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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies, however, all forms of stylization is welcome here. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, you know, have fun.

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>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
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>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
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>http://iradukai.com/
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>https://www.palmie.jp/
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>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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>> No.3172062
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Current wip, anything to fix before I go on?

>> No.3172118

How do I make cute things

>> No.3172126

>>3172062
Jenetta's hair is fluffier and her ears are straight. Those like like some other wild animal ears

>> No.3172133

>>3172118
first you get a cute girlfriend, then you suck her pussy and then you will be granted super powers to make cute things.

>> No.3172152

>>3172118
Good proportion and using soft shapes go a long way. Think of it as if you're trying to make something as "non-threatening" as possible.

Other than that, study artists with a cute style. learn from them.

>> No.3172279

>>3172062
her boobs are a bit too high

>> No.3172316

>>3172279
no they aren't you krugtard

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>> No.3172359

>>3172355
lmao

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>> No.3172365

>>3172361
qt, I would clean the line up and remove the dirty stuff on her skirt though.

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>>3172062
More correct, but it's like you had a different angle from your construction than what you put on there.

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There must be some kind of way outta here
Said the joker to the thief
There's too much confusion
I can't get no relief
Business men, they drink my wine
Plowman dig my earth
None were level on the mind
Nobody up at his word

No reason to get excited
The thief he kindly spoke
There are many here among us
Who feel that life is but a joke
But, uh, but you and I, we've been through that
And this is not our fate
So let us stop talkin' falsely now
The hour's getting late

>> No.3172478

>>3172474
IT'S UGLY
>inb4 m-muh style
Holy shit, learn attractive lines
AESTHETIC

>> No.3172480

>>3172478

ok post example of attractive lines

this is a drawing board

>> No.3172484

>>3172474
Kind of cute

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>> No.3172490

>>3172480
OP Image desu

>> No.3172495

>>3172490

ahhh /ic/

>> No.3172496

>>3172051
How do I use markers like this

>> No.3172535

>>3172361
Looks like FE artwork.

>> No.3172562
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If Chris Chan were to post on /ic/, I think he'd belong here in these threads.

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reposting

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comments/crits welcome

>> No.3172643

>>3172361
The body looks nice but ngl the face looks a bit dumpy to me

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If i say random depressing things in posts will I sound intelligent

>> No.3172652

>>3172651
That's how those fags on da do it.

>> No.3172653

>>3172316
>he's never seen a picture of a real woman's boobs

>> No.3172654

>>3172653
Implying they have to look realistic at all you dumb cunt.

>> No.3172656

>>3172653
>he doesn't understand perspective and clothing
stop posting

>> No.3172668

>>3172568
Your brush strokes don't look painterly, just shit.
Clean it up.

>> No.3172669

>>3172656
It's an apron, not a corset.

>> No.3172693

>>3172668
Its not done yet, only blocking out the colours. am cleaning up right now

>> No.3172710

>>3172669
It's not a normal apron retard, look at the ears. This is a fetish character, a pushup apron is standard fare, she's probably wearing nothing underneath too.

>b-buh i read loomis once and duh breasts suppose to be this shape
Saved you a post.

>> No.3172748

>>3172710
don't ask for critique when you get assblasted when multiple anons tell you the same thing. her tits are too high

>> No.3172749

>>3172748
Not the artist

>multiple retards make a right
Wrong

>> No.3172771

>>3172651
smaller hand. Nose is wrong. ear perspective fix required

>> No.3172892

>>3172651
huge hand and muddy colors

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Heya anons,
https://jbox.com/apa821
someone posted this over in another drawthread and I was wondering if anyone had experience with it or if its been uploaded elsewhere. (or others of the same series)
wanted a nice reference for some cute poses and it looked sorta decent. I am however hesitant over anything that says "how to draw"

>> No.3173029

>>3172910
Those books are generally useless imo. It's the artists studies for finished work published in book format with "points" tipped to the reader to pass off as a tutorial. The market for such books are for hobbyist. You'll get better info from youtube.

The older series of 'how to draw manga' however have a wealth of information. Sure the styles presented in those books are outdated but that's besides the idea.

>> No.3173038

>>3173029
Do you happen to have links to any youtubes that would cover stuff like that?
I'm not really looking for a guide exactly, just what makes a cute couple image good, and examples/references for it. Most youtube videos I find are about how to draw a (singular) person, or how to draw a complicated gesture of a (singular) person, maybe interacting with a simple object. While you can just throw 2 people together, I feel like a lot of the time it just comes off as awkward and doesn't flow the same way.

