PORN THREAD

[Anonymous No.3373259]

Porn thread for people who like drawing porn.
Hide degeneracy you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.
Don't know where to start? Check the updated sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#
Ask off topic questions in the question thread - >>3334384

Previous Thread - >>3345365

[Anonymous No.3373270]

First.

[Anonymous No.3373271]

>>3373270
Also a futa version

[Anonymous No.3373275]

[Anonymous No.3373277]

[Anonymous No.3373376]

[Anonymous No.3373378]

>>3373376
Meant to type if the hand to the left will pass off as ok or should I just completely redo it

[Anonymous No.3373388]

Is there any way to make a quick buck without already established gallery/fanbase?

I've never did porn before, and I've lost my job, and drawing is the only thing I can do, and I'm going to starve to death in 2 weeks.

[Anonymous No.3373430]

[Anonymous No.3373434]

>>3373388
Are you on public assistance, and can you contact your local food shelter? Apply for every service job you can think of, and/or apply for volunteer work with Habitat for Humanity or any other local nonprofit organization that appears in your search.

Do you have any examples of your work?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3373439]

I'd greatly appreciate help with the shadows. Once those are blocked in to satisfaction, I will merge layers and begin the paint-overs and the detail work over the line work.

[Anonymous No.3373442]

>>3373430

[Anonymous No.3373464]

>>3373439
You over rendered this so much and it looks ugly as fuck.

>>3373388
I suggest getting a real job.

[Anonymous No.3373467]

>>3373430
Looks pretty good but the tentacle of this size is not gonna leave any empty spots in her pussy.By which i mean the two cavities on the sides of the tentacle right before the womb. I dont think that this is what it would look like and makes her pussy feel huge and loose. Also why is the tip so hard that it can press the womb like that without squishing itself against it.

[Anonymous No.3373474]

>>3373439
Get rid of the black likeart (if thats not your plan anyways), make it fit the skin color. And holy fuck did you overrender her face. Also ugly skin colors and the most idiotic red for the tip of a dick i have ever seen. Please

[Anonymous No.3373576]

>>3373439
Faces are bland and uninteresting, skin colors are bad, particularly for pit

Warm up your shadows

[Anonymous No.3373586]

>>3373439
Straight guys really don't know how to draw appealing dicks...
I suppose it doesn't matter though.

[Anonymous No.3373684]

[Anonymous No.3373687]

>>3373586
Yikes.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3373691]

>>3373586
>>3373576
>>3373474
>>3373464
>>3373464
A step closer to fulfilling my promises.

Let me know if the skin tones are an improvement, and what about them that needs work.

[Anonymous No.3373697]

>>3373691
to me (a /beg/) it was already cool enough, but it does seem better now to me

[Anonymous No.3374122]

They get bigger and bigger. Probably some kind of disease.

[Anonymous No.3374130]

Lolis

[Anonymous No.3374150]

>>3373691
1:Brown toenails look gross
2:Look up refs of gold jewelry...pick one and use the colors to paint the gold parts. Yours is too muddy with too many highlights on some parts and none on others.
3: You have the sunlight coming from behind them, but they're lit strongly from the front as if from a spotlight which washes out the sunlight. Light them with the apparent light (sunlight) and add less intense lighting to show midtones and shadows from the front.
4: Her nipples are too dark for having such fair skin. Look up redhead nipples like Faye Reagan. Less highlighting on the nipples they look like chocolate sauce.
5: Have her hair cover up his foot
6: His arm length is all wonky. An easy rule to remember is...the length of the forearm + the hand to the middle knuckle (don't add finger length) is the same length from the top of the shoulder to the elbow. Loomis lists these measurements.

[Anonymous No.3374210]

>>3373691
>>3374150
I'm sure Salty-Kun will chime in shortly and say i'm not good enough to give redlines, but these are the things i'd immediately change.

[Anonymous No.3374221]

>>3373691
>>3374150
I'm sure Salty-Kun will chime in shortly and say i'm not good enough to give redlines, but these are the things i'd immediately change.

[Anonymous No.3374240]

>>3373684
looks fine, face is bad though

[Anonymous No.3374392]

Some sketches of mine ! Don't hesitate to C&C ! :)

[Anonymous No.3374434]

Loli and shota are not allowed, right?

[Anonymous No.3374442]

[Anonymous No.3374460]

>>3373270
Pretty appealing overall but her arms are bending the wrong way.

[Anonymous No.3374472]

>>3374460
that's because the only appealing part was traced

[Anonymous No.3374478]

Finished this WIP from the last thread. Light my shit up.

[Anonymous No.3374524]

>>3373271
That dick is distracting. Consider coloring it the same dark red lines as the vagina and asshole. The coloring style is even different so it looks like a fan-edit.

[Anonymous No.3374602]

>>3374472
Nobody cares if i trace. I still have thousands of followers who love my content. Patreon support, and speedpaints showing me drawing from scratch that looks the same quality. Its just a time saver.

>>3374460
Ah now that youve pointed it out i really want to fix the arms. Thanks.

>>3374524
Eh i dont see it. I'll keep it the way it is.

[Anonymous No.3374607]

>>3374602
Someone has an undeserved ego.

[Anonymous No.3374622]

>>3374602
wait, people still pay you even though they know you trace!? Shit, I gotta make my own patreon and start tracing too...

[Anonymous No.3374626]

>>3374622
i mean really aren't we all just tracing from our minds?

[Anonymous No.3374641]

>>3374607
Somebody is going to stay a bitter crab artist while I remain successful.

>>3374622
Yes. But i dont trace entire figures. Only a foot or a vagina here or there when i have trouble on them.

That and people really like the comics i make. Just have a fun style, and make sure never to completely rely on your references to get your point across.

Id even recommend sketching over your references, then making a sketch over that. Before inking.

[Anonymous No.3374701]

>>3374626
I am unable to find the other pic with the tiger that illustrates this problem more clearly, so here's this one.
Yeah. Tracing. Right.

[Anonymous No.3374725]

[Anonymous No.3374909]

>>3373439
What's wrong with you, man?

