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IF YOU ARE A /BEG/INNER IN ART, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice. We should not have to make new threads or post in the Drawthread with our fundamental exercises.

Feel free to post even the smallest exercise you have done to show you are still trying, do not give up, make someone proud.

RESIZE YOUR IMAGES TO ~1000 PIXELS:

#1)
>screenshot the image and post that instead

#2)
>change camera capture settings to something smaller

#3)
>send to computer and resize in MSPaint

→ →
There's a new (and cleaner) sticky in town! You can see it at:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj

TRY TO BE MORE ACTIVE AND GIVE PEOPLE SOME FEEDBACK - many studies are left unreplied, which is a bit sad and can be quite demotivating for the people that try their best to improve, but are left directionless.

PREVIOUS THREAD: >>3269976

>> No.3273886
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ESSENTIALS:

>>>/ic/thread/3023643
Links to many art books including as Keys to Drawing (Dodson), Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain (Edwards), Perspective Made Easy (Norling), Color and Light (Gurney), The Vilppu Drawing Manual (Vilppu) and How to Draw (Robertson).

>http://ctrlpaint.com
A website dedicated to understanding the basics and process of digital painting, based in Adobe Photoshop. Library of over 200 free videos.

>http://quickposes.com
Free pose library to practice drawing the human figure (as well as a portrait library). Draw at your own pace or set a timer for quick gesture drawings.

>http://youtube.com/user/ProkoTV
Instructional how-to videos covering mostly portrait and figure drawing from fine artist Stan Prokopenko.

>https://www.youtube.com/user/onairvideo
Croquis Cafe - Timed model poses.

>http://drawabox.com
Controversial yet helpful introductory course on the fundamentals of drawing with a focus on understanding the concept of form and thinking in a 3-dimensional mindset while you draw.

>Your local life drawing class
Life drawing is an indispensable tool in your art career. Do not be intimidated based on your skill level - there will always be someone worse than you and someone better than you. Use this opportunity to meet new artists for learning, critique, and growth.

>> No.3273893

After studying Keys to Drawing, Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain and Fun with a Pencil I wanted to try out Figure Drawing by Loomis.

I'm having a bit of a hard time figuring out where to start with the book. It first introduces some basic stuff like how many heads fit into a human's body, then it suddenly jumps into perspective without explanation and after several of those pages there's the part titled: WE BEGIN TO DRAW: FIRST THE MANIKIN FRAME. So is that where I'm supposed to start? What about all the previous stuff? Will it be referenced later?

>> No.3273895

I cannot seem to grasp the concept of gestures at all. Every book and tutorial I read tells me to "just get the feel of the flow of the pose with only a few lines" and then I swear it feels like every single example is a piece with finished anatomy. I don't get it. What am I supposed to do in 60 seconds: draw a few lines to get "the action" of the pose, or finish the fucking anatomy?

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wkward

I took a break of two days
but I’m back
Trying tu push the form I will try again. It looks awkward

This exercise is from villpu videos forgive

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>>3273895
White few lines you should be available to get the gesture.

Depending how much time and level you have you can take it further.

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>>3273893
And yet another retard bites the dust.
Serves you right for falling for keys to drawing meme.

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>>3273904
pls explain anon :(

>> No.3273910

>>3273901
So I'm supposed to draw the anatomy.

>> No.3273913

>>3273909
Read the last thread.

>> No.3273916

>>3273910
Well

First gesture
Then form ( here depending how much knowledge you have of anatomy your forms will show to the viewer, you don’t need a huge anatomy knowledge here, just proportions actually)

Then construction
Finally anatomy

(This teowork together)

The details

This is how I saw pros like villpu approach the human figure

>> No.3273918

>>3273916
I guess I'm just missing the point of the exercise. Drawing some circles and lines over the course of a minute feels like it's barely more useful than just drawing a stick figure, but apparently anatomy and gesture are the same thing and I'm supposed to be doing WAY more than just gesture when I'm being told to do gestures?

>> No.3273924

>>3273910
Dude
Forever about learn more anatomy for now
Go for gesture then apply little general knowledge to your gesture using “form”
And go over the form using wrapping lines.

Watch villpu videos gesture and form

>> No.3273926

>>3273918
>>3273910
>>3273895
gesture is worthless if you're doing fine art (a.k.a. the only real art)
the only people who care about gesture are failed animators and tumblr fadchasers
you don't need it
grind perspective and anatomy instead
i recommend copying bridgman for a while
he's all about construction (which is the only thing you should ever give a shit about)

>> No.3273927

>>3273918

Do a page of gestures and post them here. It'll be much easier for us to help you when we know where your work's at.

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>>3273884
I haven't really drawn in years. (also never really practiced back then (anatomy etc.) (yes I'm an idiot)) I began to draw this year again and started to practice anatomy, gesture etc..

Can someone please critic my drawing? I got the inspiration from this axe girl thread.

>> No.3273935

>>3273904
I don't get your problem. I'm talking about Loomis, not keys to drawing. Which is precisely about construction.

>> No.3273939

>>3273935
Learn to ignore shitposters, anon.

>> No.3273940

>>3273935
If you cannot even read, then struggle, you fucking idiot.
I spoonfeeded you enough already.

>> No.3273941

>>3273895
gesture is just flow, and it doesn't have to match the anatomy as closely as it seems. in fact, you shouldn't even be thinking about anatomy until you've finished the gesture.

>> No.3273942

>>3273939
But he is the only one that answered my actual question.

>> No.3273944

>>3273942
"Answered" it with a laughing anime girl picture. and calling you retarded He's just shitposting to get a rise out of you.

>> No.3273948

>>3273904
who is the artist of this fabulous girl? Please tell me. I'll do anything..

>> No.3273951

>>3273948
She's from Kakegurui, an edgy teenage manga.

>> No.3273955

>>3273951
Oh I know that anime. I watched the whole thing in one day lol. Damn can't believe I didn't realize it sooner. Didn't know the actual manga artist was this good. Cause usually the manga art is a little downgraded from the actual anime.. cough cough AOT.

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>>3273927
I just don't feel like I'm getting the idea behind gestures, and instead it feels like I'm skipping it and going straight to anatomy. Am I doing this right or wrong? Because it feels like I'm doing it wrong.

>> No.3273970

>>3273934
Everything you said in your post can be seen in your drawing. It's extremely flat and the anatomy is broken. It looks like you really didn't take time or put thought into making this.

Now that the dirty stuff is out of the way, I suggest you start with Loomis's Fun With A Pencil, then when you get comfortable watch the free Traditional Drawing videos on Ctrl+Paint. That'll be a good starting point. Stick to it and you'll see improvement within a week or so.

>> No.3273978

>>3273970
thank you anon

>> No.3273979

>>3273940
What? LITERALLY who the fuck are you?

>> No.3274010
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I'm having a hard time painting. I tried blocking in the highlights and darkest spots, but I'm not sure where to go from there. I'm also trying to do it would sampling the colors directly from the ref image.

>> No.3274019

>>3273968
you need to draw looser and less detailed
check out prokos gesture video on youtube for an explanation

>> No.3274020

>>3274010
wrong values on both ends of the spectrum

>> No.3274023

>>3274020
Is there anything I can do to be able to recognize them more accurately?