>> No.3173108

>>3172361
No one would ever stand like that.

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>>3173038
For what you're looking for not on the top of my head. If you really want to get books on interactions then posebooks like these are better money spent. Then it's just knowing your basics.

>> No.3173171

>>3173138
yeah something like that is actually what i was originally looking for, but with a focus on more romantic poses. and that was the book that got linked to me.

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fuck vampires

>> No.3173222

>>3173215
Wesley Snipes is that you?

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emilia

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charno

>> No.3173288

>>3173269
not a giant this time eh
idk why u keep posting here tho

>> No.3173347

>>3173224
Are you Hu3 by any chance? It's the second thread in a row that there's artwork of this show and the guy never replied to me.

>>3172569
I see you're back on the giant muscular lolis. The art is quite good, you've improved a lot.

>> No.3173358

>>3173269
I may be spouting shit, but the elbow to left seems odly thin, the leg to the left seems too thick bellow the knee and the leg to the right seems to be too thick before the knee. I'm not home, so I can't redline anything

>> No.3173363

>>3173269
what's going on on her pelvis? looks too damn long, doesn't it? it's going below her butt it seems, like a giant dick or something

>> No.3173405

>>3173347
yes, im brazillian but first time posting a work of this show

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>>3173222
things woulda gone down differently this weekend, wesley woulda made sure of it

>> No.3173514

>>3173405
Good shit there. I too am Hu3, do you have a blog?

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Help a furfag out.

>> No.3173535

>>3173514
https://www.instagram.com/augcasarin_art/

>> No.3173592

>>3173525
i'm gonna help you out the door

>> No.3173758

>>3173525
Not smug/fat enough

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Posted this in the style meme thread . I didn't saw this thread . Do these look stiff? i know they don't have good proportions but besides that ?

>> No.3173774

>>3173767
this was the feedback that i got from the other thread :

>you have a huge problem with your mouths my mang. They're real big for one, but even then you gotta make the face stretch if a mouth is open wide in comparison to closed. Also you seem to be changing the style, and not just the expression, of their eyes almost every time.

Besides this?

>> No.3173775

>>3173767
noice expressions, though they're very exaggerated. perhaps you could practice some more subtle and toned down expressions as well.

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>>3173520
Gave up because the second fucking eye was being a bitch

>> No.3173784

>>3173775
That's what i was doing in the beggining. Even those were stiff. I wanted to get out of my comfort zone with exaggeration since i was really not comfortable with drawing the mouth or the eyebrows too far away from their normal place.

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>>3173781
>not giving her an eye patch

>> No.3173794

>>3173781
i think the expression before was better, it's like you cleaned up too much. instead of having lost-and-found edges now it's all sharp.

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>>3173781

>> No.3173799

>>3173796
i tried to help but i think i made it worse somehow

>> No.3173800

>>3173794
>i think the expression before was better, it's like you cleaned up too much.
Yeah, I agree. I have a lot of trouble keeping things how they looked in the original sketch after clean up.

>> No.3173806

>>3173800
As an addendum, I mostly cel-shade so making everything sharp is instinctual even when I'm trying to be more painterly.

>> No.3173807

>>3173796
I like it, she looks like she's lost it

>> No.3173815

>>3173592
lmao

>>3173758
He's supposed to be sad. Did I mess that up? :/

And I guess I should've elaborated, but I tried to do a bit of an angled perspective. Looks right but I wanna see if that's really the case. I know the head's too big but not much I can do about that at this point.

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/beg/ seems to hate me, I wish /IC/ wasnt the only place to get decent crits.

>> No.3174174

>>3173796
Saved as a reaction image

>> No.3174191

>>3172361
lumpy face, also might wana fix those feet up

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>>3174135
I also did this! Im tryin to get that cute down boyos

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>> No.3174357

>>3174252
your style sucks ass

>> No.3174382

>>3172474
I find this oddly appealing.

>> No.3174394

>>3174298

why is there a shadow on the top of their head?

