Alternative Art/Stylization General

[Anonymous No.3309733]

Last thread: >>3305513
>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) remember to thank those who've redlined your work accurately. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to draw Anime?
Read the sticky.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uWyIMrWHN30&list=PL6dSbz05yTUL_zym3SiOxOgqq29XvOh48&index=1
Reference
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

[Anonymous No.3309742]

>OP photo isn't the shota Cupheads

I reject this thread

[Anonymous No.3309747]

>>3309742
he had his csp window on it so I assumed he didn't want it to be used in any way as final

(I wouldn't have picked it anyway)

[Anonymous No.3309749]

>>3309747
What were your top options? I wanna judge how shit your taste is

[Anonymous No.3309750]

>>3309749
Godshot and Magister and Andrae and everyone who has a sent of /jp/ on them for the 100th time, who else? Oh and maybe loli tower anon...you know everyone has been in the OP at least 3 times by now.

[Anonymous No.3309752]

Still trying to get better at my anatomy.

[Anonymous No.3309755]

>>3309752
Anatomy should be the least of your worries though.

[Anonymous No.3309762]

>>3309752
Wew

[Anonymous No.3309763]

I playing a lot with colors last times. Can i get some critque on this one?

[Anonymous No.3309770]

>>3309752
>Monika
The flavour of the month was 2 months ago

[Anonymous No.3309778]

>>3309742
I-Im honored

[Anonymous No.3309788]

>>3309750
>sent of /jp/
what?

[Anonymous No.3309799]

>>3309788
I think he meant to type scent

>>3309778
uwu

[Anonymous No.3309804]

>>3309763
Nice color choices and rendering but the head and neck are seriously misaligned. Either the head needs to be more to the right or the neck and shoulders more to the left. The neck should attach at the base of the skull, not the base of the jaw.

[Anonymous No.3309836]

>>3309804
Yes i see your point, i was trying to stylize that parts too much and it went off. Gonna avoid that in the future.

[Anonymous No.3309846]

[Anonymous No.3309876]

I usually avoid posting furry stuff on /ic/, but considering she is one of the main girls from Tenchi Muyo! GXP I guess is fair.

this is the first time I think the coloring and lines are close to the anime style I was after.

[Anonymous No.3309877]

>>3309876
>>3309455

[Anonymous No.3309878]

[Anonymous No.3309886]

>>3309752
T-rex arm

[Anonymous No.3309890]

>>3309733
why is killer whale madotsuki from mogeko man in the op

[Anonymous No.3309933]

anatomy pointers please

>>3309778
i love your style, do you have an instagram?

[Anonymous No.3309999]

it's coming along. Need to clean up alot more and add a small amount of AO. Has anyone heard of the book "Force: Dynamic Life Drawing for Animators"? seemed to help out with making stuff look less stiff; not to say mine looks natural/smooth but it certainly made me start thinking of lines differently.

[Anonymous No.3310003]

https://pastelcronenberg.tumblr.com/archive

[Anonymous No.3310005]

>>3309763
I like the iridescent hair.

[Anonymous No.3310021]

>>3309878
Holy crap that head is massive!

[Anonymous No.3310029]

fixes and redraw.

[Anonymous No.3310032]

>>3309733
>OP pic isn't even made by someone from the last thread

[Anonymous No.3310057]

>>3310032
>read filename

[Anonymous No.3310065]

>>3309878
that head does not make sense

[Anonymous No.3310078]

>>3310057
I already did you dolt

[Anonymous No.3310152]

Is this right?

A = jawline close to chin + contour at the side of the face
B = anterior zygomatic bone + cheek
C = zygomatic bone

[Anonymous No.3310155]

>>3310152
>trying to find anatomical information on Doritos faced cartoons

you people forget this is cartoons

[Anonymous No.3310164]

>>3310029
Goddamn your gesture and pose design is really improving fast anon, I'm jealous. Pretty inspiring, keep it up!

[Anonymous No.3310168]

>>3310152
It's mostly right, but B is just mostly fat, no bone affects the contour there

[Anonymous No.3310174]

its done

[Anonymous No.3310177]

>>3310174
Disgusting.

[Anonymous No.3310200]

>>3310174
Where'd you learn to color? Any resources you can point to?

[Anonymous No.3310211]

>>3310200
Gurney's Color and Light book. Stared at alphonse's and Jofang's art while coloring.

[Anonymous No.3310214]

>>3310211
thanks for responding

I checked my bookshelf thinking I had the color and light book but it was imaginative realism...

[Anonymous No.3310219]

>>3310214
https://www.amazon.com/Color-Light-Realist-Painter-Gurney/dp/0740797719

Book's on sale right now on amazon for 10 bucks.

[Anonymous No.3310233]

I'd like to make a clean looking vector image like this, is there a program I should be using to do this easily, or will any vector program do?

[Anonymous No.3310235]

>>3309878
this is cool actually

[Anonymous No.3310300]

Punch and repunch (punch redrawn)

[Anonymous No.3310302]

Hand fixes

[Anonymous No.3310315]

>>3310300
>>3310302
i hope youre the replacement for firez and shit yev

[Anonymous No.3310316]

>>3310174
You probably noticed already, but the pupil gaze is unmatched

[Anonymous No.3310318]

>>3310316
Whoops, meant for >>3310302

[Anonymous No.3310331]

>>3310174
doyora!

[Anonymous No.3310334]

>>3310302
arms seem a little short, other then that I really like your style dude.

[Anonymous No.3310338]

>>3310300
>>3310302
You're very good with perspective! These are so refreshing to look at.

[Anonymous No.3310361]

>>3310300
i really like the angle here. how do you do your linework?
>>3310174
going for the white datura style?

[Anonymous No.3310366]

>>3310174
Alfonse? is that you?

[Anonymous No.3310375]

learning foreshortening
red line this please

[Grey background lineart dude No.3310387]

>firez and shit yev

dunno who they are...

And thanks everyone, I'll keep trying!

[Anonymous No.3310392]

>>3310387
Hey, you can't just use a name like that around here!

[Anonymous No.3310416]

>>3310387
>dunno who they are
So you aren't actually a part of /ic/, you just came here to show off.

Remember the first rule of any board on 4chan, """dude""": Lurk Moar

[Derek No.3310420]

>>3310416
Gonna have to agree anon on this one.

