, opinions?

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>>3428832
if you think they're bad why did you put them in
i think they're ok

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>>3428860
Just to make it so it didnt have a plain white background, and idk if i like the colours, i have mixed feelings about them, but thank you

>> No.3428893

>>3428832
shit style

>> No.3428895

>>3428893 thanks for the feedback I'll work to improve!

>> No.3428938
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>>3428639

I finished this nonsense

>> No.3428963

Yeah

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Meant to send this dragon and cockatrice

>> No.3428967
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First time posting here, hope this is the right thread. I’m aiming to work on semi cartoonish human figures. My goal is to get a baseline set so I can make a webcomic that is at least respectable. I drew this today, anything helps.

>> No.3428974

>>3428967
how fucking dumb do you have to be to miss the HUGE FUCKING STICKY on the way in and why do you expect any help if you haven't read it
and no, post in the beginner thread you faggot

>> No.3428988

>>3428967
>photo of the screen

Not gonna make it

>> No.3429080

>>3428974
>>3428988
chill out guys, dudes new.
this is why people fucking hate us.

>> No.3429082

>>3429080
wrong. hazing is a sacred duty.

>> No.3429084

>>3429080
fuck off to tumblr faggot

>> No.3429093

>>3429080
>us

>> No.3429094

>>3429093
>you

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3429197

uhhhhh
i need advice on drawing weird toon stuff
any ideas on reference material? stylistic stuff?
its probably easier to list the things i dont need to work on rather than the things i do, but anything that especially jumps out id appreciate feedback on.
https://drzootsuit.deviantart.com/

>> No.3429210

>>3429135
Go back to that other board you belong
(and stop drawing weird wiener-havers with tits and start drawing cute grills for heavens' sake)

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>>3429210
OOF
I have no idea what youre talking about

>> No.3429277

>>3429122
I like this

>> No.3429284

>>3427614
That’s some awful lineart.

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>> No.3429302

>>3429122
sick stuff!

>> No.3429322
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3429322

I've been redoing the painting process for hours and I'm still not satisfied with how it looks in terms of colors. Maybe I need to do more research on that chiaroscuro stuff or whatever.

>>3429122
>>3429292
I like these a lot.

>> No.3429333

>>3429322
>hours
>shows this garbage
yikes

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lol wip

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>> No.3429513 [DELETED] 

>>3424243
Any good resources for learning to draw more extreme stylized references? i.e. one piece or kill la kill

Or is it just a matter of collecting reference from them and just copying them until I learn?
I feel like I got facial structure down, the expressions are just stiff.

>> No.3429526

Any good resources for learning to draw more extreme stylized facial expressions? i.e. one piece or kill la kill

Or is it just a matter of collecting reference from them and just copying them until I learn?
I feel like I got facial structure down, the expressions are just stiff.

>> No.3429613

A very serious question here,
What makes a style more appealing than the other? I've noticed that sometimes the same type of image that I upload on social media gets more likes and comments than another. Even though they are practically the same regarding subject, only varying a bit in style.

>> No.3429615

>>3429526
The far end of that spectrum, extreme expressions, just look at old Looney Tunes cartoons, as well as episodes of Ren and Stimpy and Ed Edd n Eddy. Not exactly "realistic" faces per say, but you'll get a feel for what "extreme facial expressions" are. Then you can pull those ideas and principles back to drawing more realistic faces, or whatever you are trying to draw.

>> No.3429621

>>3429613
The best, most honest answer I can come up with has two parts:

A) it's going to be subjective for everyone

and

B) it actually has something to do with the ratio and use of angles and curves, color design, composition, contrast, gesture and expression, etc. In other words, every aspect of art. Just look at what makes YOUR favorite art "pop" to your eyes compared to other works, and ape that shit, and ape it well, and you'll be able to make fantastic art.

