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Last Thread: >>3244161

Rules:
>Every reply has to have a piece of your work attached
>It can be a sketch, WIP, finished piece, whatever
>You can't reply to anyone without uploading another piece of your work

Have fun!

>> No.3269385
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Honest crit? I know it looks like a ripoff of a mech from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

>> No.3269413

>>3269385
>I know it looks like a ripoff of a mech from Neon Genesis Evangelion.
/m/ here it looks more like some bizarre hybrid praying mantis cross with a chameleon.

>> No.3269623
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>>3269385
ink it and color it in a moebius style

>> No.3269633

>>3269623
post more hatched drawings.

>> No.3269671
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>>3269633
alright then

>> No.3269676
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>>3269671
>>3269633
don't forget to always attach a drawing when posting

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>>3269623
Funny you say that, I'm studying Moebius by drawing mastercopies of stuff from his 40 Days in the Desert book. Perhaps it's actually working and the linework is starting to become reminiscent?

Anyways, any examples of what you mean by his colorwork? post some.

I guess since this is the Post Your Work thread I technically should post those drawings, huh? Here's the first.

>> No.3270018
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Is this the board people go to in order to get good at drawing so that they can draw anything from their imagination? If so what do I do to get good and not let my dreams be memes?

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>>3270007

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>>3270007
more

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>>3270007
more...AGAIN

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>>3270007
bumparoo

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>>3270007
last time i tried this it posted sideways, here we go

>> No.3270032
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>>3270007
>>3270030
Ah well you get the picture

>> No.3270068
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I'm trying to do comic stuff with simple and flat colors. May start varying my line weight.

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>> No.3270106
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>>3269380
>Come to create new thread since last time I checked the thread was about to bump the limit
>Realize some anon other than me has taken the iniciative and created the thread
>MFW

>> No.3270112

>>3270032
>>3270030
>>3270027
>>3270026

from the looks of it you're pressing way too hard on the paper and that inhibits line weight, confidence, stroke, etc. drawing with a nib with no preliminary sketches will help line confidence and teach you to visualize before you draw (literally what moebius did) and will help you have better control over your line weight and stop you from pressing too hard. Besides that it looks that you're doing a good job studying, just don't forget to throw in some classical studies/life studies in there, you don't wanna be stuck with a single style.

>> No.3270204
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My Finn fanart ^.^

>> No.3270212
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>>3270204
its dumb but it makes me laugh

>> No.3270215
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>>3270212
more of my shitty drawings

>> No.3270220
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>>3270215
And here is one of mine, yours cool!

>> No.3270224
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>>3269385
I think the head/neck is to big for the body. But it looks neat still. Like some sorta underwater creature

>> No.3270226
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Wrapped this up today. Painting those little figures was surprisingly tedious.

>> No.3270231
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I haven't drawn anime in years, but I'm attempting a version with the rowdy rough boys

>> No.3270242 [DELETED] 
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>>3270204
kek'd

>> No.3270258
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I did this when couldn't get to sleep, it's the only thing I've drawn that I actually saved.

>> No.3270295
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Quite happy with how this one turned out.

>> No.3270296
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>>3270215
thicc

>> No.3270306
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>> No.3270309 [DELETED] 

>>3270226
Can someone explain to me how they get graffiti on the side of the bridge? Do they hang with a rope to pull it off?

>> No.3270544
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>>3270242
What happened to gay1.jpg?

>> No.3270549
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First time posting work. Feedback highly appreciated.

>> No.3270567
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>>3270544
Reserved for actual gay porn I saved.

>> No.3270684
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>>3270549
very noisy. i think it might be a shape design/detail density issue

>> No.3271079

>>3270684
I like these industrial looking designs anon.
Any social media?

>> No.3271155

>>3271079
https://basnip-sfw.tumblr.com/

>> No.3271231
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First time here
How is it?