So you took a cute, innocent pairing of a presumably adult looking goddess and a child hero and made it into a porn. Okay, fine, there's a whole genre for this, maybe you're into that, it's the law enforcement's business, not mine. But then you made him all that built, what for? To avoid the blame for drawing child porn? But then you also avoided your core audience, you're now left with some weird-ass cosplay starring a manlet. Good job.

Then you decide to alienate any potential fans with that god awful face on Palutena. It's not awful in itself, it just doesn't fit here. Look, people won't look for uncanny valley western reinterpretation of Kid Icarus, they'll vastly prefer styles closer to the original, i.e. cutesy and anime. Yes, for porn too.

On the technical side it's baffling how you decided to care for anatomical details at the rendering stage while keeping the flawed outlines intact. You should work on your priorities.

[Anonymous No.3374913]

>>3373684
You captured the ugliness of real life shemales splendidly. Well done.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3374923]

>>3374909
Feigning moral outrage aside, its been well recieved on the Discord channels throughout the process. The outlines are being replaced with values, as well as several expressions to work through what feels natural.

You're in the same camp as the rest of us, so get comfy.

[Anonymous No.3374925]

>>3374909
perhaps its just a huge lady, i could see how people would be into that, like from a freudian standpoint

[Anonymous No.3374934]

>>3374909
this is a joke right

[Anonymous No.3374944]

>>3374909

[Anonymous No.3374972]

>>3374150
Let the man have his brown nipples

[Anonymous No.3375007]

what to improve /pornic/?

[Soggy No.3375034]

>>3374472
>>3374622
>>3374641
Wait are you guys talking about "pose tracing"? or just a 1 to 1 with no changes?

[Anonymous No.3375036]

>>3375007
Finish the linework first, but the bigfest issue is her chest and neck. Flip the drawing; her head and neck looks like its position was shifted three inches away from her centerline. You do not understand how to draw the ribcage in three dimensions. Her right breast looks okay, but the right one make her pectoral look overtrained. Worse, it looks as if gravity doesn't weight it upon her ribcage at all.

The expression falls flat, but focus on that when you correct, then finish the job.

[Anonymous No.3375201]

>>3374972
This. They're hot

[Anonymous No.3375252]

just looking for a general critique, anything immediately pop out as wrong?

[Anonymous No.3375257]

>>3375252
Back to /beg to learn gesture and basic shapes. The disconnected right cheek alone is gonna haunt me.

[Anonymous No.3375274]

>>3375252
I think the arm/hand is nicest thing you've got there, but the face is unappealing to me and the way the legs are connecting to the hips is no good
get refs
keep grindan anon

[Anonymous No.3375278]

>>3375274
I think the main problem is the fact that her ass cheeks look like she's sitting down but her legs are there

[Anonymous No.3375308]

wow that was quick, thanks for the feedback

>>3375257
not quite sure what you mean, like the cheek itself goes out too far or more like the orbitally socketty area?


>>3375274
i ref'd a pornstar with a comically big ass but i changed the legs so that makes sense. also i draw a fuckton of hands so i'm glad it shows

>>3375278
shit you're totally right

[Anonymous No.3375427]

thoughts on my cute pet?

[Anonymous No.3375512]

Are people willing to pay for porn sketches? Something like these but cleaner lines and more lewd. Also, would PayPal be the best for accepting commissions and do they really shut people down for porn? Sorry, I'm really new to this.

[Anonymous No.3375537]

>>3375512
theyre going to have to be a little better (mostly draw bigger) than that and it lots of quantity before people will start paying

[Anonymous No.3375546]

>>3374909
Genuinely made me laugh. Sadly you're not entirely wrong.

[Anonymous No.3375547]

>>3375427
it's really good except for the feet make me feel weird. i think they're just small enough to look forshortened, but idk. also excuse my shitty redlining but i think most of her facial features are slightly misaligned

>>3375512
i'm interested in this as well

[Anonymous No.3375561]

>>3375427
i moved some shit around

also i'm new to this board so tell me if this kind of thing makes me a massive douchenozzle

[Anonymous No.3375567]

[Anonymous No.3375570]

>>3373439

[Anonymous No.3375571]

[Anonymous No.3375582]

>>3374478
- corpse Micky mouse gloves for hands
-vaginas dont look like that
-what is the lighting even
-those dicks look like horrible vegetables

[Anonymous No.3375609]

>>3375561
Nah, you just make her look like pokemon, but i see your point.

[Anonymous No.3375616]

>>3375609
shit that's because i'm the guy who drew dawn lmao

[Anonymous No.3375655]

[Anonymous No.3375670]

>>3375655
what the fuck did you do ahahahaha

[Anonymous No.3375674]

this me
>>3375512
are there any glaring anatomy issues, and can someone help me with the feet?

[Anonymous No.3375734]

Something I’m in the process of

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3375816]

Since pictures of Dawn and whatnot are being posted, figured I'd submit this to the firing line. Roast away, anons.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3375951]

>>3375816
Some adjustments.

[Anonymous No.3375953]

>>3375951
i wanna know how you made it 1/4 the resolution without noticing apparently

[Anonymous No.3375989]

>>3375034
Pose tracing.

[Anonymous No.3375993]

>>3373691
>>3374909

Why does she look so fucking mad lmao

[Anonymous No.3376023]

>>3375993
Are you autistic?
Srs question.
Thats not an angry expression like at all.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376026]

>>3375953
I confess I have no idea what the high holy hell occured.

[Anonymous No.3376080]

>>3376023
Are you? Those downward eyebrows obviously make her look angry. Im not sure if you have working eyes, might need to start wearing glasses kid.

[Anonymous No.3376088]

>>3375993
She's waiting for the artist to finish the peice so he can draw the sequel: Pit sticks it in.

[Anonymous No.3376101]

>>3373430
>tentacle penetrating the cervix
Men know this would be agonising and that you would likely pass out from the pain right?

Right?

[Anonymous No.3376133]

>>3376101
well she doesn't look very happy about it

[Anonymous No.3376150]

>>3376101
Have you ever been kicked in the balls before? No? Didn't think so.