>> No.3274056

>>3274023
do still lives of objects/fruits instead of something as complex as a human being

>> No.3274061
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>>3274056
Sounds good. I haven't done that since my digital painting class.

>> No.3274085 [DELETED] 

>>3273904

>anime posting crab

Obviously you don't draw.

>> No.3274090

>>3274085
stop replying to bait

>> No.3274091

>>3273904

Post your work.

>> No.3274099

>>3274010
make a bunch of random grey circles on a page without looking at the value, and then match the value by going back and forth and drawing over te original circle. You've gotta train your eyes to see values

>> No.3274119

>>3274099
I'll try that.

>> No.3274121
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>>3273968
try doing simpler less detailed drawings to practice gesture. if you want to do extra studying by throwing anatomy on top thats always fine but missing the point. the purpose of the simpler drawings is to stop looking at the details of a subject, but looking at the direction and flow of its pose instead. think of directional arrows and use large sweeping strokes to indicate the gesture of an entire limb and then break it down into the next largest pieces. seriously dont concern yourself over details while practicing this, its purely to add more life to how you approach a drawing.

>> No.3274123

I want to get good at drawing without any effort. I can't shit out anything decent, and my tablet is a piece of shit that doesn't work (can't calculate pressure anymore)

I just want to draw sexualized Pokemon.

how the fuck do I do it /ic/?

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Does anybody have any tips on drawing in weird perspectives? I drew this a while ago and can't even come close to anything like it without it coming out looking wonky as fuck

>> No.3274127

>>3274123
Just believe in yourself.

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Long time no drawing since inktober, this is the year where I will finally get to understand those complicated ass loomis exercises.

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>>3273951
>>3273955
She's definitely not from Kakegurui

>> No.3274219
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Could anyone tell if this is okay/good or has any kind of advice
I've been drawing since 3 or 4 days
Its the "the new drawing on the right side of the brain" exercise and I was using nipnop clip studio paint

pls no bully

>> No.3274221

>>3274219
>drawing on the right side of the brain
Only bullying for you.

>> No.3274248

I hate when I feel like I understand something, but I'm just incapable of doing it. Spent way too long trying to freehand boxes only to give in and use a line tool to correct them and then still struggle to get them right, with a grid and a line tool.

>> No.3274254

>>3274248
I managed to do it after a few days of practicing. Don't give up.

>> No.3274259

>>3274254
Do I really need to be freehanding it? I know it would improve some parts of it, but I don't see the point when any time I'd be doing this kind of things, I'll have a linetool or a ruler.

>> No.3274264

>>3273909
anyone try this? the hair is really difficult to even imagine.

>> No.3274277

>>3273884
if whoever draws this is still around and looking for feedback. Tell me, ill make ya a vid.

>> No.3274294

>>3274277
are you proko

>> No.3274297

>>3274221
so mean

>> No.3274305
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3274305

Erik olson on his famous perspective course is explaining auxiliary vanishing points, and for a perfect square he's making an auxiliary vp to the station point but says it's 45 degrees.. why it isn't 30 degrees? Or all auxiliary vp are supposed to be 45?

>> No.3274317

>>3274305
>why it isn't 30 degrees?
Are you fucking autistic?
Diagonal splits angle of the squire into 2 equal parts, hence it's 45 degrees.

>> No.3274323

>>3274317
Oh okay I am very sorry. He was referencing 30 degrees throughout the video so I thought that there was a connection.

>> No.3274328

>>3274323
30 degrees is the radius of the cone of vision.
Nothing to do with vanishing points.

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>>3273884
does someone have some tips with drawing from the shoulder, I keep going back to the wrist


I just feel like im incapable of doing it, its very frustrated ;-;

>> No.3274332

>>3274329
Do you fucking understand why you should draw from the shoulder in the first place?

>> No.3274336

>>3274332
yeah for stuff like gesture drawing, like to be able to put down long lines that arent possible to be done with the wrist.

right?

>> No.3274344

>>3274336
I asked why, not for what.
Think of the actual reason.

>> No.3274359

>>3274344
then I don't understand.

>> No.3274373

>>3274359
No wonder you keep going back to the wrist.
Draw correct ellipses free hand in the squares in perspective. Do it until you are able to get at least decent looking ones every time. You can draw as you like, from wrist or should, it doesn't matter.
Maybe this way you will be able to understand some things.

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3274386

why does this prick keep doing this? 'oh just draw a tilted plane. no, I'm not going to tell you how to draw a tilted plane for another 100 pages though' at least this time he's actually told us what page we can learn it on.

what a shitty fucking book.

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3274387

Anyone else started working with acrylics?
I wanted to try something colourful for a change after only drawing with pencils, but I'm kind of having a hard time making the transition.

So, how did/do you go about when changing mediums?

>> No.3274390

>>3274386
It was made too keep all mirroring techniques in the one place, faggot. And this is not even that important right now. Just proceed. You will need to come back and review first half of the book later anyway.

>> No.3274392

>>3274390
ok thanku

>> No.3274430

>>3274373
Like square planes u mean? cuz thats pretty hard man.

>> No.3274432

>>3274373
Not that anon, but I have no idea where the fuck you're going with this.

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>> No.3274503
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3274503

about 3-4 months ago i started drawing on and off for about 25 days up until now, decided to seriously get back to it and practice for at least an hour per day.

Reading loomis atm,also practicing 2 minute gesture drawing with quickpose
am i on the right track for improvement?

>> No.3274533
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3274533

I drew Ryo Asuka from Devilman I noticed the torso is a bit off and the gun is pretty simple.

>> No.3274614

>>3274123
loomis

>> No.3274623

>>3273926
Never gonna make it.

>> No.3274629

1.Can I learn to draw without buying books?
2. Is it necessary to buy a drawing pencil set?

>> No.3274635

>>3274373
i did a lot of these, still dont get u dawg.

>> No.3274659

>>3274629
yes
no

>> No.3274667

>>3274629
most books are online 4 free, if you mean without reading books that a whole different story.

>> No.3274673

>>3274121
>>3274019
Thanks for the help, anons. I'll do my best to be less detailed, but I'm not optimistic. Whenever I'm drawing, there's this nagging feeling that if I don't focus hard on the anatomy or block in the construction immediately, then the whole thing is going to be an unstructured mess. I can obviously tell that's not what actually happens, since >>3274121 is leagues better than anything I'm doing, but I don't know how to .. I don't know, unfocus? I feel like an idiot asking about it because I'm apparently making things more complex than I need to.

>> No.3274680

>>3274629
books are great, but instruction from someone who knows what they're doing is even better
and no you don't need a drawing pencil set, you can draw from life with shitty ballpoint pens and still progress quickly

>> No.3274682

>>3274673
Gesture drawing is its own mindset for me. I think of it like the pre-construction phase where I'm exploring the essence of what I'm about to draw. From that you can have a better purpose of how to construct the forms to convey the message you want from the drawing. You have to do it enough where you can put yourself in the mindset to unfocus on details and draw what the shapes/forms feel like to you. It's unintuitive and deceptively difficult but it just takes practice. Eventually you'll start to incorporate it into your work and realizing how lines can be drawn "gesturally"

>> No.3274686

>>3274673
Try 30 second drawings. You can't block in anything in 30 seconds.

