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Anonymous Mon May 7 01:49:02 2018 No.3417228 [Reply] [Original]

Something looks off with this character's head, can you guys point it out?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 02:04:29 2018 No.3417244 >>3417228 She has autism

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 03:40:47 2018 No.3417325 Well, it's highly stylised, but I'll try. She could use more cranium.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 03:46:51 2018 No.3417328 >>3417228 She nee's some Milk!

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 04:05:47 2018 No.3417344 >>3417228 The hat is crooked? Looks fine to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 04:24:31 2018 No.3417354 File: 176 KB, 474x594, 20180507_042251.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 it doesn't have to be nearly as big but you get the point.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 04:59:47 2018 No.3417371 >this is supposed to be a hedghog

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 15:01:22 2018 No.3417996 File: 52 KB, 474x594, lines.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 Just the line under the neck seems off, seems fine otherwise.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 15:28:11 2018 No.3418061 >>3417228 It seems Wirt has been turned into a sloth, also where's Greg ?

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 15:31:41 2018 No.3418072 >>3417228 The near eye is hanging down too far, even for a "quirky" cartoon.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 15:41:30 2018 No.3418093 this shit made me smile, well done OP

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 16:20:44 2018 No.3418148 File: 161 KB, 465x591, fghjkk.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] fixed

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 16:24:48 2018 No.3418162 >>3417228 Try drawing your character from multiple angles and get a sense of what you want them to look like in 3D. Once you do that figuring out what's wrong in any particular pose is easier.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 16:27:32 2018 No.3418168 >>3418162 its not op's character anon, its a shitty cartoon character from a show

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 17:43:58 2018 No.3418323 File: 36 KB, 474x594, calartscharactercorrection.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 eh fuck it

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 18:17:20 2018 No.3418373 File: 126 KB, 828x1000, 1497688737012.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 Yes, it's hiding its transcranial brain extension with a silly hat instead of flaunting it to the sub-300 IQ mortals.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 18:45:22 2018 No.3418416 >>3418373 kek, nice

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 20:22:49 2018 No.3418506 File: 294 KB, 1000x714, i'm mentally ill.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 There goes a redline bro. As you can see, everything you did is shit

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 20:33:08 2018 No.3418512 >>3418373 >>3418506 I would watch this version of the show

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 20:36:28 2018 No.3418514 >>3418506 never stop posting

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 21:28:22 2018 No.3418566 File: 53 KB, 1600x900, ooo.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 looks like

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 21:29:48 2018 No.3418569 >>3418566 you think this is intentional? i think there's a good chance it is

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 21:30:29 2018 No.3418570 >>3417228 >, can you guys point it out the shoulders, waist , hears and eyes aren't on the same perspective lines

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 21:39:32 2018 No.3418581 >>3418569 watching that thing, it doesn't seems like any of the facial expression are intentional, it's extremely hard to read any mood in this.

>>	Anonymous Mon May 7 21:40:41 2018 No.3418583 >>3418581 thank you for your sacrifice

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 01:44:15 2018 No.3418782 >>3417228 someone make a my style your style out of this, I don’t have the template

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 04:33:16 2018 No.3418968 >>3418782 This I'm on mobile right now

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 10:04:26 2018 No.3419268 File: 457 KB, 1462x773, 1505212041941.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3418782 >on /ic/ >can't draw 2 lines and some text

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 16:40:51 2018 No.3419877 >>3418323 Anons fix what big city alumni couldn't bother with. You literally made it look like a classic cartoon instead of retarded bullshit.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 19:18:09 2018 No.3420051 >>3419268 It only works if it’s the authentic template

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 19:23:33 2018 No.3420061 File: 177 KB, 474x594, 1525672142175.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3418323 It's the weird neck ending which gives her that downy look

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 19:34:37 2018 No.3420070 File: 1.99 MB, 320x240, 1525109934774.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3418506 That's great, I love it

Anonymous Tue May 8 20:07:08 2018 No.3420108

>>3419877
Thanks, Preston Blair goes a long way.
>>3420061
I originally thought the character was a llama so when I found out it was a hedgehog, I'd figure, I'd go more humanoid since it appears what ever animal it's supposed to be didn't really matter when it came to the design so I tried to imply the back of the cranium overhangs a bit like a human. In short: eh fuck it.

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 20:08:02 2018 No.3420111 File: 156 KB, 808x584, 1525042086116.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>3417228 >>3418782

>>	Anonymous Tue May 8 22:05:21 2018 No.3420269 Reminder that Julia Potts has done better. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01gF4ZTZbsE

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