[Anonymous No.3376161]

rip me to shreds bois

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376191]

>>3376161
Great body language; however she gives the kind of expression downing a tray of weed brownies would induce.

I suppose if she's trying to communicate that kind of self-absorbed "rainbows and chocolate unicorns in my mind" lucid experience the best she can to the world, after royal duties spur consumerist appetites, you have accomplished it.

However, it doesn't go well with pinups. Less with porn.

Go college thot grin or excited smile. Not "weed trip".

Also, her left breast (viewed as the one on our right, looks too small compared to the others.

[Anonymous No.3376194]

>>3376191
thank you, I was actually hoping to get crit on her expression. I was going for super aroused and ended up with 420blazeit.

[Anonymous No.3376200]

>>3376194
Keep it up, soldier. Fight the good fight for good porn.

[Anonymous No.3376291]

>>3375036
thanks

i think the lack of expression is mostly due to eyes and detail not drawn in

heres my approx skeleton - can you tell me how its wrong, drawing it out may help if you can

[Anonymous No.3376377]

>>3376150
What's your point?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376392]

>>3376291
The biggest issue here is the pose is incomplete.

First and foremost, you need to clarify what she is doing. Is she doing the splits and lowering herself onto a cock? Where is she resting her hands? Somewhere elevated?

Second, where is the light touching the form?

Third, her shoulder (awayfrom the viewer) would not disappear behind her breasts in this pose.

Fourth, widen her hips to fit anatomical purpose, as shown here.

Pay very close attention to the perspective of the hips and ribcage. You drew them as a flat isometric projection. Learning to draw them in simplified forms, in three dimensions, is key in developing that visual library needed to invent poses.

[Anonymous No.3376477]

>>3376101
holy fuck are you fucking retarded.
Its used in like 70% of all hentai, get over yourself. Ofcourse its not possible without major damage but thats not the fucking point you autist.
You are too fucking young to be here so blast off.

[Anonymous No.3376478]

>>3373467
Fixed, leaving it here

[Anonymous No.3376480]

And another

[Anonymous No.3376484]

>>3373388
get a burger flipping job. stop living in a bubble, moron.

[Anonymous No.3376490]

>>3376477
>mad little crabboi gets tizzled when called out on his bad anatomical knowledge

It's not the point. The purpose of pornography is to get you off, and there's nothing less sexy than massive internal organ damage, unless ofc you're an edgy faggot who pretends that he's into that, which you sound like you are :^)

[Anonymous No.3376495]

>>3376478
Oh man much better. Now her pussy feels tight, gripping onto that tentacle. Nice

>>3376480
That we cant see the bulge in the close up makes if feel kinda awkward, as if the rest of her body vanished. Also it feels like to me as if her buttocks are kinda missing in that close up but I dont know if you have tried that already and if the way you did it looks better or not.
Lastly I think the insides of her pussy and her ass look too perfect and symetrical and for a tentacle that can bend in any direction its awefully straight. I dont have a fitting image to show you what I mean sadly. The panel under the top right one in pic related kind of shows how the folds ( at least in the ass ) alternate on the sides and arent like a cirle going all around. Which looks a lot more atractive imo.
Sorry I hope you understand what I mean.
Otherwhise very nice.

[Anonymous No.3376499]

>>3376490
>and there's nothing less sexy than massive internal organ damage
you are a fucking autist. And im not the original artist.
You are still retarded but sure go ahead, tell us how a bulge or cervix penetration fetish is actually not sexy because it doesnt work in real life.

[Anonymous No.3376509]

>>3374923
If you post in places like H-F Discord, don't expect anyone to tell you the truth. Don't use that as a quality compass, man.

[Anonymous No.3376516]

>>3376490
this is either bait or you must be a complete idiot.

[Anonymous No.3376612]

>>3376080
Yeah you're definitely on the spectrum

[Anonymous No.3376681]

>>3376612
Spectrum of people who recognize your shitty art, yeah.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376746]

>>3376509
The criticism has been in-depth and very helpful, especially two anons who have offered excellent advice.

[Anonymous No.3376787]

>>3376681
I'm not the artist or the guy you replied to, but if you think downward eyebrows always means anger you are legitimately autistic or have no idea how to look at art.

[Anonymous No.3376855]

[Anonymous No.3376885]

>>3376681
Im mot even the artist you defensive sperg lol

[Anonymous No.3376890]

>>3376681
rekt

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376912]

>>3376681
Reply to me, you lily livered numbnutted dumpster of a human being, who can count his potential fathers down to his toes.

As entertaining watching this shit on the sidelines is, there's a point you gotta redirect to the proper source.

Go ahead. While your mother's counting one of your fathers' hush money between blows, tell me what you think of me. Please elaborate on your statements towards some useful criticism.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376931]

>>3376855
Do you have the source of the previous version, for comparison's sake?

[Anonymous No.3376935]

>>3376912
>>3376885

lol youre so mad

[Anonymous No.3376941]

>>3376935
Arent you getring tired of being wrong all the time

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376946]

>>3376935

*yawn* Not for the reasons you believe, but do build upon this into criticism I can use. The other anons sent me down the right direction. Surely you can do the same?

[Anonymous No.3376947]

>>3376931
No, sorry. It wasn't that different but the arms were worse.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3376974]

>>3376855
1. The tip of the lefthand man's cock, either by hasty erasure or some other reason, looks covered in warts.

2. There is a...charm hidden in the expression, but it doesn't scream delicious meat or mischeviousness. Play around with it some more. The tongue is too far out and the assymetric half wink, bottom-up in the eye, doesn't feel tight

3. The righthand man's cock looks bent. I do understand he is in the process of getting hard (maybe she gives him a naughty expression to help him up), but it doesn't look right.

Suggestion, so use or discard whatever feelts right here, but she clearly favors that righthand man's package, so have them show an appreciation for each other. Hand on the shoulder from the right or the guy on the left squeezing her breast? Add a pinch of personality to them.

And maybe add a few wrinkles in the thighhigh socks, bunched around her toes?