>> No.3274691

is drawing from photo websites like line-of-action actually hurting my development or is any practice good practice? because people on the internet talk like drawing from photos is worthless in comparison to life drawing because of lens distortion or something like that but it's not like I can get live models to draw from. and drawing randos in public is way too off-putting because people are nosy goddamn weirdos.

>> No.3274692 [DELETED] 

>>3274691
You don't understand what are you talking about.
Read a book on perspective, nigger.

>> No.3274695

>>3274691
You don't understand what you are talking about.
Read a book on perspective, nigger.

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3274696

This >>3273934 anon here

Just like >>3273970 suggested I started today with Loomis Fun with a Pencil.

Just a quick question how do I know wich line I should I "outline" and wich not? Does it come with time or should I stick do it till I get it?

Have some practice from the first few pages that I did today. Later I practice the angels I failed to draw and go on to the next pages. (Or should

>> No.3274703

>>3274691
Drawing from photo reference isn't going to help you as much as drawing from life because it's a lot like drawing with one eye closed; you can't see depth in a photo the same way you can in life. So, while it's probably not really going to hurt you if you're just practicing gesture, you're not going to be able to see how forms turns and twist and bend as well as you would doing life drawing.

As for drawing random people in public, you should try to get over that phobia and do it anyway. Sitting on a park bench and drawing people passing by, you can really get a feel for body types, motion, and the way age effects the two. Just close your sketchbook if you feel like somebody's getting too nosy, and if they get huffy about it, who gives a fuck? They're the one interrupting you.

>> No.3274708

>>3274121
not that anon you were helping but how long did your gesture take?

>> No.3274713

>>3274430
>thats pretty hard
Meant to be.
>>3274635
You are not trying hard enough.
You need to get correct ellipses. There is only one correct ellipse for every square. If you don't understand how to check if ellipse is correct or not, research it.
And use thin hard lines btw, easier to spot mistakes.
>>3274432
This is the exercise that naturally made me realize why you should draw from the shoulder.
Before that i didn't pay much attention to it.
Reason is pretty simple, think and you will understand.

>> No.3274714

Does anybody have any "neutral standing position" reference? FUCK, why is this gesture so hard to draw

>> No.3274715

>>3274713
You're incredibly unhelpful, please leave /beg/.

>> No.3274721

>>3274715
I can spoonfeed, but it wouldn't be helpful.
The sooner you stop being retarded and start thinking for yourself - the better.

>> No.3274727
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oh man ive just been doing music and photography mostly..

it was kinda fun to sketch something up fast.

>> No.3274728

>>3274721
This is the beginner thread, dipshit. Beginners need actual direction or they won't go anywhere. Telling someone "it's easy, just figure it out for yourself" is completely worthless and against the point of the thread.

>> No.3274731

>>3274728
This is why i gave him hints, you fucking cretin.
He had this problem for couple of weeks now, i remember his posts from before. This is the best way to help him.
Basically, shut the fuck up.

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>>3274686
>>3274682
Okay, so these were 30 seconds. Are these better or worse than what I was doing before?

>> No.3274743
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3274743

Can someone tell me what I'm doing right and wrong?

>> No.3274747

>>3274727
Hiding the hands and cutting off the legs at the knee is something you absolutely shouldn't be doing. You won't learn how to draw things by avoiding drawing them. Also, you're "center drawing," meaning the figure is mostly vertical, with no bends or twists, and very little dynamic movement. Try bending and twisting the forms away from the center line instead, while keeping the balance of the figure in mind. Also, you really need to practice drawing straight lines, and definitely use reference if you're going to draw technical objects like turntables.

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>>3274713
Im that anon that u told to draw those ellipses

should I just do the whole draw a box, cuz i can really get consistent ellipses.

>> No.3274750

>>3274748
cant*

>> No.3274751

>>3274748
>cuz i can really get consistent ellipses.
Post them.

>> No.3274752

>>3274748
bothering with draw a box is a meme to keep you from succeeding

>> No.3274753

>>3274696
Not sure what you are asking about outlines, you mean the dividing lines on the circle of the head? Those intersecting lines divide the circle into quarters and give it the illusion of being a sphere.

Your heads look alright for starting out. If you want a good challenge, try drawing a single head from multiple angles. This will help you understand form better. However, be prepared to fail a lot at first. Understanding 3D form and space is probably the biggest hurdle you'll have to make when first starting out.

>> No.3274754

I'm working through the ctrl+paint perspective videos. How important is it to be freehanding the boxes, sculpting, etc.? It feels like good practice to be sure, but at the same time, realistically, when will I be drawing using a perspective grid or without but aiming for accurate perspective without a straight line or line tool?

>> No.3274756

>>3274743
the hair you've drawn is just a mess of lines and scribbles, making it look flat
you should think of hair in volumes
block in the major shapes first, then render
also, finishing one eye and completely obscuring the other with hair instead of drawing it is a hallmark of the beginner
you see it all the time in teenage anime art (>>3274727 is a perfect example)
draw the other eye

>> No.3274757

>>3274754
Don't rely on the tools too much.
You need to learn how to control the line.
It would be hard to make correct curves later, because there is no straight edge to cheat with.

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>>3274751
there are alot I drew and deleted, didn't expect to post them.

>>3274752
hoped for it to be my one way ticket for fundies.

>> No.3274762

>>3274736
>>3274673
hey those look pretty good! as anatomy and such become ingrained in your mind, and you automatically can place certain landmarks of the body your gestures will become more correct. keep doing both kinds of study as they'll gradually meld together as you get better. things will feel unstructured now only because you're still training to make anatomy and structure a subconscious thing you automatically do. the important thing at the moment is to loosen up your drawings and learn how to sketch more freely. keep it up!

>>3274708
i dont remember, i was more focused on making it readable as instruction. gestures should be like 30 second exercises

>> No.3274763

>>3274757
True enough, thanks for the input! So it would be fine to do it freehand, then if I can't get it right, use a straight edge to correct so I don't spend so much time trying to fix it though right? I've been doing the planes, boxes, and making two dots and trying to connect them in one go exercises daily to really get ahold of it.

>> No.3274764

>>3274762
Thanks for all your help, anon. Drawing without tensing up and wrapping myself up in the future finished product are still my biggest hurdles, I think, but hopefully doing more gestures will help me with that. Thanks again!

>> No.3274768

>>3274758
Are you fucking trolling me, you fucking idiot?
In what world these are correct ellipses?
They look like shit.
Draw a grid, draw a square, multiply it in perspective and draw correct ellipses (FUCKING CORRECT) inside.
If you don't understand what is correct ellipse in a square, fucking research. Key words: minor axis, tangent points.
How to draw also has a chapter that can help.

>> No.3274769

>>3274768
Go be a complete fucking cunt somewhere else dude, seriously.

>> No.3274770

>>3274763
>use a straight edge to correct
Would be better to say "to clean up". You should be able to get it pretty close to "right" freehand.

>> No.3274771

>>3274764
thats the glory of digital drawing, using layers to mess around with before committing to an idea. Since you're working traditionally I'd advise just not worrying about ruining a piece of paper. every good artist has thousands of shitty sketches and poorly drawn gestures no one ever sees. buy some of that nice cheap newspaper sketch paper for this kind of stuff, its really freeing working on shitty paper that you wont save.

