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How much would you pay for this? Thinking about selling it took me like 2 weeks to paint.

>> No.3209349

Idk 50 bucks

>> No.3209356

>>3209343
this is a troll right? please be a troll

>> No.3209375

>>3209343
line quality is bad my dude
you won't get too much for it

>> No.3209389

>>3209375
Can you point out where it is bad?

>> No.3209390

>>3209356
I'm not a troll, just looking for criteeks

>> No.3209397

Feel free to post your own paintings with advice and/or tips

>> No.3209402

>>3209390
well, in two weeks you could've not wasted your time making a shitty painting and instead could've gotten better. you'll look back on this piece in the future and laugh at how good you used to think you were. I wouldn't pay 20$ for this painting, embarrassing

>> No.3209407

>>3209402
You failed to point out what is so bad about it. Tell me what I need to work on maybe?

>> No.3209408

>>3209402
Btw I never thought I was good. This is lichterally my first painting. Lol

>> No.3209415

>>3209402
I never said I was good you nigger

>> No.3209419

If you're going to post itt then post some oc. Op tried and failed give him advice you niggers

>> No.3209426

Is this the thread where we call each other niggers?

>> No.3209427

>>3209407
its muddy, the entire thing reeks of ameteur, you don't know basic color theory, among other things

>>3209408
>>3209415
are you butthurt because I said your painting sucks, saying it once is good enough. git guud

>> No.3209670

>>3209408
>his first painting ever
>expects people to pay something for it
lol

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3210389

>>3209343
Looks threatening

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>>3209343
Alright since otherfags here are being toxic little shits ill give out my constructive critique.

The main issue with this piece here is how bland the color scheme is, the negative space and the lack of dynamic lighting

the composition itself is pretty interesting, just executed poorly with the painting (It's pretty bad anon) and lack of finish with it.

Follow more of color theory, use orange and blue as the scheme, have the light source be from the ship scene bleeding onto the squid and the bg dark. Have the eyes give out some orange lighting too, not too much but to give the appearance of an inner glow from the body.

In the end, keep practicing and look at inspiration/ reference.

>> No.3214166

In all honesty I would pay in mind for the frame only. It's clear you don't practice a lot and don't frequent this board since the pic isn't even rotated.

The medium you used looks very cheap, I do think the idea is actually really cool looking and before I actually opened the picture I thought it was gonna be good. So honestly I think you got the hard part down you just need more practice. It lacks depth and just even a little more value on the sea kraken thing would go miles.

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>>3214166
Here even this might even help you. This is not acceptable to sell to someone.

>> No.3214187

>>3209343

2 bottle caps and a torn boxer.

>> No.3214189

>>3209343
Am I allow to hang it vertically?

>> No.3214610

>>3209343
its trash but a normie would probably pay loads for it