[Anonymous No.3310428]

>>3310416
fuck off with your shitty shitposter "culture"

[Anonymous No.3310440]

Boi

[Anonymous No.3310446]

>>3310428
get off /ic/ and 4chan too, you fucking normalfag

[Anonymous No.3310492]

>>3310392
the way the goggles interact with the hair makes it fun to look at
>>3310440
cute boi

[The mission to disprove space (...) No.3310532]

Been doing some iterations with this guy

[Anonymous No.3310535]

[Anonymous No.3310537]

>>3310532
I like the shading a lot. You can probably omit some of the lines on the eyelid, the eyes are getting a bit cluttered. Also the hands don't look like they're affecting the pocket cloth

[Anonymous No.3310553]

>>3310532
>>3310535
how the fuck are you using digital and not taking screenshots of your screen

please

[Anonymous No.3310601]

>>3310331
no its me godsh0t

>>3310366
>>3310361
alfonse, hjl, jofang are all pretty big influences for me

[Anonymous No.3310609]

>>3310601
>hjl
Top taste

[Anonymous No.3310689]

>>3310300
>>3310302
How do you start a piece? Is there a layer of construction lines beneath this?

Your linework is fucking superb. You'd be a top artist if your coloring was up to par.

[Anonymous No.3310706]

how do you guys cope with drawing something that was an absolute waste of time?
Trying to draw fucking ygo hair has to be the most useless thing I could have done with my time, but here I am. Messed up facial features. No real thought put into the pose.
God, I'm tired.

[Anonymous No.3310712]

>>3310706
Get used to it faggot, either erase the whole thing and start over or move onto something else and most of the time starting over again from scratch after trying the first couple times yields the best results.

[Anonymous No.3310732]

[Anonymous No.3310748]

>>3310706
This isn't a total waste, I bet if you color it you'll still net a few RT's, reblogs, and likes. Mileage always adds up even if it feels like a waste and content is almost always better to put out than withhold.

[Anonymous No.3310762]

[Anonymous No.3310763]

>>3310706
The facial features look like they lean more toward FMA style than YGO. It's not half bad though.

Sometimes I think my lines look like shit, but once I color them the whole thing gets saved.

[Anonymous No.3310774]

>>3310706
I feel like pushing through and trying to finish every piece will give you better results in the long run instead of abandoning them halfway

[Anonymous No.3310779]

Jesus fucking Christ. Why can't this book be in English?

Time to learn nip, I guess.

[Anonymous No.3310788]

>>3310779
99% of those books are useless
>t. someone who knows nip

[Anonymous No.3310997]

i tried some new brushes i just fucking suck at painting

[Anonymous No.3311019]

>>3310997
I think I know who you are.

[Anonymous No.3311027]

>>3311019
who do you think i am and where do you know me from, famalam

[Anonymous No.3311031]

>>3311027
Not him, but is that you Chabs?

[Anonymous No.3311044]

>>3311031
who? sorry i'm not often on /ic/
i was hanging around /i/ and /b/ drawthreads for the most part

[Anonymous No.3311089]

[Anonymous No.3311097]

pls help. What did I do wrong on this

[Anonymous No.3311107]

>>3311097
I'm dogshit at drawing humans but here's what sticks out to me. Keep in mind I actually kind of like this drawing overall.
>Rightmost character
Left forearm is Popeye-tier. Complete lack of a wrist leading into the hand bones. Shape of face below the nose is just a bulging curve and does not suggest a mouth, lips, or a jawline. Radius of curvature of breasts is too small for their placement, compared to the girl in the middle. Length of calf is too short compared to length of femur.
>middle
best of the lot personally, although FAS-tier thumb webbing. No visible evidence of left leg. Asscheek somehow larger than head.
>left
thigh thicker than body, which might be stylistic but looks really fucking weird to me. Right humerus appears to be going down and to the left when it should be headed towards us to connect with that elbow, rather than disappearing below it.

[Anonymous No.3311117]

>>3310609
Where the fuck did you find this? HJL made that work private in Pixiv.

[Anonymous No.3311121]

>>3311107
Shit the leg is really messed up 0.o. damn. I agree with almost all these, but there's something else I dont like about this. Something about the energy, and the shapes, just arent turning out how I want. Just sorta boring feeling, and not as appealing as it could. maybe trying to render it killed it an i should have just went more flat.

[Anonymous No.3311123]

>>3311117
>filename
probably from someone else who posted it to 4chan once

[Anonymous No.3311128]

>>3309878
there anon fix'd

[Anonymous No.3311131]

>>3311123
Yeah, apparently he recently purged almost all of his NSFW work, that particular one isn't even on Gelbooru

[Anonymous No.3311142]

>>3311117
I didn't realize he made it private, and am very dissapointed he did as well, it's a great loss to the world. The answer is I saved if before he did, I guess

>>3311123
>>3311131
The file name is auto generated by an extension I have running (for reasons), the real filenames look like this. I think I have all of his lewd stuff if someone wants a .rar

[Anonymous No.3311144]

>>3309778
do you do lineart in fast strokes?

[Anonymous No.3311145]

>>3311142
Please upload them senpai!
Wait since it's an autodownloader, it's pretty decently complete right? That'd be amazing

Once you upload I could also reupload the missing ones to Gelbooru and Danbooru for archival purposes

[Anonymous No.3311147]

>>3311145
Yes, please do that, and give me a few minutes to .rar them and get them onto mixtape or something

[Anonymous No.3311152]

>>3311147
Alright, here it is: https://my.mixtape.moe/wtjkwb.rar

I think that's everything NSFW from 2012 until he made his work private, but it's possible some of the last stuff he did wasn't saved between when I crawled his pixiv and when he shut it down. Such a shame too, I saw he wasn't putting out anything new but I thought he was just putting personal work on hiatus. He's still one of my favorites too.

SFW stuff looks up to date though so no worries there

[Anonymous No.3311156]

>>3311152
Holy, you're a godsend anon. I actually just found out he does nsfw today, I always thought he only does SFW stuff.

[Anonymous No.3311159]

>>3311128
kek

[Anonymous No.3311163]

>>3311152
Woah damn, these are crazy. Good stuff in these

[Anonymous No.3311180]

[Anonymous No.3311352]

>>3310774
seconding since that's what helped me improve the most

[Anonymous No.3311436]

>>3310774
I do that but man... the result is that I take more time to draw anything else than my friends.

[Anonymous No.3311621]

[Anonymous No.3311648]

[Anonymous No.3311650]

>>3310997
Looks good man, I would definitely like to see some finished piece from you, if you're gonna post more.