>> No.3274772

>>3274770
Yeah, that's more what I meant, to get that crisp, more clear line in the end instead of the one I might've been redrawing a few times.

>> No.3274773

>>3274768
GRRRRRRRR
ART IS SO FUCKING SERIOUS
RRAARGARHGHHHHH

>> No.3274776

>>3274768
read the thread before flying off the fucking handle like a babydick
>>3274750 where he immediately corrected his post and can't he can't get consistent ellipses

>> No.3274777

>>3274728

That's because he himself can't do them.

>> No.3274778

>>3274753
ah thank you anon.

I think when I fell comfortable enough i'll try this next

>> No.3274780

>>3274772
remember to draw more with your elbow and less with your wrist, line clarity comes with time and muscle memory

>> No.3274781

>>3274777
Hey he's totally dropping harsh wisdom bombs and not just venting on people, I'm sure of it

>> No.3274782

>>3274773

Art is like maths, this is the way of the honorable Japanese.

>> No.3274784

>>3274780
Will do, currently practicing on my iPad so it's easy to accidentally go to using the wrist.

>> No.3274785

>>3274781
and he definitely won't reply to every single one of these posts ripping on him
and he certainly won't do it in his bad english
and he totally won't blow up like an autist

>> No.3274786

>>3274776
Why the fuck he didn't say anything when i quoted
>cuz i can really get consistent ellipses
?
I didn't notice the edit.

Post still applies, he has to research what correct ellipse is.

>> No.3274789

>>3274785
>bad english
Examples of bad english?
There are some typos, but grammar is correct.

>> No.3274791
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>>3273898
More exercises

Guys I feel sad and depressed. I know you don’t care but
I just one to share this

I just realize how much I love art. No one support my passion. Art was a scape, now is a deep part of me.
Even if I’m frustrated and depressed I won’t shit post.

I won’t give up.

>> No.3274792

>>3274789
>>3274786
how about fuck off

>> No.3274796
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3274796

Lets get some constructive art jamming going. use this reference and work on anything you feel is your weakest skill. It can be gesture, figure drawing, anatomy, rendering, understanding light ect.
post it and mention what you were working on, grab your feedback and do it again.

>> No.3274799

>>3274792
Sick examples, mate.
You really blown me the fuck out. How would i recover?

>> No.3274801

>>3274796
That is what I call a “good reference” anon
Thanks

>> No.3274802

>>3274796
That's an awful reference.

>> No.3274803

>>3274799
>gets mad
>whole post becomes an example of his shitty english
true poetry

>> No.3274806

>>3274802

Tell that to villpu and proko

Bean section and form twist.

It seems good to me.

>>3273898

>>3274791

>> No.3274807

>>3274803
Who are you quoting?

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3274808

>>3274801
>>3274802
hahaha, ok heres a different one if you dont like that.

>> No.3274811

>>3274803
Holly shit
Just lets make art guys

Holly shit
Let’s get good. Dont waste time

>> No.3274813

>>3274747
so basically better anatomy, not cutting out sections that are hard to draw and trying to be more dynamic.. i dont think thats gonna come in a day but maybe in two months

>> No.3274816

>>3274803
>one word
>whole post
I edited the sentence, but forgot to change "blown" to the verb.
Looks like i'm ESL subhuman after all. I will see myself out.

>> No.3274817

>>3274813
That’s the spirit

>> No.3274821
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3274821

after learning how to draw for entire week i finally finished my masterpiece. my brothers 8 years old bamboo fun will thrive again!

>> No.3274827

the ellipse thing is really easy to understand, not sure how you didn't get him from the first few times. as you go up from your fingers, to wrist, to elbow, to shoulder, you have a larger axis upon which to create ellipses or straight lines. it's much easier to get consistent, confident lines from the shoulder than the wrist or fingers. if you did practice feeling how each of the ellipses felt then you'd realize it.

>> No.3274831

Why do all these anatomy courses work towards making you a damn medical expert when its the surface anatomy that matters?

>> No.3274835

>>3274831
you idiot. that thing you call "medical expert anatomy course" IS surface anatomy. you have no idea how complex human body is.

>> No.3274836

I want to get good at drawing, but there's a massive problem.

>> No.3274837

>>3274836
Alright.

>> No.3274838

>>3274835

Uh yeah, I do. Nice try there dumbass.

>> No.3274841

Is it better to study faces through line work or sculpting through values?
Should I draw the face or use brush tool to lay in values to sculpt through it when I'm studying references.
I mean it as a secondary stage after I'm done with the Loomis basics.

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ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES ME HATE DOING STUDIES

>> No.3274844

>>3274842
>anime gif
>complaining about drawing

A truly worthless post.

>> No.3274852

>>3274821
Is this the new contemporary “bomb”

“Art bomb”

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>>3274842
You hate doing studies
You hate study fundis
Fundis art tools to make art

Conclusion you don’t love art as we do

Leave...

>> No.3274861

>>3274860
this

>> No.3274864

>>3274860
>>3274861
do NOT tell me to quit art

>> No.3274878

>>3274864
That is the spirit
Know kill, fuck, fornicate the fundamentals. Go for it
Enjoy to study art.

>> No.3274879

>>3274842
You're cute anon. Show me your anime drawings after class.

>> No.3274887

How should I go about studying anatomy? I'm not looking to do proko/vilppuesque drawings. I just want to be able to do concept art/make my own characters. I feel like anything other than surface anatomy is just wasting time.

>> No.3274892
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3274892

I found out there's life drawing sessions about a half hour away from me. What is the best to go to for a beginner, one that's a 3-hour pose, one that's a 6-hour pose, one that's several 45-minute poses, or a session that's several 5 minute poses, working up to 25 minute poses?
What can I expect from life-drawing classes? I'm not an art student, I've never been to one. I

>> No.3274893

>>3274887

Read Hampton's "Figure Drawing: Design and Invention," and do the exercises in the book. Also, copy everything in there. Also copy and study Bridgman.

>anything other than surface anatomy is just wasting time
This is entirely incorrect. If you don't know how the underlying anatomy works and moves, your surface anatomy is going to look like shit because of it.

>> No.3274895

>>3274887
You don't have to know anatomy (all the technical shit), just do figure drawing till you know where every lump and bump go by heart in any perspective. :^)

>> No.3274904

>>3274893

I just don't see how the fuck I am supposed to memorize every single muscle/bone. I'm not good at remembering shit like that.

Landmarks, fine, but everything else I don't know.

>> No.3274907

>>3274904
so draw more often.
eventually you'll just know this shit.
I'm not even blowing smoke up your ass, that's actually how it works.
don't worry about remembering names though, that shit's completely unimportant

>> No.3274909

>>3274904
dont you have your own body? when you move you can not only see but feel bones and muscles moving. how can you not "be good at remembering" things that happen to your own body everyday. dont think about drawing people like they are some foreign alien structures.

>> No.3274912

>>3274907

I've been watching proko videos, looking up shit, shits just not sticking for whatever reason. I can barely draw heads right, everything looks flat even when I draw what I see. I don't do that whole "symbol drawing" horseshit so idk wtf the deal is.