>> No.3272277
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>> No.3272279
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>> No.3272286
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>>3270231
Started to color, long way to go...

>> No.3272290

>>3270549
HATCH MOAR. Don't worry about what happens to it

>> No.3272291
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3272291

My new year's resolution was to become a porn artist. These are things I drew today. any critique / thoughts?

>> No.3272292
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>>3272291

>> No.3272297

>>3269623
>>3269385
>>3271231
>>3272277
>>3272286
Is there anything to drawing but repetition and reflection?

>> No.3272340
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>>3272291
>>3272292

It looks like you are new to drawing itself. I would recommend you put most focus on learning the basics of drawing, still lives, drawing from observation, basic forms and perspective, etc.

>> No.3272455
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Just finished this.
I ended up taking it a bit further than I originally intended, but I haven't been doing digital for that long so it's like every time I produce something I'm trying to cram everything I've learned into it as practice. Hopefully I'll mellow out soon and develop a standard colouring formula.

>> No.3272461 [DELETED] 
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>>3272291
>My new year's resolution was to become a porn artist.
DON'T

you might as well kys, would be more honorable for your family and relatives
DON'T try to become a "port artist"

>> No.3272464
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>>3272291
>My new year's resolution was to become a porn artist.
DON'T

you might as well kys, would be more honorable for your family and relatives
DON'T try to become a "porn artist"

>> No.3272470

>you might as well kys, would be more honorable for your family and relatives

lmao I'm a porn artist and my mum bought me my tablet specifically so I could start producing it.

>> No.3272476

>>3272297
improvement!

>> No.3272492
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>>3270204
It's beautiful m8.

Been working on this too long. I'm starting to get fatigued and can't see what needs to be improved, you can only flip it so many times.

>> No.3272522
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>>3270258
I like it.

>> No.3272538
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3272538

Working on some fanart.
How can i improve by the look of this ?

>> No.3272585

>>3272492
vertical flipping then turn ur monitor upside down

>> No.3272869

>>3272291
i'm already cumming

>> No.3273357
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>>3272455
Fucking Ace man, I love the pallette you choose.

>> No.3273377
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Strange little scene I had in my mind. going to need a lot more little details to make it believable, but I'm mostly interested in the lighting in the tunnel.

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>>3269380

>> No.3274154

>>3272492
Not bad yourself bruv.

>> No.3274155
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>>3269380
Security guy at work ordered pizza to share with me and the manager, drew this shit on my note 4 to comemorate it.

>> No.3274158

>>3273357
blog?

>> No.3274160
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>>3269380

I'm not sure if i am doing this right.

Nice clean lines man, crispy.

>> No.3274173
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>>3270684
u going through the john park gumroad anon ?

>> No.3274187
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>> No.3274200

>>3272464
Get the fuck off this board, faggot.

>> No.3274268
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>> No.3274272
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Some ink drawing

>> No.3274534
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>>3274173
nope, it's just a random weekly goal thing. park's gumroad looks really interesting though. there's a ton of stuff there.

>> No.3274883

>>3274187
Ironic character design is always interesting. The more ironies your character has, the better.

>> No.3274918

>>3274767
I really like this

>> No.3276625
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>>3270226

Work in Progress. Trying to really learn that "wet" lighting that rainy days have.

Hard to get much personal experience in Los Angeles.

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>>3274268
what an obscure codpiece to wear

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pls excuse dreamworks face

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>>3276625

Experimenting a bit with an action sequence I'd like to board out and make an animatic of.

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>>3281439

Bit more.

>> No.3283809

>>3269380
Could you please remove this shitty badly drawn oc from oppic? It's insulting to look at it.

>> No.3284196

>>3273377
I like it.
It's like a tunnel shaped portal into the world as drawn by a 6 year old with crayons.