>> No.3174397

>>3174357
I kinda like it

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>>3172669
I sort of assumed it's a corset with an apron bit from the ref, I still want her boobs pushed up but I'll make it look more natural
>>3172375
ty for the redline, cleared some things i was iffy about.
Waist is a bit frustrating, though. If i make it shorter her elbows would cover the little flowers on her hips which I want to show off. I'll try to find a compromise though

>> No.3174445

>>3174394
It was just an educated guess really i struggle with rendering sometimes. Im working on it though.

>> No.3174545

>>3174357
post work

>> No.3174547

>>3174308
blog?

>> No.3174550

>>3174357
If youre so jealous why don't you say it on the fucking server.

>> No.3174564

>>3174550
server?

>> No.3174627

>>3174550
Not him, but why would a shit poster be willing to lose his anonimity online on a Discord?

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Two characters designs sketches.

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>>3174679

>> No.3174740

>>3174679
>>3174681
dude i think youre regressing, wtf is this?

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>>3174681

>> No.3174750

>>3174740
probably one half assed one and one made with effort

>>3173233
>>3174308
this needs more (you)s, great stuff

>> No.3174883
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Is there a reference/method for facial proportions if I'm going for something like pic related? Basically anime Loomis. I'm trying to get an idea by looking at skilled artists' work also

>> No.3174909

>>3174883
There are like a billion different anime styles what makes you think there is one? You have to create your own by using basically Loomis's facial proportions and make them your own. There is no easy way sadly.

>> No.3174913

>>3174883
Same as normal face proportions.
Rounder more circular head = cuter, bigger eyes = cuter, small nose = cuter.
keeping things roughly more in the middle.

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>>3174308
goood shit

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>>3173405
>>3173224
>hu3s
from near liberdade? Been buying supplies there today, was testing wich one´s better.
>gonna try the ink ones for inktober

>> No.3175237

>>3174252
How are you so good?

>> No.3175240

>>3175151
Really like the water collor one. It's got good weight to it but isn't too soft like the coal one and isn't too tight like the other two.

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>>3175240
I still prefer the mechanical pencil, but the water color gave me a good first impression... then again, he´s the only real novelty on the recent purchases (i used coal ones a lot in the past, but they´re expensive and ran out quickly).

>> No.3175257

>>3174883
tip an animation friend taught me was taking designs and overlaying construction onto them to aid in breaking down their proportions. it was really useful when i had to draw a lot of on model shiz, i hope the concept can hopefully help you with your query

>>3174252
super cute, maybe work on proportions tho? the one on the left's bent leg's shin is a bit short. also the silhouette of the head of the one sitting on the table should be more filled out in the rear so that it slightly slopes upward before curving down at the back. if my words are too unclear i'll gladly redline it in a bit for you~

>>3173767
remember that while the lower teeth get a lotta wiggle room thanks to the jaw's movement the upper teeth are kinda stuck to the bottom of the skull proper. to have some of the teeth placements you're drawing the head would have to be tilting various degrees up or down but the head doesn't appear to be doing that very much. don't forget how important a landmark the ears are on the side of the head for determining the angle at which it faces the viewer

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I made a tutorial (´・ω・`)
太い女性の教科書 (Thick female textbook)

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>>3174883

I tried to remedy this actually
I made a clay head that is influenced by anime and baby skull proportions

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>>3175294
JESUS CHRIST

>> No.3175312

>>3175294
>those eye sockets
Anon...

Also, getting a figma or figure you don't mind handling is probably the best solution to understanding an animu face in 3D.

>> No.3175316

>>3175294
god

>> No.3175324

>>3174308

a-andrae?!

>> No.3175335

>>3175294
Should I laugh or cry?

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>>3175294
Hahaha the side view looks pretty anime.

>> No.3175369

>>3175294
MAH SIDES

>> No.3175371

>>3175294
Not bad, mind posting a 360 so we can reference it? Or do that one thing where you get to see every angle of it flat and then an upward and downward view. I think Krenz did one like that.

>> No.3175374

>>3172051
that glorious marraqueta

>> No.3175391

>>3175257
yeah, could you please redline

>> No.3175476

>>3172568
Bigger tits

>> No.3175479

>>3174443
Oh! In that case anon, just make her elbows stick farther out away from her waist. Also keep in mind the joint bends at mid-waist

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body rough

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>>3175502
How they draw the hair of one of the characters in a new anime reminded me of you.

>> No.3175552

>>3175275
>Anonymous
FATT

>> No.3175555

>>3175551
that character looks cute, thanks

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>>3174308
Really damn fucking mothercucking toe sucking tree fucking schlong sucking good.