Meh

Anatomy is one thing, drawing clothing/characters that dont suffer from sameface syndrome is another.

>> No.3274919

>>3274892

Is it an actual class, or is it just a life drawing session? Classes have an instructor who will go around, talking to the artists, answering questions and pointing things out. Sometimes there will be a critique of the work made during. Whereas a session just has a model on the stand, and you draw them--no critiques, no discussion, just drawing. Make sure you know which it is, and which you actually want to attend.

In my own personal experience, I hate going to classes in my area, and find most of the "students" who attend them to be insufferable and unskilled showoffs. Sessions have been much more useful to me, since they've been populated with artists who aren't looking to show off, they already know some things and are there to improve on their own merit. I've also met more working artists at sessions than classes (which makes sense), and been able to develop a network of colleagues locally because of it.

But your mileage may vary, as every art community is different.

>> No.3274921

>>3274912
Please post your work, it will give us a better idea of how to help you.

>> No.3274922

>>3274919
It's says it's a non-instructional, drop-in session. It says it welcomes artists of all levels, but I feel kind of nervous about going in as a beginner. How do you talk to people there? For some reason, I get the idea it's deadly quiet there, like a library.

>> No.3274924

>>3274904
Landmarks are the most important, but understanding musculature and which muscles will be visible depending on the action or pose they are in is really essential. knowing subconsciously how pectoral muscles lead into the shape of a breast or how shoulder muscles extend into the trapezius is what is going to make your drawings look more natural. Its not that you NEED to know names or even exactly what each muscle is, but knowing how all these shapes work together to create the human form is something you need to practice and study till it becomes a fundamental tool you use while you draw.

>> No.3274926

>>3274768
>muh art

>> No.3274928

>>3274922
>How do you talk to people there? For some reason, I get the idea it's deadly quiet there, like a library.
what else did you expect. people want to focus and do what they enjoy.

>> No.3274929

>>3274928
Oh, I don't mean that like it's a bad thing. I'm just curious how the other anon was able to network there.

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>>3274887
I like Zarins' Anatomy for Sculptors. If you also enjoy doodling simple OCs and stuff you'll probably like it since it's really terse.

>> No.3274932

>>3274922

That sounds like the kind of session I enjoy, where I've met complete beginners and seasoned pros alike. As for talking to people, usually people will talk before and after, but you should not talk during the session; idle chatter is distracting to basically everyone, and talking to everyone instead of drawing is a fast way to be asked to leave.

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separation of values
study
please feel free to call my study shit and point out what is wrong about it. You may help me a lot.

I'm serious.

Proportion is not what I was worry about here, the study is about value separation, recognize graphic shapes. It's like the skeleton of a ilustation or a photo.

I can go further with this by doing more details on the shapes. I don't know if this is a good idea. I will look for examples.

>> No.3274961

>>3274930
+1 for Zarins, that book is really good at breaking down anatomy into simple shapes.

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3274990

waif for our floor war.
tear me to shreds

>> No.3275033

>>3274933
do you have any pieces that you're working on right now or are you only working on finding values? it seems like a thing you should just keep in mind when drawing, not really as a study.

tbf, im not very impressed by the original piece either

>> No.3275072

>>3274933
what's the reference you're using?

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Sketching this up and was hoping to get a fresh set of eye that could tell me if perspective (is always one of the harder things for me) of the helmet looks right or how I should improve it a bit.

>> No.3275095

>>3274990
She's bee- eautiful. More pls

>> No.3275149

3.how to learn to draw from copying the others' work?

>> No.3275187
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>Can't find pic I need for lesson
>Can't ask for help
What do?

>> No.3275193
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3275193

>>3275187
You're too much of a fucking idiot to understand the lesson.

I can already tell you right now you're not going to succeed because you lack critical thinking. ANY FUCKING FORSHORTENED PICTURE WILL BE GOOD FOR THIS TASK. Here's one. Measure that shit and make me proud, brainlet.

>> No.3275198

i csp better than the krita and medibang?

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>>3275193
Sorry anon. I'll be smarter next time.

>> No.3275322
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3275322

I am trying to draw realistic from observation but I hate it.
Pic related is best I can do and it looks nothing like the actual subject.
I just wanna draw cute anime girls man

>> No.3275326

>>3275322
Then draw cute anime girls from observation.

>> No.3275333

em bois, how can i use the vanishing points to build bodys?

>> No.3275355

If there is framed ink download without page 105 missing?
I found two versions 55mb and 30mb. 30mb is just cleaned up version, it uses the same scans, page 105 is still missing.
Please help.

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3275364

i tried to draw oprah

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>> No.3275386
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>>3275370
sorry had to resize

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3275398

Feedback please.

>> No.3275408

I've spent a few years now practicing digital painting. I started out in color/edit threads on /d/ and /h/ because it was something I could actually focus on, and I've improved a lot of the years. Well now I've hit a wall. I've reached the point where I can paint people/clothing/landscapes extremely well if I have line-art to work with, but can't draw a single thing myself. I tried just picking up a sketchbook and going at it trying to draw what i wanted, but I got nowhere at all. I felt completely out of place not in front of a screen.
Should I just drop a few hundred on a drawing tablet with a screen? I feel retarded asking this, but not being able to use a single skill I've gained over this much time is painful.

>> No.3275414

>>3275408
>Should I just drop a few hundred on a drawing tablet with a screen?
They cost over 1000 and no, if you cannot draw in a sketchbook you won't be able to draw with a tablet.

>> No.3275417
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3275417

Does anyone have a video that explains symbol drawing well?

I have a friend that does it and i cant explain what it is, and any of the two resources i could find explain how to stop symbol drawing but not what it is.

>> No.3275418

>>3275414
But at least i would be able to use a medium im used to to practice, and gain skill on what I intend to use it for. My sister has been drawing for about as long as i've been painting, and cant use her tablet at all. Using her as an example of what i don't want to happen, wouldn't it be best to use what I intend to use later, from the start?

>> No.3275421

>>3275418
The majority of skills you learn in any medium are transferable, as well as the patience and discipline you develop. In the interest of saving money there is no reason to buy a tablet when you have so much to learn. Similarly, when you want to get into oil paints you start with charcoal so you can practice all the necessary skills without blowing all your money.

>My sister has been drawing for about as long as i've been painting, and cant use her tablet at all.
I can't make any conclusions unless I look at her physical and digital work. I think it is more likely that she is shit at drawing all together than the tablet's fault.

>> No.3275423

>>3275398
proportions, anatomy, gesture

>> No.3275433

How do I learn from copying?

>> No.3275437

>>3275433
Experience. Just like tracing.

>> No.3275438

>>3275417
Leave this board, you stupid normalfag.

>> No.3275440

>>3275437
learn from copying is just trying my best to draw it as same as the author did?

>> No.3275441

>>3275440
Sure.

>> No.3275444

>>3275440
Yeah. Welcome to the NGMI club btw.

>> No.3275451

Where should I start? From basic shapes?
I tried to google the shapes, it gave me unwanted results

Is pencil better than the mechanical?
>anything that mechanical pencils can't do?

>> No.3275452

>>3275451
Just start.

>Is pencil better than the mechanical?

Doesn't matter. I cold smear my shit on a piece of paper and create something better than you ever could with the most expensive pencil in the world.