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>>3269380

>> No.3284242
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>> No.3284639
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Welp, might as well bite the bullet

>> No.3284643

>>3284215
reminds me of carey mulligan

>> No.3284672

>>3284643
it's her

>> No.3284676

>>3284672
nice! it's great

>> No.3284712

>>3284676
thanks anon :)

>> No.3284999

>>3272277
idk bout that posture, but looks nice

>> No.3285076
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I decided to make a webcomic and I'm in the stage where I need to figure out formatting and the general 'look it's going to have.
I'm trying to whittle down the details so that I can draw, ink, and color each page relatively quickly. It's uhhh. It looks like shit?

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>>3272297
Yeah these styles are for ocd people anon.

>> No.3286815
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Coloring this atm, for the first time in my life, making hands was fun.

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>>3285076
be careful with how much time everything might take to do! if you want to pump pages out and keep it consistent, the painterly style of coloring is going to be harder than cel shading for example.

also maybe think about not drawing the word bubbles but instead making them using shape selection tools? Overall it shows promise after cleanup

>> No.3287546

>>3287523
I'm kind torn on the speech bubbles, thing. I despise the look of vectorized speech bubbles, but I know they'd be a time-saver.
I'm also still very bad at working with CSPs text tool, and considering lettering the comic by hand, even though that would take so much longer.
I've still got a lot to work out before I'm ready to start posting the actual comic.

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>> No.3287565

>>3269385
lol

>> No.3287832
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at least im improving

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>>3287561
Took me way too long to realize these are helmets from Halo.

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>>3287546
>>3287523
Lol, never mind. Turns out wordpad is better for lettering than CSP is.
Thanks for saying it shows promise, Anon.
It's not going to look good, but it will be complete at some point, which i think is what matters more when it comes to telling a story.
holy shit though.

>> No.3291052
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This is a character for a story I'm writing. I'm trying to figure out how to paint metal and cloth and how to render in general as I go. Critique?

>> No.3291098
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Instagram.com/lakeebs

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Another one. My work is at keebs.com and Instagram.com/lakeebs

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Last one. Instagram.com/lakeebs

>> No.3291104
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I'm not happy with the face at all

>> No.3291176
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Finished my poputepipikus.

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I'm so tired
>and a little barfy

My drawing is on the right, left is a rando's. I'll post the stand alone in a reply. Anyone else use the DrawMe app? Pretty decent when you want a challenge

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>>3292488

>> No.3292497
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Shy

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>>3292497
Pro tip: Don't shade with black. Trust me. Most of the time it won't work well.
The rest of the piece looks great though! Reminds me that I have to go get caught up...

>image unrelated

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>>3292513
you're not being harsh enough

heres an orange i did yesterday too

>> No.3292611

>>3292590
that's...

uh...

that's a pear anon

>> No.3292624

>>3292611
But there's only one there, a pear requires two oranges.

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>>3292611
Are you sure? Regardless, I tried painting it.

Also anon you're supposed to post your works with every post!

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>>3292590
The drawing itself looks very flat. It almost feels like you cut it out of something. I'd also suggest again not to shade with black, especially on a colored surface. I'd give the shadow a bit more of an orange tone to it, even just a little bit.

>doodle unrelated

>> No.3292892

>>3292891
thats clearly brown you fucking idiot

this entire thread 'hurr dont shade with black dont shade with blakc' lfmao fuck off

>> No.3293088
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>>3292892
I was talking about the shading on the ground and, you're right. It is brown. When i made my reply, it was on my phone, which has a much duller screen. So, at the time, it didn't look brown and I apologize to the artist.

However, I still stand by the rest of what I said.

>image unrelated

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>> No.3293328
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how the heck do I draw a head on a body. it's the hardest thing for me to do.

>> No.3293332
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>>3269380

>> No.3293763

>>3293088
>>3292891
how do i make it look like it's not cut out of something?

>> No.3294026
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This started out as a head, which has since morphed into a upper body shot.
Please excuse how messy it is. I have the worst drafting process.

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Trying to find my style

>> No.3294327

>>3293763
perspective.