[Anonymous No.3377001]

>>3376974

The dicks look weird because I was trying to give them a monsterous look a la bad dragon with lots of weird bumps or whatever

great advice though I appreciate the feedback, I'll work on it!

[Anonymous No.3377078]

>>3376746
and yet it still looks like shit.

[Anonymous No.3377108]

[Anonymous No.3377112]

[Anonymous No.3377153]

[Anonymous No.3377167]

Looking for critiques. How do I make sex more.,, sexy? lmao

I mean, it looks good enough to me, but I feel it lacks that *really* lewd quality that makes you instantly want to jerk off

What am I doing wrong? Where to focus to improve? I want to make drawing porn basically a full time job.

[Anonymous No.3377173]

[Anonymous No.3377194]

[Anonymous No.3377199]

>>3377194
all that mirrored symmetry is unappealing

[Anonymous No.3377210]

>>3376499
It's about as sexy as c&b torture to the average man when you have a cervix you colossal autist degenerate.

[Anonymous No.3377235]

Anyone have any experience making money in niche fetishes communities?

[Anonymous No.3377260]

>>3377167
You're drawing what from the thumbnail seems to be an underage boy sucking off a man. That is what's wrong.

[Anonymous No.3377262]

>>3377260

[Anonymous No.3377265]

>>3377260
I sucked men off when I was underage. I don't see your point.

[Anonymous No.3377268]

>>3377194
stop

[Anonymous No.3377290]

>>3377260
moralfag pls go

[Anonymous No.3377330]

>>3377078
I know right.

[Anonymous No.3377335]

>>3377268
ah man, all these other assholes tried, but you rando, yours was the one that finally made me quit

[Anonymous No.3377340]

>>3377194
>>3377335
You are the hero /ic/ deserves.

[Anonymous No.3377423]

>>3377335
Genuine question, why do you never listen to all the critique and advice given in all the threads you post to? Don't you ever want to improve? Are you really satisfied being this mediocre?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3377444]

Submitting for a round of critiques.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3377446]

WIP 1/2

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3377449]

WIP 2/2

[Anonymous No.3377465]

>>3377423
mostly because there's very little critique given, when people have shown me anatomy pointers in the past, like how chest or arm muscles could be improved, i've taken it to heart, but i don't consider 'neck yourself' to be critique

[Anonymous No.3377471]

>>3377465
well that's a lie bc i seen u posting the same thing for over a year now n the only thing that changed is u added dashed lines on the arms.

[Anonymous No.3377477]

>>3377465
Have you uh...
decided to fix the foreheads yet?

[Anonymous No.3377482]

>>3373378
redo the face, then study hands and redo them both.

[Anonymous No.3377533]

>>3377465
Bull fucking shit no critique was given. People have told you time and time again what is wrong with your shitty excuse for art.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3377539]

>>3377465
Go to quickposes.com and draw a bunch of faces for five minutes each.

Your characters all look like siblings fucking each other in the ass.

[Anonymous No.3377604]

>>3377444
Her fingers are too short compared to the thumb.

>>3377449
Damn, that's a nice naughty pose and expression. Please tell me it won't have any makeup or nail polish when finished.

[Anonymous No.3377780]

>>3377194
these stupid huge ball sacks are so disgusting.

[Anonymous No.3377875]

>>3377444
Start doing some perspective study. And with that I don't mean "keep drawing porn and eventually you'll get good a few years from now". Pick up a book and learn what perspective actually is.
ALL of your artworks have the same problem where you can't keep perspective and proportions consistent.

[Anonymous No.3377878]

>>3377539
Dude, you really don't have the right to mock him. You guys are on a very similar level when it comes to sheer fundamentals.

[Anonymous No.3378187]

>>3377335

looks like cedric the sorcerer

[Anonymous No.3378330]

>>3377423
Kek are you kidding me? Of course they don't. People have been telling them the faces they draw are ugly as fuck for a long time and they've never fixed it or even attempted to. Besides the stupid as fuck giant balls, when the character's faces can't be seen their art suddenly improves.

>>3377533
this desu

[Anonymous No.3378354]

>>3377878
The difference is that Hardstone is at least trying to get better, BigBallsFag shit hasn't changed at all in over a year, and him posting his shit isn't about improving...its about foisting his horrific faggot drawings on everyone else and watching them bitch about it. Don't try to critique his stuff, it's a waste of time. Just hide his shit and ignore.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378367]

Show of hands; who's down and dirty for some plane porn!?

First of five.

[Anonymous No.3378373]

>>3378367
go on

[Anonymous No.3378386]

>>3378354
I am aware of that. I was just putting HardProportions McFlintPerspective in his place.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378392]

>>3378367
Increased the width of the wings and where they connect to the body, and adjusted the height of the vertical stabilizers.

[Anonymous No.3378432]

I mean they're just sketches, but what the hell

[Anonymous No.3378464]

In progress.

[Anonymous No.3378517]

>>3377449
thats not how perspective works dude lol

[Anonymous No.3378582]

girly boy

[Anonymous No.3378583]

>>3378582
That's not how penises look and I can tell you've never seen one before.

[Anonymous No.3378624]

[Anonymous No.3378644]

>>3378624
She looks like she is standing at a right tilt. It's good to mirror your image left and right to make sure they are standing up straight

[Anonymous No.3378683]

>>3377465
Anecdotal it may be, but I've told you several times over for a yr to fix the fucking eyes and correct the focus.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378727]

>>3378517
Specifics?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378729]

>>3377604
Improvement?

[Anonymous No.3378733]

>>3378729
Take another look at that thumb again. It looks fucking twisted and weirdly thin and long

[Anonymous No.3378766]

I really, really need help with this one, I need to know how is it supposed to look like, the anatomy is all wrong! but I don't know how it SHOULD look like!

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378772]

>>3378729

[Anonymous No.3378816]

>>3378727
Love how you drew her tongue... blog?

[Anonymous No.3378820]

>>3378772
very nice

[Anonymous No.3378828]

>>3378772
That right arm of hers looks too small, even with perspective taken into account it’s the volume/proportion that feels out of place.

[Anonymous No.3378902]

>>3378766
After much inspection I've found the problem. She only has one eye

[Anonymous No.3378907]

>>3377235
Nobody?