>> No.3275454

>>3275451
Pencil can be tilted to achieve broad, soft lines that are good for shading. Having to sharpen them is irritating though.

>> No.3275459

>>3275451
You can't smell the freshly sharpened pencil.

>> No.3275462
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3275462

Where do I start learning color? Every book or video about it is shallow or retarded. I've already noted the majority of artists can't teach for shit, it's like they all have retardation when it comes to pass knowledge to someone.

I've downloaded color theory NMA videos and the guy just draws shit and expects everyone to understand what's going on. Also Color and Light by Gurney is just him talking like a random person would talk about light to you in a bus stop.

I need exercises.

>> No.3275466

>>3275462
Go color or you're not gonna make it.

>> No.3275467

>>3275466
Wait, what?

>> No.3275476

>>3275033
I make a finished painting every 2 weeks

Right now I’m just working on studies, figure drawing, line quality with pen dynamic bible exercises, block in, graphic shapes, values.

On this study I’m looking for graphic shapes , value, and a little about composition, this two is what makes a illustration super good even if you are no drawing realistically.
The goal here is to know how to separate the local values with shapes of the painting like a visual map.
I can tell you where I got this information and this kind study of you want.
If you honk I’m doing wrong, please tell me where.

>>3275072
Anon is beside the shapes
I think my study was so bad that you didn’t realize about it,
I will do better

>> No.3275479

>>3275441
>>3275444
didnt know it was mislead beginners day

>> No.3275481

>>3275440
it is usually about seeing how someone else solved a problem you have solved or tried to solve

>> No.3275482

>>3275479
But it isn't.

>> No.3275491

My family thinks I’m useless because I’m studying art.
I will get good really good and I will show them my master pieces after 15 years

>> No.3275493

>>3275491
So does everyone else here, anon.

>> No.3275494

>>3275493
Sniff
It feels hard sometimes
That is why some people shit post here because their frustrations.

>> No.3275497

this thread is useless

>> No.3275500

>>3275497
I'm useless.

>> No.3275538

>>3275497
welcome to beg

>> No.3275554

>>3275491
>I will show them my master pieces after 15 years
Trust me, 15 years is a really long time, some members of your family might not even live that long.

>> No.3275559

>>3274768
i never learned any of these, thats why I ask if I should do draw-a-box.

>> No.3275561

>>3275559
I told you what to do.

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>> No.3275565
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Looking for tips on how to improve

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>>3275565
Here's the picture. Don't know why 4chan turns it around.

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>>3275565
Here's the picture.

>> No.3275568

>>3275567
However I edit it beforehand 4chan turns it around for some reason.

>> No.3275594

I've been watching speedpainting videos and noticed that the intial sketch is pretty mediorcre all the details come from painting, so my questions is would it be best to just to use a sketch to get the general proportion correct and spend most of my time learning how to paint features.

Example:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=chG_GGTAQLM

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>>3275364
Draw more Oprah for the 2020 election

>> No.3275765

>>3275554
So I’m gonna learn them faster. Hell yeah

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3275776

long time friend has a weird obsession with my "art" and has pressed me to make them things for years

requested a tattoo based on some other images they showed me with a generic reaper/scythe and stuff like " a wasted life is worse than death" on it

i declined doing it for a while but had these words repeating in my head as my own self-motivating mantra for a few days and desired to draw something similar to this, so asked if they would be alright with me doing a lion--this is what i generally draw

they said OK

i approached it differently and utilized generic tattoo ribbon format

how is this for a sketch? i do not normally work with anything intended for a tattoo.

>> No.3275784

>>3275594
"would it be best to just to use a sketch to" - yes and no. Do not skip steps when you are a beginner, people that know how to paint( or draw for that matter) faces won't need a detailed underdrawing to paint the final. But if you don't know or have not drawn a good head before, enfasis drawn, I recommend going through the whole process.

>> No.3275787

Anyone got any tutorials on paintin fur coats on photoshop

>> No.3275795

>>3275565
Not horrible, get better references and keep practicing.

>> No.3275797

>>3275565
try working on gray sketch paper so you already have a midtone covering your entire canvas, and then you can practice values and shading easier with white charcoal and darker blacks. you'll learn more

>> No.3275798

>>3275776
pls dont get that tattoo, get a prof to rework it maybe.

not to be mean or anything :I

>> No.3275800

i was told frequently over the last month that my figures lacked gesture. here i am practicing gesture. please advise. i cant see the flaws here so please crit me so i can see them

>> No.3275805

>>3275800
sent :`)

>> No.3275808

>>3275800
Very good, technically sound.

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>>3275800

>> No.3275813

I don't even know where to begin, I've been watching Proko vids, etc. I don't know exactly HOW to practice, how much to practice at a time, etc.

I don't know if I should focus on one limb at a time or what.

Any suggestions?

>> No.3275818

>>3275813
The most important thing is that you drop the anxiety and start drawing. As with other activities, you will get familiar with what you do and if you're capable of self criticism you will see problem areas that can be improved on. The more specific questions like if you should draw for one hour or two hours or do a handstand every 5 minutes are so individual that something that works for one guy might not be super optimal for you.

If nothing else, try doing some drawings and post them here, with some luck you'll get constructive critique

>> No.3275824

>>3275818

I just get discouraged because these anatomy courses have you drawing muscular examples out the ass and I'm just looking to do concept art/my own characters for comics and shit, nothing manga wise until maybe after ive gotten good drawing realistic shit.

Memorizing all of the bones/muscles/etc just makes me wanna shoot myself because thats a fuck ton of information to try and retain/put to use.

>> No.3275830

>>3275798
please read: i am not the one getting it
it is a friend who has harassed me for years to make them something, who specifically wants my art

could you please point out what about it is wrong/needs reworking though? or are you just trying to be needlessly negative because oh no, only someone who gets paid can make stuff.

>> No.3275832

>>3275809
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aOtVUHgJqQk

>> No.3275836

>>3275824
I think you have an unhealthy way of looking at it. Suppose that 100 hours of anatomy studies are required to get a basic understanding of surface anatomy. You can either look at it as this huge slog that you have to get through 5 hours a day for like 3 weeks before you're allowed to have fun, or you can just spread those hours out over a 1000 hour journey and start drawing and looking things up in an anatomy book every time you notice something's wrong. This will place each referencing in a context which practically means that you will learn more and feel a small victory when you suddenly draw a bodypart better than you could 30 minutes ago, instead of jumping in as a (presumed) noob who lacks the skills to even digest all those little details.

>> No.3275839

>>3275830
i just looks fundamentally lacking, but if your friend insists

>> No.3275840

>>3275839
fundamentally lacking in what way?
anatomically?
compositionally?
stylistically?
lack of enough going on in the image?

>> No.3275849

>>3275839
Not that guy, but post your work.

>> No.3275851
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3275851

>>3275849
still pretty beg, but you dont need to be a pro to know not to tattoo >>3275776 on u

>> No.3275854

>>3275851
>critiques others work
>doesn't even know how to multiply square in perspective
Absolute state of /ic/, ladies and gentlemen.

>> No.3275857
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3275857

>>3275836

I just want to AT LEAST get to a level of doing something like this.

