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Post pieces you created while inebriated. Others try to guess what you were on and apply critique to the work.

>> No.3207126

>>3207120
Lemme guess... you were sober and this was the only thing you drew that whole week. Am I right?

>> No.3207134

>>3207126
You’re only half correct!

>> No.3207275
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>>3207120

>> No.3207294

>>3207120
I'll just guess weed? My crits would be:

Texture is cluttered and I can;t see what's going on.

Lines are scratchy and unconfident, try tracing over and refining.

Use pictures of skulls, trees, fire (?), etc so that you know what they look like.

The best part is the flaming sun thing with sigils or what have you on it.

Generally, you have a long way to go, I'd guess you've been drawing/doodling for about a year. Learn fundamentals.

>> No.3207301

>>3207294
>>3207120

But I mean, I guess you were high/drunk, so what's the point of critiquing any of this?

>> No.3207335
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>tfw don't drink or do drugs
A-am I missing out?

>> No.3207341

>>3207335
I think it's good to try as many different things in life as you can, but you don't want to make drugs part of your life.

I treat drugs like experiments in the scientific sense. I plan ahead the different ways I'm going to test them, stick to that, and don't do them purely for pleasure.

That said, drugs may help or hinder your art depending on the circumstances. If you get obsessed/addicted, they will ruin your life.

My recommendation above all is psychedelics: psilocybin, LSD, DMT, and such.

>> No.3207343

>>3207335
Also, don't get into alcohol or cigarettes. So pointless and unhealthy.

>> No.3207400

>>3207275
This is pretty nice. How long was the pose for?

>> No.3207431

>>3207400
Don't recall, probably 2-5 mins, live figure drawing.

What's your guess on the substance, hehe?

>> No.3207439

>>3207335
Acid is fun.

>> No.3207593
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>>3207120
self portrait

fucking jaeger

>> No.3207742

>>3207275
Cool. A little squiggly and lacking (in volume) in those breast. It’s like her chest and abdomen is somewhat deflated.

Drunk?

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>>3207120

>> No.3208158

>>3207742
Nope, not drunk.

To be fair, it was a super lean 70 year old lady, so the breasts were actually deflated. It looks to me like the torso is detached from the hips, and there's this extra chunk hanging off the stomach...

>> No.3208159

>>3207593
You're supposed to let us guessssssss.

Crit: Add some highlights.

>> No.3208175

>>3208144
Doesn't look like you were on anything, but I'll say marijuana.

Crit: Practice line quality! Plus, use a different method for converting linwork to transparency, either just colour with a multiply layer, or learn how to convert your linework using alpha layer method so that you don;t get that grey/white shit.

Hands look manly, but it looks intentional, so...

The eye over the hair meme... I don't get this, looks dumb to me, but maybe that;s just me.

>> No.3208176

Hmmmmmmm, I have a giant pot cookie, maybe I should do an experiment for yall...

>> No.3208178

> tfw your social life has always been so terrible that you were never/will never be exposed to drugs

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>> No.3208188

>>3208178
Haha, I know what you mean, my parents use to always ask me whether I had tried drugs, and I'd tell them, "I'm totally open to it, but I have like 2 friends and I don't like parties, so no."

I have a solution for you, though: grow your own magic mushrooms. It's about as much work as keeping fish, costs about $120, and it happens to be the best drug, imo.

>> No.3208191

>>3208185
Weed? I have no crits, these are great!

>> No.3208203

>>3208191
ye thank you m8

>> No.3208235

>>3208203
Actually, I have one little crit: find a way to colour so that the colour fields go right to the lines instead of leaving little white pixels.

But I just like it because the drawings are really lucid/clear, and funny.

>> No.3208237
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was at a mates place drunk drawing on his new tablet.

>> No.3208293
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>>3208175
Nope, drunk. Tried fixing the hands and the lines

>> No.3208315

>>3207335
A cup of coffee with breakfast, a glass of wine with dinner, and an annual joint is all you'll ever need

>> No.3208318

>>3208315
You honestly don't need anything.