[Anonymous No.3378913]

>>3378432
Lovely, and I like all the tries at different body types too.

[Anonymous No.3378922]

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3378949]

>>3378816
Hardstonesmcflintcock.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3378955]

>>3373439
Your light source was wrong here. That's why you had a problem establishing the shadows on the drawing. Work on that.
>>3377167
What is sexy to you, may not be sexy to others. One way to help improve that is your facial expressions. Everything about this drawing could be sexy, but the face. Establish a better expression in your next drawing. Chances are, you'll notice a difference in the way your work is received next time.
>>3377444
>>3377446
>>3377449
Do you know what's wrong with them? How can someone help you if you don't have an idea of what's wrong?
>>3377465
People have given you critiques on your work, but you never implement it. Every one of your characters is always smiling. Why do your characters always have this fake smile on their faces?
>>3378727
As far as what?
>>3378766
Then look up reference pictures on how that particular pose should look like.
>>3378772
Work on your musculature. You're studying the reference picture all wrong.

[Anonymous No.3378967]

>>3378922
Do you have a tumblr?

[Anonymous No.3379273]

Anyone have any tips for coming up with interesting poses?

I find I keep going back to the same types of poses all the time, but whenever I try something different, it turns out kind of over-dramatic.

[Anonymous No.3379285]

How do I come up with a pose?
Right now I need to draw a male but I have no idea what pose to use.
Do you have some sort of resource where it gives you a random pose?
I am not creative at this at all.

[Anonymous No.3379303]

Hey /porn/, thought you might be able to help me with this, this isn't porn per se, but I know you guys are good with these things so here goes.

Pic related is my drawing + ref, I am wondering if you guys can tell me if the area where HER left leg joins the hips (right side of drawing covered by hand) is drawn correctly, it looks okay, but I feel like I'm not understanding something right, on top of that if anyone has info/pics on the area near the pubis where the leg meets the hips (little crevice between the external oblique and her thighs I would appreciate it, I can't really seem to understand this area.

Thanks in advance.

[Anonymous No.3379310]

>>3378772
Yeah, the thumb looks ok now.

[Anonymous No.3379402]

>>3378967
Sorry, i only post here.

[Anonymous No.3379406]

>>3379402
Altought, there´s a collection here:
https://trolchan.tumblr.com/

[Anonymous No.3379473]

[Anonymous No.3379476]

>>3379473

[Anonymous No.3379477]

>>3379303
>>3379285
>>3379273
Just trace references of real people.
Im not even kidding. You can always edit the trace afterword. It saves time.

[Anonymous No.3379507]

>>3379473
blog??

[Anonymous No.3379513]

>>3379507
http://redmatzoo.tumblr.com

[Anonymous No.3379542]

>>3375989
>caring about pose tracing
>in porn of all things

Name one artist who does unique sexual poses all the time

[Anonymous No.3379570]

>>3378955

>Then look up reference pictures on how that particular pose should look like.

Provide them for me then, I haven't found ANY.

[Anonymous No.3379586]

>>3379513
oh..

nvm

[Anonymous No.3379663]

[Anonymous No.3379787]

How bad is this? & redline please

[Anonymous No.3379807]

>>3379787
Honestly it looks pretty decent for trying to emulate the show's style. It's got just enough feeling off with the anatomy that it looks like the show, but softened enough it doesn't look too cartoony and goofy.

[Anonymous No.3379832]

I'm not good at keeping bodies proportionate when they're laid out horizontal. Does the placement of everything look okay?

[Anonymous No.3379840]

>>3379787
This is pretty good anon.

[Anonymous No.3379848]

A or B guys?

[Anonymous No.3379867]

>>3379787
pretty decent

I would make the lines TICC-er

also I recommend looking up bruce tim if you are interested in stylized sexy cartoons

https://vk
.com/doc366484900_463156769?hash=c4e8c3ab666325a333&dl=24596579e871347b37

[Anonymous No.3379983]

>>3378432
great

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380021]

Proportions and perspective critiques, anyone? Prepping this up for delivery, and can use another pair of eyes to tidy up a few things.

[Anonymous No.3380031]

>>3379848
b

[Anonymous No.3380036]

>>3375561

Let me help you anon.
>Have 16 years of talent

[Anonymous No.3380133]

>>3378432
now post your blog

[Anonymous No.3380142]

>>3379848
b

[Anonymous No.3380145]

>>3379848
>Exodusisnear

[Anonymous No.3380152]

Guess I'm on my own again.

[Anonymous No.3380156]

>>3380152
We all are anon, /ic/ doesn't get a lot of activity in terms of critique and help.

[Anonymous No.3380162]

>>3380156
I guess that's true. I try to give crit when I feel like I can help but obviously by myself that's not enough to make much difference. I wish I could just see problems in my own drawings as clearly as in other people's drawings.

[Anonymous No.3380168]

>>3380145
w-wait, how did you know?!
there must be thousands of others who draw grannies too!

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380204]

Applied base colors, and a Clip Studio Paint material as a placeholder for now.

[Anonymous No.3380210]

Sketch ideas with no reference used.

[Anonymous No.3380411]

>>3380021
maybe nitpicking but the text on the sign looks out of perspective because of the floating h/d.

idk if you care but out of perspective for a bit if you thin the lines a bit i think it'd look nicer. you know the typical outlines are thinner than lines inside of the basic form and use it very well but thick lines in large quantities also create a focal point and here its kinda drawing attention to the guys left arm where hes getting close to her tits and at the shadows cast by the folds. which i think is a poor place to draw the focus.

[Anonymous No.3380426]

>>3380021
I'd reduce how much of his wrist (the guy fingering her) is visible, right now it's making his hand look pretty small

[Anonymous No.3380428]

>>3380411
woops oulines are thicker*

>>3380204
The trainers definitely out of proportion/anatomically off on this one. the neck connects to the chin too far forward and his torso is just short brought about by a swift change in upwards and downwards perspective that wasn't handled properly.

In fact the bench is also too big never seen a bench back that was high enough to go past the top of someones head.