>> No.3275859

>>3275857
Yeah but you'll still learn more and have more fun if you do anatomy in bits.

>> No.3275868

>>3275809
you don't copy the models when you draw gesture. you're drawing the essence of the form, feeling how it flows. it's ok to exaggerate the poses. a majority of your lines are very static and straight lines with no energy. experiment with csi, c-curves, s-curves, and "lines". the vilppu vid linked is good but here are some others you've hopefully seen before. try to see what the difference is between what you're doing and what they're doing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ktfwayByRU#t=2m49s
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74HR59yFZ7Y

>> No.3275869

>>3275854
>tfw when ur literally the worst at giving advise ever :I

>> No.3275874

>>3275868
all of them start with an long curve for the lineofaction, after that i add in the blocks. isnt that correct? should i start using curved forms in the place of blocks?

>> No.3275882

>>3275874
you don't even sound like you're trying to understand.

>> No.3275887
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3275887

I'm a beginner, but yesterday I stumbled over Sycra's Youtube channel. I watched these three videos:

Iterative Drawing - The Fastest Way to Improve
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0ufz75UvHs

How to Practice Drawing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKFfSl-EBfI

How to Draw Eyes - From Realistic to Cartoons to Manga
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBadnTAzQFc

I First watched the Iterative Drawing one and tried it out. Then after that I watched How to Practice Drawing where I noticed how he Sycra doodled his way to something that looked good, then enforced the best lines.

I then took what I had learned from the iterative drawing process and combined it with that "doodling" way + the info from the eyes vid, and the result was stunning (at least I think so myself).

I can only recommend practicing this way.

>> No.3275889

>>3275882
should i start using curved forms in the place of blocks?

>> No.3275893

>>3275887
You not in position to "recommend" ways to practice, you fucking shitter.

>> No.3275896

>>3275887
To be fair, I had also watched some videos from Ctrlpaint.com + a couple of other youtube ones, so I knew how to use layers, keyboard shortcuts, and such already. But what I could actually draw when from A to B in those 10 hours.

I know I have a long way before I can create good art. Right now that profile type pic is the ONLY thing I can draw, but I really believe this iterative drawing way is how to improve fastest. I really hope this inspires somebody else to do the same.

>> No.3275899

>>3275193
That is such a disturbing picture. How do you even draw that guy's face?

>> No.3275900

>>3275893
Thank you for adding to the discussing in a meaningful way. I am sure your comment will help me as well as many others to strive and improve our art :)

>> No.3275902

why are people in this thread so toxic, why cant they just adress people normally instead of calling them names.

im pretty sure is just one guy insulting everyone, if that is the case: pls stop

>> No.3275905
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3275905

>>3275899
You look at it and draw what you see, carefully.
Here's a female if that particular model bothers you.

>>3275202
I believe in you. Read the chapters and think about what you're supposed to achieve with each task, you'll soon realize all of them are pretty much "use this thing you've just read in the chapter, and draw what you see"
Make sure you understand the concepts clearly though, don't rush.

>> No.3275907

>>3275887
>I can only recommend practicing this way.
This is pompous especially based on what you've displayed. The videos you posted are meant for beginners to show that there isn't talent, you get better from doing something over and over again. Many people know this already but many don't until they see this for themselves. You draw like a young teenager so that's why it wasn't received well.

>> No.3275908

>>3275851
you don't need to be a pro to tell something's shit, but if you're critiquing from an artist's perspective (which you are, a non-artist would never say "fundamentally lacking"), you have to at least know what the fuck you are talking about. It's clear as day you don't have any actual advice for the anon, you just decided to be a faggot for no reason other to feel better about yourself.

in short: enjoy your bucket, crab

>>3275776
it's a cool sketch. when you refine it, look for some references on how other people design tattoos regarding transparency and stuff like that. I don't know your usual style but it would probably be a good idea to make a solid lineart and filling in color if you decide to use any.

>> No.3275910

>>3275902
This. Thanks for those word.

But well... It can't be helped when you are on 4chan. All the trolls from /b/ lurks around and look for people to troll. And what better place is there than in an art beginners thread. Lots of nervous, inexperienced artists putting their work out in the open. They are the perfect targets to pounce on.

But luckily you get used to them :) If all someone can do is name calling, then it simply means it's a bored teenager in the other end... Or at least I hope so. God forbid it being a grown up that has so little life that they will spend their time trolling on 4chan.

>> No.3275914

>>3275908
just wanted to save that anon from tattooing something that he or his friend might regret :(

>> No.3275922

>>3275907
I know it isn't good. I'm also fine with it not getting a fantastic reception. I didn't post it because I think I'm "hot shit".

I simply think that the 3 three videos I mentioned are good for beginners to watch, since they give a structured way to practice.

And the author of the videos have many years of experience, and his art is pretty good, so I can't see why its bad to recommend his videos.

I don't get why it's pompous of a beginner to recommend videos to other beginners.

>> No.3275923

>>3275905
Perspective is hard.
I don't know what it is about that guy's face that disturbs me so hard.
I'll have to check out the Hyper Angle books, seems like a really good way to practise.

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3275936

>>3273884
Some of my todays "studies" from Fun with a Pencil.
I think tomorow I'll try to draw the same face from different angels. Hope that I'll get that!

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3275937

So funny seeing all these crabs scream "only friendly advice, respect me".
Not only you are being retarded, but you also look for an easy way, don't expect to be treated as equal.
Know your place.

>> No.3275939

>>3275923
You're not studying perspective yet. Are you the guy I called a brainlet?

Read the chapter and simply do as it says. Measure it, mark the midpoint, try to draw what you see. It's not that hard. It might not end up looking great but it's a start. We all have to start somewhere.

>> No.3275943

>>3275939
No, I'm a different person. I have a lot of troubles with perspective but I'll follow your advice and keep at it.

>> No.3275953

>>3275937
post work or gtfo

>> No.3275955

>>3275937
Wow, much superior complex in this one

>> No.3275957

>>3275914
Are you incapable of writing a sentence without a smiley at the end?

>> No.3275961

>>3275957
Are you the same person that has written all the other useless troll comments in this thread?

>> No.3275966
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3275966

>>3275908
making lineart for it yeah that was just cleaned up sketch to get everything sorted

i will probably color it as a personal piece but they aren't sure on if they want to have it colored or b/w or what and coloring would more or less, i assume, depend on the style the tattoo artist paints in rather than copying my own painting style

i am trying to figure out this now though

what did you mean by "transparency" though?

>> No.3275967

>>3275957
whats wrong with writing smileys at the end of a sentence? >:I

>> No.3275968

>>3275961
>he disagrees with me, so he must be trolling
He is right, fuck off back to your safe-space shithole or leave your retarded habits back there.

>> No.3275971

>>3275968
>he is right
>samefag
kek

>> No.3275978
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3275978

>>3275966
"be ready to die everyday" lmao

>> No.3275979

>>3275978
it's a thing common in catholicism and buddhism; to be mindful of your own death every day in your actions. there is a fair amount written under "meditations on [your own] death".
some catholic monk (iirc it was a monk) went so far as to keep a coffin in his living room to constantly remind him.

person requested something based on images that had similar sentiments.

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3275981

test
this is after the separation of shapes and local values.