[Anonymous No.3311656]

>>3311621
You clearly haven't studied perspective, construction, or natural dynamics. You couldn't even draw symmetric eyes in perspective.
The result is unappealing as fuck, and even your coloring is below average. (But no rendering can save a picture of such a flawed base.)

The feel I get from this picture—it's like she's composed from the parts of three different people: the lower body and left arm, the upper body, and the right arm with the head.

tl;dr: too lazy/10

[Anonymous No.3311663]

>>3311656
Whoops, sorry, forgot about some reference links.
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?utf8=&tags=hair_tucking+bent_over&ms=1

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?utf8=&tags=adjusting_hair+bent_over&ms=1

Try the same with google too for IRL photos.

[Anonymous No.3311678]

>>3311656
I don't understand the face crit though. Are you saying the eyes and nose are both at 3/4 but thats wrong or the eyes need to be spaced differently? The shoulders line up with your redline so are they still a problem?

[Anonymous No.3311680]

Anyone got tips for drawing with thin lines? I'm trying to emulate manga art styles but I always end up clutching on thicker lines cause I can't get thin lines right when rendering.

[Anonymous No.3311682]

>>3311680
resizing usually does that automatically

[Anonymous No.3311697]

>>3311678
The shoulders are shown as they are positioned in the original. If you compare it with the look of her breasts and costume, as well as the position of her head, you ought to see that these either don't line up with the shoulders or are executed poorly.

About 3/4—I mean that there are two sections in both upper and lower eyelashes—where they go down and where they go up. The lengths of these sections do not correspond to each other. Based on the position of the nose in relation to the middle point between the eyes and other things, you might've been drawing the 5/8 or 3/4 angle. That means the horizontal length of the far eye and its sections gets correspondingly reduced in relation to the closer one.

To get the eyes right, you have two options.
a) First decide an angle and draw the face. The angle is important in calculating the size relation of paired elements, such as eyes, eyebrows, or even halves of the mouth. Draw one eye in the intended angle where it should be, then draw a rough draft of the other. Look if there is any asymmetry by mirroring the canvas and/or using a straight line from one opposite point such as corner of the eye to the other (the same corner of another eye). Then use a distance/size measuring tool to determine if you got the sizes of each section right. Fix accordingly.
b) (Mostly works for flat eyes, which is usually the case with animoo styles, or non-extreme angles where you can't clearly see the shape of the eye.) Draw a face in the desired perspective. Draw an eye in the full frontal view. Copy. Mirror. Position symmetrically. Merge both layers. Distort the resulting eye layer so that it fits the perspective of the face (you can draw a cube beforehand to make the task easier). Trace on another layer or use eraser and redraw any blurry lines. Profit.


For close-ups or humongous mugs, however, you'd also need to take considerable perspective distortions into account. But you needn't worry about that in your pic.

[Anonymous No.3311767]

Just another best girl coming through

[Anonymous No.3311776]

>>3311767
>>3311621
My fellow 02bros

[Anonymous No.3311778]

>>3311697
So you are saying that basically the face is in some places 5/8ths and some places 3/4? You mapped the corner of the left eye wrong and put your land mark further out than I had. Either way I appreciate the time you took to look over my work. I tried to really push the gesture with this one and even positioned a 3d model and redrew it. I get that the shoulders are too far apart essentially right, they should probably have been closer together. The remark that this was lazy is completely false and same goes for my not studying. I have been doing this for years and reading /working daily. This drawing took me several tries, so despite the fact that it isn't my best I reject your assumption that this was a lazy effort. Either way though I left this place because I was getting nothing insofar as feedback and frankly most of what is produced here is complete shit anyway as most of the people who are good have moved on. I am going to start contributing though, because I have hit a massive plateau with my work and haven'r really progressed much since last year. Not nearly as much as I had hoped for at least.

[Anonymous No.3311806]

[Anonymous No.3311811]

>>3311806
Is that Unit 01? Anyway, neat

[Anonymous No.3311813]

>>3311767
Good taste and all, but what on earth are you trying to do with that mouth?

[Anonymous No.3311820]

>>3311656
>it's like she's composed from the parts of three different people
thought the same thing

[Anonymous No.3311822]

>>3311811
oh i knew that one reminded me of something, not really, just a random monster but i see the resemblance.

[Anonymous No.3311827]

>>3311822
Guess it's testament to how memorable the S2 engine scene is, I keep seeing it.

[Anonymous No.3311838]

>>3311813
muh style

[Anonymous No.3311880]

>>3311778
No, I am mainly saying that the eyes are really fucked up. Most of the face implies 3/4, but the size ratio of the eyes is 5/8, and the size of the sections does not match. The shoulders are tilted to the side as to imply the torso rotation, but the costume parts and breasts have visibly lesser tilt. If the yellow thing is a necktie, it doesn't look like it's affected by gravity.

>> I have been doing this for years and reading /working daily
Perhaps your approach isn't very effective then. I know a guy who claims that he has been grinding fundies (cubes) for 15 years, and honestly, even his perspective isn't that good. There is also a guy who supposedly has been drawing for 17 years straight—no practice, only theory—and while he's good enough to get commissions, he's far from being called a pro and he's currently in despair after finally realizing how much he sucks and that he has been stagnating the whole time. (He's actually on a firm intermediary level.)

IMO, constant practice is what counts. Textbooks are useful when you start and when you need to resolve an obstacle you can't seem to tackle by practicing or observing. But I wouldn't say you should absolutely trust my opinion.

Anyway, my point is that you might've spent a lot of effort, but it still looks "lazy." I know how it's like, and when I was told that, I knew immediately that it was indeed my being lazy.

[Anonymous No.3311882]

How do you guys feel about analyzing and copying stuff from artists you like to improve? Do you think it's an useful thing to do or is it mainly a waste of time? Do you think it would be more useful to go for reallife references? if you do/did that, how do you proceed in order to squeeze the most out of other people's stuff?

Pic related and imgur link is stuff i've been copying in the last couple days from various artists i really like. Girl with the guitar is the only "original" sketch i did out of the bunch.

https://imgur.com/a/WaADJ

[Anonymous No.3311888]

>>3311882
oh shit this was meant for /beg/ sorry multiple tabs got me again

[Anonymous No.3311889]

>>3310732

[Anonymous No.3311895]

>>3311650
i'm usually not painting a lot because i suck at it and i still have big problems with colors
i def should try to finish more drawings....