But that kinda stuff is nitpicky. i think what really takes away from this is too much empty space in hilda. shes anatomically correct but takes up 1/2 of the picture. usually its a rule of quarters 1/4 / 3/4 because you get large amounts of dead space like the sky in the upper right and her ass. in this case you did a good job keeping it interesting by making her wet but i dont think it did enough to keep the picture coherent.

Actually i think i've found the next real big reason. your line of detail and perspective line are similar and going in the same direction but are not the same definitely adding a bit of confusion to the mix. follow the trainers gazes and follow the perspective line and i think it'll pop out at you.

[Anonymous No.3380431]

>>3376291
here you go buddy even though its quite late.
i just changed a few things like the angle of the pelvis and the direction of the head, which you dont have to give heed to.
the biggest thing you should work on is probably keeping a consistent perspective, and you can improve this by thinking big first. there were issues i ran into while making the redline that concerned a lot of contradicting indications with perspective.
i originally drew boobies but i wanted you to see the skeleton. i like drawing skelees regardless though so this was fun. hope it helps a bit.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380495]

>>3380428

1. Pull Nate's neck back behind the collar.

2. Adjust the lines of the bench so that the backboard's end just above Nate's shoulders.

3. Fit the page into the comic as a whole (if we were to divide a comic into 9 parts, this panel would fit into the fist two in the first row and the first two and the second row).

4. Fill out the background now that Inhave a reference image of the Battle Subway station.

Let me know if there is anything else I missed.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380502]

>>3380495
>>3380428
5. Push Nate's expression a little more and have him looking away, to the nearest perspective point.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380542]

Revision. Will likely add another arm rest.

[Anonymous No.3380544]

>>3380542
I think the arm rest is a bad addition. first, hilda already looks like a giant woman and is literally overpowering the composition, so even less emphasis on what's-his-face hampers your storytelling. and second, the perspective is off.

[Anonymous No.3380552]

>>3380542
I can't believe how little you know about perspectve. Let me see something. Can you find the horizon line on your pic? If you can, can you draw the perspective lines of the bench keeping that horizon line in mind?
Please, do it.

[Anonymous No.3380571]

>>3380552
OuO

[Anonymous No.3380635]

>>3379787
>>3378766

Help with these 3?

Anatomy, references, redline, anything.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380753]

>>3380544
>>3380552
The original (without the arm rests) can be added back in with a click of a button. I adjusted the posture more in line with what I wanted: Hilda using her right arm to sway her hip left, giving a dominant, sexy posture.

Illustrate the flaws in the approach I used.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3380785]

[Anonymous No.3380868]

is this even right lol

[Anonymous No.3380870]

>>3380785
right shoulder looks kinda weird

or is it just me

[Anonymous No.3380882]

>>3380870
It is.

[Anonymous No.3380943]

>>3375734
Further development. Couldn't achieve the POV I was hoping for, so I had to make adjustments.

[Anonymous No.3380951]

>>3379303
Here, I am specifically talking about pic related, can anyone tell me what muscle it is so I can research it myself, thanks. Any help/tuts is appreciated.

[Anonymous No.3380970]

>>3380951
Gracilis

[Anonymous No.3380975]

>>3380970
Thank you, that seems to be the one.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3381079]

>>3380870
>>3380882
With the exception of filling the rear delt, is there anything else I missed?

[Anonymous No.3381084]

>>3381079
The whole should is incomplete and you lack definition of the shoulder blade. The arm itself seems to just be too small even with perspective taken into consideration.

[Anonymous No.3381098]

>>3380785
The reflection in the hair makes it look like its falling over a constant form and makes her look like she has one of them neat paracas skulls
The arms are bad my dude, and they make the pose harder to read.
Her torso also seems really long given the perspective, and while her head is tilted away from us, you still drew the ear like it was parallel to the viewer

[Anonymous No.3381099]

>>3380753
Can I ask what this box is or why you used it?

[Anonymous No.3381175]

>>3380635

Just give it up, despite what /ic/ claims talent do exist, and not everyone can draw good by grinding, that's a myth.

Is like saying you can get taller by practicing basketball instead of practicing basketball because you are tall.

[Anonymous No.3381200]

>>3381175
watch out crab ill eat you

[Anonymous No.3381216]

>>3380571
What is that? Pick up a book or two about perspective, anon. You too really need it.

>>3380753
See pic attached. You have no idea what you are doing.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3381247]

>>3381216
The background is a placeholder from the Clip Studio Paint program. I stated this, and will work the Battle Subway station background as soon as I finish with this Roxie render.

Did I not state this earlier? And why paint over the perspective lines and horizon line I used, then claim I did not use them?

And I thought *I* was autistic.

>>3381099
Right hand rests right below the obturator crest of the hip bone. She pushes her hip to the left side, away from the viewer.

Left arm is pulled back very slightly, with the hand resting just a little above the crest, on the other side.

Elevation and the pulled back left arm (a tad) compliments the gesture.

>>3381098
Will work that in once I get back. Here is the recent version.

[Anonymous No.3381302]

>>3381247
You claimed that, but you still placed the horizon line in the wrong spot. This tells me you have no idea how horizon lines work. Stop making excuses and start reading some books about perspective. This is clearly the most glaring issue in all of your art.

[Anonymous No.3381303]

>>3381175
This is one of the worst comparisons ever.
That's not like saying you can get taller by practicing basketball, it's like saying you can get better at basketball if you practice basketball, you absolute moron.

[Anonymous No.3381306]

>>3374913
this, it's a great representation of la goblina

[Anonymous No.3381311]

>>3381302
> You claimed that, but you still placed the horizon line in the wrong spot. This tells me you have no idea how horizon lines work. Stop making excuses and start reading some books about perspective. This is clearly the most glaring issue in all of your art.
The horizon line in the background (water level) is just a stand-in. He will redraw it later, if you remove the water level the horizon /perspective is right is it not? Am I missing something here?

[Anonymous No.3381331]

Very beginner. I know there's lots to improve, but if anyone can point out the most obvious things it'd be appreciated.