>> No.3429626

>>3429621
Interesting, sometimes I think I'm blind to what I'm creating. There are a few images for example, that when I'm done I just know that they are going to be more successful than the others. But I find it very hard to point out WHY these particular images will make people react differently. Perhaps it has to do with the subjective aspect as you mentioned, but it really bothers me not understanding why. I'll try and be more observant as you said.
Thanks for the advice man <3

>> No.3429649

>>3429080
>chill out guys, dudes new.
Fuck off newfag holy shit

>> No.3429679

>>3429284
Can you elaborate and point me in the right direction maybe?

>> No.3429687

>>3429679
Different person here, but I think it's bad mainly because the lines are overlapping and that weird ass colors that you used

>> No.3429728

>>3429333
Dude, I know right...

>> No.3429731

>>3429687
Both of that is temporary though.

I feel like I don't have a real sense of line weight yet and that I rely way too much on stabilizers

>> No.3429767
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Sketch im working on, dunno if this counts as /alt/ though. Pls gibe ideas, i never draw people so im lost there desu

>> No.3429772

>>3429767
>Pls gibe ideas, i never draw people
Draw more people from references.

>> No.3429773

>>3426135
I know there's a @ there in the pic but I can't make out the letters honestly, can you post your blog

>> No.3429777

>>3429772
good idea

>> No.3429793
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>>3428832
reminds me of this guy's art, except much worse

>> No.3429931

>>3429793
They look nothing alike, i will never get how people on /ic have such a shit eye for art. First if all the stylization if the body is alot different, so are the lines (not thin and smooth, instead their large and textured), the face, and style shape is also alot different, but wouldn't say one is better than the other, they are both orignal styles, but the picture you used is much more complex than the simplicity of the one anon did so of course it will look better to someone with little understanding.

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>>3425865

>> No.3430034

>>3429793
>>3429931
Agreed - these look nothing alike. The only similarity is that they both have lineart & flat colors.

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>>3425424
finished

>>3425864
i find makers through alibaba but i should let you know the turnaround time is pretty huge since it's china

>>3425511
>>3427614
https://twitter.com/Magister_EN

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self portriat kinda thing.

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>> No.3430201

bump

>> No.3430564

>>3430038
really sub par compared to regular stuff magister, ear is misplaced, finger to palm ratio is off, his legs arm is too short and perspective on wrist is off. The eyes are different in vertical height and the hair is a tad too vertical, the nostrils seem more akin to 2 incisions, the left ear has no place even being in view.

Big disappointment.

>> No.3430568

>>3430038
legs arm shouldve been LEFT arm

>> No.3430626

There's a higher than normal amount of anime+animehate threads on this board at the moment, when will it die down?

>> No.3430629

>>3430626
That happens every week. It's board culture. Get used to it.

>> No.3430691
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new fursona

>> No.3430696
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/beg/ told me to post here so here it goes. going to start cracking down on fundie studies but can't decide to start with more general stuff(gestures, proportions) or focus on specific parts for anatomy.

>> No.3430701
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>>3430696
another recent one.

>> No.3430740

>>3430696
start with general stuff, keeping the entire thing coherent without detail is far more important than having a medically accurate arm/elbow randomly placed where it doesn't make sense

>> No.3430809
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>>3429407
some progress today

>> No.3430811

>>3430809
Is that girl with bunny ears yours? If so, got any blogs?

>> No.3430882

>>3430809
Not bad.
Btw Luna is better than Ai.

>> No.3431063
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How do i draw hands?

>> No.3431064

>>3431063
With effort.

>> No.3431066

>>3430809
that neck is not centered on head properly..

>> No.3431067

>>3430809
Blog?

>> No.3431084

>>3431063
Use your own hands as reference

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>>3431084
why people didnt like this?

>> No.3431222
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3431222

why people didnt like this?

>> No.3431230

>>3430811
no it's kaguya luna and kizuna ai

>>3430882
ur not wrong

>>3431066
yeah on the to fix list

>>3431067
http://godsh0t.tumblr.com/

>> No.3431241

>>3431222
Anatomy is way off, composition and subject matter are boring, just overall not very appealing.