[Anonymous No.3311900]

>>3311882
>>3311888
If this isn't traced then it's honestly at least /beg/ graduate tier

[Anonymous No.3311904]

>>3311880
>it doesn't look like it's affected by gravity.
Because I think it attaches to the uniform and doesn't hang. The rest is all great and I see what you mean now about the eyes. I think I was just being over dramatic in my approach.

>but it still looks "lazy."
Completely fair, thats actually a great analysis of most of my work as I look over my portfolio here.
Like if someone was good but decided to phone it in or draw blind folded.

Do you see any of those problems present in this?

[Anonymous No.3311930]

>>3311900
Never mind I'm a retard who doesn't read.

But yeah, everyone copies their favourite artists. I'm not sure how useful it actually is but trying to emulate what you like makes sense. I'm not sure about literally copying their drawings but I guess you can learn a lot from observing their style.

[Anonymous No.3311945]

>>3311827
yeah most of the monster designs i do always steer to evangelion-type suits and humanoid proportions, especially the jaw and body proportions, i just wish there were more animes like that to draw insipiration from nowadays.

[Anonymous No.3311974]

>>3311895
post more of this knight please
do you have a blog btw

[Anonymous No.3311979]

>>3311882
For learning how to render/color, it's exceptionally useful. For learning anatomy it may not be the best option unless it's widely acknowledged that the artist is exceptionally good at anatomy.

>>3311904
I see vertically asymmetric eyes. (Assuming that the mouth and eyebrows are lined up correctly rather than eyes, but with this angle it's indeed much more likely.) If you want to leave the far one like that, then we have to move it to the edge of the face, like shown on the pic, or the size ratio will be broken again. It is not a very good option since humans have their eyes enclosed in the sockets and the other eye is usually covered by the nose in such angles. I'd say it's better to change their form accordingly. But first you have to position them symmetrically. I'm not sure if you wanted to show that the far eye is open wider than the other. The distances between the eyelids and eyelashes don't differ too much. It depends on your intent. I've gone with the idea that they are open to the same extent.

P.S. You seem to make your eyes a little bit too wide for these faces, by the way.

[Anonymous No.3311989]

>>3311152
I was a huge fan of his works too. He seemed to have multiple accounts. I used to sometimes browse through his stuff on pixiv from time to time, but was dumbfounded when he made all his work private. Thanks dude.

[Anonymous No.3311994]

>>3310392
Even though I've stopped drawing for like 2 weeks because I was busy with other stuff, I always feel so great looking at your work because it's so shit no matter what, that I feel like no matter how long I take a hiatus I will still be better than you.

[Anonymous No.3311996]

tryna get out of the comfort zone,
rendering denim is something else, lots of thinking but i think enough tenacity you can do it

[Anonymous No.3311998]

>>3311996
ehhhhheaeaaaayuyayaaahhhhahaahahhahahaha


tat faceeeee
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[Anonymous No.3312002]

>>3311998
at the very least you could've written
...la creatura
to even be remotely funny

[Anonymous No.3312051]

>>3311979
>asymmetric eyes
I am going for some intentional asyemetry but that being said there is a difference in bending vs breaking something. Again thanks for taking time out to review my drawings.

[Anonymous No.3312124]

>>3311806
love those deconstructions

[Anonymous No.3312133]

>>3311882
Hahah I have this pinned too in my inspo board on pinterest, I like how you did the face

[Anonymous No.3312151]

Could someone give me something to draw? I'll post a pic in 30 minutes. Want feedback so was hoping for replies instead of posting what I already got.

[Anonymous No.3312154]

>>3312151
a water buffalo

[Anonymous No.3312155]

>>3312151

goku fighting a water buffalo

[Anonymous No.3312160]

>>3312151
These
>>3312154
>>3312155

[Anonymous No.3312173]

>>3312160
Both in progress. Need a little more time for goku dying.

[Anonymous No.3312211]

>tfw just about done with this

How do you feel about the eyes? I feel like there's something a bit off but I can't put my finger on it.

Pls no memes about me being slow.

[Anonymous No.3312217]

>>3311352
Post work (not even memeing I'm just curious)

>>3311648
You're getting better at coloring. Your lineart is already there so just keep at it and you'll be an awesome artist.

>>3311767
I'm not quite sure what she's doing. The pose looks very weird.

>>3311806
Great stuff. Blog?

>>3311996
There's all kinds of things wrong with it. The right arm is T-Rex, the face is busted and everything from the waist down looks off.

>>3312211
Jeez anon, you're STILL not done? :^)

Also, where are her eyebrows?

[Anonymous No.3312237]

>>3312155
Sorry ended up watching a movie and eating stromboli

[Anonymous No.3312248]

>>3312237
Water Buffalo: SSSSS-ter

[Anonymous No.3312264]

>>3312248
But can Bufalo de Agua defeat El Hermano?

[Anonymous No.3312265]

>>3312217
word, they're baggy pants but i know you people aint shit at rendering denim so ill let that one slide, but i will work on the other things you mentioned

[Anonymous No.3312269]

>>3311648
Ignored. How sad.>>3311648

[Anonymous No.3312311]

>>3311974
i barely ever update my blog, and when i do i just upload everything i didn't upload in the past few weeks
just a heads up
https://wolfens.tumblr.com/
also more doodles and badly drawn porn on there than anything else currently

[Anonymous No.3312379]

>>3312217
>> Post work (not even memeing I'm just curious)
I'm not either one of them, but I share their mindset. Mostly, as there are some pieces I abandoned halfway, and lately I've been feeling strangely unable to bring myself to color my pics. Probably because I've mostly been drawing black-and-white sketches for several months, although when I manage to get to coloring, I don't notice any setbacks.
In case you're still curious, I go by @Yklvr on twitter. Convenient for comparison, as the latest tweet currently is about my progress over 13 months for that "the first pic you ever drew digitally vs now" trend.

[Anonymous No.3312420]

left my scanner at home, sorry for potato grade photo

[Anonymous No.3312443]

>>3310361
i've never understood your bizzare obsession with this subject matter.

[Anonymous No.3312450]

>>3312420
Cute anon. Here is a suggestion.

[Anonymous No.3312452]

>>3312420
Cute anon. Here is a suggestion.

[Anonymous No.3312497]

>>3310233
Illustrator can automatically vectorize that pretty accurately. The only thing that won't work much is the gradient on the blue lines, you'd have to do them manually.

[Anonymous No.3312503]

>>3312237
Next assignment. Draw 10 million boxes.