Wip

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Help.
Really. Help.

>> No.3175772

>>3175769
looks fine to me

>> No.3175790

>>3175772
It's actually not. The most blatant mistake is the entire right leg and I can't get my shit to fix this other than to switch to a familiar angle.
Help. Redline or anything. I think I'm not improving anymore.

>> No.3175791

>>3175790
u got this champ

>> No.3175843

>>3175791
Um, can you please be a bit more rude, sir?
I appreciate the kindness but i prefer if you acted rather rough, for my own good.

>> No.3175878

>>3175843
We believe in you!

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>>3175769

>> No.3175893

>>3175890
PS: I made the head smaller not due to stylistic choice but because of perspective. You want it to look like it's farther away instead of flat

>> No.3175894

>>3175890
blog?

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>>3175890
>>3175893
Thanks a lot, anon! I didn't realize that I could just switch the right arm like that.
I'm still strugling with non-frontal or side views, thanks for the hint on the head too. I didn't intend to lewd the subject though.

>> No.3175902

>>3175898
Sorry, porn habit. Lol

>> No.3175905

>>3175894
pls no bully
https://supermarmalademum.tumblr.com/

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>>3175294
Holyfuckinshit ((( stop bully anime( draw standarts at first
>>3174308
from left sex

>> No.3175923

>>3175921
you're regressing

>> No.3175967

>>3175905
>need to login
fuck this shit

>> No.3175968

>>3175923
regression is normal

>> No.3175974

>>3175967
Haven't updated recently, but
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/MarmaladeMum/profile

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>>3175974
>gender female (female)
LONDON?

also rendering is great, how long have you been drawing?

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here I have yet another Anatomical disaster, as usual i had no idea of what I was doing or why, the result is, that the anatomy is all fucked up.

is just that I don't know how it SHOULD look like.

>> No.3176031

>>3175990
Been drawing forever, started taking it more seriously 4-5 years ago and only starting to REALLY improve in the past 3 years.

If you have discord, a bunch of other artists and I post here
https://discord.gg/WP2Zw95

>> No.3176033

>>3176031
how did you study?

and t-thanks but I'm too shy for discord

>> No.3176039

>>3176033
literally sticky.

>> No.3176059

>>3176008

Any help with this?

>> No.3176067
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I tried to do something but I really hate it, can somebody give some advice? Beside the eyes, I know they suck but I was trying to make a ghoul

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>>3175391
kk, important thing stylistically (at least in my imo) is that a character's hair silhouette should echo the shape of the head underneath and that heads, no matter who's head it is, all have a slight slant upwards when viewed in profile

also with plantigrade legs the shin is just slightly shorter than the thigh proportionally

>> No.3176085

>>3176080
i meant for her foot to be resting on her leg but this is helpful anyway, thanks

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>>3176085
ohhhhhhh, i gotchu

for future ref it's usually a bit easier if you place the foot first an then extrapolate the leg from there, especially if it's gonna be touching something. this goes for hands as well

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>>3176008

I am starting to think that if I ever get any alias it would be something like "Bad_Anatomy" so people know what to expect.

>> No.3176178
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3176178

:P

>> No.3176181

>>3176178
the text isn't even in french or at the very least japanese, you're not even trying

>> No.3176229

>>3175294
rofl

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>> No.3176250

>>3174308
Someone explain to me why people think this is so good. It's rough and just block ins.

>> No.3176253

>>3176234
Xbox One X-chan when?

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>>3176250
is this not the alt thread? do you really think this is bad after seeing these lines?

>> No.3176255

>>3175294

Anime has a kite-shield shape and flat sticker -like eyes, what you did looks like an Alien mummy.

>> No.3176258

>>3176250
Good anatomy, perspective, shading

>> No.3176276

>>3175921
AYY

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>>3176008

this is the reference pic.

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>>3172051
WIP, I was tryna finish it in one go but I also bought shadow of war today soooo

>> No.3176357
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3176357

idk

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3176358

>>3176357

>> No.3176447

>>3176357
>>3176358
Really liking these, character designs are always something enjoyable to look at. What's it for?

>> No.3176458

>>3176008
Neat I kind of remember this show. Draw the depressed blue one

>> No.3176472

>>3173520
>>3173525
>>3173767
>>3174135
>>3174298
>>3175249
>>3175275
>>3175921
>>3176008
>>3176067
>>3176310
>>>/beg/

>> No.3176509

>>3176458
ruby death? was that the name lol?