I'd say coffee with breakfast, wine with dinner, weed on the weekends, and a psychedelic once in a while.

>>3208293
Looks better to me.

>> No.3208324

>>3208318
>You honestly don't need anything.
There's a lot of health benefits associated with strict moderation of alcohol and caffeine as opposed to complete abstinence. Marijuana isn't really necessary, but as artists constantly on the search for new ways of thinking, a little bit every new years or something wouldn't hurt

>> No.3208330

>>3208293
imo this would look 10x better if her breasts were smaller and closer to her chest

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>>3208330
like so?

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>>3208354
Yes but also pointed upward like pic related, it implies more of a youthful energy that I believe you're trying to capture in that pic

>> No.3208364

>>3208363
Thanks, Gotta redraw them.

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>>3207120

nice thread. can we always do this?

>> No.3208397

>>3208392

I just did a line of coke and drank some wine. but critiques are welcome.

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3208423

>>3208363
edited.

>> No.3208432

>>3208324
The dose makes the poison.

Too bad I'm absofuckolutely bad at measuring and moderation. I even managed to wreck myself with self induced insomnia, if I ever touch any drugs I'm gonna freaking explode or something.

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>> No.3208563

>>3208550
like

>> No.3208677
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3208677

I'll toss this one out there...

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>>3208423
Nice

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>>3207120
>>3208176


Okay, since there's no interest in it whatsoever, I'm going to perform an experiment. I'm going to take some edible marijuana and see how it affects my work.

Here are some baseline figures I just did, ate cookie 20 mins ago. Going to practice figures, expressions, and maybe paint.

Hopefully I don't get distracted.

>> No.3209210 [DELETED] 

>>3209182
good stuff here

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>>3209182
Update....

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>>3209240
Wellp... I passed out.

>> No.3209470

>>3209465
You hungover?

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>>3209465
And the last. Ugh I was so high when I did that yellow+pencil drawing above that I could taste the yellow, and it tasted like sour lemons, and smelled like piss.

>>3209470
Uhh, I don't feel *great*

>> No.3209505

>>3209228
Lol that's 5g of mushrooms right there.

>> No.3209662

>>3207335
Weed dude, its reallly good.

>> No.3210695

>>3208550
mike?

>> No.3211563

>>3207341
>>3207335
o jesus

drugs are not for everyone, especially psychedelics. if you take the right drug and the right dose, you might see shit that will make you think you are insane. or you won't even know who you are, or that what you are experiencing will last for all eternity. i tripped on something and i thought the entire world was ending and that i was going to die.

if you fuck with psychs, you have to do the research, and bear in mind that with some (especially smoked dmt and other similar extremely potent ones) you will never be prepared no matter how much research you do. think about that.

i saw this documentary (i think it was by vice) where these 2 kids took a little too much datura pollen, and never came back. vegetables for life.

if you want to see weird shit, try lucid dreaming or astral projection. countless artists find inspiration for art in their dreams. or, i dont know, seek out a spiritual teacher and work with them.

>> No.3211566

>>3208235
that is a scary picture.

>> No.3213089
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it really depends on the strain you smoke, and I notice I tend to squint a great deal when drawing stoned, but honestly some of my best pieces are done while high...I think something about focus localizes and it's easier for me to stay on task.....getting stoned is my favorite way to start projects I later get back to sober, but I'm also a great deal less apprehensive about getting into pictures I'm proud of when I'm stoned, evidently this one isn't done yet

>> No.3213134

>>3211563
> you might see shit that will make you think you are insane. or you won't even know who you are, or that what you are experiencing will last for all eternity. i tripped on something and i thought the entire world was ending and that i was going to die.

I like how you try to warn people by describing the best part. :D Very accurate, though.

>> No.3213141

>>3208293
Child pwrey!
Child pwrey!
oh whoa oh whoa~
If you get my reference congratulations. Really looks like you are influenced by the style of that anime.

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did these like a week ago

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guess the substance

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in the middle of this one, my roommate walked in on my naked ass drawing, oops

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>> No.3214817

>>3213141
Which anime are you talking about?