[Anonymous No.3312505]

>>3312452
Your suggestion is terrible because it disregards the original drawing and the parts of it that aren't necessarily bad for the sake of just drawing your own on top. Not to mention yours has worse gesture, something that can kill animu drawings.
Leaving aside the idea of throwing away the whole thing and having it done by a more skilled artist, there's only two areas of his drawing that are in desperate need of help. her left arm is too thin and long, and from about the midpoint of her shin where it tapers off into a small foot, the perspective of it also being kind of off.

[Anonymous No.3312514]

>>3312443
It's a combination of the things I like + gap moe (smol girl being huge)

[Anonymous No.3312517]

>>3310361
Please don't make the face any lewder than this.

[Anonymous No.3312529]

>>3312505
>her left arm is too thin and long, and from about the midpoint of her shin where it tapers off into a small foot, the perspective of it also being kind of off

Isn't that what's being shown in the redline?

[Anonymous No.3312560]

>imposing your own art ideals on someone else's stylization on an alternative art thread no less
fucking faggots lol

[Anonymous No.3312586]

>>3312505
Do you even know what a fucking redline is, you mongrel?

[Anonymous No.3312588]

>>3312217
>Post work (not even memeing I'm just curious)
>inb4 polished turd

>>3312379
i can relate, that'd be a lie to say i finish all of my artworks since most of the stuff i draw are quick warm-ups and sketches on paper
i do find it extremely useful to focus on some pieces and actually finish them once in a while though

[Anonymous No.3312604]

>>3312452

[Anonymous No.3312608]

>>3312604
It's shit and different from the original.

[Anonymous No.3312620]

>>3312588
I like the brushwork! Do you have any blog?

[Anonymous No.3312624]

My brand new digital drawing that took about 2 months to be done. Can you check it out? The lady's lineart was made on FireAlpaca, the entire drawing such as the background and the colouring were made on Krita and the drawing's contrast and light were refined on Photoshop.

[Anonymous No.3312626]

>>3312624
looks amazing love your style

[Anonymous No.3312634]

>>3312624
>Facebook filename

Really activates my almonds

[Anonymous No.3312635]

>>3312634
I grabbed it from a mediocre art group I’m in. The text in my post is a copy of what the “””artist””” himself wrote.

[Anonymous No.3312639]

>>3312635
Alright, so you're some shithead who finds validation in putting down other people's artwork. Thanks for providing such a thought provoking post.

[Anonymous No.3312648]

>>3312639
I didn’t want to shit up the board any more than necessary by creating a new thread. This is a terrible fucking drawing and I figured you guys would get some lulz out of it.
I even had the decency to remove the guy’s signature, so calm your fucking tits you nigger.

[Anonymous No.3312650]

>>3312648
>> My brand new digital drawing that took about 2 months to be done.
I hope the author was simply unable to work on it more than ten minutes a day.

[Anonymous No.3312661]

>>3312452
Thanks for the redline! I should've measured the proportion more carefully while sketching, time to go through loomis again

[Anonymous No.3312667]

>>3312661
>time to go through loomis again
Really?

[Anonymous No.3312792]

>>3311996
This has appeal in my opinion but like the other anon pointed out, too many anatomy mistakes.
Work on those issues and your work will look pretty good IMO.

[Anonymous No.3312832]

>>3312588
this pleases me
thank you for sharing

>>3312311
ty

[Anonymous No.3312903]

>>3312588
How are you so good?

[Anonymous No.3312934]

>>3312903
shit meme

[Anonymous No.3312941]

>>3312420
Awesome skill, but deserves a better redline than this shit: >>3312452

[Anonymous No.3313055]

>>3312604

Her body isn't twisted to a vantage point where we would --supposedly-- be seeing cheek shot that far so >>3312452 is right. You may either be blind, retarded or very likely, both. Either way a very odd form of shitposting in here.

[Anonymous No.3313131]

hi i was wondering how i could improve the motion of this figure?

[Anonymous No.3313140]

>>3310788

Why don't you read it? The author is insanely good at perspective.

I've seen nothing but good work come out of that book.

[Anonymous No.3313182]

[Anonymous No.3313200]

I decided to start drawing recently and bought a small wacom tablet, just got it configured right and have been testing it out.

How do you lineart with this stuff? When I draw lines short they turn out really scratchy, and when I try to do longer, sweeping lines they get really wiggly and bad looking. Help?

[Anonymous No.3313206]

>>3313200
If you just started drawing on digital, you probably need a bit of time to get used to it.
Other than that, i know you said you had it configure right but, ded you check pen sensitivity?, as well as active area? either of those could help you out a bit if setted properly according to your needs.
The last thing i can think of is zooming, maybe you are trying to do the lines from too close (too zoomed in)?
If nothing else, i guess you could try a software with integrated line stabilizer, like SAI, but you should probably check the other things first

[Anonymous No.3313209]

>>3310997
i really like your style, do you post anywhere that i can follow you?

[Anonymous No.3313214]

>>3313131
the shoulders line up perfectly with the hips, from the waist up it looks she could be standing still, try putting more curves into the form.

[Anonymous No.3313218]

>>3313209
>>3312311
posted it here already
thanks a lot senpai
i just recently tried to get into painting though

[Anonymous No.3313234]

Been lurking for a while, I've not posted in over 6 months. I posted the progress shots for this ages ago, but now i've finished the full set. Same-face is plaguing me but I'm still working on that. I designed these Alcoholic beverage magical girl designs and I honestly want to make more, but I've hit a wall.

[Anonymous No.3313257]

Tell me why I suck please.

>>3309778
c-cute

[Anonymous No.3313268]

>>3313257
Left dude head is a bit iffy, specially his near eye

Otherwise it is pretty good

[Anonymous No.3313272]

>>3313234
these are great

[Anonymous No.3313274]

>>3310174
10-head and girl's upper hand is fucked up. Colors are fantastic. I guess make the arm cutoff point of the guy follow the contour of the muscle better.

>>3310302
The eye towards the side with hand up is lower than the other. Ear alignment also messed up, they don't match heights. Face is off but I can't tell you why. It's dynamic and works.

>>3310392
Fluffy, I approve.

>>3313234
It's extremely tumblr. it's fine for what you're going for but knees and legs are your weakest point. Can you draw hands in more than one pose?

[Anonymous No.3313283]

>>3313268
Thanks. Not sure if this fixed it, moved the eye a bit. Also cleaned up his hair.

[Anonymous No.3313284]

>>3313283
**file

[Anonymous No.3313290]

>>3313182
hes beginning to feeltheform.