>> No.3294392
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>>3293763
Like anon (>>3294327) said, perspective. But also you need to make sure all your edges are smoother. The pear you drew has jagged edges, which is why it doesn't feel full. It feels flat. The bottom half looks great actually! But, the top jus feels unfinished. Like there's no depth.

I'm not exactly fully experienced myself, since I don't currently do (and haven't done in years) proper painting. So hopefully another anon can help you out. I'm just not all too great at explaining what I mean. Sorry anon :')

>old, unrelated doodle

>> No.3294400
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3294400

Y’all suck

>> No.3294407
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Venice photo study from couple of months ago

>> No.3294480

>>3291101
>>3291103
>>3291098

Nice. This is comfy as fuck man.

>> No.3294482

>>3291098
>>3291101
>>3291103
>>3294480
Also meant to ask, cus i really like your work. But how long have you been making art? Did you go to school, learn from /ic/ or just by creating the stuff you like?

>> No.3294786

>>3294400
u suck too though that venice hoto study is p. ok i guess.

>> No.3294791

>>3291101
Your shading is really similar to Jaspurrlock's, quite interesting

>> No.3294799
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3294799

some edgy commission work, crit welcome

>> No.3294800
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>>3294799
and more commissioned stuff

>> No.3294864
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I fucking hate my "style", anyone else have resources on pencil drawing/shading, would be REALLY appreciated. I'm always afraid to shade it lest I fuck it up.
>>3272538
That's pretty good, I think the anatomy of the ribcage is a little off, but can't quite put my finger on it, I think you should try moving the ribcage (bellow the chest) to the left and make it a bit more vertical, or at least try foreshortening the bottom part (I'll post a quick redline).

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>>3272538
Quick redline here. This is on an old laptop with the trackpad (no mouse or stylus) so its not the best, but I think you get the idea.

>> No.3294870

>>3272297
Repetition with no goals is noodling.

Study.
Find things and study them.

>> No.3294991
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3294991

Something I drew lately, just beginning to learn to shade. Any crit, please?

>> No.3295046

>>3294991
i think the gas mask looks pretty rad

>> No.3295053
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3295053

I would share my artstation but now we have to post our real name in artstation.

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>>3294991
thumbnail made me think it was a fidgetspinner.

>> No.3295349
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3295349

Don't know what I was thinking making this, I guess the devil is a suave mofo?

>> No.3295464
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3295464

Roast me. I vaguely want to someday do a web comic or some shit but I dunno.

>> No.3297719
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Just a quick sketch

>> No.3297728

>>3291104
I think you need to study breasts as well.

>> No.3297730

>>3270295
I can't tell what the hell I'm looking at???

>> No.3297731

>>3297719
eyes aren't dead enough

>> No.3297736
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>>3295349
I like it, but I would work on your line thickness, the lines are kind of lost in the blue color you chose, go a little bit bolder/thicker with your lines. Also try varying your colors more, at least do three tones.

Here's mine, do your worst, /ic/.

>> No.3297737
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3297737

Currently working on a ref sheet but drew this cheeky bastard during my break.

>> No.3297738
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>>3269380
i know its shit, but at least i did something this week

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>>3269380
Well what do you think of my weeb trash?

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>>3297797

>> No.3297980
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WIP

>> No.3298088
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3298088

Why not

>> No.3298146
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people said they like my style

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>>3297737
I like the pointy ears,
Been using photo references to improve

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be as harsh a possible

>> No.3298203
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>>3298200
Neck needs to attach closer to the chin
Hair has a really weird texture, don't use whatever brush you used
Stop hiding your hands you fucking coward
What's with the weird cloth on her back of neck

>> No.3298305
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3298305

u um hi this is lum from urusei yatsura and shes upside down but it kind of looked stupid upside down so

>> No.3298363
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>>3298200
>be as harsh a possible
As you wish

The hair is absolute wank. Drawing hair is more than just drawing the shape and going nucking futs with scribbling. There is actual form.