>> No.3176512

>>3176509
The show was called ruby gloom I had to look it up. The blue one was the best character.

>> No.3176522

>>3176512

Blue? she is purple.

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>>3170504

>> No.3176596

>>3176358
Isn't Hang Tuah the legendary warrior from Malacca? You got a blog where you post these?

>> No.3176601

>>3176472
:(

>> No.3176637

>>3176472
you clearly haven't added all of them how the hell did >>3175561 make through the cut? Not to mention a shit ton of other drawings

>> No.3176644

>>3176310
>playing games
NGMI

>> No.3176703

>>3176447
Trying to apply for an internship in a local animation studio as a concept designer, so they want me to do sentai designs for 2 of their existing characters

>>3176596
yes
https://melakan.tumblr.com/

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>>3176131
thanks again!

>> No.3176746

>>3176644
Well, I'm just doing it as a hobby

>> No.3176763

>>3176589
I've never been a fan of the bayonetta sexy librarian look.

So what is this? Theres a lot of themes in here, warrior, oni, chef, living food, ninja.
Also the horns, especially the one on the left are rendered almost cgi looking and doesnt interact with the hair.

>> No.3176770

>>3176472
How is this going to help us? How is this an advice?I mean , you sent us to /beg but does it really matter where we post as long as we get advice ? And this is the stylization thread. We are figuring out how to have our own style so ofc things will look /beg tier... I mean , some people here might have drawn only realistic stuff such as portraits and value studies. Those things help you understand the space and the volume and how light interacts with objects and such but don't give you a style of your own. So isn't this thread suppose to help us with that? Somehow guide us and teach us what we do wrong ? I'm sorry for my bad english , i'm actually really curious how sending us to /beg will help us since the /beg thread is for actual begginers in art , not in terms of style.

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>>3175294
You alright m8?

>> No.3176772

>>3176770
You can tell me i got triggered and that i have the Dunning Kruger syndrome idc but i'm really curious about his logic behind sending us to /beg

>> No.3176779

>>3176770
It's has less to do with helping and more to do with containing the trash. It's a containment thread afterall.

>> No.3176786
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>> No.3176789

>>3176786
This is so unappealing.

>> No.3176797

>>3176789
Sorry you don't like it. Could you be more specific why?

>> No.3176800

>>3176797
Not dropping people down her spats

>> No.3176802

>>3176786
>>3176797
Not him, but I always found the shading of your faces to be flat unlike the body.
Like there's no shaded edge of the face.

>> No.3176807

>>3176472
post work.

>> No.3176819
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>>3176807
I'm not great but I can confidently say I'm better than everyone who's posted so far.

>> No.3176823

>>3176819
>I'm not great but I can confidently say I'm better than everyone who's posted so far.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
>>/beg/

>> No.3176826
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>>3176823
Post your work buddy

>> No.3176852

>>3176819
> over fuckin used demon garbage that's suppose to be creepy but it just makes me cringe really hard
> nothing special about the lineart that stands out and makes me go ''wow''
> for some reason he is so flat even a white girl's butt can compete with it
> that fuckin deltoid that makes me wanna stab my eye

>>3176826
So are you going for the Yu Gi Oh cheap card aesthetic? Nice ! Do keep in mind that everything is a fucking mess and i can't understand those fuckin clothes that blend with the tree somehow since you apparently never heard of textures on plants and objects in general.

Also to all of the above :
>hiding hands
> :) :) :)

See? Unlike you i actually contribute to this thread and im trying to help you . Now take your Dunning Kruger ass back to /beg.

>> No.3176868

>>3176852
Are you so ashamed about your art that you can't even post it?

>> No.3176870

>>3176852
lmao youre so shit and youve been handed twice over but you can't admit it. GIT OUT

>> No.3176876
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>>3176870
Nosebro talk to me when you finish something

>> No.3176892

>>3176876
I mean, i sometimes get almost close to finishing something. It's not because you colored something that suddenly i become worse than you.

>> No.3176904

>>3176892
Finishing something shows what your true skill is you retard. And judging from your sketches, you're very mediocre and can't even nail that basic anatomy. Back to /beg/ with you

>> No.3176905

>>3176892
(continued) And even if you were able to sketch well( which you can't) that barely translates to making decent finished work. So yes, you're inferior to me nosebitch, know your place.