[Anonymous No.3313295]

>>3313274
Yeah, these aren't completely new.
My hands have improved in the sense that I've been trying to mess with other poses, but I've always leaned toward lobster claw looking stuff. Legs/knees/feet are the bits where I've forced myself to sit down and go through and draw each independently. Trying to shed the tumblr knee craze that's been following me since I've started. I've hidden under the safety net of, "generic cartoony-semi-realistic fashionable girl portrait looking off to the side at 3/4th angle" for an incredibly long time, so It's stunted my progression. I want to get better at drawing slightly lankier/model tier figures, since I want to build a portfolio for my clothing designs. It's just hard to take the fashion itself seriously when it's dressed on an anatomical mistake bingo card.

[Anonymous No.3313300]

Does anything feel off about the eyes? Maybe I'm just paranoid but I wanna check before officially posting it. My last attempt looked a bit cross eyed >>3312211

EDIT: Flipped because >duplicate file

>>3313200
The first thing you should do is check if the aspect ratio of your tablet is properly aligned with your monitor's. Go into the Wacom Tablet Properties > Mapping and make sure "Force Proportions" is checked.

Second thing is that most older versions of Photoshop don't have any stabilization, so that might be a factor.

Besides these, getting used to a tablet takes some time and feels extremely weird at first, but once you get the hang of it it'll come naturally and your lines should be better then.

>>3312588
This looks lovely. Blog?

[Anonymous No.3313311]

>>3313295
>on an anatomical mistake bingo card.
Not being a fatty isn't an "anatomical mistake." There are more than the two extremes of ham or emaciated.

[Anonymous No.3313312]

>>3313311
I was referring to the legs/knees/hands bit moreso with that.

[Anonymous No.3313316]

>>3313311
And I was *also* referring to how I currently draw my figures. I have no problem with the standard figure for fashion design, since it's drawn in a way to show off the clothing itself, which Is why I want to learn how to do it.

[Anonymous No.3313335]

Anything, but mostly looking for feedback related to the clothes, how do you make them more believable? i've done a fair amount of studies, both from pictures and draws, and i'm still stuck with it

[Anonymous No.3313360]

>>3309733
quick thing from last saturday

[Anonymous No.3313372]

>>3312420

Is this helpful? Mostly the arms were too long, legs were too low, and shoe looked too small.

[Anonymous No.3313420]

>>3313300
move the eye that's on her left a little bit closer to where the nose is, it seems a bit to far off the side/arm

[Anonymous No.3313427]

>>3313420
You mean like this? More, less?

[Anonymous No.3313429]

Too tired to continue. Arm is probably wrong, would appreciate redline because I'm a blind faggot. (He's kissing his wedding ring. Hope it's obvious but maybe not.)

[Anonymous No.3313438]

>>3313284
Better but I feel you can still afford to move it a bit to our left and perhaps some couple of pixels down

>>3313290
Thanks, I would say the feeling comes and goes. I guess today was a "not so bad day"

[Anonymous No.3313467]

>>3313335
looks fine to me, except for the sleeves. It needs to be poofier. Making it believable will depend on how you color it
This might help I was just watching it a while ago
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAHa7oi4PVY

[Anonymous No.3313470]

>>3313257
I guess the way you drew them makes them look bland and boring? Try giving them better dynamic poses. Or maybe cool looking ones

[Anonymous No.3313471]

i haven't drawn anything but environments or even studied anatomy in months and now i need a cigarette

this is up for sale starting bid $300

[Anonymous No.3313480]

>>3313429
I think the silhouette of kissing a ring would be stronger from the side. In general it just looks like his hand is in front of his face.

Take few pictures of yourself doing the pose and see which reads the best, then use that as reference.

[Anonymous No.3313506]

Screw it. I'm done. Better to end it than to keep obsessing over every detail.

[Anonymous No.3313527]

>>3313506
good job anon

[Anonymous No.3313542]

>>3313506
Good job.

[Anonymous No.3313550]

>>3313471
Starting to shake off the rust now. We'll see how this goes I guess

[Anonymous No.3313551]

>>3313542
Post work crabby

[Anonymous No.3313580]

>>3313429
the hair seems a little bit off
or maybe the light eyebrows and the missing beard color throws me off

[Anonymous No.3313663]

>>3313372
That isn't in the correct perspective.

[Anonymous No.3313741]

>>3313550

[Anonymous No.3313750]

>>3313550

[Anonymous No.3313786]

>>3312608
>>3313055
but tyronne...

[Anonymous No.3313821]

[Anonymous No.3313824]

i drew a cheeb

[Anonymous No.3313826]

>>3313821
do you mind if i ask how long this took you

[Anonymous No.3313827]

>>3313826
sketch a day and a half. (redraw several angles and various different poses.) rendering an entire morning.

[Anonymous No.3313830]

>>3313827
really really good

[Anonymous No.3313867]

landscapes are hecking hard

[Anonymous No.3313889]

>>3313750
This looks incredible, but the legs could use some refining to appear less asymmetrical. If you mentally trace a path from where the visible portion of the thighs meet the hips you can see that one leg is too wide and the other too narrow.

[Anonymous No.3313894]

>>3313889
Yeah I see what you mean. I did some editing on the swollen right knee but good eye about the hips.

Right now I'm worried she looks too manfaced.

[Anonymous No.3313905]

>>3313429
Should kiss the back of the hand instead. Just looks like he's kissing his palm

[Anonymous No.3313907]

>>3313506
Critique time

> add more line weight
> grey and skin colors are fine but don't tone everything with plain white
> secondary shading is too dark and should be used more sparingly
> hair shading needs more contrast, use of gradients looks out of place with everything else in solid cel-shading
> shading on horns (?) makes them look too flat

[Anonymous No.3313916]

>>3313894
i like the face, it's very early 00s but in a good way

[Anonymous No.3313922]

>>3313372
I appreciate it, the mistake wasn't obvious to me at first but now it's pretty clear where I got it wrong

[Anonymous No.3313954]

Why is hair so hard?

>>3313335
The long hair on the sides (especially her right side) is extremely voluminous to the point where it would be impossible to have that much hair. Leave some white space to show that it's being strewn out.

>>3313360
Looks fine overall, but lower jaw is way too low/prominent and her fingers are very chicken scratchy.

>>3311994
KEK

[Anonymous No.3314065]

>>3313527
Thanks
>>3313542
;_;
>>3313907
Thanks anon. Can you elaborate more on
>grey and skin colors are fine but don't tone everything with plain white

[Anonymous No.3314198]

mika jougasaki

[Anonymous No.3314201]

>>3314065
Sure. What I meant was that, for highlights, you should use a lighter color than the base (rather than just plain white).