>> No.3431249
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>>3431241
o-ok

>> No.3431250

>>3431222
it looks good but it's boring

>> No.3431309

>>3431063
Very carefully

>> No.3431331

>>3431241
Redline it if you dare, crab

>> No.3431342

>>3431331
I believe this artist is competent enough to look at any ref and see the flaws.

>> No.3431345

>>3431342
Stop crabbing up the thread if you don't have the nuts to redline or post your own work.

>> No.3431347

>>3431345
lol ok

>> No.3431379

>>3431222
I like it

>> No.3431380

>>3430102
Is korn still a thing?

>> No.3431416

>>3431222
Why even post this in the alt thread?

>> No.3431429

>>3429084
>>3429649
>underage faggots

>> No.3431554
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im training making illustrations.

>> No.3431629

>>3431380
In my heart it is

>> No.3431691
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3431691

Need to study how to paint and shit because I cannot into it

>> No.3431807

after like 5 months of being mia, I feel like this board is still the exact same haha.

>> No.3431818

>>3431691
Face looks fine to me.

>> No.3431944

>>3431691
The linework need more, how do i say this, weight and shape?
Right now it feel too boring because the lines all look the same, no heavy or light parts.

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can someone help me with the arms please

>> No.3432042
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do the hands and arms look off?

>> No.3432043

>>3425298
Didnt know you could draw an anime. Gonna draw a movie today, any advice?

>> No.3432046

>>3432042
Blog? This is adorable.

>> No.3432049

>>3432042
>>3432027
The whole closer arm should be moved more into the body and the wrist a bit smaller.

>> No.3432065
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Lemme melt all your eyes with rough work

>> No.3432070
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>>3432046
naikonu.tumblr.com
i don't draw very often but am trying to change that

>>3432049
do you mean the elbow? i tried moving it in but couldn't get it to look any more right

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>>3432042
i think ur proportions were a lil off

>> No.3432082
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>>3432070

>> No.3432106
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>>3430809
probably as far as i can go since i leave to print this tomorrow

>> No.3432110
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I can't get this damn right hand and foot correct

>> No.3432119

>>3432106
Cool stuff, what's that 2D tempura shrimp about?

>> No.3432122

>>3432110
You're not grounding your character well enough, unless the foreground foot is supposed to be on a box or something.

>> No.3432127

>>3432070
You've improved a lot from a year ago. What did you do?

>> No.3432129

>>3432122
Yeaa.. its supposed to on the ground as well. I was trying to go for a more dynamic action pose

>> No.3432130

>>3432119
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGVecQEk-4Q

>> No.3432135

>>3432106
pretty clean, too bad kizuna is a shit tho

>> No.3432164
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3432164

I think my faces are getting a bit better!

>> No.3432172

>>3432164
>blob with hair and big eyes

"face" is a bit of a stretch

>> No.3432173

>>3432164
i dont think so bud, especially not with those shitty lines

>> No.3432174

>>3432172
post your art bozo

>> No.3432176

>>3432164
You are always getting better with each drawing.

>> No.3432180
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>>3432164
and some head proportions for you

>> No.3432182

>>3432164
These heads are nice, but think you should make use of thick and thin line strokes. Not sure what program is being used

>> No.3432211
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>> No.3432232
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i'd appreciate anatomy pointers, but if i could get some help with my colors that'd be cool too

>> No.3432238

>>3432164
very cute my dude, I want to pinch all your drawings

>> No.3432242

>>3432180
his heads honestly look better than that robotic shit

>> No.3432260

>>3432242
you must be new

>> No.3432275

>>3432232
I don't know much about anatomy so everything seems fine to me except that the eyes+eyebrows are too high up

>> No.3432280

>>3426135
google daijouvu. you'll get my twitter.>>3428153

>> No.3432281
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>> No.3432308

>>3427382
Cool beans, do you have any more?
Do you intend to finalize this one?