>> No.3176918

>>3176892
can you post something you got close to finishing, I don't remember anymore.

>> No.3176922
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>>3176819

>> No.3176942

>>3176922
Are you making fun of me you faggot?

>> No.3177064

>>3176819
>I'm not great but I can confidently say I'm better than everyone who's posted so far.
Are you just posting someone else's work?

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>>3176942
>>3176826

>> No.3177338
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I feel like I'm leveling up

>> No.3177364
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>>3177338
simplify and don't be timid in your brushstrokes

>> No.3177376

>>3177364
still shit

>> No.3177397

>>3177364
HOLY SHIT NIGGA WHAT ARE YOU DOING???????

>> No.3177429
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>>3172051
this is what sleep deprivation does to you

>> No.3177432
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I paint portraits so I can hide my bad anatomy
I'm basically that other anon who draws those wide eyed loli heads on paper

>> No.3177486
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hi, /ic/, really crossing my fingers that you'll help me out today.
a pal of mine is hosting a cannibalism-themed halloween party and asked me to design some of the promotional material. this is the illustration i came up with to base the text around, but I'm having a difficult time telling whether this hand is actually reading as a hand and not just a garble of lines. I'm also really not sure about the shading.
i've been working on this for the past five hours or so (yes, i know this is simple shit, i'm really slow) so i'm getting kind of frustrated and would appreciate a fresh perspective. i just want to do a good job for my friend's sake.

>> No.3177491

>>3177486
It looks like a hand with bone arm is that what you were going for

>> No.3177501
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sigh

>> No.3177503

>>3177491
i was trying to figure out a way to have it fade out by the edge of the paper so it wouldn't be leading the viewer's eye off the page quite so much, if you're talking about the wrist area. if you're talking about the fingers, they're supposed to be fleshed out, just in dramatic shadow. a skeletal hand wouldn't be a bad idea though

>> No.3177513

>>3176472
Jesus christ this is why /ic fuckin sucks no matter what most anybody post they will be redirected to the beginner thread you are the problem not any of us.

>> No.3177527

>>3177432
Blog?

>> No.3177530

>>3176763
It's a commission so I don't usually mind those things too much. I would rather focus on executing the client's idea as best as I can.

Btw I will fix the horns in the next iteration for sure. Thanks

>>3177432
Ririn senpai?

That is cute. Nice skin tones btw

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dunno what to do with the other hand

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need to do more studies, having a hard time with anatomy from head

>> No.3177574
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>>3177376
>>3177397
aha! this was all a test, you see?

This is the real paint over!

>> No.3177594

>>3176472

They belong here...

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wip

>> No.3177608

>>3177605
desaturate your shadows, she's looking like a candle

>https://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm

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>>3172051
towergirls is fun

>> No.3177644
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halloween thing wip
hopefully finished before then

>> No.3177648

>>3177644
Cute! Do you got a blog?

>> No.3177649
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color keys

>> No.3177653

>>3177648
o/ >>3176264

>> No.3177676

>>3177429
back to beg retard

>> No.3177681

>>3177644
really cool stuff m8.

How long have you been drawing if I may ask? And do you find drawing anime solely for drawing anime works better for improving, or would it be better to have a mix of realism and anime? Because I see in a lot of your works and sketches that there are a lot of realistic sketches combined with anime ones.

Don't want to sound like a fag, but boy would i die to have skills to sketch like that.

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>> No.3177797

>>3177644
>>3177681
But this is beginner stuff, if you want to die for such low skills than you are poorly appreciated by yourself.

>> No.3177803

>>3177797
>http://ukanon.tumblr.com/
>beginner
Anon... That's a really rough thumbnail but you can still tell they've got great chops.

Also, >>3177644, you've improved a lot since I first saw you post on LAS. You were already good then, but damn, your handling of volume and color now is leagues ahead. Makes me jealous, senpai.

>> No.3177826

>>3176358
>>3176357


I got the internship yall

>> No.3177828

>>3177826
Big congratulations, anon!

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>>3177828
Thanks!

>> No.3177838

>>3177826
what do you do?

>> No.3177848

>>3177838
Concept design for animation studio

>> No.3177849
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>>3177848
fuck you man get back in the bucket with us

>> No.3177850

>>3177826
Do you take in disciples to mentor?