> pic related not mine, but is a good example of rendering hair

[Anonymous No.3314476]

/beg/ af

[Anonymous No.3314480]

>>3314476
i can tell

[Anonymous No.3314490]

>>3313824
Weird proportions but still cute

[Anonymous No.3314493]

>>3314476
better than nosebro

[Anonymous No.3314519]

Posting this before it goes up on my blog so i can read "kill yourself" multiple times in the replies.

[Anonymous No.3314522]

>>3314519
forgot pic

[Anonymous No.3314545]

>>3313467
>>3313954
Thanks, i'll see what i can do

[Anonymous No.3314548]

>>3313824
a rival appears

>>3314490
thank you anon, I was going for cute!

[Anonymous No.3314558]

>>3314548
the short red strokes in the grey hair seem a little bit hard on the eye, i find

[Anonymous No.3314563]

>>3313506
this just makes me kinda sad.
i feel like this is a weirdly technically made image just to portray some weird anime fetish. there is no soul to it. it doesn look like you like to draw, it looks like you needed an image of some fetish and started frankensteining this together. there is nothing graphic about it. the lines, the shading, the hair, the colours all just look dead. like vectors.

[Anonymous No.3314564]

>>3313360
good job koshi
though i feel like you could work on your line quality a bit, even with sketches. like youre drawing a lot of short, careful little lines and not many long, dynamic lines

[Anonymous No.3314565]

>>3314558
mm, i was wondering if anyone else felt that way, I'll fix that. thanks for the input!

[Anonymous No.3314568]

[Anonymous No.3314569]

>>3314493
Who is nosebro? no bully pls

>>3313905
Kissing back of hand is kind of awkward. For me at least works better this way, but I concede I needed to rotate everything majorly. Did slight cleaning, and I cannot draw a shirt.

>>3313580
Hair was shitty yes, is it better?

>>3313480
Would be total redraw to change to side view. I thought a straight hand in front would look cool, but the action is too awkward in reality.

[Anonymous No.3314571]

>>3314569
dont ask about nosebro, hes an attention whore, just fyi

[Anonymous No.3314576]

[Anonymous No.3314601]

>>3314565
no problem

>>3314569
i think the main reason the hair feels so off is bc kotetsus hair usually has its parting on the side of the head, meanwhile in this picture it seems to be more on the top of the head
and usually his hair is styled back a little more, so the strands in the back towards the top might feel a little to loose

[Anonymous No.3314631]

>>3311806
Fuckin love this style.

[Anonymous No.3314635]

>>3314601
Damn it I wish I could do color sketches like this.
I keep trying and failing and I just have no damn clue how to approach it.

[Anonymous No.3314637]

>>3314476
/cringe/ af

[Anonymous No.3314638]

>>3314601
Fuck. Thanks for spotting it. I'm terrible with character consistency. References, I should use references...
What is glowing pearl-ball alien thing?

[Anonymous No.3314642]

>>3314635
>pic related
i'm a lazy fuck

>>3314638
now that's some good kotetsu hair
>glowing pearl-ball alien thing
it's zenyatta from overwatch

[Anonymous No.3314645]

>>3314563
Wow that's harsh. I remember him posting different attempts at shading it earlier. I think he just doesn't really know how to blend well and went with some kind of cellshading attempt because of that.

[Anonymous No.3314657]

>>3314548
Might be good to make her facial features rounder if you're going for the chibi look. It looks like a normal head placed on a chibi body. But it's still cute so there's that

[Anonymous No.3314658]

>>3314522
I love you anon<3

[Anonymous No.3314660]

Hi, I am looking for advice from more experienced artists like you.
I have never done anime style but I am going to make a drawing for a lady friend (her character from her dumb "oc do not steal" days), It is a cat girl with a spear.
Where can I get a good pose for it? I just don't want to copy a cool drawing and it end up being too similar, or is it common for manga artists to re use poses and therefore ok if someone recognizes?
Forgive my english and thanks in advance.

[Anonymous No.3314666]

>>3314660
drawing anime is literally just drawing people with deformed weeb heads. naturally, if you can draw a person the only thing you need to work on is anime skull construction and facial details

quickposes has a variety of poses for you to look at and practice with, from there you can probably make one from imagination that interacts with a spear

[Anonymous No.3314670]

>>3314666
Thank you, and you are right about it just being deformed people, just thought how they pose characters seems to have something distinctive I cant put my finger on so having a pose someone else did would help someone like me, thanks again I am looking at regular people posing now too

[Anonymous No.3314836]

Do you often redline your finished lineart?
It's kinda hard to redo your lines when you finally finished it.

I tried to redline mine and I think it looks more dynamic(?).
Which do you prefer?

[Anonymous No.3314842]

>>3314836
That's terrible. Your original was better.

[Anonymous No.3314858]

>>3314836
Last one, beautiful drawings!

[Anonymous No.3314875]

>>3314836
No but your post made me consider it. Your fix is better, but I think you should put some emphasis on the weight that's being held by the weight bearling leg, especially in the pelvis.

[Anonymous No.3314903]

>>3314836
Much better, huge improvement imo.

[Anonymous No.3314930]

>>3309876
It might be a bit of personal preference, but I think you're relying on airbrush too much. It results in a muddy indecisive rendering, so maybe block in the shadows with a harder more opaque brush and soften the edges afterwards, where the form turns softly.
Nice tits btw.

>>3309846
Very ambitious pose, I like it. In the future I'd just practice cleaner lines, Drawabox might be good for you. Check out Invader Zim or Jamie Hewlett's art for inspiration.

>>3311648
Fingers point towards the center of the palm. That's just a general tip, but please fix the overlap on her right hip (it should be hip behind cloth, not the other way around).
That's all, honestly, very good job anon.

[Anonymous No.3314945]

>>3314842
>>3314858
>>3314903
Thanks for the feedback!

>>3314875
>emphasis on the weight that's being held by the weight bearling leg, especially in the pelvis.
How do you draw/express this?

[Anonymous No.3314965]

Did I overdo the lights? Is the tit inappropriate?
I heard tumblr likes flashy rendered stuff, not sure where the sweet spot is.

I might not be able to respond later on, so thanks in advance for any insight.

>>3309763
Talking about rendering, you approach the translucent skin as an opaque material. The overall local value is relatively dark and shadows are much more about a hue/saturation shift than a shift in value. Shifting the value too much makes skin look like vax.
Check out Incase, his art is a good example of how subtle skin rendering can be.