>> No.3432335
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>>3432211
opps did not realize the size of image.

>> No.3432484

fuck you all last time i posted here.

>> No.3432569

>>3432484
im sorry you did't get any attention, so atleast were clear that you're an attention whore and you're not in here for drawings sake.

>> No.3432648

>>3432082
thank you, this helped a lot

>>3432127
i've only drawn when i've posted (extremely infrequent), but i work with pixel art every day and i suppose that some of the skills i've developed in that area has transferred over to illustration

>> No.3432774

>>3432164
your chins are getting pointier!

>> No.3432781

>>3431222
I feel bad you always get shat on, and you've definitely improved.
Right now I can spot shes got no ankles, just fat rolled over, so put a bit more definition into it and that will be fine. Theres some other things on lighting and values but overall its a nice pic

>> No.3432823

>>3432135
say that to my face not online see what happens

>> No.3432839

>>3432106
>>3432823
you should round the corners on the youtube logo, looks weird with sharp corners

>> No.3432866
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its been one of those days

>> No.3432882

>>3432281
Not bad anon, keep working hard and post more.

>> No.3432884

>>3432823
Kizuna. is. shit, Bitch.

>> No.3432930

>>3432884
you told him online again

>> No.3433069
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3433069

i want to go into a more traditional style of manga
any suggestion on artists in that oldschool style?

>> No.3433151

>>3424781
not to roast, but post it in /beg/

>> No.3433188
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3433188

i know people using references isnt new but referencing this heavily? could it be considered plagiarism

>> No.3433199

>>3433188
phew lad

>> No.3433208

>>3433188
Why would it be? Not only are the poses clearly not traced, the figures themselves are bulked up considerably. I would probably let people know what the original reference image was, but this is far from plagiarism.

>> No.3433211

>>3433188
yes report to art police

>> No.3433214

>>3433208
>clearly not traced
It was traced and changed by distortion tools.

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>>3433214
>It was traced and changed by distortion tools.

>> No.3433432
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help, I'm drowning in frustration at where I'm at as an artist

>> No.3433485

>>3431250
I see

>>3431379
T-thanks


>>3431416
Everything is unreal but the values. At least this is what i was aiming for. The face for example is really anime like.

>>3432781
Thanks, this was helpful. People here always bashes me but i like it, remind me that i have a lot to improve, though im not having much time lately because a disgraceful art college. In my country its free, but still desgraceful.

>> No.3433502

>>3433188
how brainless can you get

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>>3433214
>It was traced and changed by distortion tools.
The state of this board i swear.

>> No.3433592
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3433592

Some days you just feel like drawing robots

>> No.3433598

>>3433592
For fucks sake why did it decide to rotate my drawing 90 degrees -_-

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3433608

>>3427614 Slowly working away at this

>> No.3433610

>>3433432
holy shit what the fuck am i looking at?

>> No.3433611

>>3433608
How did you do the nets?

>> No.3433617

>>3433611
I just found a transparent fishnet texture and bent it into shape with Mesh Warp (CSP). I'll probably redraw it manually later but I wanted to have a placeholder to see what it'd look like.

>> No.3433621

>>3433608
Your work looks very familiar, did you have a blog?

>> No.3433623

>>3433621
You're probably mistaking me for someone else since I haven't posted in ages, but it's @zixeleven on Instagram/Tumblr

>> No.3433625

>>3433069
just lurk the "oldschool" tag on a booru of your choice

>> No.3433632

>2 days and still can't draw arms
T-This is harder than i thought.

>> No.3433653
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>>3433632
I believe in you anon

>> No.3433669

>>3432281
Hey thats pretty cool anon. The legs seem a bit long but it looks pretty good. You got a blog or something? I like what I see and want to see more of your stuff.

>> No.3433719

>>3433598
Taking a picture on a phone does that, I always copy paste to paint to save just to get rid of all the data settings that phones give to pictures.