Is that extra lump of fabric in the back supposed to be a hood?

>> No.3298443
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3298443

A friend's OC.
I hope this ends up being as good as I'm imagining it

>> No.3298482
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>>3269380
how do i stop doing 20 minute garbage sketches
literally the entirety of my work consists of this, i can't even do lineart properly because lack of style pisses me off

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>>3298482
Your style will only emerge naturally as you unconsciously decide what needs to be included to convey your meaning, and what does not need to be included. Draw realistically and you will find over time you simplify or exaggerate depending on your needs.

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>>3297738
I like your range of values. but, is that testicles I see between the legs? I don't think you wanted to draw something lewd.

>>3298363
I always had trouble drawing hair...You mean I can't just go nucking futs with scribbling? What Do?

>>3297736
It's kinda muted, flat and boring to look at. I guess because its very desaturated and everything is comprised of similar hues. But The main problem is the lack of intensity in values. If it had the range of values similar to>>3297738 it would look so much better.

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WIP

I already know I need to fix the eyes, elbows and horns.

Please tell me the body is good ;_;

>> No.3299578

>>3270106
>guy
>lucy
u'r gey

>> No.3299670

>>3299159
Just finish it already fuck!

>> No.3299681
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>>3299670
Why, do you like it?

>> No.3299691

>>3284242
What program did you use for this?

>> No.3299817
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I hope I get to color her during the week. Had a lot of fun drawing her.

>> No.3300054
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I'm tired and should be making a doctor's appointment

Here's a doodle
>character is just my avatar/persona

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>>3291052
has potential, i like it.

work on hue variation. Your shading is just slightly changed darker values of the same hue. try to change it up a bit to make it more interesting and to suggest realistic lighting (there is always something light reflects off which gives ambient light color)

i took your palette and tried to add some more interesting variation, really just play with things that look cool and look at other artists as ref for good colors.

>> No.3300060

>>3299159
that ass needs work

>> No.3300062

>>3299159
This looks really good, I tried drawing her tonight and it didn't come out half this good

>> No.3300063

>>3300054
>character is just my avatar/persona
>>>/tumblr/

>> No.3300073

>>3300063
^

>> No.3300086

>>3291052
That sum gud shit senpai. Got any galleries?

>> No.3300091

>>3300086
Oh wait nevermind I already found you on FA

>> No.3300095
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I'm aware of a few flaws in this, but I rarely do backgrounds so I'm a little proud of myself this time.

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Did this one in 2017

>> No.3300170
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Another one, from 2016

>> No.3300218

>>3299159 here

I'm a lazy faggot who still hasn't finished the lineart but I wanted to test out how the shading might look like.

What do you guys think? How do I make it "more anime" without oversimplifying it too much.

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>>3300218
Thanks moot

>> No.3300222
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3300222

I'm not really really anti-semitic, but drawing cartoon kikes is fun.

>> No.3300253

>>3300222
Two dubs and a trips? Impressive.

>> No.3300267
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How's my weeb shit looking?

>> No.3300395

>>3269380
>no booru to save for posterity

>> No.3300439

>>3299055
its just the bulge OwO because i had no idea of what to put there

>> No.3300446

>>3300063
It was for /b/ my dude.

>> No.3300746
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I'm done working on this right now but I'm gonna try to fix some mistakes tomorrow.

>> No.3301072

>>3270549
I like it.

>> No.3302201

>>3300218
>>3300219
The shading's a bit heavy in some places, and should be inside of the boob rather than outside of it.

>>3300267
/beg/-tier, but you're getting there. Also at this point you should learn how to fill the lines in without it resulting in white halos.

>> No.3302335
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Some mechanical drawings in blue colored pencil and Sharpie fine point pens

Anyone who says boxes are a meme is a hack fraud. Don't believe their lies

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>>3293332
Process?