I won't talk about the drawing aspect much 'cause I don't have a redline to support it.

>>3310997
I *wish* I sucked at painting the way you do, if that makes you feel any better anon :)

[Anonymous No.3314970]

>>3314965
Yeah, I'm not feeling it desu. The are below her tit sticks out in a negative way. Maybe try lowering the glow/bloom?

I'm sorry that I can't critique better.

[Anonymous No.3314972]

>>3314970
>The are
The area*

[Anonymous No.3314974]

>>3311648
good lines but the colors are ehh

[Anonymous No.3314975]

>>3314965
it's too bland, needs some additional something in the bg

[Anonymous No.3314985]

>>3311648
butter face, need better lines, better color. only thing carrying this is the pose

[Anonymous No.3314987]

might paint this later

[Anonymous No.3314990]

>>3314201
>You should NEVER do this
That's some garbage tumblr absolutism

I've seen hundreds of illustrations where pure white highlights look fantastic.

[Anonymous No.3314994]

>>3314965
Reminds me of the second pic here.
I would try to make it a bit more subtle.

[Anonymous No.3315032]

Obviously I'm noob but how am I doing, is there any hope? Is there something obvious I should work on more than anything else?

Give it to me straight, like a pear cider that's made from 100% pears.

[Anonymous No.3315034]

>>3314836
I sort of do that. But it's more like I get a better idea when I'm almost finished. So I end up changing it

[Anonymous No.3315038]

>>3314568
>not 999 clover
why does everyone do this

[Anonymous No.3315058]

Sketch.

[Anonymous No.3315061]

>>3314642
This is quite helpful, thanks

>>3314970
>>3314975
>>3314994
Thanks! I think 'bland' describes it well. I'll tone down the bloom and maybe add cushions or smth in the bg.
I'd give up all my skill and start from scratch for a bit more creativity tbqh

[Anonymous No.3315086]

>>3315058
shoo twitterwhore, shoo

[Anonymous No.3315102]

>>3315086
How is TGS a "twitterwhore"
or is anyone that uses twitter a whore now?

[Anonymous No.3315218]

>>3315058
Another one.

[Anonymous No.3315246]

hopefully I can figure out what's wrong with the gesture after leaving this alone for a bit, can't seem to figure out why it looks unnatural

[Anonymous No.3315292]

>>3315246
my first impression is that the spine is completely straight, whereas if I do that pose in my chair right now my pelvis is canted backwards and the spine curls forwards.

[Anonymous No.3315406]

Coming in with a fan favorite.

>>3314994
RACCOON DOG??? THEY'RE CALLED TANUKIS, DAMMIT

[Anonymous No.3315407]

>>3315246
Her left thigh is super flexed despite it being a relaxed pose (curves upwards instead of hanging down).
Also
>two left feet

Cute head tho, reminds me of Constanze from LWA.

[Anonymous No.3315480]

>>3314990
>tumblr absolutism
The trend started with nip art

>pure white highlights look fantastic
Post an example then? There are times when it works, yes, but in most cases it just looks like bland, plastic-like, /beg/-tier shit.

[Anonymous No.3315502]

[Anonymous No.3315528]

>>3315406
and you are called a degenerate retard

[Anonymous No.3315545]

>>3312588

[Anonymous No.3315564]

>>3314642
Thanks for help. Here's final.

[Anonymous No.3315577]

>>3314642
Done. Thank you for the help.

[Anonymous No.3315600]

>>3315545
>"agehao"

[Anonymous No.3315639]

>>3315528
KEK

[Anonymous No.3315642]

>>3315528
The retard craves attention
Stop responding to his posts

[Anonymous No.3315667]

sketches

[Anonymous No.3315689]

>>3314987
blog?

[Anonymous No.3315692]

>>3309799
>>3313257
>>3309933
thank you
I don't have any instagram account

>>3311144
I work on a huge canvas, plus I do the strokes while zoomed out. It's easier that way. Stabilization in CSP might also help

[Anonymous No.3315697]

>>3315692
>do you do lineart in fast strokes?
oops I forgot to answer. Yes, I do my lines in one fast stroke instead of slow carefully lines. I thought you said 'how did you do lineart in fast strokes'

[Anonymous No.3315722]

>>3315545
it is at this point that I realize the ear is just pasted on and there's no interaction between it and the hair at all

[Anonymous No.3315765]

>>3314642
See I've tried a process similar to this but I always end up polishing it too much. I can't seem to just wing it when it comes to placing the flat color or any of the rendering. Thanks for showing this though, maybe I'll try it again.

[Anonymous No.3315805]

clothing practice, think i did alright. still can't render hair though

[Anonymous No.3315812]

>>3315805
Folds look very nice, although the shadows on her sleeve are extremely dark. The ambient light will be enough to give the shadows some lightness to it.

[Anonymous No.3315918]

>>3313954
How do I get as good as you?

[Anonymous No.3316055]

i tried correcting the spine but it dosent feel as natural, having trouble finding ref too... need help

[Anonymous No.3316133]

>>3315667
>shape-shifting nose
nice jew anon

[Anonymous No.3316245]

>>3315918
We do not commend the furfag.

[Anonymous No.3316280]

>>3316133

[Anonymous No.3316351]

will be spending quite some time figuring out where i want to place the values

[Anonymous No.3316426]

how beg am I frenz? be honest plz

[Anonymous No.3316433]

>>3316426
as bad as this is I unironically enjoy the concept and think it could actually be an interesting piece if the hands weren't symbols, the fur/horns were textured and built up properly, and if you actually had line weight rather than bolding everything with a sharpie

7/10 concept 3/10 execution, mostly due to a lack of understanding form

[Anonymous No.3316439]

>>3316433
noice,ty dude. concept is the main shit im going for, maybe as a crutch cos my technical skills are kinda shit.
guess ill have to work on anatomy at some point. ive been putting it off for a while anyway

[Anonymous No.3316440]

>>3316439
ill post when finished too. maybe more people say nice things to me :)

[Anonymous No.3316506]

>>3316440
> maybe more people say nice things to me
> posting on /ic/

oh honey

[Anonymous No.3316526]

>>3316506
fuck off faggot. the people here are nice.
fuck you

[Anonymous No.3316596]

>>3316526
> proving my point

[Anonymous No.3316677]

atarashi shibun hockey kibun tenki genki

>>3316670
>>3316670
>>3316670