>> No.3177883

>>3177834
Just wondering if you were completely self taught

>> No.3177889

>>3177849
We're all gonna make it brah

>>3177850
Aw shucks dude, I'm not good enough to teach people

>>3177883
I guess? Unless you count conversing around with some art friends for critique and extra info.

>> No.3177930

Does anyone have any good tips/tutorials on creating stylized drawings based on real people? Not portraits or caricatures, but just keeping them recognizable.

I started drawing about a month ago and I've gotten to the point where I can draw one particular type of face relatively well, sort of a classic disney or comic book style. Of course that means pretty much everything looks the same except for the hair. I'm trying to use some real life references to change things up, but whenever I try, they're basically unrecognizable. Any help?

>> No.3177947

>>3177797
You must be knee deep in the dunings if you think that's beginner.

>> No.3177948

How do I draw a straight line

>> No.3177954

>>3177948
use the line tool you retard

>> No.3177955

>>3177954
On paper

>> No.3177958
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still in progress
would love some crit/comment

>> No.3177961

>>3177955
fuck off troll

>> No.3177963

>>3177961
What

>> No.3177976
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I'll do the hands tomorrow I don't feel like doing lines or cleaning it up so much I still have some time before wwd

>> No.3177981

>>3177948
Don't use your wrist

>> No.3178136

>>3177981
hope you're kidding

>> No.3178150

>>3178136
Why would you think he was kidding?

>> No.3178170
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3178170

Something I'm working on, any tips what to improve before going into color/cleaning lines?

>> No.3178171

>>3178170
Ear looks low

>> No.3178208

>>3178150
because drawing from wrist is not the problem...

>> No.3178211

>>3178171
nigger its correct, it should be just leveled with the nose

>> No.3178214

>>3178211
Except the hair has volume so the connection point is further in than what we see.

>> No.3178245

>>3177649
really nice anon

>> No.3178252

>>3176922
>>3177087
>>3177338
>>3177364
>>3177429
>>3177486
>>3177501
>>3177605
>>3177556
>>3177641
>>3177976
>>3178170

Back to /beg/. All of you. The containment thread is there for a reason, to contain shitty art.

>> No.3178269

>>3178252

This was never a thread for advanced artists but for stylized drawing.

>> No.3178289

>>3178269
Then what's the point of having a beginner thread? Beginners who draw stylized should post in the alt style while beginners who draw realism should post in the drawthread

>> No.3178366

>>3178289
/beg/ is for beginner studies

>> No.3178371

>>3178289
If an artist can draw in a consistent style then they aren't a beginner period. Regardless of whether you think it looks bad, beginner doesn't mean bad it means just that, beginners.

be·gin·ner
bəˈɡinər/
noun
noun: beginner; plural noun: beginners

a person just starting to learn a skill or take part in an activity.

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>>3178252
Wtf I get that its not finished or polished but I hardly think that this work is consistent with the /beg/ thread

>> No.3178394

>>3178371
So what comes after beginner?

>> No.3178405

>>3178394
Novice

>> No.3178406

>>3178394
You jump on a high horse and start telling people to go to /beg/

>> No.3178412

>>3178394
A very long path to mastery.

>> No.3178430

>>3178252
here's your (You)

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>>3178170
Feature all too small I enlarge. Dont forget skin wrap around eye. Rest is idk

>> No.3178447

>>3178366
There is no such thing as "beginner studies". If by beginner studies you're referring to fundamental studies, then artists of all skills levels do and should be doing them. You don't suddenly get good enough to stop practicing your perspective or anatomy.

>>3178371

I can draw for 2 days and develop my own consistent stick figure style. That doesn't make any sense.

>>3178393
It's beginner.

>> No.3178451

>>3178438
How do I learn design like you family
Really liking it.

>> No.3178458

>>3178451
not mine just fixing for him

>> No.3178464

>>3178447
Yeah you can but a beginner can't. How fucking stupid are you that you don't get that?

>> No.3178465

>>3178451
add spikes

>> No.3178480

>>3178447
Post your work
>I don't want to get recognized
>A-anyone can see that its shit

>> No.3178489

>>3178480
Fuck off

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>> No.3178510

>>3175294
can someone screen-cap and put me in it?