>> No.3433744
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>> No.3433760 [DELETED] 

>>3433744
head is too big, shoulders too big wide and big, chode right arm(her right), nose too low

>> No.3433761

>>3433744
head is too big, shoulders too wide and broad, chode right arm(her right), nose too low

>> No.3433763

>>3433744
What the fuck?

>> No.3433771

>>3433744
Fucking degenerates i swear.

>> No.3433809

>>3433744
fishes don't bleed like this

>> No.3433833

>>3433744
The palette reminds me of PC-98 and DOS games, which is quite a comfortable look.

>> No.3433864

>>3433623
Yup, you're definitely that guy.

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>> No.3433890

>>3432106
love this, but fix those tangents please!

>> No.3434172

>>3433864
Huh, interesting. What made it recognizable? I don't feel like I have a semblance of a style yet so I'm curious.

>>3433879
I love that helmet design.

>> No.3434256

>>3433608
did you use a 3D model for this

>> No.3434373

>>3434172
The way you shade. It is very uncanny.

>> No.3434386

>>3433879

Clean up your lines. While it isn’t a bad drawing, it’s messy and that detracts from the picture

>> No.3434404

>>3434373
O-Okay ;_; Any advice in improving?

>>3434256
No

>> No.3434618

>>3432335
cool, legs of the diver tho..

>>3432281
feet should have been crazy amount bigger dud.

>>3429461
you need model drawing from life, you're gonna improve crazy if you start going

>>3424796
damn goood shit, the noses and some of those hands and feets are unappealing tho just like some anons pointed out.

>> No.3434677

>>3434618
I think the feet on >>3432281 look quite good and are an appealing size for her stature. It's an exaggeration that works, since Midna is dwarf-sized.

Also judging by the poses in >>3429461
life drawing is already exactly what he's doing, what gave you a different impression than that?

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Help, I was testing the oil brush but I don't know if this looks good or bad.

>> No.3434784

>>3434772
>oil brush
What program?

The coloring itself looks nice, if a bit flat. 02 herself looks a bit chubby, mostly due to the arms.

>> No.3434874

>>3434784
Clip Studio Paint.

>> No.3434918

>>3434874
So what advantages does it offer? Feels just like a regular round brush to me.

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>>3434918
I just used it for the wrinkes of the sweater and shades.

>> No.3435010

>>3434772
This is yours? This looks great. You got a blog?

>> No.3435028

>>3435010
That's by far the best thing I made, you will be disapointed with my blog.

>> No.3435029

>>3435028
Then there's no reason to be disappointed if you're doing better than you were previously. I'll be glad to follow your future endeavors too.

>> No.3435042

>>3435029
fair enough, well here's my twitter.
twitter.com/M4nzel

>> No.3435065

>>3428938
sticky senpai?

>> No.3435126

>>3435065
r u sating he should read the sticky?

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>>3435126
>pic related
No no no lmao. I was referring to the artist Stickysheep. The way anon draws reminds me a lot of her work.

>> No.3435158

>>3434618
>legs of diver
i still cant see it, whats wrong? knees too low?

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Starting doing some character designs for funsies, while also trying to branch out, and away, from my weeb art. Feedback very much appreciated.

>> No.3435171

>>3435157
x) was about to say.

>> No.3435176

>>3435161
the crown looks gay

>> No.3435179

>>3435161
The crown look a bit too, how do i say, clunky? And doesn't sit on her head too well to me, maybe make it more neat and easier on the head will help. Excuse him >>3435176
Also maybe saturate the eyes color more for it to pop out.
Good jobs though, any pic with finished line work?

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>>3433653
T-Thanks anon, i will try harder tomorrow, only 1 arm left!

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START THE NEW THREAD BEFORE I PISS MESELF

>> No.3435546

>>3433744
I can't believe I'm saying this but there's something very appealing about it. Evokes the feeling of a low-budged horror VN or something. Even the picture background adds to the feel.

>> No.3435550

new thread >>3435549

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