The ones I already know are fucked up feet, and I don't like how dark I made the veins on the dick.

[Anonymous No.3381334]

>>3381331
Oh my god, those claws are gonna hurt.

[Anonymous No.3381352]

>>3381311
Why would he put the background (water level) in the wrong spot if he knew where it should go? That's what you're missing.

[Anonymous No.3381363]

>>3381331
I think you would benefit from practicing perspective, right now it's looking a bit flat. You'd be surprised how much better your drawings can look without improving anything but their sense of depth. You could also do with some more real life studies imo. Keep at it anon, I like your choices.

[Anonymous No.3381368]

>>3380210
>>3380943
Thoughts?

[Anonymous No.3381374]

>>3381352
Because he used a builtin preset to fill the space so it doesn't look empty? I work traditionally but do something similar where I just throw the concept on the page even if it's wrong to get a better idea where things should go, then I fix things as I go along. It's a shortcut when u do composition work as opposed to just a single figure. In the end it's a really petty thing to pick on as it has practically zero bearing on the work.

[Anonymous No.3381401]

>>3381374
I'll just stop answering to retarded posts like these.
Moving that water level in the right spot would've literally taken him 10 seconds.
What that background DEFINITELY tells me is that he doesn't know that the horizon of the water on the sea is equal to the perspective horizon line.
And if you can't tell that all his artworks are terribly flawed, when it comes to perspective, then I can't really help you.
I'm 100% positive this guy has no idea what basic perspective is and how it works.

[Anonymous No.3381411]

>>3381331
The shading on the fur seems a bit off.

Try doing it again, only this time starting with the shadow color filled, and then painting in the light on top of it. It will force you to actually consider the forms of the fur when you're coloring it.

[Anonymous No.3381414]

>>3381401
I think by anticipating and mentioning the bg in his first post he showed he's aware it isn't correct. The rest of his perspective IS SOLID, SHOWING he KNOWS perspective. I rarely come to porn threads and don't know anyone here, but this guy has decent work posted, might not be the best but at least it's posted.

Where's your work son?

[Anonymous No.3381514]

>>3381414
If you consider that solid perspective, I have really bad news for you. Son. LMAO.

[Anonymous No.3381592]

>>3381368
her skin is yellow, and you should work on your lines and construction

[Anonymous No.3381617]

[Anonymous No.3381656]

Is furry allowed ITT?

[Anonymous No.3381663]

>>3380571
>>3381216
>>3380552
Obviously guys, pls think with ur brians

[Anonymous No.3381710]

>>3381592
So maybe go over her skin with some orange? Trying to get a tanned look.

[Anonymous No.3381753]

>>3381656
Furry porn is not allowed anywhere but /b/ according to global rules. Your pic may or may not be deleted, based on how much everyone and the janitor cares.

[Anonymous No.3381823]

>>3381592
Went over the skin with another layer and defined the tan lines a bit more.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3382030]

Progress Update. Going to rough out the bed sheets and play around with their color.

Figuring out how to best capture her hair, given the references show Roxie having spiky hair, and me wanting to go with a bit of bed head.

[Anonymous No.3382039]

>>3377194
when are you going to kill yourself you lazy retard

don't copy paste and mirror

[Anonymous No.3382074]

>>3382030
yikes the drawing took a dip after you started coloring it ;/

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3382084]

>>3382074
Do the color choices help?

[Anonymous No.3382086]

>>3382074
is probably how uncartoonish the render is while the line-art doesn't look realistic.

Look at that face

My recommendation is to give it a thicc line-art in the edges and to smooth it more

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3382087]

>>3382086
Got it. Thank you very much!

[Anonymous No.3382093]

>>3381823
try different brushes, one that looks better when blended with other lines.

I hate those hiary lines

[Anonymous No.3382101]

>>3382084
Also do something about the perspective.

it bends in a weird way.

I'm noticing you seem to have a lil trouble with it, so another recommendation for you would be to read the scott robertson how to draw book

https://mega.nz/#F!sSYAxKqb!f2gWy-eQZJNvRfiUTu1ASA

[Anonymous No.3382145]

>>3382084
have you been listening to anything anyone has been advising you to do?

[Anonymous No.3382151]

>>3381617
im digging this one, man. though the pucc and the far shoulder seem a little forced
Can I ask how long you've been drawing?

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3382157]

>>3382145
Look up.

[Anonymous No.3382158]

My very first drawing on photoshop is also my very first lewd

[Anonymous No.3382159]

>>3382157
Lookin better

[Anonymous No.3382160]

>>3382158
pretty nice

[Anonymous No.3382173]

>>3382160
thanks man. Unfortunately I hit my wall with this one and have not been able to bring myself to fix the shading on the hand and foot but it will happen one day

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3382229]

Now I am gonna get around to those bed sheets.

[Anonymous No.3382260]

>>3380635
None of these are bad

you are currentlly in this limbo where you are competent but not terrific so you kinda blend in the background.

If you wanted a few recommendations would be that you should push yourself into imitating the art-style of the shows, because that princess bubblegum looks a little too off-model and the second thing would be to render it well, to make it look high quality.

>The Drawing Club: Master the Art of Drawing Characters from Life (Cartooning & Artstyle)
vk
.com/doc4043932_329144763?hash=7c19274efcddc67c45&dl=c1c608c23c0e8499bd

That book will help you to push you into cartooning and art-styles

>Scott robertson Rendering:
magnet:?xt=urn:btih:D284ED1558479B5F85E1F1915D426EA934220352&tr=http%3A%2F%2Fbt3.t-ru.org%2Fann%3Fmagnet&dn=Scott%20Robertson%20-%20How%20to%20Render%3A%20the%20fundamentals%20of%20light%2C%20shadow%20and%20reflectivity%20%5B2014%2C%20PDF%2C%20ENG%5D

that one will teach you how to render

Here are some good western lewd artists so you can do a master study on them (https://cgcookie.com/exercise/exercise-37-master-studies)), so you can understand what makes them good:

Apostle: https://exhentai.org/g/1206662/388d814252/
Splooge: https://exhentai.org/g/1204523/b2774853fd/
sunibee: https://exhentai.org/g/1141909/d62f7212b8/

>inb4 "you forgot to add X artist" or " >X >being good XDDDDDD "

tl;dr: Is fine, there is nothing abour your pictures that wouldn't be nitpick or petty cherrypicking, but yopu could make them a lot better by rendering or make them more in-model.