>> No.3178622

>>3178252
could you elaborate more for >>3177641

>> No.3178634

>>3178497
Cute boos

>> No.3178671
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3178671

Coming along alright so far i think. Gonna need to do something about the nose but i'm avoiding it for now

>> No.3178783
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Testing MediBang on the iPad

Very cool it has a sort of liquify tool. It is a shame the interface sucks a lot

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3178793

>>3177644
progress still not sure about bg

>>3177681
I have digital drawings dating from 2013, but most of my improvement was from last year, I think. I'm not in a position to give advice but definitely do a mix.
>realistic sketches
dont be fooled, the trad sketches were LAS filler. I haven't improved at all at drawing, personally prefer messing with colors and shapes

>>3177803
tyty still shit at everything else senpai

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rawr

>> No.3178828

>>3178815
>everyday is arm day

>> No.3178831

>>3178464
Everyone has their own style of drawing you fucking retard. The minute you lay your pencil on paper and start drawing you already have a style. it might be a crude style, it may be an atrocious looking style, but it's a style nevertheless.
>>3178480
I never claimed to be great.

>> No.3178832

>>3178815
poofy hair, so cute. blog?

>> No.3178842

>>3178671
wh-
why are you painting like that....
Looking good though, nice colors.

>>3178783
wow dats gorjuss

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>>3178671

>> No.3178853
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gonna refine this a bit more soon

>> No.3178866

>>3178853
lmao she missing half of her skull

>> No.3178868

>>3178866
it's called perspective krugtard, go ahead and redline it and embarrass yourself

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>>3178671
Paint like what?

>>3178849
Damn i wish i would have seen this before i went ham with rendering. Bit late to fix everything now but i'll make note of this next time, thank you!

>> No.3178875
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>>3178842
Painting like what?

>>3178849
Damn i wish i would have seen this before i went ham with rendering. Bit late to fix everything now but i'll make note of this next time, thank you!

>> No.3178878

>>3178783
your style and figures suck ass firez

>> No.3178889

>>3178868
Not him but the only krugtard here is you. The facial features are misaligned, the hands are too big, the ear is too big and not places properly, there are so many constructional anatomy mistakes that I can't even bothered to list them all. What's ironic is how you use perspective as an excuse when perspective is the weakest area in this drawing. Go fuck yourself.

>> No.3178890

>>3178849
blog?

>> No.3178892

>>3178889
>more krugtard spiel
go ahead and redline it if there's so many mistakes

>> No.3178897

>>3178892
Redlining is a chore, I'd rather work on my own personal shit than waste my time correcting a shitty drawing.

>> No.3178907

>>3178832
yev-san.tumblr.com

>> No.3178909

>>3178897
lmao post work then, oh wait, we all know you won't do that either. not the artist btw

>> No.3178912

>>3176876
>>3176826
>>3176819
Already did >>3178909

>> No.3178916

>>3178907
Do you draw anything aside from underage loli porn?

>> No.3178918
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Here's something I threw together for my friend's discord profile picture. He's an avid Lucio main.

>> No.3178925

>>3178897
>>3178892
Why are you flaming over this? I just want critique

>> No.3178935

>>3178925
It's 4chan m8. Nigs are gonna nog, ignore the trolls.

>> No.3178940
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>>3178925
not him, but i found something you could fix

>> No.3178945

>>3178940
I chuckled

>> No.3178946

>>3178940
blog?

>> No.3178947

>>3178940
lol

>> No.3178950

>>3178940

blog?

>> No.3178952

>>3178940
Why does she sit like that?

>> No.3178959

>>3178940
That's cheating yev

>> No.3178964
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Progress I'm happy with this

>> No.3178970

>>3178964
you shouldn't be you stagnating NGMI fuck

>> No.3178972

>>3178970
>stagnating
You haven't even seen my other drawings

>> No.3178982
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>> No.3178984

>>3178982
Reminds me of hollows.

>> No.3179026
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Why do some concept artists sculpt their concept in 3d and paint over it

>> No.3179095
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I'm really liking coloring. Still trying to understand how it works digitally but it's definitely fun.

And yes, this belongs here because I drew anime eyes.

>> No.3179139

>>3178875
To be honest I like the proportions you have currently better. She looks off in a good way and it makes it more interesting. Just making a face more attractive and bland is lame.

>> No.3179216

new thread >>3179213

>> No.3179499

>>3179139
>drawing it correctly is lame
>drawing it so her eye isn't melting off of her face is lame
>drawing it so she doesn't have a hobgoblin nose is laaaaaaaaaaaaame

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