>> No.3275984

>>3275981
>signing your studies
Why you keep signing it?
You think someone would steal this shit, you fucking retard?

>> No.3275990

>>3275984
Anon
I use this name just in 4chan
This is not my real name

O can explain you why I sign it with a fake name here

>> No.3275991

>>3275984
who hurt u?
y u insult everyone and samefag?

>> No.3275993

>>3275984
Here is a illustration with my real name

>> No.3275994
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3275994

>>3275993
My painting
No copy

>> No.3275997

>>3275990
>O can explain you why I sign it with a fake name here
Really would like to hear why you want a name on an anonymous imageboard.

>3275991
I wouldn't even bother giving you (You)s anymore.
You proved you are retarded well enough already, when you assumed that only one person can disagree with you and he also must be trolling.

>> No.3276007

>>3275997
Fake name in a anonymous board...... hahah what the probablemente then?

I’m not assuming anything,

I sign with a fake Name to know what studies I made and I uploaded, I forget them. Doing this I will just know that that is my study.
I don’t use this name on my paintings.
I apologize if I’m annoying someone.

>> No.3276008
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3276008

>>3275979
MEMENTO MORI

>> No.3276009

>>3276007
it's annoying to everyone and the "name" sounds incredibly stupid

>> No.3276012

>>3275905
Was randomly scrolling through the thread and I'm also working through the same book as the anon you berated. I'll be sure to keep your words of advice in mind.

>> No.3276015

>>3276008
yes
i think at face value most people read stuff centered around that concept to be edgy/nihilistic/"i want to die/suicide" though

>> No.3276017

>>3276007
>I sign with a fake Name to know what studies I made and I uploaded, I forget them.
What is the point in studies, if you just "forget" them, you cretin?
Admit that you just want to namefag and get shit on or stop.

>> No.3276018

>>3276008

that's not aegis :(

>> No.3276020

>>3276008
memento mori literally translate to "remember the dead"
"be ready to die everyday" is a different thing altogether.

>> No.3276022

>>3276020
>remember the dead
Autistic? It's "the death", not "the dead".

>> No.3276023
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3276023

>>3276020
It says "remember you have to die" on wikipedia

>>3276018
sorry anon

>> No.3276024

>>3276020
Memento mori (Latin: "remember that you have to die")[2] is the medieval Latin Christian theory and practice of reflection on mortality, especially as a means of considering the vanity of earthly life and the transient nature of all earthly goods and pursuits. It is related to the ars moriendi ("The Art of Dying") and similar literature. Memento mori has been an important part of ascetic disciplines as a means of perfecting the character by cultivating detachment and other virtues, and by turning the attention towards the immortality of the soul and the afterlife.[3]

In art, memento mori are artistic or symbolic reminders of mortality.[2] In the European Christian art context, "the expression [...] developed with the growth of Christianity, which emphasized Heaven, Hell, and salvation of the soul in the afterlife".[4]

>> No.3276026

>>3276009
I apologize.

I must be retarded. I should do better.

Even my studies are lame everything is lame on me.
I need to be elite.
I will improve.
I will stop naming and stop posting here.

>>3276017

Forget them but I don’t forget what I learn.
Look I want to show I’m working every day that is the other reason. You can see I post always here.
I know you guys don’t care but for me is different. You won’t understand.

I apologize I won’t post here again.

>> No.3276027

>>3276026
>I apologize I won’t post here again.
Alright. See you tomorrow.

>> No.3276028

>>3273895
Feel of the flow...
That's a unclear instruction
I think it's a explain about how body tilted ,twisted. Etc

>> No.3276036

>>3276024
whoopsie daisy!
guess that's why i had the worst grades in latin

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3276044

>>3276028
it's not unclear, surfaces have flows

>> No.3276047

>>3275981

It’s shit you retarded fag leave

>> No.3276050

>>3274743
You put your signature on a sketch.

>> No.3276080
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3276080

>>3275809
started to use round forms instead of boxes after the critique i received. please advise

>> No.3276087

>>3275981
You almost got the arm right. Good job. :)

>> No.3276089

>>3276080
it doesn't matter what shape the forms are. you still miss the point or are intentionally trolling

>> No.3276093

>>3276080
It's a bit stiff. You should decide whether you want to be precise or expressive before sketching and follow through. If you decide to be precise you shouldn't let shapes be different just because it feels right. And if you decide to be expressive you shouldn't let shapes look weird just because they're correctly positioned. Keep that mindset and I'm sure you'll improve. :)

>> No.3276094

>>3276080
>was told gestures are feeling essence
>not feeling the essence still
??????

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3276109

>>3276027
Hahah
Okay guys now serious,
I won’t namefag again because I love you.

Here is another study I made

Feel free to tell me what is wrong about it
I can see my design skills are lame.

>> No.3276116

>>3276089
well then explain, i plot the line of action then try and construct forms on it, just like villpu does in his video. anon didnt like the boxes so now they are rounded. what am i missing here?

>> No.3276127

>>3276080
Dude do this with pencil and paper first
O my fucking lord.

>> No.3276130

>>3276127
he strikes me as the kind of guy who'll vehemently defend his use of digital (for some reason)

>> No.3276133
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3276133

anyone else just waste all their time shitposting and pissing about an barely spend any time drawing? how do i rectify this? it's so easy to just spend all day shitting around

>> No.3276135

>>3276130
>>3276127
samefag

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3276136

>>3276109
perspective looks off on the big guy. if you have to question it, measure it and find out. designs seem ok on both but the far half of the ship is way too small.

imprecise paint since that's all i have atm. green line is roughly where the other bounds of the second half should be but it depends on your construction.

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3276137

>>3276135
huh

>> No.3276139

>>3276133
You like the thought of being an artist rather than actually being an artist. If you were serious about drawing then you would have disciplined yourself by now.

Go back to video games and anime as your main "hobbies."

>> No.3276143

>>3276137
>on a board where most uses have photoshop installed
>thinks that proves anything
its blatantly a samefag as its the evident consensus that digital is a sound medium, you are just that one phaggot who has a spergrage vendetta against it for some reason

>> No.3276144

>>3276136
Thank you so much man
I can see it now god thank you
I’m gonna do better same design let see what happens

>> No.3276145

>>3276140
>>3276140
>>3276140

>>3276140
>>3276140
>>3276140

>>3276140
>>3276140
>>3276140

>> No.3276149

>>3276143
you have to resort trying to call me a "samefag" to deflect the fact that you should be learning your fundamentals on paper and pencil (like everybody else)? what sort of mental gymnastics are you going through? i don't understand what you're looking for here anymore

>> No.3276264

>>3276149
>you should be learning your fundamentals on paper and pencil (like everybody else)?
Not him, but why?
What is the reason?

>> No.3276462

>>3274533
I Like the old style looking gun. Gives the authentic 70s feel

>> No.3277647

>>3273948
>>3273951
>>3273955
>>3274137
Mizuha wa Ijippari | Mizuha is Stubborn
by Menea the Dog

>> No.3277652

>>3273895
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74HR59yFZ7Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39NqwL7s4
Identify the big picture of the pose and exaggerate features. The point is that poses can be expressed in very few lines.

>> No.3277660

>>3275809
you're that guy from the /r/learntodraw subreddit aren't you