[Anonymous No.3382273]

gay type shit

[Anonymous No.3382274]

>>3382273
nigg that's waaaaaaaaay to small

I've seen vagena flops bigger than that peen

is unintentionally funny

[Anonymous No.3382295]

>>3382260
What is #5
> Selections (No anti-alias)

How do you decide where to put #12 for sub surface scattering?

[Anonymous No.3382303]

>>3382295
Nigga don't ask me stuff I'm too stupid atm I ate too much and feel I'll have a troke if I stop concentrating on not dying

[Anonymous No.3382322]

>>3382273
my duck is confused

[Anonymous No.3382330]

>>3382273
That toddler peenus is honestly kinda disturbing, look I like the girly penis meme as much as the next guy but you went way overboard

[Anonymous No.3382348]

>>3382274
>>3382330
it unironically started as a girl with beef curtains and turned into a dick

[Anonymous No.3382352]

>>3382348
Cool story

still unappealing

[Anonymous No.3382506]

>>3380431
>>3376392
Thanks /ic/ers hopefully i will have time to post a progress pic before this thread dies!

[Anonymous No.3382581]

>>3382093
Any particular Sai brushes you’d recommend?

[Anonymous No.3382590]

>>3382581
I don't use sai so I wouldn't know desu

Probably you should just so this : >>/ic/thread/S3343165#p3344129

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3383032]

Any last touch ups?

[Anonymous No.3383039]

>>3383032
Why do you post so much instead of finding solutions on your own? You grow more wholesome that way. I'm not saying it's bad or anything and I like your art but it's just weird to me.

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3383040]

>>3383039
So far, I've been pretty decent at that, but comfort zones are a bitch to climb out and need a fire lit under my ass every now and then for that extra push.

[Anonymous No.3383041]

>>3383039
He craves interactions and feels the need to find validation through an anonymous image board.

[Anonymous No.3383045]

>>3382273
Blog?

[Anonymous No.3383051]

>>3383040

I don't think having people hold your hand from start to finish counts as having a fire lit under your ass.

Nothing wrong with asking for critique, maybe even more than once for a piece, but you don't need to after basically every adjustment you make.

[Anonymous No.3383142]

>>3382151
Thanks, appreciate the feedback. Have been drawing since 2014
I'm not sure what you mean by pucc? But I agree that her shoulder could use some touchup.

[Anonymous No.3383257]

>>3376855
im certain i know who drew this

[Anonymous No.3383312]

i try to draw nice vagene

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3383365]

>>3383041
>just met a couple of friends for beer.
>close with volunteer bros by the nearby Habitat
>reconnected with nerdy friends when they discovered I knew how to draw.
>Becoming close to one of the leaders of a group of gym bros.

Yeah, I'm just starving.

>>3383051
I'll keep that in mind. Three stages acceptable?

[Anonymous No.3383395]

>>3383312
Less hard edges

[Anonymous No.3383445]

>>3383395
what do you mean ?

[Anonymous No.3383478]

>>3382260
nice selection of child porn artists, chester. surprised you didn't include Shadman in that mix of shite artists

[Anonymous No.3383479]

>>3379832
The eyes.... They haunt my soul

[Anonymous No.3383499]

can't show entire thing but thoughts on this?

[Anonymous No.3383527]

help
first time drawing porn

[Anonymous No.3383593]

>>3381363
>>3381411
Thank you both! I'll try those suggestions

[Anonymous No.3383607]

>>3383478
Nice shitpost you retard, thanks for not contributing anything

[Anonymous No.3383644]

>>3376855
blog?

[Anonymous No.3383900]

>>3383499
stop drawing child looking characters already, you fucking moron.
you have the skills to make it without needing that stigma. and if you do it cause you like it. well, then just fucking stop posting it, you sick piece of shit.

[Anonymous No.3383941]

[Anonymous No.3383944]

[Anonymous No.3383946]

[Anonymous No.3384066]

>>3383032

her right arm is still to short! why did you started rendering before fixing it? fixing it now will be more complicated!

[Anonymous No.3384070]

>>3380635

wow her left arm is to short and her legs are to big, why people keep drawing this short arms wtf?!

[Anonymous No.3384366]

>>3383032
I think the dark black lines and the red sheets clash with the “cute” vibes and white hair of the character. Maybe change the lines to a darker version of what you’re outlining and the hue of the sheets to a cyan or baby blue?

[Anonymous No.3384405]

>>3374602
>I have thousands of people who are willing to throw money at me so it's ok.

McDonalds logic. It's like you're ok throwing garbage at people as long as your retarded followers are willing to pay for it. Good job taking money from those fools though.

[Anonymous No.3384443]

Im kind of new with this shit of coloring. Any advice

[Anonymous No.3384651]

This is NOT gay

[Anonymous No.3385353]

>>3384405
You think its garbage. Its your opinion versus thousands of other people with money. What you think doesnt really matter to me. And I hope you stay angry with my success.

[Anonymous No.3385374]

>>3383900
>>3384405

You're probably the same person. Leave people alone. Nobody is on your side.

NOT EVEN NATIONWIDE IS ON YOUR SIDE

[Anonymous No.3385428]

>>3385374
KYS, pedophile.

[Anonymous No.3385447]

>>3385428
Only if say please :)

[Anonymous No.3385466]

>>3385374
>leave people alone
how ironic

[Hardstones McFlintcock No.3385627]

Got a line work commission going smoothly, but I was wondering if you guys could critique it and spot any rough spots in need of adjustment. Thank you in advance, again, for your time and all you've offered.

[Anonymous No.3385911]

>>3385627
Her lower right leg (viewer left) is tiny.

[Anonymous No.3385915]

>>3381617

[Anonymous No.3386022]

any critiques/redlining before I do lineart?

[Anonymous No.3386436]

>>3386022